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Re: Wild Horses

Postby Apache138 » Thu Jun 24, 2004 3:54 pm

Rach (O'Co-Queen, you know with whom you share the title),



I am right there with Mika, the brain function thing. That was...whoa!



Again, all I can say is thank you for this fic. Now, I must go dip my head in a vat of ice. Mika, may I borrow some?



I remain your humble servant:bow



Take care,



Dena





Apache138
 


Re: Wild Horses

Postby numbered words » Thu Jun 24, 2004 4:39 pm





YAY YAY YAY! Tara's moving in! Wahoooooo!



*dances*



:pinky :eatme :applause





-Kristyn

numbered words
 


Re: Wild Horses

Postby veiled isis moon » Thu Jun 24, 2004 5:34 pm

WOW, no pants.........that was..........erm..........interesting........limo...........driver........with..........the.................nah, it's no good. You killed me

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Wild Horses

Postby singgirl » Thu Jun 24, 2004 6:32 pm

yippeee!!! They are moving in together! Happiness abounds!

:peace Pax! -Bev

singgirl
 


Re: Wild Horses

Postby Shimmera » Thu Jun 24, 2004 9:45 pm

Wow. I know since this is the first time I've posted feedback for your awsome story I should write a more indepth comment but my brain isn't quite able to function yet, :drool and I have this strange urge to rent a limo...so wow! Awsome job!

Shimmera



"You bought the last known Urn of Osiris off Ebay?" -Tara

Shimmera
 


Re: Wild Horses

Postby everbreeze » Thu Jun 24, 2004 10:44 pm

my question is.... who made the first move? not that I really care... but it's noice to know both got to the place where they wanted to be... yay~!

everbreeze
 


Re: Wild Horses

Postby Stroke of Luck » Fri Jun 25, 2004 11:21 am

Geez girl u did a great job! my eyes are all watery tz DAMN U:p the last few sentences were just too much for me *sigh* gods that was so............i have no words for that. just so adorable, lovely....



i want more, when is the next update??;)



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

"I wish that you were here or that I were there, or that we were together anywhere!"

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Wild Horses

Postby Kajun » Sat Jun 26, 2004 12:34 am

Hey there! Please forgive me for not leaving feedback in ages. With each update I'm smiling before reading even a single word of new Wild Horsie goodness. Really! I'm glad Willow and Tara will be moving in together. This will provide many more opportunities for Tara's pussy to be stroked and loved. Poor Bisquit.. all alone most of the day while Tara is working at the stables. Hopefully Dusty will be good company for the kitty while the girls are occupied with work and snuggle time. BTW, giving Willow a floppy eared yellow dog was a nice touch. Looking forward to the next part.. always!

Kajun
 


wow!

Postby LizPuRR » Sat Jun 26, 2004 9:35 am

OMG!!!

that was hot!!!

I love this story!!!:applause



LizPuRR

----------------



"I'll hold you up and drive you all night. I'll hold you up and drive you baby, til you feel the daylight, that's right."

Drive by Melissa Ferrick

LizPuRR
 


Replies

Postby WillowFever » Mon Jun 28, 2004 3:18 pm

Hello everyone....wow...thanks for such wonderful feedback....I'm all excited now...woo and hoo....I just wanted to add a personal touch to everyone's reply....so...here goes.....







marciam



It's okay...I can understand completely.....sometimes those comments get lost in to the wayside....or in this case...somewhere in the back of a limo..lol...







BurningWhiteRose



I thought a little naughtiness would be good for the kitties....glad you liked...



littlecrazy80



yeah...Tara said yes....I was hoping someone might pick up on that after the whole limo incident....lol....thanks







Mikaelah Braenna



Hi sweetie....you are the best.....thanks for everything hun...I love it when I interfere with your brain functions...lol...



WillowPowered



Wow....a dream huh......maybe I should get with you before the next update....lol...thanks..







wimpy0729



Alright!!! I got yay's all the way around...that felt good...woohoo...thanks hun...



and believe me....project #2 will be well worth the wait..





DreamsToDream



Thanks hun...glad you liked....





sam darls



Hey Sam....glad you liked that.....more to come sweetie...





pipsberg



You read that at work....you are a brave soul....thanks for the awesome feedback....you are a sweetie...





Apache138



Ya know...I don't mind being co-queen at all....I'm in good company....



Thanks hun....





numbered words



Oh...now I'm excited to see you dancing.....go you!!





veiled isis moon



I sooooo....did not mean to kill you....but I'm glad I did...in that happy killed you kinda way.....hehehe



singgirl



Yes..there is happiness everywhere....yay!!!!



Shimmera



Oh wow.....I'm so glad you posted...I feel all...special now....you are the awesome one.....wow....thanks...



everbreeze



Thanks for the feedback hun...



Stroke of Luck



Awwwwww.....I'm sooooo glad you liked.....and all teary eyed.....*sighs*....I'm happy now...



Next update is just around the bend....







Kajun



You are forgiven....hehehehe....and points well taken...hehehehe....glad you are liking...thanks...



LizPuRR



Glad you thought so hun...there is plenty more where that came from...







Okay.....I hope I got everyone....I think I did...sheesh...



The next update is now in the very capable hands of my lovely beta....so....as soon as it comes back to me....I will post it up for your reading enjoyment.....thanks so much.....



Now back to your regurlarly scheduled program....



WF

:peace





WillowFever
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby scooben » Mon Jun 28, 2004 4:09 pm

I absoultely love this fic. I have been following it since day one. Everyday i would come home and see if there was a new chapter. I know i havent said much in the past but i'm a bit of a lurker to say the least. Anyway i just wanted to tell you that i think you are a wonderful writer and i think that you capture their relationship just beautifully. Can't wait to read your next update.:bow

"Love isnt just a feeling, its shaving your balls," Michelle Flaherty, American Wedding

scooben
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby WillowFever » Wed Jun 30, 2004 7:22 pm

Hey Scooben...thanks for the reply sweetie.....



I hope everyone enjoys this next update....as always..I love ya'll and happy reading...



WF

:pride













Wild Horses

by

WillowFever





Part 40:        Home Is Where The Heart Is       









Willow smiled as the quaint little house that Tara had called home for the last six years came into view. The redhead couldn’t help but grin at the iron horse standing proudly atop the mailbox.



That’s my Tara...



As she looked around she noticed that Tara’s touch was everywhere. From the hanging flower baskets on the porch to the bright red hummingbird feeders on each corner. A multi-colored windsock danced as the autumn winds swirled around the house. The yard was small but filled with flowers and well kept.



She could just picture the blonde sitting out on the porch late in the evening watching bunnies and squirrels scamper around the yard.



She probably has them eating right out of her hand...just like me



Willow hopped out of her Jeep and waited on her lover. She felt anxious to see the inside.



~ ~ ~



Tara felt her tummy doing flip-flops as she pulled into her drive. Everything looked the same and yet different at the same time. She felt a wave of nostalgia wash over her as thoughts of moving out danced through her head.



I can’t believe I’m moving out...



The blonde smiled even as she felt tears gather in her eyes. It didn’t seem that long ago that she had sat out on the porch...wishing on the stars of spring to bring her a love that would be true...someone to grow old with...to share the ups and downs of life with. Slowly, she wiped a lone tear from her cheek.



Tara said a silent thank you to the heavens above for sending her a dream come true. No longer would her heart be a lonely place...her nights would now be filled with love and laughter instead of silence and space.



Her eyes glanced at the house waiting on her...standing proudly against a backdrop of hills. It was four walls that had protected her from the wind and rain...keeping off the cold and shielding her from the heat of summer. Four walls that she knew if they could talk would tell the story of a young woman who had overcome many obstacles in life to be where she was today. It was the only place she had ever called home...until now.



Blue eyes glanced over at the petite red head sitting in the Jeep next to her.



Home...



She watched as Willow slid out of the Jeep and waited on her.



My heart has found a home...



A slow smile spread across Tara’s face as she watched Willow’s eyes dart around the yard. No doubt the red head was trying to commit to memory every little detail.



She’s so cute...



The blonde let out a contented sigh as she pulled her keys from the ignition. She hopped out of her 4x4 and headed towards the love of her life.



“Hi sexy...”



Willow felt her cheeks growing warm with embarrassment. She didn’t think she would ever get used to this gorgeous blonde sweet-talking her.



“Look who’s talking...”



Tara walked up to her lover and slid her arms around Willow’s neck. She leaned forward and placed a gentle kiss on the warm lips in front of her.



“I love you Willow...”



The red head cupped Tara’s face. Slowly, she ran her thumb over full lips and pulled the blonde in for another kiss. Just before their lips met, Willow whispered.



“I love you too Tara...with all that I am...”



Lips brushed lips and soon both women were lost in the feel and taste of the other. There was no urgency in the kiss...just slow declarations of love...soft and tender caresses that spoke of love eternal. Gradually, they pulled apart allowing small kisses to ease the distance between them.



Neither one spoke as they turned hand in hand and walked up onto the porch. Tara smiled as the door opened and she stepped over the threshold. A very happy kitty greeted her at the door. She bent over and swooped the fluffy cat up.



“Willow...this is biscuit...biscuit...this is the love of my life...”



The cat purred as Willow reached out and scratched his ears. However, Willow couldn’t tear her eyes away from Tara.



I’m the love of her life...



Blue eyes shimmered with love and Willow found herself drowning in it. The red head smiled a slow smile that grew into a full-blown ear to ear grin. Biscuit meowed and both girls laughed heartily.



Neither one would ever be able to tell if it was from Biscuits antics or just the release of nervous energy. Regardless, it would be a moment in time etched clearly in their minds.







tbc.....





WillowFever
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby Apache138 » Wed Jun 30, 2004 10:24 pm

Rach,



As I have said before, your talent and love for these characters has never ceased to utterly amaze me.



All I can say is thanks, you know how I feel about this fic.



As always, I remain your humble servant.



Take Care,

Dena





P.S. Pookie says thank you

Apache138
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby wimpy0729 » Wed Jun 30, 2004 10:39 pm

Hey Rachel!



That was so sweet. I would rate that about a 10 on the sweet-o-meter.



Now for the moving part. I know that can be trying, but you're not going to throw in any angst are ya? I have a feeling their only angst will be trying not to get their panties and bras mixed up. :D



See ya!



Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

wimpy0729
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby BFR from Paris » Wed Jun 30, 2004 11:46 pm

Awwwwwwwwwwwww!!! :)

BFR from Paris
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby Stroke of Luck » Thu Jul 01, 2004 12:01 am

Ur updates are having one tiny tiny problem...u started to read and than u are already at the end...the time flies and u just wanna read more but u STOPPED grrrrrr lol

U just go with the flow and its such a great story, that u never recognize the time...

But anyway i shut my rant now:p Ur story is great...i love it, but now i have to wait for the next update :sob



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

"I wish that you were here or that I were there, or that we were together anywhere!"

Stroke of Luck
 


Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby Shy One » Thu Jul 01, 2004 4:48 am

That was beautiful!! :heart

This is such a fantastic story! :applause :applause :applause

Please write more soon? :pray :pray :pray

I just can't get enough.......:read



Are there going to be any kids in Willow and Tara's future? Just curious.....



Shy One

:shy

Shy One
 


Re: Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Thu Jul 01, 2004 10:23 am

:love CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTE! :love



They never cease to amaze me! They're just so cute.



True love....:heart



Continue?



Sincerely,

:flower BWR

BurningWhiteRose
 


Re: Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby Kajun » Thu Jul 01, 2004 12:24 pm

Exquisite… you’ve painted a vivid landscape perfectly suited to what I often imagine Tara’s home would look and feel like. I can hear the sweet chirping of several birds as they welcome Tara’s return and offer their songs of delight for dreams coming true. The introductions between Willow and Bisquit were heart-warming. Hmm.. the first word expresses my thoughts on this update much better than anything else I could say… exquisite.

Kajun
 


Re: Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby littlecrazy80 » Thu Jul 01, 2004 12:50 pm

:heart :heart :heart

Quote:
“Willow...this is biscuit...biscuit...this is the love of my life...”




*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ Amber Board

littlecrazy80
 


Re: Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby sam darls » Thu Jul 01, 2004 1:02 pm

That was so incredibly beautiful :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby WillowFever » Thu Jul 01, 2004 1:19 pm

Well....where do I start....how bout you all are the best kitties in the whole wide world....I'm serious.....I open up the pens page and find all this wonderful feedback and it just makes me feel soooooooooo good.....Thank you to everyone....and now that being said...let me add some individual replies.....



I love you guys...



WF

:peace

















Apache138



Dena....(and Pookie...) Thank you so much hun....your words touch my heart and make me strive to do better every time....thank you so much.....



wimpy0729



Wow....a 10 on the sweet-o-meter....I'm impressed....thanks hun...



Ya know....I've never much of a fan of angst...but ya just never know where it might show up....





BFR from Paris



So glad you enjoyed that....thanks hun....





Stroke of Luck



Hmmmmm....maybe I should start writing longer updates....was that a "hint" or something....sheesh....lol...Thanks hun....and you know what they say....time flies when you're having fun.....woohoo...





Shy One



Thanks.....and..ummmmm.....kids??? Well....all I can say is... that if they tell me they want kids...I'll work em' in...I do have a couple surprises up my sleeve.....but you'll just have to wait till they get here....





BurningWhiteRose



You know this is going to continue...lol....thanks.....



Kajun



Wow...thanks Kajun....I'm so glad you got a good visual of that....I could see it so clear in my mind....Tara out on the porch...lazy summer days....oh yeah....



littlecrazy80





glad you liked that....thanks.....





sam darls



Hey Sam.....so glad you enjoyed that.....thanks for all your wonderful feedback....it keeps me going....











Okay....I sure hope I didn't miss anyone..I don't think I did..unless of course someone left something after I started this....which that has happened....hehehehe...okay.....the next part is being beta'd and hopefully will be up today or tomorrow....If I don't get to talk to any of you before then....have a safe and happy holiday weekend....



love ya,

Rachel

WillowFever
 


Re: Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby everbreeze » Thu Jul 01, 2004 9:56 pm

that was sweet.... I like the way you portray the characters. that's so sweet.... keep up the great work~! :peace

everbreeze
 


Re: Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby marciam » Fri Jul 02, 2004 12:10 am

I can't believe I missed your update! You have to keep me posted of your postings (hehe.. sorry it's late, I'm easily amused) I'm enjoying this story so much. Can't wait for the big move... wonder if the gang is gonna show up to help out? oh... and then comes the house "warming" :wink



Marcia

"Now get out of here and go claim your orgasms!" Anya to Tara in Planting a Seed by Ophelia11


"Well, we usually call it the ‘Wine Me, Dine Me, Sixty-Nine Me’ Festival of Homos, but Lezziepalooza has a nice ring, too." Willow to Buffy in Gods Served and Abandoned by Antigone Unbound

marciam
 


Re: Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby veiled isis moon » Fri Jul 02, 2004 5:45 am

Awwwww, that was just too cute! And there should be loads more cute moments to come when they've moved in with each other, right??

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby WillowFever » Fri Jul 02, 2004 4:00 pm

Hello everyone....whew....well.....I sure hope ya'll have a wonderful and safe 4th of July weekend...Okay....just a few quick replies before the next post...









everbreeze



Thanks hun......I'm so glad you are enjoying the story...lot's more to come...



marciam



Hey Marcia.....I will try my best to keep you updated on the updates...hehehe....you know there is tons of W/T goodness to follow....woo hoo.....thanks hun.....glad you are still entertained.....





veiled isis moon



Can they be anything other than cute?!....loads of cuteness on the way hun.....thanks....





WF









Okay...and now on with the story....hope you all enjoy.....as always Happy Reading









Wild Horses

by

WillowFever





Part 41:        If Wishes Were Horses







Tara smiled as Willow came through the front door carrying another armload of empty boxes.



“Where do you want these?”



“Ummm....bedroom...”



Willow headed down the hall, bouncing off the wall as she went. She reached the blonde’s soon to be former bedroom and quickly deposited her boxes. She felt so excited to be helping Tara move.



“Do you want me to start in here?”



Willow’s eyes darted around the room looking for the perfect place to start. The bedroom was small and cozy but she didn’t want to be intrusive. Yes...her love for Tara was bigger than the universe but she didn’t want to run across anything that might embarrass the both of them.



And this is just the room for unexpected embarrassing things to be found...



Tara stepped around the doorway and smiled at her lover.



“You can if you want to sweetie...”



Willow allowed her eyes to roam the curvaceous form of her lover.



“Any particular place you would like me to start...?”



Tara felt her cheeks blush at the come hither stare she was receiving.



“Well...you can start...I mean if you want to...”





Tara swallowed hard as she tried to resist the hunger burning in Willow’s eyes.



“Dresser...there...”



The blonde pointed to the furniture piece and slowly backed out of the room...almost tripping on an empty box in the process.



“I’ll just be...in here...”



Willow licked her lips as her eyes began to slowly undress the blonde.



“Are you sure...?”



Tara stopped and took a deep breath. It would have been so easy to drop everything she was doing and let the redhead ravage her in all ways possible.



“Willow...if you don’t stop looking at me like that...I’ll never get moved in to your house...”



The redhead cocked her head to the side and stepped over the boxes on the floor. She reached out and took Tara’s hand in her own and brought it up to her lips.



“Our house...not mine...ours...”



Tara smiled and nodded her head and did her best to curtsy.



“Our house it is...m’lady...”



Willow let the soft hand she was holding slide out of her grasp. Her eyes watched Tara disappear down the short hall and around the corner out of sight.



“Ohhh...what that woman does to me...”



She closed her eyes and shook her head in an effort to clear out the visions of Tara that had begun dancing through her mind.



Work Rosenberg....get to work...the sooner you get out of here...the sooner you get home...and get Tara snuggles...



Willow slid open the top dresser door and began placing the items in a box.



Oh my...maybe I should have started in the closet...



Willow stared at the lace panties that were dangling from her finger.



Focus...must focus....work.....







~ ~ ~









Tara raised the tailgate on her truck...silently wishing that it would close. She had never seen her Chevy so loaded down before. She gave a gentle nudge and felt relieved when the latch clicked and secured the gate.



It had been a busy day...between packing and trying to resist Willow’s charms, the blonde had been hopping all day. Now all she wanted was to sit down...grab a bite to eat and indulge herself in some Willow kisses.



“Ready?”



Warm arms slipped around the blonde’s waist and gave a gentle squeeze.



“More than you know...”



Willow placed a tender kiss on the blonde’s neck and smiled.



“Well...let’s get rolling...”



Tara turned in the loving arms wrapped around her. She leaned forward and rested her forehead against Willow’s.



“I love you so much...”



The redhead smiled as she kissed the tip of the blonde’s nose.



“I love you too...so much.”



Tara giggled as she played with the red locks of her lover’s hair.



She’s got the cutest freckles...



Willow looked deep into the blue eyes in front of her.



“You ready to go home?”



Tara nodded her head as Willow’s arms slid down from around her. The blonde felt warm fingers interlace with her own and she couldn’t help but smile as Willow walked her to the driver’s side door of the white Chevy.



“I’ll follow you....that way if anything blows out I’ll just honk the horn...”



A couple quick kisses and then both girls were in their vehicles. Tara slowly pulled out of the drive and headed towards her new home. A glance in her side mirrors reflected her smiling lover right behind her. Everything was perfect. There was only one thing that Tara wished could be different.



“I love her mama...“



The blonde’s thoughts filled with visions of what it would have been like if her mother had been alive...



“I wish she could have met you...”



Tara knew without a doubt that her mother would have taken to Willow like a bee to honey and vice versa. Just knowing that made her heart swell with pride and love.



“I’m going home....”



A lazy grin formed across the blonde’s face.



“Home....”







tbc......





WillowFever
 


Re: Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby littlecrazy80 » Fri Jul 02, 2004 4:25 pm

Great update! Really sweet! :heart

But this cracked me up. :lmao

Quote:
Oh my...maybe I should have started in the closet...



Willow stared at the lace panties that were dangling from her finger.



Focus...must focus....work.....




*lil´c*



"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ Amber Board

littlecrazy80
 


Re: Yay!!! Update!!!

Postby Shy One » Fri Jul 02, 2004 6:20 pm

That was SO sweet and beautiful!!!! :applause

Tara thinking how nice it would have been if her mother were still alive so she could meet Willow. :happycry

Great update!!! :pinky

As always, I can't wait for more......:read



Have a safe and happy Fourth of July!!! :banana



Shy One

:shy

Shy One
 


update

Postby LizPuRR » Fri Jul 02, 2004 6:28 pm

more great updateness....

totally loving this fic!!!!



LizPuRR

----------------



"I'll hold you up and drive you all night. I'll hold you up and drive you baby, til you feel the daylight, that's right."

Drive by Melissa Ferrick

LizPuRR
 


Re: update

Postby marciam » Fri Jul 02, 2004 7:22 pm

Oh.. let's indulge in some Willow kisses next time... woo and hoo. Is your beta hording the next update? We need more W/T goodness.



As always a wonderful update, and I won't even complain that it should be longer :wink



Marcia

"Now get out of here and go claim your orgasms!" Anya to Tara in Something New by Ophelia11


"Well, we usually call it the ‘Wine Me, Dine Me, Sixty-Nine Me’ Festival of Homos, but Lezziepalooza has a nice ring, too." Willow to Buffy in Gods Served and Abandoned by Antigone Unbound

Edited by: marciam at: 7/2/04 6:23 pm
marciam
 

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