Skip to content


Sodas and Snack Machines

Author Index - N-Z.
This is a forum for Willow and Tara Fan Fiction that is Complete. Please read the content advisories on individual stories, read at your own discretion. You CAN leave feedback!

Re: Update

Postby sam darls » Tue Jun 08, 2004 1:45 am

Awww..that was so frigging cute..hehe.. I loved it :bounce . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Update

Postby tinnakaren » Tue Jun 08, 2004 3:32 am

Hey Yvonne,



I believe the consensus for this update was 'whoa! serious cuteness alert' :) But while it was, yes, adorably cute, it was also well written, descriptive and ingenious. In other words, awesome.



Thank you!

--------------------------

Tinna Karen

-tölvunörd í fyrsta ættlið

tinnakaren
 


Re: Update

Postby her BRIGHTeyes » Tue Jun 08, 2004 11:19 am

I'm with ^^^ you ^^^ that chapter was unbelievably cute, like beyond the cuteness factor, and left me craving for animal crackers!! dammit, now I have to go and get some animal crackers. ;) update soonish? with some kissage maybe?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

she had eyes bright enough to burn me --conor oberst

her BRIGHTeyes
 


Re: Update

Postby littlecrazy80 » Tue Jun 08, 2004 1:14 pm

That update was cute. :heart



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ Amber Board

littlecrazy80
 


Re: Update

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Jun 08, 2004 7:23 pm

That was definitely high on the cute-meter. Now I too am lusting after animal crackers.



Loved the Uno game -- Willow trying to cheat is too funny. Perhaps some alcohol could be involved and there could be Strip Uno? Though I'm probably not the first to suggest that, or at least think it. Maybe Willow brought Twister? :D



More soon please!



Wimpy

wimpy0729
 


Re: Update

Postby SJ » Wed Jun 09, 2004 1:02 am

Very cute updates :read

SJ
 


Re: Update

Postby soluna350 » Fri Jun 11, 2004 4:13 pm

:bounce finally caught up. This story is sooo :heart . update please!



:geek

soluna350
 


Re: Update

Postby Shy One » Fri Jun 11, 2004 6:36 pm

I will never look at animal crackers the same way again!! :lmao

I gotta say I'm lovin' this story! :applause

It's very cute....and sweet.

Can't wait for more!



Shy One

:shy

Shy One
 


Re: Update

Postby onyxsundrops » Fri Jun 11, 2004 6:51 pm

Note: Thanks a lot for the feedback. I never thought that animal crackers would warrant such a response, but it’s appreciated.

Note2: Undenied by Portishead.



Part Eight



****



“So, what do you want to do now?” Willow crawled across the bed to sit closer to her friend. The rain had lessened to a steady dribble, but the hours continued to go by unbelievably slow. “We could play Uno again,” the redhead shrugged, playing with the deck of cards.



“I can only take so much,” Tara shook her head. The girls had played four, unnaturally long, games of Uno back to back and called it quits when fingers and toes became too tingly and numb.



“Was there s-something you wanted to do?” The blonde asked, emptied of ideas but not wanting Willow to leave. At the moment, she would do just about anything as long as it meant that the redhead would be staying with her.



“I don’t know,” Willow glanced around the room, “they should really put better radios in these rooms.” Her gaze moved to the television and she shook her head before Tara could ask. “I checked this morning and all they have is three stations of local news.”



“I have a CD player,” Tara reached over the side of the bed, frowning as she retrieved her bag. “Oh, b-but it’s portable.” She pulled the silver disc player from her bag.



“Well,” Willow looked down into the blonde’s lap, “it looks tricky, but I think we can manage.” The redhead grinned, noticing that the earpieces were connected by two cords merging into one, and not the full headpiece.



“A-Are you sure? I mean, you could listen to them a-and I-.”



“Yes, I’m sure.” Slightly cold fingers rested on fumbling hands. “Unless you’re worried about my breath, ‘cause if you are, I won’t breathe.” Willow went on, nervously, blushing at her last words.



“No, it’s nice.” An equally matching blush surfaced on Tara’s face. “I didn’t m-mean... t-that’s not-,” the blonde paused when she caught Willow’s grin.



“So... my breath’s nice?” The redhead asked, teasingly wiggling her eyebrows.



“Hush,” Tara smiled, shyly bumping her friend’s shoulder. “What do you want to listen to?” She asked, instantly feeling comfortable as she rummaged through her dark backpack.



“I’m open to whatever you pick,” Willow snuggled closer to reach the earpiece. Okay, well, that and to catch Tara's scent, which floated off the blonde like waves of strawberries.



A deep, drumming noise echoed in Tara’s ear as she fumbled with the CD player, hoping that Willow couldn’t hear the sound. The blonde’s heartbeat sped up more when Tara found herself touching Willow shoulder to shoulder. Blissful within the proximity of the redhead, she was completely unaware that the other girl was also trying to control her rapid heart.



When the CD began to play, both girls leaned in as quiet breathing formed its own music. From her slanted view, Willow watched Tara’s long eyelashes whisper against her cheeks. She swallowed audibly as her eyes darted around the room before resting back on its desired place.



“Willow?”



“Yes,” Willow answered, hesitantly.



“Maybe w-we should l-lay down. I-It would be easier.” The blonde chanced a quick look toward the redhead, hoping that her suggestion wasn’t inappropriate.



“Okay, yeah, that... yeah,” her friend replied, quietly. They lay on their back, side by side, with the CD player between them and their heads resting close together.



Your softly spoken words,

Release my whole desire,

Undenied,

Totally.



And so bare is my heart,

I can't hide,

And so where does my heart,

Belong.




Shapes created by the lamp and the darkening sky played across the ceiling. Other than the slow movement of their chests, the two girls lay motionless, staring at the small dips and flicks of missing paint above them.



“Tara?”



“Yeah?”



“Are you okay?”



“Yeah.”



Beneath your tender touch,

My senses can't divide,

Oh so strong,

My desire.



For so bare is my heart,

I can't hide,

And so where does my heart,

Belong.




“Willow?”



“Yeah.”



“This... this is nice.”



“Yeah.”



Willow’s left hand lazily drew circles on the blanket, inching, ever so often, further from her body. Her skin connected, softly, with Tara’s wandering hand as fingers met halfway. Clasping loosely, slowly, fingers explored palms and traced over lines of the past and future. Interlocking at last, smiles graced faces as eyes stared ahead and hands merged, unwilling to let go.



Now that I've found you,

And seen behind those eyes,

How can I,

Carry on.



For so bare is my heart,

I can't hide,

And so where does my heart,

Belong.








onyxsundrops
 


:-)

Postby Sheba » Fri Jun 11, 2004 7:05 pm

May I be the first to say...



WOW! :D

Sheba
 


Re: :-)

Postby wimpy0729 » Fri Jun 11, 2004 7:53 pm

Loved it!



I think my heart was pounding as hard as theirs. :love



Can't wait to see what's next!



Wimpy

wimpy0729
 


Re: :-)

Postby her BRIGHTeyes » Fri Jun 11, 2004 10:04 pm

awwwwwwe.

that was unbelievably cute. and adorable. and sensual.

did anyone else think that? if not... well. er. me either...

that was sooooo cute though. with the hand holding. and the

sexiness. and the awwwwwe's {those were mine}



moremoremoremoremoremoremoremore :smash ;)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

she had eyes bright enough to burn me --conor oberst

her BRIGHTeyes
 


Re: Update

Postby pipsberg » Fri Jun 11, 2004 10:39 pm

Awww I loved it! Great work.. I like the slow build up between them.



:peace

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

pipsberg
 


Re: Update

Postby DreamsToDream » Sat Jun 12, 2004 12:50 am

How Adorable!! Too Cute For Many Words!!! LoL

D2D



Damn You Vile Woman!!!- Stewie Griffin



I Try My Best To Feed Her Appetite, And Keep Her Coming Every Night... - "This Love" By Maroon 5

DreamsToDream
 


Re: Update

Postby SJ » Sat Jun 12, 2004 4:35 am

Lovely update :read

SJ
 


Re: Update

Postby sam darls » Sat Jun 12, 2004 4:42 am

Awww that was so cute and adorable :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Update

Postby veiled isis moon » Sat Jun 12, 2004 5:40 am

Just read the last two updates together and how cute do you want to be. The animal crackers bit was sweet and funny and i loved the ending with them holding hands and listening to music on the bed in the dark, awwwww.



Michelle.x

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Update

Postby Shy One » Sat Jun 12, 2004 5:47 am

Aaawwwww!!!

That was very sweet! :heart

I can't wait for the next update! Are we gonna get smoochies soon? (ooh, I hope, I hope, I hope!) :eatme



Shy One

:shy

Shy One
 


Re: Update

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Sat Jun 12, 2004 9:35 am

YAY!!



Hand holding goodness and music. Always a good sign! Im always talking about signs...There's always a sign in a story. I usually get them wrong, but hey!



Just keep writing, and I can keep trying!



Sincerely,

:flower BWR

BurningWhiteRose
 


nice

Postby scelesta31 » Sat Jun 12, 2004 1:20 pm

I really like this story. It's really fun to read and really sweet. I like the whole building trust concept. Please continue! :)



-The Wicked One :wtf

-----------------

"I am like a nerdy, Irish vampire." -Conan O'Brien

scelesta31
 


Re: nice

Postby littlecrazy80 » Sun Jun 13, 2004 10:58 am

Loved the update! :heart



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ Amber Board

littlecrazy80
 


Re: nice

Postby soluna350 » Sun Jun 13, 2004 12:37 pm

I so love this story. They are so cute and innocent. First kisses soon?:pray

soluna350
 


Re: nice

Postby onyxsundrops » Sun Jun 13, 2004 7:35 pm

Thanks everyone for reading and responding. At first I wasn't sure if I was boring some of you to death with the pace, and it's good to know that I'm not. (or am I?) Anyway, I'll probably finish the next update soon, and as for kissing and couple-y things, I'm getting there. Thanks.



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


Re: nice

Postby Mikaelah Braenna » Sun Jun 13, 2004 9:26 pm

Whoa... I missed an update somehow... I am slacking. Boring us? No way! We want smoochies though. :) Love the update, it was very sweet.



~Mikaelah



(Hey Sheba, shouldn't you be doing something, like maybe, ummm updating?! :lol )

Willow: "Where would you go? If you felt lost and alone? ..."

Tara: "To You..."


~~Truly and Forever~~

Mikaelah Braenna
 


Re: nice

Postby onyxsundrops » Tue Jun 15, 2004 9:58 am

Part Nine



****



Willow’s eye twitched, repeatedly, as she fought against wakefulness. One green eye glanced at the clock through a blurry slit, and the redhead groaned, snapping her lid shut. A gentle knock sounded on the door and she kicked at her blanket, pulling the corner up over her head.



“Willow?” Tara knocked again, putting her mouth close to the door so she could call through. She and Willow had agreed to meet for breakfast and receiving no response, the blonde was hoping that Willow hadn’t changed her mind.



Meshed red hair framed Willow’s face as she shot up in bed, apparently hearing things. Listening through the silence, she waited to confirm her insanity and was relieved when she realized that the sound was coming from the door.



“Willow?” Her name was followed by a soft knock.



Suddenly alert, the redhead hurriedly crawled across the bed. “Tara?” She whispered, sleepily making the trip across the mattress. In the process, her feet became tangled in her blanket and she rolled onto the floor with a thud.



“Willow?” Tara’s voice sounded unsure and concerned.



“Com-.” The word was cut off by a bang and Willow tripping over her suitcase.



Crack. “Ouch.” Thump. The blonde on the outside heard a series of noises before the breathless redhead appeared before her. Willow was dressed in her sleepware, which consisted of a shrunken light T-shirt and matching high-rise, drawstring pants.



“Hi,” Willow smiled, dizzily, when she saw the blonde’s face. “I... I was just about to come and get you,” she innocently lied as she tried to arrange her hair into a presentable fashion.



“Really?” Tara gave her a lopsided smile as the blonde’s gaze traveled down to the redhead’s attire.



“Yeah, um, right after I changed out of these incredibly embarrassing clothes.” Willow blushed, “I really didn’t expect that anyone would be seeing me... like this.” She bashfully tugged at her shirt and Tara’s eyes wandered to the redhead’s bellybutton.



“It’s, uh,” Tara swallowed a gulp, “o-okay. I’ll just, um,” she pointed behind her as her eyes wandered again, “go... down.” Her cheeks darkened as the blood rushed to her face, “I mean, I’ll w-wait for you d-downstairs.”



“Okay,” the redhead grinned, “I’ll meet you down there.” When Tara nodded, Willow gave the blonde another smile as she closed the door.



Thump.



“I’m okay.” A muffled voice echoed through the door. Tara shook her head, smiling as she unconsciously added a skip to her walk.



****



The mini cafeteria, located in the back hall of the first floor, was extremely crowded considering the time. Flyers taped in the hallway gave the time and location of each seminar being held that day and many of them weren’t scheduled until later in the day, which was why Tara was surprised to see the mass of people.



Nibbling on her bagel, Tara’s face lit up when she spotted Willow entering the room. The early sun cast a fiery glow around the newcomer and the wind from an open window further captured Willow’s beauty as her red hair flew gently behind her. Tara swallowed the small piece of bread before it had a chance to fall from her open mouth. Staring, the blonde barely had time to quickly look away when Willow glanced her way. She studied her small carton of chocolate milk, twisting the edge between her fingers and shyly looked up when she thought the coast was clear.



The coast was clear when Tara looked down at her beverage. Willow knew that she only had a few seconds to admire the blonde and took it upon herself to take advantage. Moving quickly, Willow’s gaze scanned every edge and curve of Tara’s face, resting on the fullness of her lips. Absentmindedly, she wondered about the softness and found herself touching her own lips, imagining the feel of Tara’s kiss. As the haziness left her eyes, she saw the blonde looking at her and blushed deeply.



Willow quickly grabbed her light breakfast and hurried toward the table. “Hey there,” she pulled out the chair across from the other girl and nearly missed the seat when Tara smiled brightly.



“Hey.” The blonde nervously fidgeted with her napkin but the smile hadn’t left her face. “Sleep well?” Willow nodded, peeling the corner of her banana. “Great. So, um, what time is y-your session?” She rushed out not so subtly.



The specific seminars that the girls were attending, unfortunately alone, had been scheduled earlier during the registration period because of the limited seats available. Needless to say, both girls were somewhat reluctant to go, even though the seminars were the highlights of their trip.



“Thirty minutes,” thinking she would have more time to spend with the blonde, Willow frowned at the clock behind Tara.



“Oh.” Tara looked down at her hands. “What time are you finished?” The corner of her lip curved into a smile when a hand overlapped hers.



“I could skip it,” the redhead offered. “It’s just about computers, you know, tips and stuff. But, I mean, I basically know everything there is to know. So I won’t be missing much.”



“No...no, you should g-go,” Tara managed a smile although her mind and heart were clashing with each other. “You shouldn’t miss it.” Because I want you to, died on her lips. Willow nodded, hiding the slump of her shoulders and went back to her breakfast. They finished quietly and Tara cursed the ghost of her words as she watched Willow leave twenty-five minutes later.



****



Willow stared, dazedly, out of the window. She was supposed to be excited and alert. She was also supposed to be paying attention but she wasn’t. Could not. The redhead smiled to herself as her thoughts drifted.



Outside, the sun wrapped itself around every tree and bush, squeezing until every leaf brightened with color. The sky held no traces of last nights storm and the clouds gobbled up the muggy air until only the fresh remained. Willow closed her eyes, imagining the soft indigo specks of laughter she always saw in Tara’s eyes. Her heart muscles trembled under the weight of her imagination, yet her mind continued to invite more images.



It was hard to believe that it was only the second day, but Willow didn’t think or care about the question of speed. She only wanted to enjoy the moments, the simpleness. Simple acts such as whenever the blonde smiled. Tara’s smiles, which curve and stretch, pulling at her own lips until her soul melted. Or the blonde’s caresses that carry the bite of fate and creep across her skin in the friendliest of gestures, but holds something more. She paled against the flower that was Tara.



Opening her eyes and beaming, giddily, Willow gathered up her things and hurried from the room. Once in the hallway, she paused as questions tumbled into her head. What if Tara had already gone to her session? How would I find her? Which seminar was it? The redhead berated herself for not asking. And what if Tara is enjoying it and I ruin everything by showing up? And what if...



“Hi.”



... she was standing right in front of me.





onyxsundrops
 


Re: Part Nine..

Postby Mikaelah Braenna » Tue Jun 15, 2004 11:51 am

Hmmm... Willow skipping out on classes to see Tara... and Tara secretly wanting her to... this is about to get even more interesting than it already is. Now being face to face in the hallway... what is to happen?! Suspense is a horrible thing sometimes. Wonderful update.



~Mikaelah

Willow: "Where would you go? If you felt lost and alone? ..."

Tara: "To You..."


~~Truly and Forever~~

Mikaelah Braenna
 


Re: Part Nine..

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Jun 15, 2004 12:25 pm

This is so cute!



Their thoughts and their smiles and glances are so sweet!

Really loved where Tara's eyes kept wandering, but hey, can't blame her. :eyebrow



And Tara's right there -- Yay!!



More soon please!



Wimpy

wimpy0729
 


Re: Part Nine..

Postby littlecrazy80 » Tue Jun 15, 2004 12:38 pm

Great update! :D Willow skipping class. :heart



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ Amber Board

littlecrazy80
 


Re: Part Nine..

Postby sam darls » Tue Jun 15, 2004 12:43 pm

Awww...so cute. Wonderful update :love . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Part Nine..

Postby veiled isis moon » Tue Jun 15, 2004 1:46 pm

Awwwwww, wow, they're both so cute! Willow rushing around her room in the morning and falling over everything cracked me up. It was so funny! Awww, and there wandering eyes were really sweet. More please



Michelle.x

veiled isis moon
 

PreviousNext

Return to Board index

Return to Willow/Tara Finished Fics Archive (Authors N-Z)

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests


Powered by phpBB The phpBB Group © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007
Style based on a Cosa Nostra Design