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Re: Please another update!!!

Postby tkheaven » Thu Mar 27, 2003 9:20 am

I posted a reply after your teaser and just now got to read the rest...and I'M LOVING IT! This is great! Please Please Please continue on!! :clap

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"...


"I've become really protective of her. I want to make sure if Tara comes back, it's for good reason." -Amber Benson
Tara ate her, devoured her from beneath. -The Edge of Silence giving new meaning to this season's catch phrase.
"Don't get me wrong. I kinda like being the quirky nympho chick." - Michelle in 'American Pie 3'

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Re: Please another update!!!

Postby snuggle79 » Thu Mar 27, 2003 2:46 pm

Oooh, i've missed so many updates.

All of them were great! :D

And i really enjoyed the last one. Willow standing up for Tara against that idiot Snyder! Yay! :applause

Can't wait for more!

snuggle79 :bigwave

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Put your hand on a hot stove for a minute, and it seems like an hour.

Sit with a pretty girl for an hour, and it seems like a minute. THAT'S relativity."









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Re: Please another update!!!

Postby SlayerSydney » Thu Mar 27, 2003 3:53 pm

Hee hee...Buffy and Faith. :p I'm such a smut ho. Any kind of smut ho apparently. I'm a slave to the smut. :boot



I like that Willow is already very protective of Tara. Helping her back to the dorm room after getting knocked out, standing up to that creep Snyder, and insisting Tara go to the nurses office. Sweet. :love



Anyway, I've changed my sig. I hope you like this one as much. :laugh

You had me laughing with this:

Quote:
I impressed you all with my knowledge of world war two didn't I?




Now, where's that next update? :whistle






"Honestly, I think if you prefer chocolate to sex, then you're clearly having entirely the wrong kind of sex."~~The Tao of Ruth

Edited by: SlayerSydney at: 3/27/03 2:54:35 pm
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Re: Torturing Touch

Postby Auburn » Thu Mar 27, 2003 5:15 pm

Stroke Of Luck no crown for me? well thats just evil.. I cannot be the Queen without a crown, maybe if I leave a few more cliff hangers then I can get one?? :pray



Kiwigrrrl you went to boarding school? with all girls? mmmm my kind of heaven :drool



hey Fairydust :bigwave glad you're enjoying it, but is school really that bad?



tkheaven how come you just now caught up with the rest of the story? have you only just recovered from my first post? :devilish



Snuggle79 I absoloutly hated Snyder when he was in Buffy, I practically had a party when the mayor ate him hehe

:party anyway :whistle glad you like the story :bigkiss



slayersydney You little smut hoe :laugh your sig b4 was so funny I was chuckling away to myself so loud my brother asked me to be quiet :blush the one you have now made me giggle but not as much. as for my knowledge of world war two I'll let you into a secret....... I was to lazy to research any major history avents and thats the only one I could remember:grin



Oh and I didnt update today sorry ladies and gents, I have an assingment in tomorrow that I have only just started... ah Im so naughty :rolleyes



I will update tomorrow... PROMISE *mwah*







Edited by: Auburn at: 3/30/03 11:12:40 am
Auburn
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby voxanglsm » Thu Mar 27, 2003 5:43 pm

Hey, thought I'd let you know that I wandered over here this afternoon and read everything except the teaser, but I'm really enjoying it. Keep updating! :D



Always,

Kristin

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Re: Torturing Touch

Postby mocha fiend 22 » Thu Mar 27, 2003 7:41 pm

wow i really love this fic. the first part was like wow and then i read the second part and u got to give it up to the all girl schools...hehe anyhoo cant wait for more :dance :wave

I love you now and forever and a week

mocha fiend 22
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby Bubblecath » Fri Mar 28, 2003 1:41 am

Hey Auburn! :wave

just to let ya know that im sitting exactly right here, waiting for your next update! :whistle 'la la la, update la la la' sorry i shouldnt sing- thats just wrong.

i loved your last update, cant wait to see whats next for W/T!

:whistle Tra la la la ....

cath

xxx



Bubblecath
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Fri Mar 28, 2003 9:56 pm

Auburn:



Liked the B/F spooning. That ought to prove to be an interesting "Willow-type explanation thing!":D



I hope Ms. Calendar will be understanding regarding Willow's gesture of chivalry.;) Afterall she should see that Snyder no doubt provokes such things. I loved it myself!:applause



~Suse

Cindy Lou Who
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby Discatay » Sat Mar 29, 2003 9:12 am

Auburn! update NOW!............... now?........ how about now? ......... please? ...... i'll give you money!

Discatay
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby Auburn » Sat Mar 29, 2003 7:12 pm

Title - Torturing Touch

Author name - Auburn

Email Address - GemmaQT@hotmail.com

Rating - PG. I'll let you know when it's NC-17



Previously



Stepping out from behind her desk Willow walked the short distance past her class mates and stopped in front of the desk Snyder was positioned behind. Calmly the redhead reached over the desk and picked up a jug, usually full of water, today there wasn’t any, but that wasn’t a problem, casting a little spell the jug was full to the brim within a blink of an eye. The class looked on in disbelief. It seems quiet, and nerdy little Willow wasn’t so quiet and nerdy after all.

Lifting the jug to a satisfactory position over Snyder’s head, she emptied the contents.





:applause **********************************UPDATE*************************:applause



‘Knock knock’



“Come in” came a voice from behind the door.”



Willow nervously stepped into Miss Calenders office. She had never been in trouble before and she knew Miss Calender didn’t tolerate bad behaviour, especially if the punishments Faith had received in the past were anything to go by.



“Ah Rosenberg, I’ve just been informed of your little display in history class and I have to say, I never knew you had it in you.”



Willow looked at Miss Calender quizzically.



“Willow, you have never miss behaved before, ever!” she paused .... “is there something you want to tell me?”



“What?” Willow asked, still a little puzzled



“Look, Willow” Miss Calender stated flatly “you have been a student at this school for a while now and I’d like to think I know you and what happened in class today wasn’t you. So tell me why you reacted that way. And I want the truth.”



“I-I don’t know I just got angry, that little munchkin.... I-I mean Snyder was all with the attitude towards Tara....”



Miss Calender sighed “I can’t have you miss behaving because of your protectiveness over your girlfriend Wi...”



“My what?” Willow interjected.



“Your protectiveness?” the teacher repeated.



“No! you said my girlfriend, why would you say that? Im not gay!” Willow stated firmly.



“I-Im sorry, I jumped to conclusions but that still doesn’t make what you did right” the teacher quickly changed the subject.



“Right my ass!” Willow’s voice rose a few octaves it seemed the teacher had hit a sore point “you know Snyder is an idiot!... somebody had to put him in his place sooner or later, it might as well be me!”



Miss Calenders voice rose aswel “but if he was being an ass, don’t you think it’s up to Tara to have taken the correct approach and come to me about it? it wasn’t up to you to interfere”



“But she wasn’t saying anything, she was stuttering... SHE WAS STUTTERING!!!!” Willow repeated in anger.



The noise echoed down the corridor where Tara had been making her way to wait for the redhead outside the office after having visited the nurse.



She had heard Willow’s denial of being gay and found herself with an over whelming feeling of disappointment. She had built her hopes up through the little touches and sideways glaces they made at each other. She scolded herself for being so ridiculous. Of course Willow wasn’t gay, and if even if she would, why would she want me? The blonde chastised.



“Your punishment Willow is to paint the school sheds and sort them out, I was going to get a professional in to do it, but now you have just signed yourself up for the job”



“Whatever” the redhead answered storming out of the office.



“And im calling your parents” the teacher shouted back at her retreating form.



The blonde stunned but also concerned for the redhead, ran after her.



To Be Continued....

Edited by: Auburn at: 6/28/03 3:50 pm
Auburn
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby i dig redheads » Sat Mar 29, 2003 7:33 pm

:applause :applause :applause :applause :applause :applause

hooray for updates!!!!!!!!!!!

i love love this story is going, more soon please???????



i dig redheads
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby Red Jassy » Sat Mar 29, 2003 8:25 pm

oh my Gosh!!!


I liked the anger willow had. so hot...hmmm
but anyway why does she have to stress that she wasn't gay.


Thanks for another great update... you have given me more reason to wait and long for your wonderful story.. thinking how will willow get the truth in her mind that she really likes Tara, as in like like..
ciao


your humble reader,


Red Jassy

Red Jassy
 


...

Postby Rane018 » Sat Mar 29, 2003 11:30 pm

wow, i just caught up with this fic and i really like it. Tara away from home and in a boarding school in sunnydale is an interesting setting. I liked Willow being protective of Tara, Faith and Buffy are a couple, Xander and 0z are in the boys school (i like the lil stories behind it). i enjoyed the start with the love scene and then the beginning of the fic. interestingly enough i wasn't confused by it but maybe that's cause i came into it a little late.



the only thing is the misspellings and lack of capitalizations and such take me out of the story. You really should get a beta reader to clean it up. it's worth it, this story is really cute and should be given it's proper debut.

"Take care of my heart, won't you please? Take care of it because it's all that I have. And if you let me, I'll take care of your heart too." Pure sweetness in the look between Willow and Tara.

Rane018
 


Re: ...

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sun Mar 30, 2003 12:41 am

Oh god I think Willow is still a little confuse :sob about her feelings for Tara. I hope she will not deny her feelings for her.



The punishment is okay I think Willow will get a help that called Tara:pray Alot of fun and the girls with paint all over there bodys :rofl



Update soon and maybe this time a little bit longer.:p

I :love your Fic:heart



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



Man sieht nur mit dem Herzen gut, das Wesentliche ist für die Augen unsichtbar - Antoine de Saint-Exupéry



ps. Will someone help me to get auburn a crown. I don´t know how you could make a crown:sob If someone knew it, please will you tell me:pray

Edited by: Stroke of Luck at: 3/29/03 11:44:19 pm
Stroke of Luck
 


Re: ...

Postby serenity » Sun Mar 30, 2003 6:20 am

wow! this is sooo good!

i mean it´s interesting,seeing willow between her feelings.

and lovely tara,shy and wondeful. i am so exited about the next update!:bounce

serenity
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby i dig redheads » Sun Mar 30, 2003 10:37 am

wow, go Tara!!!! let's have a big round of applause for the take-action girl. :applause :applause :applause :applause

i love how you're writing these characters.

will sit and hope :pray :p ray:pray that an update comes soon (look at me, aren't i greedy? already wanting more.....)

i dig redheads
 


Torturing Touch

Postby Auburn » Sun Mar 30, 2003 11:32 am

Title - Torturing Touch

Author name - Auburn

Email Address - GemmaQT@hotmail.com

Rating - PG. I'll let you know when it's NC-17



:applause *********************UPDATE*********************:applause



“Willow, stop” Tara was shouting for the second time that day.



The redhead had stopped running and was now in a fast walk, but Tara was still finding it difficult to catch up to her friend.



“Willow, please?” Tara pleaded.



The redhead sighed and came to an abrupt holt, her eyes diverted towards the floor.



“I-I got in trouble, that’s never happened before”



“And it’s all my fault” Tara stated guiltily.



“No Tara no, it isn’t your fault it’s that ass holes’”



“I heard the argument with Miss Calender, she thought I was your girlfriend, huh?”



“Yeah, like you’re gay or something? Im telling you, she thinks every girl in this school is gay. Even Cordelia, I mean as if, Im guessing if she was though she’d be in the ‘lipstick lesbian’ category....”



“Um, Will “ Tara said through the redhead’s babbling. She took a step closer.



“Is there a lipstick lesbian category? If I was a lesbian I’d be in that category because Im so not with the butch, Buffy and Faith are butch, no wait that can’t be right....”



“Willow” Tara tried again, taking another step towards the redhead. She had got it now. Through the redheads rambling, there was something hidden, that needed to be found.

Miss Calender’s innocent use of the word ‘girlfriend’ had gotten the redhead thinking and the blonde knew that Willow’s mind wasn’t easy to control. Maybe she could help.



The redhead had gone quiet, Tara wasn’t fooled, Willow’s mouth may have stopped, but her mind was in full swing.



Girlfriend? Me have a girlfriend? You have got to be kidding me, even though Tara is gorgeous’ she stopped her mind to look at the blonde, blue eyes were looking back at her, waiting patiently. She REALLY is gorgeous but I am just, not gay! Oh ok compare Oz to Tara, he has nice eyes but Tara has nicer eyes because they show exactly how she’s feeling. Ok one point to Tara. How about lips? Oz has nice lips, they are a little thin, but kissable no doubt, Tara’s lips are full, and red and very very kissable. So um... Two points to Tara.



The blonde had noticed that all the while Willow’s thoughts raced around her head her hands were fidgeting with the hem of her white school shirt. Tara reached out and took the fidgeting hands into her own, filling the tiny space left between them Tara took one more step closer.



“Willow sweetie”



The redhead stopped, everything, the mind babbling, the fidgeting all stopped when Tara called her sweetie.



“Sweetie?” Willow repeated.



The blonde nodded. Leaning her head closer to Willow’s, she moistened her lips in anticipation. She didn’t know where she had gotten the courage from, but she was going to use it.



The redhead watched, unable to move. She closed her eyes and waited for Tara’s hot breath, to be replaced by her full lips.... she felt a soft, gentle, pressure, then it was gone.



Opening her eyes questioningly, the redhead was surprised to see Tara smiling back at her.



“Yes im gay, Will, and no Faith and Buffy are not butch” she paused. Making sure she was doing the right thing. Looking into green eyes she saw the shock of her confession of being gay and decided to go on.



“You didn’t pull away” she stated. “That leaves you with two questions..... one: are you attracted to just girls? Just guys? Or both? And two: are you attracted to me?”



The redhead stood, dumbfounded. Her mouth opened and closed a few times.



Tara watched the emotions play on the redhead’s face and decided to leave her to think.



Leaning in she kissed Willow’s cheek and gave her hands a squeeze before letting go. She turned and walked back down the corridor.



Willow watched her leave, Tara’s words playing in her head.

‘That leaves you with two questions, one; are you attracted to just girls? Just guys? Or both? And two; are you attracted to me?’

Technically the first question was three questions, but who cares?



To Be Continued....

Edited by: Auburn at: 6/28/03 3:57 pm
Auburn
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby Willster » Sun Mar 30, 2003 11:34 am

I just read everything from the beginning and I really liked it.

Continue your good work, i can't wait for an update, things are getting hot between our two girls!!

Willster
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sun Mar 30, 2003 11:58 am

That was too funny!!!:laugh



Quote:
Technically the first question was three questions, but who cares?




Still the old Willow always using her brain.



Hope she will think about the second question.:heart



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



Man sieht nur mit dem Herzen gut, das Wesentliche ist für die Augen unsichtbar - Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby fairydust » Sun Mar 30, 2003 12:20 pm

WOO!!!!:grin :dance Go Tara!!:party

I LOVE MY KARE-BEAR

fairydust
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby SySnootles » Sun Mar 30, 2003 1:55 pm

I'm very glad I stumbled upon this fic.



I like the more assertive, more forward Tara. It suits her very well. And you have Willow's mind babbling down. I must admit, that's one of my favorite parts in fics. Probably because I can relate to them so much. Scary, isn't it?



Anxiously awaiting another update. Keep up the great work!!



Catie

SySnootles
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby Vampire Willow » Sun Mar 30, 2003 3:08 pm

*gasp* :drool :thud



That was great, Auburn! WOW! :bow

Update again soon!!!!!! Pwease?



~Tash xoxo

"We repulse ourselves! I mean, I used to look in the mirror and go, "Well, I'm not going to shag me, that's for certain!"-Eddie Izzard

Vampire Willow
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby Bubblecath » Sun Mar 30, 2003 3:26 pm

:applause Wow Auburn, great update(s)!!

Go Tara with the courage! and :bow for more updatey goodness soon! im loving this! :heart

cath

xxx

Bubblecath
 


Re: Torturing Touch

Postby Auburn » Sun Mar 30, 2003 3:38 pm

Title - Torturing Touch

Author name - Auburn

Email Address - GemmaQT@hotmail.com

Rating - PG. I'll let you know when it's NC-17



:applause *************************UPDATE***********************:applause



‘are you attracted to just girls? just guys? Or both?’



Tara’s words were still spinning in Willow’s mind. She had walked around incessantly trying to find an answer to that first question and had missed lunch, three classes and it was starting to get dark, which was never a good sign.



“Willow?” said a voice from behind a tree.



‘Oh God not now’ she thought “Hey Oz”



“Hi, Willow, I wasn’t sure it was you, what are you doing out here on your own?”



“Yeah, I was taking a walk and lost track of time, Im going back now” ‘please don’t follow me’ she pleaded inwardly.



“That’s cool, I’ll walk you”



‘Damn!’ she cursed as they walked on in silence.

********************************************



“Hey Buffy” said Tara as she was putting on her jacket, it seemed the summer nights in Sunnydale were just as warm as the days.



“What’s up Tara, You going somewhere?” Buffy asked.



“Yeah, Willow has been gone too long, Im going to go look for her”



“Faith and I were just about to go, wait up for us, its safer” Buffy stated a little concerned. It had to have been really serious for Willow to miss a class.



“No, do you mind? I-I think I may have caused her to wander off”



Buffy nodded “Take this”



“A whistle?” Tara said in a mocking tone.



Buffy rolled her eyes “Slayer hearing” she stated, pointing to her ear “you blow that and we come-a-running”



“Got it” Tara said with a chuckle, nodding her head for emphasis.



“Are you mocking me, Miss Maclay?”



Buffy was surprised, she had never seen the playful side to Tara before and she had to admit, it was cute.



“No way slayer! I mock thee not” Tara declared with a comic edge to her voice as she left the room.



Buffy turned towards Faith “The nerve of that girl” she said with a smile.

********************************************



Willow and Oz had been walking in silence for five minutes, in that time Willow had decided she wasn’t attracted to him or Xander. She kept throwing him sideways glances to see if he was looking and every time, he was. He was good looking and oddly cool about everything and before she had met Tara, she had considered him an option, but she realised that somewhere along the line, somehow, her subconscious mind had realised she liked other girls, long before her conscious mind did, that, she supposed was the way it always worked.



“So, Willow” Oz broke the silence.



“Yeah?”



“You, errr, going to the dance?”



She sighed “Oz....”



“Willow?” came another disembodied voice not to far away. The redhead recognised the voice and smiled. “Over here"



Tara followed the redheads voice and made her way through some bushes.

The redhead stopped when she heard a rustle, going over to investigate she was surprised to see the blonde making her way through. Holding out her hand, Tara took it steadying herself.



“Hey Sweetie, are you.... ” she stopped when she saw Oz “Oh h-h-hey,..um Oz is it?”



“Yeah, Hi” he relpied, aware that the blonde hadn’t counted on him being there.



“Are y-you ok?” Tara finished her previous sentence to the redhead. She tried to let go of Willow’s hand, but the redhead only gripped tighter.



“Yeah Im fine, I just, had to think ya’know?”



“Busy in there, huh?” the blonde asked, pointing to Willow’s head.



“Yeah, not as bad as it was though” she smiled.sweetly “Take me home?”



The blonde nodded.



Oz had slipped away without either girl noticing.



* * * * * * * * * *



Tara had walked Willow back to their room warning the redhead that Mr Giles was not to pleased about her skipping his English class, but Willow had reassured her that Mr Giles will forgive her because he was Buffy and Faith’s watcher. The redhead could have sworn she had told Tara at some point since she had known about the scoobies but Tara insistent she hadn’t.



“So, you’re saying Mr Giles knows that I know about you guys, And that he actually takes care of you?” the blonde questioned in disbelief.



“Yeah” Willow stated, while taking Tara’s coat.



“Wow, and here I thought things would be boring in boarding school”



Tara sat on the end of her bed, taking her shoes off, unaware that Willow was watching her. It seemed the redhead had found the answer to her second question when she realised just the simple act of watching Tara take her shoes off made her smile.



“I am you know” Willow announced.



“What?” Tara asked in confusion.



“Attracted to you” she answered, taking Tara’s hand in her own she gently pulled the blonde to stand in front of her. Tara smiled shyly as she wrapped her arms around the redhead’s neck.



she slipped her arms around Tara’s waist and pulled her closer, parting her lips in anticipation. The blonde entangled her hand in Willow’s hair and pulled her down, until their lips met. Both soaking in the velvety softness of each others mouths, Willow felt Tara’s finger nails scrape the back of her neck and she took the opportunity to deepen the kiss. Easing her tongue along the blondes bottom lip until they parted allowing her entry, capturing Willow’s tongue, Tara sucked it gently savouring the taste and feel.



Grudgingly breaking the kiss, the blonde gently pulled away from the redhead, who was stunned silent. She smiled and kissed Willow once more before asking.



“Are you ok?”



Willow nodded happily, a broad smile covering her face.



To Be Continued.....

Edited by: Auburn at: 6/28/03 4:06 pm
Auburn
 


finally, an update!

Postby willowsgirl » Sun Mar 30, 2003 5:38 pm

Why is it that whenever im waiting, an update never appears?Im so glad we finally got anoter installment of the gang's kinky boarding school activities, theyre just 2 cute for words!!

another update soon please auburn, you're a goddess

xx:applause :bigkiss :heart

willowsgirl
 


Re: finally, an update!

Postby fairydust » Sun Mar 30, 2003 11:02 pm

Woo Hoo!!! I must add more lil dancey guys!!!!:dance :dance :dance :grin Great update:D

I LOVE MY KARE-BEAR

fairydust
 


Re: finally, an update!

Postby Stroke of Luck » Mon Mar 31, 2003 4:28 am

Hmmm nice chapter:bounce



Jup I think Willow did the right choice. Oh great the smoochie time is coming:grin



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



Man sieht nur mit dem Herzen gut, das Wesentliche ist für die Augen unsichtbar - Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: finally, an update!

Postby barnabasvamp » Mon Mar 31, 2003 4:40 am

Awww, new love is always so sweet! :bigkiss



The way you have brought their relationship along, just adds to the wonderfulness of this story.

BV

"When choosing between two evils, I always like to take the one I've never tried before"-Mae West

barnabasvamp
 


Re: finally, an update!

Postby Washi » Mon Mar 31, 2003 7:06 am

Auburn, you can't leave us hanging there, just...hanging! :grin

Wonder what they're gonna do until Faith and Buffy get back. :jho



********



"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

Washi
 


Re: finally, an update!

Postby Red Jassy » Mon Mar 31, 2003 8:17 am

Can i just say!! Your so00 good in writing your fic...

great update. Thanks again for your wonderful story.


Hmmm.. Tara was a bit confident there...About the kissing, She isn't afraid of risking her new found friendship between her and willow. Maybe she just felt it was right.That was cool.


Your Humble Reader,
Red Jassy

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