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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby Ange » Mon Apr 29, 2002 9:14 am

an update soon. great!!



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Edited by: Ange  at: 4/29/02 9:44:27 am
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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Mon Apr 29, 2002 12:22 pm

Quick Note:: Thanks to my beta reader for another wonderful job!! And thanks to everyone for the awesome feedback!! Enjoy!!



Title: A New Beginning (Part 6)

NOTE: You should read Future Unclear or you may be a little lost with some of the characters, and stuff.

Author: Stephie

Beta Reader: Willowphile410

Email: TaraWillowfan21@aol.com

Feedback: Yes Please I’d Love To Have Feedback

Spoilers: Anything up to the end of season 5 or 6, also in this timeline Buffy doesn’t die she just defeated Glory, but Joyce is dead. You should probably read this from the first part or you may be a little lost.

Paring: W/T, and the rest of the gang are in here to.

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the “Buffy” characters, I did however create some new ones for this story, but it’s dealing with Buffy so that’s Joss’s territory not mine.

Rating: I’d guess PG-13 to be on the safe side







Pan to a hotel room. Willow is lying in bed alone.



TARA: (On the balcony, looking out at the ocean as the sun is coming up)

WILLOW: (Walks behind Tara and wraps her arms around her) Hey baby.

TARA: (Smiles) Hey.

WILLOW: I thought…you know…the whole thing about being married is you didn’t have to wake up alone.

TARA: Oh, well, I woke up and had to see the sunrise.

WILLOW: (Smiles) Yeah. Who knew Hawaii looked this good?

TARA: What do you mean? This is the only thing we’ve seen. (Grins)

WILLOW: And whose fault is that?

TARA: Ours.

WILLOW: (Smiles) Well we’ve got another 2 whole weeks to play in the sun, (Kisses Tara’s neck) so how about today we play inside.

TARA: (Turns to face Willow) Um…only if you promise a bath later. (Grins)

WILLOW: Yeah. I’m thinking that inside play is defiantly the way to go. (Pulls Tara to the bed)



Cut to Dawn’s room were she’s asleep. Tally walks in with a rose, leans down and kisses Dawn’s forehead.



DAWN: (Wakes up smiling) Um…what time is it?

TALLY: Late. Buffy and I just got back from patrol. (Hands Dawn the rose) Got this for you.

DAWN: (Sits up) (Pats the bed) Here. Sit.

TALLY: (Sits by Dawn)

DAWN: (Smells the flower) This is nice. Thanks. (Kisses Tally) So, how was patrol?

TALLY: Boring.

DAWN: Good! (Winks) So, where is Buffy?

TALLY: Oh she’s downstairs raiding the fridge

DAWN: (Pulls Tally close and kisses her)

TALLY: (Pulls back) Wow! Where’d that come from?

DAWN: Do I have to have a reason to kiss my girlfriend?

TALLY: Nope. (Smiles) (Kisses Dawn)

BUFFY: (Sticks her head in the door) Ok…break it up. It’s bedtime…in separate beds.

TALLY: (Smiles, stands up) See you in the morning.

BUFFY: That’s right ‘cause remember…slayer hearing. I’ll know if you ‘try’ and sneak in here.

DAWN: Night guys. (Slides back into the bed)

TALLY: (Leans over and tucks Dawn in) (Kisses forehead) Sweet dreams. (Smiles)

DAWN: (Smiles) You, too. (Falls asleep)

BUFFY: (Closes Dawn’s door as Tally walks out) I’m really glad you two are ok now.

TALLY: Me too, Buffy. Me too.



Cut to the roof of the Summers home. Tally is sitting by herself, looking up at the moon.



DAWN: (Makes her way to Tally, and hugs her from behind)

TALLY: (Jumps) Dawn! What are you doing out here?

DAWN: Hello to you, too. (Sits beside Tally) Whatcha doing out here?

TALLY: (Grins) Getting a suntan.

DAWN: Ha ha, very funny.

TALLY: I was looking for the big pineapple.

DAWN: Say what?

TALLY: Well, Willow tried to tell me the right names and I got all confused, so Tara took me up on the roof one night and pointed out some stuff. My favorite was the big pineapple, but it seams to be covered with clouds tonight.

DAWN: You miss them already.

TALLY: (Smiles) No I just… (Cut off by Dawn)

DAWN: Its ok. A big superhero-in-training doesn’t have to admit she misses her parents. (Nudges Tally’s arm)

TALLY: (Grins)

DAWN: What?

TALLY: Well, as much as I miss them, I’m glad I’m getting to spend time with you.

DAWN: (Smiles) Me, too. (Kisses Tally)

TALLY: So, how’d you get up here without Buffy noticing?

DAWN: Oh, please! For someone with ‘supposed’ slayer hearing, she sleeps like a log.

TALLY: (Laughs)



Cut to the beach were Tara is lying in a beach chair, sleeping.



WILLOW: (Walks up with two drinks, sits them on the table by the chair, and squats by Tara’s ear) So tell me…

TARA: (Opens her eyes) Yes?

WILLOW: What do you say we run off together?

TARA: Sorry, I’m on my honeymoon.

WILLOW: Well, any idiot that would leave a hottie like you alone in a bathing suit like that doesn’t deserve you.

TARA: (Blushing) Um…sorry. I’m in love. What can I say?

WILLOW: Say you’ll kiss me, at least.

TARA: (Playing along) But what if my wife come… (Cut off by Willow kissing her) Wow! (Smiles)

WILLOW: Yeah, well, what can I say? I have that affect on married women. (Winks)

TARA: (Nudges Willow’s arm) Oh, so you do this a lot, huh?

WILLOW: Only to hot blondes who have on my matching wedding ring.

TARA: Well, in that case… (Kisses Willow)

WILLOW: So, you ready for swimming in the lagoon today?

TARA: (Smiles) Yes, if you promise to keep up. (Winks)

WILLOW: Oh, playful Tara. I like it (Smiles)

TARA: Before we go, I saw something in a shop I want to pick up for Tally. Do you care if we go get it before someone else does?

WILLOW: (Smiles, as she touches Tara’s face) You’re so sweet. Of course, I don’t mind. I saw a computer program of Hawaii that I want to get for her, too. So, what do you say we go shopping. (Smiles)

TARA: Only if you promise to get her something besides a computer program. Sweetie, really, she’s not going to college for computers.

WILLOW: She said she hasn’t decided what she wants to major in yet. (Stands up)

TARA: (Laughing)

WILLOW: (Helps Tara up) What?

TARA: I just think it’s kind of funny, is all.

WILLOW: (Takes Tara’s hand as they walk towards the shops) What’s funny?

TARA: You want her to go to school for computers just like you. (Smiles)

WILLOW: Well, I want to be the proud…um…papa. (Smiles) You know what I mean? Clapping at college graduation…saying ‘she’s a chip off the old block’.

TARA: Honey, I think no matter what she majors in, you’ll say that. (Smiles)

WILLOW: Yeah, ok. You think you have me so figured out and know just what buttons to push, huh? (Playfully pouts)

TARA: I must. You never seem to complain. (Winks) (Goes into a shop)

WILLOW: Hey, no fair! (Follows her in)



Cut to Dawn and Tally driving in the jeep. They’re outside of town, just starting to come back into town.



DAWN: (Pouting) I can’t believe I got a 35 on that stupid test!

TALLY: You didn’t study enough.

DAWN: Oh! This coming from the girl who hardly ever cracks a book?

TALLY: Hey! I study.

DAWN: Not as much as I have to. Why couldn’t we have an extra week off like Willow?

TALLY: Well, ‘cause they took a few days absence from class. Last time I checked, we couldn’t do that just for bad test grades. (Smiles)

DAWN: (Smiles) I need ice cream. This road trip didn’t help.

TALLY: (Looks around) Sorry, don’t have any handy.

DAWN: Well, you know, it’s funny. They have these stores that actually sell it.

TALLY: Really? That is funny. (Smiles) So…

DAWN: So, what?

TALLY: So, would you like me to stop?

DAWN: Well, duh.

TALLY: Is that a yes or no?

DAWN: If you weren’t driving, I’d so be tickling you right now.

TALLY: (Pulls into the park) Ok. I’m stopped.

DAWN: (Leans over and starts tickling Tally)

TALLY: (Laughing) Ok, stop! (Holds Dawns arms) I’m stronger than you, Dawnie.

DAWN: (Maneuvers her way on to Tally’s lap) Yeah. Well, I’m more cunning.

TALLY: Yeah well… (Cut off by Dawn kissing her) (Puts hands in the back of Dawn’s shirt) (Kisses her neck)

DAWN: (Kisses Tally’s neck) Let’s go to your place.

TALLY: Dawn… (Cut off by Anya)

ANYA: Well, finally! (Walks up to the Jeep, out of breath) I’ve been looking all over for you! (Notices Dawn’s in Tally’s lap) Sorry, you’ll have to have orgasm’s later. I need you at the shop. Xander’s only going to last a few more minutes before he passes out. I swear, men are no good sometimes! (hands Tally a beeper) Keep this with you from now on.

TALLY: Ok. I’ll be there as soon as I drop Dawn off.

ANYA: Fine. But, if you don’t go in…just drop her off…then I’ll keep this little park display just between us.

TALLY: Fine.

ANYA: (Gets in Jeep)

DAWN: Anya, what are you doing?

ANYA: Oh, please. I’m not walking all the way back. You’re dropping me off. I swear, since I put that sign on the back of Willow and Tara’s carriage, I’ve had more witches in the shop than I know what to do with. (Taps Tally’s shoulder) See…I told you it was a good idea.

TALLY: Yeah, yeah. (Cranks the jeep back up)



Cut to the lagoon, where Tara and Willow are swimming. It’s a wooded area, very green and very pretty, and there’s a waterfall and rocks. They have their stuff on a blanket on the bank.



TARA: (Ducks Willow under the water)

WILLOW: (Springs back up) That wasn’t funny!

TARA: Really? (Laughing) ‘Cause from the look on your face, it was hilarious.

WILLOW: (Throws her arms around Tara’s neck) I love you so much!

TARA: (Smiles) I love you, too.

WILLOW: (Ducks Tara)

TARA: (Comes back up) HEY!

WILLOW: Now, that was hilarious!

TARA: No fair…you were distracting me… (Cut off by Willow kissing her)

WILLOW: You were saying?

TARA: Sorry. I forgot, I got distracted.

WILLOW: How about we eat lunch?

TARA: (Smiles) Sounds like a plan.       



They get out and dry a little with their towels and go over to the blanket. Tara gets some of the food out.



WILLOW: So, what’d you pack? (Smiles)

TARA: Oh, you know, the basics.

WILLOW: Which is?

TARA: (Pulls out strawberries)

WILLOW: Oh, yeah, the basic essentials. Got any whip cream in there?

TARA: What do you take me for? (Smiles)

WILLOW: Someone who’s trying to hide whip cream. (Tackles Tara, pulls a can of whip cream out of Tara’s hand) See?

TARA: Well, I didn’t know that was in there. (Laughs)

WILLOW: Sure. (Grins) (Squirts some whip cream on Tara’s shoulder)

TARA: Willow!

WILLOW: (Licks it off of Tara’s shoulder) Um…yeah…I like that flavored treat.

TARA: Vixen! (Smiles)

WILLOW: Hey, I’ll admit it! Hi, I’m Willow and I’m…addicted to my wife. (Smiles)

TARA: Hi, I’m Tara and I’m addicted to Willow-hand. (Grins)

WILLOW: Well, in this case, I think it’s best we try to not cut you off from the addiction. (Smiles)

TARA: Oh, I agree! (Kisses Willow)



Cut to the Summer’s home. Dawn and Buffy are attempting to cook. Smoke is coming out of the oven. Tally walks in the door.



TALLY: (Coughing) What’s going on?

BUFFY: (Points to Dawn) It’s her fault!

DAWN: It soooo is not! You wanted lasagna.

TALLY: (Laughing) Ok, guys. I’ll cook it.

BUFFY: (Smiling) Really?

TALLY: Yeah. If you both promise to clean up the kitchen…your mess AND my mess.

DAWN: We agree. (Hugs Tally) I love you.

TALLY: You just love me ‘cause you won’t starve.

DAWN: True. (Winks)

BUFFY: I’m going to puke.

DAWN: Oh, please! Now you know how I felt all the times you and Riley tried to get it on in front of me.

BUFFY: We so…um…don’t do as I do, do as I say.

DAWN: (Rolls her eyes) Gee, Buff, you’re really starting to sound like mom.

BUFFY: (Just stares at Dawn, then pulls her sister into a hug)

TALLY: (Smiles)



A little while later, Buffy and Dawn are cleaning the kitchen. Tally is at the end of the table doing homework.

BUFFY: So, Tally, you going on patrol with me tonight?

TALLY: (Looks at Dawn) If you need me to.

BUFFY: (Notices them looking at each other) Yeah. Definitely need you to. It’s like…um…essential.

TALLY: (Grins) Ok, then let me just finish this up.

DAWN: I want to come with you guys.

BUFFY: No way, Dawn. You have to finish your math

DAWN: Oh, Buffy, come on!

BUFFY: Nope. If you’d finished your math, I’d let you come.

DAWN: So, tomorrow night then?

BUFFY: Maybe. (Winks)

DAWN: (Smiles) Thanks.



Cut to Buffy and Tally on patrol.



BUFFY: So, the prom’s coming up soon.

TALLY: (Smiles) Yeah.

BUFFY: Figured out what you’re going to wear?

TALLY: My tux number from the wedding.

BUFFY: Cool. Dawn wants to go shopping. I’m afraid to ask for the prices of the dresses she wants. (Laughs)

TALLY: She could wear nothing and look good.

BUFFY: (Stops and puts a hand on Tally’s shoulder) How do you know she could wear nothing and look good? You guys didn’t…you, um, haven’t…um…have you…yet, right…I mean, the spell got stopped…so, you didn’t…you haven’t…right?

TALLY: Are you sure Mom’s babble hasn’t rubbed off on you?

BUFFY: That doesn’t answer my question!

TALLY: Which was?

BUFFY: Oh, you know what the hell I’m talking about.

TALLY: Buffy, I don’t really think I should talk to you about this. Dawn would kill me.

BUFFY: Oh, so you guys…

TALLY: No.

BUFFY: No…you haven’t? (Walks ahead)

TALLY: No, we haven’t. (Grins)(Under her breath) Not yet anyway.

BUFFY: (Stops) What did you say?

TALLY: Just that it seems quiet tonight.

BUFFY: Yeah. Oh well, that makes it easier. (Smiles)



Cut to the roof were Tally is sitting. Dawn comes up with two coffee mugs.



DAWN: Thought I’d find you up here.

TALLY: You have me all figured out, huh? (Smiles)

DAWN: (Hands Tally a cup) Homemade hot cocoa. (Sits beside Tally)

TALLY: Um… (Takes a sip) this is good.

DAWN: You sound surprised.

TALLY: Maybe a bit.

DAWN: (Tickles Tally) (Drops her mug on the ground) Now, look what you made me do.

TALLY: Oh, that was all you baby.

DAWN: Let me have some of yours.

TALLY: Nope. You’re the one who went all tickle-fest on me. Now, I get all the cocoa goodness. (Smiles)

DAWN: (Grins) So, how was patrol?

TALLY: Ah, it was ok. Buffy gave me twenty questions, but other than that…

DAWN: Twenty questions, huh? What’d she want to know about?

TALLY: Us.

DAWN: (Blushes) You’re serious?

TALLY: Oh, yeah. It was kind of funny to see her try to ask if we were having sex. Then she never actually asked. (Smiles) I wish I’d had a camera.

DAWN: That’s a question that I’d like to know, too.

TALLY: (Caught off guard) Huh?

DAWN: When are we going to sleep together?

TALLY: Um…well, I didn’t really think we were planning, you know? I just figured when it felt right.

DAWN: It feels right now. (Looks at Tally)

TALLY: Here. (Looks around the roof)

DAWN: Well, we’d have an interesting story. (Grins)

TALLY: (Smiles)

DAWN: (Takes the mug out of Tally’s hand and throws it to the ground, then sits in her lap)

TALLY: Is this some tactic so I won’t move?

DAWN: Oh, no. (Kisses Tally) I want you to move…just not away from me. (Grins)

TALLY: (Kisses Dawn) (Pulls at the buttons on Dawn’s shirt)

DAWN: (Un-tucks Tally’s shirt)

TALLY: (Rubs Dawn’s back)

DAWN: (Pushes Tally down on the roof)

TALLY: (Rolls Dawn over and gets on top kissing her) (Stops and pulls up a bit) Are you sure?

DAWN: (Pulls Tally back down into a kiss)



About that time the roof cracks, and they both fall through the roof, into Buffy’s Bedroom.



BUFFY: (Sits up in bed) Oh My God!!!!! (Looks at the big hole in the roof) What the hell were…

DAWN: (Buttoning her shirt back up)

TALLY: (Stands up) (Looks at Dawn) Are you ok?

DAWN: Yeah…only my pride is hurt.

BUFFY: You both were… (Stops) Oh god! Look at the roof!

TALLY: Buffy, I’m really sorry.

DAWN: (Stands up)

BUFFY: And over my room? You couldn’t have at least gone over the guest room or something?

DAWN: Well you can see the stars… never mind.

BUFFY: I don’t want to hear it! You’re grounded!

DAWN: Buffy, don’t be… (Cut off by Buffy)

BUFFY: (Looks at Tally) You’re going to fix this. I’ll call Xander in the morning and you can help him. Until then, help me put a tarp up or something. (Looks at Dawn) Go to your room!



Cut to Xander and Tally on the roof. Buffy is handing stuff to them from the ground and Dawn and Anya are sitting in chairs. Willow and Tara come around the back.



WILLOW: Hey guys!

BUFFY: (Surprised) Willow! (Goes and hugs her)

TALLY: (Smiles) Hey guys! (Waves from the roof)



Xander and Tally climb down.



TALLY: (Runs up to Willow and Tara and hugs them)

TARA: So, what happened? Something of the demon variety?

TALLY: Um…well…it’s a funny story.

BUFFY: Yeah, very funny.

DAWN: It’s not that funny.

ANYA: Not as funny as the park. (Stops) ‘Cause you know, the park is full of trees and…why are you guys back?

WILLOW: We decided to come home a few days early. We missed everyone, but that still doesn’t answer the question of ‘what happened’.

XANDER: Um…well.

TALLY: Dawn and I fell through the roof.

TARA: What?!? Are you ok?

BUFFY: Oh, yeah. They’re fine.

WILLOW: What were you doing on the roof?

DAWN: (Looks at Tally) Star gazing.

BUFFY: Yeah, right, and I’m a famous movie star.

TALLY: We were talking.

ANYA: That’s not what I heard.

DAWN: (shoot’s Anya a ‘shut up’ look)

WILLOW: (Picks up on this, face turns a little red) Um…so…you have to fix the roof, huh?

TALLY: Yeah, kind of.

BUFFY: Yeah, she does.

TARA: Well, then presents from Hawaii will just have to wait.

TALLY: Presents? Oh, I want presents!

WILLOW: Fix the roof. Then we’ll be all witchy- Santa for you guys. (Winks)

BUFFY: Yeah…and no…um…’talking’ while you do it!

DAWN/TALLY: (Annoyed) Buffy, stow it!

BUFFY: So, sue me. I don’t want to hear about my sister’s ‘talking fest’.

TALLY: Ok. Where do I file the papers? (Grins) Yeah…shutting up now. (Smiles)



TBC…



NEXT TIME:



:bounce :bounce Part 7 (:eek The Prom:eek ) :bounce :bounce





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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby BigMac » Mon Apr 29, 2002 12:55 pm

Tally and Dawn so close and the roof fall's into Buffy room. Willow and Tara love of whip cream nice.

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby Ange » Mon Apr 29, 2002 1:05 pm

you know the thing i just can't wait for is their first time. ( tally and dawn) i hope it will happen at the prom.



thanks. i love it. god, it's just so good.



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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Mon Apr 29, 2002 7:35 pm

Just wanted to say glad you like the story!! I'm working on Prom now :)



Talk to everyone soon!! ;)

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby lil k9 » Mon Apr 29, 2002 8:48 pm

Loving this like always. :)

It's always so funny it cracks me up, and so sweet!!!

Waiting for an update!!! :bounce

-Liliana

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Mon Apr 29, 2002 10:02 pm

I like playful Tara, too!



Tally and Dawn really have good luck, don't they? Falling through the roof... :lol



Nice update... can't wait for the prom.



-Aimee :D

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"Hey Will, this is me. It doesn't all have to be good and fine. This is the room where you don't have to be brave. I still love you. If you're worried, you can be worried." -Tara to Willow in ep. 603 Afterlife

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Thu May 02, 2002 10:18 am

Ok since I'm going away for a few day's I wanted to give you guys a preview of prom ;) and some upcoming events :) if you don't want to be a tad bit spoiled don't read!!! And this part HAS NOT been read by my rocking beta reader so if you want to wait for the proper grammar version...OR...don't want to be spoiled don't read ;) HOWEVER if you'd like a preview, be my guest here it is. SO until I get back home and get the beta read copies back here is a preview to Part 7 "The Prom"



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PART 7: "The Prom" (Preview)



*Takes place a little before the dance*

DAWN: (Smiles)

TALLY: (Looks at Dawn) Oh my god

DAWN: (Looks at her dress) What

TALLY: Your beautiful

DAWN: (Smiles) (Hugs Tally)

BUFFY: Ok break it up; we all want photos (Puts Dawn and Tally in front of the stairs) Ok smile pretty (Takes a photo)

WILLOW: (runs by Buffy) Don’t move I want one to

ANYA: (comes over with yet another camera) so do I

DAWN: (whispers to Tally) Why do I think were never getting to the dance

TALLY: Just smile through it (smiles)



Cut to the dance couples are dancing it’s in full swing, Dawn and Tally walk through the door. Some kids give them funny looks.



DAWN: (Holds tight onto Tally’s arm) Maybe this wasn’t a good idea

TALLY: (Kisses Dawn) Baby just be yourself and it’s all good (smiles)

DAWN: (Smiles) Ok



Slow song comes on



TALLY: Dance with me

DAWN: (Smiles) Sure (they go to the dance floor, while getting some funny looks again) we did the right thing…right

TALLY: (Kisses Dawn) you know we did, this is our senior prom to and I’ll be damned if their going to run it for us



Little while later they go over to the photo booth and get their photos done. Then they’re talking by the punch bowl. Steve comes up to them with his date.



TALLY: (Smiles) Hey man

STEVE: Hey (Points to girl) This is Kate… Kate this is my best friend Tally, and her girlfriend Dawn

KATE: (Smiles, shakes Dawn and Tally’s hand) Nice to meet you both, Steve has told me all about you guys

DAWN: (Smiles)

STEVE: (Looks at Tally) Can I talk to you a minute

TALLY: Sure (Walks a little ways from Dawn and Kate) What’s up

STEVE: So you sticking around here or going home tonight

TALLY: We um got rooms

STEVE: (Confused) Room’s as in plural

TALLY: Dawn’s older sisters idea, we each have a room so we didn’t have to drive home (grins)

STEVE: Well do you need both rooms (smiles)

TALLY: What do you think

STEVE: I think your going to be a pal and let me have the spare one (Smiles)

TALLY: (Grins) (Pulls an extra key out of her pocket and hands it to Steve) Here

STEVE: (Hugs Tally) Thanks you’re the best

TALLY: Yeah I know (Grins) Come on our dates await







WELL hope this hold's everyone over, I promise it'll be worth the wait ;) I'll post the full updates ASAP. Be on your toes, some exciting, and maybe scary things are going to happen in the Buffyverse! Ok well I'm off. Everyone have a safe and happy next couple of days :)



~Stephie~



!!!!Coming soon!!!! FULL VERSION of "The Prom" :bounce









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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby Ange » Fri May 03, 2002 3:10 pm

So when is the next update???

The prom since so great? I actually ask myself if Dawn and Tally, will finally have their first private time or not????

Please....



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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Fri May 03, 2002 7:47 pm

Hello,



Well the update will be posted as soon as I get it back from my beta reader. It shouldn't be to much longer :) I do promise it's worth the wait that's all I have to say ;)



Thanks for being so into the story, just makes me want to write more parts so THANKS!!



:rollin ~Stephie~:rollin

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby Ange » Sat May 04, 2002 3:05 am

Well, you're right. Stephie, i'm so into it. I just love it. I'm french and i was on vacation a week ago and one aftrenoon, i felt on your fic, so i print it all, and the first part too, that i've found on wiccan ways and i read it all. All afternoon, beautiful weather here, window open and all. Best day ever! And i was really into it.

So, just thanks for making it.



And an update. God, may it be soon. I can't wait anymore.

Please!!!! Please!!

So....



Ange.

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Edited by: Ange  at: 5/6/02 6:43:26 am
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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby Ange » Tue May 07, 2002 7:51 am

So, when is that big update coming? I'm so waiting for it. God. Hehehe.



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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby breaking » Tue May 07, 2002 8:05 am

hurry please hurry!! i can't wait any longer!! this is so good i'm completely addicted to it ;-)

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby Ange » Tue May 07, 2002 8:19 am

I know me too. It just gets to me to wait like that. I began crazy. Hehehe.



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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Tue May 07, 2002 1:09 pm

More yet? No? *sigh* Need more...



When's the Prom? Haven't we waited long enough?



-Aimee :D

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"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Tue May 07, 2002 2:41 pm

I'm sorry, I'm just wating to get the Prom back from my beta reader. Were trying to do something special with this Ch. that's why it's taken a bit longer... parts 7, 8, and 9 are DONE and at the beta readers disposal :) Part 10 I'm still working on though. So I promise thier are more chapters coming!!! THANK YOU so much for the great feedback :) That makes me feel wonderful :)



~Stephie~

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby Ange » Tue May 07, 2002 2:53 pm

Oh god! Thank you. So part 7,8,9 are ready. That's so good. God, i hope it's gonna be up soon. Come on beta reader, bring up the goodness. Heheheheh.



Thank you.



Ange.

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Tue May 07, 2002 2:57 pm

It's okay... we can wait. But we must have all three parts soon! ;)



-Aimee :D

*****
"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby breaking » Tue May 07, 2002 3:27 pm

yey!! well that's put a big smile back on my face.

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Tue May 07, 2002 9:00 pm

I just wanted to tell everyone that the story update won't be posted till maybe Wenesday...got to sidetracked with tonights show :( :( :( Anyways if your like me you need this so """HUGS"""



~Stephie~

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby KJchicago » Tue May 07, 2002 9:33 pm

{{HUGS}} back to you Stephie



Enjoying this story and I also just printed out "Future Unclear"



Take care!

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby Ange » Wed May 08, 2002 4:15 am

Hug to you too, stephie. I know what you feel.

Anyway, i can't wait for this update. It will cheer me up a little. And i really need it. Believe me...

I swear that an update will be welcome now



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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby breaking » Wed May 08, 2002 9:57 am

these fic are the only things that are keeping me alive. My heart hurts so much! {{HUGS}}

love

~Jade~

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby Ange » Thu May 09, 2002 8:13 am

I understand that, Breaking. I hope the update will be up soon. I'm gonna pray for that.



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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Thu May 09, 2002 1:51 pm

Hey guys,



I've been promised Part 7 will be done tonight, so hopefully by no later then Friday morning/afternoon it will be posted. Since all of the bad stuff on the show has came up my beta reader and I have decided to take our time with this part. I promise you guys will like it though ;) My beta reader Willowphile410 has actually been doing some CO-writing for this one Ch., that's what the hold up has been, but like I said you guys are going to love :love it!! ;) :grin ;)



Talk to everyone soon, THANKS FOR THE HUGS!!!!



:bounce ~Stephie~:bounce

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Thu May 09, 2002 1:52 pm

Great! I can't wait to read it...



I'll be looking for it tomorrow morning. I'm sending along some *HUGS* for you, too. We all need them right now..



-Aimee :D

*****
"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby Ange » Thu May 09, 2002 3:44 pm

Thanks a lot. I'll be here. Waiting...



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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Fri May 10, 2002 11:25 am

Hey everyone,



I'm still wating to get part 7 back from my beta reader. Something came up yesterday and she couldn't finish. But she said she'd do her best to get it done today. I do promise to post as soon as I get it :)



~Stephie~

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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby Ange » Fri May 10, 2002 12:05 pm

Well, i cross my fingers, stephie... and hope it will be soon.



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"Things are not always what they seem to be...." Shakespeare

Ange's W/T Avatars page & Willow and Tara Stuff

Edited by: Ange  at: 5/10/02 2:31:32 pm
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Re: Fic: A New Beginning (Preview of Prom)

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Fri May 10, 2002 1:00 pm

Hey, Stephie.. don't worry. We'll wait! Not necessarily patiently ;) ... but we will wait!



-Aimee :D

*****
"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

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