New fic: Hunger (NC-17)

[Tulipp]

Both parts were wonderful; I really liked the way that thoughts about hunger and nourishment and sustenance wove through both parts, and I really liked that in re-telling through Willow's perspective, you added more and went on, so that the scene grew through this added perspective.



And I have to say, in both versions, my favorite detail was Willow unbuttoning her blouse. It just...wow. Maybe there's a subtle thing about feeding in that, too, but I just loved that.

[funkyasian]

- great part 2



steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[iceprincess2076]

I cant believe I missed this part. oooh I hate travelling!







Nika, I this fic!!!!!!!!!!!



Call me greedy but I would LOVE a thrid helping...um...part yeah thats it a third part. I'm not above begging either.



more please.



ICE

[nika]

Hello kittens. Well I guess I've learned what I have to write if I want many replies (I'm a feedback junkie)Smut!

Yup we're all true smuttens. Thank you for all the wonderful feedback.



Pacou: Giles? Dear Lord!



Xita: Eventually, cause you I couldn't very well let the girl starve, now could I?



Tulipp: Tulip, one of my favorite flowers. Thank you. I think I'll use your words 'sustenance' and 'nourishment'

in the next part.



Funkyasian: As always thank you for falling for my fic.



Iceprincess: I can't seem to say no to someone with the title "princess" part 3 is in the works, it should be up after I update 'this little wiccan'

[nika]

So I hope I'm not being repetitive and you all like it.

Thank you all for the positive feedback.



Hunger 3





I can taste my self on your lips and the humming in my abdomen begins to burn.

You’re overdressed and I’m under-nourished I need the milky honey of your contractions to be my sustenance.



This table suddenly seems like an inappropriate place to continue this feast. I slide off the table and you look at me with quizzical eyes. I tell you to follow me with my gaze.

We’re mostly quiet because all our senses are focused on one task: satiating our tangible desire.



I lead the way to the training room holding your hand lightly. I can hardly wait to unwrap you, like opening a box of candy, cherry filled candies. You stand looking at my naked form with want still present in your emerald eyes. I’m the hunter again or maybe a beast, who wants to claw at your skin. Now I’m the one who’s circling you, deciding where to start.



I bend down to unlace your boots and you step out of them in a hurry. I look up and smile, my-my aren’t you the eager one? I run my hands over your jeans, up your legs. My hands drift over your covered center and I find wetness there in spite of the heavy material. I’m achingly aware of my own wetness as I find yours. You groan and push your body into mine. “ Tara…yesss” You hiss out. I still my hand movements to unbutton and unzip your pants. You help me pull them down as I take little taste of your mouth. Your blouse is next, I pull it over your head non too gently. I’m afraid I’m growing impatient with my own game. Sometimes it’s hard to take the time to savor a meal properly, lack of time or abundance of hunger can make it nearly impossible. I nearly tear off the remaining barriers of clothing off your body. The sight of your milky white skin makes me ravenous. My mouth is watering. I pull you to me in a heated, almost forceful kiss, fondling your creamy breasts making you moan into my mouth. I feel that your knees are beginning to buckle, you need extra support. I take you towards the training horse, without relinquishing control of your mouth.



I whisper in your ear to turn around, you comply willingly. I think you understand. I’m running my hands all over your heated flesh from behind. I knead your breasts and tease the nipples into diamond hard peaks, you push your buttocks into me, I press my warm center into you. You cultch at the horse and throw your head back, the sounds escaping your mouth urge me to move on.



I leave one hand holding your waist firmly, while the other travels up and down the back of your thighs and ass cheeks. You spread your legs further apart and the smell of your arousal reaches me, making me want to bite down on your flesh and devour it whole.



I run the tip of my index finger lightly over the edges of your slick folds. Mhhmm honey…sticky…sweet honey. I taste you and a jolt of blue energy shoots up my spine. I lick my fingers clean before returning it to the source of such a delicacy. I tease the opening just a little, running the tip up and down and tracing little circles. You beg me “Pleease….mhhgg…” You’re right, enough is enough. I withdraw and you groan in frustration, but that only last a second. I enter you again with two fingers, this time fully.

You moan again “Goddesss…yessss….mmmhhh.”



We begin a steady rocking rhythm, that escalates rapidly. We’re breathing hard, nearly panting. Your muscles are straining and almost shaking as are mine. I urge you on with my voice as move in and out of you. “That’s good baby…come for me.” “So wet sooo…hot!”

You push yourself harder against me your groans and mine are beginning to sound like growls, purring and howling. Hunger is primal need after all. “What baby? You want it harder? Mhhhm…you…want it faster?”



“Y-y-esss...” You nearly scream out in a shaky voice. I comply and in a matter of seconds I can feel your inside walls contract around my fingers. Your body shakes and I feel a creamy liquid pouring out, coating my digits. You look like you’re able to stand any longer.

I help you to the floor where we lye down and embrace. I look at my fingers still wet with your essence and take them to my mouth. Mhhmm… luscious! This is a full meal, plus dessert. It’s sweet and tangy like and exotic fruit whose taste you can’t quite describe.



You’re lying cuddled up to my chest still caught up in the afterglow. I kiss your forehead and notice the time on the wall clock; we’ve moved past lunch time, as matter of fact, it’s dinner time.

[iceprincess2076]

I.......uh......er......um......WOW!!!!!!!



Hungry Tara very very good. Hungry Willow very very good. Hungry Willow and Tara EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!



LOVE this fic!!!! A little harmless smut never hurt anyone.



Sooo, Nika...........what's for dinner?



MORE SOON PLEASE



ICE

[MadeinNZ]

OMG. Breathing definitely becoming an issue.



Your writing style is so descriptive - its amazing. You felt like you were part of it. I love the way that Tara started off wanting to go slow but couldn't quite sustain it.



I don't care whether its this story or another but - please write more for us.

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Buffy: I'd like to find Willow and Xander
Joyce: Will you be slaying?
Buffy: Only if they give me lip

[MissQuirky]

*gulp* This fic is...WOWZER!! My God I need a cold after reading that! Need more soon!

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

[tiredsoul]

Wow, I don't think I'll be able to look at that training horse in quite the same way again. Great job.



--celia

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"That was just rude. Now I forget what I was saying."

[pacou]

Wow, that... was... just... great!

Sorry, need to find my breath again.



So, no Giles, but another feast! That is even better



Thank you, that was gorgeous!

Cant wait for dinnter time



-Viv-

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Don't dream it, be it

Rocky Horror Picture Show

[nika]

Iceprincess: Well you know, eating alone is never fun.



Madeinnz: Thanks, I do seem to be full of smu…inspiration lately. So ya never know. Meals can consist of five courses.



Missquirky: Showers are good. Need help scrubbing your back?



Tiredsoul: Willow’s gotta learn that horses can be fun.



Pacou: That big lunch wasn’t enough for you?

[the vamp nurd]

"I'm still on the carpet, I've got rug burns and mouth full of nothingness."

[nika]

Vamp nurd, you o.k down there buddy? >I hope vn has his kitten emporium helmet on<

[d6wnc]

More, More, More smut please

[funkyasian]

hmmm...i believe i forgot to breathe through out the update...no wonder i feel just a bit lightheaded...



steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[MissQuirky]

Quote:

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Missquirky: Showers are good. Need help scrubbing your back?

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Showers are very good! And I can alwayz use a lil help w/ the back scrubbing!

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

[nika]

d6wnc: O.k. More >pardon the pun< 'coming soon.'



Funkyasian: Don't pass out or you'll miss out.



Missquirky: Yeah and don't forget all those other hard to reach places. By that I mean your toes, no really that's what I meant.

[MissQuirky]

I'm sure thats whatcha meant, ya right! Toes can be hard tho!

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

[Ittybittykitty]

NIKA! I just caught up...I do not mind your sass...it's just that certain indivuduals sassiness get's me in the mood to go and take very cold showers *winks at Lee*, and certain fics as well. (This would be one of them) I suddenly have the urge to go and eat soemthing...heh heh heh.







(You get six thuds because right now I'm really really really REALLY kinda horny. hahahaha)

Shameless plug- Read my fic 7th Hellvan. It isn't half bad:)! "Innerbed".

[vmpIrslAr]

uhmmmm....starving right now...god I need to find a girlfriend...soon...NOW!

VmpIrslAr out.



"she's my everything."

[the vamp nurd]

fine.

I like the carpet, it's so much better than a wooden floor.

Quote:

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>I hope vn has his kitten emporium helmet on<

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If you're talking to me I ain't no 'his' check the profile 20yo F UK. Although there was once a cricketer called Rachael [my real name]

Edited by: the vamp nurd at: 9/10/02 2:51:37 am

[pacou]

Quote:

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That big lunch wasn’t enough for you?

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Well, not really, I like feasts and I dont deny it

And as you said yourself, meals can consist of five courses



-Viv-

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Don't dream it, be it

Rocky Horror Picture Show

[Tulipp]

Wow, you weren't kidding, you really DID use "nourishment" and "sustenance."



I loved this:

Quote:

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You’re overdressed and I’m under-nourished

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What a great contrast. I love, love sentences like that.



And I love the idea of a full meal.

[xita]

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[kymmie118]

wow now that's a hot fanfic if I ever heard one. .If they were all that good we'd be in trouble

[imlafn]

YUMMY!!!!!!!!

[Oracle Of Magic]

Oh wow that was amazing, so very sexy. I loved the POV change. It made it that much more erotic.

[warriorlove]

what a hot fic

[sethanon]