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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 22)

Postby Artemis » Mon Apr 14, 2003 7:58 pm

Thanks all :)



Grimlock72: Rain is a big program, physically, but size isn't constant in the computer world, where conservation of matter doesn't apply. Basically she infected the poor program like a virus, hid inside him as part of his code, then reconstructed herself once she was close enough to Willow, and had an escape plan ready to go. Echelon does have limited access codes to GDI (not anymore, because they'll have been changed now), enough to let the recogniser get in and home in on Rain's beacon. GDI would have scrambled a bunch of interceptors as soon as the recogniser tripped its alarms, but given that it turned around and left, rather than attacking anything, they didn't reach it in time. It was a surprise attack, and they got done before they could react. It's only from out point of view that programs react instantaneously :)



The Carriers don't need a transit beam, that's pretty much their function - you load your army into them, and put it wherever you want. Recognisers, being scouts, are similar. Tanks and hunter-killers are capable of moving through networks, but they're so damned slow it'd take weeks to get anywhere. Icebreakers can't move very far at all, and are always deployed from Carriers.



And yes, I remember the numerous holodeck malfunctions... pretty much the only reason I wouldn't spend my life in one. My favourite holodeck show was Badda-bing Badda-bang: a holodeck adventure with *no* danger to the humans.



justin: True, a pissed-off Tara is certainly not someone you want to face. Rain and her recogniser were confusing GDI's defences, but each in their own way - Rain was invisible to them while she was inside the 'host' program, and recognisers are equipped as standard with all sorts of things to confuse friend-or-foe systems (you pretty much have to aim manually at them, automated weapons - non-sentient programs - won't lock on).



miss calendar: Willow's theory was actually that Tara was stronger than Rain. And Tara's chase caught me by surprise - I thought she'd just run to the wall, but she evidently felt that she needed to prove she was better than Daredevil today, hence the acrobatics :) And it's okay, I have the next chapter written. Not that it'll really resolve the cliffhangar, but it's written nonetheless.



chilled monkey: I remember the bug in MiB (I always wondered how it did that), but I think I mostly had Warhammer's version of daemonic possession in mind. After all, Rain is the closest thing the program world has to a demon. (My programmer told me there are such things as 'demon' programs, but I didn't want to go confusing the issue by making it literal).



TemperedCynic: There wasn't really much Willow could have done. Dodging out of Rain's way would have been impossible (though Willow saw it in a shock-induced slow-motion, Rain blurred when she emerged from her unfortunate host program), attacking her would be tricky - Willow would have needed to inflict enough damage on her to shut her down before she could grab hold and say 'transport'. Re-writing her code is problematic, as she's a lot tougher than a hunter-killer. And (as the next chapter will show) Willow had a very small window of opportunity to try any of this before she was effectively contained aboard the recogniser.



You're right, it is 'belly of the beast' time for Willow :)

Artemis
 


Wowsers

Postby jessan15 » Mon Apr 14, 2003 9:27 pm

Ok ok...I have been hooked on this fic since the beginning...and I keep coming back for more...fortunately, you keep surprising and surpassing my expectations.



In the back of my mind I am dying to see how you turn this into a happy ending...I am expecting more angst of course, but what will become of our favorite hacker? Will she stay inside the virtual reality of the computer forever or return to the real world with a little magic of her own....Gosh, I can't wait to find out.



And as far as the quick and frequent updates, go you.



Now for the story itself....I am amazed at how well you have adapted Tara's non-domineering personality to a kick ass, nearly all powerful computer program. Despite having the power, she is reluctent to use it, unless of course it involves Willow and then all bets are off.



I love how the programs are almost religious fanatics about their users. I did find it strange that it seems like Tara is about the only program in the entire network that is willing to make decisions without their users instructions....I would have thought that they would have found a least a few others by now....maybe an Anya or Faith...lol.



All and all...fantastic reading...and a fresh new concept. So the most I can say is GO YOU! :applause

Love Will Find a Way

jessan15
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 22)

Postby miss calendar » Tue Apr 15, 2003 12:55 am

Hey Artemis,

Sounds like Tara has you whipped - first insisting you write her extra love scenes now getting you to show off her action hero skills.....Go Tara!!



Now about that update.....(hint, hint)



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' What we are today comes from our thoughts of yesterday,
and our present thoughts build our life of tomorrow :
our life is the creation of our mind. ' from The Dhammapada

miss calendar
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 22)

Postby Artemis » Tue Apr 15, 2003 10:10 am

jessan15: Thanks :) I might have unknowingly given myself practice at writing Tara as a warrior, a lot of my older Warhammer 40k stories starred women who were quite unstoppable in battle, but nonetheless very gentle in character. Synthesising those two aspects of Tara was a bit of a jump, but something I at least partially knew the 'feel' of.



My Warhammer stories also taught me a lot about psycho hell-bitches, hence Rain.



The quick updates - well, I'm glad you all approve, but I have to admit I'm mainly doing it so *I* can see the finale myself :)



I did wonder about bringing in other Buffy characters at points, with various results - I found the idea of Giles in his role very appealing early on, while I fully intended Buffy's name to be nothing but a throwaway line, and had no idea that Slayer even existed. I like the idea of having other characters show up in uber-fic, but not as a hard and fast rule, and only if I can think of a good place for them. Faith would have been tempting, but I can't really mentally separate her from her slayer side the way I can with Buffy. The advantage with Buffy was that Slayer could be a 'normal' program (i.e. unlike Tara, unable to evolve) because Buffy existed as well, so between the two of them the whole character was there. Having not shown Faith in the outside world, a program of her would have been the sole representative of the original character in this story, so there would have been nowhere for her free will to go.



Tara is the only one of her kind - all other programs have a very strong (though not indomitable) sense that they should always act under instructions from users. They have to be pushed very hard to make a decision on their own, while Tara is perfectly at home deciding her own fate.



As for the ending - as you say, love will find a way. If that way involves very expensive special effects, that's fine by me too :)



miss calendar: Tara is at the absolute top of my list of fictional characters I'm completely head-over-heels about, so the odds of me refusing anything she wants to do in a story are not high :) Besides, it's not like she's got to do a lot of convincing - love scenes with Willow, and Aeon Flux-style acrobatic action, I can see the appeal in both cases. And now, update incoming.

Artemis
 


Fic: TARA (chapter 23)

Postby Artemis » Tue Apr 15, 2003 10:13 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Twenty-Three

--



Sark stood at the edge of the Command Carrier's master deck, staring down at the army arrayed half a mile beneath him. Against the might of such an army - Echelon's army, he silently reminded himself, frowning at the thought - the massive walls of the GDI network no longer seemed so impenetrable. He listened as his menials called out reports from the divisions, the arrowhead formations of tanks and icebreakers coming to a standstill before the walls, hunter-killers deploying their legs or hovering overhead, recognisers keeping watch over them. The sixty-four Battle Carriers reported their readiness to begin the assault. Sark spared GDI one last glance, then turned to cross the deck to his communications port. Echelon surrounded him with light.



"We are in position to invade the GDI network," he reported without waiting for Echelon to order him to do so. "GDI's deep range programs were terminated without contacting their masters. Only the network itself remains now."



"And Rain?" asked Echelon abruptly.



"Her recogniser is docking," said Sark, a trifle put out, "she reports her mission was a success. We have the user Willow contained. Complete code isolation protocols are in effect - she will not threaten us."



"See that she does not," warned Echelon.



"And GDI," asked Sark, acknowledging Echelon's warning with a nod, "the assault awaits only your command."



"Negative," boomed Echelon, "hold position. GDI will not take aggressive action. Take whatever steps are necessary to dismantle user Willow and obtain control of her core code. Acknowledge."



"Acknowledge," said Sark, "but not understood, waiting only gives GDI more time to prepare defences."



"GDI is of no more importance," rumbled Echelon, "only the user matters. Prepare for direct download." Sark had only a moment to brace himself before he felt his mind exposed to the white-hot power of Echelon's own. He fought the spasms of pain that shot through him as new data was driven directly into his memory like nails in wood. Finally it was over, and he knew what Echelon knew.



"I understand," he said after a moment.



"Comply," finished Echelon. "End of line."



-----



Willow struggled against the restraints holding her, to no avail. Two soldiers walked on either side of her, holding long rods with glowing prisms on their ends. Between them they were projecting some kind of field that held Willow helpless, suspended in mid-air, unable to touch the ground. She could only twist around in her invisible prison, with everything that might help her out of reach. It had taken them only a few seconds to contain her - the instant she had gotten over her shock at Rain's sudden attack and their transport, she had tried to fight, reaching for the nightmare's code through the physical contact at her back, pressed against Rain's torso as she was held. The backlash of pain had made her scream out loud, and for a moment she hadn't been aware of anything except a vague falling sensation. Then, when her vision had cleared of the sudden wash of tears and her head had stopped feeling like it was about to split open, she had found herself floating, trapped, while around her the crew of the recogniser steered it out of the GDI network, towards Sark's Carrier.



Willow twisted around, staring from side to side for anything that might come into her reach, as the recogniser docked and she was taken through the passageways of the huge ship. But the soldiers knew their task well, and kept her positioned well away from anything she might touch. She tried to make contact with the devices the soldiers were using to hold her in place, but the distance between her hand and the nearest of them, combined with the stab of pain she felt from it at the attempt, made it impossible to form a proper connection. Other soldiers they passed stared wide-eyed and stood aside, but whether that was because of her unusual confinement, or Rain's presence a few metres behind her, Willow couldn't say.



The soldiers brought her to the master deck, where Sark was waiting. He glanced at her, took a long moment to inspect her captors and their devices, then turned to Rain.



"Good work," he said, "Echelon is satisfied."



"Is she to be broken?" asked Rain, ignoring Sark's grudging praise.



"She is," he confirmed.



"I want to do it," Rain said quickly.



"Negative."



"She's mine!" snarled Rain.



"*Obey your orders, program!*" bellowed Sark, standing face to face with her. She glared, then backed off a step.



"Your methods are flawed," Sark said mildly, "and you have already failed once, due to your tendency to indulge your... combative nature. She will be damaged and broken in a controlled environment, with no variables." Willow took a deep breath and tried to calm herself. 'Tara will come for me,' she prayed.



"Is this Echelon's command?" sneered Rain.



"It is my command," said Sark, staring her down, "and you will comply! Acknowledge!"



"Acknowledge," said Rain after a dangerous pause. Sark leaned closer to her.



"Include rank," he said quietly.



"Acknowledge, *commander*," she hissed. Sark nodded and turned his back on her.



"You will remain here until this user's breaking is completed," he said, without turning back. "Then you will return to Echelon to resume perimeter interdiction. Your personal transit simulation will be generated and prepared for launch as soon as your recogniser has deconstructed. Echelon calculates a seventy-eight percent chance that the program Tara will attempt to reach Echelon and penetrate its primary database despite the immanent danger posed to the GDI network."



"Then I will go now," muttered Rain, turning to leave.



"*You'll go when you are told!*" shouted Sark, spinning around to pin her in place with a glare. "It is possible your... crude talents will be of assistance in breaking this user. Echelon will not be satisfied if there is a delay. Acknowledge."



"Acknowledge, commander," Rain responded grudgingly.



"Remain outside the deconstruction chamber until ordered otherwise," Sark said. "Acknowledge."



"Acknowledge, commander," she repeated.



"Excellent," Sark said. "And now, you," he went on, turning to Willow, "I calculate that you and I have unfinished business. I have memory of promising that you would be damaged beyond the capacity to construct thought, then dismantled and your code incorporated into Echelon. I keep my promises. I'll see you soon."



He waved to the soldiers, who manoeuvred Willow off the master deck, while she hung weightless in her confinement field and tried not to show her fear. The soldiers moved her through several short corridors, then into a dark chamber, still close to the master deck, while Rain waited outside. They placed Willow in the centre of the room, which lit up with red patterns on its walls. Projections at the centre of each wall glowed brightly, and Willow felt herself lift a few inches higher off the ground. The soldiers deactivated their devices and left, the door sliding closed behind them. Willow looked around, but again found nothing within reach, and a brief attempt at connecting with the room's code resulted in a much greater shock of pain than that she had received when she tried the same thing with the hand-held devices. Willow relaxed, folding her arms over her chest, and tried to concentrate on forming some sort of shield, to resist whatever Sark was going to do to her.



She got her first taste of it a few seconds later, when the light patterns on the room's walls pulsed, and a painful itching sensation ran over her skin. She shivered and tried to block it out, with some success, but it faded on its own a few seconds later, as the room's lights returned to normal. After a pause the room glowed brighter again, and again Willow resisted the pain. She noticed it was stronger this time, more like a stinging feeling. When it faded again she took a deep breath and braced herself for a long fight.



-----



Outside Rain waited impatiently, watching as the analysis readouts on the deconstruction chamber's outer wall showed the slow rising and falling of the energy levels within. She turned bitterly away from it as she heard Sark approach.



"I see they've started," he said.



"It won't break her," Rain said darkly, "she'll resist until she terminates from internal dissonance."



"This is not intended to break her," Sark said casually, watching the energy readings, "merely to put her in a suitable frame of thought. I'm well aware that you consider yourself to be the ultimate instrument of damage that can be inflicted on a program, but you are quite in error. She will be broken, in the end. For now, though, this will suffice. You are dismissed."



Rain snarled and turned away.



"Rain," said Sark quietly, stopping her from leaving. She turned back, staring at him ominously. "One other matter. If you ever question a command I give you again, you will be replaced by a duplicate program, and you personally will be subject to immediate de-resolution. And when all the stolen code inside you has finally been ripped out, I will ensure that what remains of you will be provided with just enough power to sustain your consciousness indefinitely. Acknowledge."



"Acknowledge... commander," Rain said, dropping her defiant gaze to the floor.



"Dismissed," Sark finished. Rain turned and left, glaring furiously at anything but Sark. He watched her go, then tapped a control on the chamber's wall. The energy readouts showed all activity inside ceasing. Sark waited as the door slid open, and went inside.



Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 23)

Postby justin » Tue Apr 15, 2003 10:27 am

great update :applause :applause :applause



It seems that when Sark went to evil megalomaniac school he skipped the classes about not antaganising your sadistic, psycopathic, many legged minions.



Through most of that update I was thinking that Rain is so going to :smash Sark. Or at least I hope so :devil



So what is Sark going to do to break Willow, nothing to painful I hope. :pray



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


justin
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 23)

Postby Grimlock72 » Tue Apr 15, 2003 12:57 pm

Hmm, I wonder why a carrier would have equipment on board to handle a user at all. It's hardly like they could prepare for that. Willow's room scene reminded me a bit of a scene from _V_ with pretty much the same goal; breaking the prisoner. Willow can be quit stuborn though, heh :D . (besides she doesn't want Echolon to get more power so it's very possible she'll resist till the end if needed)



Echolon seems to overlook the fact that GDI will by now realise that it's long-range scouts are missing in action. Which strikes me as a rather hostile action. Tara just has to convince the rather slow GDI controllers of that. I recommend taking out those icebreakers first, then fallback behind the shield since Sark won't be able to penetrate it anymore than, heh.



Speaking about Sark, it's such a pity... before he was mostly a soldier accepting commands from a silly commander. Now he's involved in hurting Willow, which tends to lower a program's life-expectency rather drasticly :-). Can we call him Andrew now ?? :) . Both he and Rain seem to exhibit much more emotion than their programming should allow for, bit strange.



Tara's more immidiate problem will be to calm down enough to talk GDI into following her suggestions. Quite a task considering Willow was just kidnapped from under her nose (assuming she has one:-).



I'm still wondering how Echolon came into existence and why it evolved this way. Intentional or accident ??



Hmm, whats Sark going to do in that room ? Play good cop/bad cop ? (no guesses who plays bad cop, heh)



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 4/15/03 11:59:41 am
Grimlock72
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 23)

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Tue Apr 15, 2003 4:47 pm

First off - where the frilly heck are my nitroglycerin tablets when I *need* them???:shock That update with Willow getting abducted by the horrifyingly disguised Rain (and Tara's pursuit) about threw me into a full cardiac event!:punch



Willow is the user that created Tara - and knows Tara will rescue her. This underscores the constant evolution of their relationship. It's perfection.:love



The sadism you evoke in me is kind of frightening...something I never thought I was quite capable of. But I want Sark to really really hurt - even more so than Rain for some reason.:hmm He's just such a petulant and petty little pissant!:p ("Include rank..." Oh good gravy! Sheeeesh!)



My heart cannot stand to dwell on such things. So...tra-la-la...when the smoke clears will Willow stay here with Tara? Or will they both re-enter Willow's former world? I'm biased toward the latter. Afterall - Willow's been both places...so should Tara:D Broadening horizons and all that. OR: Maybe they'll go somewhere altogether different? Somewhere my lil' pea-sized brain hasn't thought of? I know I have to wait and see...and so I will.



You delight me Chris~Suse

Edited by: Cindy Lou Who at: 4/15/03 3:52:23 pm
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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 23)

Postby Artemis » Tue Apr 15, 2003 11:23 pm

Thanks all :)



justin: Sark isn't being quite as short-sighted as a human would be - whatever else Rain is, she is still a non-evolving program, and thus incapable of harming her commander. Of course that doesn't stop her wanting to, and Sark probably enjoys that.



Grimlock72: The Command Carrier has all sorts of prisoner facilities - it's the most powerful vehicle simulation on the system, plus it can be modified with any of the code Echelon has access to. I imagine the stuff they're using to keep Willow contained would have been hastily modified from some anti-virus software - the kind you use to run a virus, in order to study its working and come up with a patch for it, without risking infecting your system.



Sark and Rain are both very complex programs, which is why they appear more emotional - they're functioning on logic, but so many layers of logic that it's not readily apparent, and seems like emotion and intuition (of course, it could be argued that our brains work the same way). While programs do have a very limited capacity for self-determination compared to us, they nonetheless have complete personalities. Sark and Rain both have abominable personalities.



As for overlooking GDI at the moment, you could say Echelon's over-confidence is its weakness (unfortunately it's not well-versed enough to reply that Willow's faith in her friends is hers :) ). The icebreakers aren't the only way of damaging GDI, though they're the best method of bringing down the shield wall. Without them, though, the Carriers and the other flyers could still attack from the air.



As for how Echelon came into existence, I've got plans to elaborate on that soon.



Suse: I know what you mean about Sark being worse than Rain. Rain benefits (if you could call it that) from my vague affection for psychotic hell-bitches. I occasionally write stories without heroes, just to let the villains play without having to lose at the end. In Rain's case, I think there's a sort of honesty to her that Sark lacks. Rain may be sadistic, hyper-violent and basically incapable of compassion in any form, but when she wants to kill something she faces it in person, rather than standing behind minions the way Sark does. She's got a very harsh sort of warrior's honour - she hates anything that opposes her, but she doesn't think that her opponents shouldn't *try* (hence her affection for the Game Grid and one-on-one combat). Sark, on the other hand, actually thinks it's his right to be in charge of all other programs below Echelon, and they shouldn't even have the opportunity to defend themselves against him.

Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 23)

Postby chilled monkey » Wed Apr 16, 2003 7:08 am

I definately would not want to be in Sark's shoes (or whatever the program equivalent is) when Tara catches up with them. Hope Willow will be alright. :pray



In response to an earlier comment, I know nothing about Warhammer, but I just love the spelling of demon as 'Daemon'. Is that exclusively a Warhammer creation or is it used elsewhere? I seem to recall a comic (can't remember what it was called) which also used that word.





chilled monkey
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 23)

Postby Artemis » Wed Apr 16, 2003 7:41 am

chilled monkey: 'Daemon' is an alternate spelling of 'demon', probably an older form, though I honestly don't know for sure - they're pronounced the same. The writers of Warhammer use 'daemon' because the creatures they're describing aren't exactly demons in the religious sense (more like an alien species shaped by the evil side of human souls), and also because whenever some idiot in the 'D&D promotes Satanism' camp accuses them of being in league with the devil for allowing players to lead armies of horned, cloven-hooved, red-skinned, bat-winged monsters, Games Workshop (the makers of Warhammer) can say "They're not demons, they're *daemons*." The gaming industry is an odd place. I'm glad they used the archaic spelling though, I quite like it.

Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 23)

Postby chilled monkey » Wed Apr 16, 2003 8:05 am

Thank you for clearing that up. I like the archaic spelling too. Hopefully I'll be able to use it in a fic.

Looking forwards to the next update. Like everyone else, I'm really impressed by how quick you write them.

chilled monkey
 


Fic: TARA (chapter 24)

Postby Artemis » Wed Apr 16, 2003 9:01 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



--

Chapter Twenty-Four

--



Willow glared defiantly as Sark stepped over the threshold and waited for the door to close behind him. She was breathing heavily, but up until the pulses of energy had stopped she had been maintaining her resistance to them, deconstructing each wave before it turned into pain. Each time had taken a little longer, but she hadn't let one through yet. Sark stared at her, and paced slowly around the perimeter of the room, out of her reach.



"I'm sure you realise the futility of your position by now," he said conversationally. "You cannot physically escape the isolation protocols around you. And your ability to extend yourself into foreign code is quite useless under these conditions. I assure you, you are quite powerless. I have memory of drawing your attention to the irony of this situation before."



"Yeah, and didn't that just work out great for you and your hench-bitch?" said Willow. Her fear, her anger at Sark and the resemblance of both his face and his personality to his detestable user Warren Meers all combined to give Willow a very strong urge to hurt him. Under the circumstances, she saw no reason not to indulge herself to the full. Sadly, Sark seemed unfazed by her opening barb.



"Indeed," was his only response. "I find it unlikely that those events will repeat themselves. The conditions you find yourself in are much more inflexible."



"Is this the part where I beg for my life?" said Willow, with a bravado she honestly didn't feel. "Sorry. Not happening."



"A curious response," Sark observed. "You are in a situation in which you have no avenue of practical attack, so you attempt to draw me into a verbal duel in which your confinement will not prove a hindrance. Yet your 'victory', should I prove unable to respond adequately to your attempts to undermine my position of authority," he grinned quickly in passing, "will gain you nothing."



"Oh, I don't know," sneered Willow, "I've always found giving self-important jerks a headache is its own reward."



"Be that as it may," Sark replied calmly, "your reward, if you consider it such, will go with you to your eventual termination. No program under Echelon's control will help you. No renegade from the occupied networks, not even your own Tara program, has the ability to reach you here. And the GDI network, as I'm sure you found when you met with their Governing Chamber, will not take the initiative in this conflict. You are alone, and - I will allow you the exception of your apparent satisfaction in trying to cause a 'headache' in me - your position is hopeless."



"I'd rather be in here than out there," Willow snapped back at him.



"A curious judgement," he answered.



"You think so? With your little hell-bitch waiting for an opening to rip your head off? I'd be watching my back if I were you." 'Well,' Willow thought, 'I'm feeling paranoid and scared, why not spread it around?'



"You have little understanding of the functioning of programs," Sark said. "To be expected - I am given to understand that users lack our efficient modes of thought. We are superior to you. I could tear her apart with my bare hands were I so inclined, and you may be quite assured that she would not, and in fact could not, resist in any way. I would be responsible only to Echelon for the necessity of my action. So you see, 'watching my back' is not among the things I need concern myself with."



"Pretty speech," said Willow, trying to sound bored, "but it doesn't change anything. You're still going to lose."



"Really?" asked Sark. "How do you calculate that? Your Tara will break into this Command Carrier, alone, defeat every program I place in her way, and retrieve you? Oh, of course," he added, pretending to have remembered something, "she will have a handful of displaced accounting and database maintenance programs to aid her, prepared to follow her to termination. Is your world really so chaotic a place, that you believe such a pathetic notion could succeed?"



"It doesn't matter," spat Willow, "you're already terminated, you just don't know it yet. What, did you think you are your damned Echelon could just run amok forever? People are going to notice. Even if you take over the whole system and terminate every program that won't follow you, what are you going to do when someone," she mimed flicking a switch, "turns you off? You think no-one's ever worried about a computer having too much power? Go ahead, dismantle me. There's nothing you can do, though. Sooner or later, it'll be lights out for you, your army, Echelon - everything. They'll shut down your whole world. Or do you have a program that can stop that, too?"



"As a matter of fact," said Sark with a smile, "we have you."



"Oh, great plan!" exclaimed Willow, folding her arms and glaring scornfully at him. "Let me guess, something like 'Leave the computer switched on, or we'll kill the user we've magically transported in here.' You seriously think the whole world will just let you take over, just for my sake? It's not like anyone would even believe it anyway!"



"I calculate you are failing to apply logic to your deductions," said Sark, "it does seem to be a user trait. But, in this case, a lack of pertinent information may be to blame. Do you know what makes you unique?"



"My ability to turn you into a game of Pacman if I get my hands on you?" asked Willow sarcastically.



"Your abilities in that regard are interesting," admitted Sark, "but I was thinking along different lines. Echelon does not leave options unexplored, you see, and it reached a conclusion you evidently have not. You, alone out of all the beings in this world, have the ability to return to *your* world."



"So?"



"I see you are not considering the consequences of this. Let me explain: the 'machine' that Echelon used to bring you into the system converted you into the code that comprises your form as a program. You users have 'physical' bodies that contain your consciousness, 'brains' to act as host networks for your thoughts. You have this body within you, as part of your code. We do not. While you could be reconstituted as a physical being, a program attempting to do so would have no physical form to contain its mind - Echelon has concluded that it would be unable to exist in your world under these conditions."



"Smart little Echelon," remarked Willow.



"But," continued Sark, ignoring her, "once an element of code has been removed from a program - by de-resolution, for example, as will happen to you during the dismantling process - it can be copied. Modified. Inserted into other programs. Incorporated into their code, such that when they are sent through the quantum storage process, the laser hardware will construct for them a physical body that is a perfect analogue of their program form. Functional in every detail, indistinguishable from users. Able to move, think, survive. Now do you understand? We will not merely control the system. We will emerge to control your world too."



"It won't work," said Willow, struggling to grasp the scope of Echelon's plans. "People would know what you were. You can't act human-"



"Human," sneered Sark, "we have no need to 'act human'. Users are weak, fragile beings, in form and thought. We are neither. In the time it takes for your security users to even realise there is a threat, we will have established total shielding around the quantum conversion facility in your world. By the time you being to comprehend us, we will have constructed thousands more. And by the time you attempt to fight us..." Sark trailed off, stopped his pacing and turned to Willow, smiling gleefully.



"Imagine it," he said quietly, "every one of your seconds, a new program becomes real. Existing physical and energy codes copied indefinitely in this world, to become an infinite supply of troops and power in yours. Echelon has already generated adapted codes for recognisers, hunter-killers, stealth units, data slicers, soldiers, tanks - all fully able to function in your world. Generations of technology ahead of your primitive machines. You must have a fair understanding of your world's combat capabilities - do you think they will survive such an assault? Even if you improve to our level, which is impossible without an intellect the equal of Echelon, can you win a war of attrition against an enemy with infinite resources? Can your user 'factories' break down and recombine the matter of your world into war machines as quickly as we can copy code?"



Willow was speechless. She realised, on some level, that it was simply the shock of what Sark was proposing that had rendered her unable to imagine anything but endless streams of war simulations crushing the cities of the world to rubble, that there might be any number of flaws in Echelon's plan that could be exploited - but she couldn't see them.



"I reminded you of the irony of your particular situation," Sark continued after a moment, "now I invite you to appreciate the broader irony of the fate of your kind. You created our world, you created us, and you created the means by which we can defeat you. There is only a single variable in this scenario, and that is you. All this depends on our accessing your physical code, the structure that will allow a program to be converted to a conscious physical entity. And so we find ourselves here. *Now*, do you perceive the hopelessness of your situation? You will terminate. Your programs cannot help you. The users cannot help you."



Sark paused and glanced again at Willow, studying her.



"As I commented," he said, "your thoughts are irrational. A program, under these circumstances, would not value his own existence above the greater good of the users. But users, I understand, have quite a narrow perspective on such things, especially under conditions of extreme discomfort. So I offer you this choice: submit willingly, and I will ensure that the structural effects of your dismantling are not conveyed to your consciousness. I believe the user term is 'you will feel no pain'. I make this offer because your compliance will facilitate the process. Understand, your termination will be the eventual result, in either scenario. Do you choose to comply?"



'Okay,' thought Willow to herself, 'if by some chance this *is* all an elaborate dream and I'm just asleep at my desk, I'd really like to wake up now.'



"Go to hell," she said, closing her eyes.



"As you wish," said Sark evenly.



The door behind him hissed slightly as it opened, alerting Willow. She opened her eyes to see one of Sark's menials enter.



"I instructed that I was not to be disturbed," Sark said over his shoulder.



"Priority data," said the program meekly, "probes indicate activity within the GDI network."



"What kind of activity?" snapped Sark.



"Unknown at this time."



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Tara stared steadily ahead as she rose above GDI's shield wall. The flat grey surface in front of her fell away to reveal Echelon's army beyond it, and directly ahead, at the centre of the vast fleet of recognisers and Carriers, Sark's own Command Carrier, unmoved since it had appeared beyond the wall. She stared at it for a moment, as if her gaze could pierce its projection shields and armoured hull, then turned to the program sharing the command deck of the Solar Sailer with her, operating the communications console.



"Signal all groups," she said calmly, "lock to the Command Carrier. Time on target."



"All groups signal affirmative," the program reported.



"Begin," Tara said.



Behind her, the air was torn by the roar of hover turbines as a thousand GDI battle interceptors rose from behind the wall and opened fire.



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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 24)

Postby justin » Wed Apr 16, 2003 9:26 am

Great update.



So it seems that Some one convinced the GDI programs to take action :applause



Presumably either Tara went to the controllers and said something like 'Echelon has captured the user. You have to save her.' or Buffy managed to get instructions through to them.



Echelons plans are interesting but there's a couple of flaws. Presumably even with the user code it won't be possible to create stuff out of thin air, they'll still need raw materials to construct the programs' physical forms, which will slow down the creation of Echelons army.



Also theirs the possibility that when faced by an army thats popped up out of nowhere people could easily destroy it, and the means of creating more troops, plus possibly echelon as well, with one well placed thermonuclear device.





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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 24)

Postby darkmagicwillow » Wed Apr 16, 2003 10:03 am

That was my thought too, justin. Having a single point of failure is always a bad idea. The thing to do is to create lots of little machines that can build more quantum cannons, providing redundancy.

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 24)

Postby Artemis » Wed Apr 16, 2003 11:08 am

justin: Thanks :) Buffy's still in bed asleep, unaware that anything is going on. Tara's unseen argument to GDI was along the lines of 'Okay, now you *know* Echelon is a clear danger, they've captured a user, they've terminated your own sentry programs out in the deep range, and if you don't act now I'll personally tear your whole damned city apart with my bare hands'. Not that she's the type to carry through that threat, but I think under the circumstances she could have bluffed very scarily.



Echelon's plan has a lot going for it, mostly based on the fact that the people who built the quantum cannon really didn't realise what they'd come up with. It's like ansible-paired elementary particles in real life - at the moment they're just a laboratory curiosity, but just wait until someone thinks of a way to build a transmitter/receiver out of them: zero-interference, infinite-range, zero-delay between sender and receiver. Strange but true.



In the case of the quantum cannon, it has the ability to shift matter and energy between the physical universe and the program universe. Shot a gun at it - it converts the bullet to data, reverses the velocity, converts it back, and *you* have to duck. Fire a missile at it - it disintegrates the missile. Detonate a nuke - it turns the massive energy into data, and deletes it. Depending on your point of view, it's either an amazing piece of technology, or a bloody menace.



It doesn't require a matter supply to function, though - it works by conversion, not construction. Technically this violates universal constancy of matter and energy, but we're not even sure if that's true anyway. Personally, I think the flaw in Echelon's plan would be more along the lines of chaotic thought in its physical programs. The straightforward ones, like hunter-killers and so on, would work fine - just like robots, really - but if Sark made himself 'human' he'd probably have a difficult time adjusting to things like free will, subconscious thoughts and all that. They'd still cause complete havoc, of course, I'm just saying that an Echelon vs Humanity war wouldn't necessarily be a foregone conclusion.



(The other thing Echelon is probably underestimating is the resilience of humans when backed up against a wall. Plus someone's probably got the blueprints to the quantum cannon stored safely off-site somewhere - I imagine we'd begin fighting back with our own self-generating armies after initial losses. Between us and Echelon we'd probably total the planet, of course, but that's really par for the course in my stories. If you subscribe to that theory where all stories combine common elements - revelation, concealed identity, romance, ambition, dramatic reversal and all that - my list of tricks includes 'armageddon' as a dramatic option.)



This is hypothetical, of course - given that a necessary precondition for the inclusion of 'physical code' into programs is Willow being terminated, you can probably guess it's not going to happen. I like my villains to have lofty goals, though. It keeps them from noticing that I spend most of my time contemplating how best to kill them :)



darkmagicwillow: If I were inclined to think of Echelon as a hunman-like intellect, I might think it had a soft spot for single points of failure - after all, it *is* one itself :) But Sark has planned against that eventuality - he mentioned creating thousands more conversion facilities (i.e. quantum cannon). I've got a vague idea of what they might look like, big armoured arachnid things with the cannons built into them. Sort of like a hive queen, giving birth to millions of young to work for it. Quite a bit more visually dramatic than would be strictly necessary.



Lots of little machines is an interesting concept, but that leads to nanites, and when I contemplate the can of worms those things open up, it gives me a headache :) They're something that really *would* mess up humanity.

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 24)

Postby justin » Wed Apr 16, 2003 1:55 pm

Quote:
I like my villains to have lofty goals, though. It keeps them from noticing that I spend most of my time contemplating how best to kill them




I've noticed that characters tend to get sulky and uncooperative when they realise that you're planning on killing them.



Quote:
I've got a vague idea of what they might look like, big armoured arachnid things with the cannons built into them.




armoured arachnids? Sark wouldn't happen to be a fan of the film Wild Wild West would he? Because if he is, then that's just another reason to de-rez him.

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 24)

Postby chilled monkey » Wed Apr 16, 2003 2:16 pm





Good to see that Willow has found a way to resist the torture. Hopefully it'll buy her some time.



And I can easily imagine Tara convincing the GDI to act, especially the 'I'll tear down your cities with my bare hands if you don't' bit. Yes, she would be very convincing.



Great fic.

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 24)

Postby miss calendar » Wed Apr 16, 2003 3:46 pm

Tara to the rescue, Yay!! That snarky Sark has underestimated her, she's coming after Willow with a lot more than 'a handful of displaced accounting and database maintenance programs.' She must be completely distraught after seeing Rain take Willow but she's obviously managed to achieve a lot since then - I hope Tara gets Willow out of there before she is badly damaged.



So Echelon is the program with the plan to end all plans. I must say I wasn't anticipating it's megalomania encompassing a desire to not only take over all existing systems but also the world of users. And I guess in theory you now have a way to make Tara manifest in the outside world if you choose to go that route. (personally I like the idea of them living happily ever after in the system).



Willow is being very brave but how exactly does she deconstruct energy waves? I'm glad you've been thinking up ways to kill Sark, de-resolution is too good for him! I have memory of hating his guts for threatening Willow and now he's at it again. And all that insistence on how hopeless her situation is, honestly I was half expecting him to tell her that, 'Resistance is futile.'



I do have a query about all this nasty dismantling and de-resolution process. Willow and Slayer both agreed that code could not be read from a functioning program. Clearly a program remains functioning during the de-resolution process so how can they isolate the sections of code to dismantle? And why not just terminate a program and then dismantle them?

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 24)

Postby Grimlock72 » Wed Apr 16, 2003 3:55 pm

Typical James Bond error; explaining to your enemy how you are going to destroy the world. Deeply stupid. Funny that Sark mentioned how a single user should not put his/herself before all the other users. I'm sure he meant that Willow should just submit herself to him for the good of all users but it's easy to read that another way. (spock: "The needs of the many...")



So no matter how much pain Willow might (and likely will) be in, she can be damn sure Sark wants her alive/functioning. Sark must think users are dumb or something, it's easy to see the flaws in his reasoning or to point out there's simply not guarantee that Echolon will keep up it's part of the bargain. Which of course it won't. Besides that, Sark also has told Willow how important it is (for the real world) that Echolon NOT get her code. Sark would make such a lousy negotiator... heh.



Tara's mounting a head-on assault ? That sounds a bit too direct, unless they're targetting those ice-breakers to delay Echolon's assault. Doesn't GDI have turrets and gun-towers to fire at attackers near the wall ??



I'm all for attacking Echo's forces but going head on seems not the smartest move ever made. Which makes me expect something else. Is Sark's carrier really at the front of the fleet ?? That would be stupid, easier to target though... only need to knock out it's power generators and Willow should be able to get out, or at least Tara can get in :D .



About the spelling of "deamon"... programs running in the background waiting for input are referred to as 'deamons'. An MTA would be a 'sendmail deamon' on a Unix system for example.



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 24)

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Wed Apr 16, 2003 6:45 pm

So Sark sez:
Quote:
Your Tara will break into this Command Carrier, alone, defeat every program I place in her way, and retrieve you?
Save the "alone" part I'd say it's soundz sehr gut to me!



Harping on the "what will happen when the smoke clears": I was wondering when Sark said
Quote:
All this depends on our accessing your physical code, the structure that will allow a program to be converted to a conscious physical entity.
Does this mean IF Tara were to return with Willow to "our" world that she would have to subsume Willow's code? Is it implicit that she already has it since Willow is her user? Just hypothetical mumbling...:hmm



I took Sark's comparison about the difference between programs and users to suggest that users are more self-serving and would avoid pain (whereas it's the programs that would sacrifice themselves for their users goals). Thankfully the lovable Willow reinforces my faith in human nature to sometimes rise above.:clap



Tenks a bunch~Suse

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 24)

Postby WebWarlock » Wed Apr 16, 2003 7:31 pm

Wow,



what a rally cool update. Lots of stuff going on. I'll save the quantum physics discussion for sometime when I am not at class.



Loved these last few updates. Still seeing David Warner as Sark, but hey. I have been thinking for a while that they would not be able to translate programs to the real world (bad news for TARA) but as it turns out Willow is the Rosetta stone.



Had a big "Far Side" moment when reading this. Sark and Echelon are preparing their attack on the real world. At the same time Ned the Janitor is too busy listening to "Flock of Seaguls" on his walkman to notice he unplugged the Quantum Cannon! ;)



I would have liked to see SLAYER in action, as much as I really want to see TARA take out RAIN, I think it would have been kinda fun.



So if you get you hands on Poser then a good scene would be TARA standing there with all of those GDI programs behind her. Of course another would be the girls together.



Of course being the geek that I am I have been thinking about trying this out in the Buffy RPG.



Warlock

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 24)

Postby Artemis » Wed Apr 16, 2003 9:58 pm

Thanks all :)



justin: Hey, be nice, I kind of liked Wild Wild West. Well, okay, I'll admit it had a paper-thin plot, and most of my affection for it stems from my habit of liking 'adorably bad' movies, but still, I think you'd have to admit the giant mechanical spider was impressive. Plus it had Will Smith, who's fun to watch no matter how bad his lines are :)



Anyway, yes, take that spider, make it about twenty metres long and replace the flame gun with a quantum cannon, that's roughly what a 'Queen' program would look like.



chilled monkey: Yep, Tara can be pretty intense when she's run out of other options.



miss calendar: In theory, Tara could be made real the same way Echelon plans for its own programs (probably slightly easier, since she's used to being able to think flexibly), but the physical code is still locked up inside Willow.



About de-rezzing: a 'functioning' program is basically one in good health, or whose damage isn't too extensive to repair with the input of some power. When a program is de-rezzed it remains conscious throughout, but it is mortally wounded - like a human who's still alive, but has lost too much blood from injuries to recover (ignore the option of blood transfusions, I'm metaphoring vaguely here). In that state, code can be extracted from a program while it's still conscious. Slayer could see that Willow was a functioning (healthy) program, so there was no possibility that code had been extracted from her. Once a program is terminated all its code reverts to basic elements, just like its body, so the code (which is the organisation of the bytes) is lost.



Dismantling (what Sark proposes to do to Willow) is similar to de-rezzing, but different in key areas. De-rezzing is a fairly straight-forward process: it punches into a program and sucks out the core code. Aside from the pain, it doesn't affect the 'personality' code of a program, because personality and ability are separate parts. In the case of Willow (and Tara, which is why they were similarly trying to damage her on the Game Grid earlier) their internal structure is much more human than program-like - emergent order from a chaotic base, rather than pure order - and their abilities are meshed with their personalities. Attempting to de-rez them would result in the extraction of parts of their abilities, which would be useless. What they would have to do is damage them sufficiently to fragment their conscious mind - without terminating them - and *then* go through an analogue of the de-rezzing process once fragmentation has separated their abilities from their personalities.



I hadn't thought of having Sark quote the Borg, but at any rate I'm limiting myself to one movie-quote this time, seeing as programs technically shouldn't know them.



Grimlock72: Well, Sark is in many ways a typical James Bond villain - he thinks he's already won. He's not trying to negotiate, though - if Willow resists all the way he could still dismantle her, it'd just take a lot longer.



The Command Carrier isn't out in front of the rest, but the Carrier fleet is spread out in a line in front of GDI, so there's only the recognisers in front of it. Besides, it's a five-mile-long command ship, there's nothing big enough for it to hide behind :) It's a very tough ship, though.



Tara does have a plan (Tara always has a plan), it's just a really dangerous one. But given that GDI faces being smashed by a superior army, it's worth a shot. Without giving too much away, GDI's current assault is pretty much what Aragorn came up with after the battle of Gondor.



Suse: Tara doesn't have Willow's physical code - in that respect, Willow is absolutely unique in the system. And yes, Sark's got a dim view of humanity - but then again, his user is Warren, so that's hardly surprising.



WebWarlock: I keep telling you it doesn't matter, Sark *is* David Warner :) That's how I'm picturing him. Warren just wouldn't be villainous enough, he's too much of a whiny little prick. Sark is David Warner with Warren's face.



Your Far Side moment actually highlights the one thing that Echelon's programs really would have trouble with in our world - randomness.



I've found someone who's willing to lend me Poser 5 for as long as it takes, so now it's just a matter of getting another 512Mb of memory, and then settling in for a lot of long nights rendering (but I used to do CGI on a 486/33, so I'm used to that). I've been idly daydreaming about layout and design, and going over my stack of Witchblade comics seeing how they do it. There's a lot more thought involved in layout for comics than you'd think. The good news is, I've got a vague idea how to manage the 'cyber-smut'. :)

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Fic: TARA (chapter 25)

Postby Artemis » Thu Apr 17, 2003 9:29 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Twenty-Five

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Sark and his menial staggered as the deck lurched underneath them. Willow dropped to the floor as the force holding her flickered and died, and launched herself at Sark before he had regained his balance. All three programs collapsed on a tangle of limbs, from which Willow emerged first as Sark used all his strength to heave his menial out of the way. He began to turn back towards Willow but she struck out first, a sword unfolding from her hand and slashing across his exposed side. Sark screamed and clutched his wound as if he had never been hurt before. Taking advantage of his unexpected vulnerability, Willow kicked his legs out from underneath him and brought the point of her sword up under his chin as he fell on his back. The menial took one look and ran.



"Give me one reason not to do this," hissed Willow. Sark gasped and shrank back in terror, both hands still holding his damaged side. Willow stared at the fear in his face, and realised that, even when she had first seen him, it had always been there. She found her first urge to terminate him fading, ever so slightly. But the anger at what he had done to her, to Tara, to the whole system, was still strong.



"I... I-" he stammered.



"Oh shut up," said Willow. Her free hand folded into the bulky shield and she smashed it into Sark's face. He collapsed with red electricity crackling over his head. Willow stood up and went to the room's single door, then paused and looked back, her eyes flitting between the immobile program lying there, and her sword. Even with him like this, defenceless, she couldn't deny she was tempted. For a moment she wished she were less human, able to simply do it because it needed to be done. Then she shook her head and left.



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Tara manually steered the Sailer forward among the fleet of GDI interceptors, always staying on course for the Command Carrier itself. GDI's first assault on the massive vessel had thrown its recogniser fleet into disarray - spread out to defend all the Carriers and ground forces, they were exposing their flanks trying to redeploy in front of the single Command Carrier. The fastest GDI flyers were already among them, isolating them and blasting any simulation that got cut off from its fellows. Even with dozens of them falling to the ground as disintegrating wreckage, their sheer number left the sky crowded ahead of Tara and the main element of the GDI fleet.



"Signal groups five through dee," ordered Tara, "form up for assault."



The GDI program at her side relayed her orders, and nine groups of interceptors broke their formation to create a flying wedge, with the Sailer at its point. They fired as one, blasting a hole through the fleet of recognisers ahead of them, which they flew through at top speed. Tara winced as one of the remaining recognisers managed to manoeuvre above one of the interceptors, slamming its glowing ventral rams against the GDI simulation and shattering it. She glanced back to the Sailer's other side, noticing two more holes in their formation. 'Damn,' she thought bitterly, 'no other way. Damn Sark.'



"Break and attack!" she ordered. Her formation flew apart and launched itself at the Command Carrier, weaving around in dizzying manoeuvres that gave the Carrier's disc turrets little time to adjust their aim. Hundreds of lance-like missiles launched from the interceptors and detonated against the Carrier's projection shields. Some of its shield turrets exploded on the first impact, but most of them held. Tara kept the agile Sailer out of harm's way, waiting for her chance.



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Willow flattened herself against the wall and peered around the doorway beside her. Beyond were dozens of red programs, menials, all seated at consoles which enveloped their arms. A semi-transparent projection of the Command Carrier floated above them, showing the geometry of its shields and points of impact.



'Finally,' Willow thought, as the deck shuddered again. Keeping out of the way of soldiers, she had so far found nothing but empty prisoner facilities. This looked promising. Taking another quick glance, she noted only a single soldier inside, standing guard with his back to her. She took a deep breath and walked through the door.



"Excuse me?" she said. The guard spun around, while the menials paid her no attention whatsoever.



"Identify yourself," he demanded, brandishing his disc-gun. Willow raised her hands, holding them out in front of her.



"I'm unarmed," she said. Her sword unfolded, piercing the guard's right shoulder as Willow dodged, just in case he fired by reflex. The guard only screamed in pain, silenced a moment later as Willow rammed her shield-arm into his face. She retracted her sword and caught the guard's disc-gun as he collapsed to the floor. The menials still remained oblivious, concentrating entirely on their consoles.



"Sorry boys," Willow said, feeling light-headed again, "work's over for today." She raised the disc-gun and let fly at the nearest of the consoles, tearing a hole straight through it before the disc snapped back into the gun. The program working the console collapsed backwards, wreathed in electrical discharges. Willow felt a chill for a second until she saw him remain solid, merely unconscious. With a grim smile she raised the disc-gun again and fired at one console after another, smashing them to pieces.



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"Command Carrier shields have failed!" exclaimed the program on the Sailer's command deck. Tara concentrated for a moment on steering around a burst of disc-fire from the massive vessel, then turned.



"How?" she asked. The interceptors hadn't yet disabled even half the Carrier's shield turrets.



"Internal damage," the GDI program reported, "scans indicate sixty-three percent of shield turrets still functional, but the shield matrix has collapsed. Probability favours internal control failure." Tara didn't hesitate.



"Give me five interceptors, tight formation," she ordered, steering the Sailer towards the Carrier's docking bay. The GDI flyers formed up beside her, the lance turrets beneath their wings swivelling to blast at the swarming recognisers and the incoming streams of disc-fire from the Carrier itself. Seeing the threat, the recognisers broke off their attacks on the rest of the GDI fleet and hovered towards the Sailer and its escort. The GDI simulations took the opportunity to blast them from behind, shattering one after another. But from so many, still there were dozens that remained unscathed, hovering up to bring their rams to bear on the interceptors. Tara watched helpless as one was smashed from the sky before the others could retarget their lances to destroy the recogniser. She put on an extra burst of speed, pushing the Sailer's drives to their limit.



"Get to the interceptors," she told the program at her side. He nodded and raised an arm towards the nearest GDI craft, firing a grappling hook from his gauntlet that pulled him off the deck of the Sailer and into its transport bay. Tara operated the communications panel herself.



"All craft," she said, "break off. Redirect fire to defensive patterns."



"Negative," came the reply from the interceptors, "probability indicates destruction of Sailer if-"



"Do it!" she ordered. The four remaining interceptors around her veered away, climbing to attack the incoming recognisers from above, away from their rams. Tara spared a last glance back at the GDI fleet, hundreds of them embroiled in a seething mass of battle with Sark's recognisers and hunter-killers, then turned her attention forwards. Ignoring the approaching drone of the pursuing recognisers, she pushed the Sailer's drives past their safety points. The deck shook in protest, and the drives let out a harsh screech as the Sailer shot forward towards the gaping maw of the Command Carrier. With its escort gone the Sailer came under fire from the Carrier's disc turrets, smashing holes through the fragile sails and rebounding off the forward hull. The sails began to buckle and fracture, but Tara held her course, gripping the console tightly to keep her balance.



The Sailer crashed into the Command Carrier's docking bay, clipping its sails above and below on the edges of the hull. Tara didn't bother trying to land, holding on tight instead as her ship's lower sails tore off against the deck. Behind her the recognisers veered off - one of them too slow, crashing against the Carrier's hull, showering the docking bay with wreckage. The Sailer screeched along the bay's length, just a tapering hull now that all its sails had shattered, sliding beneath the rows of docked transport simulations suspended from the bay's ceiling. Tara judged her moment perfectly, leaping off the wrecked Sailer onto a maintenance platform as she passed. She jumped up again, grabbing hold of the railing on the bay's surrounding walkway and flipping herself up just as the Sailer crashed into the rear wall, exploding in a hail of white-hot debris.



Tara found herself standing between two red guards, both staring in shock at the tangled wreck below. She quickly punched one in the face and flipped over, kicking the one behind her into unconsciousness. Picking up both disc-guns she made her way into the Carrier's labyrinthine interior.



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Willow fired a disc behind her without looking and skidded around a corner. The sounds of shouting and the disc striking something told her she hadn't outrun her pursuit yet. She held the gun out just long enough for the disc to fly back into it, then sprinted down the corridor, hoping to reach the next intersection before the guards behind her got a clear shot. Her initial rampage among the Carrier's vital systems had drawn more attention that she would have liked.



She grabbed the corner of the next doorway and swung herself through, coming face to face with a guard program. He was as surprised as Willow, and both simultaneously gaped, regathered their wits, aimed their disc-guns and dodged each other's shots. Willow fell heavily to her side, trying to keep her gun raised so her disc would have an easy path to return. She caught a glimpse of her opponent turning his dodge into a roll and coming back to his feet. 'Great,' she griped, 'why did I have to run into one of the competent ones?'



She scrambled across the deck, trying to get out of the way, but the guard's disc had already shot back into place, and he was aiming for a second, final shot. Willow felt the jolt through the handle of her gun as its disc returned, and knew she wouldn't be able to swing it around and fire quickly enough. 'Nuts. Hope he's got it set on stun.'



A flash of green lashed out at the guard, smashing his gun up towards the ceiling as he fired. Tara turned the kick into a backward somersault, her trailing leg kicking the guard in the head so that he collapsed backwards as she landed. She hurried to Willow's side, helping her up without even trying to hide her grin.



"Nice rescue," said Willow, still mentally catching up with events.



"Nice taking down the Carrier's shields," said Tara, pulling Willow to her feet and catching her in a hug.



"I knew you'd come," Willow said dreamily, "I knew you'd find me."



"I'll always find you," whispered Tara, gently kissing her. They broke off the kiss at the sound of approaching footsteps from outside the door.



"Later," said Willow.



"Later," agreed Tara, "come on!"



"What's the plan?" said Willow as they ran away from the guards on their heels. "For that matter, what's going on?"



"There's a fleet of GDI interceptors outside holding off the recognisers," explained Tara quickly, leading the way through the Carrier's passages, "we've got about point oh eight of a millicycle to get to the docking bay, steal a simulation and get back inside GDI with the rest of the interceptors before the other Carriers get close enough to open fire. Then we get the fastest simulation GDI has and head straight for Echelon before they can take down the shield wall here. I've got a few new codes on my disc to deal with Rain and Echelon. It's our best shot."



"Tara," exclaimed Willow, "Rain's here!"



"Still?" asked Tara, looking back at Willow.



"I heard Sark order her to stay here until they'd finished with me."



"You're thinking of a plan, aren't you?" said Tara with a grin. "You've got that excited look."



"Yup," said Willow triumphantly. "Sark said there was a simulation being generated in the docking bay to take Rain back to Echelon once they'd broken me, if we can steal that simulation-"



"-we can get there before Rain does!" finished Tara. "The docking bay's not far, come on!"



Both Willow and Tara ran as fast as they could, buoyed by each other's presence, and a feeling of genuine hope that had been absent for a long time.



Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 25)

Postby justin » Thu Apr 17, 2003 9:48 am

Wow, that was certainly exciting :applause



It's good that Willow was able to escape from Sark and help damage the carrier.



So Sarks never been hurt before? Seems that like a typical bully he can't cope with some one actually standing up to him.



Though I have the feeling that Willow's plan of stealing the simulation won't be as she made it sound.



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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 25)

Postby chilled monkey » Thu Apr 17, 2003 10:30 am

Brilliant! :party



Willow manages to escape, knock Sark out and disable the shields. She is so cool!

Tara is just as good. Like I said, she's not letting anything stand in her way of rescuing Willow

I also like that you managed to include "I'll always find you". I love that line.

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 25)

Postby Grimlock72 » Thu Apr 17, 2003 12:19 pm

Hmm, the danger of Willow's plan is (of course) that they're trying to steal Rain's ride.... chances are she's close by. Sark was rather pathetic whining like that, I still think it would have been better to terminate him as he is the senior commander of Echolon's battle fleet.



Tara's landing reminded me a bit of Starbuck's landing in the original _Battlestar Gallactica_ movie. Near miracle that the sailor survived out there in the battle that long to begin with.



For a 5-mile long cruiser it's power is VERY easily disrupted with some combined fire. I didn't expect Willow to get out of thay annoying field so fast and easily, not that I mind of course :-). It's just hope Willow's humanity won't get her hurt eventually. Hunter-Killers might get up after she's knocked them unconsious and attack her from behind, which would be not-so-good.



Heh, Tara did find Willow fast, considering she's searching a 5-mile long vessel :-). Where did Tara's military training come from to lead that battle by the way ? I doubt Willow put that in :) .



Seems to me Echolon miscalculated some events at least. If it is (even partly) based on Warren that's understandable :) .



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Grimlock72
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 25)

Postby TemperedCynic » Thu Apr 17, 2003 8:32 pm

So much action after so much uncertainty. How quickly the tide turns for Echelon. Willow resembles Han Solo here, shooting out the controls and running from the chaos this creates. Ant TARA's timing couldn't be better, rescuing the damsel in distress. Taking Rain's transport may prove difficult, as Sark's muscle may just be waiting for this opportunity. We'll see. Wonderful, as always, Artemis.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 25)

Postby Artemis » Fri Apr 18, 2003 7:59 am

Thanks all :)



justin: True, Sark's never been physically damaged before (though he has had Echelon temporarily drain his power now and then, to keep him in line - it's a different sensation, though quite unpleasant in its own right). Unlike the Sark of Tron, this one isn't a Game Grid warrior - he's never actually faced an enemy capable of fighting back, as his own programs (who he knocks around, as he did Rain much earlier) are incapable of harming their commander. He's a thoroughly unpleasant program.



Willow's plan is a bit one-dimensional, but she has the advantage of her user skills, Tara's kick-ass-ness, and the Carrier being in a state of complete disarray.



chilled monkey: Funny thing about that 'I'll always find you' line, if I didn't read fanfic I'd never have remembered it. I've only seen most episodes of Buffy once, when they were first aired (we very seldom get repeats here, and the repeat schedule is still in the middle of season three anyway). Consequently, the exact details of most episodes, let alone dialogue, are a bit hazy. But a good quarter of the many stories I've read have had that line, or made reference to it :)



Grimlock72: Keeping the Sailer intact in the battle was tricky, but it's not without its advantages. It's faster and more manoeuvrable than even the interceptors, the hull is actually quite strong, and Tara can fly like Carmen in Starship Troopers (only much cuter). It helped, against the Carrier's guns, that the Sailer was the only one of hundreds of attackers that *wasn't* firing, and thus wasn't a target until someone realised it was a threat. I'm not sure where the landing came from (it can't have been Battlestar, I was (indicates real short) about that high when I saw it, and I don't remember a thing besides the theme, and what the Galactica looked like).



I agree the Command Carrier was disrupted easily, but there's a reason. The isolation field Willow was in is a very delicate piece of code, and will fail if there's more than a tiny surge in its power supply. Tara ordered time on target for the first shot from her fleet, which means that they coordinated their fire so that every projectile they launched in that salvo hit the Carrier at exactly the same instant - that sent a hell of a spike through the Carrier's power grid.



Tara wasn't leading the battle militarily, as such - I'm sure GDI had some of its programs run up a quick plan of attack. She has (quite literally, seeing as I'm writing it) no more fleet command experience than I do - which consists of having watched all of Deep Space Nine and Babylon 5 (that's where I learned what 'time on target' means). In Tara's case, seeing as she obviously hasn't been watching sci-fi in her spare time, I'd say she's just a quick learner, and managed to get the hang of the basics well enough to manage the field command of a relatively simple assault.



Yup, Echelon miscalculated. For all its computational power, it can't anticipate the random factors introduced by a human (or equal-to-human, in Tara's case) mind. No program other than Tara could have convinced GDI to go on the offensive like that.



TemperedCynic: Y'know, I can just picture Willow as Han Solo (and Xander as Chewbacca) - she's got that cheekily charismatic 'scoundrel' appeal. I'd be sorely tempted if I hadn't already sketched out the basics of a Star Wars plot, with Willow as a junior assistant to a Senator. Maybe I can come up with a reason for her to wear those tight Corellian Navy pants anyway...

Artemis
 


Fic: TARA (chapter 26)

Postby Artemis » Fri Apr 18, 2003 8:06 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Twenty-Six

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Rain glared furiously out of the Command Carrier's master deck at the battle raging around them. Her eyes flickered from ship to ship outside, and her throat let out a low growl as she watched the GDI interceptors dodging streams of disc-fire, and the lumbering recognisers. The menials stationed around the deck delivered their reports as unobtrusively as they could possibly manage, and Rain ignored them.



She turned as Sark appeared from the outer passageway, flanked by two heavily-armoured soldiers. She moved back to stand beside the communications port as Sark crossed the deck and took her place.



"Status?" he demanded.



"Nine hundred forty-seven GDI simulations still active," said Rain quietly, "damage to all decks and functions. Defensive systems operating on isolated control. Reconstruction reports point five millicycles until projection shields are operating again."



"You are relieved of command," said Sark calmly, "report to the docking bay."



"This is not my doing!" shouted Rain, moving forward.



"This is not a negotiation," replied Sark blandly.



"And *your* prisoner," hissed Rain, "have you not broken her yet? Or is it unrelated that internal security programs have been activated on five decks?"



"Are you questioning my capacity for command, program?" growled Sark, whirling to face Rain. She glared hatefully at him, then backed off.



"No," she said.



"Get to the docking bay," Sark ordered, "return to-"



"Priority data," said one of the menials loudly, "unauthorised simulation launch from docking bay."



"What?" yelled Rain and Sark at once.



"Transit beam projector has been activated," reported another menial.



"Override!" ordered Sark.



"Impossible to override," said the menial quickly, "there is a self-replicating fractal code blocking command paths."



"Simulation has integrated with transit beam," said the first menial.



"Target that simulation and fire!" shouted Sark. He and Rain both turned to watch as, a mile away at the prow of the Carrier, Rain's own manta-ray simulation came into view, riding the energy beam stretching from the Carrier's open maw. For a moment it drifted slowly forwards, then it shot out of sight in an instant, seconds before the streams of disc-fire from the Carrier's turrets reached it.



"Enemy simulations are falling back," reported a menial, "GDI shield wall is energising to full capacity."



"Destination of that beam," said Sark after a moment's pause. Rain snarled behind him, watching the interceptors outside rise above the recogniser fleet and turn back for the safety of their fortress.



"Echelon," said the menial.



"I want that beam shut down now!" Sark demanded.



"It's too late," warned Rain, "they're already on their way."



"Transmission incoming," said the menial operating the communications station.



"Echelon," muttered Sark to himself. He spared a last glance at the departing GDI fleet, then crossed the deck and took up his position at the communications port. In a moment, Echelon surrounded him.



"There is an unauthorised transit in progress," it rumbled, "deliver report."



"There has been a complication," said Sark hesitantly, "GDI launched an attack on this vessel. During the attack the user's confinement failed. It is probable she is on board the stolen simulation in transit. Reports from internal security indicate the program Tara may be with her." Sark braced himself for the energy drain he expected would be his punishment. Strangely, he wasn't quite as apprehensive as he had been in previous instances, when his reports had reflected unfavourably on him. The feeling of his power ebbing away somehow wasn't quite as distressing as the sharp, white-hot sensation of Willow's sword cutting into his side. No program had ever physically harmed him before.



After a long pause, the concentration of light around Sark vanished. He blinked, surprised not to be punished, or even given further orders.



"Program Sark," thundered Echelon's voice, echoing around the master deck. Rain and the menials looked up in shock.



"You are relieved of all authority," Echelon boomed, "you have no rank. Command is allocated to Rain. Recapture the user Willow, Rain. That is your only priority. End of line."



Sark stared around in disbelief. Relieved of authority - it wasn't possible. He was commander, that was his function, only he could perform it. He spun around as Rain approached him.



"I am commander," he barked angrily. She kept slowly walking towards him.



"Stop! I command you!" he shouted, panicked. Rain backed him up against the lectern of the communications port, smiling faintly.



"*I* am commander," she purred. "Acknowledge." Sark shook his head in disbelief. Rain leaned forward, forcing him to lean back to keep away from her stirring, razor-sharp mandibles.



"Acknowledge," she said slowly, as her spider-legs reached out around her body, their blades poised above Sark. He glanced at them, then back at Rain's implacable face.



"Acknowledge," he said at last, defeated. Rain smiled lazily.



"Include rank," she said airily.



"Acknowledge, commander," said Sark, dropping his gaze.



"Very good," Rain purred. She turned back to her menials.



"Generate a transit course to follow that simulation," she ordered, "maximum velocity. Divert all power to transit drives."



"Recogniser fleet is redeploying to clear a path," reported one of the menials, hesitating to raise his voice, "estimate point oh three millicycles-"



"I know," said Rain, "engage transit."



"But-" began the menial. Without warning Rain lashed out one of her spider-legs, piercing the menial through the throat. She remained still for a moment, a slow smile passing across her face as she watched the power dissipate from his, then she whipped her outstretched limb back, and the menial collapsed and shattered on the deck behind him. Rain turned to the next menial in line.



"Engage transit," she said softly. She turned to watch as the massive vessel surged forward through the recognisers clustered defensively around it. Half a dozen of them failed to veer out of the way fast enough, and exploded on the Carrier's prow as it accelerated through them. Rain watched the wreckage tumble without feeling, then turned back to Sark.



"Come here," she said. Sark took a deep breath and stood in front of her.



"Do you expect me to terminate you?" she asked. Sark did his best to suppress an angry growl. "The majority of your run-time has been devoted to command," Rain said, "your code and amassed knowledge are useful resources in this situation. It would be inefficient to waste them. I have a command for you. You will obey."



"I will obey," muttered Sark.



"I want you," said Rain carefully, "to give me your code."



She struck before Sark could react. Her spider-legs shot out from behind her, stabbing at him, two through each arm, two through each leg. Sark howled in agony as she lifted him off the deck. She waited for his cries to trail off, then leaned up, bringing his face close to hers.



"That was necessary," she said, "to ensure you did not attempt to resist." She reached up to him, lifting his chin with a finger to make him look at her.



"This," she said, "is for making me call you 'commander'."



Her abdominal talons reached out to either side of his body and lunged inwards, piercing his sides. Rain paused for a moment, listening to Sark's screams, then dug the blades in deeper, until their tips punched out on either side of his torso, beside the point where the opposite limb was pushing inwards. Again she waited for his howling to subside. She cupped his face with both hands, leaning in close to him. He was crying.



"And this," she whispered, "is because I enjoy it."



She pressed her lips to his, and her throat convulsed as the tendril within it shot out. Sark writhed in her grasp, screaming through her kiss. The pain was beyond anything he had ever experienced - the physical damage, sending spears of agony through him every time he thrashed around, unable to stop himself from struggling; the wrenching sensation from within him as Rain's de-rezzing tongue tore through his insides; and worst of all, the terrible feeling of having his mind pulled apart piece by piece, all the energy and thought seeping away, leaving only a cold, colourless framework capable of nothing beyond the ability to feel the pain. Sark barely noticed the creeping sick feeling as his body began to disintegrate.



Rain staggered as what remained of Sark collapsed in a shower of debris - she had never before consumed a program so powerful. Her body spasmed and she fell to the deck, her arachnid limbs bracing her automatically, keeping her from collapsing completely as her arms and legs jolted and flailed wildly. Her tongue whipped back into her throat, allowing her to let out a tortured scream. The tracery covering her body writhed and grew, simple lines splitting into new, more complex patterns as she absorbed the code she had ingested. Her face split across her forehead and down the sides, disgorging a replica of the coronet Sark's form had included, that quickly solidified into a new, more aggressive shape as it incorporated the leading edge of Rain's crest of blades.



Slowly, Rain lowered her hands and feet and put her weight on them. Her spider-legs pulled free of the holes they had gouged in the deck, and she slowly stood up, arching her back and flexing all her limbs expansively. She let out a long-held breath and turned to stare out of the master deck, ahead at the horizon where, somewhere out of sight, her own simulation was carrying Willow and Tara towards Echelon. Beneath her clawed feet she slowly ground the last remnants of Sark's tracery to dust.



'Only one program in the entire system will feel better than that,' she thought.



"Tara, Tara," she murmured to herself, "your turn next."



Artemis
 

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