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 Post subject: Re: The Rest of Common Areas
PostPosted: Tue Mar 08, 2005 5:52 am 
Hey HW,

Well I've been out in the technological brownout land for the long weekend (also known as the in-laws) so I've missed quite a bit, including this discussion.



But my thoughts (for what they are worth). First, I would be completely unsatisfied by an ending like that. Not because of they "would they..." but because of (again) the quantum quesitons. I mean it's not possible because if Tara tells Willow the story, Willow doesn't send the letter saying if my envelope comes..., then the correspondence doesn't happen, then Tara doesn't know Willow, then Tara doesn't come to the house, then Willow does send the envelope. Problem with that illogic logic is that Willow DID send the letter, the correspondence DID happen because Tara is here now. Therefore, it happened. So the movie would have pissed me off.



That said, I think that whether you finish the story or not is up to you. It has to be. There is no other way to write your heart than to write your heart. You can't write the heart of the kittens or the heart of a movie or anything else. The movie felt false to you. Felt like a lie. So you wanted to write a truth (notice I don't say the truth). Now you've written your truth, yes? So really you don't have that question anymore. You now have the question: should you share your truth? Again, that has to be up to you. But I would say that writing your truth, knowing it's your truth, and not sharing it... disrespects it.



Anyway, it's 5:52 in the morning here and I've had a very bad night of sleep so I hope I'm not too harsh. Whatever you decide, it's been a fantastic story and I'm honored that you've shared it. Thank you.

"Most editors are failed writers--but so are most writers." - Thomas Stearns Eliot

"Censorship, like charity, should begin at home; but unlike charity, it should end there." - Chare Booth Luce

My latest story: Survivor - Ash Island



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 Post subject: My thanks
PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 8:46 am 
From the bottom of my heart, I'd like to express my deepest gratitude to all kittens, for your encouragement and support throughout this fic, and elsewhere on this board. This has been a community in the truest sense of the word, and I don't think I'll ever find the sense of belonging I get here anywhere else.



To think that at first I didn't even consider that Common Areas can fit into Pens, because of instead of Tara starting off dead but gets resurrected, goes into a different dimension where she's alive etc, I was going to kill her off mid-way through the fic. I thought I'd be kicked off the board :) . So no surprise that I hesitated for a long time before taking a deep breath and making that first post way back in December. It's my first time, I can't believe it.



Okay, those 2 paragraphs above sounded way too much like goodbyes. But no, over the last few days I've read your comments and was simply, well overwhelmed by the overwhelming response and encouragement. So, yes, I'll finish the fic my way, it's my story, right? In case that was too oblique, it means I'll be posting the last parts and the fic will be finished by Easter. Part 17 at the weekend, okay? I'm still stuck in BusinessTripLand, I'm finally going home on Friday and after living out of a suitcase since the end of January, I can't wait.



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Jes021 - Tara is here, and was there any question that they'd finally be together? No way! Thanks for reading.



Cyd -
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where do you think you are? A board specifically made to express the love of Tara and Willow or something
*looks round* I thought I put my application in :p ... I heard that board was a whole lot of fun and I want, want, want in. Hope you had a good birthday.



Emms - oh yes, Tara's big with the being alive and the next part carries on with more W/T interaction :) .



WillowRTaraM1 - I thank you for reading!



wimpy - the reality of Tara's "death" hasn't fully sunk in for either of them, then they are physically together finally, so much to take in, it's not surprising they take the most convenient emotion, the one that gives the most comfort, and grabs hold of it first. May be in a while, after they get all the initial talks and hugs and :kiss2 out of the way, they'll finally feel the effect.



serendipitous - I've thought about what has changed because of Willow's note, I'm writing a little timeline summary, as much for myself as others. I might post it later to clear things up. For now, basically Willow's note meant Tara didn't die and the universe has changed, or the time crinkle that happened before got corrected. In any case, the outcome's the same, we have a very much alive Tara. Here. Now. :)



Irishgrl3 - thanks! It was important for me that they found each other, their bond has been slowly forming throughout the letters, and it's about time they started building on their emotional bond.



justin - Tara's non-deadness is definitely of the good. The last few parts were angsty but I hope it pays off at the end. :)



The Rose24 - oh absolutely, and Tara will show Willow her appreciating again and again and again ... :D



Viximon - phew, I'm not a meaning, yay! Their meeting continues in the next part ...



WillowNTara4ever - thank you! More time in Willow's apartment and more in the next part. Keep your eyes peeled!



Michaela - glad you enjoyed your oxygen and massage, now it'll get even more relaxed, don't leave the spa yet.



JSI - the quantum questions, hmmm :hmm What if Tara had showed up earlier, like at the gallery? Or at any other time than now? The consequences will be different, definitely. Tara has some lines in the next part that answers that partially, and I'm putting a timeline together, cos finally I have a clearer picture in my mind. I'll post that once I finish with it.



wiccanbotanist - I could give you a big huge hug now, for what you said
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The kittens are here because we didn't like how something ended and so we came together to re-write it each in our own little way!
How bad was I to forget about the purpose that brought this community together! Sometimes we fail to see the woods for the tree (or is it the other way round, I always get confused :) ). Thank you for making me believe again.



Cam - :bigwave you remember how uncertain I was when I first posted? How I kept asking you if it read fine? If this or other that could have been better? Guess some of that lack of confidence never went away, huh? You're right, it was thinking too much about the movie, and frankly, being freaked that there'll be a remake. I mean, Hollywood remakes generally means they take the goodness and cuteness away from a little gem of a movie and cheapen it. But yeah, Common Areas is Common Areas, it's not a fictionalization of Il Mare. Thinking about it further, all the fics here are based on one TV show, and all us writers do, is taking our most beloved characters and building our own story around them. If we all started comparing our fics to what happened on BtVS, it'll be a sad state of affairs indeed. Just like to finish with a big thank you. Without your feedback and support so early on in the process, I very much doubt I'd be here today, with the readership I have, and determined to continue writing. Cheers, mate.



terra -
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I will ban reading any more of your fiction
Hahaha! I'm not afraid of you! I can call upon the powers of the Big Bad TaxMonster who will come and attack you and tear your past few years' tax returns apart! And not even your neighborhood 3 foot Batman will help you, nyah :P ! Seriously, that certainly put me in my place, you're not harsh at all, just honest. And, well, will I escape your wrath if smut is not in the next part, but I promise that it's coming soon?



Emms again - :wave
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Phooey on the other story
I'm beginning to believe this, in fact, I do believe in it. No stopping now.



candybabe86 - hi and welcome! Thanks for joining in what has proved to be an emotional journey, hope you continue with us to the end.
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Umm... could we... maybe... get some... Willow/Tara snuggles
soon ...



stillrunning - welcome! Yeah, it's a wee bit confusing at times, and the whole premise of the 3 years apart, and the letters, and what's Tara doing here, isn't she supposed to be dead? Hope you continue with us till the end cos I will probably put a little explanation after the story itself ends.



shuyaku - thank you! You guys' support has been fantastic. Thank you again.



charmedwitchtara - wow, you've seen the film, not many people have. Now I'm relieved and happy that you agree with my feelings on the ending. About smut, it's comin' dude.



cperrins78 - welcome and thanks for reading. There's a little time travel, but unlike Somewhere in Time, actually the only time traveler has been a bunch of letters and may be some photos. No people.



Traveler4069 - thank you. I'm happy to continue, I've convinced myself now.



russ - you're so right. I have to take my mind away from the original film, cos I've changed it so much now. What they do is one thing, what I'm doing is another and no one can take it away from me. Thank you!



Debra again - at the in-laws? Wow. Just, wow! I'm supposed to go with the in-laws on vacation this summer, it'll be interesting cos of the slight "not out" situation, even though I'm real close to her family, her Mom treats me like another daughter, it's one thing being a "friend of the family" and another being "the person who your daughter wakes up to, whenever we get a chance to stay over at each others".



Anyway, the quantum question in the film didn't make sense. But from now on, I'm not going back to the film, I'm gonna make this story mine :) and I'm no longer to beat myself up on the chest to pronounce that (well, except it'll hurt like hell ... :D ) Thanks for your support, as always.





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 Post subject: Woo
PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 9:02 am 
Oh goody! :D





xoxo

Emms



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 Post subject: great
PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 9:11 pm 
I'm glad that you are going to finish the story. I've truly enjoyed it and can't wait for the continuation.



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 Post subject: Re: great
PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 9:31 pm 
I for one, being I just read this fic and all, am THRILLED that you are going to be finishing it. I really don't care what you do with it, you're such a good writer that I trust it'll turn out as equally wonderful in the end as it has for the parts that are already up and posted.

"Heaven's not a place that you go when you die...it's that moment in life when you actually feel alive"



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 Post subject: Woooo and Hooo!
PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 1:22 pm 
SHE'S FINISHING IT!!!!!!!!! *Does the snoopy dance* *Realizes she looks like more of a dork than Xander when HE does it* Erm...I'll just go sit quietly. In the corner...um, alone. And happily await updatey goodness. :applause



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 Post subject: Re: Woooo and Hooo!
PostPosted: Fri Mar 11, 2005 11:57 am 
:wave



I've been gone from the board for a little while, I stopped in today to check on a few stories... got caught up on yours ( which is fantastic btw ) I was happily reading along... the girls are together first kiss just occurred... then BAMM... I'm reading that you may possibly not finish... Thank whatever deity you pray to, that the kittens helped you through your crisis of faith in yourself... if you had ended the story on that note... I'm sorry but you would have made this 5' tall girl " go large " on you. On a serious note I am truly thankful that you have decided to continue !!



:bow in awe



behindhereyes

Kim

"To the world, you may be one person; but to one person, you may be the world"



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 Post subject: Re: Common Areas - Part 17
PostPosted: Sat Mar 12, 2005 8:47 pm 
Wow. Your story continues to amaze me and look forward to see how it concludes.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Edited by: The Rose24  at: 3/12/05 8:30 pm


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 Post subject: Common Areas - Part 17
PostPosted: Sat Mar 12, 2005 9:29 pm 
Emms, cperrins78, stillrunning, Under Their Spell, Kim - thank you. I can't believe it's only a week or so, how quickly and wonderfully things have turned around. I'm posting this at home, a luxury I haven't enjoyed since Part 12, I know y'all can't tell the difference wherever I post, but it matters to me.










Title: Common Areas

Author: watson (hiddenwatson@yahoo.com)

Distribution: please email me first

Rating: PG-13 to R

Summary: Sunnydale, AU. Set during 2001/2 and 2004/5. Willow and Tara find each other through time.

Disclaimer: This story is inspired by and adapted from a Korean film called Il Mare. The story premise, of 2 people who connect across time, belongs to Lee Hyun-Seung, although I have deviated from the story somewhat. BtVS characters belong to Mutant Enemy, Fox, The WB, UPN and others. I own nothing. I am nothing.

Notes: This is, as they say, the penultimate part.





Part 17

Finding home



"Do you still have it?"



"Have what?"



"The Magic Shop receipt, that for once I'm so grateful to Anya for insisting that we pay for everything that I can kiss her."



"You'll do nothing of the kind."



"What kind?"



"Kissing Anya. Kissage is reserved for me only."



"Really? Already? It's been, like, all of 10 minutes and you're claiming ownership."



"Uh huh."



"Okay."



They were still on the couch but the mood had changed so dramatically. Questions and doubts about what happened that brought Tara here were put aside as they relished in the glow of their newly forged, physical, connection.



"So what about that receipt," Willow smirked as she broke off contact for a second.



Tara was not yet ready to relinquish the feel of Willow on her lips and kissed the redhead again before popping their mouths apart. She reached into her messenger bag and retrieved a small laminated sheet containing the piece of paper in question. The paper was crumpled, a little torn at the edges and the writing had begun to fade. However the laminated plastic sheets had prevented further deterioration.



"I carried it with me for a long time, didn't want to let it out of my sight, at first in an envelope, but when it started fraying, I had it laminated," Tara explained as she handed the sheet to Willow.



"You know when I was in the cab after I wrote it I was holding onto it like my entire life depended on it. And it was. It's amazing, this morning it was all brand new and unmarked in my pocket and now, it's aged," Willow mused. "You never told me your side of the story."



Tara murmured sultrily, "Hmmm. I got distracted."



"You did," Willow agreed. And distracted Tara for a few more minutes.



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A growl in Willow's stomach a few make-out sessions later announced her hunger, she realized she had not eaten anything since breakfast.



The clock told them it was nearly 8 o'clock and they debated whether to go out for dinner or stay in. Finally breaking away from more kisses they concluded that they would get very little actual eating of food if they stayed in. So they put on their coats, packed stakes and crosses, and ventured out.



Willow locked her door carefully and put her hand in Tara's automatically.



So there they were, at a secluded corner table in a diner not far from the apartment, once again tongue tied.



What sort of small talk do you make when there's so much to talk about.



Willow ordered grilled chicken, fries and a large chocolate milkshake. Tara opted for vegetarian lasagna and coffee. Their eyes caught again.



"So you got the note, then what?" Willow prompted.



"Let me see. It was clear that it was something very urgent and important, that made you write me in such haste. I even thought of going back inside and not venturing out all day," Tara began slowly.



"That could have been one option," Willow said.



"But I had the appointment at the gallery, and you note said that I should go home after the gallery, not skip it altogether. Now, with hindsight, I had to go to the gallery, cos I had to deposit the sketches, otherwise you wouldn't have been talking to the owner and not gotten to know about, about ... the news," Tara's teeth clenched as she thought about what might have been. She had not been able to utter the words of her "death" yet.



"Can't argue with that," Willow agreed, a shiver running through her, of a thousand what-if's.



"I took a bus home straight away, I avoided all parts of the main street, like you said," she said.



The waitress came by with their order and they ate ravenously, leaving conversation aside for a while. Willow was so hungry she finished her chicken and fries quickly and was picking at Tara's lasagna. She even slurped away her milkshake and ordered another soda from the waitress, having decided against coffee.



When the waitress came by to clear the dishes, she found 2 very full but happier witches.



Willow asked Tara the question that had been drifting in and out of her mind since Tara walked in through her door.



"Tara, how come you're here? I mean how come you know to come knock on my door now, today? As opposed to that time I asked you to come to the Espresso Pump and you didn't show up? Not that I'm not ecstatic that you're here, but why is it now the right time?"



Tara composed herself before responding. "I think I know, I've had time to think about it. But let me go back to 3 years ago when I picked up your note and went home after the gallery. I was still a little puzzled, but I wrote you a short letter to say I got the note and to say I was okay."



"Thanks," said Willow.



"But it came back, or rather, it never reached you. I opened the mailbox the next day, expecting a reply from you and my letter was still there," Tara recounted.



Willow frowned, a germ of an inkling grew silently in her mind.



Tara continued, "I wrote you letter after letter, but they never got anywhere. I was frantic. Totally hysterical at one point. I simply could not reach you, it was like all contact was gone," she gulped, slow tears coming to her eyes as she recalled her distress.



Willow reached over and took Tara's hands in hers.



"Shh, shh, it's alright. You're here now," she comforted.



"I know. But it was hard. I don't know how I managed to get through those first few weeks," Tara sighed.



"What changed?" Willow asked.



"I could think of nothing else. Nothing made sense. I let myself slip, didn't sleep properly, didn't paint, didn't take care of myself," she described in a small voice. "Then I got sick. Really sick."



"Oh baby," Willow sympathesized. Terms of endearment came so naturally that she did not realize it.



"Which was probably the best thing that could have happened to me then," Tara said. "I had a fever and was kinda out of it for a couple of days. But in my delirium I think I came up with the reason. I figured something bad had happened to prompt you to warn me so urgently, and we," she smiled warmly at Willow, "together, we avoided it."



Willow grinned widely at the "we" and took both Tara's hands and kissed the long fingers. A warm feeling spread from the contact into Tara's arms, body, and back out in a cycle to Willow. It was a slow burning sensation that left an ache in both women, wanting more.



Tara returned to her story, "I guess I realized then that somehow we changed history. And by doing that the power of the mailbox was gone, stripped. The crinkle of time had either corrected itself or become untangled again. Believe me, I was torn at that point. On the one hand I was happy because we'd avoided something bad, though I didn't know what it was. But on the other hand I was grief-strickened, cos it meant no more contact with you. For a while I thought I'd lost you forever."



"But you found me," Willow said.



"I found you," Tara repeated. "I'll always find you."



They gazed at each other for a long moment. Then Willow leaned across the table to give Tara a kiss, momentarily satisfying their need for each other.



"I took out all your letters and for the next few days, wrote down everything that will happen to us, with dates and as much detail as I could remember. I did a big brain dump basically. I was hoping the events in our timeline wouldn't be altered that much. And then I realized I had 3 years to wait," Tara said.



"So the first time I wrote you, when I moved apartments?" asked Willow.



"I almost went to see you, but it was too risky. I did go by your new apartment the day after to check the name on the door though," Tara grinned.



"Is that why you didn't meet me at the Espresso Pump?" Willow pouted.



"It sounds convoluted, the reason I didn't meet you was because I knew beforehand I'd stand you up. But it was so tempting, so tempting," Tara said as she brought her hands to Willow's cheeks. "It was like a watershed, I had to almost physically restrain myself, make myself stay indoors all day, cos if I'd been anywhere in the vicinity, I wouldn't have been able to stop myself from running to your side and throwing myself at you."



Willow smiled at the imagery and allowed Tara's hands to cup her face. She turned to one side and kissed the blonde's palm.



Tara continued, "If I'd done that, the timeline would have been screwed up. I knew what was going to happen December 12th, 2004. And bits and pieces of what happened afterward. The only date with a question mark was today, and I knew it's gonna be a Big Day. I did a lot of meditation over the next few years and it came to me gradually. I had to come. It was the right time."



"I'm so glad you did," tears were rolling freely down Willow's face now, but these were tears of happiness. Tara wiped them away carefully.



"So here I am," she declared.



"So here you are," Willow echoed. "Promise me you'll never leave me again?"



"Never," Tara promised solemnly.



They sealed the promise with another kiss. This time it deepened in passion and when Tara opened her mouth, Willow wasted no time in letting her tongue roam freely inside, leisurely exploring, tasting, reveling.



They broke off, breathless and flushed.



"We should —" Willow began.



"— get the check," Tara finished the sentence.



They walked back to the apartment, hands entwined, bodies as close together as possible without tripping over another.



"There's so much you need to tell me about what you've been doing these 3 years," Willow said.



"Lots. But can it wait, I'd really like to get back to your place now," Tara whispered in the sexy, evocative tone that Willow would learn to appreciate so well.



"Okay, but I have one last question," Willow breathed.



"What's that?"



"You still want to do that druid oil anointing spell?"



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 Post subject: so excited
PostPosted: Sat Mar 12, 2005 10:22 pm 
I was so excited to see the story had an update. It was just awesome. I smiled while reading the whole thing. I couldn't imagine waiting a whole three years to be with the person you love. Wondering day after day what their doing, if they think about, and stuff like that. I love this story.





Christina



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 Post subject: Re: so excited
PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 4:41 am 
Amaaazinggg... :D :applause :applause

Edited by: Warduke at: 3/13/05 9:22 am


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 Post subject: Update
PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 11:06 am 
I'm so glad I got large with the butch in the last feedback. Great update! I can wait for the smut, I suppose. I decided a few chapters ago to stop thinking about the timeline and events. Cause if I didn't then I'd go crazy. I resolved to enjoy the words in front of me, of which those in this chap are some of my favorites.



*Shivers at the thought of the Tax Monster* Thanks, now I'm gonna have bad dreams. I'm happy you're home and posting with a silly grin (I presume).



terra







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 Post subject: Re: Update
PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 1:01 pm 
Wow. Firstly, thanks so much for continuing.



So the mailbox stopped working. Tara must've about gone nuts. I know I would've.



I'm so so glad Tara heeded Willow's scribbled warning.



Okay, now I think it's time for some more snuggles. They have many years to make up for.



Great job!



Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara



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 Post subject: Re: Common Areas - Part 17
PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 6:30 am 
Hey there,

I have to say Tara's telling of the story is surprisingly fulfilling. I was really thinking that I'd be like, "and then? and then? and then?" but that actually answers most of my quesiotns. And I can't say enough how much I like the explanation for why she didn't go to meet Willow on Dec 12. Absolutely brilliant! Love it. Well done.

"Most editors are failed writers--but so are most writers." - Thomas Stearns Eliot

"Censorship, like charity, should begin at home; but unlike charity, it should end there." - Chare Booth Luce

My latest story: Survivor - Ash Island



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 Post subject: RE
PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 8:21 am 
OH....that was sooooo romantic watson...



I can't wait to see what happens when they get back to Willow's place.... :D





xoxo

Emms



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 Post subject: Re: RE
PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 9:36 am 
So we finally have explanations. WONDERFUL! And, I'm a little surprised to say this, but your explanation actually made sense! Which makes me a happy little kitten. As does the fact that they're together and happy and alive and whatnot. And now they're going back to Willow's?! OOO that should lead to some fun:D

"Heaven's not a place that you go when you die...it's that moment in life when you actually feel alive"



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 Post subject: Re: Common Areas - Part 17
PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:14 am 
*really awful singing* Oh Mickey you're so fine, you're so fine you blow my mind, hey Mickey... Uh... :blush Sorry, was on the radio... :blush



Anyway... :whistle Wow... that was so good... :love



The talk - totally believable and real... and the wait Tara had to go through... it's so heartwrenching... i don't think i could do that...



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"But you found me," Willow said.



"I found you," Tara repeated. "I'll always find you."




:happycry Get's me everytime that line...



And... [insert girly giggle here] you put in snuggles... :blush



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Tara murmured sultrily, "Hmmm. I got distracted."



"You did," Willow agreed. And distracted Tara for a few more minutes.




Mmm... images... :drool



Ahem... all in all... lovely, wonderful, and i so don't want this great story to end... ever. :)



*wanders off picturing w/t cheerleaders singing* Hey Watson you're so fine, you're so fine you blow my mind, hey Watson!

________________



Candybabe



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 Post subject: Re: Common Areas - Part 17
PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:15 am 
Wow, that was great how that all came together. So detailed, Tara figuring the time line and why she didn't show up at the Espresso Pump. Well done!

And you gave us kissage, YAY! :D



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 Post subject: Re: Common Areas - Part 17
PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 7:40 pm 
I have to agree with Debra - the explanation made perfect sense. She knew they had changed history at least once and if she could do her best not to change it anymore, then tada! She gets to meet Willow 3 years later. It's a long time to wait - but it's way better than never.



Great update, but of course we all knew it would be ;)



-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)



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 Post subject: Re: Common Areas - Part 17
PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 8:35 am 
I stumbled on this fic quite by chance; there being so many and me having so little time, but I'm very grateful I found it.



The premise, of course, is very interesting, but also your style of writing adds to it's appeal. Even descriptions of Tara's artwork seemed incredibly vivid.



I'm not a quantum physicist (or even a regular physicist!), but the logic and explanation of the quirk in the timeline, and Tara's decision to wait it out until that day, rang true. Often with parallel universe / time wrap stories, the reasoning of it feels shallow to me.



Thank you for sharing your talents with us.




You stay the course, you hold the line, you keep it all together.

You're the one true thing I know I can believe in
- Sarah McLachlan



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 Post subject: Re: Common Areas - Part 17
PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 10:24 am 
Fantastically done. Thank you for tying up all the loose knots.

Tara's explanation cleared a lot of my questions. Quite frankly, I was driving myself nuts, but in the end, it all made sense:laugh Loved this fic and am looking forward to the conclusion.

But here, the energy, the collective intelligence. It's like this force, t-this penetrating force, and I can just feel my mind opening up, you know, and letting this place just thrust into and -- and spurt knowledge into -- that sentence ended up in a different place than it started out in - Willow



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 Post subject: Re: Common Areas - Part 17
PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2005 8:31 pm 
Great update and Thank you for continuing. I'll be keeping an eye open for more. Traveler



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 Post subject: Re: Common Areas - Part 17
PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2005 9:27 pm 
My time online has been extremely limited lately, so it was nice to see updates to both of your fics when I logged on. Unfortunately, I had to choose only one to read, but it was nice to have a tough choice.



I haven’t left feedback on this story yet (which is very lame, I know). As everyone has been saying, it’s a great read. I noticed that you had some doubts about when to end the story. I think that ending with the previous update would have worked, but I’m really glad you kept going.



It’s funny: I started to write that I was confused about why the movie ended the way it did—erasing everything that happened to Willow once she moved out of the basement apartment, including sending the last letter to Tara. But, now that I think about it, I think that ending works, too. Isn’t it just a question of whether Tara is concerned about screwing up the timeline once the crinkle in time is gone. Because once time unbends and proceeds in the normal way (and that happened the day Tara was going to die but didn’t), I don’t think Willow’s warning letter can go back to 2001, even if she tries to send it. Or, am I wrong? (I’m a lawyer, not a physicist.)



I guess I should just watch the movie—the original, not the Hollywood version (if they make it), because there is no way in hell I can sit through two hours of Keanu Reeves.



I still like your ending better than the movie version anyway! The movie ending gives me a headache, but yours makes perfect sense.





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 Post subject: Common Areas - Summary
PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 7:04 am 
This is like an Appendix. Thought I'd summarize the timeline and important events, it should make things fairly clear. There's a whole 2 years between June 02 and August 04 that we don't know where Tara is and where she's doing. May be we can leave it as one of those things that happen "off-camera", or it may become another fic. I dunno.





DateWillowTara
Aug 01
Junior year at UCS. Glory happened. Buffy died and came back.Moves into brand new basement apt.
25 Aug 01
-Receives first letter from Willow.
29 Oct 01At Bronze with Scoobies. "Feels" Tara but doesn't know who it is.Sees Willow at Bronze with Oz and Dingoes.
Oct 01-Does Flower of light spell with W.
Thanksgiving 01-Miss Kitty arrives.
Nov 01-Makes appointment to meet Willow at Espresso Pump Dec 04.
Dec 01Learns Oz is leaving for NY. "Meets" Tara at Espresso Pump.Runs into Willow and Buffy at Espresso Pump, offers kind words.
Jan 02Oz leaves for NY.Starts Miss Kitty painting.
Spring 02-Art course in Houston.
April 02-Agrees to speak to young W.
April 02-Finishes Miss Kitty painting.
7 May 02-After leaving sketches at gallery:
Timeline 1: is shot
Timeline 2: has W's letter, goes home
Timeline for Tara changes here.
June 02-Writes W but no reply, mailbox stops working. Falls ill.
July 03Graduates. Moves into apt.Hmmm. Where is Tara?
Aug 04Moves out of basement apt. Writes first letter to Tara.In Sunnydale. Checks name on Willow's new apt.
Oct 04Finds out about Oz cheating.-
Oct 04Does Flower of light spell with T.Out of sight in Sunnydale.
Nov 04Asks Tara to meet her at Espresso Pump on 12 Dec.Gallery has exhibition
12 Dec 04Tara didn't show up.So hard, staying away ...
Jan 05Oz comes back.Resists temptation to slug him one.
April 05Asks Tara to see younger W.-
7 May 05 / amVisits gallery. Learns of Tara's death. Runs to mailbox, leaves letter.
Timeline for Willow changes here.
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7 May 05 / pmTara is here!Finally, I can see her.


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quiet thoughts

Edited by: hidden watson at: 3/28/05 6:07 am


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 Post subject: Last time, for good measures
PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 7:56 am 
I was going to quote Jim Morrison and make it seem like I'm clever and witty and all, cos:



Of our elaborate plans, the end

Of everything that stands, the end




has a kind of resonance that appeals to me. Plus, quoting dead artists always make one seem cool.



But enough of meaningless histrionics. I just want to say, for the last time in this thread — Replies, then update. And this will be the last part. To think that at first I was so not sure of myself, not sure of the reception I'd receive, and then to have made so many friends had the pleasure of reading so many comments. I hope y'all will indulge me if I get a little sentimental. Kittens, you have been all been truly magnificent, thank you.



*****



The Rose24 - thank you. You've been great.



Christina -
Quote:
I couldn't imagine waiting a whole three years to be with the person you love.
A testament to the extent of :tara 's feelings, I think. She's the wonderful one.



lil fled - why thank you very much!



terra - thanks for the :boot , I guess I needed that :lmao I'm not that great with smut, hope you can still derive some pleasure from the next part.



wimpy -
Quote:
They have many years to make up for.
They have indeed. Some snuggles and :wtkiss coming right up.



Debra -
Quote:
I have to say Tara's telling of the story is surprisingly fulfilling.
Phew! I have to be honest, of all the readers of this story, I most wanted you to feel comfortable, cos you've been here since the beginning, and have guessed about Tara's original fate, and all your observations and thoughts and discussions that encouraged me all the way through this story. If there were a "hand over heart" emoticon I'd use it, but no. So here's one for you :bow



Emms - thank you :) Next part is here.



stillrunning - thank you indeed. I'm glad you found that the
Quote:
explanation actually made sense
Fun is definitely coming soon.



candybabe86 - oh a child of the 80s! Love the cheerleaders coming after me :lmao Fantastic!



Irishgrl3 - yep, kissage. More :wtkiss to come, stay tuned ...



shuyaku -
Quote:
It's a long time to wait - but it's way better than never.
Definitely. She was really a saint for waiting for so long though, and deserves Willow's undying love.



mollyig - :wave thanks for dropping by, I'm glad you were able to follow, I was chuffed to read that you didn't find the explanation, albeit a simple one, wasn't shallow. Thank you.



willow fan7 - thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it so far.



Traveler4069 - thanks again.



cygnet 6 - what lovely feedback. No worries, I'm just happy you were able to find some time to read this one. Thinking about it more, the movie ending works, but what I didn't like was that by changing the timeline, all the events that connected our protagonists (almost meeting at the Bronze, the Flower of Light spell, all the 'talks', the shared experiences etc) were erased by this one action. Yes, we get to save Tara's life, but they'll have to rebuild their relationship and it's not the same. Thank you for your feedback.

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 Post subject: Common Areas - Part 18
PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 8:01 am 
Title: Common Areas

Author: watson (hiddenwatson@yahoo.com)

Distribution: please email me first

Rating: PG-13 to R

Summary: Sunnydale, AU. Set during 2001/2 and 2004/5. Willow and Tara find each other through time.

Disclaimer: This story is inspired by and adapted from a Korean film called Il Mare. The story premise, of 2 people who connect across time, belongs to Lee Hyun-Seung, although I have deviated from the story somewhat. BtVS characters belong to Mutant Enemy, Fox, The WB, UPN and others. I own nothing. I am nothing.

Notes: They had been on a journey of discovery, but the real journey, the one they would make together, was only just starting.





Part 18



"This is so easy," Willow remarked as they walked back from the diner.



"What is?" Tara asked under her breath, she was busy nuzzling Willow's neck, having thrown one arm round the redhead's shoulders and buried her head in her love's scent.



"Us. It's only been a couple of hours and here we are, like an old couple," Willow smiled.



"There's a few old couply things we haven't done yet," Tara's voice hummed from Willow's neck, sending some very nice tingles throughout Willow.



"Like what," Willow asked, feinting innocence.



"Oh you know, long walks on the beach, picnics in the park, movie nights, and me kissing the back of your ear like this," Tara leant in and blew softly at the back of Willow's ear before taking the exposed top half of the ear and gently sucking, delighted at watching a blush slowly build up across the redhead's features.



Willow swallowed several times. This woman, whose first touch she enjoyed only earlier in the day, was causing her stomach to do flip flops, her body to heat up considerably and she did not even want to think about her heart rate.



"You're, um, a little more forward than I thought," she squeaked, trying to suppress a moan at the sensation of soft lips sucking on a very sensitive spot.



"Anticipation and frustration. You don't like?" Tara purred. Then suddenly she jerked away. "Oh god, how can I be so self-centered. I've just been thinking about nothing else, but it must be too fast for you, I'm sorry."



Willow whimpered at the loss of Tara's touch, but by now she was slowly beginning to appreciate the small nuances of their situation. This was a Tara she had never lost, who had escaped a terrible fate, only to have to endure the anguish of having to patiently wait years to know what came next. If it were her, she would have probably lost her mind with the frustration.



As far as she knew, her memories were intact, not having been affected by the change in history, how long that would last, she had no idea.



The burning question was, how did they stand with each other? Theirs was a relationship that was old and new, strong and tenuous, familiar and alien. It was all too easy to misunderstand a word, a gesture, a sigh. Tara must have thought she was rejecting her, when all she wanted was to tease her a little. They would have to learn to read these little signs correctly. But they had time. Thankfully they had time.



"No, no, that's not what I mean," Willow protested, placing her hands in Tara's. Tara's momentary hesitation dissolved as Willow gave her a reassuring squeeze. "I guess it's taking me a little bit more time to process all this," she indicated as she saved her arms in a big circle about them. "About us. Like you said, it's all you've been thinking about —"



"You. You are all I've been thinking about," Tara murmured.



"See? That's what I mean. You've had time to think, but this morning I woke up and it was a nice sunny day and all I was concerned about was visiting an art gallery by myself and not coming across as a complete dork. I never thought it's possible to fit so much in a day, seeing your drawings, almost losing you," Willow had to stifle a rapidly building sob. "Then you, beautiful you ... you're here, and it hasn't sunk in yet."



"Are we going to fast? I can't stop touching you or kissing you, but it's kinda inappropriate really," Tara said.



"I don't want to slow down. It's just slightly busy up here," Willow pointed to her head. "But not more so than normal, it'll catch up quickly. Actually, I should let my brain do its processing in the background and concentrate on catching up with other things." She sealed her declaration with another kiss. A small one, but one that finally cemented her intentions.



*****



By the time they reached Willow's apartment their desire for each other had ignited to levels neither witch had experienced before. They had not stopped kissing, except to breathe, or to negotiate obstacles such as gates and doors.



Willow had Tara pinned to the doorframe, one hand buried in long blonde hair while the other was desperately trying to retrieve her keys from her pocket and aiming for the keyhole, unsuccessfully as she was too distracted to marshal sufficient hand-eye coordination to complete the task at hand.



Tara did not help matters one bit. Trapped between Willow and the door, her hands nevertheless roamed freely along Willow's back and was slowly pulling Willow's shirt up away from the waistband of her jeans.



When she shifted her hips and it ground into Willow's center, Willow felt like her legs would collapse with the contact.



"Baby, just let me get the door open, please," she groaned.



The fog in Tara's brain cleared somewhat and she found enough sense to pull back, although she was panting and her eyes sparkled a deep shade of blue from the lust radiating from a spot just below her navel. She rested her head on Willow's shoulder and took a deep breath.



"Okay, I'll behave. Otherwise we'll never get the spell done," she grinned.



Willow sighed as her arousal subsided a little, and finally got the door open. They entered the place of their first meeting and savored the moment as their connection strengthened.



"Are you sure we should do the spell now?" she asked.



"Why not, since you've mentioned it already? I think we need some sort of meditative centering, it'll do us good. After everything's that happened today, I want some sort of blessing," Tara countered. "You have the ingredients?"



"Not many people can nonchalantly reach into their drawer and find vervain leaves gathered under the full moon and blessed by a druid priestess. But you're in luck, I'm one of those rare finds," Willow smirked.



"A rarity indeed. The more reason why I'm keeping you," Tara smiled, and gave Willow a peck on the lips.



"Trying to distract me again?" Willow giggled.



"I'm evil, but alright, let's get ready," Tara replied in her most serious tone under the circumstances, trying very hard to keep a straight face.



Willow looked around in her cupboard and took out a small jar of the infusion she had made a few months earlier, when they first talked about doing the spell. She had soaked the vervain leaves in freshly boiled water for 10 minutes. Then she strained, dried and added the leaves to a mixture of rose otto, sandalwood and sweet almond oils. Rose otto to calm the mind and sandalwood to promote meditation and to energize the mind and spirit. Almond to provide a base.



"So how are we gonna do the ritual bath?" she asked. A fraction of her mind had been mulling over this problem while walking back. She would love to share the bath with a Tara that's completely naked and glistening with oil and sliding up her own equally naked body, oh wow. But no, she was not sure if they were ready for something this powerful yet.



"I know what I want and I think I know what you want. But I also know it's far too intense for us, we've both been through a lot today. Why don't we have the bath separately then do the final anointing together," Tara suggested sensibly. I don't want to be sensible but it's better this way. Sigh.



"I guess," Willow sighed in agreement. "I'll get the bath and stuff ready, but you're the guest, so you go first. No arguments."



"Okay," Tara consented.



It was like old times. Each prepared their own bath carefully, with blessings to the goddess and emptied their minds and spirits while they soaked in the scented water surrounded by candles, as stipulated in the spell. It was tantalizing to know their love was just outside, it was easy to pretend they were doing this together, just like when they were separated by time.



After the bath, they dried themselves thoroughly with the fluffy towels from Willow's collection, and massaged the oil carefully from the ankle to thigh and then up their bodies and to their arms and hands.



When Willow had finished with her bath and returned to the living room tightly wrapped in a robe, she was pleasantly surprised to find that Tara had prepared a circle for the anointing ritual. Dried herbs and a quintet of blue candles marking the space.



Tara extended her hands and wordlessly invited Willow into the circle, where they sat with legs crossed and facing each other.



Willow placed the oil between them and dipped her fingers inside the jar, careful not to spill any of the precious infusion. She touched Tara's neck, then jaw, then worked slowly up to the blonde's cheeks, nose, eyes and forehead.



Tara in the meantime was mimicking Willow's action, with the same devotion and at the same pace. At first, their gaze never left the other, but as their mutual caresses traveled up to the eyes both closed them at the same time. Yet their hands never stopped.



They finished at the crown of the head, and with eyes still closed, breathed deeply as they felt the full effect of the blessing. They allowed the scent of their joining to wash over them, until they were immersed in the sensation. The soothing scent of the herb, the calming tranquility of the oil, and the impending sense of a sacred union: the unmistakable musk of intense arousal.



As the awareness grew and even before the spell dissipated fully Willow had peeled her own robe off with one hand and with the other ripped Tara's shirt down the middle exposing her breasts for the first time. Feeling a warm gush from her center at the sight, she immediately descended upon them feasting on one nipple after another.



Tara's shock at how fast Willow had pounced on her was rapidly compensated by wave after wave of pleasure as Willow touched and nibbled on her skin. Skin that felt like thousands and millions of nerve endings had decided to come alive at the same moment. She threw her head back against the couch and arched her body upwards, increasing the contact between her breast and Willow's mouth.



Willow moved down Tara's body, placing soft kisses at every inch of skin she came into contact with. Her hands had moved underneath Tara's pants and she brought her eyes up to ask the question.



Tara answered by lifting her hips and allowing Willow to pull her pants and underwear off in one swift action. Willow then happily stripped the torn shirt from Tara's shoulders and shook her own robe off completely, Tara as delighted as Willow when she saw the other's naked form.



Tara straightened her legs and physically lifted Willow so the redhead sat on her lap, legs spread either side and they finally made contact, skin against skin. She took a long, passionate look at her lover, and seeing the excitement mirrored in deep green eyes, drove their lips together in a hungry kiss.



Willow wriggled her hips and slid down between her legs, opening her completely, though all so willingly. And for a brief moment, their wetness mingled as Willow's pussy slid along her opening, causing a exhilarating tremor to pass through from their clits up to the tip of their fingers and toes.



Then before she knew it Willow had two fingers inside her and was pumping away insistently. Her hips moved in an urgent rhythm as she urged Willow to take her deeper and faster. Her fingers reached for Willow but were guided away, she groaned in frustration.



"Shh, honey, shh," Willow soothed. "Just relax and let me."



"But want together," Tara growled, not too coherently.



"Plenty of time for that later," Willow assured her.



"Promise?" Tara whimpered.



"Promise," Willow sealed her promise by increasing the tempo, by then Tara was reduced to impassioned begging as her climax grew into a crescendo.



"Don't stop, don't stop, right ther-ahhhhh!" she let out a blood-curdling scream that tagged on the end of her pleas as she came hard, faster than she thought ever possible.



Willow's thumb brushed against her clit with an almost feather-like touch and she screamed again, arching her body up and almost throwing her lover off, her fingernails leaving scratch marks all over the redhead's back and shoulders. Willow ignored the pain and guided Tara down from her peak tenderly, both overcome with emotion, marveling at how seamless their union was.



Tara still felt limp but she was all too aware of her own need for Willow, to take her, to consume her, to bask in her essence. She reached up and cupped her lover's face with her hands and brought their lips together, seeking and was immediately granted entry. She traced her hands over Willow's arms, down the sides of her breasts, and round to her ass. She brought her fingers close over Willow's sex and was rewarded by a sensuous moan and tell-tale flood over her hands.



But just as Tara was about to slide inside, Willow captured her wrists, pulled them above her head and rested them on the couch. She trapped them together with her hand, tightening her grip as Tara initially struggled. She stroked her lover's hair and kissed her hard, letting her love permeate through the kiss. Tara had this totally adorable crinkle on her forehead when she frowned and she kissed her there too.



Tara stopped fighting against Willow's hold and looked up at the redhead with large, questioning eyes. Willow shifted slightly into a semi-kneeling position astride Tara and lowered her drenched pussy onto the blonde's thigh. Squelchy, she thought amusedly. Tara smiled, having instantly understood what she wanted, stiffened her thigh to give more friction and she rode it, bouncing and rubbing and pressing down and leaving a pool of desire dripping down Tara's inner thighs.



In no time at all she felt her insides clench and her clit throb as she approached orgasm. She let go and climaxed with a piercing roar, Tara holding her tightly in a loving embrace as she shook and writhed for several very long, utterly blissful, moments.



Finally she was spent and she collapsed on Tara, completed sated and tingly all over.



They met in another kiss, this one relaxed and leisurely, quietly murmuring words of affection that only they could hear.



Somehow they made the move to the bed and as Willow flipped the duvet over, their bodies automatically became entwined and it was hard to know which witch began and which one ended. Sleepy with the endorphin rush, they snuggled up even closer and fell asleep in each other's arms, for the first time in the rest of their lives.



The big words had yet to make an appearance. Words like Love and Commitment and Forever. Yet they already knew deep within their souls what the answers were, it was just a matter of verbalizing them. They had been on a journey of discovery, but the real journey, the one they would make together, was only just starting.



*****





The End

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 Post subject: Re: Common Areas - Summary
PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 9:45 am 
Thanks for the summary timeline it made everything perfectly clear.

I just sooooo happy :eatme :banana Tara and Willow together! SQUEE!!!







"I think when I cease to go to the bathroom, then I can call myself famous." -Amber Benson

"Anyone can be passionate, but it takes real lovers to be silly." -Rose Franken



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 Post subject: Re: Common Areas
PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 9:52 am 
:clap



Really a wonderful story, Watson...thanks for sharing it with us.



~Cyd




And I recall in spring

The perfume that the air would bring

to the indolent town ~Decemberists



Altered Shadows



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 Post subject: The End
PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 9:56 am 
Oh wow watson...that was just amazing.. :sob I loved the whole story from start to finish... I can't believe I waited so long to read this fic in the beginning... I'm feeling all sad that it's over... :sob But did I hear you mention there might be a sequel? Or was that just wishful thinking on my part? :pray



I loved everything about this last chapter...especially this line..



Quote:
"Baby, just let me get the door open, please," she groaned.




that doesn't seem like it would be the most romantic line...but to me it was the most romantic thing Willow could've said at that particular moment. I could feel the urgency between them...from Tara it was the urgency to touch and feel Willow...to kiss and taste her... And from Willow it was the urgency to experience all those things with Tara, but at the same time she needed to get the door open, and it just wasn't happening.



I really enjoyed this tale. Thank you for sharing it.



simply beautiful. :bow



xoxo

Emms



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 Post subject: Re: The End
PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 10:27 am 
Hey Watson,



First, again I want to thank you for continuing and then giving us this wonderful ending, although I'm always sad to see a fic end. But oh, did I hear the tinkling sounds of the word "sequel" uttered somewhere above me? Oh I love that sound. (Nudge-nudge, wink-wink)



Now I gotta say that I think a little bit of Hidden Bunny came out in this and boy, do I LOVE when that happens. I could just feel the love (although not yet verbalized, knew it was there) and the lust and urgency between them. Yes, they had so much time to make up for and now they have forever to do it.



Great job Watson, and thanks so much for sharing! :bow



Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara



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