[Short Fic Part 3/3] Seizure Of Heart

[Halo]

Hello!

Here a little late but still...Yes, that third part is great! Hope's point of view is so frank, and so funny.I loved to see the Harris family, with little Faith and little Dawn... And Hope already gave her essay to her teacher

Her name fits her very well , Willow and Tara seem to have a life so full with her. I think this is what makes this story so real... And yes, I love happy endings!
And I agree with Dax: this calls for a sequel, don't you think? (And I'd like to know about the teacher's reaction too !)

Pauline

[Auriam]

Hello

Sorry i'm late with my family and all ....

This last part was very very good !

I really love it, you are a great writer keep doing I can't want to read another fanfiction from you ! ! !

I love you

[JujuDeRoussie]

Hello everybody, thank you all for reading, and for feedbacking...


To answer Dax's and Halo's question, I don't think there will be a sequel. I feel it done. Then it would be or something very bad, or the same kind of stuff... Thanks anyway to ask for one ^^


Now my replies:
Dia:
Hey there
Congrats on the DIBS, lol.
I am so very glad you loved it! And that you're proud of me
You're a wonderful friend and when I am writing something I always hope I'll be able to show it to you. Thanks so much.

how much love there is between them all

Love is what makes them strong. They were kind of weak before. Now they're strong. Strong like and amazon

I love the rat's

I hope so! Of course Dopey is not here anymore :(
But I wanted him in one (or several) of my fics...
Thanks Dia. For everything


Aggie Querida:
Hey
I am glad you loved it. Although you would have loved evrything comin from me if I am right (as always lol )
I hope you will love y other writings. Who knows, maybe someday I'll write in spanish? (Then I'll show them that nothing is as beautiful as Willow and Tara! - Willow and JFK isbad! )
"me gusta la lluvia, me gustas tu...
me gusta el viento, me gustas tu..."


myfamiliar2824:
Hello
Thank you for reading and feedbacking
I am glad you liked it.
I hope I'll write AND finish something else too ^^


JustSkipIt:
Hello Debra,
First of all: Wow. I mean... wow. I re learn English with your fics... and here you are, reading and feedbacking my work. I am kind of proud ^^
Thank you for reading and feedbacking.
My favorite part is Hope's Essay too. But it was also the one making me the moe nervous. Maybe because it was my favorite and I was scared of how people would like it. Now I am relieved ^^
I wanted her to have alredy turned it for two things:
the ambarassing part (:-D), and because I thought it was just adorable for her to want to know what how her work could be valued without her mothers' help. But it was more for the embarassing part!

I particularly like the way the final line ties into the next update

Thanks. I had trouble to decide where I should finish Tara's part. But while writing it comes by itself.

Thanks so much


Dax:
Hey Little Bread!

Julia you’re truly great

thanks

Yeah I wanted to show how were Tara's and Willow's lives now. Since we knew how they were before.

Well Hope certainly very much comes after her Mommy – she’s certainly a very bright girl

Her both mothers! Willow is maybe the brainy kind, but Tara is very intelligent for she can adapt to the situation easily enough.

But she also has something in common with her “Honorary Auntie Julia”.

How do you know she loves chocolate so much? lol
Yes, I offered her 3 of my rats. I wanted her to have rats. A sort of "Original Juju" mark you know?
Plus it changed from the usual Miss Kitty ^^

Yes, her essay is all innocent. So is she. Through her regard we feel the love Willow and Tara have, but also can laugh a bit^^

No auntie Buffy?

Well... I thought about it a lot. But her name doesn't fit. lol
Plus I decided I was angry at her. I watched too much season 6 I think. Maybe if they take a dog? Lol
Sorry

Good to see though – in the sense of story telling – that even though things for the Maclay-Rosenberg family are mostly bright and happy, there have been dark times too.

I couldn't have them all happy and all. It wasn't realistic enough.
It was also an excuse to have Willow pregnant... And it makes it easier to have twins. ^^
And don't forget that kind of things make love stronger. Tara went through so much things. But Willow didn't truly. And together they didn't face something. So I needed something bad, not too much bad, but bad enough.

About the sequel, I thought about it too. But I wouldn't have something to come up with in that style. So it is up to your imagination. I am sure you have plenty of it.

Yes we can share the name of Hope. Afterall, the sorty is the one chosing. Right?

Thanks for reading


Halo:
Hi!
Glad you like this third part

I called her Hope because of the story. Or actually it is the story which called her Hope, and I follow. This child is Tara's and Willow's hope of a new beginning, a new life.
And of course, happy endings!! It rocks!
If you want bad endings you just have to watch the real show...

About the teacher's reaction.. I think he/She must be definitely amused.

Thanks for reading.


Auriam:
The best for the end

Thanks for everything. I love you too.
Don't worry I was joking, I know you are very busy lately. And tomorrow will be worse! Lol

Kisses my beloved Sister



Thanks for everybody having read it or who will read it

Julia.

[littlewicca]

Aggie Querida:
Hey
I am glad you loved it. Although you would have loved evrything comin from me if I am right (as always lol )
I hope you will love y other writings. Who knows, maybe someday I'll write in spanish? (Then I'll show them that nothing is as beautiful as Willow and Tara! - Willow and JFK isbad! )
"me gusta la lluvia, me gustas tu...
me gusta el viento, me gustas tu..."

Hey i loved it but is not because is from you!
^^
Im waiting for the otehr writings, and too a spanish one
Yes please help me to show them that!
Thanks!

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[hondos]

Juju,
What a fantastic story Sezure of the heart was.I have to tell you, I loved the three points of views that you offered there and what I really liked was the fact that you revisited it from the introduction of the story.The way they both saw the things that were going on with the other.Tara so proud, Willow so just taken by here from the begin .The change was very clear on both sides of the story.The part I liked was where Willow just couldn't do what she was used to doing on a daily basis anymore when it came to Tara.Then you showed that change again there with Taras view, with how she went from gruff to soft with in the first few minutes of there meeting.

was supposed to go there, do what had to be done, and go home, take a shower, have dinner at 6:30 pm as every night, and then watch a movie and go to bed. As always. I wasn't supposed to car about what would happen after I would have left. I never did. It was not a nice job, but it was still a job. Mine. Of course, usually people weren't in as bad condition as she was. Usually they were just pretentious people. It was easy with them. They were such sure of themselves... sure they were in power... so to show them they were wrong it was easy.

This afternoon I heard a loud knock on my door. I went to open it and saw several men and a red haired woman. Beautiful woman but her face was so strict. There was no joy there. No humanity. Even her eyes were cold. When she spoke to me, her voice was like a robot's one. I kept nodding to what she said... "we're here because you didn't pay for... blah blah blah". Nothing I wasn't expecting.


I let them come in. It was kind of funny because there wasn't enough room for every one.


When she was in I saw her cold face falling though. What was she expecting? Wasn't she used to poor people trying to not drawl? Well now I know she wasn't. She was used to go see very rich people not paying their taxes for years... not here.


The next time she spoke to me, it was clear she wasn't proud of what she was doing. Her voice was so more human. And endearing. Sort of. Her eyes were full of pity. I hated them back at the time. I never liked pity in people's eyes. And that woman was full of pity it seemed. She asked my story, and then tried some calls to make things better. Was it only pity? No. I know it wasn't. She was admiring me. She told me later. But I saw pity and it hurt me

I enjoyed as well the awkwardness of the attraction from the begining.I also liked that it took some time for them to get to the actual acknowledgment of it.Sometimes author skip over it to quickly , which I am guilty of in both of my fics.I may have been a short fic but you did make clear it wasn't an in the sack kind of a first meeting thing and I find that to be an endearing feature of a fic.

After some weeks I found myself wanting to be more for her. But I was afraid of asking her out. I mean I was afraid she would say no of course, but also that she would say yes only because I had helped her so much. I didn't want her to think she had to and that it would be a way to pay me back. That would have been horrible.
But once again, after some long convincing speeches, she believed me and to my astonishment, said yes.

The next days became weeks. My three jobs became two. We got to know each other, and I started to fall for this woman. She was funny, smart, sexy... she had a job she didn't like but lost it. For me. Well for her too.


Anyway. One day she asked me out, and was already arguing I didn't have to say yes if I didn't want to. I had the choice, if I said yes it had to be because I wanted to go out with her, not because I thought I owed her that. She was so damn cute when babbling. It was like she thought and prepared her little speech. Of course I said yes.
Then it was heaven. Weeks became months.

I love how concerned Willow is about the pregnancy.How worried for Taras pain she was and then we see the other side and it is Tara who worries about Willow.It was wonderful.






It's moments of cuteness in the Hope piece where just overwelming.She is just wonderful from the gate and entertaining from moment one.

I like the fact that she was so comfortable with the life she was being raised in and how she felt that there was nothing going on in there home that needed editing.Whether that was your intention or not it was there none the less and it was delightful.

We enjoy Mama's dinner and then I do the dishes to give my mothers some alone time. I know they have smoochies while I am in the kitchen. But they think I don't know that they kiss.

After the dishes are over, I come to the living room soundly to announce my arrival. Usually they are all red. Then we play a board game or watch a movie.

At 8:30 pm, I go to bed, and they both come to tell me a story.

Around 9 o'clock, they go to bed and have their own bedtime.

And Wednesday comes.

Mommy and I go to swim. Even if my back is good now. Mommy says it is good for stamina and stamina is very useful.

After the board game, we go to bed. Not the grown ups though. And even when they go to bed, there are very many noises coming from the office and my mothers' bedroom. I am not so sure any of them is asleep for some hours after going to bed. It is not that I am spying on them. Just sometimes the noises are so loud... and my cousins and I are always talking almost the all night so we know everything of what happen in my house. Faith once said they were having origami. Or orgazem? I don't know how to write it. And I don't know what it means. I hope it is not dangerous. I know my mothers told me to never come in there bedroom without their permissions. So if it is dangerous I will not be able to help them.

That is so very naughty in a oh so innocent way that I just love it.
And here with the boardgames?You do like board games and I like headboardsLOL Acept mine is really kinnda not nice at all is it now?No cuteness there at all.
Oh well.

After the board game, we go to bed. Not the grown ups though. And even when they go to bed, there are very many noises coming from the office and my mothers' bedroom. I am not so sure any of them is asleep for some hours after going to bed. It is not that I am spying on them. Just sometimes the noises are so loud... and my cousins and I are always talking almost the all night so we know everything of what happen in my house. Faith once said they were having origami. Or orgazem? I don't know how to write it. And I don't know what it means. I hope it is not dangerous. I know my mothers told me to never come in there bedroom without their permissions. So if it is dangerous I will not be able to help them.

And the homework she turnrd in without turning it over to the mommy and mama was hysterical.
I can say enough about how much I enjoyed this story.I wish I had read it sooner.I dont ever ventuer into this neck of the woods but I should have.


Also you need to finish it.I wanted to meet the twins and I would have loved to seen Hopes reaction to her two new siblings.

So, I guess that will not be anything we'll see for quite sometime with all the current projects you have going at the moment.

And tell me?How much of Hope is you? With the rats and sort of being wise beyond her years??
Im curious. I have no information to base this on but is there instances from this fic that are true to any events in your life?I'm talking about.I mean like with the restaurant chief and the restaurant itself.Was this something you were introduced to in your lifetime?Did you grow up in a family that owned on I guess Im saying?

Anyway I think it is a great first story and I do hope you finish it.LOL

Your freind
Rosemary

[JujuDeRoussie]

Hondos: My dear Rosemary, I'm so pleased to read your feedback

The part I liked was where Willow just couldn't do what she was used to doing on a daily basis anymore when it came to Tara.Then you showed that change again there with Taras view, with how she went from gruff to soft with in the first few minutes of there meeting.

If there was a Tara entering your life, wouldn't it change your daily habits? Lol
If a Willow came into your life, wouldn't it soften you?
Hihihi
I couldn't write otherwise ^^

I also liked that it took some time for them to get to the actual acknowledgment of it.

Yeah, I needed it to take some times, I wanted it to be really believable. You know?

Sometimes author skip over it to quickly , which I am guilty of in both of my fics.

sometimes that's good too

I love how concerned Willow is about the pregnancy.How worried for Taras pain she was and then we see the other side and it is Tara who worries about Willow.It was wonderful.

It was fun to write, especially Willow's part. I can imagine so well Willow freaking out. She is smart, she knows how it is suposed to work, yet in front of it, there is nothing she can do so she freaks.
They are a perfect couple aren't they? I love them

I like the fact that she was so comfortable with the life she was being raised in and how she felt that there was nothing going on in there home that needed editing.Whether that was your intention or not it was there none the less and it was delightful.

Yes it was. Sh ehas never been in another kind of family. She knows "straight" family but even them aren't in need of editing. Lol.
For her there i snothing wrong. It is how her parents are, two persons deeply in love. With their snuggles and such.
They are a "happy family"

.I wish I had read it sooner.I dont ever ventuer into this neck of the woods but I should have.

Better late than never

Also you need to finish it.I wanted to meet the twins and I would have loved to seen Hopes reaction to her two new siblings

Well, it is... finished. What comes next is up to the reader. I may eventually write something else, a sequel, but I have many writtings going on currently so...

And tell me?How much of Hope is you? With the rats and sort of being wise beyond her years??

Her rats
That's all.
She has two very wise mothers, how can she be less?

I mean like with the restaurant chief and the restaurant itself.Was this something you were introduced to in your lifetime?Did you grow up in a family that owned on I guess Im saying?

Nope.. Only ran into all of those my grandparents dared to take me. Lol. And I would make a thourough inspection of their restroom before I would actually order. LOL
I should keep on doing this. LOL
But I love the idea of a restaurant.
Maybe one day I'll own one héhéhé.

Anyway I think it is a great first story

Thanks again

Thank you so much for reading

*hugs