Ocean Dreams

[wimpy0729]

Great job!



Totally loved the Brady Bunch reference. LMAO Greg wearing the "lucky charm", which wasn't. God, I can't believe I actually remember that.



So, more lessons soon please? That was just a taste of more yumminess to come, right?



Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

[ambersagoddess]

I could see buffy doing that.



Lol



and willow brady bunch referance, so cute!



and trying to cover it up, awww.



I remember that episode, with the tarantula, and the statue named oscar, (I think that was it's name)



Anyway, very cute!



Can't wait for more



-Rei

"I am vindicated, I am selfish I am wrong, I am right I swear I'm right I swear I knew it all along. And I am flawed but I am cleaning up so well, I am seeing in me now the things you swore you saw yourself so clear." -Dashboard Confessional

[tarawhipped]

Excellent update, WTF, even if Willow's too big a chicken to get on a board. If Tara would just whip out that other tattoo, I'm sure she could have Willow doing pretty much whatever she wanted.



And what's with Willow feeling guilty for watching the Brady Bunch? Who didn't grow up on that crap? I know I did, and I'm not ashamed to admit it!



Moremoremore!

-Cameron

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What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

[VixenyTarasHot]

Dude Brady Bunch ruled!! <-- Note the past tense haha



Ok on to the updatey goodness! Yay for Willow actually getting into the water. And I can see her being all excited for being able to get over the wave Gotta love the enthusiasm. I still want her to get on a surfboard and do well for Tara, cuz then they can go out and be surfing a lot and be alone at sunset, all sitting/laying on their surfboards in the water.. oook *shakes head to clear daydream*



What was I saying? Oh how I loved the update and can't wait for more! Whoot!



Later

Ashleigh

"...A-and I'm gonna make it up to you. Starting right now."

(Starts to smile)"Right now?"

[numbered words]

Very cute update. Cuteness from the Willow for never having been in the ocean.



I'm still iffy about the surfing lessons. Mostly 'cause I'm scared to do it myself even if I do happen to have a gorgeous blonde of my own to help me along.





-Kristyn

[Artemis]

Aww, first time jumping a wave - so cute Ominous Brady Bunch flashbacks notwithstanding, I bet it won't be too long before Willow's tempted to let Tara take her back into her beloved ocean for a bit of frolicking. And that mystery third tattoo... hmm, some tattoo artist was a lucky girl



I bet Faith's impressed by Buffy's head-on attitude to tackling surfing, even if she did end up head-on tackling the water as well.

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

[sam darls]

Aww, so cute and the brady bunch reference . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

[Irishgrl3]

A water fight with four women... sweet! I am curious as well where that 3rd tattoo might be and look forward to that revealage in more ways than one. Hee-hee. Great update!

[Drumbly]

wow haha



first of all, how did i miss this update i was like ; ...wut the crap yo ..lol ...and well second this reminds me of the movie Blue Crush which is TOTALLY AWSOME! ...(both the movie and your fic) oh man...Tara's third tattoo? hmm haaha I SURE wanna see that lol wicked.



Cant wait for more,



Love : Jesse/Drumbly

"...I'm multi-talented, cause i can talk and piss you off at the same time... "

[amazonaa]

This is great. Very cute.





More soon, please.





brittney







"Arn't you going to tell me to 'break a leg'?"

"Break 'em both." Amber Benson as Cheyenne in The Crush

[bindingwiccan]

i also love the tara/faith best friend idea. this is a wonderful fic. looove it. keep up the good work





-Kelsey

[WTF]

Hey all...thanks so much for the feedback! Todays gonna be really busy for me so I will try to have an update by tonight but if I don't get a chance...for sure tomorrow. And no worries...the surf lessons will happen, not in the next update cause well..more "important" things happen then.







-WTF?!-

[willlovestara]

Woohoo! Can't wait for the update! I'm waiting patiently! Ok I'm not! Update please? Hannah

Edited by: willlovestara at: 8/31/04 12:47 pm

[LunaMuses]

heyyy sorry I haven't replied lately. I've been a bad kitten



great updates tho

keep it up! ^^

"I was disappointed. I had thought I would have some revelation of specific evil. I wondered if all women did with other women was lie and hug."
The Bell Jar - Sylvia Plath

[Tibbs]

Who wants to see Tara's other tattoo...



< waves hands in a frenzied fashon> I DO I DO!!



Tibbs

[WTF]

Ocean Dreams

Rated NC-17

Disclaimer: Characters belong to Joss.













It was 7:00 in the morning, Tara had been up for about an hour. She couldn't sleep due to a certain redhead that had invaded her mind. After browsing the internet for about an hour she decided to go and wake the redhead. She wanted it to be a surprise and she didn't want to wake anyone else in the house so she went to where she knew Willow's window was. She pushed up on it, smiling when it opened. She quietly climbed inside and sat next to the redheads bed. It took a lot of work but she managed to not laugh at the sight. The redhead was an active sleeper apparently, her white sheet was twisted around her with her legs and feet exposed. There was a blanket that was mostly on the floor, and to top it off she was snuggling a big brown teddy bear. Tara moved to her knees beside the bed, she pushed the red hair to the side to get a better view of the beatiful face underneath. She placed a small kiss on the girls cheek smiling when she stirred.



Willow opened her eyes slowly, she saw Tara looking at her. "Hey, what are you doing here?" She asked in her sleepy voice.



"Should I be jealous?" The blonde asked looking at the bear.



"Huh?" Willow asked before realizing what the blonde was talking about. Her face turned red as she threw the bear across the room. "Where did that thing come from? Must be one of Buffy's jokes." She laughed nervously, not wanting the blonde to think she was a dork.



"Uh huh...too bad, I thought it was cute." Tara said moving to pick it up. "Here, don't worry, I still like you." She gave the bear to Willow then took a seat next to her on the bed. "You can be who you are around me you know. I like you for you, teddy bear or not...I think you're amazing." She said taking Willow's hand in hers. "I want to know the real Willow, what you think and feel, just..everything."



The redhead smiled trying to keep the tears from falling. "You do? The real Willow is a nerd." She said looking down to avoid eye contact with Tara.



"You don't look like a nerd to me."



"I've changed the way I dress, I'm still a nerd though." She said still not looking at the blonde.



"You're not a nerd, you're Willow. A sexy redhead that happens to be smart and have the cutest child-like qualities I have ever seen, who wouldn't want that? If anything, I should be wondering why you want me." She said satisfied when the redhead finally looked up.



"What? Who wouldn't want you...look at you! You're a sexy blonde surfer with tattoo's, I see the guys and girls around here checking you out. And you're sweet, smart, funny, the best catch on the beach!" Willow stated proudly.



"You see....that's what I think about you. And I love you..every part of you." The blonde said touching Willow's cheek.



"You..you love me?" Willow asked not believing what she heard.



"Yes, I do." She said looking straight into the redhead's eyes.



Willow smiled as a tear fell down her cheek. "I love you too Tara." She smiled leaning in to kiss her love.



Knock Knock



Both girls stopped and looked at the door. "In a minute!" They both yelled.



"Well excuse me!" They heard Buffy say through the door.



They looked at each other and laughed before resuming their positions. Finally they kissed, both feeling their love for the other emerge. Tara tickled the redhead's lips with her tongue telling her she wanted more. Willow granted the blonde access, their passion was released in the kiss. Tongues dancing, dualing, loving, like never before. The kiss ended leaving each girl breathless.



"....um...dizzy.." Willow said still trying to get control of herself.



"Yeah.." Tara agreed.



"But it's a good dizzy...so ..um..more?"



Tara grinned before leaning in once more to kiss the redhead. This time she slowly pushed Willow back till she was laying on top of her. She couldn't control her want or need any longer, she had to have all of her love. Their tongues continued to dance as she moved her hand to Willow's stomach, lifting her shirt a little, she carressed the redhead's skin. "Off?" Tara mumbled through kisses.



"Oh yes." Willow groaned while sitting up and removing her top.



"Damn..I didn't think it was possible." Tara said.



"What...possible?" The redhead asked.



"You getting hotter...I didn't think it was possible, I was so wrong." She said, her eyes turning a darker blue. "I want you so bad Willow."



"Then take me." Willow said anxiously.



"Yes ma'am." The blonde said as she pushed the girl back onto the bed once more. This time nothing was in the way, her hand easily found the warm skin. She slowly made her way up the freckled skin, stopping right beneath the breast. She traced her finger along the curve at the bottom of the breast then moved it around until she was tracing the whole breast, but still not touching it.



"Tara..please...touch it...it needs you." The redhead said getting impatient.



The blonde smiled as she finally took hold of the breast putting the nipple between her index finger and thumb. She gently rolled it in her fingers before she suddenly squeezed it with enough pressure to make the redhead whimper. Smiling she put her tongue to the other nipple barely grazing it, causing Willow to arch her back.



"You're so evil Tara!"



"I know.." The blonde smiled evily. Suddenly she got up and stood beside the bed.



"What are you doing?!" The redhead asked bewildered.



"I decided not to make love to you till I have these off." Tara said looking down at her clothes.



"Oh...yeah..good idea." The redhead said sitting up to get a good view. She payed very close attention as the blonde removed her shirt and bikini top. She swallowed when she saw that even the blondes breasts were tan. "Tanning bed?" She asked.



The blonde half smiled at Willow. "No...never been to one."



"Oh.." Willow said her eyebrows practically on her head. The aching in between her legs was becoming very painful.



The blonde looked down and slowly pulled the string to her shorts bufore pushing them off.



"Oh my" The redhead rasped seeing no panties or bikini bottoms underneath. She did see what she had been very curious about though. "Oh my" She said again, this time under her breath. On the front of Tara's hip was a tattoo of a redhead putting a cherrie into her mouth.



Tara smiled knowingly. "I have a thing for redheads...mostly just one though." She walked over to the bed and resumed her former position on top of the redhead. This time the first thing she did was put her hand between Willow's legs. "Mmmm..you're so wet, just how I hoped."



Willow pushed her hips into the blondes hand wishing for more. Her wish was granted as she felt two fingers slide into her. She started pushing more...needing more. The blonde could sense her need and put another finger in moving them slowly in and out while her thumb gently carressed the redhead's clit.



"Ohhhhhh Taraaaa" Willow moaned. "Harder baby.....ohhhhhh...make me cum..." She pleaded.



The blonde started moving faster and harder as she took a nipple in her mouth and started sucking not so gently. "Cum for me Willow." She whispered huskily, still pumping her fingers hard in and out of the redhead.



"Ohhhhhhh...yeeessssss....don't stoppp!" The redhead yelled, nearing her orgasm.



Tara obliged, her own wetness and need making her work even harder. She felt the redhead's legs trembling and the fingernails practically in her back before hearing the other girl scream. She smiled as the wet warmth gushed onto and down her hand. "Mmmmm...my Willow treat." She winked and kissed the redhead.



"Yes...yours...all yours." Willow said as she pushed back a strand of Tara's hair.





-WTF?!-

[VixenyTarasHot]

I uhh.. oh good lord its hot in here.. very nice update.. all with the sweetness and love in the beginning and oh so hotness at the end.. umm yeah, nice tattoo too



So you always leave me waiting for more, no doubt, and you never fail at giving a great update!



Till next time

Ashleigh

"...A-and I'm gonna make it up to you. Starting right now."

(Starts to smile)"Right now?"

[ambersagoddess]

Just kidding, as a rule, I don't blush.



Very nice update though...not that I read smut...



BUT IF I DID.



(and if you read the Sex Journals or Fulfilling Fantasies, you know this game.)



I would have greatly enjoyed it.



And would want more.



Nice tattoo, might get me one like that Just for the sake of having it.



-Rei

"I am vindicated, I am selfish I am wrong, I am right I swear I'm right I swear I knew it all along. And I am flawed but I am cleaning up so well, I am seeing in me now the things you swore you saw yourself so clear." -Dashboard Confessional

[Spikeizmine87]

that....was...jeez...yeah it IS very hot in here...ahem....niiiiccee update! i think willow should lick taras tat...such a suggestion that was very wonderfull and i enjoyed it muchly!

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

[numbered words]

So I..uh...*pulls at collar*...it's just a smidge hot in here, don't you think?



I..wow.







-Kristyn

[LunaMuses]

hehehe



me likes. hehe. more soon?

"I was disappointed. I had thought I would have some revelation of specific evil. I wondered if all women did with other women was lie and hug."
The Bell Jar - Sylvia Plath

[wimpy0729]

Okay...fan in one hand...ice water in the other...still not helping.



Man, was that HOT!



I thought Tara sneaking in was cool, and finding Willow like that was so cute.



Then on to the mucho hotness.



Oh yeah, I'm enjoying visualizing Tara's tat. Mmmmm...tasty.



More soon, very soon please!



Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

[lil wiccan]

holy... ... i just found this fic... and that was just... .... MORE

"How can i/ Beleive that my heart will find/ Someone like you/ You see the really me/ No in betweens/ I had nowhere to hide/ You took away the walls around me/ Make me feel safe to share my truth/ I see the heavens open/ A heart that once was broken/ It's holding nothing back/ Now that i found you

[LizPuRR]

hotness



must have some more of that!!! please

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i'm hot homeboy, never get it twisted!!

[Artemis]

Willow with a teddy bear, that's so adorable And lovely that Tara appreciates it.



Nice tattoo, and quite prescient - is Willow's new nickname going to be 'Cherry'?



And I'm wondering... the walls of this beachfront bungalow-type residence probably aren't too thick, are they? Like, soundproofing a very vocal Willow thick - she's gonna go redder than her hair when she walks out into the living room to find Buffy and Xander snickering

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

[willowhanded]

-dosen't even think about what may happen when the two weeks are up, or if the writer even knows. thinks they should all stay.-



-pouts.- there's no more to read .. so get with the more .. cause .. cause, i wuv you?



-whimpers for another update.-



-kristi

[WTF]

Ocean Dreams

Disclaimer: Characters belong to Joss.

Note: Sorry it's been so long since my last post, I was sick but I'm better now so yay! Thank you for the feedback everyone.









"It sure is hot today, I'm gonna look like a very ripe tomato." The blonde said putting more suntan lotion on.



The brunette licked her lips at the sight of Buffy rubbing her body down. She stood from her spot on the towel and picked up the lotion. "Want some help?" She asked already putting the lotion in her hand.



Buffy cleared her throat and adjusted her sun glasses. "Sure," She squeaked out and rolled over for Faith to do her back.



Faith put the hand with lotion on the blondes back, she smiled when she felt her tense from the coolness of it. She massaged the substance over the other girls back, enjoying every second of it. She paused coming to the black string that was tied across the blonde's back. She slowly lifted the strap and began rubbing that area as well.



Buffy had never felt so relaxed in all her life. She took a deep breath when she felt the girl lift her strap and message the area oh so nicely. She sighed feeling hands leave her back leaving her wanting more..more hands. Suddenly she felt said hands on her calves, she smiled and relaxed once again. She was glad she chose to lay out on the back deck where it was not so crowded. She saw a shadow cover her and frowned as she rolled over to see what was going on.



"Where is she?" An angry sounding voice said.



Faith turned around, "None of your business," she said giving the newcomer a mean look.



"Is she in there?" She pointed to Buffy's rental house. "I already checked her house and she's not out surfing." The girl said pushing a strand of auburn hair behind her ear.



"It's none of your business I said. Why don't you just go away and leave her alone?" Faith almost yelled.



The girl glanced at Buffy with a raised eyebrow. "Is this your new bitch of the week?"



"That's it, you leave now or you leave with a black and blue face!" The brunette said clinching her fists.



"Fine, but this isn't over, I want to talk to Tara and I will!" The girl said before storming off.



"What was that all about?" The blonde asked worried.



"Tara's ex, basically Tara didn't want her anymore and Emma, the girl, won't leave her alone." Faith said resuming her earlier position on her own towel. She carried a sad expression on her face as she looked at Buffy. "Look, I'm sorry....about what she said...."



Buffy cut her off. "No, it's okay, I know her type, don't worry about it."



Faith smiled as she leaned in and gave the blonde a gentle kiss on the lips.

____________________________________________________



"Mmmmm....can we do this every morning," The redhead looked at the clock. "Um...or afternoon rather?" She smiled sheepishly.



"I think that sounds like a great plan." The blonde smiled and kissed her lover tenderly. "How about some surfing?"



"Oh...now? Um....s-sure," Willow gulped knowing she had to do it at some point.



The two girls scrambled around the room locating their clothes then went outside. They stopped when they saw their friends kissing. "Awwwwwwww" The both said at once.



Faith looked up. "Yeah yeah, and what have you two been doing in there?" She eyed them with raised eyebrows. "Either of you sore or limping?" She teased.



Willow ducked her head blushing while Tara looked the brunette dead in the eyes. " No! But from the looks of it you'll be tomorrow." She smiled in victory at a speechless Faith and a blushing Buffy. "I'm gonna go get changed, be back in a few okay?" She said turning to the redhead.



"Okay, I'm gonna go back in and do the same." She grinned giving the blonde a quick kiss on the cheek before going back inside.



Tara smiled at her lover and turned to see Faith watching the redhead walk.



"She's not limping...your turn....walk."



Instead of commenting, the blonde just turned and walked away, stunning both the other blonde and brunette with her "sexy walk".



The brunette cleared her throat. "Well she's not limping."

____________________________________________________



A few minutes later all the girls were once again gathered on the deck. They all decided to go down to the beach together. Tara dropped the board on the sand and motioned for the redhead to join her. "I wanted to show you how to stand on the board," She said seriously. Taking Willow's hand she guided her to where she wanted her to stand. Once in position the blonde then took hold of Willow's ankles, gently pushing them apart to where they needed to be. The blonde smiled as she looked up to see that her head was merely an inch from her lover's crotch. She stood up and placed her hands on each side of the other girl's waist, pulling her back to where her butt was sticking out a little. "Ok, bend your knees a bit," Once the redhead did what she said she continued. "Ok good, the key to surfing is balance. Raise your arms out to the side, this helps the whole balance thing." She saw the redhead paying close attention and smiled. She loved how into things Willow could be. "When you're on a wave you have to kinda steer the board, you use your body to do that, but the first thing is to balance yourself and the rest will sort of follow, you know?"



Willow nodded soaking in every bit of information that the blonde said.



"Any questions?" Tara asked.

The redhead shook her head no, truth was she had tons but didn't want to seem like a moron so she kept them to herself.



"You haven't said anything at all Willow, are you okay?" Tara said with a worried expression.



"Oh...I'm fine...just you know, nervous." She admitted.



"Awwww baby, it'll be okay," The blonde gave her love a reassuring hug. "The waves aren't very big today and the crowd has died down, I'll be right there the whole time, I promise." She finished kissing Willow's forehead.



The redhead started to feel more relaxed and gave Tara a beautiful smile. "Lets do it."



The blonde looked like a deer caught in the headlights. "Right here?"



The redhead laughed, "I meant surfing."



"Oh..um...okay." The blonde said while trying to keep her blush from surfacing.



Both grabbing their boards, they walked to the water. Once in deep enough Tara sat upright on her board, Willow followed suit. The blonde explained how to paddle to the shore when a good wave came and how to stand up on the board. She noticed a good sized wave coming, well, good size for the redhead. "Ok, this is one coming now, I'm gonna follow right behind you on my board." She motioned for the redhead to start paddling. She paddled at the same speed as Willow to make sure she was right there with her. Both girls stood up, the blonde smiling when her love stood without falling. Willow was in awe of the feeling she had once she was standing. "I did it!" She excitedly yelled back at the blonde. The redhead made a face when she realized she was beginning to fall. She looked back at the blonde, fear written all over her face.



Tara saw Willow falling and she jumped off the board towards the redhead. Luckily she jumped so close that she grabbed the other girl as soon as she fell into the water. She pulled her up to the surface, "You okay baby?"



It took Willow a minute to realize what was happening. "Oh, yeah...did you see? I was surfing girl!" She beamed.



"Yeah I did see, you're a pro." Tara laughed and gave the redhead a big hug.



"What was that for?"



"For being you....and I am proud, you did great." The blonde said giving the girl another hug.



"Yeah right...probably not as good as a lot of newbies." The redhead pouted, trying to stop grinning.



"Actually better, some can't even stand up the first time."



The girls heard yelling and looked to the shore. "Go Willow!" Both the Faith and Buffy yelled after seeing how good the redhead did. Willow's smile was huge, her tongue peeking out through her teeth. Tara's smile was almost as big, seeing Willow this happy made her heart swell. She put her arm around the redhead's waist, pulling her close and planted her lips on Willow's.









-WTF?!-

[VixenyTarasHot]

Oh jeez.. Oh jeez.... what a great update dude!! You got the gist of how to teach surfin down pretty well! I must say I'm proud lol. I dunno if I like the sounds of this ex bitch.... I think she'll be the trouble of the story, cuz you know.. nothing can just be all grand these days..



Well I always love what you do with this story and you know I can't wait for more!



Lata

Ashleigh

"...A-and I'm gonna make it up to you. Starting right now."

(Starts to smile)"Right now?"

[wimpy0729]

Oh Yay!



I've been waiting for you to update! Great job. And Willow up the first time, with Tara being so proud! I could just see it. Okay, she might be limping now after some more surf lessons or other...um...stuff.



Oh yeah, don't like Tara's ex.



Great job.



More soon please!



Wimpy

[ambersagoddess]

LETS DO IT!



Lol. I was thinking the same thing as Tara



I'm so bad.



-Rei

"I am vindicated, I am selfish I am wrong, I am right I swear I'm right I swear I knew it all along. And I am flawed but I am cleaning up so well, I am seeing in me now the things you swore you saw yourself so clear." -Dashboard Confessional