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Re: Island of Death

Postby Pinocchio1940 » Sat Jul 29, 2006 1:54 pm

So far, a interesting story. I've never read the stories that inspired this, so it reminded me a lot of "Taboo" :wtkiss
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Re: Island of Death

Postby kytzya » Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:05 pm

so it was dawnie...can't say i was surprise...>.>;; okay, just a bit...
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Re: Island of Death

Postby WickedReds » Thu Aug 03, 2006 4:36 pm

WHAT!?!?!?....
dawn.... never saw that one coming...

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Re: Island of Death

Postby Pinocchio1940 » Thu Aug 03, 2006 6:29 pm

WickedReds wrote:dawn.... never saw that one coming...

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I agree. When she left though, that gave it away.
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Re: Island of Death

Postby GayNow » Sat Nov 25, 2006 11:01 pm

So, watty, Karinna and I were talking. There were absolutely convinced that this story was completed. I begged to differ...after all, I know who did it.

Oh wait...everyone does.

But the fact still remains...I WAS RIGHT!!! The story isn't over.

Speaking of which, when is the story going to be completed? Sometime before we reach 40? It's not that far away you know? So chop-chop, missy...your beta is waiting.

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Chapter 15 replies

Postby tarawhipped » Sat Dec 02, 2006 12:19 pm

Before I get to Chapter 15 replies, I’d like to thank everyone for their patience with me and all my broken promises of ‘yeah, it’s almost done, heh heh’ on this. I can’t believe it’s been over 2 years since I started it. Where does the time go? Chapter 16 will follow, and since I don’t want to string it out, the finale will be up on Wednesday. – Cam

Missocki:
I knew Dawn was sick, but this just proves it!
[br]
Hehehe. I can’t stand the whole ‘let’s add a baby/child/teenager/orphan/etc to our show and completely fuck up the established dynamics.’ So while MT is a fine actress who did a wonderful job portraying a whiny brat, I still didn’t want to watch said whiny brat. Ergo, Dawn = evil, and thus my story was born. Thanks.[br]
Car: Awwww, you’re still special, pumpkin. After all, you alone know why she did it! Well, besides me, of course…and Watty…and Ang…and everyone else as soon as I post. Feel better?[br]
wimpy0729: Pam! Good to see your nick here, and yes! I am evil! Cower before me my minions and um…do my bidding and stuff. Would someone bring me an Oreo? Please?[br]
Sandman78: Yea! Another Dawn-hater. Man, she bugged me. I do feel bad about making Riley such a dick, though I know I’m in a minority since I really don’t mind His Blandness. Glad you liked it.[br]
watty:
I’ve forgotten what OMH stands for
[br]
“Our Mysterious Host,” as coined by our own Chris. Using it saved me a lot of worry in feedback replies about spilling the beans through pronoun usage. I don’t think I slipped up anywhere in the story, but it wouldn’t surprise me if I did. It’s really fucking hard not to use ‘he’ or ‘she.’[br]
Thanks so much for your help on this Watty. I know you say that the Dawn reveal was a surprise, but I think it would have been more so if I’d posted this over say, less than 2 frickin’ years. Too much time for people to hypothesize, darnit.[br]
Don’t know if I should feel sorry for Giles or not; in most jurisdictions he’d be considered an accomplice
[br]
Absolutely, and believe me, it was hard to make Giles so morally ambiguous. Does being blackmailed justify his behavior? No. Does the fact that he doesn’t personally kill anyone let him off the hook? Possibly with Xander, assuming Giles didn’t realize what Dawn had planned, but after that? No way. I love Giles, but I really liked playing off of the idea of his Ripper persona, and what could have happened to him if he hadn’t become a Watcher but instead got caught up with other disaffected tough kids and what the consequences of their actions would be.[br]
Dawn doesn’t seem to be watching the monitors
[br]
Yeah, this was a flub on my part. What happened to that handy-dandy monitor she was watching Anya’s death on earlier? Oops. There was no way she could be watching, or the next chapter wouldn’t work, so I had it in mind that she wanted to be surprised by who emerged alive. She’s betting she knows, but it is a little inconsistent, I suppose. I suck! *cries*[br]
highlandlass25:
I never figured out the end of ‘And Then There Were None’ either
[br]
There’s a great moment in the comedy ‘Murder By Death,’ where the evil mastermind upbraids the Agatha Christie character for always throwing in an extra character or clue at the end that makes it impossible for the reader to figure things out in advance. I didn’t want to be that mean, though I did have giggly moments imagining Snyder popping up, shouting “it was me, all me! Buwahahaha!”[br]
Still Waters T:
Guess I was right in suspecting young, “innocent” Dawn, huh?
[br]
Yes you were, Liv, and I think you were the first person to throw her name out there, so you get the shiny gold star! Thanks for the kind words, and I hope you enjoy the rest.[br]
taralicious:
Who knew that Dawn had it in her to craft and manipulate such a Machiavellian scheme as this?
[br]
No kidding, huh? Initially I wasn’t thinking beyond “I’ll make Dawn the bad guy! Yeah, Dawn sucks!” But then I think I was inspired by my third or fourth reading of snippygal’s Bobby: A Spoof, in which Dawn commits increasingly ridiculous levels of larceny right under Buffy’s clueless nose. I can’t address your remarks regarding Giles, as that’s mentioned in the next part, but thanks for your comments, Blayne.[br]
EasierSaid:
Holy shinola. Well, that just takes the cake. Takes the cake and smashes it into my poor little gobsmacked face.
[br]
Ooo, bonus points for use of the words ‘shinola’ and ‘gobsmacked,’ Heather. But who brought cake? I didn’t get any! *pouts* Thank you for the praise, and I did tone down the final couple of deaths ‘cause I just couldn’t go there anymore, you know? I’m just glad it’s finally ending and I can get back to my happy western romance.[br]
NeTGiRL:
i got hooked but I was too lazy to leave some feedback so here I am now. I hope you forgive me for being a lazy butt.
[br]
Considering it took me over 2 years to write a 17 chapter fic…yeah, you’re forgiven. Am I?[br]
did [Dawn] really carry Tara all by herself?
[br]
Well, it was more like dragging, and I went with the old standard ‘evil intent gives you super strength’ axiom. It’s like she got in touch with her inner Hulk. Thanks, Kirsten.[br]
Kaia: I’m glad you haven’t been strung along for the entire duration of me writing this, Karinna, though it’s now been over 6 months so I guess you can see how I manage to suck the suspense out of the story![br]
I could probably say that I kinda thought it would be Dawn by the time she was talking to Giles
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A lot of people were getting suspicious by Dawn’s extended absence and no body turning up (a la Cordelia’s disappearance), but I’m just happy that people weren’t saying ‘Oh! It’s Dawn, right?’ from the beginning. Riley made a good spoiler in that regard, but I knew it was only a matter of time before all the smart Kitties here figured things out. Personally I like the ‘why’ as much as the ‘who,’ and that will be revealed next.[br]
Artemis: Oh Chris, you make me smile. Your Tara theory has me wishing I’d written this as a black comedy/sex farce and come up with that plot. Ah well.[br]
I agree with you regarding Giles. He does not get a free pass, as I mentioned to Watty. He was self-serving in his actions, and whether he knew what Dawn had planned from the beginning, he still aided her afterwards. I once had an idea for a fic in which S5 Giles decides to kill Dawn rather than let Buffy sacrifice herself, and how the fallout of that decision changes everything in S6 (no resurrection/no Spuffy/no W/T breakup), and I’ll probably never write it, but I liked the idea of Giles as the Big Bad. Here he’s just the Middlin’ Bad, but you get it, right?[br]
caz: Hehehe…yeah, Dawn always grated on me. I mean, Buffy died to spare your whiny ass, and you still have the nerve to bitch that she doesn’t care about you? *smack* I’m so glad I’m not the only one. Thanks![br]
Sn0wflak3: Of course there will be no Willow or Tara hurting! Not so much as a paper cut for those two. I’m glad you like it.[br]
histchic:
so it was little Dawnie…but, who else from Buffy- or Angel-some could it have been?
[br]
Yeah, especially when it got down to the final few. Riley was just too obvious, as was Giles. The only real option was for it to have been Willow or Tara, either as a split personality or an evil twin, but even I have standards and refuse to use some clichés. Thanks, Beth.[br]
Pinocchio1940:
I’ve never read the stories that inspired this, so it reminded me a lot of “Taboo”
[br]
It’s definitely a plot that’s become a suspense/horror standard. I’m not sure Agatha Christie’s was the first, but it’s the first one I ever read/saw. It’s nice that there are so many different interpretations of it, though, since it means that just about everyone will be familiar with some version of it. Thanks.[br]
kytzya: Hopefully even with Dawn’s identity as the killer revealed, the how and why will keep everyone interested ‘til the end. You all know now that she’s nuts, but you don’t know how nuts! Thank you.[br]
WickedReds: Yo, G! Thanks for checking in, and I’m happy to have thrown you for a loop. Hope you enjoy the rest.[br]
Car: I’m not going to give you any grief for bumping this, Car, I’m just going to say thank you for making me get off my butt and finish it.[br][br][br]
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Island of Death

Postby tarawhipped » Sat Dec 02, 2006 12:21 pm

Title: Island of Death
Author: Tarawhipped (Cameron)
Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com
Rating: NC-17 (violence, language, sex)
Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy; plot borrowed from Agatha Christie’s And Then There Were None
Feedback: I LIVE for it!
Distribution: Sure, just tell me where so I can visit!
Summary: Ten strangers are invited by a mysterious host to a remote island off the Pacific coast of South America.
Notes: AU (no Scoobiage at all); thoughts in italics. I had double the help on this one, which is why it took so long—just kidding! Thanks to Carleen and Watty for their support and assistance.
Warning: Character death[br]
Previously on Island…of Death!:[br]
And then there were three…Dawnie is OMH, while Willow and Tara are in a room with a dead Riley and two handguns. ***Do not feel that you need to go back and reread—in homage to every schlocky mystery novel ever written, there will the requisite ‘bad guy soliloquy’ that will handily summarize everything that has happened.***[br][br][br]
Chapter 16[br][br]
Willow paused before leaving the darkness of the hidden passage and walking out into the Great room. She took several deep breaths, and tears began to swell in her reddened eyes and stream down her face. With a final look over her shoulder, she stepped through the doorway. Her wide eyes immediately met Dawn’s.[br]
The teenager sat calmly on the sofa, a smug smirk on her face as she watched Willow shuffle listlessly into the room, her right arm hanging limp at her side, a revolver in her hand.[br]
“Dawn?” the redhead breathed, her head slowly pivoting to look at the passage before snapping back toward the young woman. “It was you?”[br]
“Yuh huh,” the girl cheerfully replied, practically bouncing in her seat. “Fooled you, right? That note I left for you made Tara look pretty bad, didn’t it? Sorry you had to kill your little girlfriend. Well, not really.”[br]
“So Tara didn’t—”[br]
“Oh please,” Dawn scoffed. “She couldn’t even put a bullet into someone who was begging her to pull the trigger. You really think she could have orchestrated all this?”[br]
Dawn raised her chin proudly and watched the hacker’s shock dissolve into anger.[br]
“Why did you do this? How did you do this?” Willow demanded, her voice trembling with quiet rage. Almost as an afterthought, she raised the gun and pointed it at Dawn.[br]
The teenager smiled patronizingly. From her seat, she could see that the revolver pointed at her was the empty one, but apparently Willow had not bothered to check.[br]
“Let me guess, you want the full ‘bad guy soliloquy’? Why not, I’ve got some time to kill, and I know how much Willow Rosenberg has to figure things out. That, by the way, is how I did it. You were all so easy…your reactions, your weaknesses…you all did exactly what I expected.”[br]
“So you knew Xander would get drunk and go for a bike ride?” Willow challenged, her voice incredulous. She moved to the side of the bar and let her arm rest on the surface, the gun still pointed at Dawn.[br]
“Get drunk, yes. The bike was a guess. Once a drunk driver, you know? It was habit for him to get wasted and get in a vehicle, so I simply provided the fully stocked bar and the vehicle.”[br]
“And if he hadn’t taken it?”[br]
Dawn picked at a loose thread on the couch cushion. “Then I would have waited for him to pass out and chucked him over the cliff. Not as poetic in the justice department, but whatever gets the job done.”[br]
“But how could you—I mean, you’re so—”[br]
“Small and weak?” Dawn spat. “I could have managed on my own, but I had Giles to help with the heavy lifting. Buffy didn’t exactly walk to the beach, and Cordelia couldn’t have found the pool with a map and a guide dog.”[br]
“So Giles was in on it.” Willow stated.[br]
Dawn narrowed her eyes at the redhead and glanced at the passageway.[br]
“Then I guess he set this up?” the hacker hastily asked, trying desperately to goad the girl to keep talking. “Planned it all out, got you to go along with it?”[br]
“It was my plan!” Dawn shouted, all her attention returning to Willow, who managed to smother any visible signs of relief. “Giles was just my lackey,” she huffed dismissively.[br]
Willow kept perfectly still and silent, waiting for Dawn’s bruised ego to settle so the girl could continue. She didn’t have to wait long before the teenager haughtily continued.[br]
“Faith was simple, I just had to push her over the balcony. As for the others, well, my Daddy was in the pharmaceutical business. It’s amazing what you can do with creative chemistry and the right poisons.”[br]
“Buffy’s skin?” Willow confirmed, receiving an eager nod in reply.[br]
“Yep. Cordelia had a little paralytic that kept her still while I drowned her in her bathtub. Giles carried her to the basement for me. Oz got arsenic, Anya got the strychnine.”[br]
“Her pills, or the Amaretto?”[br]
“Both,” Dawn replied with a grin. “I figured she’d probably wash them down with her favorite drink, but I didn’t know who would get stuck in the pool room, so last night I slipped into her room and replaced her pills with my own special batch.”[br]
Willow bristled at Dawn’s arrogant tone, but willed herself to keep calm and let the girl talk. The teenager did so happily, relaying with relish how she electrocuted Giles, shot Riley, and set the scene for Willow to find Tara, the proverbial smoking gun in her hand. Willow shuddered, her mind flashing back to the moment she’d entered the dimly lit office and found Riley lying across the desk in a pool of blood. She’d remembered the poem then…one found the evidence…and sure enough, there was a file under his arm; a file that contained a single sheet of paper: Tara’s confession. Willow closed her eyes as fresh tears spilled out over her cheeks.[br]
“But…why?” Willow gushed, her body shaking anew.[br]
Dawn rose from the couch and walked toward Willow, who raised the gun and stepped behind the bar. The teenager rolled her eyes and held out the photograph she still had in her hand. Willow did not take it, but she craned her neck to peer at the snapshot.[br]
“That’s me and Dad,” Dawn said, withdrawing the photo to look at it herself. “He was so proud of me that day.” She smiled down at it before ripping it in two and tossing the pieces aside. “He wasn’t so proud two months later when I told him I was pregnant. The first fucking thing he did was take back the car. Then he said he’d cut me off if I didn’t get rid of it,” she fumed, her hands rising to cradle her abdomen. “I knew he’d do it, too. If he hadn’t been such a bastard, Mom never would have left.”[br]
“Dawn, that’s horrible,” Willow said, uncomfortably allowing the small bit of sympathy for what had been done to the killer.[br]
“I refused of course,” Dawn continued, not acknowledging the redhead’s remark. “I threatened to call the DA and confirm all those charges you and your hacker friends had exposed. He was furious,” she laughed. “He ‘summoned’ me home from college, and I knew he was planning something, so I made a little plan of my own.”[br]
Willow held her breath and watched as Dawn strode back to the couch to sit. With the teenager’s back turned, Willow allowed herself one quick glance at the painting above the fireplace, and the camera she knew was hidden there. She nodded once.[br]
“It was supposed to look like a break-in,” Dawn said, resuming her story. “Poor Daddy killed during a robbery. Only ‘poor Daddy’ had given his trusty manservant Giles the day off, so I didn’t have my convenient witness. No witness equals suspicion, which equals insurance investigators, which equals my inheritance put on hold for who knows how many years.”[br]
“This was all about money?” Willow accused.[br]
Dawn stared daggers at the redhead, her nose flaring in contempt.[br]
“When I confronted him, he laughed—laughed!” she continued, her voice rising to an hysterical shout. “I followed him down the hall, and when I tried to—he pushed me down the stairs! My own father!”[br]
Dawn’s hands again found her belly, which she kneaded through her shirt.[br]
“I could feel the blood pouring out of me, and heard him running down the stairs, calling for an ambulance. When I woke up in the hospital the next day, I knew I’d lost the baby. That was bad enough, but then Daddy’s lawyer came by to break the news about his suicide. Oh yeah, and that the insurance company wouldn’t pay on his twenty-five million dollar policy since he offed himself!”[br]
“But what does that have to do with us? None of us—” Willow began, but Dawn interrupted, her voice once again flat and cold.[br]
“While I was recuperating in the hospital, I had a lot of time on my hands. Did a lot of surfing on the internet, reading the news…you know how it is. Funny thing, but the same day Daddy’s conscience got the better of him, some sorority girl drowned, and some old lady got fried in a tanning booth. Just two of the thousands and thousands of people who die every day, right? I started following the ones that got off—I still can’t believe they let your girlfriend go—and moved down here, since Daddy’s house was being sold off to pay reparations to the families of the people who died from his company’s ‘criminal negligence.’ All those killers getting off scott free, just like my Daddy did. I decided that they—you—would get what you deserved, and so would I.”[br]
“You’re insane,” Willow whispered.[br]
“Whatever. I’m also about to be very rich.” Dawn waved off Willow’s confused expression and continued before the hacker could pose a question. “You weren’t the only people who killed someone that day and didn’t go to jail, you know. There were plenty of others: random thugs, lovers’ spats gone violent. No, you all have one other thing in common—money.”[br]
Willow laughed despite herself, a guffaw ripping from her chest.[br]
“Don’t believe me?” Dawn raised her eyebrows. “I’m not even going to go into how much that model was worth, but it’s a lot. Anya had scored big time on her two dead sugar daddies. Giles came from a wealthy family that’s anxious to keep an unpleasant teenage indiscretion of his under wraps. Buffy: trust fund baby. Oz…well, you know who his dad is right?”[br]
Willow stared blankly.[br]
“Oh come on! Daniel Osbourne…musician? Ring any bells? Anyway…Finn had dirt on half the politicians in Iowa, who are willing to pay a hefty sum to keep him—or his information—quiet. Harris worked for the biggest construction company in California. And you—you’ve been doing quite well yourself, haven’t you? Ever since you sold out and starting enhancing the security of Fortune 500 companies instead of hacking it.”[br]
Willow looked at the floor. Her shoulders slumped as she tried to wrap her mind around the circumstances that led her and a seemingly random group of people to this place. Her forehead crinkled when she realized Dawn had neglected to mention one name.[br]
“What about Tara?”[br]
Dawn smirked. “That women’s shelter that your precious Tara worked for? Along with a dozen others, it’s funded by the Somerset-Hewitt Charitable Trust. My mother. My extremely wealthy mother, who abandoned me when she left my father. While you were all flying to Peru, I was sailing over from here and wiring ransom notes for all of you, each tailored to suit to your individual bank accounts. As of this morning, my untraceable account had passed the seventy-five million dollar mark. Of course, when the police arrive, they’ll find nothing but dead bodies, and a surprisingly large amount of evidence pointing to Willow Rosenberg. They’ll be here in an hour. So, if I were you,” she said, rising and walking over to the chair placed in the center of the room, “I’d make sure I wasn’t alive to take the blame.”[br]
“I’ll tell them the truth,” Willow countered, shuddering at the noose hanging from the ceiling rafters. “They’ll believe—”[br]
“Believe what? That you’re innocent? Yeah right. I’m not the only killer here. I would have loved to see the look on Tara’s face when you shot her.”[br]
Willow at last let her façade drop and smiled coldly. She stepped out from behind the bar and sidestepped over to the fireplace, keeping the revolver pointed at Dawn, who waited patiently, unfazed by the weapon aimed at her chest.[br]
“Speaking of, you’re awfully cocky for someone with a gun pointed at you,” Willow said.[br]
“Yeah, well, if you were half as smart as you think you are, you’d know that gun isn’t loaded,” the teenager countered.[br]
“I don’t think she meant that one.”[br]
Dawn froze, her skin prickling all over. She backed up, refusing to tear her eyes away from Willow to confirm the obvious. When her legs hit the coffee table, her gaze faltered, and she jerked her head to the right.[br]
There, standing in the doorway, the other gun in her hand, was Tara.[br][br][br]
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Re: Island of Death

Postby GayNow » Sat Dec 02, 2006 12:39 pm

WOOT!!!

Cam updated!!!

Thank me, people!!!

Too awesome, Cam...even though I know how it ends, it still gives me the shivers when I read it. Outstanding!
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Re: Island of Death

Postby PancakesinBellies » Sat Dec 02, 2006 12:54 pm

That. Was. Awesome. I'm still confused as hell about somethings, but I suppose it means I need to reread the story. Thanks so much for updating! Next one soon please?
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Re: Island of Death

Postby Missocki » Sat Dec 02, 2006 1:46 pm

F**K YES!!! I knew Tara was still alive! There is the way in Hades that Willow would Ever! shoot Tara.

Besides, I don't think I could handle another Tara shooting death, we've had enough of those, haven't we?


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Re: Island of Death

Postby Sandman78 » Sat Dec 02, 2006 2:51 pm

As usual, a wonderful update....of course with the thrilling cliffhanger!!
Dawn is evil, and I hope that sorry b*tch gets what she deserves :devilish
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Re: Island of Death

Postby writerfreak » Sat Dec 02, 2006 4:58 pm

Oooooooooo I had so been waiting for an update. I've been lurking around this story for a long time, and I might have left feedback once before but I don't remember. Either way I love it and that was a great update. I so knew that Willow wouldn't hurt Tara. Wonderful, I say!!!!!

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Re: Island of Death

Postby diamondforever » Sat Dec 02, 2006 10:04 pm

And it all comes together. The dialogue was great. Hard to imagine Dawn with that kind of bitterness, but you did an awesome job of making it work. I sense a reunion with lots of kissing? :smug
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Re: Island of Death

Postby Still Waters T » Sun Dec 03, 2006 4:08 am

Coolness! You finally updated! :bounce

Don't really have time for breaks to read fics and leave lengthy feedbacks now with desperate cramming, and impending exams hanging over my head so to speak, :| but I just had to. :P

Fantastic update! :bounce Really cool how the tables seem have turned on Dawn. :D Not so cocky now, is she? :smug Though the evidence pointing to Willow is worrying, I gotta say. :hmm But I can wait patiently for the next update to see what will happen. :) Eh, well, back to the cramming for me I guess.... :read :sleepy

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Re: Island of Death

Postby taralicious » Mon Dec 04, 2006 12:44 am

Imagine Dawn sitting there, as confident and arrogant as any grinning female Snidely Whiplash wanna-be, twirling her moustache if she had one, telling Willow how she disposed of all the victims and not one tied to the railroad tracks, given that this was an island.
All of a sudden, DUN-DUN-DUN!
Dawn looks from Willow to the other side and says "I don't know what to say?"
Tara says, with that adorably sexy smirk and raised eyebrow, "How about curses, foiled again."
Cue the voice of the Shadow coming out of the ether admonishing Dawn with "The weed of crime bears bitter fruit, crime does not pay."
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Re: Island of Death

Postby Chummy » Mon Dec 04, 2006 7:23 am

wwwwwwwwwwwwwwawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww you are great . i wa holding my brith while i read your story it is great plz update soon cant wait to see what will happened next.
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Re: Island of Death

Postby Artemis » Wed Dec 06, 2006 9:14 am

Bad Dawnie, exhibiting the classic villain flaws - so enamoured of her own 'genius' that she can't help but explain it in all its detail to anyone who'll listen, and being likewise so enamoured of her genius that she never considered that anyone else would figure it out. I admit, I was confused through the middle of the sequence, like everyone else - but the last two planned deaths, #1 finding (forged) evidence of #2's guilt and killing him/her, then committing suicide, that I guessed. And it looks like so did Willow - or if not that, then Dawn's little song at least planted enough doubt in her mind that she stopped and thought before she assumed that killing Tara was her only way out.

Very nice chapter that, a classic villain-gloat in the best tradition of classic villains everywhere. I enjoyed seeing the Dawn we know and love (well, I like her) twisted around into a homicidal maniac.
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Re: Island of Death

Postby tarawhipped » Wed Dec 06, 2006 7:26 pm

Replies to Chapter 16:

GayNow:
even though I know how it ends

Do you? I can't remember if I told you what happens to Dawn, and even if I did, I might have changed it. Ha![br]
I can't begin to thank you for all the help you gave me on this, Carleen. You've been a wonderful beta/idea-person/plot talker-outer, and an even better friend. :bow to you![br]
highlandlass25: Now that it's done, I'll be happy to answer any lingering questions or clear up any confusion. Thank you for the praise.[br]
Missocki: Of course there was never any chance of Willow or Tara harming each other, but I had to make Dawn think otherwise. I'm glad the tension came through, and thank you.[br]
Sandman78: I'll let you decide if Dawn gets what's coming to her. I could have gone two ways on it, and don't know if I chose the best, but c'est la vie. Thank you.[br]
writerfreak: Thank you so much. I've been waiting a long time to finish this! I'm glad people stuck around and continued to enjoy it.[br]
diamondforever: Yeah, this psycho-Dawn is more akin to the demon-y hitchhiker thing that possessed her in After Life, but someone had to be the whackjob. The reunion with kissing is mostly implied, I'm afraid. My biggest problem in finishing this was figuring out how to go from this gruesome experience to Willow and Tara all happy and moving on with their lives. I thought a sex scene would be gratuitous, but feel free to imagine lots of happy 'now-we're-safe-and-can-boink-like-bunnies' fun. Thank you.[br]
Still Waters T: Thank you so much for the kind words, Liv, and for taking the time to write. Good luck with your exams![br]
taralicious: Blayne, I was really tempted to throw in a Dragnet-style "Dawn was arraigned in Superior Court" ending, but decided against it. Thanks for your feedback throughout.[br]
Chummy: Thanks, and the finale is up next.[br]
Artemis: Yeah, those bad guys spilling their guts...when will they learn? As for the relation to the poem, Riley was the one who 'found the evidence,' and Dawn was betting that Willow would come in and think Tara had 'joined the other team' (i.e. turned out to be the killer), and killed Riley to silence him. Of course, she wasn't planning on Willow not distrusting Tara for a second. Thanks, Chris, and I'm looking forward to finally seeing 'complete' after the title on TtLG. :D [br]
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Island of Death

Postby tarawhipped » Wed Dec 06, 2006 7:30 pm

Title: Island of Death
Author: Tarawhipped (Cameron)
Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com
Rating: NC-17 (violence, language, sex)
Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy; plot borrowed from Agatha Christie’s And Then There Were None
Feedback: I LIVE for it!
Distribution: Sure, just tell me where so I can visit!
Summary: Ten strangers are invited by a mysterious host to a remote island off the Pacific coast of South America.
Notes: AU (no Scoobiage at all); thoughts in italics. As always, many thanks to my beta, Carleen.
Warning: Character death[br][br][br]
Chapter 17[br][br]
“Did you get all that?” Willow asked.[br]
“Audio and video,” Tara confirmed, keeping her eyes and gun firmly trained on Dawn, who quivered with rage.[br]
“Oh, come on, Dawnie,” Willow sneered, “you didn’t think I’d really fall for that ‘I’m so guilty. Love, Tara’ letter, did you?”[br][br]
[blockquote]When Willow entered the office and saw Riley sprawled across the desk, she rushed to his side, naively thinking she could do something despite the ever-expanding pool of fresh blood spreading out from his inert form. She lifted his wrist to check for a pulse, hoping against all evidence that he was still alive. The obvious confirmed, she set his hand back down gently, eyeing the gun resting next to his arm, which she picked up after a moment’s hesitation.[br]
That’s when she saw the manila folder, and moved closer to the desk lamp to inspect its contents. She was on her second incredulous reading of the letter within when she heard a sound behind her—a startled gasp—and turned to see Tara staring at her, confusion and fear on her face as she stared at Riley’s body and Willow standing next to it, a gun in her hand. Willow’s eyes widened, realizing how the situation must appear.[br]
“Tara, I didn’t—” she stopped when she noticed Tara’s eyes were still on the revolver, which she hastily set down on the floor and kicked away before holding out the letter. “Read this.”[br]
Tara stood up to accept the page, jumping slightly when the gun that had been resting in her own lap fell to the floor with a thud. Her eyes snapped up to meet Willow’s, but the redhead merely nodded.[br]
“Just read it.”[br]
While Tara moved closer to the light, Willow inspected the wall of monitors, stepping up to one that showed a view of the front hall and curiously changing the channel, which flipped to an image of the kitchen. She kept going until she reached one of the Great Hall, her fingers stilling on the button as she gazed in shock at seeing Dawn moving around the room.[br]
“Willow, I swear it isn’t me. I didn’t write this, you have to believe me!”[br]
“Shh, baby, I know it wasn’t you. I think she wanted me to find that, find you here with Riley and the gun and…kill you.”[br]
“She?” Tara murmured in a daze, following Willow’s nod to the monitor. “Dawn! But…why?”[br]
“I’m not sure,” Willow replied, scampering around the desk and randomly pulling open drawers.[br]
Tara shuffled over to a chessboard, where a queen and a single pawn were placed side by side. Shifting her attention back to the monitor, she watched Dawn move to the couch and sit down, fidgeting anxiously and checking her watch.[br]
“How long do you think she’ll wait there?”[br]
Willow had a handful of wires and cables in her hands when she looked up to check the monitor.[br]
“I don’t know,” she answered absently, pulling the screen out slightly and turning it. She plugged in a cable and ran it down to the VCR on the bottom shelf. She rummaged through several more drawers before finding a cassette and ripping off the cellophane wrapper.[br]
“The boat! The one in the cave—we can take it and get out!” Tara whispered excitedly.[br]
Willow turned to face Tara, who was already standing by the door through which they’d entered the room.[br]
“But what if it doesn’t work? Even if it does, I don’t think it could get us back to the mainland. Hell, for all we know it could be booby-trapped.” Willow held up the video cassette before popping it in the VCR. “We already know the last death is supposed to be a suicide. I just need to stall and get her talking, admit what she’s done.”[br]
“It’s too dangerous,” Tara stated, pleading with her eyes, though she could see the redhead’s resolve.[br]
“Not with you watching on the monitor. If anything goes wrong, you can be out there in a few seconds…with this,” she said, stooping to pick up Riley’s gun, which she confirmed still held 5 rounds.[br]
Tara shook her head and refused the weapon. “You should take it with you.”[br]
Willow picked up the other revolver and opened the cylinder, letting the single bullet inside fall to the floor. To Tara’s astonishment, Willow again held out the loaded gun to her.[br]
“She’ll be more likely to talk if she doesn’t feel threatened,” the hacker explained. “Believe me, I don’t relish going out there, but we need her to confess or else it really will look like one of us did all this. Okay?”[br]
Tara pursed her lips and wracked her brain for an alternative—any argument to dissuade Willow—but came up blank. At last she nodded and accepted the revolver. Willow hit the record button on the VCR and headed for the door that led to the Great Room.[br]
“Wait!” Tara hissed. “She’s expecting a gunshot.”[br]
Willow paused in the doorway. Tara looked around the room before taking two steps towards an overstuffed chair and firing into the deep cushion. Puffs of cotton batting flew into the air and drifted back down. Tara wrinkled her nose at the thick smell of gunpowder filling the room. Willow left the doorway to envelop Tara in a tight hug and kiss her lightly.[br]
“I’ll get as much from her as I can, and I’ll try to give you a signal when you should come out, but be ready.”[br]
“I will,” Tara nodded. “Be careful.”[/blockquote][br][br]
Rage was pouring off of Dawn in waves. Her face reddened and contorted; her limbs twitched and trembled until her entire body shook and a piercing shriek erupted from her throat. She snatched a hunting knife from its sheath, hidden against the small of her back, and lunged at Tara.[br]
No!” Willow screamed.[br]
Tara saw the girl rushing towards her and automatically raised the gun, but Dawn didn’t hesitate. Neither did Tara. The bullet hit the girl under her right collarbone, spinning her around violently. The knife fell from her hand and she fell backwards, smashing her head against the corner of the coffee table in a sickening crack of bone.[br][br][br][br]
For the second time in her life, Tara found herself in a small room, surrounded by suspicious faces rattling off question after repetitive question. The difference this time was that she was not alone. Willow sat next to her in the control room, rubbing the back of Tara’s neck as they went over the events of the past week yet again.[br]
When the FBI team had first arrived, the pair was still in the midst of futilely trying to staunch the flow of blood from Dawn’s head, but the young woman died without regaining consciousness. Both women had been handcuffed and searched while half a dozen agents kept their M16s trained on them. Willow had repeatedly pleaded with them to go to the control room to see the tape they’d recorded, and eventually the entire group had moved through the small hallway.[br]
The ‘surprisingly large amount of evidence’ Dawn had referenced amounted to little more than another version of Tara’s ‘I did it’ letter, but once the FBI agents—with Willow’s assistance—had breached the security of her computer system, Dawn’s culpability was laid plain. The girl had taken a great deal of delight in becoming the sole owner of Supai Island, so named for the Incan God of death. She had only clumsily hidden her identity behind the fictitious Matt Sekhmet, a combination of two Egyptian Goddesses: Maat, for justice, and Sekhmet, for war.[br]
It took another five hours of statements, leading the agents through the mansion to each of the bodies, and waiting for an evidence retrieval team before Willow and Tara were finally loaded onto a helicopter and flown back to the FBI team’s base at Santiago, Chile. They moved like automatons from one meeting to another: the Division Head, the U.S. Ambassador, a psychiatrist. They’d been awake for almost 24 hours when they’d at last been driven to the Crowne Plaza.[br]
Their personal Marine escort had informed them that they would be flown back to the U.S. on Sunday, giving them a day and a half to recover from the physical exhaustion of their ordeal. They lay down on the king size bed, not bothering to pull down the bedding or undress, and were both asleep in minutes.[br]
They awoke Friday evening and ordered room service after relaxing in the large whirlpool bath. Sitting at the table in their fluffy white robes, they picked at their food listlessly. Willow pushed her plate away and sighed heavily. Tara set down her fork and reached across the table for Willow’s hand.[br]
“I feel guilty,” the redhead whispered.[br]
“Willow, we’ve been through this—it’s not your fault. Dawn might have focused on you, but it’s only because it suited her twisted needs.”[br]
“That’s not what I meant,” Willow said, lowering her eyes to their joined hands resting on the tabletop. “I…I know I should feel bad that the others are dead—and I do—but right now all I feel is happy that you and I are alive.”[br]
“Oh, sweetie, that’s normal,” Tara insisted, squeezing their joined hands.[br]
“I’m a horrible person!” Willow wailed, sobs wracking her body.[br]
Tara never let go of Willow’s hand as she walked around the table to embrace the distraught woman. They stood clutching each other, letting the burst damn of tears flow unchecked onto each other’s shoulders.[br]
“It’s called survivor’s guilt, Will, and trust me I feel it too,” Tara said. She cradled Willow’s face in her hands and looked her straight in the eye. “Being happy to be alive does not make you a bad person.”[br]
Willow sniffled away the remnants of her crying jag and nodded.[br]
“I trust you. I just, I don't know what to do now. I want to know what to do.”[br]
“What do you want to do?” Tara asked.[br]
“Well, not go to another island ever again, for starters,” Willow admitted. She laughed along when Tara barked out a hearty guffaw. “Then I was thinking I could take you out for that coffee I owe you.”[br]
“Hmm, what was that line in Speed about relationships that begin under intense situations?” Tara smirked.[br]
“Please tell me you don’t get your love life advice from Keanu Reeves movies,” Willow deadpanned.[br]
Tara chuckled and shook her head, but a moment later she was pensively biting her lip.[br]
“Seriously, Willow, you live in Seattle and I’m in Chicago. How can this work?”[br]
“We’ll find a way,” Willow said, smiling warmly and taking Tara’s hands in her own. “There’re these newfangled contraptions called ‘phones’ and ‘airplanes’ that I hear are all the rage now-a-days.”[br]
“Smartass.”[br]
“I mean it, Tara,” Willow said seriously. “The only thing I know for sure right now is I want to be with you.”[br]
“Right now?” Tara asked, a gleam in her eye as she kissed Willow softly and led them to the bed.[br]
“Right now,” Willow whispered against Tara’s lips.[br][br][br][br]
One year later…[br][br]
“That’s the last of it,” Tara sighed, wiping the sweat from her brow with her forearm. She leaned over with her hands on her knees to catch her breath.[br]
The move to San Francisco had gone surprisingly well. They had found the apartment on a weekend trip down from Seattle. Willow had packed up and shipped all of her belongings a few weeks prior, then flown out to Chicago and together they’d driven the U-Haul loaded with Tara’s possessions to their new home.[br]
Craning her neck over the mountain of moving boxes, she finally spied a shock of red hair and quietly crept towards it. “Have you been setting up your computer all this time?”[br]
Green eyes popped up guiltily. “Err, no? I mean, well, yes you maybe made one or two more trips than me, but I just wanted to get the utilities set up for the shelter.”[br]
“Uh huh. One or two?”[br]
“I’ll make it up to you?” Willow suggested with a grin.[br]
“Yes you will,” Tara concurred, squeezing through two piles of boxes to embrace her girlfriend. “As soon as we take a shower and find some clothes in all this mess, you’re taking me out for dinner.”[br]
“Hmm,” Willow hummed against Tara’s neck. “You had me up ‘til the ‘finding clothes’ part.”[br]
Tara arched her neck to allow Willow’s lips free reign. “Well, we could always, ohh, order in?”[br]
Willow caught Tara’s lips and kissed her deeply. Both were breathing heavily when they finally withdrew.[br]
“I’ll get the phone,” Tara said, idly wondering if her shaky limbs were the result of exertion or Willow-kisses.[br]
“I’ll find a restaurant,” Willow offered, turning back to her computer.[br]
Tara retreated into the kitchen to retrieve her phone from her purse, pausing at a bundle of letters sitting atop one of the boxes in the hallway. She touched the top envelope and smiled, closing her eyes to whisper a silent prayer for those that were gone. It was coming up on a year, and she would have to remind Willow to buy the money orders.[br]
The previous year, they had agreed to make seven annual, anonymous donations:[br]
To the San Diego Alcoholism Treatment Center, in memory of Alexander Harris.[br]
To the Sunnydale Girls’ Empowerment Society, in memory of Buffy Summers.[br]
To the Boston Youth Outreach Program, in memory of Faith Johnson.[br]
To New York University, in memory of Cordelia Chase.[br]
To the Austin School of Music, in memory of Daniel Osbourne.[br]
To the Walter Jenkins Home for the Elderly, in memory of Anya Jenkins.[br]
To the Cedar Rapids Police Department Widows and Orphans Fund, in memory of Riley Finn.[br]
And while it would not bear their names, the memory of Dawn Hewitt and Rupert Giles was the impetus for the shelter for troubled teens Tara and Willow would be opening the following week. In the heady days of planning the shelter, both women had expressed a desire to make some good come of their experience on the Island of Death.[br]
As Tara looked across the room at Willow, she realized…something already had.[br][br][br]
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ETA: spooky 'the end'...thanks, Watty!
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Re: Island of Death

Postby PancakesinBellies » Wed Dec 06, 2006 7:52 pm

What a fantastic ending. *So* much better than And Then There Was One (after all, this one doesn't end with everyone dead but offers hope instead). Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I reread the story and was much less confused. This was great. I'm kind of sad its over. Awesome awesome story!
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Re: Island of Death

Postby diamondforever » Wed Dec 06, 2006 7:52 pm

That was a realistic ending, and I guess really the only feasible one that one could get out of a story where every other character died.

Since I owe a whole whallop of feedback as a result of finding this story pretty late, let me start off by saying that Agatha Christie's And Then There Were None is one of my favourites, and no matter how imminent the deaths would be, I am so glad that you were inspired to write this. The murders were true to their causes, and even with my prior knowledge of the outcome, I was still surprised enough to love it when Dawn was revealed to be the mastermind.

The writing was great and fit the emotions needed for each scene. I especially liked the ending. It's so easy to give in and write one of those "happy ending" sequences that you can find in all the most generic fanfiction. This gave it more of a real world feel.

Thanks for sticking through and finishing this story. It's a beautiful piece of writing that I thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing it, and I'm looking forward to more!
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Re: Island of Death

Postby Sandman78 » Thu Dec 07, 2006 12:56 am

Yeah, THE END, I'm kinda sad in a way...I looked foward to your updates...and now this will be my last feedback for this story. Thank you for a wonderful ending, Willow and Tara are happy together...as they should be. Hope to read more from you soon. :peace
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Re: Island of Death

Postby writerfreak » Thu Dec 07, 2006 8:26 am

The long awaited ending.......what to say.......I guess I'm speechless. No one else could have written that better. And when I think of something else to say and finally pick my jaw up off the floor I'll be back.

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Re: Island of Death

Postby taralicious » Fri Dec 08, 2006 12:12 am

Cam,
So The Island of Death has yielded all of its secrets and will speak no more.
From out of this evil, some greater good must come and it did in many a variation.
Willow and Tara survived and are living for each other and promising to make every moment they have together count since their experiences on the IOD taught them how fragile life can be.
The various charities and insitutions gained some much needed funding as a result of keeping the memories of the victims alive.
And the story ends on a note of unspoken Willow/Tara swooniness as Tara looks across the room at Willow and knows that even the most sinister and heinous of plans can yield a boon.
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Island of DEATH!

Postby EasierSaid » Fri Dec 08, 2006 1:40 pm

And so another excellent tarawhipped story comes to a close - great job, my friend! Color me suitably impressed with the nail-biting Dawn-rant and the one-year-later warm and fuzzies; both were eagerly anticipated and thoroughly enjoyed. You really wrapped this up beautifully. I really liked how you stuck to the genre and the core voice of each character throughout this story- you're above and beyond wonderful at that. Whether a WWII thriller, an Agatha Christie mystery or a rompin' rootin' tootin' western - you just nail it everytime, and that's... well that's talent right there. I just love that I know what Tara's like as a spy, Island-captive and old-timey barmaid; thank you for that.

And, while it's true that I'm sad, in some ways, that the Island of DEATH! has come to it's natural, blood-soaked and chilling conclusion, I'm very happy that you saw it through. I know it probably wasn't always easy, but you made it to the Watty-supplied The End retaining all the great 'googly moogly' vibes you started with, and really, what writer can ask for more? I guess in conclusion all I can really say is outstanding work, as always, and Bravo!!! (Well, outstanding work, as always, Bravo, and more of this great writing in a different genre, please!)
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Re: Island of Death

Postby sacinema » Sat Dec 09, 2006 12:53 am

Finaly the story came to an end. Thanks for sharing this brillant piece of fic with us. I really feared for our heroines. Only the knowledge of the board rules helped me getting through it. Thank the board spirits for the rule that the girls can't die here. So it's like watching a TV-Show: You fear for the main character - if it's well done - but you know they will always come through.

Never imagined it could be Dawn. She was wonderful as a crazy killer. But the best were our two girls. Smart and sexy. And it's so like them to make donations in the end. Did I ever mention I loved the sex scene between them? So daring and so vulnerable at the same time.

Keep on writing if you find the time to surprise us with something new.
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Re: Island of Death

Postby Kaia » Sat Dec 09, 2006 5:23 pm

Oh, man. I can't believe you made them stay at the Crown Plaza! I drive by it every day on my way to work. Had I known, I would have paid them a visit... :grin Wait, there are FBI quarters here? I don't doubt it...you have to see the size of the US Embassy here and the amount of people guarding it...

Fantastic ending. The hairs on my forearms are still standing. And I'm glad that they made it work in the end. The donations were a sweet detail and in all, IoD is an awesome story. Thanks for sharing it.

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Re: Island of Death

Postby Still Waters T » Sat Dec 16, 2006 4:57 am

I forgot to leave feedback before now... :blush

That "large amount of evidence" Dawn supposedly had was really...well, with an "I did it" letter, it sounded like something a teenager would come up with. :p Though you gotta admire Dawn for her determination to see things through, and the planning behind it. Nice touch with the survivor's guilt Willow went through, and the Keanu Reeves movie relationship tip. :laugh Haha, I think I would've set up my computer first too, like Willow did during the move! :laugh And awww, Willow and Tara are so caring in making those donations. It sounds like something they would do. Really nice. :)

I was both happy and sad to read the last chapter. I cannot believe Island of Death has really ended. It feels almost like an era has passed. More than 2 years of reading this fic, and hoping for updates to it - it feels a little strange to know that it's finished and that there won't be any more updates for us. :spin

Thank you for giving us 2 exciting years reading this fic, Cam. :) :clap

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Re: Island of Death

Postby watty » Sun Dec 17, 2006 8:18 am

I still have this impression of reading a chapter where they fly off the island in a police helicopter. May be I'm delusional, since I'm all drugged up this weekend. Yay that Willow and Tara thwarted Dawn's twisted evil plans. I'm not sorry that Tara shot her, she was responsible for the deaths of a group of people who don't deserve to die. Sigh, this was a great story, Cam, had me on the virtual edge of my seat throughout the story but not over the top with too much drama. It is a testament of the writing quality that even with the coughlargegapscough at times, it was easy as pie to pick up whenever you got off your butt to update. Heehee, I'm kidding about the butt!!!! :P

Nice epilogue. Moving on but still remembering, great that they made the donations in the name of the victims, very thoughtful and touching. I did chuckle at their moving to SF. Is it true that in order for long distance relationships to work, it's better if both parties moved? Heh, don't answer that, rhetorical question.

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Re: Island of Death

Postby pipsberg » Tue Dec 19, 2006 5:49 pm

Well darn, you made me delurk to leave you feedback. You are so tricky! Sorry for missing a few parts here and there, but I came back for the wonderful end.

I was equal parts excited and sad when I heard from a little birdy that there was an 'Island of Death' update. Excited... well that's clearly because I had some Cam fiction to look forward to and I love me some creepy death and Willow/Tara loving. Sad because I know it's the end :(

This was a great finish to a very exciting story. Thanks for the thrill ride. I was pretty suprised that it was Dawnie. The funny thing is that I can imagine her being a bit evil, a la season six Willow on dark magics. However, you took it way further and it was muhahahaha evil ;) And like the softie that I am, I loved the happy ending. Thanks buddy!

peace!
-pipsberg

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