Harry Potter and The Return of The Witch

[sharleen711]

i really love kicking-asses Tara. I want more of that...

MORE, MORE, MORE....

~ Sharleen ~

[Maccoda]

Excellent! Bravo, I love tuff Tara and Golden Globe Award Willow!

[shuyaku]

YAY! Willow pulled off the big fake out She needs to kick some serious butt now though - to show she is in control and that nobody messes with her or her girl!



Great update

-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

[Tempest Duer]

Much coolness here.



So who did Willow's Avada Kedavra kill?

It's insulting to the whole gender[sic] of rap.



~Eminem

[PeachyNectar]

Magrat,



I just read your latest installment of the HP fic, and I loved it. I found Tara's dismantling of Bellatrix with a mere rock brilliant, a testament to her cunning. Doesn't always have to be about the magicks; sometimes just good ole' common sense prevails. Very clever writing.



So relieved to read Willow really was faking it. Though I do have a fondness for Dark Willow, I was happy to see she was only making a pseudo cameo.



Ron's reaction to seeing Willow and Tara kiss was priceless. I commend you on your accuracy to the integrity of the characters. I love Ginny for one and find your dialogue for her brilliant. Very smart girl ... well beyond her years. Big kudos to you in this department.



We still must wait to see if the gang escapes successfully or not. Again having that same feeling I always do when reading a Magrat fic, you never quite know what's around the next corner.



Great update. More soon ...please?

Cheers,

PN

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The best and most beautiful things in life cannot be seen or touched - they

must be felt with the heart ~ Helen Keller

[everbreeze]

What already over? uyou've got to be kidding me.... oh bloody.... shikes.... please update soon.

[Magrat70]

Arwen: yeah big fake and for my shame it has been far to long since I have updated this fic, but there will be one soon.



BurningWhiteRose: yes Tara has been tortured by far worse.



Wimpy: Buffy related to Ron …that would be fun. They are going to try and get away anyway; there still is a house full of Death Eaters to dodge.



Watersong: sorry to make you all crazy. I honestly had no idea it was this long since I updated this fic.



RaVen: Thank you and I am pleased I wrong footed you.



Shinnen: my friend more is on the way at last.



Irishlassie: sometimes you have to know when to use magick and when a big rock will suffice . Willow would never hurt Tara, not in this fic. I think some; asses will be dually kicked (well one in particular)



Sharleen: more kick ass Tara? We’ll have to see.



Maccoda: Thank you



Shuyaku: believe me Willow is more than willing to make someone pay for messing with her girl.



Tempest Duer: Willow’s Avada Kedavra killed no-one, as the fake Moody said in the Goblet of Fire you have to mean it to kill someone.



PeachyNectar: you make me . I like also like Ginny as a character she has that George/ Fred feel about her and I am hoping for her to be very important in the last 2 HP books.



Dark Willow only a cameo for sure.



Everbreeze; no not over just let slip but back on track now



More is coming and I apologise for the delay but a mixture of writer’s block and enjoying writing Hangetsu got in the way

Freddie is king

[KiSsWiLLoW4Me]

Magrat,



im done catching up... and can i say WOW?

this is one of the best fan fictions i've read



i feel like dancing *dances like mr. banana* ..and jumping *starts jumping*



you can suggest to whoever the director's name is to make that a movie.. it will be just like harry potter, LOTR, bourne identity, and other books. well, in your case its a fanfic but who cares? i love your fic!



how did willow tricked Voldie with her black eyes? i mean how did she do that? she became a black-eyed, dark marked, bad ass badie for a sec there, right? were there contact lenses?



okay.. there were lots of cuteness in this fic but i can't seem to recall any.. its kinda late here (like 11:51 p.m. or something ) and my brain's not really processing properly.



updates pls



i can't wait



<=Kirstin=>

Willow: Kiss Rocks? Why would anyone want to kiss rocks... Oh wait, I get it.



[to Anya]

Tara Maclay: Um, I'm not sure you should say 'sex poodle' in your vows.

[Tempest Duer]

I suppose you're right. Of course you're right.

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



~my friend Mary

[Magrat70]

Title: Harry Potter and The Return of the Witch part 19

Author: Magrat

Rating: R

Spoilers: as before

Disclaimer: not mine blah, blah.



Harry Potter and The Return of the Witch part 19



They ran for the stairs desperate to get out the building. Willow led the way while Tara, brought up the rear trying to keep the kids protected between them.



Willow got to the door at the top of the stairs and was surprised that it wasn’t locked. She supposed whatever had caused the Death Eaters and Voldermort to take off must have made them slack with their security. She smiled for a second their elaborate pantomime had paid off. The redhead took a deep breath and pushed the door open a crack, she couldn’t see anything so she opened it quietly and motioned for the kids to follow her. Tara kept a watch to make sure that there was no sign of Bellatrix as the kids filed out. She closed the door more out of habit than the thought that it would hide anything.



They found themselves in a dark and dreary passageway with doors at both ends.



“Which way?” asked Harry, peering over Willows shoulder.



Willow turned and looked helplessly at Tara who shrugged. “I don’t know but standing here waiting to be killed doesn’t seem a good idea, so lets pick one and go for it. I vote we should go left.”



Everyone nodded in agreement and they followed Willow down the passageway. She pushed open the door and was shocked to see it open on to a huge room that seemed to be full of duelling witches and wizards. It was a great banqueting hall; that seemed to be lined with suits of armour. It was bedlam, the sounds were tremendous with spells whizzing around the room and things being shattered. Willow could also see a couple of bodies littering the ground, casualties of the battle, she tried to close the door, thinking that there was a chance that one of them could get hurt or killed by a stray spell, but Harry had already seen what was going on.



“Sirius?” questioned Harry, seeing a familiar figure shooting spells as he duelled with two Death Eaters, laughing as he blocked and dodged their spells. The youngster tried to push past Willow to go to him.



“Harry, what are you doing?” asked Willow, trying to hold on to him.



“I have to go to Sirius, he needs our help,” said Harry.



Tara heard a noise behind them and to her horror she saw the dishevelled figure of Bellatrix coming through the other door, her wand held high ready to be used. “We have to go now…s-she is behind us.”



Harry took advantage of Willow’s break in concentration and burst through the door. He was amazed at the sights and sounds that faced him, his initial concentration had been on Sirius, but now he could see Dumbledore, McGonagall, Tonks and various other wizards battling with the Death Eaters.



Willow run out into the great hall after him, she managed to grab him as a spell whizzed at him. “Harry what are you doing? You’ll get yourself killed.”



With Willow and Harry gone, Tara had no choice but to push the other kids out into the room and slam the door. She heard a loud crack as Bellatrix aparated in front of her; Tara had already anticipated this and motioned for Ginny, Ron, Hermione and Neville to hit the floor, as she went she kicked Bellatrix’s feet from under her. Tara rolled back onto her feet and kicked the women’s fallen wand away. Seeing all the confusion she decided to use it to her advantage she had spotted an open door at the far side of the room. As a teacher at Hogwarts her first duty, she knew, was the safety of the children. “Run now…head for the door.”



Hermione, the first one who had got to her feet nodded and shook Ron who was busy staring into the mayhem.



“But there is Bill…and Charlie,” protested Ron as Hermione pulled him toward the door.



Tara intercepted Ginny as she made a break towards her brothers. “Leave them, they can look after themselves…you have to get to safety.” She finally pushed Neville towards the door and pulled Ginny with her.



Willow saw Tara flee out of the corner of her eyes and let out a sigh of relief; she couldn’t stand to lose her lover all over again. She turned her concentration back to Harry. Sirius was had one arm around the teenager’s shoulders and was laughing even louder, still duelling, seemingly delighted with the new addition to the situation.



Bellatrix rose to her feet hissing in rage like a cat. She scrambled for her wand, eager to make a kill and worried that she had let down her Master. She spotted Harry with her cousin and knew she had a good chance to make her Master proud. She raised her wand and opened her mouth.



TBC

Freddie is king

[watersong84]

ooh. Bad cliffhanger. But good, good update! Don't let this one lay dormant for so long again, it's so good!

[Wicked Wicca]

Man this story is awesome! I'm new to the Kittenboard and just read the entire thing. I'm a major Harry Potter fan (who isn't eh?) and think you have done a great job bringing all the characters together.



Hope you write more soon.



Nicole

[Tempest Duer]

Cliffhanger vile most certainly is. Keep us waiting you must.

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



~my friend Mary

[stillrunning]

Wow this is insanely cool. I love Harry Potter....and what better to combine that with then the Buffyverse??! Never would've thought of it myself. Can't wait for more!

"Heaven's not a place that you go when you die...it's that moment in life when you actually feel alive"

[WillowRulez]

Bump!
It's been a year! And I just read the whole thing.
Really cool take on Tara coming back... but you left it at such a cliffhanger! Gonna do something about that?

[hin768]

I just read this from start to finish...wow....what a great story. You really nailed the voices of the Harry Potter characters and incorporated all the characters so well !!

please update soon