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Re: Part 45

Postby Puff » Fri Sep 05, 2003 4:21 pm

Today?!? Bloody hell that's some start to the ritual. Well let's hope that Dawn doesn't do something stupid and that Glory doesn't figure out who the key is.



I really liked (because enjoyed is not the word) the talk in the bedroom between Willow and Tara. I think they are right to let Dawn be strong and do the right thing if it comes down to it. I loved the comment about Willow sometimes wantting to be center stage before Tara. But that now they have their own story.



Thank you so much for this Mary. I am really enjoying it. Of course I can't wait to read the next part and find out if any of the other scoobies figured out the ritual is today :)



So, the day started and I knew my name and had my pants on. So far, so good. Yay.
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Re: Part 45

Postby The Rose24 » Fri Sep 05, 2003 8:02 pm

Ugh!! A cliffhanger. You know how to keep me on edge don't you? Time for the showdown.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Part 45

Postby nika » Fri Sep 05, 2003 8:14 pm

Great leaping lizards and binky! What a cliff to be left hanging from.:eek

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Re: Part 45

Postby SySnootles » Fri Sep 05, 2003 9:03 pm

The brilliance in this story is unbelievable.



Such an excellent twist in such a enigmatic riddle. Incredible writing once again. Brava!



I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. And it's not the most comfortable position, so if you could move it along, I would be most appreciative. :wink

Catie



"The purpose of life is not to be happy - but to matter, to be productive, to be useful, to have it make a difference that you lived at all." -- Leo Roston

SySnootles
 


Re: Part 45

Postby good2cats » Fri Sep 05, 2003 9:42 pm

"...But girl,don't they warn ya,it pours,man it pours..."
"...I'm out of my head..." waiting for the next update .I hate cliff hangers, I am more into instant gratification.I know that it makes me sound cheap but what can I say I'm "...Out of self respect..."
"...I'm under loved..."but that a whole other story.Keep up the outstanding work Mary .In spite of my frustration I'm loving the story.
Be well,Karen

good2cats
 


Re: Part 45

Postby russ » Fri Sep 05, 2003 9:44 pm

Just a quick comment, as I'm in the midst of turning a plethora of tomatoes into a gallon of sauce. Fascinating to listen to the gang chasing down blind alleys in their quest to decode the riddle. So many theories, so little to go on. As Tara said, it's all speculation; and, while interesting, it's all wrong anyway. Anya did come up with a new money-making technique, so all was not lost. Shame on Giles for encouraging her. And a great line from Buffy, too: "a veritable kettle of mettle." I must find an occasion to use that one.



Good to know I'm not the only one who is bothered by the fact that in the Buffyverse all supernatural beings are evil. Demons, never angels. Hell gods, never Heaven Gods. Seems kind of unbalanced somehow.



Willow & Tara's discussion of right & wrong could spark debate that could go on all night. I can see the point Tara made, but have to think that if something feels wrong, it probably is wrong. It may be necessary sometimes to choose the lesser of two evils, but while giving one's life to save others is noble, taking one's life just doesn't seem right. Illogical maybe, but there you go.



I'm growing fearful that someone we care about will end up sacrificing their life to stop Glory. There seem to be many possible candidates, and none of them would be easy to lose. Well, hopefully I'm wrong and you'll find another way.



Now, about that cliffhanger; I just hope the next installment comes quickly, it's darned uncomfortable here on the edge of my chair.



Russ

russ
 


Re: Gods Served and Abandoned

Postby Tibbs » Sat Sep 06, 2003 12:21 am

So..



I started reading this at work around 4 in the afternoon today and I was hooked. I accomplished nothing and I stayed at work for about a half an hour after we closed, just because I didn't want to stop reading yet. When I finally un-glued myself from the screen, I raced home, and even missed my Fav show " Dead like Me" to continue reading. Now, about 10 hours later I am all caught up.



My comments: ...Wow.



There is not really much more I can say at this point. It's just.. Wow. What a fabulous story line. Genius even. I love everything you go into. Beverly and Tanya, great characters. A Dawn, I can actually read and like. Don't even get me started about how much I love this Willow and Tara.



Great work, just... wow.



Hopefully more soon.



Kudo's

Tibbs

:pride



Tibbs
 


Re: Part 45

Postby chilled monkey » Sat Sep 06, 2003 3:15 am

russ: You most certainly are not alone. I also really disliked the fact that all supernatural creatures on the show were evil, and that the 'forces' of good seemed to consist solely of the Slayer. That is another one of the ways in which 'Charmed' kicks the crap out of Buffy. On 'Charmed' there are angels, whitelighters, muses etc.



I really like Willow realising that Buffy's opinion isn't the only one that counts in these matters and that it's Dawn's decision. Willow is quite right in that her and Tara's story is the most important.



Great update!

chilled monkey
 


Re: Part 45

Postby justin » Sat Sep 06, 2003 3:24 am

Wow, that really was brilliant :bow



This bit was great



Quote:
“Besides, it is a school night,” Beverly added.



“Exactly,” Willow said, nodded emphatically.



“Willow—I was being ironic.”



“Oh…right. Of course. Irony. How very ironic of you.”




:rofl



I liked the talk between Willow and Tara about Dawn wanting to sacrifice herself. Though I have to take exception at Tara saying it wasn't about Buffy. Doesn't she realise that everything is about Buffy. She is the alpha and omega of their existance. They are just planets orbiting around her sun.



Sorry I went a bit mad there for a moment :p I've taken my pills and I'm all better now



The ending was a bit scary. I mean if this is the day of the ritual does this mean the story is going to end soon?



Please say it ain't so :cry say it ain't so :pray

Anya in a wimple...I'd pay full admission for that. Gods Served And Abandoned - by Antigone Unbound

justin
 


Re: Part 45

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Sep 06, 2003 7:13 am

It's all nice and good to have the suicide thing be Dawn's decision, however they're witholding that information from Buffy thereby denying her any chance to do or say anything about it. I'll agree that to some extend it should be Dawn's decision, sure... but a little bit more talking with other people who WILL be affected would be nice. (and I don't even *like* Buffy that much:-). The witholding thing just bugs me..



Ah well, lots of things to like and smile about in this update. Giles silencing Anya using one of the few things that mean something to her.... money :) . I esp. liked Willow's response to Beverly's comment about it being a 'school night'. I can soooo see Willow nod her head enthiousisasticly on that :D .



I only picked up on the rain/tears thingie a few lines before Tara did. Must be getting slow :-). Anyway, that should make things easy right ? Just keep Dawn safe from Glory until the day ends (which will be fairly soon since it's afternoon already).... just another 8 hours or so, should be workable. But as usual when I don't see many problems in the future they tend to appear anyway...



It's nice how I always can smile while reading your updates, I like that.



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: Part 44/45

Postby Vampivy » Sat Sep 06, 2003 11:58 pm

I’m starting to get the shakes when I don’t read ‘Gods’ updates. Mary, is this normal?

Seriously though. I just realized that we are at part 45 and all of a sudden I feel like things are moving too fast.



“Tears without sorrow…” Her voice shook slightly. “The day will day start with weeping and end with weeping –”

“But the weeping holds no sorrow,” Willow finished, her eyes widening in comprehension. They stared at each other in silence for a long moment.

In the front seat, Beverly had pulled off to the side of the road. Now she and Tanya were looking at them, stunned.

“It’s rain,” Tanya breathed.

Willow’s eyes never left Tara. “Which means that today’s the day.”




Maybe I’m just a wuss, but I was actually finding some comfort in the “Unknown”. Now that the day has arrived, I have to admit I’m a bit nervous.



Let the drama begin!!! I can be brave, I swear:eek . The greatest thing about what’s to come is that I have not the slightest idea of what that will entail. Ok, so maybe there will be some similarities to what happened on the show, but this story from the get go if anything has been original, with familiar characters of course, but Binky? That was just, special:) .



So, I’m off (not in a Glory kinda way. Maybe) to make some popcorn and find a comfy seat cause I know these next few updates are gonna be a bumpy ride. Hmm…I wonder if I should strap myself in too. Just in case.:blush



Asta luego Mary.



Patty



~ Darkness, Imprisoning me. All that I see, absolute horror. I cannot live. I cannot die. Trapped in myself. Body, my holding cell. - Metallica ~

Vampivy
 


Re: Kind Kittens

Postby TemperedCynic » Sun Sep 07, 2003 12:49 am

Sings "...but girl, don't they warn ya, it pours, man, it pours!"



The moment that the riddle discussion didn't include something as basic as rain, I knew what was coming. What I didn't expect was how quickly it got here. So, the battle will enjoin anon, with Dawn's life held in the balance. The question now is: how close will this tale keep to canon? It's shaping up to be an incredible ride.



Glorious, as always, Mary. (yup, pun intended) ;)


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Feedback

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Sun Sep 07, 2003 1:31 pm

First of all, thanks to everyone for taking the time to write in such great feedback. You are the world; you are the children…



Washi: Glad you enjoyed the semi-denouement (because we still don’t know about that “Love’s Eye” bit, do we?). Yeah, the talk b/w our girls re: Dawn’s decision felt important to me, too. Rock on, Washi! (Notice how I’m still not saying “Thank you,” as per your original request!)



Jixer: You know, the conversation earlier b/w Willow, Tara, and Dawn felt so important, on so many different levels, that I felt our girls would need to talk about it some more. I also think it’s important to emphasize that in this story (and in Kitty-Land), Willow and Tara are never peripheral.



Thank you for the kind words re: the treatment of these characters. I think that many of us feel they deserve better than what they ultimately received.



Hope you have a great weekend, Jixer, and thanks again for your feedback.



Puff, the Magic Wimple: Holy weather-based revelation indeed, Nun-Woman! You know, I had such a hard time writing that, b/c I didn’t want it to be ridiculously obvious and yet I also wanted there to be something of a progression to the realization. Does that make any sense? Anyway, I’m glad you’re enjoying this. I’m scheduled to have internet connected to my home computer on Wednesday of next week, so it’ll definitely be easier to write and post. Thanks for the support, Puff!



Rose: Well, it wasn’t a total cliffhanger, was it? I mean, now they know the timeline, or at least the first part of it. Of course, we’re not sure where Dawn is right now and what that whole “Love’s Eye” part means and…Yeah, you’re right—it’s a cliffhanger. Thanks for reading, Rose!



Nika: Wait—you mean Binky’s a leaping lizard? Damn…I never saw that coming. I promise that the cliffhanging won’t endure for very long—I’ll be posting an update early next week. Thanks!



Catie: I always love getting your feedback—both kind and droll…great combination. I promise that you will be delivered from the edge of your seat to a nice, expositional landing sometime w/in the next 2-3 days. Thanks for your kind words, Catie—I’ve been working on this story for a long time, obviously; when I started, I didn’t know how long it would go and I’ve made some decisions along the way to keep writing. Feedback like yours helps me trust that those decisions were good ones. Have a great weekend!



Karen: God, I totally get the instant gratification part. I’m trying to walk a line b/w keeping a certain suspense level present and not leaving you kind Kittens feeling like I’m just jerking you around. I promise that you’ll get more very soon.



I was glad you got the song reference. It’s old, but it received a truck-load of play in the US when it came out, so I was hoping there would be some recognition.



Thanks for the kind words, Karen. By the way—I woke up this morning to the sound of two of my cats going at it hammer and tongs. I drag my butt outta bed to find them fighting over a mouse that had made its way into the house. (I live in an old farmhouse out in the country.) The mouse had already departed this plane of existence, and I had to separate Scout and Tadpole from the spoils of victory right there in the living room. Yikes!



Russ: First of all, thanks for making my stomach growl; when I read your first sentence I realized I haven’t eaten lunch yet. Do you have your own garden? Mine’s coming in and the beans and tomatoes especially are threatening a hostile takeover of the immediate vicinity.



I really enjoyed your thoughts on deities, as well as good and evil. Yes, it felt frustrating and unrealistic to have supernatural beings be so disproportionately evil, at least according to estimations of equal likelihood. Why shouldn’t there be Heaven gods as well? I’m actually looking forward to any thoughts that other Kittens have as well, b/c I’ve noticed that the readers on this board tend to think deeply about such things.



Good and evil…ah, elusive concepts, yes? I think the whole idea of whether something feels good or not gets tied up in the very human (and perfectly understandable) desire to have things work out the way we want them too. Dawn’s terrified that her desire to live will interfere w/ her desire to do the right thing, and she has some idea of how she or others could talk her away from the latter toward the former. Too, I think the phrase “feels good” has such diverse meanings. In one sense, it can refer to subjective enjoyment; in another, it means an inner sense of moral or philosophical rightness. Trying to disentangle the two in such a powerful situation would be challenging at best, at least for me.



I’m glad you liked how the riddle unfolded. I wanted to have them discussing the various possibilities, each of them struggling so mightily to solve the puzzle. But in fact, until the solution presented itself, no one could have been expected to “get” it.



Thanks for the great thoughts, Russ, and enjoy that sauce. (By the way, feel free to invite me over for pasta.)



Tibbs: Hey, welcome to the story! I’m honored (not to mention impressed) at your perseverance and durability in reading this all in one sitting. (As an aside, I’ve heard good things about “Dead Like Me” so I think I’ll check it out.) I was psyched to hear that the characters are working for you. I’ve mentioned elsewhere that in anything I read, I’ll stick w/ the story through pretty much anything so long as the characters (or at least some of them) speak to me, feel genuine and engaging. So it’s gratifying to read feedback like yours. Again, thanks for taking the time to get involved with this story and sending such incredibly kind words. Hope you have a great weekend, Tibbs.



Chilled Monkey: Seems like you, Russ, and I all have similar thoughts on the way that evil so resoundingly outnumbered good on the show. I suspect that the writers did that in order to emphasize the “outnumbered but brave and resourceful” aspect of the core group, but it grew old after awhile. Obviously, I share your feelings about Willow and Tara being peripheral to absolutely no one! Thanks for the feedback, CM.



Justin: First of all, let me say THANK YOU: I’ve made it as a closing line in someone’s postings! I know you can’t see it, but I’m blushing. I suspect it’s a light crimson hue…OK, so I just cracked up at your “Buffy as alpha and omega” diatribe. God, that’s how it felt, wasn’t it? Ah, but we wise Kittens know better, don’t we? Glad you enjoyed the update, Justin, and as for the story’s conclusion…Well, it’s looming on the horizon, but since I love posting to this board so much, I can’t imagine staying away for long after that. Thanks for the great feedback!



Grimmy: Yeah, it’s up for debate whether Buffy deserves to know or not; however, our girls made a promise based on their assessment of who had the greatest investment and who would pay the greatest price. I think one of the things that’s tricky in situations like this is how quickly everyone has to make their decisions: Dawn’s asks them to promise they’ll keep silent, while everyone’s waiting downstairs. As a confirmed hedger, I’d be a goner in that world.



Actually, I’m glad you didn’t get the rain piece. I spent about three hours playing around w/ different ways of writing that section…made me crazy! I don’t know how many people picked up on it as soon as they read the word “downpour,” but I’m hoping there was at least a couple seconds’ worth of uncertainty.



Glad you find some smile-worthy things in the updates…I figure there’s enough stress in this story and the big, bad world that a few grins can’t hurt. Plus, I seem unable to stay away from at least a little levity…



Have a great weekend, Grimmy, and again—thanks for helping me navigate the translation process b/w writing programs.



Patty: Getting the shakes, eh? I tend to get that way re: coffee, so I’m probably not much comfort in that regard. All I can say is that I’m psyched you’re enjoying this so much. Yeah, I debated whether to delay the onset of the ritual’s arrival date or not. In the end, I decided that I wanted to keep a certain momentum going and so opted for this pacing instead. I plan on having another update on Tuesday, wherein you’ll find out more about the riddle. Thanks for the great feedback, Patty!



Tempered Cynic: Well, what can we say? You’re a little smarter than the Scoobies, none of whom considered rain. And as to canon adherence—all will be revealed…Thanks for the glorious feedback, TC.



More later,

Mary






AntigoneUnbound
 


Re: Kind Kittens

Postby Grimaldi » Mon Sep 08, 2003 8:09 am

great update :)



now that the day of the ritual is here, i guess its time for the scoobies to get the hell out of Dodge before Glory uses her limited intelligence to figure out who the key is

I'm not stealing, I'm just taking things without paying for them. In what twisted dictionary is that stealing?
Why do we have to resort to non-violence? Couldn't we just kick their asses instead?

Grimaldi
 


Re: Kind Kittens

Postby shuyaku » Mon Sep 08, 2003 1:05 pm

Oy! I almost missed leaving feedback. Although, I have been diligently reading, I just haven't had a chance to formulate something coherent for you. I may need to be spanked... Oops, wrong thread ;)



I'm back in school and taking online classes that require me to post 12 times a week - argh! And they have to be quality posts, defined as 40 words or more that adds directly to the topic, addresses another student's question or some kinda crap like that. So please forgive me as my brain is a little mushy.



As I mentioned earlier, I sooo did not get the riddle. I totally and completely agree with Willow on this - "What kind of riddle was that?" Willow scowled. "No numbers; no algorithms that I could find…It was all just--just words." Exactly!!



Fine job of all the scoobies discussing the possibilities of the riddle. As much as I almost hate to admit this - I like that your scoobies have brains. And, oh yeah, they actually use them. I seriously doubt the soon to be classic line - "We’ve offered a veritable kettle of mettle over the last five years. I for one believe that our mettle represents the Gold Standard in both quality and durability" would have ever had the proverbial chance in hell of being uttered in canon.



I'm glossing over the W/T talk as most of it has already been said. I definitely agree it is something they would touch on again. Do I think not telling Buffy is a good idea? Not really. But I also think they made a promise they won't break. One they were kinda forced into making, but made all the same.



I think I got this part of the riddle around Yeah—it’s been coming down all day. Told ya I was quick - hee hee.



Great update Mary!

-shuyaku

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Re: Kind Kittens

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Mon Sep 08, 2003 6:16 pm

Hello, all. Look for a post tomorrow (Tuesday). Look for the Cubs in the National League Central, drizzle over the southeast US, and the union label.



Thank you.




Grimaldi: Now, can you really see everybody headin' outta Dodge? That would (a) make too much sense, and (b) make for a pretty anti-climactic next scene. Thanks for the good thoughts, Grimaldi.



Shuyaku: First of all, may I just say how crazy-making the online class is. Yikes! Ah, the world of higher learning...



Don't feel bad about the riddle--I was glad to know that it wasn't glaringly obvious. You got it about when I was hoping people would get it. So you prefer the numbers, eh? And yet you and I get along so well! Whoda thunk it? I'm glad you enjoyed the "kettle of mettle" comment...And yes, I'm philosophically opposed to writing characters that I wouldn't want to spend more than five minutes w/: even if they're ethically questionable, they gotta have some smarts. Thanks for taking the time to send the feedback, Shuyaku. Sounds like things are really hectic right now. Hang in there.



Later, mes gators.

Mary


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Re: Kind Kittens

Postby russ » Mon Sep 08, 2003 8:14 pm

Hi Mary



Do I have a garden? Through a strange combination of circumstances, I found myself tending 3 gardens this summer, with the predictable result that all have been sadly neglected. The beans were pretty much a disappointment, but I've more tomatoes than baskets to put them in. Combine that with a good crop of onions, garlic, & peppers, and you've got sauce.



I agree with your response to Chilled Monkey re the writers' motivation for all supernatural being evil on the show. It's probably unfair to compare the work of those writing to a deadline for a weekly 40-minute episode with our highly skilled Pens writers, who have leisure to go into things in depth and detail. But hey, we do it anyway, and your work is better!



To us, of course, Willow & Tara are central, and were the heart of the series. However, we must realize that there are poor deluded folk out there who don't share this view, and think that the series is primarily about the person it's named for. We must try to be tolerant.



Like Shuyaku, I was totally stumped by the riddle, and still have no clue what the unexplained part is about. However, I have figured out the tears part. Maybe I like Xander because I identify with his lightning intellect.



Congratulations on your upcoming home connection -- hope it goes smoothly.



Any time you're in the neighbourhood (halfway between Toronto & Detroit), let me know & I'll have the pasta pot a-bubbling.



Russ

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Re: Part 45

Postby Patches » Mon Sep 08, 2003 10:39 pm

Mary, oh gracious and gifted of the Muses – I am speechless, which is okay really, because all I have to do is write. God, you amaze me, you really do. I hope you never grow tired of reading this, ‘cause I don’t think I’ll ever grow tired of err, saying/writing it. Anya’s dialogue and her exchanges, especially with Giles are priceless; well the whole work is priceless. But, I would gladly part with my weekly book money (I’m on a one book a week ration so as not to do things like, um put us out on the street) to see your work in print – and have a signed, published copy on my bookshelf. So, you think that’s a big enough hint, yet HUMM? :-)



I knew I was right ... that is, I hate riddles and never, ever figure out the answer, and am usually left mindlessly slapping my forehead when the wildly obvious answer is revealed – the riddle does Sophocles proud – touché!



To unabashedly steal a line from Star Trek II (and god, I hope there are still people who liked/remember the original – Melville was just too dry), “The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few, or the one.” What an emotional pressure cooker you’ve given us with Dawn, Tara and Willow. However, unlike our good friend Spock, who was left with only one choice, you’ve written into Dawn’s character, and overall situation, an ambiguity that makes such a sacrifice much less cut and dried. It’s a dilemma, most certainly. The consequences of a wrong choice are difficult to imagine. The whole question of good and evil/right and wrong is such a contextual and subjective topic. It’s interesting, the references to suicide with respect to Dawn. I’m more accustomed to hearing it phrased, in this type of situation, as a sacrifice (the ‘ultimate’ sacrifice). Does thinking of this type of act as a sacrifice somehow make it more palatable than referring to it as suicide, when the result is the same? Makes me go, humm, and humm again. However, before I get too far OT with this ... rain – D’Oh! of course – although, haven’t you noticed, it _always_ rains on Easter weekend! As for the rest of the riddle, many more humms, and a cynic might say, what's Love got to do with it? ;-)



Quite the dramatic ending you gave us with this chapter. Can’t wait to pick up the pieces tomorrow, but please feel free to drag things out as _looong_ as possible. I know I’ll be in serious withdrawal when this story wraps. I have to warp up now, I have a kitty cat who’s typing skills are none too polished demanding equal time at the keyboard. Jjlk;ljdsfjl;j (that’s her, Lexxi, getting her lk;jjjjjjjkjj in.)



Cheers!!

Patches



You know I've heard about people like me. But I never made the connection. They walk one road to set them free, And find they've gone the wrong direction. But there's no need for turning back 'cause all roads lead to where I stand. And I believe I'll walk them all No matter what I may have planned

Edited by: Patches at: 9/8/03 9:42 pm
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Two more replies

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Tue Sep 09, 2003 1:50 pm

Hello all. Just a couple more replies to your lovely feedback and then I'm posting Part 46. Thanks.



Russ: Well, I'm in the middle of Pennsylvania, so it might not be too far outta my way to hit you up for some o' that sauce! I had a good bean crop, actually--go figure. Now my raspberries are coming in and that's just a treat unto itself.



You make a good point about the others who were not so much evil as misguided in their writing of Buffy-verse. Of course, they had to attend to the series' titular character, even if all of us realized where the real story dwelt. And you know, I don't think I'm going too far out on a limb here when I say that I'm confident you could outstrip Xander in the intellectual prowess department--your posts prove that abundantly. Enjoy the sauce!



Patches: Girlfriend, who am I to stop a woman from using the accolades of her choice? I'm just psyched you're enjoying this so much! I love seeing your name here b/c I know I'm going to think and smile as I read it--always a lovely combination!



Your questions about the nature of Dawn's actions are good ones. There's definitely something about the word "suicide" that brings us up short, strips away the gentle poignance of "sacrifice." Remove everything else, and she's choosing to end her own life. Ah, but it's that removal that's so tricky, isn't it? As you very astutely point out, everything has its context, and we can no more remove that and retain a thing's meaning that we can strip a person of her family and say they haven't influenced her.



So you're on a one-book-a-week ration, are you? You are to be commended for your dedication to the household's well-being! Glad you enjoyed the riddle--it was kinda fun to think of it.



And what happens now? Tell the cats to gather 'round and prepare to type in their learned feedback! Thanks for your great support, Patches--it's so nice to have you back.



Mary

AntigoneUnbound
 


Part 46

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Tue Sep 09, 2003 2:13 pm

GODS SERVED AND ABANDONED

PART 46

Disclaimer: THINGS I OWN
: ’93 Saturn Coupe; 6 cats; 2 ball gloves; a sense of what’s important. THINGS I DON’T OWN: Willow and Tara; a failed TV pilot; the inclination to overestimate my own creative genius.

*****

In Tara’s opinion, the 15-minute drive to the Magic Box was fourteen and a half minutes too long.

“Do you think the others have figured it out?” Willow asked, her brow furrowed anxiously.

“From what I’ve seen, I’d vote ‘yes’ on Giles, ‘maybe’ on Buffy, and ‘no’ for the others,” Tanya replied, gripping Beverly’s hand on the gear shift. “And if Giles did figure it out, he couldn’t tell you because none of you hip southern California kids have cell phones. Blows my mind.”

Tara didn’t reply; she had thought it somewhat odd herself, on more than one occasion, but had been reluctant to make an issue of it.

“Are we completely sure this is it?” Beverly asked, catching Tara’s eye in the rearview mirror.

“I think so,” she answered, silently willing her aunt to disregard all but the most important traffic laws. “I don’t see how it can’t be. The day opened with rain--tears without sorrow--and it’s supposed to rain all day. That alone is so unusual in this region that it’s suspicious.”

“I should have figured it out sooner,” Willow said angrily. “I mean, I wake up, it’s raining, I comment on the rain…and then I skip off to class like Cousin Marti, cheerfully working at the Kwik-Serve after barely graduating high school.”

“You have a Cousin Marti?” Tara asked softly.

“We don’t talk about her much,” Willow muttered out of the side of her mouth.

Moments later, the four of them tumbled out of the rental sedan and pounded on the door of the Magic Box. A large “Closed” sign was hanging crookedly in the window.

“What if he’s not here?” Willow asked, looking worriedly at Tara. Within seconds, though, they heard footsteps from within and then Giles had opened the door and stood aside to let them in. A quick glance at his face told Tara that the Watcher had also solved the first part of the prophecy.

“I can’t believe we didn’t think of this sooner,” he muttered, ushering them back to the library section of the store.

“Yeah, let’s all spend lots of time beating ourselves up about that,” Tanya interjected. “That always leads to good things.”

“Point taken,” he nodded, giving her a reluctant smile.

“When did you figure it out?” Tara asked, shrugging out of her jacket.

“Early this morning, after the second customer had remarked on the weather, right on the heels of the first customer having done so.” He shook his head. “I suppose I’m still in something of an English mentality where weather is concerned--rain hardly shocks me. But then I realized that it should do so, especially rain of this kind and of this duration.”

“Have you talked to Buffy?” Willow asked, taking a seat beside Tara and reaching for her hand.

“The man doesn’t have me on speed dial for nothing,” came the reply from behind them. Buffy was standing in the doorway to the training room; her right hand clutching a sword, her left resting on Dawn’s shoulder.

She doesn’t know whether to attack or defend.

“Hey Dawnie,” Tara called softly. “How you doing?”

Dawn’s smile carried not a speck of humor. “You know that feeling you get before the biggest, scariest things you have to do? Where you’re terrified of what could happen, but you also know that it’s almost over and you won’t have to worry about it anymore? Multiply that times about ten.”

Tara thought that the teenager looked almost nauseous. Instinctively, she held out her hand. Dawn stepped forward and took it quickly, looking at Tara with a fierce, quiet desperation.

“We’ll keep you safe,” Tara said simply.

Whereas Dawn looked terrified, Buffy looked as though she wanted to rip the store apart just to keep from exploding.

“So what happened?” Willow asked her best friend.

“Giles called me at about 9:15. As soon as we hung up, I went to school and picked up Dawn.”

“Uh, Buffy,” Willow interrupted with obvious hesitation. “Do you think that was the best thing to do? I mean, I totally get wanting to have her near you; I just wonder if it’s good to--you know…have her near you.”

Tara almost expected Buffy to lash out at Willow for asking; thankfully, though, the Slayer had apparently struggled with the question as well.

“I know,” she replied slowly, moving into the room to take a seat next to Dawn. “Part of thought I should keep her at school, as if nothing’s out of the ordinary, although the day would’ve passed even slower than it already has. But then I was afraid that Glory would be desperate and might kidnap her or something to try to force us to tell her who the Key is.”

“Irony of ironies,” Beverly commented, grinning at Dawn, who managed a slightly more credible smile in return.

“In the end, I decided to pick her up and come here. We’ve been hiding out ever since, basically trying to convince Time to pick up the pace a little.” Buffy reached out and smoothed Dawn’s long brown hair over her shoulder.

“Do Xander and Anya know?” Willow asked.

“No, not yet,” Giles replied, taking a slow sip of his tea. “We actually decided to use the phone as little as possible, although I honestly don’t see Glory being patient enough to master the intricacies of phone tapping.”

“What about Binky?” Tara asked suddenly. “Does he know anything?”

“No, he isn’t aware of this,” Giles quickly assured her. “He’s still in my bathroom, securely tied with only enough flexibility to graze on a waffle, smothered with syrup and eaten with his fingers. Honestly, the little wretch made the most appalling noises…”

“And there’s been no sign of Glory?” Beverly asked.

“Nothing,” Giles shook his head. “I closed the store, because I thought it might throw her off if she thought we weren’t around. So far, it’s been just the three of us and now you.”

“I’m glad you’re here,” Dawn murmured, looking at Tara. “Makes me feel safer.”

“Even though I’m not much in the fight department?” Tara asked with a small grin.

“We’ll let Buffy take care of the butch stuff,” Dawn replied, nodding at her sister. “You’re in charge of the more subtle things.”

“As frightening as all of this is,” Giles was saying, “I really do think we’re in a very good position. It’s almost four o’clock, and Glory is no closer to the Key’s identity than she was two weeks ago.”

“OK, so do we have any ideas about when the window of opportunity closes?” Beverly asked, glancing around the room.

“We now know that the day of the ritual will start with rain and end with rain. From what I surmised, Glory can conduct the ritual during any part of this day, until love’s eye looks upon her.”

“We still don’t know what ‘love’s eye’ refers to, though,” Willow said in frustration.

“But all we have to do is keep her away from the Key for the rest of the day, right?” Tanya asked.

“I dunno…That’s way too vague for me,” Buffy replied, shaking her head. “I wanna know what the second part means, so when I finally exhale, I’m not looking over my shoulder.”

“I agree,” Giles murmured. “The more precisely we can ascertain the ritual’s closing, the more confident we can be in our plans.” He waved loosely at the pile of old books scattered about the room. “I’ve been researching all day, but to no avail.”

“Well, we were all thinking in terms of emotional metaphors before,” Tara pointed out, “and it turns out we were way off base there. I think we need to be very careful about our assumptions this time.”

“Indeed,” Giles nodded. “Love, and love’s eye, may have nothing at all to do with the emotion of love.”

“Above all,” Buffy interjected, “we keep the Key as far away from Glory as possible. That’s our main objective, right?”

The nods of assent that greeted this assertion were cut short by a harsh clanging as the shop door was slammed back against the wall.

“OK, I am sick of this!” Glory’s voice was equal parts fury and petulance.

For Tara, the next ten minutes passed in a second, even as a part of her watched events unfold in slow motion from a great distance.

“I’ve tried bargaining; I’ve tried cajoling; I’ve tried everything except a wrist corsage and candy,” the hell god continued. “But patience has never been one of my virtues--heck, I don’t even know what my virtues are--and we need to get this show on the road.”

“You mean, your time’s running out, don’t you?” Beverly asked, stepping forward.

Glory recoiled almost instinctively. “You…God, I’ve had enough of you to last a lifetime, which, considering I’m a god, is really saying something.” Her voice was thick with loathing.

“Now that hurts, Glo,” Beverly said, shaking her head. “I thought we were really connecting, there at the end. I mean, the brutalization definitely brought up some trust issues, but I think we could’ve worked through those.”

“Get out of my way,” Glory practically hissed, although Tara noticed that she maintained a healthy distance from the Protector.

“What are you even doing here, Glo?” Beverly asked. “Shouldn’t you be out canvassing the city? If I’m not mistaken, there is something of a time crunch here.” And then, with seemingly utter nonchalance, she began to whistle the theme song from ‘Jeopardy.’

Glory’s eyes narrowed to slits. “How do you know about that?”

Giles stepped forward, though he remained behind Beverly. “We mortals aren’t quite as provincial as you think we are,” he murmured. “We’ve been tying our own shoelaces for centuries now.”

Glory clenched her fists in impotent rage. She glanced around desperately, as if trying to figure out a way to get past Beverly. She was accompanied by six of her minions, but it was clear that she had little faith in their fighting ability.

“Give me my Key,” she shouted, grabbing a flask from one of the shelves and hurling it against the far wall. The smell of lavender filled the room.

“That’s a really nice scent, Giles,” Beverly commented, turning to the Watcher with a nod. “Remind me to buy some of that before we head home.”

“Consider it my treat,” he replied, giving a courtly half-bow.

“Give me my Key or I bring this whole place down on top of you.” Another bottle crashed onto the floor.

“First of all, I really must insist on some recompense for this mess,” Giles said evenly. “In the words of American consumerism, ‘You break it, you bought it.’ And with regard to your threat, my dear woman, that’s simply not a compelling argument. If you do locate and use the Key, we all die anyway. It’s very much six of one, a half-dozen of another, don’t you think?”

Glory pulled herself up short from her ranting, and turned to look at them. Her gaze lingered on each person in turn, and when she spoke, her voice was practically a purr. “But it doesn’t have to be like that,” she murmured. “If you help me get home, I could make sure that all of you live happily ever after. I refer you to my earlier comment regarding eternal life,” she added.

“Is that true?” Tara started at the sound of Dawn’s voice beside her. “If we give you the Key, you’ll keep--you’ll keep us safe?”

“Dawn, no!” Buffy almost shouted. “Don’t believe it, not for an instant.”

“But of course I’ll keep my promise,” Glory insisted, looking wounded at the slight. “It’s such a small price to pay for such a huge favor.”

Tara watched in desperation. Her heart was pounding so loudly in her ears that she suspected she wouldn’t be able to hear Dawn say, “It’s me.” She fully expected Buffy to clap her hand over Dawn’s mouth.

The Slayer obliged her by doing so. “Dawn, I can’t let you sacrifice an innocent,” Buffy hissed. “Especially not for a promise that this bimbo will never keep.” Dawn struggled against Buffy’s restraint, but clearly had no chance of succeeding.

“Oh, well…guess we’ll just have to do this the hard way,” Glory said airily, and Tara thought she saw the Hell god glance toward the back of the room.

Following her gaze, Tara turned to see a short, robed figure standing in the doorway of the training room. He had gained entrance through the back door, and now looked at his master adoringly.

“For you, Glorificus,” he said softly, and then raised his cross-bow and fired.

Tara had instinctively leaned forward to shield Willow, but her beloved was not the target. She heard the bolt whiz past her, and looked up to see her aunt staring wide-eyed at Tanya.

“I’m sorry, Baby,” she whispered.

Tara knew that Tanya had screamed; she had seen her open her mouth as she dropped to her knees to pull Beverly close to her. But Tara hadn’t heard a sound; all noise had ceased, just for a moment, as she took in the sight of her aunt lying crumpled and bleeding on the Magic Box floor.

And then chaos erupted, as Glory threw back her head and laughed with delight.

“Oh my Hell God, I feel like a brand new woman!” she cried, clapping her hands. She strode toward the group, gathered around the table in a tight knot except for Tanya, who was desperately trying to stem the flow of blood pouring from Beverly’s wound.

Fury…it was fury that she was feeling, and she had never felt the likes of it before.

“Incendiere,” she cried, only dimly aware that she was saying the word.

But Glory wasn’t even singed by the orb of flame that Tara had hurled at her. Smiling, she deflected it with a flick of her wrist. “Ooh--look who’s gone all vigilante!” she laughed.

When Beverly had been shot, Buffy had released Dawn and now stood in front of her. Tara watched as Dawn tore her eyes from Beverly’s inert figure, looking back at Glory with hatred in her eyes.

“You bitch,” she cried, taking a step toward Glory. “You want your Key, come and get it!”

“Dawn, no!” Willow shouted in desperation.

“Out of my way, little girl,” Glory said dismissively. With the barest nod of her head, she sent Dawn flying up against a counter. Tara heard the glass crack under her weight.

“OK, Slayer--let’s cut to the chase. One more time: where’s my Key?”

Tara’s mouth had gone dry; even if she had known what to say, she couldn’t have said it. Buffy stood dumbly in front of Glory, then glanced toward the door leading into the training room.

“Think you can outrun me, Blondie? I'll be standing in front of you before you’re half-way there.”

“Oh most magnificent One,” cried the minion who had shot Beverly.

“You’ll get your reward later,” she cut him off, barely sparing him a glance.

“But you must look--”

“Not now, you greedy little skank!”

“Glorificus, the sister!” he finally shouted. “Look upon her!”

Glory paused, just the barest moment, and then turned slowly to see what everyone else had already seen: Dawn was cut, badly, and her blood was spilling out onto the counter. As it pooled, a bright crimson, a faint glow began to emanate from it, hovering slightly above the counter. As they watched, it shimmered and turned from red to a deep, cobalt blue; and then it changed, once more, into a glittering, emerald green.

Dawn’s eyes were wide with terror. Tara thought that her own heart would surely crack open with her dread.

“My, oh my, oh my,” Glory whispered. “Little sister’s not as old as she looks, is she?”

With a harsh cry, Buffy launched herself at Glory, who threw her off with seeming ease. “Protect her!” the Slayer called out, but the others had already rushed toward Dawn.

“No!” Glory shouted. “It ends here!” With the barest wave of her hand, they all went flying away from Dawn, crashing into the walls.

Tara’s head was ringing; she could barely make out Glory seizing Dawn by the wrist and pulling her toward the door. She watched as Buffy hurled herself once more at the Hell god, who if anything seemed amused by her efforts.

“Nice try, Slayer,” she laughed, gripping Buffy by the throat and lifting her off of the ground. She smiled sweetly.

“Dawnie won’t be home for dinner.” And then she threw the Slayer against the wall and was gone.

*****

TO BE CONTINUED
AntigoneUnbound
 


Re: Two more replies

Postby Washi » Tue Sep 09, 2003 2:30 pm

Holy Hell!

That was one hell of a chapter. Seriously, I held my breath all the time.

I'll leave more intelligent feedback next time cause now, I'm kinda like screaming 'no!' at my monitor.



Great update, as always.

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa



The course of love doesn’t always run smooth, especially for the neurotic and accident-prone. ~ LadyB

Washi
 


Re: Two more replies

Postby jixer » Tue Sep 09, 2003 2:34 pm

Hello Kittens-



Oh my. Beverly's dead, Dawn's bleeding and gone. Everyone left is hurt past knowing in their hearts. Tara has lost the last decent bit of her mother and had a child she cares for as much as a sibling torn from her as her best efforts failed, Tanya has lost more than all of them, and the others are no doubt reeling with a mixture of pain and dread, in Buffy's case no doubt guilt as well. But they're going to go on. We know that because Mary has truly given us heroes in this story.



Now, a trio of selfish words-PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!





Jixer

jixer
 


Re: Part 46

Postby justin » Tue Sep 09, 2003 2:48 pm

Firstly, wow, that's a lot of cats



Secondly, that was an evil, evil place to end. :evil



Now that Dawn's been kidnapped is Buffy going to turn into catatonia girl like in cannon? How are they going to stop the ritual?



More importantly what's happened to Bev? is she going to be alright? :pray



Why oh why didn't Buffy drive Dawn up to Alaska?



In all that was a great, if rather unnerving, update.



I liked the bit about cousin Marti :rofl



I still haven't figured out the loves eye thing :confused



Definitely looking forward to the next part



Anya in a wimple...I'd pay full admission for that. Gods Served And Abandoned - by Antigone Unbound

justin
 


Holy Hell Batman :D

Postby Puff » Tue Sep 09, 2003 3:58 pm

That was some update! Ok first of all Hi Mary *waves* I am glad to hear that your internet worries will hopefully be over soon. Let me also say that I love your little comments in the update thread when you post, they are so funny.



Now onto the feedback. What an action packed update, it seemed to fly by when reading it. I adore how you write Glory, I swear that I've never read Glory speak a funnier line than this
Quote:
“I’ve tried bargaining; I’ve tried cajoling; I’ve tried everything except a wrist corsage and candy,”
LMBAO.



I couldn't believe it when Beverly got shot, sure didn't see that one coming. I hope she is going to be ok. You'd think that the Monks would give her some type of accelerated healing thing going up against a God, but no. Poor Dawn. She tried to tell Glory that she was the Key, but that was taken away from her when the Minions saw her blood.



I am eagerly awaiting the next part. Will Buffy rescue Dawn? Will Beverly be ok? Will Glory ever make it into the Hell God Hall of Fame? I am sure all will be revealed next time :)



Thanks for the update, it was brilliant.



So, the day started and I knew my name and had my pants on. So far, so good. Yay.
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Re: Part 46

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Tue Sep 09, 2003 6:25 pm

Hello, all. Love that feedback...



Washi: You know, I thought I heard screaming from somewhere--now I know. I promise I won't leave you hanging (long).



Jixer: Wow...I didn't know how bad things were until I read your post. Now I feel all guilty...All I can say is that I appreciate your vote of confidence re: my bringing things about in a way that doesn't leave everyone (a) sobbing and (b) clamoring for my head. And I'm glad to read the selfish words, Jixer, b/c it means you're invested in the story! Thanks for the good thoughts.



Justin: Oh yes...many cats. I'd probably have been able to afford a computer sooner if I didn't have so many vet bills...First of all, I promise you that Buffy won't go all catatonic. I enjoyed that episode, but feel like doing something different here. Bev...I promise you'll find out soon. Glad you enjoyed the nod in Marti's direction. It's so easy to rag on Joss, but it's important to share the wealth, don't you think? Thanks for following this, Justin--hope you like where it goes from here.



Puff 'n' All Other Kinds o' Stuff: You know, Glory is just a hoot to write. She's one of the characters that almost writes herself, y'know? I promise that I'll answer your questions w/ the next update, Puff. Thanks for the kind words, and thanks also for the good internet karma. They're coming tomorrow to hook me up (the phrase alone makes my toes tingle) so by this time tomorrow night, I shall (hopefully) be conversing from the privacy of my own home.



More later,

Mary


AntigoneUnbound
 


Re: Part 46

Postby shuyaku » Tue Sep 09, 2003 6:56 pm

Well, now that everything has gone to hell in a hand basket... well, maybe not a basket, more like a really nice Prada purse since we are talking about Glo.



I digress. That was just... just... whoa. Again, I always love how you sprinkle just enough humor in the middle of all your angst to keep us from spontaneous human combustion. And this update definitely needed it. The scoobies are using their brains one day, and forgetting they have them the next. Why, oh why do they not think that Glory will look for them on this very special day. Um... hello, it's Glory's riddle for the most part. I'm pretty sure she already knows what the answer to it is.



The tension in this update was remarkable. I know, KNOW that Beverly will be fine. You may ask how I KNOW this? Well, because I trust you to take care of the characters that the kitten's love, unlike a few of 'those who shall not be named except to make fun of, belittle and harass.'



And home internet access tomorrow - you go girl!

furry kids :kitty make the world go round :grin

-shuyaku



shuyaku
 


Re: Two more replies

Postby The Rose24 » Tue Sep 09, 2003 7:39 pm

You really know how to write the angst don't you. Looking forward to the resolution of this.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Part 46

Postby good2cats » Tue Sep 09, 2003 8:36 pm

Hi Mary,
Lets see now, the likable lesbian gets shot down by some bastard this seems somewhat familar.Maybe in your hands Beverly will be okay unlike Tara in the hands of Noxious Noxon.Great update very fast paced and nerve shattering.
By the way,Isis(my tortoise shell cat)says to tell Scout and Tadpole that if they take a more proactive approach to hunting maybe they won't have to share a single mouse.She recommends the dryer vent.She likes to rip it from the wall to make ingress easier for the chipmunks which she finds to be meatier than field mice.Also you must be a really unique individual if you own the cats.I bow down before your greatness. The cats I live with own me lock,stock and barrel.It's only my knowledge of can opener operations that makes me useful to them and thus tolerated.
Update soon please I have no fingernails to chew.
Be well,Karen(the pussycat whipped)

good2cats
 


Re: Part 46

Postby russ » Tue Sep 09, 2003 9:27 pm

OK, from perching on the edge of my chair, I've gone to clinging by the fingertips to a cliff.



Jixer is hereby declared official spokesperson: what a masterful summing up. After reading it, I thought I'd have nothing more to say. Quickly got over that, though.



Hey, Jixer, don't give up on Beverly so soon. If there's a "flow of blood pouring from Beverly’s wound," she's not dead. Yet. This rather reminds me of Giles' wound in canon. It put him out of action for a while, but wasn't fatal.



Was Dawn desperate, or merely crazy, to believe that Glory would spare the others if she turned herself in? That would imply being truthful, even honourable. No way.



You know, I read Justin's comments, and your response to them, a couple of times before I finally clued in: "Oh, that Marti!" My excuse is Glory-induced stress, causing mental lapses (that's the plural of lap).



It appears the story is marching toward the "showdown at the rickety tower." I'm torn between eagerness to see how you conclude this, and reluctance to see it end. Like Shuyaku and other readers, "I trust you to take care of the characters that the kitten's love." The eagerness is winning, because ... you know ... fingertips, cliff.



Happy hook-up, you who are blesssed with fall raspberries.



Russ











russ
 


Re: Part 46

Postby Patches » Tue Sep 09, 2003 10:41 pm

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You know I've heard about people like me. But I never made the connection. They walk one road to set them free, And find they've gone the wrong direction. But there's no need for turning back 'cause all roads lead to where I stand. And I believe I'll walk them all No matter what I may have planned

Edited by: Patches at: 9/9/03 9:47 pm
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