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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 14

Postby Ange » Wed Jun 12, 2002 3:27 pm

OMG!! I loved this part!! And Dawn and Tally getting married and how they did it. It's so sweet.

God, i want more. More please. Hehehe. If i'm lucky, i'll get an other part this week.



By the way, no need for edition for this part either. That was great.



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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 14

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Wed Jun 12, 2002 9:04 pm

Kinda thought you'd all like this part ;) And to answer your question their will be another part up this week. I have to do a little tweaking to it though so it won't be up for a bit. Ange, sorry can't be your slave, I'm already taken ;) OH wait it's summer no college right now :) Ok I'm open ;) ;) ;) I'm just a slave to the beach right now, but I broke my boogie board this past weekend :( Dang daytona waves!!! And last time I checked I lived in the sunshine state so someone answer me why has it been stomring????? :) ha ha ha :) yeah going now. Thanks for the feedback I love you guys to :)



~Stephie~



a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

WillowTarafan98
 


UNEDITED::::: Part 15

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Wed Jun 12, 2002 9:26 pm

OK I got it tweaked :) here's part 15 UNEDITED :)



~Stephie~



Title: A New Beginning (Part 15)

NOTE: You should read Future Unclear or you may be a little lost with some of the characters, and stuff.

Author: Stephie

Beta Reader: Willowphile410

Email: TaraWillowfan21@aol.com

Feedback: Yes Please I’d Love To Have Feedback

Spoilers: Anything up to the end of season 5 or 6, also in this timeline Buffy doesn’t die she just defeated Glory, but Joyce is dead. You should probably read this from the first part or you may be a little lost.

Paring: W/T, and the rest of the gang are in here to.

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the “Buffy” characters, I did however create some new ones for this story, but it’s dealing with Buffy so that’s Joss’s (AKA: The EVIL man) territory not mine.

Rating: PG-13/R it’s between the two.







Cut to the magic box where the gang is gathered around the table, minus Tally and Dawn.



ANYA: It’s just not fair (Pouts) (Looks at Xander) I hate you (Hits him with a magic book)

XANDER: Owe honey I don’t think your supposed to use them for hitting me

ANYA: Well it works for me. (Hits him again)



As Tally and Dawn come into the shop



TALLY: Whoa Xander what did you do

WILLOW: (Grins) Well… Quite a bit apparently

TARA: (Shoots Willow a ‘be good’ look)

ANYA: I’m pregnant

DAWN: (Sits down by Buffy)

TALLY: (Sits by Dawn) That’s great guys

ANYA: NO it is not the magic box is in full swing now; I have no time for a squalling infant

TALLY: Well Anya I can help you

ANYA: I know that look…That’s how I got this place from Giles…Wait are you trying to take the shop (Hits Xander again) Did I mention I hated you

DAWN: Well this kinda out does our news (takes Tally’s hand)

BUFFY: (Worried) your news?

DAWN: (Smiles) were getting married

BUFFY: (Shocked) oh… um

TARA: (Grins) That’s great guys congratulations

ANYA: (Hits Xander again)

XANDER: What was that for

ANYA: You said they wouldn’t’ get married before us

XANDER: Anya honey their not married just engaged

ANYA: Yeah… You know for some reason your word doesn’t’ hold any creditability with me now…oh yeah (mocking Xander) were good…. were protected… Men (Looks at Willow) be glad your gay now you don’t’ have to worry…. well never mind you had a baby (Pouts… hits Xander again)



Everyone laughs



Cut to Liz’s room were Tally is playing with her.



TALLY: (Picks Liz up) Come on squirt lets go see if mama’s cooking something good

LIZ: L…love you (Hugs Tally’s neck)

TALLY: (Smiles big) Love you to



Cuts to the kitchen were Tara is putting some cookie dough on cookie sheets.



TALLY: (Smiles) See I knew you’d be doing something yummy

TARA: Yeah well with both of you in the house at the same time I had to (grins)

LIZ: (Gets out of Tally’s arms and runs to the living room)

TALLY: She’s walking so good

TARA: I know, last night I swear she ran a thousand miles

TALLY: (Steals come cookie dough) (then sits on the bar stool)

TARA: Hey you can’t eat the cookie dough

TALLY: (Mouth full) Really (Laughs)

TARA: Fine (Laughing)

WILLOW: (Walks through the front door)

LIZ: (Runs towards Willow) Mommy…Mommy

WILLOW: (Grins) (Picks Liz up) Hey (Kisses Liz’s head) (Walks over to Tara and kisses her) um cookies

TARA: Yeah (Smiles) but no eating the cookie dough (Looks at Tally)

TALLY: What like I’d do that

LIZ: But you already did

TALLY: (Gets up and takes Liz from Willow, and starts to tickle her) Tattletale



Everyone laughs



Cut to the park were Dawn and Tally are swinging on the swings.



DAWN: (Smiling) You did not

TALLY: I so did

DAWN: What’d she do

TALLY: Well freaked a bit but when Liz’s face light up she was all smiles

DAWN: You really got her a pet frog

TALLY: Why not

DAWN: Oh just that Willow’s afraid to death of them

TALLY: (grins) Well I’m getting Anya a pet bunny for Christmas if it makes you feel any better

DAWN: Oh god (Laughs)



Cut to the magic box were Tally is in the room marked private dusting everything, on the walls is just about every different kind of weapon Buffy ever fights with marked with tags, and a computer scan bar code underneath. Also in the middle of the room is a table with enough chairs to seat the Scooby gang. Anya pokes her head in the doorway (you can now tell she’s pregnant)



ANYA: Tally I need your help out front

TALLY: Ok coming (Puts down the duster)



We pan out into the shop which now has some photos up of different things, parts of Sunnydale, the park, animals, some demons ect.



ANYA: (Points to a pretty good size box) Help take this to this lady’s car

ASHLEY: (girl younger then Tally’s age, Blonde hair, brown eyes. Very pretty) Really I can get it Anya

ANYA: Nonsense that’s what she’s here for… Besides with all you bought I’d like you to come back again (smiles)

TALLY: She’s right (Pick’s up box) it’s my job

ASHLEY: (Grins at Tally) Well in that case my car’s out here



Cut to a red dodge viper convertible Tally is putting the box in the trunk.



TALLY: This is really your car

ASHLEY: Yeah

TALLY: Well it’s awesome

ASHLEY: (Smiles) Glad you like it

TALLY: So your big on the spells huh

ASHLEY: Huh…Oh (smiles) I’m getting them for a friend

TALLY: It’s ok really my parents are into it to

ASHELY: I know…I mean I know a lot of people are

TALLY: Yeah just be careful…or I mean tell your friend to be careful

ASHLEY: (Smiles) I will (gets into car) tell her that is (grins)

TALLY: Good

ASHLEY: Bye (drives off)

TALLY: (Walks into the store)

ANYA: (Counting a big pile of cash) Gosh she paid with cash and put a down payment up for other stuff

TALLY: Well that doesn’t’ surprise me with the car she was driving

ANYA: (Holds her stomach) Ouch

TALLY: What’s wrong (goes by Anya)

ANYA: I’m not sure theirs this pinching feeling here (points to spot on her stomach)

TALLY: (Grins) Anya I think the baby’s kicking

ANYA: Huh

TALLY: You know like soccer

ANYA: He can’t play soccer in my stomach (Looks at her stomach) Stop it that’s an order

TALLY: I don’t think it really works like that

ANYA: Did I mention I hate Xander?

TALLY: (grins) Um once or twice



Cut to patrol were Tally has her camera walking with Buffy



BUFFY: I can’t’ believe your selling photos to that magazine

TALLY: What its extra money

BUFFY: Yeah but who actually reads it

TALLY: From what there paying me a bunch of people

BUFFY: All I’m saying is I can’t believe people buy it just to say ‘oh that’s not real’

TALLY: Funny huh… it really is real (smiles)

BUFFY: Yeah. So you doing ok

TALLY: Pretty much yeah

BUFFY: I kinda thought the power would wear off after the others were vanished from here

TALLY: I don’t think it works like that Buff I mean I think at one time the ring barriers were good they just took a turn for the bad side

BUFFY: Well (Nudges Tally’s shoulder) as long as you stay on the good side it’s cool we can handle anything (smiles)

TALLY: Yup…wait even a baby Anya

BUFFY: OK almost anything (they both laugh)



Cut to Dawn’s dorm room, where Dawn is typing something up on her laptop.



TALLY: (Walks through the door) Guess who just got on the school paper staff

DAWN: Ummm I don’t know (grins)

TALLY: (Hugs Dawn from behind) Lets go celebrate

DAWN: I’d love to honey but I’ve got this monster of a paper to finish tonight

TALLY: OH well I can wait

DAWN: I’m afraid it’ll be an all night’r

TALLY: Um somehow I thought the whole ‘lets celebrate’ would be both of us not just me

DAWN: I’m sure Willow and Tara would love to spend time with you

TALLY: Trying to get rid of me huh

DAWN: (Kisses Tally) Only for tonight (grins)

TALLY: (Stands up) All I can say is their better be some major making up for this (winks)

DAWN: Major as in not leaving the room all day Saturday

TALLY: (Raises and eyebrow) Um major as in not leaving the room all weekend (winks)

DAWN: We’ll see (grins)



Cut to Willow and Tara’s living room where their watching TV, pan to Tally’s room where she reading a book to Liz. They’re both lying on Tally’s bed. Pan back into the living room.



WILLOW: I seams funny without Liz in here with us

TARA: Yeah they’ve gotten quite I wonder what their up to

WILLOW: Don’t know want to check

TARA: (smiles) Yeah



Willow and Tara stand at the doorway of Tally’s room were we see that Tally and Liz have fallen asleep.



WILLOW: Awe that’s so cute (gets a blanket and covers them up) you don’t think Liz will fall during the night do you

TARA: (Smiles) I don’t think Tally will let her

WILLOW: Come on (tugs at Tara’s hand)

TARA: What

WILLOW: OH you know what (winks)

TARA: Vixen (Smiles)



Next morning Tally is cooking some breakfast when Willow and Tara come down.



TALLY: Well look who decided to finally get up

WILLOW: We had a lot of spells to work on

TALLY: OH is that what’ their calling it now (grins)

TARA: (Looks around) Where’s Liz

DAWN: (Comes out of Tally’s bedroom with Liz) She’s here

LIZ: (runs to Tara) good morning Mama

TARA: Morning little one did you sleep well

LIZ: Yeah (grins) Tally was reading me a story but then I think she fell asleep

TALLY: Excuse me you fell asleep I was just resting my eyes

DAWN: Sure

WILLOW: Dawnie I thought you had classes this morning

DAWN: I did at 9 it’s 12 now Willow

WILLOW: OH (grins) I knew that

TARA: So do you guys have any plans today (Looking at Tally and Dawn)?

TALLY: Actually we kinda do why

TARA: Well I was thinking you guys could stick around then we’d all go see a movie

LIZ: OHHHH a movie I wanna go

TARA: You will sweetie (kisses Liz’s cheek)

TALLY: (Looks at Dawn) Sounds like fun (smiles)



Cut to Willow and Tara’s bedroom. They’re walking in.



TARA: (Laughing hard) Oh come on sweetie it’s funny

WILLOW: (Removes jacket, to show a stain on her white shirt) Really cause you know this is my new shirt

TARA: Well she’s only two

WILLOW: Yeah but this thing with throwing food has got to stop

TARA: You didn’t say that when she threw cake at Anya last year

WILLOW: Well that was just funny (smiles)

TARA: Honey (Hugs Willow) Would you like me to help you clean it (gives a grin only Tara can)

WILLOW: That’d mean getting out of it huh

TARA: Generally yes

WILLOW: Then yes (smiles… Kisses Tara)



Cut to a dark room, a shadow can be seen.



SHADOW 1: Yes

VOICE: (off screen) Good then it’s only a matter of time right

SHADOW 1: Well it could be more complicated then we first thought

VOICE: How so

SHADOW 1: I just don’t want to rush is all, this has to be done right

VOICE: Agreed…



Fade to black



TBC… (Part 16)



















a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

WillowTarafan98
 


Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 15

Postby Thanatopsis » Wed Jun 12, 2002 11:20 pm

Wow, these last 2 updates were great. Everything was going along too well though, something has to be coming. Whatever could be hiding in the shadows?



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Oh, um... various sounds of
hesitation...

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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 15

Postby Ange » Thu Jun 13, 2002 4:13 am

Whooouuuuu! I won an update and a summer slave. All in one day. Very lucky me. I hope my exams will be good too. Yeah!!!!!



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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 15

Postby Ange » Thu Jun 13, 2002 12:07 pm

Yep, very good day. For exam and update and slave. OMG!!I I'm so lucky.

I have three months of vacations after that. Stephie, we have to plan something. Heheheh. :lol



Anyway, i loved this part again. And Liz is so cute. I just hope that nothing bad will happen after all that. But i'm pretty sure i'm wrong on this. Heheh.



Anyway, can't wait for more. How much did you write by the way. I knew a while ago that you had a lot of part in advance. What about now??? Just to know, not pushing. Hehehe. I understand too much what writing is.



Ange.

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"Things are not always what they seem to be...." Shakespeare

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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 15

Postby fairydust » Thu Jun 13, 2002 1:14 pm

YAYAYAYAY:bounce I was so happy when I saw that there was an update.

I am kinda skeptical about this Ashley person hmm....:confused I guess I'll find out more when you update again:)

*****Faye*****I LOVE YOU JENNA

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UNEDITED::::: Part 16

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Thu Jun 13, 2002 5:34 pm

I have up to part 17 done, I'm working on 18 right now. I've been REALLY busy so I haven't gotten much done. So I've decided to post part 16 ;) What can I say I love getting feedback so I want more :) :) :)



~Stephie~



Title: A New Beginning (Part 16)

NOTE: You should read Future Unclear or you may be a little lost with some of the characters, and stuff.

Author: Stephie

Beta Reader: Willowphile410

Email: TaraWillowfan21@aol.com

Feedback: Yes Please I’d Love To Have Feedback

Spoilers: Anything up to the end of season 5 or 6, also in this timeline Buffy doesn’t die she just defeated Glory, but Joyce is dead. You should probably read this from the first part or you may be a little lost.

Paring: W/T, and the rest of the gang are in here to.

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the “Buffy” characters, I did however create some new ones for this story, but it’s dealing with Buffy so that’s Joss’s (AKA: The EVIL man) territory not mine.

Rating: PG-13/R it’s between the two.



Cut to the hospital were the Scooby gang are all in the waiting room minus Xander and Anya.



TARA: (Looks to Willow) Was I in there that long

WILLOW: I don’t think so

TALLY: Seams like this is taking way longer then yours

BUFFY: Well it is Anya she doesn’t’ want to give part of herself up

DAWN: (Pats Buffy’s leg) It’s ok you can be worried to

LIZ: (Crawls up in Tara’s lap) Mama where’s Aunt Anya

TARA: Well honey she’s having a baby

LIZ: So I’ll have someone to play with

WILLOW: Yeah (grins) well in a few years

LIZ: Oh (Lays her head on Tara’s shoulder)

XANDER: (Comes out in scrubs) It’s a boy (Excited) it’s a boy



Cut to the magic box, two months later. Liz is looking at Chad Harris who is in a baby stroller.



LIZ: He’s so small (Looks up at Tara) Kinda like my baby doll (Smiles)

TARA: Yeah (grins) just don’t tear his head off

LIZ: (Laughs as Tara tickles her)

ANYA: (Walks over to Tara and Liz) Sorry the mother and kids day is starting out with work, Tally said she’s trying to hurry… Stupid college they give her to much homework.



Cut to Dawn’s dorm room where Tally and Dawn are in the midst of a heavy make out session.



TALLY: Dawn I really…need…to…get…to…the magic box

DAWN: Five more minutes (Tugs at Tally’s shirt)



Cut to the shop, were Tally is about running in. Shirt is still UN tucked from her jeans.



TALLY: Sorry I’m late

ANYA: Well it’s about time. I have to go meet Tara at the restaurant since you finally came to work (Gathering baby stuff)

TALLY: Sorry way to much homework

ANYA: (Grins) Sure I’ll be back later unless I want some homework of my own (with that she walks out the door with the baby)

TALLY: (Behind the counter reading a magazine)

ASHLEY: (Walks in the shop) Hey

TALLY: Hey (Puts magazine down) Well long time no see

ASHLEY: Well I’ve been um… busy

TALLY: I can understand that… What can I help you with?

ASHLEY: Actually a lot I’ve looked into your photography skills since I was in the shop last

TALLY: How’d you know?

ASHLEY: (Points to photos hanging up in the shop) Anya was very proud to show off your work (smiles)

TALLY: Oh well she’s like that

ASHLEY: Anyway I’m a reporter and my next assignment is an overseas post, I need someone for two weeks to go with me and be my photographer… Want the job?



Cut to the table at Willow and Tara’s place were Tara, Willow, Dawn and Tally are sitting around talking.



TALLY: For two weeks I’ll get five thousand dollars and get to see Egypt

TARA: Sounds dangerous

TALLY: It’s just some press conference nothing major Dawn you haven’t said much

DAWN: Well that’s because I think you’ve already made up your mind

TALLY: That’s not true

DAWN: My only question will it always be like this, no matter what we think your going to do it anyways

TALLY: Dawn I’m here with you all because I’m asking

DAWN: Nice show Tally (gets up) Call me when you get back (Walks out)

TALLY: Goddamn it (Gets up and runs after Dawn)

WILLOW: This can’t be good (Looks at Tara)



Cut to outside the house



DAWN: What… What do you want me to say I’m glad your going to a place were you could get shot at

TALLY: Yeah cause nothing bad ever happens here

DAWN: I didn’t say that, but why put yourself at risk

TALLY: Cause like it or not this is going to be my job one day, and if I can get a heads up now I’ll find one easier after I graduate

DAWN: So you have decided and all of tonight was just a show

TALLY: Dawn don’t be this way

DAWN: You know I’m really tired of every time I think something it’s my fault or you don’t listen

TALLY: I listen to everything you say

DAWN: Then is it you don’t care what I think

TALLY: I asked you tonight what did you think of me going

DAWN: I hate the idea now will you stay

TALLY: (Doesn’t’ say anything)

DAWN: That’s what I thought (Walks away)



Cut to the airport were Tally meets up with Ashley



ASHLEY: I figured your family would be here with you

TALLY: I said my goodbyes to them at the house

ASHLEY: Ah cheer up it’s better that way they don’t have to see this (Holds Tally’s hand as a bright flash of light goes over the air port they disappear)



We pan to the same airport, as the light flashes again, Ashley and Tally reappear



TALLY: (Looks around) What the hell was that

ASHLEY: I’m sorry I couldn’t tell you before

TALLY: Couldn’t tell me what

ASHLEY: I’m afraid I haven’t been completely honest with you

TALLY: (Looks around the air port has changed a bit it looks more advanced) Where are we

ASHLEY: Sunnydale 20 years from your time

TALLY: Where in the future

ASHLEY: Yeah

TALLY: And you’re not a reporter

ASHLEY: No, but originally you did go with one

TALLY: Ok now you have me more confused

ASHLEY: In my time line the day you were to leave with me you left with a real reporter to go to Egypt you never really spent much time in Sunnydale after that, cause you and Dawn broke up I mean you came for holidays to see Liz and your parents but that was about it

TALLY: I’m sorry but I just don’t believe that

ASHLEY: You see the problem is you weren’t supposed to be alive

TALLY: Oh now your really crazy

ASHLEY: No I’m afraid it’s true, the day the group defeated Zar you were supposed to have died, but you were brought back.

TALLY: How do you know this?

ASHLEY: You gave up everything for Dawn, and in your time when you get back from Egypt you and Dawn break up I don’t know the full details of what happen but I know it was bad, something to do with you not dying.

TALLY: Was it magic?

ASHLEY: I’m not sure, I’ve never been told full details of your being brought back, I’m not even sure if you know the details. But then again they treat me like a child…

TALLY: So…why bring me here now

ASHLEY: We need your help

TALLY: So why not get this time frame me to do it

ASHLEY: (Looks very sad)

TALLY: OH (gets it) I’m dead huh I mean my older self (Shakes head)

ASHLEY: I’m afraid so and we need the power you have (touches Tally’s ring) to help

TALLY: What’s with all the ‘we’ stuff just who is ‘we’

ASHLEY: Well since they sent me to find you I guess it wouldn’t hurt to let you meet them



Cut to the magic box. Theirs a young man running the cash register and a young woman stocking stuff. We can see a middle aged Tara, Willow, Xander and Anya playing a board game. Ashley and Tally come through the door.



ASHLEY: I found her (Smiles)

TARA: (Stands up) Oh my goddess

TALLY: (Shocked by looking at an older Scooby gang) Oh god (falls over and faints)



Cut to Tally sitting in a chair, Tara is patting her with a damp cloth.



TALLY: (Starts to wake up)

WILLOW: Looks like she’s waking up (smiles)

TALLY: (Grins) You know it’s funny I think I must have hit my… (Opens her eyes to see the older gang) OH no it was real

TARA: Yeah it is sweetie

ANYA: OH (Hugs Tally) it’s so good to see you

TALLY: (Smiles) (Looks over and see’s the young woman by Willow) Liz??

LIZ: (Big Smile, tears are in her eyes) Yeah

TALLY: Wow your all grown up

WILLOW: (Pat’s Liz’s shoulder)

CHAD: (Coughs) So am I

TALLY: Oh my god (Stands up) Chad

CHAD: (grins) Yeah

XANDER: That’s my boy



About that time the door chime goes off as Buffy, Faith and Dawn walk into the room.



DAWN: (See’s Tally) Oh my god (Looks around the room) (Runs into Tally’s arms)

BUFFY: I take it you found her (Looks at Ashley)

ASHLEY: Yeah mom I did

FAITH: (hugs Ashley) I’m glad your home

ASHLEY: Your just glad so I can keep mom off of your back (smiles)

FAITH: Naw I kinda like her on my back (winks at Buffy)

BUFFY: (Kisses Faith)

TALLY: (Pulls away from Dawn) Faith…Your with Buffy

FAITH: OH I forgot in your time line I wasn’t back yet huh

TALLY: Um NO (Holds her head) does everyone know about my time line but me?

WILLOW: Pretty much we had to research how to get to you so it took a lot of heads

TALLY: What’s so big you had to travel through time to get me

DAWN: Nothing much just fighting Zar

TALLY: What

WILLOW: Zar’s back some how he got out of the portal he was in, he took the others rings and now has their power, he um… (Stops)

TALLY: He has my ring to doesn’t he; only not mine…my older selves

WILLOW: Yes it was the last time you came home to visit (Stops again)

DAWN: You and I where trying to work things out you’d been traveling for two years and then Zar sent Mark through the portal he killed you and got your ring, with the power of all four rings he was able to come through the portal and for the past three years he’s pretty much ran most of the world, if you rebel your killed

TALLY: But what can I do

TARA: Willow and I have been researching a spell for the past year and with your power to help us we believe it will be strong enough to defeat him for good this time

TALLY: If not?

BUFFY: The world dies you could say

TALLY: Oh well then I guess we’d better not let that happen (grins)

FAITH: Your right she’s wicked cool B

TALLY: Thanks…I think



TBC…. (Part 17)











a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

Edited by: WillowTarafan98  at: 6/13/02 4:43:03 pm
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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 16

Postby Lola19 » Thu Jun 13, 2002 6:12 pm

Oh my!

That was a shocker! Great though! Very great and now i will sit and wait patiently for more!

Thank you Willowtarafan98

Love and hugs

Lolaxxx :love

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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 16

Postby Thanatopsis » Thu Jun 13, 2002 9:50 pm

Whoa. Wasn't expecting that. Faith, oh and Buffy's daughter? Huh. Can't wait for more.



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Uh, um... various sounds of
hesitation...

Thanatopsis
 


Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 16

Postby breaking » Fri Jun 14, 2002 8:49 am

i love this fic so much and now it's got Faith in it, it can only get better. Faith and Buffy have a daughter didn't see that coming! But keep it up can't wait for the next update!

love jade x x

"LIFE WITHOUT LOVE IS LIKE A BUTTERFLY WITHOUT FLOWERS"

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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 16

Postby Ange » Fri Jun 14, 2002 9:51 am

OMG!! Faith and Buffy! Tally died! Tally going in the future!

I just hope that everything will be good at the end and that Tally will find her Dawn back.

It must be hard for the Dawn of the future???

I can't wait to know the rest. Omg!!!



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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 16

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Sat Jun 15, 2002 3:43 pm

Hey everyone :)



So you all liked my little shocker huh :) good :) I thought having Faith in the picture would make it a little interesting ;) Anyways here's the last ch. I have done right now. I'm working on 18 and it MAY be done tomorrow not sure yet. But when it gets done I'll post it :) Thanks guys, you all are the best!!!!!!!!!



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Title: A New Beginning (Part 17)

NOTE: You should read Future Unclear or you may be a little lost with some of the characters, and stuff.

Author: Stephie

Beta Reader: Willowphile410

Email: TaraWillowfan21@aol.com

Feedback: Yes Please I’d Love To Have Feedback

Spoilers: Anything up to the end of season 5 or 6, also in this timeline Buffy doesn’t die she just defeated Glory, but Joyce is dead. You should probably read this from the first part or you may be a little lost.

Paring: W/T, and the rest of the gang are in here to.

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the “Buffy” characters, I did however create some new ones for this story, but it’s dealing with Buffy so that’s Joss’s (AKA: The EVIL man) territory not mine.

Rating: PG-13/R it’s between the two.



Cut to Willow and Tara’s house Tally is in her ‘old’ room which now is a TV room.



WILLOW: Sorry after you left we fixed it so Liz could play those video games in here

TALLY: (Smiles) It’s ok

TARA: But the couch has a comfy mattress

TALLY: This must be strange for you guys and I’m sorry

TARA: It’s just nice to have you here, even if you are a little to young, your always ‘our’ Tally

TALLY: (Smiles) (Hugs Tara) Thanks

WILLOW: Now get some rest…

TALLY: Yes mom



Willow and Tara leave, Tally lays on the couch. Next morning the whole family is around the table. Tara is cooking breakfast.



LIZ: So can Chad come over and watch movies tonight

WILLOW: Where in the middle of a crisis and you want to watch movies

LIZ: Well… Yeah

TARA: It’d be fine honey (Smiles as she puts food in everyone’s plate)

TALLY: So wait your (looks at Liz) going out with Chad

LIZ: (Looks a little upset) yes… look don’t’ you have a problem with it to, mom’s already freaked

WILLOW: I am not (Looks at Tara) it’s being related to Anya that scares me

TARA: (Laughs) (sits at the table)

DAWN: (walks in) is it ok if I come in

TARA: Sure sweetie pull up a chair

DAWN: (Sits by Tally)

TARA: Are you hungry

DAWN: No I just came to see if you guys needed some help updating Tally

WILLOW: Actually we haven’t gotten started yet but your still welcome to stay (smiles)

DAWN: (Looks at Tally) Ok



Cut to outside the house (were Dawn and Tally had a fight in Tally’s real time) Tally is sitting on the bench.



DAWN: (Walks out) you know this is the last spot we…um I mean my Tally and I was together… until I messed that up (Sits by Tally)

TALLY: How’d you mess it up?

DAWN: Well if I still remember it…it must have still happen that way… The big fight right before you leaving to go to Egypt I think that was the day I shut a part of myself off to you, and when we couldn’t get it back you left to do photo journalism… So many times I wish you’d came after me that night when I ran off, (Looks at Tally with tears in her eyes) Then everything would be different you wouldn’t have been alone when Zar attacked you…. (Starts to cry) and just when we were starting… (Starts to get up)

TALLY: (Pulls Dawn into a embrace)



Cut to Tara looking out the window at Tally and Dawn



LIZ: Mama I believe that’s called spying

TARA: I know… It’s just Dawn’s been so I don’t know (Turns to face her youngest daughter) sad I don’t know if she can take loosing her again

LIZ: Can you?

TARA: (hugs Liz)



Cut back to Tally and Dawn



DAWN: (Pulls a way a bit and looks into Tally’s eyes)

TALLY: No matter what age you are I can never stand to see you cry (wipes Dawns tears)

DAWN: Promise me you’ll get them to send you back at the time I walked away

TALLY: Can they do that?

DAWN: Yeah if you ask then go after me, don’t let me go alone that night please

TALLY: Dawn what happen

DAWN: Just don’t let me go promise

TALLY: (Hugs Dawn) I’ll never let you go



Cut to the magic box were the gang has assembled. Faith and Tally are talking.



FAITH: So they don’t really talk about me in your time huh

TALLY: Well I’ve heard stories…most of which are bad

FAITH: (Laughs) well there was a time they were all true (Looks at Buffy) but B really changed me… for the better

TALLY: Do you think we can take this thing?

FAITH: Hey it’s no problem two retired slayers and a kid with a ring piece of cake

TALLY: (grins) Well I must say the stories I heard don’t fit you (they both laugh)



Cut to the research table were the group is gathered around.



XANDER: So what we need is some big time weapons

TALLY: Does that work on him now

BUFFY: Yeah kinda does, we’ve kept him at bay with some…

XANDER: (coughs) Wrecking balls

TALLY: Huh

XANDER: Well it worked with Glory… Why mess with perfection

TALLY: (Smiles)

CHAD: I still say our best bet is to call for the council

ANYA: Yes cause that’s worked so well in the past couple of years (Looks at Xander) put some since into your son’s head

XANDER: What he’s your son to

LIZ: I think it’s a good idea

ANYA: Right cause him giving you orgasms is no cause for you to be on his side

TARA: (Looks a little worried) Anya!! That’s enough

ANYA: OH give me a break

WILLOW: I’ll give you a break… (Cut off by Tara)

TARA: Both of you enough! We’ve got bigger things to worry about right now and I don’t think the council will do any good

FAITH: Tara’s right they’ve been broken for a while now, at this point it’s just us

TALLY: Well then we do it the old fashioned way

LIZ: Which is

TALLY: Kick his ass

DAWN: (Looks at Tally and grins)



Cut to the Sunnydale mall were Tally and Dawn are walking



DAWN: (Smiles)

TALLY: What

DAWN: It’s just we so need to find you some clothes so you can blend in

TALLY: Thank you very much but I happen to like my University of Florida t-shirt

DAWN: Well seeing it was Zar’s target last year and doesn’t’ exist any more I’m afraid it’s a little outdated

TALLY: (Shocked) What no gator football

DAWN: No football

TALLY: Well if I didn’t want to kick his butt before I do now (Pouts)

DAWN: You always loved that game

TALLY: (Smiles) Yeah and you always made me watch figure skating (they both laugh) I’m um surprised you guys still have a mall to shop in

DAWN: Zar owns it all, were allowed in here till 5pm then his demons have free reign

TALLY: (Notices a demon thing) Are you sure it’s not earlier then that (Pulls Dawn into a crack in the wall, just big enough for them both to fit)

DAWN: (Whispers to Tally) We’ve got to get out of here before he see’s you and reports back to Zar

TALLY: Agreed

DAWN: (Looks in Tally’s eyes) come on this way (Pulls Tally’s hand)



Cut to Dawns apartment. Dawn is sitting on the couch. Tally comes out of the shower with some baggy clothes on.



TALLY: Glad you had some extra clothes here

DAWN: (Looks at Tally and smiles) Sorry their bigger, but their good to sleep in

TALLY: (Smiles) (Sits by Dawn) Who knew the sewer smelt so bad

DAWN: Well Buffy and I have used it quite a bit to help people

TALLY: You go and help them now

DAWN: Yeah

TALLY: (Smiles) So when did Faith come back

DAWN: Almost 20 years now

TALLY: Wow so her and Buff had Ashley pretty quickly huh

DAWN: (Puts her head down)

TALLY: (Knows something wrong) Dawn what is it…

DAWN: Ashley is my daughter (Stops) (Tears in her eyes) She doesn’t know, I wasn’t ready for a child, so Buffy took care of her as her own, and I’m just Aunt Dawnie, Faith came along when Ashley was little then her and Buffy have raised her (crying)

TALLY: (Shocked) Your daughter… You…. Went with a guy… That’s why we broke up isn’t it…

DAWN: (about to say something when theirs a knock on the door) Hide

TALLY: Why… We need to finish this…

DAWN: Just do it damn it

TALLY: (Shoots Dawn a look… Hides in another room)

DAWN: (Answers the door) Can I help you

POLICE OFFICER: (Holds up photo) Where hunting this woman have you seen her (shows photo of Tally)

DAWN: No sorry

POLICE OFFICER: (Takes Dawn by the throat) Sorry is not the right answer

TALLY: (Comes out and gets into a fight with the officer)

POLICE OFFICER: (Cuts Tally’s arm pretty bad) So they found a way to get you back, well it won’t last long

TALLY: (Shots a bolt that kills the officer) (Falls to the floor)



Cut to Dawns bedroom were Tally is lying on the bed, as Dawn cares to the wound on her arm.



TALLY: Can’t believe he got the best of me

DAWN: Be still

TALLY: (grins) Bossy

DAWN: No just trying to patch you up

TALLY: I don’t need to be here…

DAWN: What you have to help to make everything better… (Cut off by Tally)

TALLY: I meant I don’t need to be in the house with you

DAWN: OH (Blushes)

TALLY: (Smiles) I want to make things better for all of you…

DAWN: Well if you go back everything can be different…. better… (Doesn’t’ know what to say)

TALLY: I hope so, I see this future and it makes me sad… (Cut off by Dawn)

DAWN: (Kisses Tally) (Pulls away) I’m so sorry

TALLY: It’s ok (Sits up) I should go now

DAWN: Were are you going

TALLY: To take care of Zar once and for all

DAWN: But you can’t go by yourself

TALLY: Trust me it’ll be better (Walks out)

DAWN: (Runs to the phone) Buffy….



Cut to the Magic Box were Tally is going through some spell books, as the gang comes in.



TALLY: What are you doing here?

FAITH: Going into battle it would seam (Smiles)

TALLY: But if you get hurt (cut off by Tara)

TARA: We’ll come to that if we have to for now where working together.

TALLY: (Smiles) (Starts handing out books) Ok this is what I’ve found



Cut to Zar’s layer



ZAR: So they’ve brought the runt back from the other time (laughs)

MENION: Yes sir

ZAR: Well this should be fun (Laughs)



TBC… (Part 18)





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Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 16

Postby fairydust » Sat Jun 15, 2002 10:46 pm

Very nice update. But :jaw DAWN"S BABY?!?!?!?! Now, I really want to know what that is about.......cant wait for the next update:D

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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 16

Postby Ange » Sun Jun 16, 2002 6:59 am

OMG!! It keeps getting better and better. I love your story more and more at every chapter that you post.:D



I can't believe it. Dawn and the baby. :eek I just hope that Tally will go back before that moment and will make up with her, really good.



I can't wait for next chapter. OMG!! Too good. :bounce



I hope you have some time to write because you gave us so many goodness, that we really can't stop having them anymore.



Thanks.



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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 16

Postby Thanatopsis » Sun Jun 16, 2002 8:25 am

Wow. Every chapter is a new twist. Dawn's baby? Can't wait to see what happens next.



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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 16

Postby sparrow » Mon Jun 17, 2002 10:37 am

Dawn's baby, so I bet that's why Dawn really wants Tally, when they zap her back, to be beamed to that exact moment and run after her. I bet Dawn is attacked.







And, yet, I just can't seem to care


I'm not coming back

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UNEDITED::::: Part 18

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Mon Jun 17, 2002 6:10 pm

Title: A New Beginning (Part 18)

NOTE: You should read Future Unclear or you may be a little lost with some of the characters, and stuff.

Author: Stephie

Beta Reader: Willowphile410

Email: TaraWillowfan21@aol.com

Feedback: Yes Please I’d Love To Have Feedback

Spoilers: Anything up to the end of season 5 or 6, also in this timeline Buffy doesn’t die she just defeated Glory, but Joyce is dead. You should probably read this from the first part or you may be a little lost.

Paring: W/T, and the rest of the gang are in here to.

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the “Buffy” characters, I did however create some new ones for this story, but it’s dealing with Buffy so that’s Joss’s (AKA: The EVIL man) territory not mine.

Rating: PG-13/R it’s between the two.







Cut to the Magic Box. Tally is in the Training room. Ashley walks in with her.



ASHLEY: Can I talk to you?

TALLY: Sure (Sits on a mat)

ASHLEY: (Does the same) (Doesn’t’ say anything)

TALLY: What is it?

ASHLEY: I know this is totally going to sound self-centered…. But if you go back… I won’t exist anymore will I?

TALLY: (Caught off guard) Well I’m sure your parents will find each other

ASHLEY: Not if you go back and stop it (Looks a mixture between sad and wanting that to happen)

TALLY: I’m not sure I understand… What would me going back now…. How would that affect Faith and Buffy getting together?

ASHLEY: Ok don’t you lie to me to; the one thing I remember about you is that you always treated me like an adult no matter what… So do that now!

TALLY: It’s not my place… (Cut off by Ashley)

ASHLEY: What to tell me Dawn is my birth mother?

TALLY: (Shocked)

ASHLEY: It’s ok… I’m not supposed to know, it’s a big Scooby secrete. Don’t tell my mom I know, it’d hurt her to bad to think I felt anything but love… But I don’t know one day I was going through some papers and I saw the adoption forms were Dawn gave her legal rights over me, then once I over heard Anya talking to Xander… (Stops)

TALLY: I’m sorry Ashley (Pats her shoulder) but I still don’t see what me going back and going after Dawn… (Stops) that’s the night she meats your father (Looks sad)

ASHLEY: (Starts to cry) I don’t want to not exist (Hangs onto Tally) But I don’t want Dawn to go through anything bad either….

TALLY: But… (Thinks a minute) Oh god (gets tears in her eyes)



Cut to a wooded area were Faith and Tally are patrolling.



TALLY: Do you think the rest of the guys are having any better luck…

FAITH: No or we’d been beeped

TALLY: (Smiles) I’m still surprised mama has a beeper

FAITH: (Laughs) Well it took some coaxing to get her to carry one… or a cell phone.

TALLY: No way she has a cell phone

FAITH: Yes so does B…. But then again that’s not a big surprise (grins)

TALLY: So um…. (Stops walking)

FAITH: What is it kid?

TALLY: It’s about Ashley

FAITH: (Makes a face) oh… What about her?

TALLY: She talked to me this afternoon about you, Buffy, and Dawn, and she thinks if I go back… She won’t exist anymore… So what I want to know is…. Is she right?

FAITH: (Puts her head down) You didn’t hear this from me… But…. (Stops)

TALLY: Faith just tell me please, one thing I have been told about you was you were never afraid to tell anyone the truth.

FAITH: It’s just me saying what I’m about to say is a double edged sword right to my heart… I love Ashley more then words can describe, but on that same note, her…she… wasn’t….

TALLY: (Stops) It’s ok I know Dawn went with a guy…

FAITH: (Looks a little upset) Did you say that to Dawn

TALLY: Well yeah… I figured that’s why we stayed broken up… but then that cop interrupted us…

FAITH: My god girl…. Dawn didn’t ‘go with’ anyone…

TALLY: I don’t understand…

FAITH: A demon found out you had been brought back to life… He took it upon his self that the pay back for you being brought back was for Dawn to carry his child… Except the child he decided should be human to make sure you thought Dawn cheated… Do I have to finish? He didn’t want you happy since in his mind the god’s blessed you with something that his wife hadn’t received when she was killed… the gift of life.

TALLY: (Speechless)

FAITH: It happen the night you and she had the fight about Egypt

TALLY: (All making since to her now) That’s why she said go after her…

FAITH: Yes

TALLY: (Starts to cry)

FAITH: (Hugs Tally)



The group is assembled back at the magic box minus Faith and Tally.



ANYA: Why do we always have to end up back here for badness to happen at the shop?

XANXER: Anya honey… (Cut off by Anya)

ANYA: Don’t “Anya Honey” me Xander this is Chad’s future we have to take care of it

CHAD: I can take care of myself

ASHLEY: He’s right, as much as I hate to admit it

ANYA: You’re just a child… (Cut off by ASHLEY)

ASHLEY: I so am not a child

BUFFY: Ash that’s enough

ASHLEY: (Storms off)

TARA: (Looks at Buffy) Want me to talk to her?

BUFFY: No give her some time to cool off



Faith and Tally walk into the shop.



WILLOW: Did you guys find the herb?

FAITH: Of course red (winks) Have I ever let you down?

WILLOW: (about to say something when Tara holds her hand) (Smiles)



Little while later Tara is explaining the spell to the Scooby’s.



TARA: So if we do this it’ll destroy him not only in our time, but in all the other time lines as well

TALLY: So they’ll be no chance of him coming back right?

TARA: Not if we do this right

WILLOW: Which we will

FAITH: But we have to make sure (Looking at Tally) that we keep you safe cause if something happens to you now, you won’t be able to go back to your time

CHAD: Yeah be kind of hard to go somewhere when she’s dead Faith

FAITH: (annoyed) Anya want to tell your boy that kids are supposed to know when to talk and not talk

LIZ: But he’s right Faith, (Looks at Tally) you need to be careful

TALLY: Don’t worry careful is my middle name (smiles)



Cut to the park were the gang is all traveling together. They all have weapons.



BUFFY: I don’t like it, it’s to quite

FAITH: I know



About that time Zar and two of his men jump out on the group.



TALLY: You know Buffy I don’t care how old you get, you need to watch what you say



The gang are fighting with Zar’s henchmen. Tally is fighting with Zar.



ZAR: Well I must admit your easier to fight since I have your power (laughs) ahh your face when I killed you… was priceless… and to think I get the joy of watching it again

TALLY: I don’t think so (Hits Zar)

ZAR: (Knocks Tally to the ground)

DAWN: (See’s this and runs over) (Hits Zar with a sword) Get away from her

ZAR: (Laughs) Oh you (smiles) (Hits Dawn)

TALLY: (Jumps up and fights again) You’ll never hurt her again for as long as I live

ZAR: Well then I’ll get to hurt her a lot soon (evil laugh) (Throws Tally down again) (about to shoot a bolt)

DAWN: (Jumps in front of Tally and takes the blast, falls into Tally’s arms)

BUFFY: (Looks on in horror) Dawn no!!!! (Kills one of the guys)

FAITH: Oh god (Kills the other)

TALLY: Dawn no…. (Holds Dawn)

DAWN: (Looking up at Tally) (Smiling) It’s ok… you can change things…. Go back and live the life we were supposed to have (coughing) (touches Tally’s face) I…have always loved you…. (Closes her eyes)

TALLY: (Crying) (Hear’s in her head Willow’s voice “Tally Now”) (Jumps up and Faces Zar) All right you son of a bitch your time’s up for good (blast a bolt at Zar before can move, and we see a magical force around him as he poof’s away we hear him screaming)



Cut to the magic box were Tara, Willow, Chad, Ashley, and Liz. Are waiting for the gang. Xander, Anya, Faith, Buffy, and Tally walk in. Tally is caring Dawn’s body.



TARA: (Notices Tally has Dawn’s body) Oh my goddess no!

TALLY: (Lays Dawn on the table) Send me back

WILLOW: Tally theirs something we didn’t tell you

TALLY: What

WILLOW: We….

TALLY: You can’t send me back can you?

TARA: It’s not that

WILLOW: We have to do a forgetting spell on you

FAITH: What the fuck red…you can’t do that

TARA: It’s just you know to much about this time…

TALLY: A time that shouldn’t’ exist Zar screwed with everything now I have the chance to fix it… you can’t take that away from me

BUFFY: (Eyes are red from crying) Yeah Tally’s right

WILLOW: I’m sorry

TALLY: This is bullshit

WILLOW: Faith we have no choice the council said if we didn’t do a spell on her to make her forget then we couldn’t send her back

BUFFY: What… when did you speak with the council

TARA: About six months ago, they gave us the final things to do the spell to bring Tally here, but they said when it was all over and if everything went like it was supposed to the only way we could send her back was to make her forget.

TALLY: But I have to go back

FAITH: The council doesn’t have that much power I say screw’em

WILLOW: I’m afraid they have enough to take away our magic so we can’t send her back (looks sad) I’m sorry

TALLY: (Starts to understand) It’s ok… I’d rather go back and have another chance then to live in a world without her (Looks at Dawn)



Cut to Willow and Tara making final preparations to send Tally back. Faith is talking with Tally.



FAITH: I’m sorry they have to do this

TALLY: Yeah me to

FAITH: (Puts a piece of paper into Tally’s pants pocket)

TALLY: What’s this

FAITH: (Makes sure no one saw) Well lets just say maybe this’ll even up the odds a bit.

TALLY: (Grins) I’m really looking forward to meeting you in my time, I know I wont’ remember you… but I’m looking forward to getting to know you (smiles)

FAITH: Oh trust me kid it’s a heck of a ride for all of us

TALLY: I bet it is (smiles)

TARA: Were ready

TALLY: Cool (Smiles)



Flash of light. Cut to: to outside of Willow and Tara’s house.



DAWN: What… What do you want me to say I’m glad your going to a place were you could get shot at

TALLY: Yeah cause nothing bad ever happens here

DAWN: I didn’t say that, but why put yourself at risk

TALLY: Cause like it or not this is going to be my job one day, and if I can get a heads up now I’ll find one easier after I graduate

DAWN: So you have decided and all of tonight was just a show

TALLY: Dawn don’t be this way

DAWN: You know I’m really tired of every time I think something it’s my fault or you don’t listen

TALLY: I listen to everything you say

DAWN: Then is it you don’t care what I think

TALLY: I asked you tonight what did you think of me going

DAWN: I hate the idea now will you stay

TALLY: (Doesn’t’ say anything)

DAWN: That’s what I thought (Walks out of sight)

TALLY: (Shakes her head) (Looks up at the sky as she puts her hands in her jean pockets) (Looks confused as she pulls out a note) *Listen kid I know this may be strange but go after her… trust me* (Looks around) (Runs in the direction of Dawn)



A Demon thing is attacking Dawn; there is also a human male with him.



DAWN: Stop it (crying)

TALLY: (comes around a corner) Dawn… Oh god (runs up and starts fighting the demon’s off) Get away from her you creeps

MALE: Oh more party time

GIRL: (Comes around the corner) I think not (Hits the guys against the wall)



Tally and the demon fight again, finally Tally uses magic and the demon falls over dead and blows up. The other girl ties the guy up. Tally runs to Dawn who is huddled in a corner by the dumpster.



TALLY: Dawn baby…. It’s Tally (Squats by Dawn)

DAWN: (Crying) (Falls into Tally’s arms)

TALLY: Shhh I’m here

DAWN: Thank god you came (Hugs onto Tally more) I don’t want to think…. (Stops)

TALLY: He’ll never hurt you (Holds onto Dawn) I promise (Looks at the girl) I don’t’ know who you are but thank you

GIRL: The name’s Faith







TBC…Part 19









a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

Edited by: WillowTarafan98  at: 6/17/02 5:12:13 pm
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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 18

Postby fairydust » Mon Jun 17, 2002 7:39 pm

oohhh:) nice turn of events. And now Faith is gonna actually be in the story:) YAY....*does a little happy dance*

Hope to read more soon:D

*****Faye*****I LOVE YOU JENNA

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Re: UNEDITED::::: Part 18

Postby KJchicago » Mon Jun 17, 2002 8:44 pm

Stephie - just caught up on the last five chapters. So glad that you're continuing this. Love that Faith gave Tally the note. And, all the family interaction is so sweet.

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby Ange » Tue Jun 18, 2002 4:40 am

OMG! An update!!! I have to go read now.

Thanks Stephie!!!



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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby Ange » Tue Jun 18, 2002 9:20 am

Waoouu!! Ok, i've read it, between exams, hehehhe. And great part again, Stephie. I loved it. And Tally saved Dawn at the end and Faith is in now too. Hehehhe.

Cool, so, what's gonna happen next??? Except the girls wedding maybe and all Faith Buffy story. Big bads??? Hehehe.



Anyway, loved it, Stephie and can't wait for more.



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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby sparrow » Tue Jun 18, 2002 10:16 am

Great addition to this great story. Tally saves her girl ad now we get a little Faith goodness. Can't wait to see the wedding and how Buffy and Faith get together. Woo hoo.







And, yet, I just can't seem to care


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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Thu Jun 20, 2002 9:55 pm

Yes Faith is now in the story, and I'm in the process of writing some more. It may be a few days though before I get finished because my brother and his family are down :) But this is a good thing!!!! Anyways just wanted to say hi :)



:bounce ~Stephie~ :bounce



a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby Thanatopsis » Thu Jun 20, 2002 10:24 pm

Can't believe I missed that last update for so long. Anyway, a "Woo Hoo" to Faith in the present. Her and Tally are gonna be interesting together, I bet.



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Unedited.....Part 19

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Fri Jun 21, 2002 10:48 pm

Thanks for all the feedback :) Hope you guys like this ch!!! I got done a little sooner then I figured I would...part 20 'may' take a while though just depends ;) Enjoy everyone!!!



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Title: A New Beginning (Part 19)

NOTE: You should read Future Unclear or you may be a little lost with some of the characters, and stuff.

Author: Stephie

Email: TaraWillowfan21@aol.com

Feedback: Yes Please I’d Love To Have Feedback

Spoilers: Anything up to the end of season 5 or 6, also in this timeline Buffy doesn’t die she just defeated Glory, but Joyce is dead. You should probably read this from the first part or you may be a little lost.

Paring: W/T, and the rest of the gang are in here to.

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the “Buffy” characters, I did however create some new ones for this story, but it’s dealing with Buffy so that’s Joss’s (AKA: The EVIL man) territory not mine.

Rating: PG-13/R it’s between the two.



Cut to Buffy’s living room were the gang is assembled minus Dawn.



BUFFY: (Looking at Faith) I can’t believe you had the nerve to show up here

TALLY: Buffy lay off she helped me last night

WILLOW: Yeah and that makes up for all the bad things she’s done

TARA: Honey we should be thankful Faith was there to help Dawn last night

FAITH: Damn I didn’t expect that from you… I mean last time I saw you lets face it I was a bitch

TARA: That was a long time ago… People can change

FAITH: (Half grins) (Stands up)

BUFFY: Leaving again?

FAITH: I’m going for some sleep at my hotel

BUFFY: (Tara nudges her arm) Why don’t you just stay here I have room.

FAITH: Thanks B that’ll be a hell of a lot cheaper then the hotel



Cut to Dawn’s door room were Tally is reading a book while Dawn is asleep with her head in Tally’s lap.



DAWN: (Opens her eyes) Um you still reading

TALLY: Yeah but just till you woke up (smiles)

DAWN: (Sits up) I don’t’ think I’ve gotten the chance but thanks for going after me the other night…I mean you gave up your photo shoot…

TALLY: (Puts her finger over Dawn’s lips) I didn’t ‘give up’ anything I choose to be with you, and besides I don’t want to think of what (stops) I’m just glad I went after you… and besides I get paid pretty good to take photos around here (trying to lighten the mood)

DAWN: (Grins) Yeah… So what do you think about Faith

TALLY: Seams nice enough… I actually kind of like her… can’t explain it but it’s like I know her

DAWN: Well I don’t think you’ve met her before she kinda has that personality you don’t forget (they both laugh)



Cut to Buffy’s house were Willow is holding Liz. Faith is sitting in a chair.



FAITH: She’s cute red, good thing she takes after her other mom (grins)

TARA: (comes into the room) Dinner’s ready

FAITH: good I’m starved (goes into the kitchen)

WILLOW: Would it be wrong to put a spell on her… I mean just a small one so she can say my name and not call me red

TARA: (Kisses Willow) I love you

WILLOW: (Smiles)

LIZ: I love you to (grins)

TARA: (Takes Liz) Well I love you (Grins)



They laugh. Cut to the dinner table.



FAITH: (Mouth full of food) Man can your girl cook (Looking at Willow) B how come you haven’t been getting lessons from Tara

BUFFY: (Puts her head down) I have been

FAITH: (Grins) OH

LIZ: I’ve been getting lessons to (Smiles) Haven’t I mommy

WILLOW: Sure have baby

LIZ: Mama and Tally have been helping me

TARA: So Faith what are you planning on doing… since your free

FAITH: I’ve actually thought about going to college (Looks at Willow) if you’ll help me

WILLOW: (about chokes on her food) Huh??

FAITH: Look Re… Willow I know I haven’t always been the nicest person to you, but I want to change everything, and I need your help to get my GED, so what’d do you say? I’ll be a free baby sitter for a year (smiles)

TARA: (Smiles at Willow)

WILLOW: Um…if you’re serious about this… then yes I will help you

FAITH: (Smiles) Thanks



Cut to the kitchen were Tara and Buffy are talking while they do the dishes.



BUFFY: I don’t know Tara… I don’t know whither to trust her or not

TARA: (Looks at Buffy) Well I can’t tell you what to do Buffy, but people can change, and she’s done her time for the crimes she did. Sometimes the hardest thing to do is move on, maybe she came here for closure and to try and live a normal life…

BUFFY: (Shoot’s Tara a ‘very funny’ look)

TARA: Well as normal as we can get here (they laugh)

BUFFY: It has been kind of nice having her around, I mean she seams different, but then again she seamed different the first time… (Stops when she sees Faith in the door way)

FAITH: (Looks a little sad) I um just came to get Liz’s bottle for Willow (grabs the bottle)



Later that night Faith is patrolling by her self in the cemetery.



TALLY: (Comes up behind Faith) What’ch doing out here alone

FAITH: (Almost stakes Tally)

TALLY: (Waves her hand and freezes Faith’s hand)

FAITH: (Looks at her hand) What the hell

TALLY: (Unfreezes Faiths hand) Sorry couldn’t’ let you stake me (grins)

FAITH: How’d you do that?

TALLY: (Holds up her ring hand) It’s a long story, but basically the ring gives me powers

FAITH: (Grins) That’s how you took out that demon so quick the other night

TALLY: Pretty much, and it was after Dawn so that was enough to stop it

FAITH: So are you following me?

TALLY: No actually I was looking for Buffy

FAITH: Oh (Starts to walk again)

TALLY: Hey wait up (Walks with Faith) you and Buffy have a fight?

FAITH: No… (Looks at Tally) why aren’t you scared of me?

TALLY: (Grins) Why would I be

FAITH: You’ve heard stories right

TALLY: Maybe… But I tend to think stories get exaggerated sometimes

FAITH: Well their not… in my case anyways. But see the thing is B can’t get over what I did… I was a bad person for a long time (puts her head down)

TALLY: (Puts her hand on Faith’s shoulder) (Smiles)

FAITH: (Smiles at Tally) You know your not so bad kid

TALLY: Yeah I know (Grins)



Little while later Tally goes into Dawn’s dorm room. Dawn has fallen asleep at her desk.



TALLY: (Comes up behind Dawn and hugs her) Baby…Wake up

DAWN: (Very sleepy) Umm your back (Sits up)

TALLY: Yeah (Grins) Why don’t you move to the bed

DAWN: (Stands up and hugs Tally) I’m awake now, did you find Buffy?

TALLY: No I found Faith though

DAWN: Oh

TALLY: Lets just say I think were in for a roller coaster ride (Grins)



Cut to the magic box were Willow is going over some GED stuff with Faith at one of the tables.



FAITH: (Lays her head down on one of the books) Ok that’s it… I give up

WILLOW: Come on it’s not that hard

FAITH: (Shoots Willow a glare) Not for you red, I’m not good with the books

TALLY: (Walks up behind Faith) Well think of it in slayer terms

FAITH: Huh?

TALLY: (Points at a History book) This dude is like a slayer, he got rid of the bad people… (Points to another page) and this one is like a vampire he was kinda bad so the ‘slayer’ got rid of him… see it’s all how you think of it

FAITH: (Looks at Willow again) She’s defiantly your daughter

WILLOW: (Smiles) Thanks



Cut to the cemetery were Buffy and Faith are patrolling together.



FAITH: Kinda like old times huh B

BUFFY: Oh yeah (annoyed) so going to try and kill everyone now?

FAITH: (Stops) Damn it B, why do you do this

BUFFY: Oh I don’t know maybe I’ve learnt from experience

FAITH: I’m not like that anymore, and damn if I know how to prove it to you, everything I do you just ignore

BUFFY: You see the thing is you can’t prove it to me, I trusted you once and look were it got me

FAITH: Standing right here chewing me out?

BUFFY: Don’t get smart with me… (About that time 3 vampires jump them)

FAITH: B get down



Faith kills the two vampires, one has Buffy and is about to bite her; Faith fights it and stakes it, but in the process gets knocked down and lands on top of Buffy. They lean in and kiss each other.



BUFFY: (Pushes Faith away) I won’t do this again (runs off)

FAITH: Damn it B wait (Runs after Buffy)



Cut to Willow and Tara’s bedroom.



WILLOW: (Kissing Tara) Um Liz at Dawn’s for the night what shall we do (Grins)

TARA: Oh I was thinking of sleeping (Playing around)

WILLOW: Yeah…I don’t see that happening

TARA: Vixen!!

WILLOW: Hey with no chance of interruptions you bet (Kisses Tara)



Theirs a loud knock at the door.



TARA: Honey I love you so much but from now on watch what you say (Grins)

WILLOW: (Grumpy) This better be important



Cut to downstairs, Willow answers the door to find Buffy who looks a little beat up.



WILLOW: God Buffy are you ok (Pulls her friend in)

BUFFY: Yeah just a few vamps attacked us…

WILLOW: (Closes the door as Buffy comes in) (they sit on the couch) Do you need me to get the first aid kit

BUFFY: No I’m good… (Doesn’t know what to say)

WILLOW: Um Buffy not that I don’t like your company but why’d you come over this late…err…early

BUFFY: It’s Faith…

WILLOW: Oh goddess did the vampires kill her?? (Worried)

BUFFY: No it’s just…

WILLOW: (Knows something’s not right) Buffy did she do something??

BUFFY: Kissed me (Puts her head down)

WILLOW: (Shocked) What????

BUFFY: She kissed me, and it wasn’t the first time

WILLOW: She forced…(cut off by Buffy)

BUFFY: No…it was just a kiss…I think I actually may have kissed her

WILLOW: But this isn’t the first time?

BUFFY: No back in High School… we… I wasn’t ready to accept it then, hell I’m not now, but can I trust her Willow (Looking at her oldest friend for some answers)

WILLOW: I don’t know Buffy, she does seam different, god why didn’t you ever tell me about any of this

BUFFY: Well when it first happen I didn’t want to even think about it…then I didn’t know how you’d react…Well I mean after Tara I knew you’d be fine but then it seamed like their was no use to bring it up…

WILLOW: So what you think your gay?

BUFFY: (Looks confused) I know I like Faith, I’ve never felt that way about any other girl ever…But with her it’s different

WILLOW: Buffy theirs nothing wrong with just liking Faith (thinks about what she’s saying) I mean yeah she’s kinda strange sometimes but I mean just cause you’ve only ever had feelings for her doesn’t make you strange…it makes you human

BUFFY: But what do I do

WILLOW: My best guess is you need to talk to her

BUFFY: Right…(Starts to cry)

WILLOW: (Hugs Buffy)



Next Day: Cut to the park, Tally is walking through when she see’s Faith on the swings.



TALLY: Hey

FAITH: Hey

TALLY: Wow what an exchange of words (smiles) you ok?

FAITH: Five by Five

TALLY: (Sits in the next swing) Ok what the hell does that mean??

FAITH: (Smiles at Tally) Haven’t a clue, I heard it one time at a construction site I was working on, and it just kinda stuck…

TALLY: The great Faith mystery is being solved one question at a time (grins)

FAITH: Where’s Dawn?

TALLY: Back at her dorm room with Liz, I was sent to get breakfast

FAITH: (Grins) Oh… Why have you always been so nice to me?

TALLY: Would you rather I be mean?

FAITH: No I just… forget it

TALLY: No finish please… I know how it is when you hold things in trust me, it eats at you till you explode and frankly I don’t want an exploding slayer on my hands

FAITH: I don’t really have any friends to talk to… (Cut off by Tally)

TALLY: Yeah you do… Me (smiles)

FAITH: (Smiles at Tally) Thanks kid

TALLY: That’s what I’m here for, now spill what’s wrong?

FAITH: Buffy

TALLY: What about her?

FAITH: I’m in love with her (Puts her head down)

TALLY: OH (Little shocked then grins) well lets just jump right in to the big problems (smiles)

FAITH: (Looks at Tally and smiles)



Cut to Willow and Tara’s room. They’re laying in bed talking



TARA: So how does she fill?

WILLOW: I don’t know, Tara you should have seen her face last night she looked so lost

TARA: At least she came to you; she could be going through all this alone

WILLOW: Yeah I remember how that was, Buffy feels completely alone but at least I always had you to talk to

TARA: You’ll always have me (Smiles)

WILLOW: Have I told you how much I love you?

TARA: Ummm not today

WILLOW: Well then that’s a crime (Kisses Tara) I love you

TARA: I love you to (Kisses Willow)



Cut to Buffy’s house, she’s laying on the couch looking up at the ceiling. Theirs a knock on the door.



BUFFY: (Answers the door) (Look of shock on her face)

FAITH: B… We gotta talk



TBC… Part 20











a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

WillowTarafan98
 


Re: Unedited.....Part 19

Postby Ange » Sat Jun 22, 2002 6:33 am

OMG!! An update again!!! Great!!



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I tought that it will take you some time. Hehehhe. Super fast stephie. I'm gonna go read it now.



Thanks.



Ange.

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Re: Unedited.....Part 19

Postby Ange » Sat Jun 22, 2002 1:43 pm

Once again, that was a great part. Not too many Dawn and Tally tough but a lot of Faith and Buffy. Very good!! And that kiss!!! Waouuu!!!

I can't wait to read what's gonna happen next.



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Re: Unedited.....Part 19

Postby Thanatopsis » Sat Jun 22, 2002 4:07 pm

Getting more interesting with Faith. I like the Faith/Tally friendship. Looking forward to Buffy and Faith's conversation.



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Uh, um... various sounds of
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Re: Unedited.....Part 19

Postby singgirl » Sun Jun 23, 2002 1:35 am

Oh maaaan!! I hate it when a story ends all abruptly like that! Thingis, I know it's gonna happin, and yet, I still do this! ah well, I've been reading this stuff all day, starting with the first fic, and I gotta say...GO YOU!! Daaaaamn! I love it! And as much as I love W/T centered fan fic, I gotta admit, it's a nice change with the whole Tally/Dawn thing, I mean a lot of people hate Dawn and her incessant whining, but I kinda like her, so I love what you have done with the characters and all. I'm also a Faith fan, so it's always fun when she's in a fic!

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