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Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby Miss1234Kitty » Sat Jun 22, 2002 10:02 am

Very nice update, Buffy is so funny! Don't worry Aly, I'm being taken over by exclamation marks too. I think it's because everyone has updated today.



Gem

Tara: There's just so much to work through... and can you just be kissing me now?

Miss1234Kitty
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby Miss1234Kitty » Sat Jun 22, 2002 10:03 am

Very nice update, Buffy is so funny! Don't worry Aly, I'm being taken over by exclamation marks too. I think it's because everyone has updated today.



Gem

Tara: There's just so much to work through... and can you just be kissing me now?

Miss1234Kitty
 


Re: feedback

Postby jessie 85uk » Sat Jun 22, 2002 11:09 am

Im really enjoying this fic, and i apologise for not replying before, because ive been reading it since u started it.

Im a bad person i know.

Anyway keep up the good work, im looking forwards to the next part.

CJ

God created woman and she had three breasts. He then asked the woman, "Is there anything you'd like to have changed?"

She replied yes, you could get rid of this middle breast?"

And so it was done and it was good.

Then the women exclaimed as she was holding the third breast in her hand, "What can be done with this useless boob?"

And God created man.

jessie 85uk
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby ally02 » Sat Jun 22, 2002 11:23 am

I know - i think the exclamation marks are planning world domination!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! argh they are back!!!! um...leaving now.



love Aly xxxxxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby pikescoob » Sat Jun 22, 2002 12:28 pm

I thought Buffy was checkin out the girls too!! hehe. Poor Tara....her dad is such an ass. :)



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Jun 22, 2002 1:43 pm

heya kittens,



cheers for the feedback!



Gem- hehe, i based Buffy on my experiences with my straight best mate. the exclamation marks do seem to be flying all over the place at the moment. i keep using them in feedack too!!!!!!!!! lol. :P



jessie- grrrrrrrrrr, not repling lol, only joking, as long as your enjoying it. ill have an update soon i hope. also i love your signature ;)



aly- yeah aly just go, go on turn around a leave! lol (meet you in the back corner of msn chat in 5 mins okay?)



michelle- that was the idea and it worked really well! its hardf to check when you proof read to see if it works because you know what effect you want it to have, if you get my meaning. Tara's dad is a complete ass and needs it kicking too. hehe.



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby ally02 » Sat Jun 22, 2002 3:03 pm

I'm all alone...there's no one here beside me!!!! I dont know all the words so I will just say la dee dee..........

BUT YOU GOTTA HAVE FAITH!!!!

Hmmmm, have Faith, dont mind if I do! Can I have an all you can eat Buffy too? ;) Get it Buffet...Buffy. Again I turn and walk away...



love Aly xxxxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Jun 22, 2002 3:06 pm

hmmmm, okay then aly!, sometimes i relaly do worry about you :-s, but 'i love you baby and if its quite alright i need to baby la la la la la, oh pretty baby trust in me when i say!!!!' lol, we could soooo do a show together lol.



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby ally02 » Sat Jun 22, 2002 3:16 pm

Yes we should so do a show!!! With such hits as:

*Where do we go for Beer!* *I'm so glad that I'm gay* and the highly acclaimed *I'm Under Your Skirt*

*cough* leaving now



love Aly xxxxxxxxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Jun 22, 2002 3:20 pm

LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!



that would rock!! especially the last one i can think of few dance moves we could put with it, i could always wear my denin skirt lol.



love u x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby ally02 » Sat Jun 22, 2002 3:26 pm

Hmm a few dance moves...;) and why would you want to WEAR your skirt??? lol *cough* I'm not implying a darned thing. Pleh Big Bro sucks. You need to update...I need to know whats going to happen!!!



love Aly xxxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Jun 22, 2002 3:34 pm

lol, well its a wrap around; as you well know, so its easy to take off if i get too hot from all that dancing lol.



lol, i will update at some point, but im a very laid back kinda person, aka lazy lol. i will have one this weekend thou i hope :D



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby Ginner WTluv » Sat Jun 22, 2002 4:25 pm

You have impatient kittens awaiting you genius! You're not allowed to be lazy! Just kidding;)

Huh, people are gonna think i have nothing better to do than stay at my computer all day.... oh wait...

Once again, just wanted to say how much i'm loving this fic *grumbles*... and how much i depise Tara's dad. Just hand me a shovel and i'll off him myself...



*coughs* anyway, keep writing!:D



Ginner ~ A happy, fluffy, slightly neurotic, purple kitten from the planet Twong.



Edit: Cuz i'm stupid and have to rely on Ellie to point out my mistakes;)

Edited by: Ginner WTluv at: 6/22/02 3:47:00 pm
Ginner WTluv
 


Re: Need more.... fic sooooo good....

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sat Jun 22, 2002 4:35 pm

hehe, i wouldn't call me a genuis :-s, theres a whole load of much better writing than me on the board. im just starting out. im glad and really flattered that you like it so much though. ill have an update tomorrow for you i promise, only coz you asked to nicely lol. me and aly are working on some fic together at the the moment, so that should be quite fun too. lol i think that your mistake with the 'dead' and 'dad' seemed fairly appropiate lol.



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


part 6a

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sun Jun 23, 2002 4:03 am

okay heres a short update, i know that i promised a longer one, but ill put up the other part tonight.



so enjoy!



love ellie x x x x





Title: Summer Loving

Part: 6a/?

Author: Ellie Walsh aka. Witchbitchwillow

Email: witchb1tchwillow@hotmail.com

Feedback: yes please. Be brutal I can take it. “Strong like an Amazon right!”

Spoilers: none

Rating: PG

Pairing: Willow/Tara

Disclaimer: Joss owns it… Mutant enemy blah blah blah etc…

Summery: Based around series 4 when Oz left Willow. Willow then

goes on holiday to Orlando, Florida, goes into a bar, and makes

a new acquaintance.

Authors Note- well I don’t really have one this time so blah blah, oh yeah I proof read myself so sorry for any errors, and its AU.





        Tara was sitting in the bar waiting for Willow to arrive, she looked confused and upset. She was going over in her head what she was going to say to the petite redhead. She played, frustratingly with the fingers as if they held all the answers. She was just cursing under her breath when Willow arrived at the door. The smile which painted across Willow’s face gradually faded when she sensed Tara's discomfort. She went over the blonde who still hadn’t realised Willow’s entrance.



        Tara’s blonde hair had fallen in front of her face, clouding her emotions from Willow. The redhead gently played with the ends of Tara’s hair and whispered. “What’s up baby” Tara’s body tensed under her touch and she felt unable to move away from it. She finally broke the contact by standing up. She straightened out her body, and didn’t make eye contact with the expectant redhead.



        “Willow, there’s some things which I need to tell you.” she sighed deeply and was about to carry on when Willow cut in.



        “Tara you can tell me anything, I’ll understand I promise.” Willow tried to reach out for the blonde’s hand, it had already been to long since they last made contact. Tara contemplated taking her hand, but then took a few steps towards the exit of the bar.



        “Not here, I know somewhere we can g-g-go. It’s a lot more private.” She turned her back to Willow and began walking out of the bar, and down the bustling street. Closely followed by a very puzzled redhead.



        Tara led Willow to a very private spot in the park, which was surrounded by trees and flowers. The humid air around them and semi-darkness was slightly comforting. Tara found the corner that she would often come to sit in when she needed some peace to read her book. She had wanted to share it with Willow, but not because of what she had to say now.       



        Tara stopped with her back to Willow, she didn’t want to have to turn and face her. Willow took Tara’s hand and turned her round, “Shall we sit down”. She wanted to make Tara as comfortable as possible. They both sat down on the crisp grass and Tara tried to pull her hand out of Willow’s grasp but Willow wouldn’t allow her to.



        “Willow, this isn’t going to be easy anyway, but by doing that your making it fifty times harder” Tara tears laced her voice, and she hid her face behind her hair once again. Willow used her other hand to place Tara’s blonde hair behind her ear. She then trailed her hand down Tara’s jaw line and lifted the blonde’s chin up so that their gazes met.



        Tears glazed over Tara’s eyes and she blurted out, “Willow, I’m so sorry, it wasn’t meant to be like this”. The salt tears ran down Tara’s face and Willow wiped them away with the tips of her fingers.



        “It’s going to be okay, I promise.” Her voice was calm and loving. “Please Tara, tell me what’s wrong”. Tara took a couple of deep breaths and bit her lower lip to prevent herself from crying.



        “We can’t do this anymore, there’s things that are completely out of my control. I’m leaving tomorrow night, I’m r-r-really sorry.” She got up and began to walk out of the park. It took Willow’s brain and little time to register what had just happened. She jumped to her feet and grabbed both of Tara’s forearms.



        “Tara, no, I won’t let you go. Please baby I need you. I’ve only just found you!” she was pleading with Tara desperately and tears were streaming down her face.



        “I’m sorry” she release herself from Willow’s clasp and ran out of the park.



        Willow didn’t know what to do, she began walking aimlessly, trying to think about what had happened. She must have done something wrong, otherwise people wouldn’t keep leaving her like this. She felt like there was something wrong with her, why did she drive these people away? Was there something that she did that made people not want to be with her anymore when they knew what she was like? She was asking herself a million and one questions, not being able to find a substantial answer to any of them.



* * * *



        Tara ran all the way back to the bar, and sat down on the chair in the corner. She couldn’t stop herself from crying, the tears just kept on flowing and she held her head in her hands. She sensed a looming shadow on the doorway. She recognised the form instantly. She welled up with anger and pain, this was the last person in the world that she wanted to see.



        “Tara, what was that little show about then?” Tara’s father took slow, menacing strides into the bar, looking around casually at all the décor. “Just as shabby and degrading as a remember, I can’t believe that I agreed to let you work here.” He sighed slightly and shrugged his shoulders. “Well, at least your coming home now Tara” he let out a muffled laugh and a sly smirk crossed his features.



        Tara’s blood shot eyes glared up at him, degust and hatred filled her voice. “I’m not coming”.



TBC . . .



*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

Edited by: witchbitchwillow at: 6/23/02 3:05:27 am
witchbitchwillow
 


Re: part 6a

Postby ally02 » Sun Jun 23, 2002 5:36 am

Wooohooo! Go Tara...it's your birthday!!! I think she should pick up her stool and swing it over his head!! Mwohahahaha!! Poor Willow, dont let her be doubting!! Also OMG Wagon Wheels have turned blue....*cough*...more soon please! :D



love Aly xxxxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: part 6a

Postby Ginner WTluv » Sun Jun 23, 2002 6:02 am

YOU CAN NOT LEAVE IT HANGING LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Ahem.... now i know why people get anygry when i leave my fics with cliffhangers;) Grr.... Tara needs to kick her dad's ass.... or let me do it for her. Okay.... calming down.... heehee:D

Oh, make Buffy gay! That would be soooo cool! I think i made everyone in Sunnydale gay in my last fic;) Willow and Tara could hook Buffy up! Just an idea:D



*Walks back into lurkdom sing* Well i guess it would be nice, if i could touch your body, i know not everybody, had got a body like you, mmm. But i gotta think twice, before i give my heart away. Oh but I need some time off from that emotion,

Time to pick my heart up off the floor.Oh when that love comes down without devotion, Well it takes a strong man baby, but I'm showing you the door.

'Cause I gotta have faith, I gotta have faith

Because I gotta have faith, faith, I gotta have faith, faith, faith:D :D :D



Ginner WTluv
 


Re: part 6a

Postby ally02 » Sun Jun 23, 2002 6:19 am

Ohhhh can I have faith??????????????????

Sorry just needed to make that random comment! lol

Grrr that song is stuck in my head now!!! I am literally humming it!!!

love Aly xxxxxxxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: part 6a

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sun Jun 23, 2002 6:50 am

heya



aly- well i would get excited if i ate chocolate but i dont so im not lol. NO YOU CAN'T HAVE FAITH!!!!!!! put her down, and we've talked about this before. also you're making me jealous. you're always singing women!! lol.



ginner- hehe sorry about the cliff hanger it just seemed a good place to end it i suppose.

i like straight Buffy, she makes a good contrast to Willow and also i can make little sections about her straightness and and man loving ewww lol.

lurkdom sounds great and all, but make sure that you come back!!!



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: part 6a

Postby ally02 » Sun Jun 23, 2002 7:58 am

Put faith down! argh noooooooo lol

I mean yes because i wouldnt want to make u jealous lol lol yeah rite! he he he he (evil laugh)

Im always singing I know - im singing this rite now:

I am cold and wet cos someone just made me stand out in the scottish rain!!!!!! la la la ooooooh shoo bop



love Aly xxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: part 6a

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sun Jun 23, 2002 8:02 am

u have to put her down women!!!!! she have to live the straight poeple alone. also you dont want to make me jealous grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!



what kind of evil person would make you stand out in the cold then miss walker?? i can think of anyone who would want to make you all wet he he he, did i just say that! im an innocent honest!



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: part 6a

Postby Ginner WTluv » Sun Jun 23, 2002 8:24 am

*sneaks out of lurkdom, looks around* Hmm... *grabs Faith, throws her over shoulder and runs off* hahahahahahahaha!!!



Ginner ~ Taking Faith back to planet Twong to show her "privet" crater;)

Ginner WTluv
 


Re: part 6a

Postby TareBearRS » Sun Jun 23, 2002 8:35 am

Love the story, Can't wait for it to continue!!!!!

Hopefully she'll stand up to her evil father and wrok this out with Willow....





TareBearRS
 


Re: part 6a

Postby pikescoob » Sun Jun 23, 2002 8:51 am

Poor Willow...shes' so completely confused right now. Heh, Tara said she wasn't coming, and right to his face...yay!! Maybe she can get Buffy to kick his ass :)



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: part 6a

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sun Jun 23, 2002 8:55 am

lollololol, ginner do you have a death wish lol!!! aly kitten is gunna kill you for that!! although i do know where this secret crater is i think that me and aly may join you there. give us a couple of mins ;)



TarebearRS- thanx for the feedback, I'm sure that Tara will stand up to her dad dont worry :D



Michelle- i know poor confused willow!! and go tara its your birthday, shes gunna stand up to him.



Happy sunday everyone!!!



love ellie x x x x



*skips off to planet twong trying to control an enraged aly.





*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: part 6a

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sun Jun 23, 2002 8:57 am

lol, ure such a dummy lol, but ure my dummy!! lets get her aly, but the crater there is relaly nice and you never know faith might be that way inclined!!



love ellie x x x x :P

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: part 6a

Postby ally02 » Sun Jun 23, 2002 9:00 am

he he he We will MAKE Faith that way inclined! Can we bring Sam....or is that a stupid question?? Oh oh I'm gonna die for saying that! *runs out of door...runs back in and grabs bacardi...runs out again*



love Aly xxxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: part 6a

Postby Ginner WTluv » Sun Jun 23, 2002 9:01 am

You're all coming to get me? *panicks a bit* Maybe i should give.... faith... back... no! Never!!!!! *evil laughter* Not until we get a fic update!!! Bbbwwwwhaaahhhaaa!!!



Ginner ~ Holding Faith hostage.

Ginner WTluv
 


Re: part 6a

Postby ally02 » Sun Jun 23, 2002 9:04 am

noooooooo! Ellie - write ur but off!! I would panic if I were you!!! Mwohahahahaha!!



evil skanky gay Aly who's on the war path! xxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: part 6a

Postby ally02 » Sun Jun 23, 2002 9:10 am

Nooo!!! That's no fair!!! I will leave smelly sam alone!!

*throws sam away storms over to ellie and grabs her to go and find Faith*



love Aly xxxxx need to get off the hook!

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 

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