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Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE: REVISED AND FINISHED

Postby nika » Thu Apr 10, 2003 11:18 am

TITLE: RED ACE



AUTOR: NIKA



PAIRING: W/T RAITING: NC-17



DISCLAIMERS: I DON’T OWN THEM,I WON’T MAKE MONEY OFF THEM, I’LL LEAVE THAT TO JOSS WHEDON AND THE REST OF THE GANG. THEY’VE BEEN SANITIZED FOR YOUR PROTECTION. I’LL PUT THEM BACK WHEN I’M DONE.



NOTES: INSOMNIA + 2 FRAPPUCHINOS WITH AMARETTO+ 2 BOGART RENTALS = THIS INSANE PORTRAYAL OF THE BTVS GANG. IF YOU HATE IT I STATE IN MY DEFENSE “THE COFFEE BEANS MADE ME DO IT.”

IF YOU LIKE IT AND WANT THE SEQUEL, PLEASE DON’T BE SHY LET ME KNOW.



FEED BACK: PLEASE, NOURISHMENT IS IMPORTANT.



DISTRIBUTION: IF YOU WANT IT ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS ASK.



EXTRA NOTE: I REFRAINED FROM THE USE OF THE FRASE “PRIVATE DICK” THOUGH IT WAS COMMONLY USED IN THOSE OLDEN DAYS, NOW IT JUST DOESN’T SOUND RIGHT. SPECIALLY WITH ALL THOSE “PUBLIC DICKS” RUNNING AROUND OUT THERE I THOUGHT IT WOULDN’T BE VERY P.C.

WELL ON TO THE STORY MAY BOTH BOGART AND CAGNEY FORGIVE ME.



SUMMARY: WILLOW IS A PRIVATE EYE AND TARA IS A DAME IN TROUBLE.



RED ACE



Four Aces Investigations, that’s the name on the door. I’m one of those Aces, my name is, Willow Rosenberg. That name’s like a curse to me in this business. So my friends and my enemies if they know what’s good for them call me ‘Red’. That’s what my pop used to call me too. He said it wasn’t only cause of the hair; it was also cause of my temper.

He’s the one that got me hooked on the P.I business. He’s been gone for a couple years now. The only things he left behind after a lifetime of work and trouble were this agency and me. So I’ve been more than happy to carry on the family tradition and let me tell you, it ain’t easy buster. I tell ya, skirts get no respect, not before things get ugly anyways. It’s a good thing I got my friends and good old Jackie Daniels to keep me sane.



My friends, they’re the other three Aces on the door. There’s Buffy, what a name huh? She’s worse off than me. It’s the kind of name an ‘upiddy dame’ in a tearoom would have not a P.I. in truth that’s probably what she would have become if her cards had been dealt a little differently.



The road in my experience is never straight, it’s always, topsy-turvy. She lived up town, the high life, until her old man ran off with the secretary and left her and her mom without a cent. The kid got pulled off her ivory tower and landed on my side of the tracks. I couldn’t help but taking her under my wing. The bullies at school and on the block would have eaten her alive without my protection. Nobody ever messed with me without walking away with at least a bloody nose. I rescued her when ‘Jimmy the moose’ was gonna steal her lunch.



I hated bullies, they’re cowards at heart so I ran him off with a swift kick to the pants.

After that I couldn’t have gotten away from that scrawny squirt of a girl if I had wanted to. She hung around me like Christmas lights on a tree.



We’ve been friends ever since and she’s grown up real nicely too. She can hold her own in a fight and those looks have helped us out of more than one jam in the past.

Buffy’s the looker with brains type, she’s fooled more than one schmuck with the ‘dumb blonde’ act into doing exactly what we needed at the moment.



Xander is the muscle and the go-getter. He’s got ‘gophers’ all over town, he’ll get you anything, any time you need it. He’s the guy with the street savvy and good guy smile.



Anya is my secretary and Xander’s main squeeze. She’s got a big mouth and a heart to match, though she tries to hide it. No personal secret is safe with her, but she’s loyal to the very end.



The last member of our little group is ‘Mr. G’, we call him that cause he’s an ex ’G-MAN’.

He had some back trouble and they- ‘the feds’- dropped him like a hot potato, he’s still a tough guy though and his old government contacts come in handy now and again. Together we’ve built up a pretty nice reputation in a not so nice line of work.



To think it’s all about to go to hell and cause of a dame no less. When pop told me to get myself a nice boy he didn’t say it out of prejudice. He said it cause he knew women would bring me nothing but trouble. If I had listened to pop and my gut I wouldn’t have gotten myself into this jam.



It was exactly two weeks ago today that everything started. It was a hot summer afternoon, all my friends had left for lunch and I had stayed cause I wasn’t hungry and I had a strange feeling that I couldn’t shake. I knew something was about to go down, I just didn’t know what. I sat enclosed in the heat of my office and waited, with my piece handy just in case.



The ceiling fan wasn’t giving me any relief and I wiped the back of my neck with a moist hankie trying to keep fresh. I always had a box of hankies stored in my desk; they usually came in handy. My pop always used to say ‘In this business you gotta be prepared to sweat’.



One thing was for sure, it was about to get hotter and nothing could have prepared me for what happened next.



The doorknob turned slowly and she walked in, a fallen angel, a risen devil, everything rolled up into one fine looking package.



I was struck speechless, there she stood right before my eyes, this vision in black heels, a navy blue skirt slit on the side down just below the knees, leaving just enough legs for the imagination, a white silk blouse and a form fitting I mean a ‘Form fitting’ jacket, ‘what curves’ I thought as I gazed at her long neck and stared almost dumbly at her Greek Goddess like face, complete with full red lips, sky blue eyes and long blonde hair to boot.











For a moment I thought I was hallucinating from the heat. We just stared at each other for what seemed to be hours. I’m sure it was just a couple of seconds, but they seemed to be suspended in time.



I know how it sounds…sappy! I didn’t think it was possible either, until that day…until she walked into my office and into my life.



I finally screwed my head on straight again and I heard myself saying, “ Hello, may I help you with something?” I could swear that I had heard a little gasp coming from in between her ruby-red lips.



Now that I think about it she really did look surprised to see me. At the time I thought it was cause of me being a woman P.I, I was used to it and she covered her reaction by saying as much.



“ Good afternoon, I’m looking for Frank Rosenberg…I think he’s better known as Frankie red.”



“Well sweet heart if you had an appointment you’re two years too late and so is he.”



“Oh, you mean?”



“Yeah I mean…but I’m… you could say Red junior…now, please take a seat and tell me how I can help you.”



She took a seat looking a bit unsettled, now I know the real reason why. Still, I had never wanted to switch places with a chair so badly in my life. I was just hoping she wasn’t there looking for paternity rights or something like that. Dad was after all a ladies man. That would have killed me right there where I stood. I don’t think I could’ve seen her as a sister, no way.



She hesitated. “But umh…you’re a…well you’re ah…”



“What ? a…woman? Well what’s wrong with that? You seem to be one yourself.” I answered with a cheeky grin.



“Yes forgive me I was just surprised, you don’t hear about many women being detectives these days.”



“Don’t worry about it I’m used to taking heat for it. Now I assure you anything my pop could have helped you with I can help you with just as well. I don’t work alone either so instead of enlisting the help of one you’d be enlisting the help of many. Now again how may I help you Miss….” She hesitated again for a few more seconds.



“ Maclay…Tara Maclay.”











I hoped she was convinced, I didn’t want to part company just yet. I hadn’t grown tired of the view. I began to doubt if I ever would. Even her name sounded perfect. Everything she said sounded perfect with that slight southern drawl that added just a right touch of honey to her words. I’ve always been a sucker for an accent.



I saw her fidget a little in her chair and caught a glimpse of a little bead of sweat rolling down her temple. She took out a hankie and wiped it away discretely. Boy I wished I could’ve been that hankie.



Yeah, It was so bad from the start that I wanted to be every object she touched, every object she had ever touched in her life. I know…sappy!



“ Miss Maclay excuse my manners, this heat is infernal and I haven’t even offered you a drink…there’s an ice box in the back, what can I get you and would you mind if I pour myself a hard drink?”



Usually I wouldn’t ask for permission to drink but this dame oozed up-town class and looked like she never drank anything harder than soda pop in her life. That’s why her request surprised me in a nice way.



“Of course I don’t mind it’s your office and I would like a drink too, what ever you’re having will be fine, please.”



I came back with two gin and tonics in tow. When I handed her the glass our fingers touched and I swear I felt an electrical current flowing through my body. I even thought she had felt it too, something in the expression of her eyes. Then I thought, ‘nah, wishful thinking red, wishful thinking’.



I sat on the edge of the desk and waited for her to explain what she needed a detective for. She took a slow lingering sip of her drink and left the mark of her red lips on the brim of the glass. Damn that lucky glass! I was staring so hard I got caught. She looked up from her drink and I turned away glancing nervously at the clock. Me, nervous over a skirt! Like I hadn’t had my share of debutantes, sheesh!



What was it about this dame? When I turned my head back she was staring in turn and held my gaze tight. Her eyes had turned a different shade of blue, deeper, smokier somehow. There was desire in those eyes I could practically feel it or maybe I was just seeing what my own eyes were reflecting.



My heart was racing so fast I could hear it raging like thunder in my ears. My mouth got dry and I could hardly think of anything anymore. All I knew was the look in her eyes.



The room seemed to get hotter. I downed my drink with one gulp and loosened my tie before I choked to death. She parted her lips as if to say something, but nothing came out, just a short gasp, her face was a little flushed and she began to rise from her chair.



We locked gazes again and I know this is going to sound insane, but for a moment it was like time froze and split in two. Suddenly I felt dizzy, the room was spinning and all I could feel was the heat coming from inside our bodies. I just knew this was right, this was meant to be somehow. I felt like I knew her from before, I felt like I had always known her. It didn’t make any sense, my mind told me this was the first time I had ever laid my eyes on her, but my heart seemed to remember our past, how could that be? How could two people that had never met before have a past tohether?



I had to hold on to the edge of my desk to keep from toppling forward.

I wondered if she felt the same way. I couldn’t tell, I couldn’t focus, and everything was blurry. For a second I thought maybe I had eaten some bad tuna, and then I remembered that I hadn’t had tuna in over a month. Her voice pulled me out of the daze.



“I – I – I think I should go…I didn’t even have an appointment and….”



I didn’t let her finish the sentence; I didn’t even let her finish getting up. Something compelled me to grab hold of her and not let her go. Somehow I knew she had just experienced the same things I had. Her breathing had changed just like mine. Her chest was rising and falling rapidly, a tell tale sign that her heart was hammering inside just like mine was. A drum solo at the Copa, that’s what it felt like.



I said, “Don’t go…you don’t have to go…please…” I know I sounded as desperate as I felt.



“You don’t understand, I do.. I have to…” She sounded scared. She was scared. But for the first time in my life so was I.



I pulled her closer until nothing short of a breath separated our bodies.



“I do understand…stay…” I didn’t know exactly what it was that I understood, I just did.



“God help me…yes. I can’t wait anymore, I just can’t. It’s really you.” She said in a whisper while closing the distance between our bodies. “ You’re real. I need to feel that you’re real…” She kept saying between desperate caresses to my face. I couldn’t understand what she was saying, not with my head, but it’s like my heart understood every word and agreed.



And if you make a wise crack about me goin’ soft I’ll give ya a fat lip. And no I’m not going to tell you what happened next. Just pour me another one so I can remember or start to forget. God that’s a good one, how could I ever forget?



I know that if Heaven were a moment this would be it and if Hell were a moment this would be it too.



She dropped her drink and attached her hands to the back of my head. I’ve never been hungrier for a kiss in my life. I was drawn to her like the moon to the tide. I drank from her like a nomad from a fountain in the middle of the desert. I was thirsty, so damn thirsty.



She in turn kissed me back with ferocity and despair. What ever was happening to us was primitive and uncontrollable. The heat became unbearable, skin I needed to feel her skin against mine. Still kissing I began to undress her and she followed my lead. Soon we were clad only in our under wear and I was in awe of the beauty before me. Some part of me thought, just like I remember. It was like I’d known her forever. I cleared the desk with one swift motion and lifted her on top.



I started running my hands over her long, smooth legs from the calves to the thighs. Again pulling her close for a kiss, while caressing up her sides and torso, finally reaching and stopping to give attention to her full and perfect breasts. I circled the nipple with the tip of my finger over the fabric of the silk bra before reaching to the back and releasing my coveted prizes. Once they were free I stuck out my tongue and licked the tips. She arched her back and pulled me closer releasing labored gasps and moans as I suckled and pulled lightly. ‘Peaches’ oh baby you tasted like peaches and smelled like rain. I could write a song. I could write a million songs about you, cause I still remember…



The sounds and the smells of her arousal were driving me insane. I was trying to no avail to remain in some semblance of control. I pulled off her panties tearing the smooth material, I made my way down her body kissing and biting softly. I stopped just outside of her entrance and let myself get lost in her scent, and then I feasted on the most delicious flesh I’ve ever tasted, wild berries and wine. My tongue twirled, lunged and danced over every velvety corner. I fed with the fervor of a cannibal.



Her juices were flowing freely and I wasn’t wasting a drop of her sweetness. My tongue licked up every drop. Her groans and pleas were growing more urgent and I held back just a little longer I wanted to make her mine, I wanted her, no matter what happened next,to have something to remember me by forever.



When I thought she was close enough I withdrew and came back up to kiss her I wanted her to taste herself on my lips, she groaned into my mouth and I took my fingers to the inside of her wet center. I was surprised when I found resistance in my path.



I searched her eyes curiously and she said the most amazing words I’ve ever heard in a soft voice, almost like music, she said… “Please…Willow…it’s you…it’s always been you…I’m yours, take me…please.” I didn’t know then how it was that she knew my name, I couldn’t remember if I had told her, but at that moment it didn’t matter. I loved the way she had said it “Willow” it had never sounded right until it came from her lips, until it was sung in her voice.



I was overcome with emotion, I broke through as gently as I could and stilled my hand waiting for a signal from her that the initial pain had passed some. She had her eyes closed and began to softly rock her hips back and forth I resumed movement and soon we were connected to an ancient rhythm. We were both sweating and our moans got confused in the air. She took a hold of my wrist and stopped my hand just when I had felt her getting close again.



“What is it am I hurting you?”



“NO, it…I-I.. want to feel you too, come here…please…” The way she said “please” seemed to melt me from the inside out. I lay down next to her we were face to face and it was like the whole kooky world had disappeared and it was just us. I knew then that this was the closest to perfection I was ever going to get and I wished I could die right then and there just so I could relive that one moment for all eternity. If this was my entrance ticket to Hell I’d gladly pay the admission price… twice.



She kissed me with a passion no one’s ever kissed me with before or after and she guided my hand inside her again while she let herself inside of me. I remember biting back a near scream of pleasure when I felt her fingers moving inside my core. I didn’t even know I was as close to coming as she was. We moved together, fingers, hands caressing erect nipples and breasts, hips bucking together, flesh to flesh heated and flushed, moans and groans piercing the air thick with our combined scent. I wished again that this could go on forever her voice sang in my ears and brought me even closer to the edge. They say when you’re in deep you hear bells; well I think I heard Angels singing.



“Ohhmmmh, that feels soo good…mmhhm..”



“Oh…God…Tara…you’re drivin’ me crazy…ohm..baby..”



“I ‘m ….I’m…so close….don’t stop…don’t ever stop…”



“Sooo close…come on let go…come for me baby….” I said while rubbing the small bundle of nerves I had avoided on purpose until now.



“Ooooh,aaahhhhh……WILLOOOOOW!!!!!”



“Ohhhhmmm…..Taaaraaaaa….yessssss!!!!!” We released almost at the same time. I can honestly say it was the best orgasm of my life. Later the after shocks passed and we came back down to planet Earth, she was laying there in my arms looking like Venus and I had a smile hanging from ear to ear, like the cat that had swallowed the best tasting canary in the world and got the cream for dessert to boot.



She spoke softly into my chest with a small almost faint voice, without looking at me directly.



“I feel so safe in your arms…will I? Will I be safe?”



I didn’t know exactly what she meant but I answered honestly, cause I knew I would do everything to protect this woman in my arms, who ever she was.



“Yes sweetheart I’ll keep you safe.”



“You promise?” She asked me with watery eyes, big as saucers. I thought then. ‘This kid has trouble mayor league trouble’. Still I answered with certainty.



“I promise kid. On my old man’s grave.”



Well cause of that promise I may get to see the old man sooner than I thought. I can hear his words ringing in my ears like sirens: Stay away from the skirts…Dames are nothin’ but trouble…don’t go for the high rent broads- those are the worst…they’ll drive you to your grave, while they whistle dixie in their in their cocktail gowns…I bet he’s waiting for me at the gates with a sermon and an ‘I told you so’ handy.



Of course if I’m gonna be honest here, I’ll have to say that even after everything that’s happened I wouldn’t trade one moment that I’ve spent with her. I know, I know, I’m off my rocker right? Love does that to you and I fell for her since moment one, I never had a chance to run. Of all the private eye offices in all the world, she had to walk into mine.





“Mmmmhhh.?. what was that Mack ? What did you ask? Oh, why DID she go to see me that day and how DID I end up here waiting to get clipped off? Well…that’s another story…Pour me another drink and that last song, could you ask Sam to play it again?



Edited by: nika  at: 11/17/04 8:55 pm
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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby jixer » Thu Apr 10, 2003 12:33 pm

Hello Kittens-



Sleep deprivation and Bogart movies leading to naughty Willow dreams. I love it. Here's looking at you kid.



Jixer

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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby mariacomet » Thu Apr 10, 2003 5:59 pm

nika! (sqqqueeealll)

First off, let me say I LOVE Film Noir and it's great that someone on the pens decided to apply it to W/t.



I know there was supposed to be some tongue in cheek - there always is in Film Noir. But I felt myself really touched by some of the turns of phrases you came up with. I'm curious to what Tara means by 'it's always you...' Hmmmm. :hmm



I love the narration style...pausing in the story to ask for a drink, or talking to the "listener." I thought that was a great touch.



I'm really curious to see where you go with this.



Seriously, what a GREAT idea. Brillant!



Much love,

MC

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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby Blue77 » Thu Apr 10, 2003 7:08 pm

Wow I love this, also a fan of film noir and I'm really impressed at enjoying a 1st person narration so much. What a great idea and it's so funny ... loved all the cracks, er, jokes that is ... :blush



I'll pour you a drink and play it again, so what happened next?

:bounce

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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Thu Apr 10, 2003 8:06 pm

Hey Nika~~Great job! You really have the lingo down, including the phrases and the cadence. I can "hear" Red telling me about how this particular skirt landed her tit-deep in trouble.



Great love scene, too--all kindsa hot! And Tara--very mysterious, very intriguing. Like Mariacomet, I'm wondering about some of Tara's whispered pleas and just what they mean.



I really enjoy this start, Nika! Bring on the Bogie and the bourbon and the 4-in-the-morning, staring-out-the-window blues.



Mary

AntigoneUnbound
 


...

Postby Rane018 » Thu Apr 10, 2003 8:32 pm

MONICA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! muñequita linda, no lo puedo creer! tu sabes muy bien cuanto yo amo esta historia en particular. gracias, muchas gracias, por continuar. yay!



you also know already i :thud and :drool when thinking of Red Ace. lol... sigh... love it love it love it!!!!!!

"Take care of my heart, won't you please? Take care of it because it's all that I have. And if you let me, I'll take care of your heart too." Pure sweetness in the look between Willow and Tara.

Edited by: Rane018 at: 4/10/03 7:38:17 pm
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Re: ...

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Thu Apr 10, 2003 9:45 pm

Hey this was really cool!! I hope you update soon!



:glasses ~Stephie~ :glasses

If you woke up breathing, congratulations, you have another chance!

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Re: Red Ace

Postby Vampivy » Fri Apr 11, 2003 1:09 am

When I first read this a while back I absolutely loved it and I’m so excited that you decided to post it here. Hopefully we get an update soon.

Por Favor.

Pretty please.

I promise to be good. Oh blood hell who am I kidding:sigh .



I’ve never read anything like this before. This “Film noir style” is new to me and I'm hooked. Funny thing is I never saw a Bogart film, yet I was able to follow this story very well. It flows in a very unique way and I find myself curious about this style of story and movie. Maybe I’ll hit the video store this weekend and rent me a good ol’ fashion Bogart film.



Thank you for posting this here and I look forward to reading more of it soon. I hope…:grin



Patty



ETA: mscheckmate, Thanks For the recommendation. I’ll definitely check it out.



Edited by: Vampivy at: 4/11/03 12:53:15 am
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Re: Red Ace

Postby mscheckmate » Fri Apr 11, 2003 1:46 am

W/T a la Raymond Chandler. This is so cool.



Please continue, Doll.:wink



and Vampivy, "The Big Sleep" has some nice Bogart and Bacall action. You could probably find it at any video store.

It'll be the train, Walter, just the way you want it. Straight down the line.

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Re: Red Ace

Postby nika » Fri Apr 11, 2003 8:52 am

Kittens are the coolest kats ever!



Jixer:Thank you for your positive words. I think this the beginning of a beautiful friendship.



Mc: Squeak- Squeal and Shriek! I'm so honored that you like this little bit. You know I love your work. Thanks for stopping by.



Blue77: Well you see, it goes like this...dames are nothin' but trouble. But they're sure worth it.



Antigone: Don't forget the sax playing in the background or the piano playing a smoky tune, you gotta have those.



Rane: Amor, gracias eres demasiado gentil. Tus palabras siempre me traen felicidad. Te prometi que continuaria y aqui estoy. A veces llego tarde, pero igual llego a cumplir. Esta segunda parte es para ti cariño.:bigkiss



WTF98: I'm glad it's cool, but I'm also hoping you'll feel it a bit hot and sultry.



VAMPIVY:You don't have to be good. I prefer em' bad, at least a bit naughty. ;)



Mscheckmate: Here's lookin' at you kid.



UPDATE:



Red raised her glass and downed her drink, trying to make the lump in throat die a watery death.



Mack watched the P.I and shook his head “Look here, this be the last drink I serve ya lass. One more and ye’ll be hitting the floor. And since when are ya the kind to sit and wait around to be “clipped” by anyone?”



Red gripped her glass and answered in an angry tone, “Since I just don’t give a horse’s ass…” Mack’s face turned red and he interrupted the P.I in mid-sentence “Now hold yer horse’s arses and heads too while yer at it. I’ve known ya since you were just a wee tyke holding on to yer father’s hand. I used to give ya piggy back rides when you wore out yer uncle and I’ll have none of that attitude…”



A light seemed to go on in the redhead’s brain? ’My uncle!’ “Mack…that’s…”



“ I didn’t say I was finished. Now, no more of this self-pity bull crap! If you’re in trouble get out of town while things cool down or find a way to fight. Don’t you be like yer uncle; he got himself a nice bullet shaped hole in the gut over some girly-girl too. Now ya pick yerself up from that stool, stop thinkin’ from in between yer legs like ol’ uncle Johnny and take of business like ya always do.”



Red smiled as recognition and an idea finally filtered through the murky waters in her mind. She squared her shoulders “ skirt troubles…” checked her piece for bullets “ ol’ Uncle Johnny…” straightened her tie “ you’re so on the money Mack” she said, leaning over the bar and planting a kiss on the bartenders cheek, plus a light smack and a pinch for good measure before storming out of the smoky bar.



The burly Irishman took a step backwards and rubbed his cheek. After speaking like that to Red the last thing he expected was a kiss. A good right hook, o.k or a slap in the face, sure, but a kiss? He scratched his head in confusion and winced as the door slammed shut behind the retreating figure.



***



Red shook her head and walked out the bar with a small smile on her face. The streets were dark and slick with the puddles that remained after a rainstorm. Red stood under the street lamp staring up at her old bedroom window wondering if she was right or if at this point she had completely lost her mind. “I wonder…It would make sense…as much as any of this can I suppose.” She said to herself.



***









It seems like it was ages ago and yet just a moment ago too that she was in my arms.

I never wanted to let her go. But in this world all good things come to an end. She was getting dressed and we both got shy all of a sudden, turning red around the ears and not knowing what to say to each other. Sounds silly doesn’t it, getting shy after what we had just done?



I wanted to throw myself at her feet right then and tell her to stay till the end of the world.

Instead it came out “ So kid… you gonna tell me what’s got you so spooked?”



She refused to look at me “I think I should go.” She said in a small ‘little girl lost’ voice.



“Hey now wait a minute…”



She began to head for the door “I shouldn’t have…I’ve just waited for so long…I-I can’t do this to you.”



“Tara wait…” It was too late, she ran out just as I was pulling my pants up. It didn’t help that just then Xander bumped me on the way out. I made it to the street, but she was already gone. Who knew a dame in heels could run so fast?



I walked in cursing under my breath. The whole gang stood around grinning. I guess I must have looked like quite a sight, my shirt half buttoned, shoeless and holding my pants up with one hand. It’s hard to act dignified when you’re only half dressed. I squared my jaw and took my lumps as best I could.



Xander looked me up and down trying not to grin too widely “Hey boss. We brought ya a sandwich, but I see you ‘ordered in’.”



Buffy piped in too, wagging a finger in front of my face “Tsk-tsk shame on you having dessert before dinner.”



Anya opened her mouth as if to say something, then she closed it again and pouted “Aw, heck ! They took all the good jibes.”



I finished arranging my clothes as I spoke, “ har-har everybody’s a comedian…you all done? Or are you gonna ask me who’s on first?”



With that I went into my office slamming the door so hard the windows shook.

My gut was telling that she was in some real hard-nosed trouble; I had to find her and find her soon.









Edited by: nika  at: 11/17/04 7:44 pm
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wow

Postby sacinema » Fri Apr 11, 2003 11:19 am

Hi Nika,



really adorable story.:clap :clap I've allready read the story at mysticmuse.net. And I can't barely stand it to read the next part. Wonna know how the story ist going on.



And also the cold shower factor is really high. Thanks for this nice story. Love most how Tara is behaving.



Nice greetings sacinema

sacinema
 


Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby skeeter451 » Fri Apr 11, 2003 12:00 pm

Hey Nika...



Glad to see you posting Red Ace on pens. It's one of my favorites on my site.



:applause

Susan



Skeeter451@mysticmuse.net

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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby Blue77 » Fri Apr 11, 2003 5:01 pm

Great update, I really like this and I think Aly would love this as a script, I can really see her in the part and Tara as the damsel in distress.



Again, just love the humour ... Xander saying you 'ordered in' :rofl



*Sam plays the piano once more*



What's next? :bounce

Blue77
 


Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby Washi » Fri Apr 11, 2003 9:47 pm

Gotta say I'm loving this fic. Please! More, soon! :grin

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby Willster » Sun Apr 13, 2003 11:43 am

Hey, I read the first part a long time ago and I so loved it, I never thought there would be an update, I was so pleased.



I just can't wait for more.

This is well written, really! ;)

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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Apr 13, 2003 10:08 pm

I read this a couple of days ago but didn't get a chance to comment. I wanted to say this is a definitely a different spin on the meeting of W/T. Very intriguing. :hmm It is hard to accept that Willow seems to be kind of promiscuous, but AU's are different like that.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Sun Apr 13, 2003 11:02 pm

The way you paint this...Oh.



I can see the sharp lines of the venetian blinds cutting black and white slashes across the floor of Willow's office.



I feel the heat and the sudden chill. And the desperation that drives everything on - in every tense.



I hear that melancholy refrain.



I won't check the update thread. If you add to this you can whistle. You know how to whistle don't you kid? Just put your lips together and :whistle



What a wonderful wonderful world~~~Suse

Cindy Lou Who
 


update

Postby nika » Mon Apr 14, 2003 11:21 am

Hello sweethearts. I'll be updating today around 5 o'clock

Eastern time. Thank you all for the swell replies.



Sacinema: Than you for all the adorable comments. Tara as a mystery woman isn't really that hard to imagine and she's a dame that i'd get into a jam for any day of the week buster.



Skeeter: Hi Susan. Thank you. I'm really glad you asked to host it. In part that's what gave me the guts to post it here on Pens.



Blue77: Hmmm..Aly in a tie...I must confess I wouldn't mind seeing that.



Washi: Thank you. I'll do my best to post regular updates.



Willster: Thank you. I've had the idea for the sequel percolating for a while now. I just had to find the time to plop my tushy down and write it.



Therose24: Not promiscuous...Just a gumshoe who's a breast gal at heart.:wink



Cindy lou who: Hey I was going to use the whistle line in later updates (pout).





nika
 


Re: update

Postby Stroke of Luck » Mon Apr 14, 2003 12:01 pm

Hi Nika:bigwave



I thought the whole time "you know that FF damn where have you read it" Now I know where I saw/read it.



But I still like to read your FF its so :drool and yummy



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

Stroke of Luck
 


update

Postby nika » Mon Apr 14, 2003 6:45 pm

Trouble it was. Xander did a fine job of finding her. If you would have asked me I would have guessed ‘The Plaza’ and I would have been wrong. She was uptown, but not in the swankiest joint. Funny, her silk stockings didn’t spell out ‘penny pincher’. Neither did her perfume, man if I closed my eyes and tried real hard I could still smell it in the air around me.



I took the elevator and walked quietly down the dimly lit hall. Room 506, I stopped dead in my tracks when I heard the loud voices coming from the inside. I felt the urge to bum rush the door, but thought better of it. I put my ear to the door and my hand on my piece just in case.



An angry man’s voice was shouting things I couldn’t quite make out. There was a radio on as well and the noises got jumbled. I did hear her loud and clear when she said, “ Donnie, it’s not like that. I’ll get it done, please don’t…” in a pleading voice. The guy yelled back something like “ You’d better or…” Or what? I thought angrily from behind the door. He seemed to lower his voice and I couldn’t hear anything else. I put my hand on the knob and held it tightly wondering if I should burst in or wait for a sign of trouble. I couldn’t stand the thought of Tara being in danger. But I couldn’t be certain of what was going on. For all I knew the guy was her boyfriend or something and my bursting through the door could make things worse for her.



I heard footsteps coming towards me and I headed quickly three doors down, making believe that I was searching for my key. He rounded the corner towards the elevators and I went to make sure he was gone.



I stood before the door and knocked on it firmly. She came out, holding her robe shut and sobbing into a hankie, my hankie, I noticed. Her eyes were set down on the floor. “ Did you forget something…” She began to say before looking up.



“ No. But you did sweetheart.” I said giving her my best grin.





She looked at me like a deer caught in headlights “ W-what are you doing here?” she said nervously looking out into the hall and pulling me into the room. She closed the door behind us and put the lock in place. >O.k< I thought >safety first<



“ I was just in the neighborhood. And you did forget to say what it was I could help you with, so…”



She walked towards the window, with her back to me and the full moon casting a beam in her direction she really looked like an angel, just standing there in the darkened room. “ You shouldn’t have come Willow. It’s dangerous.”



I took a few steps towards her “ Why? That guy that just stormed out of here, I could take him. Who is he, jealous boyfriend?” I was trying to keep the ‘jealous’ out of my voice and failing miserably.



She shook her head “ No. He’s my brother. He’s also dangerous. I should have walked away when I saw you. Please leave, Please Willow.” She leaned her forehead on the windowsill and I saw her shoulders slump a little.



I closed the distance and held her from behind. I just couldn’t help reaching out to her.



“ Hey…kid you’re shakin’ like a leaf. Take it easy. Who ever he is, whatever’s going on, I already promised to help you and I never back out on a promise.”



She turned in my arms with fresh tears in her eyes “ You have to go. You don’t understand. I can’t even understand it yet. If you stay, you could get killed. I couldn’t live with that. Please go.” She sounded as desperate as I felt. All I knew was that I couldn’t walk away from her. What she was saying made no sense, but neither was what I was feeling for her.



I didn’t care if I had to face the Devil himself. I was already condemned if I couldn’t have her. I didn’t care if I had to face death .I didn’t want a life where she wasn’t by my side.



Yeah, I was crazy. There are worse reasons than love to lose your sanity over.



I looked into her eyes and forced her to look straight into mine. “ Now you look here kid…I don’t run from danger, I run straight into it, see? I’ve never backed down from a fight and I’m not gonna start now that found something really worth while to fight for. You’re gonna tell me what’s going on and we’re gonna get through it together. And I ain’t taking no for an answer, you hear? So I don’t want no lip…



Then just like that she leaned down and kissed me. I smiled and said something cheeky like, “ O.k that kind of lip is fine.” She smiled too and resumed the kiss. This time I kept my trap shut, well to words anyway.



These kisses were different from the ones in the office. They were unhurried, languid and sweet. Brother, it was like drowning in honey.



**



As much as I enjoyed the attention I was getting, something kept gnawing at me at the back of my mind. I retreated softly and took her face in my hands, I took a moment to breathe and regain some control over my senses. “ Those lips of yours will be the death of me. Before we go on I have to know, what’s going on?”



She upturned my palms and kissed them softly one by one before walking away. She turned towards the door “ You should go.” She said in a cracked voice. I could tell she was biting back another flow of tears.



I never could stand to see a broad cry and of course this wasn’t just another ordinary broad. This was Tara Maclay, mystery woman and it was breaking my heart to see her eyes watering with little drops of pain. I guess I’m a sucker and a wishy-washy one at that.



“ I already told you I’m not leaving until tell me what’s going on.”



She shivered slightly and wrapped her arms around herself “ And I already told you, how can I explain anything, when I don’t understand it myself? All I know is that you’ll be in danger if you stay. Please Willow walk away.”



I was about to protest full heartedly when I heard a noise just outside the door. She heard it too and got a panicked expression on her face. She ushered me inside the closet. I saw through the small blinds that she hurried to turn the radio up and wiped her tears before sitting down on the bed.





The doorknob clicked and a man entered the room. I recognized the voice. He was the one who was screaming at her when I was behind then door and he didn’t sound too pleasant now either.



“ Who the hell were you talking to Tara?”



“ No- no one Donnie.” She said, nervously stuttering.



“I heard voices in here.”



“ It was just the radio.”



“ Yeah? Well I guess it would be. It’s not like you have any friends in this city or in any other.”



There was a cruel tone to his voice and his remarks that I didn’t appreciate. If he had kept it up much longer I would’ve dammed the consequences and rushed out to give him a fat lip.



“ Listen up Tara, I’ve asked around that Frankie Red character bit the dust, but the office is still around. He had a daughter who runs it now. Were going to have to change strategies. The gist of the plan remains the same though. We’ll go there tomorrow and feed her the story. Don’t mess it up or there will be Hell to pay. You understand me?”



She nodded as he gripped her shoulders. Even through the blinds I could see that he was gripping her too damn hard for comfort. The uneasy feeling I had in my gut had multiplied by a million. What did any of this have to do with my Pop and why was Tara a part of a plan that included feeding me a story? There were more questions than answers and I didn’t like it one bit.



My knuckles were turning white from gripping them so tight at my sides. He let go of her and I saw a wisp of a cruel smile on his face as turned to slick his hair back in front of the dresser mirror.



“ That’s a good girl. Now I’m going out. I’ll be back tomorrow, ten o’clock sharp. I booked a reservation at the Plaza. There are people who have to think were still rolling in dough. ”



“ Where did you get the money for that?” She asked.



He raised his voice again “ That’s none of your business. I got connections. I’ll get my job done. You just make sure you do your part.”



He passed by quickly and shut the door with a slam. Tara stayed still on the bed. When I came out of the closet I found her with her face buried in her hands, she was crying again. I was determined to question her hard about everything, but one look into those watery eyes and all my anger faded.

I sat next to her and held her tight. There would be time for answers later.



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Edited by: nika  at: 11/17/04 7:47 pm
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Re: update

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Mon Apr 14, 2003 10:50 pm

Ah, nothin' slices like a gorgeous dame blinkin' up at ya with tears in her eyes...knife goes in so smooth and pretty you end up thankin' her for her time and makin' sure she didn't break a nail when she cut you open...



Sure an' the Irish in me loved Mac givin' the wee tyke (and now the grown dyke!) a little o' the tough love, too!



Donnie? He needs to meet the business end of Willow's knee, right to his groin.



Here's readin' with you, Kid.



Antigone "Sucker for a Dame with a Past" Unbound

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Re: update

Postby Kiwigrrrl » Tue Apr 15, 2003 12:27 am

Hee hee, this is such a cool idea for a fic!!!



More!!!



- Skye

Kiwigrrrl
 


Re: update

Postby Blue77 » Tue Apr 15, 2003 3:42 pm

Great update ... but what the frick is going on? Guess we will find out soon enough when Tara is forced to tell the 'story' to Willow in front of her brother - good job Willow knows it's a lie now though - very intriguing!!



Cannot wait for next bit!!



Love Blue

Blue77
 


Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Tue Apr 15, 2003 3:56 pm

Nika:



Oh Noooooooo!
Quote:
Cindy lou who: Hey I was going to use the whistle line in later updates (pout).
I *SO* did not mean to steal your thunder!:jho



It's just my favorite quote from one of my favorite actresses of that (or any other) time period.:( I really hope you'll still use it...it would be such a nice homage to Ms. Bacall.



Oh Donnie. I'm looking forward to learning about the lil' "story" that's meant to lead the Red Ace on a (not so merry) chase.



Waiting patiently in the doghouse for permission to bring you your paper and slippers.;) :whistle ;)



~Suse

Cindy Lou Who
 


Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby nika » Fri Apr 25, 2003 4:21 pm

Hello Kittens. I'm just touching up the next update. I'll have it up tonight or tomorrow morning.



Stroke of Luck: Like yummy sushi piyamas or berries and cream yummy?



Antigone: You're right on the money kid. I'm that kind of sucker for the right kind of dame myself. I'll let her slice me up and say: please may I die for you just a little more?

Cheers sweetheart, cheers.



Kiwigrrl: Thanks so much.



Blue77: Red will tell ya her whole story if you buy her a drink and play her 'that' song on rainy night.



Cindy lou who: Please do come in out of the dog house. It's nota nice place to be, I know I've been there enough times.

I've got a nice comfy couch inside.

nika
 


Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby bluewillowwitch » Fri Apr 25, 2003 10:48 pm

Hey,

Just read this story. I love it so far. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope for an update soon.





bluewillowwitch

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"Fate keeps happening."--Anita Loos

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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby nika » Sat Apr 26, 2003 9:29 am

Bluewillowwitch: Thank you. Your wish is my command. here's

your update.





UPDATE:



“ I’m so s-sorry…you must be thinking that I’m awful…I…” She started saying in between sobs.



She was about to open up the water works again. I had to respond fast I couldn’t take much more of this brand of torture. For me that’s saying a lot and I got the scars to prove it.



“ Listen sweetheart, enough with the tears.” I took out another hankie from my breast pocket and wiped her face as gently as I could. “ I don’t think you’re awful, but you’ve got some explaining to do.”



She looked up at me and her sad eyes nearly did me in.



“ I-I’m sorry I lied to you.”



I took her hand in mine and tried to be gentle. “ You haven’t exactly lied to me yet. You can’t lie if you’re not saying anything. What I heard though, it wasn’t pretty. Talk to me.” She shut her eyes and bit her lower lip.



“ I’m supposed to lie to you. Tell you that I have a case and keep you busy, chasing fake leads.”



“ Yeah I about heard that much, the real question is why?” I asked keeping my eyes fixed on hers she was wiggling like worm on a hook and that didn’t sit well with me. Pop used to say “ If they’re sweating or squirming they’re either lying or trying to kill you.” Either way, my gut was turning upside down.



“ I really don’t know.” She said.



I stared even harder. She lowered her gaze and continued nervously “ All they told me was to keep your father busy this week. I guess they didn’t know he had passed away. It has something to do with some jewelry of my Mother’s.”



“ Alright, let’s back up and take it step by step. First who’s ‘ they’ exactly? And second why would my Pop have anything to do with your Mother’s jewelry?”



“ My Father and my bother to answer your first question. As for the second, you won’t believe me, but the truth is that I really don’t know anything, except that he has or had a piece of jewelry that belonged to her and that according to Donnie is ‘ our salvation’ ”



“ Well kid I think your bother is wrong. I don’t know anything about expensive jewelry, except that my Pop never had anything pricier than what he could buy at the ‘ nickel and dime’ store. He never told me anything about working a case for anyone named Maclay either.”



“ I’m telling you what I know.” She replied.



I could sense she was still holding something back. I decided to keep my cool. If she was playing a game with me I could play too. “ O.k. That still leaves more questions than answers. Now that I know about ‘ the plan’ what are you going to do?”



“ I know what I don’t want to do. I don’t want to lie to you. I want you to trust me. I know you have questions so do I, so many you can’t even begin to imagine, I …” She hesitated before continuing.





“I don’t want you to get hurt. There’s no telling what Donnie would do if he found out that you knew something. Maybe if you could trust me enough, we could find some answers together?”



She sounded hopeful, but trust? That wasn’t exactly at the top of my list, but my curiosity was peaked. I had to find out what was going on. “ So doll…how are we gonna play this?”



**



She served me a drink from her bother’s stash and we talked for a while. It was simple enough, she would go into my office with her brother as planned. We would both play along and while he thought that I was chasing wild geese I would really be chasing him. Tara would stick to me like she was told while trying to find out more about her brother’s intentions. I was worried about the connection between her Mother and my Father. I couldn’t make one from what she was telling me. There were too many blanks to fill in.



She told me that her family had once been one of the most influential and wealthy families in the entire South. Crops, factories, mining, you name it they had it. Her Mother inherited the fortune from her grandfather and married very wealthy at very young age. She said things were good for a while.



Aren’t they always? I knew the rest of the story. It’s the same one all over the world. Still I listened patiently. She had a far away look in her eyes and I could tell it hurt her to remember.



“ He was a good father and a good husband. He used to call me princess and take me horseback riding. Then one day everything started changing. His Father, I guess I should call him Grandfather came to live with us. Things were never the same. There was fighting all time, Donnie and Papa began to have mood swings. Grandfather had a say in everything from the running of business to the running of the house. My Mother fought him all the way. I over heard them one night and she even threatened to get a divorce, but then she started getting sick. She was getting weaker as time passed. Then one day she just went to sleep and never woke up again.”



Her voice cracked and lump as big a boulder made its home in my throat.



“ You don’t have to go on if you don’t want to.” I offered.



“ No I want to.” She took the glass of bourbon from my hands and stole a little sip. “ I hope you don’t mind.” She said almost shyly. I nodded my head ‘no’ of course and she continued, “ After that it was down hill. Papa drank, Donnie drank, Grandfather ran the business right into the ground. At least I think that’s what happened, because the money just stopped coming in and everything was getting shut down or mortgaged.”



“ What about you, didn’t you have say, weren’t you in your Mother’s will?”



“ I was young and sheltered to an extent I suppose. Momma was teaching me about business and other things, but with Grandfather even that became a problem. After she got sick she really couldn’t protect me anymore and the men of the house didn’t let me question these things. When Momma died the first person Grandfather called was the Family lawyer, Mr.Duncan. They had a meeting that lasted hours behind closed doors and ended with a shouting match that could be heard all over the house and Mr. Duncan leaving the house in a huff slamming the front door nearly off its hinges.

The very week the will was to be read, he passed away and a new attorney took over. The will was read only in the presence of my Father supposedly as per my Mother’s wishes.”



This got my attention. “ Supposedly? So you don’t think that’s true?”



She sighed deeply and rubbed her temples “ I don’t know what to think or who to believe anymore.”



I took her hand “ You can believe in me.” then stood and walked to the window. “ So according to this lawyer everything went to the old man and your bother? I guess that would include her jewelry and anything else of value. Why would they think any of it is here, hundreds of miles away and in the possession of a dead P.I?”



“ I know that Grandfather was angry for a very long time. Like I said I wasn’t exactly Miss intrepid, I’m not very brave. They could be so cruel…it hurt so badly sometimes…I was afraid to even ask questions, still am I guess.” She said in a sad tone that tore me up.



Boy my blood was boiling now. Have I told you how much I hate bullies? I wish I could get those three jokers in a room alone. I rubbed the back of my neck and made my way back to her.



I squatted on my heels and put my hands on hers squeezing them to offer support. “ Listen it’s not you who lacks bravery. They’re cowards for picking on someone who doesn’t know how to fight back. The good news is you can learn to fight them, you already started by siding with me.” She gave me a little smile and squeezed my hands right back.



“ I really think that by your side I’ll have the strength to be brave.”



Her words made me smile in return. I wanted to believe in them.



“Let me remember…maybe I could remember something useful. The only time I knew anything about what they were doing was when I accidentally heard them talking from time to time. I was always so quiet I guess they never felt me coming. One of those times I heard Grandfather saying something like ‘ That bitch…she hid it…she knew and she hid it.’ I can only suppose he was talking about Mother and whatever it is Donnie is here to look for.”



I looked up into her face streaked with some of the tears that she had shed earlier. I looked for a sign, any sign that she wasn’t being honest with me. Maybe I only saw what I wanted to see cause I swear all I saw was honesty. I guess the joke’s on me.





Edited by: nika  at: 11/17/04 7:50 pm
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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby frumpycat » Sat Apr 26, 2003 11:23 am

Yay! Having fun with the story. Keep it up..good stuff...

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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Apr 26, 2003 12:58 pm

How odd, some people just *cough*happen*cough* to die around grandfather. Poison anyone ??



Hmm, I can only think of one gem/stone important to Tara's mother but that one has nothing to do with business. Nor is it particulairy valuable I think. I guess we'll have to wait and see :-)



I'm with Willow in regard to the male maClay's having earned a good smack-around : -->>: .



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

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Re: Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE

Postby sam7777 » Sat Apr 26, 2003 11:50 pm

Nika: I'm so glad you got back to this fic. I've always loved film noir and you have really fit Willow and tara into it. Great stuff.

sam7777
 

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