Damn, step away for a day or two and now I'm backed up on drabble feedback!
Kate:SqueezeboxLoved the first two. Could Willow be anymore adorable in
Metaphor? And literal LOL for
Roommate. Poor Dawn, probably exhausted and traumatized from all the sex. I can see her all bedraggled, sitting there in a blue bathrobe nursing a cup of coffee. I mean, I'm all for loud sex, but hey, have a little respect for the people that live with you!
Breaking was an unexpected interpretation of the song. How kind of Tara, to be there for Willow, even after the lethe's bramble hit the fan.
The First Time Ever I Saw Your FaceI love the moment you chose for
Better. My partner and I love to reminsce about when we first met. We didn't really like each other, haha.
I love love love first kisses. The build up, the execution, the aftermath. I think one of the bravest things someone can do is initiate a first kiss. Well done.
First DateDancing - Tara spazzing? She's been hanging out with Willow too long. Heh. Funny to see her out of her element.
Nervous - So Willow, to overthink things. Nice break down of where they are in their relationship. I don' remember my partner and I's 'official' first date. Looking back, our first unconscious first date was seeing 'Star Wars: Episode I' then Mickey D's afterwards. I kept making her laugh and she kept spitting chunks of french fries at me. Ah, young love.
Intentions -
Quote:
Tara pulled out and opened a small box. “Forever and ever.”
Love how you squeezed that tiny bit of lyric in there.
Somewhere I BelongCan't Say a Word - Again, great job of taking a tiny little moment and filling it out nicely.
Rumspringa - My guess is that this set during the demon locator spell?
Hollow and Alone - Great insight into Willow's feelings. I like the realization that first and foremost, she has to do it for herself.
angie86: Glad those crazy flakes are helping you keep up! Yay drabbles!
Waiting - Silence from Willow is pretty powerful stuff. So much can be communicated through silence. Great job.
One-way - So true. Being vulnerable can be so hard sometimes.
Ours - aw, so sweet.
Deb: Yay! So glad you came and joined the party!
Just Words - Ooooh, burn! I can't imagine how hard it was for Tara to say that to Willow.
Smoky Courage - Fun! Love the image of W/T here, cause it's so out there. I'm guessing Will wasn't taking a drag from a menthol, heh. I'll have to remember to watch the Wizard of Oz Pink Floyd style next time I get batch of special brownies.
BabbleDrabble - Okay. I'm just going to stop writing now, cause this? Sheer perfection. (I lie, cause I have a some drabbei to post after this, but seriously, how can you follow the ultimate Willow babble?)
Kitty Kat Kate (as opposed to Crazy Three a Day Drabble Challenge Kate): Thanks for taking the plunge and writing some drabbles! I see that you're from the Ukraine, may I ask if English is a second language? I only ask because the sentence structure of some of your drabbles is a little off. If it is a second language, then bravo for jumping in the deep end to get your feet wet! Either way, I would suggest working with a beta. It never hurts to have a second eye look over your work.
That being said, the last drabble is my favorite.
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More drabbei!! I didn't quite make the required three for the last song. Sue me. These are all rated R, by the way.
Squeezebox - The Who
Mama's got a squeeze box she wears on her chest
And when Daddy comes home, he never gets no rest
'Cause she's playing all night and the music's all right
Mama's got a squeeze box, Daddy never sleeps at night
"Muff."
“Bajingo.”
“Snatch.”
“Honey pot.”
Xander fidgeted in his seat. Tara sat patiently, eyeing her friend with a cool gaze.
“Squeezebox?”
“You said that already.”
“Dammit!”
“Really? That’s all you’ve got?” Tara smiled and went for the kill. “Silk igloo. Velvet glove. Man in a canoe. See you next Thursday. Bearded Taco -”
“Alright, alright! You win!” Xander barked, raising his hands in surrender. He reached into his pocket and dropped a twenty on the counter, much to Tara’s delight.
“You didn't think you were going to win a va-jay-jay euphemism contest against a lesbian, did you Xander?” she teased.
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She goes in and out and in and out and in and out and in and out
“When do you do it?”
“In the morning, or late at night.”
“I prefer nooners.”
“Really? Not worried someone’ll come home?”
“No big. I just stop and finish later. I can’t just not finish.”
“Amen. If I go too long without doing it, I get a little crazy. Secret? I prefer doing it alone.”
“Really Tara?” An indignant Willow burst into the kitchen. “You didn’t seem to mind last night, when we . . . you know,” she huffed.
Buffy nearly spit out her juice.
“Sweetie, we were talking about meditation.”
“Oh.”
Tara smirked. ”What did you think we were talking about?”
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She goes, squeeze me, come on and squeeze me
Come on and tease me like you do
I'm so in love with you
Mama's got a squeeze box, Daddy never sleeps at night
Pool of jello.
That was the only way Willow could describe her current state. She clutched at the warm body next to her, amazed at how quickly it reignited her need.
You're turning into a regular horndog, Rosenberg. Is there such a thing as too much sex? she wondered. The shower, her dorm, Tara's dorm -
oh, the practice room! And that was just today.
Her hands began to wander the expanse of Tara’s body.
I wonder what would happen if I . . .There was a sharp intake of breath, then a moan.
“Took you long enough,” Tara purred.
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Phenomena - Yeah Yeah Yeahs
Don't touch kid, sleep with the lights on
Touch kid, how you surprise me
Now roll kid, knock your body off
Her voice is a contradiction: harsh, yet benevolent. It makes my body tingle.
“Have you been a good girl?”
(Clink)“Now listen: I will do what I want, when I want. Understand?”
(Clink)I feel her straddle my body. The contact is not enough.
(Smack)“Keep those hips on the bed! Do I have to repeat the rules again?"
I grit my teeth and shake my head.
“Good girl. Listen, and you will be rewarded.”
I hold my breath, aching for more contact, for more pressure, but I remain still.
“Now let’s have some fun.”
Birthday wishes are fucking awesome.
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Something like a phenomena, baby
You're something like a phenomena
Something like a phenomena, baby
You're gonna get your body off
Her leather coat ripples gracefully through the air as her kick finds its mark and connects with the vamp’s chin. Ducking under a flimsy punch, her stake hits home.
I feel my clit twitch as she saunters towards me. There is a distinct swagger in her step, and the half cocked grin on her face - damn. Turned on is an understatement. Wet panties much?
“What’d you think?”
“Incredible.”
“Thanks for hanging back, Will. I really wanted to test out the new moves Buffy taught me. Those lessons certainly paid off, don’t you think?”
“Absolutely.” In more ways than one.