All Our Masks (Updated 3/3 - COMPLETE)

[ShyCanuck]

Great story. I've been following this a while. Nice twist at the end making everyone think Tara is dead. I too vote for an epilogue. Thanks again.

[sacinema]

Hey, thanks for the wonderful story. I really loved it. Just a bit more smoochie time between Tara and Willow would have been great.

In the end this Raimey person really got what he deserved. And the fake death of Tara? Good idea and very well written. If I didn't knew Tara was gonna live (thanks to kittenboard and his rules) I would have fallen for it totally.

Taking Tara hostage was a brillant idea, too. Only this twist made it possible to get Willow into action. And in action she went.

Oh and by the way, I'll vote for an epilogue. Thanks again sacinema

[SmileyCC]

Hey fantastic story, excellent twist with the fake funeral. I vote for an epilogue too pls

I hope to be reading more from you soon.

[*WILLOW*]

yes please on the epilogue.

[Artemis]

Great finale - very tense, aided by the pacing being quite jarring (in a good way) near the end, as things spiralled out of control so quickly. The closing sequence at the funeral was very effective, and although of course there's the requirement for Tara to be okay in the end floating in the back of my mind, I have to say that you nearly got me panicking. I'll add my vote for an epilogue, though - the closing moment between Willow and Tara was very sweet (and effective in wrapping up the loose ends of the plot, with regard to Tara's family), so while you may not strictly speaking need an epilogue... well, who's going to say no to a little bit more of this?

[Naeryn]

I haven't been on this site in a good year and a half or two, so feel honoured! I've broken my long silence to comment on your story!

This was an amazing fic. I read the whole thing tonight, actually. You captured the mind of a psychopath very beautifully. He was a very real, very believable character (which is a little scary, if you think about it) - the kind you just love to hate.

And the ending - very nice "suspense skillz". I was torn between swearing up and down that it WAS Tara's funeral, and swearing up and down that it couldn't POSSIBLY be, because no one would be that cruel. Except maybe this Raimey fellow, whom, by the way, is a COLOSSAL douchebag.

Anyways, a lovely story. Really your first? I hope to see more!