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SOMEONE has been taking evil lessons...

Postby Kieli » Mon Jun 24, 2002 5:26 pm

...and apparently you've learnt your lesson too well! No fair leaving us in the lurch like that! :mad More updates, less evil cliffhangers.


Love is tricky. It is never mundane or daily. You can never get used to it. You have to walk with it, then let it walk with you. You can never balk. It moves you like the tide. It takes you out to sea then lays you on the beach again. Today's struggling pain is the foundation for a certain stride through the heavens. You can run from it but you can never say no. It includes everyone."--Amy Tan "The Hundred Secret Senses"

Edited by: Kieli at: 6/24/02 4:41:17 pm
Kieli
 


Re: re p6a

Postby ally02 » Mon Jun 24, 2002 5:28 pm

Heya



Love this chapter and u r so mean leaving it there!! I always wondered what Tara's dad would say to her being gay. Yes Dad im a demon witch lesbian!! Ha ha ha. Ok maybe thats just funny in my head!



love Aly xxxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: SOMEONE has been taking evil lessons...

Postby witchbitchwillow » Mon Jun 24, 2002 5:30 pm

heya,



thanx for the feedback and i learnt everything i know off aly lol.



kieli- sorry for the cliffhanger, im on a role at the moment so more fic soon i promise :D



aly- wlel you managed okay tleling ure dad your a demon witch lesbian lol. love you honey!! *kisses and snuggles*



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Aw-right

Postby jdcioffi » Mon Jun 24, 2002 5:38 pm

And Willow to the rescue (with Buffy in tow ...).



Dude, I'm looking forward to the showdown. Smackdown! Bwap!



JD

"I smell the smelly smell of something that smells smelly!" (SpongeBob Squarepants)

jdcioffi
 


Re: SOMEONE has been taking evil lessons...

Postby fairydust » Mon Jun 24, 2002 5:40 pm

:D very nice. Im glad Willow finally told Buffy. And I hope Tara's dad just backs down. I will now go back to waiting for another update:)

*****Faye*****I LOVE YOU JENNA

fairydust
 


Re: SOMEONE has been taking evil lessons...

Postby The Rose24 » Mon Jun 24, 2002 11:21 pm

Tara's father really needs to stay out his daughters life. She is a grown woman. I hope he gets lost.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Re: SOMEONE has been taking evil lessons...

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Mon Jun 24, 2002 11:25 pm

YAY!! Great update, Ellie! I can't wait for more! And, hehe, you've made me a happy bunny! :lol



Aimee :D

*****
"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

ExtraFlameyWT
 


Re: SOMEONE has been taking evil lessons...

Postby SlayerTazz » Tue Jun 25, 2002 1:43 am

Love the update - no fair with the cliffhanger...Thanks for the update!! Made my night just that much better! ;)

A dream is a wish the heart makes.

Willow: "You had two eggs, sunny-side-up. I remember because they were wiggling at me like little boobs."

Tara: "Sassy Eggs."

SlayerTazz
 


Re:

Postby mollyig » Tue Jun 25, 2002 3:05 am

Glad Buffy is being supportive, and that Will has her resolve face on! Definitely bodes well.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re:

Postby pikescoob » Tue Jun 25, 2002 6:37 am

Yay...Willow got there in time. I hope he tries something dirty cuz then Buffy can kick his ass. I'm glad Buffy decided to be supportive, but isn't Ken gonna be heartbroken that she left him at the restaurant......lol. :lol



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re:

Postby Grimaldi » Tue Jun 25, 2002 8:50 am

loved the update. glad Buffy decided to hold off on the questions she has for Willow and did the best friend thing. the confontation between Tara's dad and Willow should be interesting, can't wait to find out what happens next :)

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

Worm, are you ready to die in the cleansing apocalypse?

Here she comes, never get enough of her sex action

Grimaldi
 


Re: SOMEONE has been taking evil lessons...

Postby snuggle79 » Tue Jun 25, 2002 9:31 am

Woo Hoo to Willow! Great :D



Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

snuggle79
 


Re: SOMEONE has been taking evil lessons...

Postby TareBearRS » Tue Jun 25, 2002 9:50 am

Yee, you go Willow !! Stop that creep from taking Tara away!!

And I hope Tara stays strong and stay!

If he keeps being a pain, let Buffy have a few rounds with him.... :)



R.

TareBearRS
 


feedback

Postby witchbitchwillow » Tue Jun 25, 2002 10:42 am

wow, lots of great feedback. thank you sooo much for reading :D



okay here goes:



JD- showdown soon dude :D hehe dude how kool.



Faye- yeah i think that Willow needed to tlel Buffy and knew deep down that she would be okay with it.



Rose24- Try telling all father that they should stop interupting with their daughters life lol. although tara's dad is an extreme case.



aimee- hello my dear, im glad that i made you a happy bunny, happy bunnies are always good :D *sorry anya*



slayertazz- Sorry about the cliffhanger :-s i'm glad that i made your night better :D



Mollyig- relove face willow os the best, she so damn cute when she does it.hehe



Michelle- lol, ken, oh well never mind. but there will be a reunion of couples at the end.



Grimaldi- yeah buffy can do the best friend thing when it matters most.



snuggle- Willow is great, i totally agree :D



tarebear- I knew there was a reason why i introduced buffy into the story lol.



thanx again for reading, im going to take my time on the next oart so that this fic picks up again because ive been starting to get a bit sloppy. so next update may take a while but hopefully it wil be worth it.



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: feedback

Postby Ginner WTluv » Tue Jun 25, 2002 12:46 pm

Beat him with a shovel Willow!!! Go on!!! Kill him!!! Grrr... argh... aaaanyway, as always, lovin' this fic. And i did promise to release everyone when you updated it so.... *Opens up door to top secert hidout thingey and watches as the Buffy cast and Miss Kitty flee* ;)

Keep writing:D



Ginner ~ A happy, fluffy, slightly neurotic, purple kitten from the planet Twong.

Ginner WTluv
 


Re: feedback

Postby witchbitchwillow » Tue Jun 25, 2002 4:56 pm

AWW THANX GINNER, WELL HELLO WILLOW HE HE HE.



LOVE ELLIE X X X X



THANX FOR THE FEEDBACK AGAIN :d

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: feedback

Postby ally02 » Wed Jun 26, 2002 2:14 pm

Hmmm caps lock attack....methinks someone had a bit too much frost nectar last nite ;) which would explain the absence of her 2day!! Hangovers suck eh??



Hey you have a lightning bolt!!!



love Aly xxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

Edited by: ally02 at: 6/26/02 1:28:52 pm
ally02
 


Re: feedback

Postby witchbitchwillow » Wed Jun 26, 2002 2:30 pm

like id do that aly!!!!!!



i was only a wee bit tipsy you know. also i was out dancing with my lesbian friends and also being very moody. which isnt from the alchohol. so *sticks tongue out* dont get the wrong idea from that gesture thou. god i relaly need to learn how to spell. grrrrrrrrrr. okay moody ellie returning to her hole. :(



*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: feedback

Postby oneinten » Fri Jun 28, 2002 9:11 am

awww..this is a great story. Go pissed-off Willow. with Slayer support too (finally) I figure this will end well! :grin



Please update more!



kath

oneinten
 


Re: feedback

Postby TheWhiz » Fri Jun 28, 2002 3:46 pm

I'm away for a week and I come back to find pages I need to catch up on!!! I made it through though- phew!! :grin

Great updates, love this fic.

Go Willow!! Lets hope Tara's dad gets the hint and does a disappearing act ASAP!!! :)

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: feedback

Postby witchbitchwillow » Fri Jun 28, 2002 4:54 pm

heya,



Kath- like i would let it end badly!!! slayer aupport is always important lol.



thewhiz- i dont think that tara's dad will be sticking around for much longer hehe :D



cheers for the feedback, sorry i havent updated, but when im in a writing mood i promise you i will :D .



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: feedback

Postby no birthday cake » Sat Jun 29, 2002 12:49 pm

yay yay!

i see willow has on her ass-kicking shoes on.

no birthday cake
 


chapter 7

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Jun 29, 2002 12:56 pm

heya,



no birthday cake- urm well its not Willow doing the kicking here he he he, you'll see what i mean.



okay little chicks, i have an update for you all at last, hope that you enjoy it. feedback welcome as always!



love ellie x x x x





Part: 7

Author: Ellie Walsh aka. Witchbitchwillow

Email: witchb1tchwillow@hotmail.com

Feedback: yes please. Be brutal I can take it. “Strong like an Amazon right!”

Spoilers: none

Rating: PG

Pairing: Willow/Tara

Disclaimer: Joss owns it… Mutant enemy blah blah blah etc…

Summery: Based around series 4 when Oz left Willow. Willow then

goes on holiday to Orlando, Florida, goes into a bar, and makes

a new acquaintance.

Authors Note- well I don’t really have one this time so blah blah, oh yeah Aly proof read it for my this time so blame her lol.





        Tara’s dad turned round to face his opposition. He chuckled to himself when he saw Buffy and Willow standing in the doorway with their hands on their hips. “You think I’m going to frightened by two little girls” his smug attitude sent shivers down Willow’s spine.



        “Willow!” Tara’s face lit up as she saw her lover. She stood up so that she was behind her father and facing Willow.



        Buffy just ignored the sexual tension between her best friend the blonde stranger, who she supposed was Tara. “Yes I am little, and well at least I think I’m a girl. The only thing that you got wrong was the fact that you should be very frightened”. The Slayer loved her witty remarks she came out with before she was about to fight.



        Willow was steadily growing in confidence and the presence of the strongest and best fighter alive was always a good back up plan. She walks towards Tara’s father, “So, I’m guessing from that little conversation I just overheard, its your fault that Tara has to leave me”. She had picked up a few little tricks from her vampire-self, especially when she needed to scare someone into believing that she was a lot scarier than the cute little redhead looked. “You know, when people take away my things I get very, very cranky!” she let a little smile play over her lips as she said the line.



        Tara’s father was in shock, he really wasn’t used to being stood up to by women. All his life women had been his slaves and he expected them to treat him as their master. He had controlled Tara’s mother and Tara their whole life, and to see Willow and Buffy act in this kind of manner disgusted him.



        Willow took advantage of his temporary falter and reached out to Tara’s hand and tried to pull her from behind her father and onto the same side as herself and Buffy. Tara’s father picked up on the move and grabbed Willow by the shoulders and slammed her into the wall. On instinct Tara picked up a chair and hit her father over the head with it. causing him to fall to the ground.



        Tara just looked on what she done in shock. All the years that he had abused her, and only now had she finally got her revenge. She was in know way a violent person, the complete opposite in fact. She was brimming with kindness and love, but any threat to a person that she cared about deeply enough was enough incentive to do anything.



        Buffy and Willow just froze and stared at the timid blonde, still holding a chair in her hand. Buffy was the first person to find her voice. “Looks like you didn’t need our help anyway”.



        Tara was just staring at the man lying unconscious on the floor. All the emotions she had been feeling in the past couple of days erupted in side of her and she fell to the ground, shaking in tears. Willow rushed over to her love and embraced her, rocking back and forth, whispering comforting words to ease the pain. Willow was rubbing her hand against Tara’s back, she lifted her head from the blondes shoulder and kissed her forehead. Willow wiped the tears from Tara’s tear-stained cheeks, and kissed Tara’s full red lips. She stopped for a minute resting their foreheads against each other.



        She muttered breathlessly, “I love you so much Tara.” She kissed her blonde again, this time a little more passionately.



        Tara’s tears had stopped momentarily and she said with full confidence, no sign of a stutter in her voice. “Nowhere near as much as I love you.” Willow chucked gently and pulled Tara back into a hug. She didn’t think that now was the best time to argue about who loved who the most, but being Willow she wasn’t going to leave it like that. She kissed Tara’s neck softly and with a sassy tone replied.



        “I’d like to test that theory”, Tara just laughed at the redheads little quirks that she had grown to love even in such a short space of time.



        All this time Buffy had just been staring at the two lovers with her eyebrows raised. “Hey guys, I’m just gunna” there was no reply from the two on the floor, they were completely lost in their own little Tara and Willow world. “Yeah so, taking this bastard to hospital before he dies or something. I’ll meet you at the hotel later?”. There was still no reply. She took the hint “Okey dokey, ill see you later. Have fun” She clapped her hands nervously and then picked up the half dead man with her Slayer strength and made her way out of the bar and down the street. Receiving some very strange looks on her way.



* * * *



        While all this was going on Ken had finally made his way back the table, after pruning himself for a record breaking forty minutes. He came over to the table that he shared with Buffy and found the little note on the table. He read the note and was instantly confused by the semi-complex language the Slayer had used. He decided that it wasn’t worth continuing to eat without his date. He asked the waiter for the bill and left the restaurant, and strutted down the street.



* * * *



        Buffy was just coming up to a road junction when she saw Ken on the other side of the road. He was casually strutting his stuff as he walked down the road. Buffy thought to herself that he looked so sexy with his shades on, even if it was a night when he didn’t need them.



        She shouted over to him, “KEN!” he turned around, immediately knowing that it must have been him that was being called, because he considered himself so utterly amazing.



        He removed his shades so that he could actually see and glared over in Buffy’s general direction. The Slayer was still carrying Mr Maclay in her arms, he saw the man and his little brain found the situation a little to difficult to deal with. He made his way across the road, taking no consideration for the oncoming car, that had to make an emergency stop as not to hit the ego filled male.



        “Heya, I am so sorry about leaving you like that, I had a best friend emergency. You got my note though?” Ken just nodded and then stared at the unconscious man in the blondes arms and became increasingly worried about whether he had chose the right girl. He knew that Buffy looked all sweet and genuine, but was this what she did to all her dates?



        Buffy acknowledged the fear that had crept its way into kens face. She laughed slightly, causing her date to become even more uneasy. “This really isn’t what it looks like, I didn’t do it to him. My best friend’s girlfriend did, well at least I think that she’s her girlfriend.” Buffy screwed up her face and tried to work out exactly why Willow was kissing and declaring her love to a girl. Not that she minded if her best friend being gay, she just felt that maybe she could have at least made a little passing comment on it at some stage.



        During Buffy’s little babble, Ken had backed off considerably. Buffy smiled and rolled her eyes, “Why does this always happen when I meet a new guy! They should really considering adding ‘Boys will think that you are a complete nutcase and you will never have a stable relationship’ in the little speech that the Watcher gives when they tell you about your birthright, maybe I should right to the council about it.” She looked over at a very shocked Ken, he didn’t really know what he was meant to say to that. All he really knew anything about was hair products and fast cars, and that was pushing it slightly.



        He laughed timidly, hoping that what the blonde had just said was some weird joke that he was expected to laugh at. He nodded his head and said, “So maybe I’ll see you around some time yeah?” he had applied his shades and had walked halfway down the street before Buffy could answer him.



        She shouted behind him, “SURE, NICE MEETING YOU KEN.” She then continued her journey to the hospital, gently musing to herself as she went. She looked down at Mr Maclay, “Well I think that went well”. She crossed the road and headed into the A and E.



TBC . . .



       



       





*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: chapter 7

Postby The Rose24 » Sat Jun 29, 2002 1:06 pm

Good job, Tara!!! Stand up to your father and let him know he can't control you anymore. Awesome update.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Re: chapter 7

Postby xita » Sat Jun 29, 2002 2:01 pm

Ahh nice they rescued Tara :) And Buffy's got herself a ken for her barbie ;)

- - - - - - - - - - - -

Willow: (to Tara) I could heal.

Tara: (to Willow)And we’re gone.

xita
 


Re: chapter 7

Postby ally02 » Sat Jun 29, 2002 2:36 pm

He he he great chap. I was in fits when Buffy was trying to get willow and tara's attention and trying to explain to Ken why she was carrying an unconcious man. Ugh smelly men!



love Aly xxxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: chapter 7

Postby TheWhiz » Sat Jun 29, 2002 2:40 pm

Great update!

I'm glad Tara was finally able to stand up to her father :)

Bye-bye Mr Maclay :grin

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: chapter 7

Postby no birthday cake » Sat Jun 29, 2002 3:03 pm

well, well, well.



re: my last post, at the end of chap 6, i could just see willow come in and having the "terminator" look on her face and saying "becuase i love her." but go tara! now who's got the ass-kicking shoes on?

no birthday cake
 


Re: chapter 7

Postby snuggle79 » Sat Jun 29, 2002 3:22 pm

well done! :D It was kinda brutal, but Mr. Maclay deserved it, because he was in no way better to his daughter. So, it was "ok"...

Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

snuggle79
 


Re: chapter 7

Postby Kieli » Sat Jun 29, 2002 3:38 pm

All I can say is GOOD SHOW, TARA! And Ken reminds me so much of the muscleheads I used to know...all brawn, no brains and not as good looking as they think they are. All right missy *snap snap snap* Impatient fan here waiting for more!




Love is tricky. It is never mundane or daily. You can never get used to it. You have to walk with it, then let it walk with you. You can never balk. It moves you like the tide. It takes you out to sea then lays you on the beach again. Today's struggling pain is the foundation for a certain stride through the heavens. You can run from it but you can never say no. It includes everyone."--Amy Tan "The Hundred Secret Senses"

Kieli
 

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