First fic: The Hidden Land Of Pain

[Cindy Lou Who]

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Gotta say I'm kinda bummed at the lack of feedback, but that's ok.

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Sometimes I refrain from responding because I fear I don't have anything insightful to say...and that you (or any author) might just shake your head disappointedly.



I'm really enjoying this story for several reasons. You write very expressively and with nice imagery. I could really see the whole scene play out with Vamp Willow and Donnie (and the rest). It was so clear in fact that I felt like taking a shower as well! (after I got done giggling at certain particulary *satisfying* parts)



And Donnie had a similar dream? Methinks the chuckling delighted entity of earlier is playing foul with the nightscape.



I like how your Buffy is not only comfortable with W/T but in awe of the depth of their feeling. Makes me feel sunny inside.



Will the party go off without a hitch...I'll be here to find out!



~Suse

"What we hear never seems half as important as what we overhear."

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Edited by: maudmac  at: 12/28/03 1:37 am