Fic: Losing Count (NC-17)

[VampNo12]

Maudmac well this fic just left me quite warm, and speechless! Just wow, very stimulating and quite worthy. Now I think I need a cold ! Thanks for those vivid images in my head right now, and I am so glad I didn't read this before having lunch with my mother (I don't think I would of been able to stop , enough to have a normal conversation with her).

[maudmac]

Y'all are cracking me up with the showers and thudding!



I'm really glad y'all like it.



Here's the story. I like the tender Sarah McLachlan/Enya kind of lovemaking that I really think Willow and Tara do most of the time. But I also think that every now and then, they like to just throw each other down and fuck, you know? Variety and all that.



I wasn't sure how well it would go over.



As far as more goes, I really don't know. I didn't even think about that. Silly me. I won't say never, but if I do write more of this, or something different, it's gonna be at least a couple months. Got a lot of irons in the fire just now. So, maybe sometime down the road.



And, Wendy? Shut up. Get real! It is not!

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I bring pie scented cleaner!--- weebl

[funkyasian]

that was absolutely wow... - i started reading at work and realized i had to stop if i was to be any use at all...but i finished it at home...and...ummm... ...and willow, taking tara like that... ...OMG



very very very very amazing...



steph



off to the shower now...

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[The Pineapple Head]

SHEESH!!!!!!!!!!!



Thank you very much for ruining my suede computer chair!!!



PH

Early one morning the sun was shining, I was laying in bed - Wondering if she changed at all, if her hair was still red.

[MadeinNZ]

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NC-17 ABSOLUTELY 100% COMPLETELY AND TOTALLY NC-17. I MEAN IT!

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I don't think that this warning was strong enough. Can you have a NC-34? It makes me very afraid of the things that go on in chat. Very afraid.



Oh - great story by the way.

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Buffy: I'd like to find Willow and Xander
Joyce: Will you be slaying?
Buffy: Only if they give me lip

Edited by: MadeinNZ at: 8/19/02 8:58:37 pm

[mscheckmate]

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Here's the story. I like the tender Sarah McLachlan/Enya kind of lovemaking that I really think Willow and Tara do most of the time. But I also think that every now and then, they like to just throw each other down and fuck, you know? Variety and all that.

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Oh, yes. And it's a good thing that you were there to observe and record.



I loved this fic. How about a sequel?

Xander: "Tara, nice axing." Tara: "My first."

[tkheaven]

HOLY CHRIST!! ... Ok, i must say that the humour was great! spirit toes NOW....umm, well...*gulp*...whew! uhh...I was reading and for a moment I had deja vu so you know I had trouble reading this fic at work...so Why are you reading smut at work? you ask...well, I can't help it...there..I admit it..I'm a..a uh...*sigh* I am a smutaholic. Now I gotta go home and perform the smutting cleansing ritual...

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"

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Tara was similarly riveted, her body on slow burn as Willow's lips parted and her mouth opened, the food slipping inside and being consumed. Never in her life had Tara ever wanted to be a chicken casserole so badly...Later that night..."It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured, before passing out. ~ Answering Darkness by Sassette

[KittyKo]

very, very nice indeed. *g*

it's one of those smut fics that make you have really good visuals, yes *nods* yes.

thank you for sharing it with us, really enjoyed it. =)

[MAISEY12]

Holley,



My Oh My.......( Flushed, sweaty and in need of a cold shower.) Tara, in a harness was just sheer bliss My pulse is still racing.



You southern gals sure know how to write an awesome smut fic.



Ann-Marie

[Thanatopsis]

Holy cow, that was very, very, very, uh, nice...and hot and very NC-17 and now I'm gonna go take a very cold shower. The spirit toes was funny, a cute touch.

Because he's with Willow. And if something ... happened, I'd know...
Insist upon yourself and never imitate. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson

[TromDeGrey]

Um...like...you know.... HOLY SHIT!!!!!

"Live or die, but don't poison everything..." -Anne Sexton

[hush30]

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Now I gotta go home and perform the smutting cleansing ritual

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I dare not ask what that entails. Probably just means a cold shower right

Most people can stand adversity, but if you want to test someone's character, give them power - David Baird

[Katharyn]

Oh Maudmac that was so very well done. You label it PWP... but it is so not. There is a continuous thread running through there that is not, purely, smut. As I think Ruth said the communication between them... the words, the gestures and thoughts are so beautifully done. It's a story of the girls in love. That always is a point in itself.



And as for the smut... well that was... that was great. The imagery was... interesting and the the composition inspired.



Also very, very hot here now... with one of your beta readers in chat and talking about encouraging more spreading*S*



Loved it.



Thankyou.



Katharyn

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[Magrat70]

Holley you can't make me shut up. People have tried but it's never worked

These five words in my head scream "are we having fun yet?"

Chad Kroeger

[tkheaven]

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I dare not ask what that entails. Probably just means a cold shower right

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Well, you know that rituals sometimes need a, uhh, well, someone to help, and well, yeah...a shower is good, too..you know..saving water and all...



Magrat, I think I'll be staring at your avitar for a long while...

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"

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Tara was similarly riveted, her body on slow burn as Willow's lips parted and her mouth opened, the food slipping inside and being consumed. Never in her life had Tara ever wanted to be a chicken casserole so badly...Later that night..."It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured, before passing out. ~ Answering Darkness by Sassette

[urnofosiris]

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But I also think that every now and then, they like to just throw each other down and fuck, you know? Variety and all that.

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Hell yeah, and I especially like how well they verbalised their -uhm- desires in this story. Well done and thanks.

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Tara: "uh Willow?"

Willow: "No dancing naked, huh?...It just won't be the same."

Tara: "That's all right, we can save it for later" ----From Wilderness, the newest WT comic written by Amber Benson and Christopher Golden

[Magrat70]

thheaven i think the feeling is definitely reciprocated

These five words in my head scream "are we having fun yet?"

Chad Kroeger

[emma peel]

Whew!! Is is hot in here????

Janice

[slayer747]

i'm keeping myself celibate from myself these days, so why the hell am i doing reading this?



whatever...

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"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong, and those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie "Once and Again"

[WillowsSlave]

Uhh... most of my higher mental functions just took a vacation. That was a wonderful combination of love, tenderness, wild SMUT, humor, and just a good, ole' fucking-of-the-brains-out.



Thanks, now I can stand in the que for cold showers.



*Jumps into the long line at the rainbow painted door with the Kitten, Witches,and Bad Wardrobe symbol blazed across it, while ahead, a rather surly looking lady punts a Warren look alike out of the line, throwing the rather ridiculous blond wig at his face. As he looks around, all of the women in the line eye him with something akin to homicidal rage on their faces. And suddenly the idiot realizes that he indeed did make a BIG mistake. And the next thing we know, he's strapped to the wall of the Kitten's common's area, in only his target emblazoned boxers, and a line of men and women alike, each holding a dozen really pointy darts, and sporting evil grins. And while, somewhere in the back, un noticed in the crowd, Willow and Tara stand, an arm around anothers' waist, grinning at the festivities.



"You know, we should do something to help him, because when their finished, the dental records won't be able to figure out who he is." Tara says softly. A second goes by.



"Nah." They chorus, and the two go off to find some more authors and inspire them.*



P.S. Sorry, I had to get that out of my system.

Kerri (The panther kitten with an eternal caffeine rush)
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Willow: Were more centered on the girl-on-girl action. ~ Talking with Anyaka in Entropy

[tommo]

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I don't think that this warning was strong enough. Can you have a NC-34? It makes me very afraid of the things that go on in chat. Very afraid.

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Well you see, that's one of the reasons I actually keep going to chat. Um...not for the smut. For the uh...inspiration. Yeah. That's it. Inspiration. Ahem.

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Darlin' theres no way out, nothing can help me now. Love's got a hold on my heart...

[Puff]

That story was great very thud worthy and marks for the Jaws line used in fic

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

[Tulipp]

That was...well, just...um...wow.



I love the way the teasing and playing stayed strong throughout the whole story; it was such a loving (completely hot) scene. People don't leave their senses of humor and their personalities behind when they go to bed and get out the toys (or what have you), and I love that you showed that so well here.



Okay, probably said too much already, but...just with more of the wow.

[maudmac]

I really appreciate the feedback. Y'all have been awesome.



I feel so silly now to have been apprehensive about posting it. I did a lot of sweating over that. And not the good kind, either. Well, actually,...uh...no, never mind.



Chat is good for a lot of things. Inspiration, yes. I've got two more ideas rolling around in my head that were both born in chat. It'll still be a couple months before either of them see the light of day, but they will be written. I'm looking forward to it. One of them is even naughty!



Again, thank you all so much! You've made me happy.



Any emoticons I missed?

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I am only one; but still I am one. I cannot do everything, but still I can do something; I will not refuse to do something I can do.---Helen Keller

[hush30]

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"Chat is good for a lot of things. Inspiration, yes. I've got two more ideas rolling around in my head that were both born in chat"

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If your stories give are any indication of the 'things' discussed in chat why the hell haven't I gone to the chat room yet

"I think this line's mostly filler" - Willow in OMWF

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[salemwitch13]

Wow, thats a great story, I enjoed it a lot, dont stop writing more, couldnt stop reading.

[Jherek5150]

Jeepers...very, uh, stimulating. My lord...

Edited by: Jherek5150 at: 9/24/02 2:47:47 pm

[Rocktoddy]

maudmac: I have to say this was very ehm... nice. Yeah. Nice.

Or, no, wait... maybe this was, let's say...TOTALLY SO AMAZINGLY FREAKINGLY HOT! (Okay... freakingly is not a real word... make it... freakishly... yeah)

Dang!

I loved it when Tara took Willowfingers and sucked on it... Yum... very sensual.

I also really loved this piece:

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Tara swung her head, tossing her hair to the side, and looked back over her shoulder at Willow. The look in her eyes, the spectacular fire of passion burning in them, captivated Willow and her rhythm faltered slightly. Her mouth was suddenly dry. She licked her lips.



Willow was amazed. Sensations, thoughts, feelings flooded her. Her head spun under the pressure of everything she was feeling. All it had taken was a look.

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Wow. Just wow. Whenever I feel down again, I just think about this fic and tada! Happy now!!!



Rocktoddy

"You can tell that Buffy is good and Willow is evil because Willow's lipstick is all caked and gross, while Buffy's is dewy and fresh. -Sep, recap Two to Go"
"Goodbye, cruel adventure game!... Eh forget it."-Guybrush Treepwood

Edited by: Rocktoddy at: 11/6/02 6:21:50 am

[MistressLilly]

OMFG!!!! i would just like to bow down to you *bows*. mmmmmm........spirit toes!!!