I honestly can't believe it. I'm going to miss my daily reading after school. Though I suppose all good things have to come to an end, yes?
Though no pressure. Yay perfect way to end this fic, loved it. Going to miss it but amazing story.

Your stories are like an addiction and I'm the addict.
Bravo, great work. Thanks.
Could the third story incorporate food in their role-playing spicy talk?
You did the Catholic schoolgirl uniforms; now could they be prisoner and praeceptor?
I truly enjoy your writing. It's a joy to know that there will be a wonderful update each and every day and I hope you continue it.
Aw. It's all over.I honestly can't believe it.
I like writing every day!But what a beautiful way to end their story.
Though no pressure.
I know I don't leave feedback after every update but I love your writing.
)

.any chance of a new story soon? I miss my everyday update.

“I’m done,” she said, looking down at the wide-eyed Tara, “Now can I see your boobies?”
“Now, Tara, you should know that panties are part of the required uniform. Regulations say that if I suspect our uniform code is not being held up, I have to confirm and…discipline as necessary.”
Tara sighed again and let go of the fabric, letting it fall down her shoulders so she was standing in nothing but the tie and socks.
“I’m just glad you kept that uniform…” Willow said, waggling her eyebrows.
Tara smirked and ran her fingers along the blue material of her tie.
“You know, I bet this is exactly what the nuns at my school had in mind when they choose these.”
I’ll admit that, yes, I have a slight obsession with your breasts-”
“You’ve named them.”
“Snuggles and Ms. Jiggle like their names, thank you very much and it seemed inappropriate to not at least acknowledge their presence when I spend so much time playing with them.
“Support is very good,” Mr. Ramos replied cordially, for the first time noticing the conjoined hands of the two girls in front of him.
He smiled, thinking of his own boyfriend, Eric and inwardly chuckled that he hadn’t noticed that his best debate student was clearly in love with the blonde, she attended every debate religiously and he often saw they walking around school together. He figured that Eric would tease him even more about his very apparent lack of ‘gaydar’ when he told him and regarded the couple in front of him again.

This is my longest feedback ever.
Okay, so confession first here. I actually opened up a word doc to keep track of my feedback for this fic!
How in the hell did I miss this one before now?
My god, the early romance between these two is so, so very sweet!
And then, good googa-mooga, once they start on the loving. What was it, three NC-17 chapters in a row? I feel like my insides got filled with warm pudding. And that is a very, very good thing, lemme tell you.
And I busted out laughing like an idiot! Holy shit, that was funny!! All I could think of was…I’m Willow…boobies…ummm..boobies. And you made me want a cupcake too.
When I got to the end of page nine I was practically bouncing up and down in my seat thinking “Catholic school girl outfit, oh my god, Catholic school girl outfit!!!”
And that’s when I stopped to start this doc. My god, dear merciful goddess, all forces of forceful stuff, please please let there be Catholic school girl outfit. Will return when I find out if I’m right. (:blush tense pause)
Once again I say…holy shit. I love this fic!
Oh my god. I am such a perv.
Me too…and LOL mother-fucking LOL. I am a potty mouth tonight.
Aww..hooray for LGBT teachers—I wish there were more of us! And…heh..total missed opportunity in the bathroom with just the socks…
I love Tara’s mom! “Way to stick it to the man” LOL
Aww...and the ending is so sweet, perfect epilogue. I don't care if it's wrong of me to ask, because this piece is so, so perfect, but I'm gonna ask anyway...one-shot follow-up? Please please??


his is in the running for my favorite Laragh fic...though all your fics are in a neck and neck race--a very sweet, hot, smutty race...
We spazzes have to stick together.



I grok Spock!


You must have pride!!







kimmy_s wrote:Hi Laragh
Stalking you again lol. This was a beautiful story. I love Jen she was an amazing support for the girls I wish I had a mum like her growing up *sigh*.
I really love the way you write, its funny, with a little bit of geek, a little bit of spaz and a LOT of smut (the Catholic schoolgirl/Teacher scene gives me a lot of ideas and will forever stay in the smutty part of my brain lol). You also incorporate so much of the Willow and Tara we know and love but also make them your own.
Kim


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