NinjitsuGrrl's Collection of Poetry

[Tulipp]

I like that line "I could read you for days," especially with the image it gives me of lip reading.



Very nice.

"And I'm eating this banana. Lunchtime be damned!" -- Willow in "Doppelgangland

[ninjitsugrrl]

Hey folks. Thanks to everyone for reading and/or leaving comments. Y'all are great!

TheWhiz - Thanks! I really liked the way those lines turned out too.

Tulipp - Oooh, "lip reading"? Nice.

"I know the answer! The answer lies within the heart of all mankind! The answer is twelve? I think I'm in the wrong building." - Lucy in "Peanuts" by Charles Schultz




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[Tara22]

wow... great poem ninjitsugrrl!!



I loved this line

Quote:

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So much depends on the situation,

and so much upon the time.

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and, then of course the ending... really great stuff!



OH, and I loved the first lines too!



Go you!

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"Oh, sorry. Uhh, I forgot that that doesn't seem normal, to the rest of society. It's just, we, well, we both really like cows. Really like them. To the extent of wanting to buy one, when we're older."- The Crying Game (by Vix84)

[ninjitsugrrl]

Thanks, Tara22. I always look forward to seeing your comments on my new poems. I'm especially glad that you liked the ending. This poem was kind of about me working out some stuff about myself too and that was my favorite line in the poem.

"I know the answer! The answer lies within the heart of all mankind! The answer is twelve? I think I'm in the wrong building." - Lucy in "Peanuts" by Charles Schultz




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[TheWhiz]

A great poem I loved how it built from the opening lines until the end- a very effective piece, great words

[fidds]

wow-great poem



*Hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

[ninjitsugrrl]

The Whiz - Thank you! I'm glad you found the build up of the poem effective.

Fidds - Thanks for stoping by. I'm glad you liked it.

"I know the answer! The answer lies within the heart of all mankind! The answer is twelve? I think I'm in the wrong building." - Lucy in "Peanuts" by Charles Schultz




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[bulldog tidnab]

This was an amazing poem. My freakin' god. What an incredibly satisfying build. I must say one of the things that I love the best about this was that I really felt the emotions. Really made me think.

Especially this:

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like I experience more than I feel

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I'm thinkin' I've been there. I'm going to go back and read this a few more times. I very sincerely love this poem. Huh. Cool.



*woof*

"Usually when people are sad, they don't do anything. They just cry over their condition. But when they get angry, they bring about a change."

- Malcolm X

Edited by: bulldog tidnab at: 12/10/02 11:07:39 pm

[ninjitsugrrl]

Bulldog - Thank you! Amazing? You're making me blush. I think it's great that you could relate and feel the emotions in the poem. I appreciate your review.

"I know the answer! The answer lies within the heart of all mankind! The answer is twelve? I think I'm in the wrong building." - Lucy in "Peanuts" by Charles Schultz




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[funkyasian]

i think i'm ready to delurk...that last poem was incredible...the picture it painted for me...it's so vivid...absolutely wonderful...



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[Drakkenfyre]

Darling, I am so sorry that I have been away for so long. I return to find that your talent has grown in leaps and bounds. I am awestruck by your work. I would love to say more but right now words fail me. Again, I apologize for not being here sooner. Please continue to write. You, my dear, rock my world.



The Lady Dragon

I am the dragon that hides from the sun and flies in the moonlight.

[ninjitsugrrl]

Funkyasian - Thanks for delurking and thank you for your comments! I'm glad you liked the latest poem.

Drakkenfyre - Sweetie! So good to see you back in my thread. Don't worry about the absence; I would wait an eternity for the lady dragon. She's just that cool! Thank you for the wonderful comments.

"I know the answer! The answer lies within the heart of all mankind! The answer is twelve? I think I'm in the wrong building." - Lucy in "Peanuts" by Charles Schultz




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Edited by: ninjitsugrrl at: 12/15/02 6:28:05 pm

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