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Re: Part 9

Postby Ange » Sun May 26, 2002 4:28 am

An update!!! Great!!!



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Re: Part 9

Postby fidds » Sun May 26, 2002 6:13 am

Yay! Great update !! brilliant fic !! it's such a happy story (apart from Tally not beig able to walk , but she's recovering well!!) :grin

can't wait for the next update!

*Hannah* :)

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Re: Part 9

Postby breaking » Sun May 26, 2002 6:34 am

oh that so was so cool. Tally's walking or starting to walk. Willow and Tara having a baby this is so great i love this story!

love jade x x

"LIFE WITHOUT LOVE IS LIKE A BUTTERFLY WITHOUT FLOWERS"

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Re: Part 9

Postby Ange » Sun May 26, 2002 7:25 am

Great update, i liked it a lot. And Tally is recovering. That's great.

I hope that her and Dawn, will have some great other moments together.

And W/T baby. Great too.



I can't wait for the next part.



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Re: Part 9

Postby Karzia » Sun May 26, 2002 10:01 am

Very cool :cool update I remember my graduation (all thoses years ago) and it wasn't nearly as nice:) for one thing the only kisses i got were from my mother:laugh Please update again soon.

"This may be the Hellmouth, but it's our Hellmouth"

--------Tara in "Left of Center"
-------- by: Jomarch

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Re: Part 9

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Sun May 26, 2002 10:03 pm

Hey :)



Well I"m really glad you are all liking this part :) More will be up as soon as my great beta reader gets it done ;) Well ok I have to go I have to open the store were I work at tomorrow :( BUT I get off early :bounce :bounce



:bounce ~Stephie~ :bounce



a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

WillowTarafan98
 


Part 10

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Tue May 28, 2002 11:32 pm

Here's another update :) Gald everyone is enjoying the storyline. Please don't feel shy post your feedback :) I LOVE TO HEAR IT!!!! Once again THANKS to my rocking beta reader!!!!!!



:bounce ~Stephie~ :bounce





Title: A New Beginning (Part 10)

NOTE: You should read Future Unclear or you may be a little lost with some of the characters, and stuff.

Author: Stephie

Beta Reader: Willowphile410

Email: TaraWillowfan21@aol.com

Feedback: Yes Please I’d Love To Have Feedback

Spoilers: Anything up to the end of season 5 or 6, also in this timeline Buffy doesn’t die she just defeated Glory, but Joyce is dead. You should probably read this from the first part or you may be a little lost.

Paring: W/T, and the rest of the gang are in here to.

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the “Buffy” characters, I did however create some new ones for this story, but it’s dealing with Buffy so that’s Joss’s territory not mine.

Rating: I’d guess PG-13 to be on the safe side



Cut to a dorm room where the photo taken of Willow, Tally, Tara, and Dawn at graduation is on the desk. There are different boxes around, you can tell someone’s in the process of moving.



DAWN: (Walks through the door with another box) (Sits it down, then looks around) Finally! All the stuff is in.

TALLY: (Walks in behind her) Nope. (Sets down the box she’s carrying) Now all the stuff’s in. I swear, Dawnie, where’d you have all this stuff in your room?

DAWN: (Smiles)

TALLY: (Confused) What?

DAWN: It’s just nice having you walking again. I know you’ve been doing it most of the summer, but it’s still nice. (Hugs Tally)

TALLY: Well, you know, I’m pretty pleased with it, too. (Smiles) (Beeper goes off) I swear, Anya. (Looks at pager) I gotta go.

DAWN: She needs to hire another person.

TALLY: Oh, don’t say that! You’ll be cutting down on my money making.

DAWN: Stay away from Anya. (Winks)

TALLY: Be back later.

DAWN: You’d better be. I don’t want to have to unpack all of this myself.

TALLY: Umm…on second thought, I’ll see you tomorrow. (Grins, kisses Dawn)



Cut to Willow and Tara’s bedroom. Tara is lying in bed you can now see she’s pregnant.



WILLOW: (Comes in the door with a bowl of ice cream) Here’s your ice cream, baby.

TARA: (Smiles) Thanks, Will.

WILLOW: (Gives Tara the bowl, then sits by her in the bed)

TARA: (Starts to eat the ice cream) Oh, this is wonderful. Yum!

WILLOW: (Smiles) Does the baby approve?

TARA: (Smiles) Very much so.

WILLOW: (Lays her head on Tara’s stomach) Hi, baby. I’m your mom. (Smiles) Well, one of them.

TARA: (Giggles) (Makes a face) Hey!

WILLOW: (Jumps up) What was that?

TARA: I think she just kicked. (Grins)

WILLOW: I felt it. (Smiles)

TARA: (Grabs Willow’s hand and places it over a spot on her tummy) Feel it.

WILLOW: (Face lights up) She responded to me.

TARA: Of course she did. (Smiles)



Cut to the Espresso Pump. Buffy and Willow are hanging out.



BUFFY: So, one more term of college for you, huh?

WILLOW: Yeah. I passed all the early exit exams. I figured I’d finish early and take care of the baby so Tara can finish the next term.

BUFFY: That’s sweet.

WILLOW: Plus, the firm that wants me to work for them said I could do most of the stuff at home, and Tally said she’d take care of the baby when I couldn’t.

BUFFY: Oh, you mean when she’s not at Dawn’s. (Smiles)

WILLOW: (Grins) Yeah. So how are you liking having the house to yourself?

BUFFY: It’s strange.

WILLOW: I know. It’s funny with Tally not being home sometimes, but at least she still does live there. (Smiles)

BUFFY: Yeah. They grow up so fast. (Smiles)



Cut to the college cafeteria where Tara is having lunch with Tally.



TARA: (Eating a PJ and cucumber sandwich) Um…oh gosh, this is good!

TALLY: (Pushes her plate away) Thanks, mama. You’re the best diet plan anyone could ask for.

TARA: Hey! I can’t help it. It’s just so good.

TALLY: So, mom said the baby kicked the other night.

TARA: (Smiles) Yeah. It was so cool.

TALLY: I bet.

TARA: So, how’s Dawnie liking her dorm room?

TALLY: Oh, she loves it. She says it’s nice to not hear Buffy snore.

TARA: The only thing I can say is always be there for each other.

TALLY: (Confused) Huh?

TARA: You and Dawn. No matter what happens, always be the rock for each other. That’s what keeps Willow and I strong.

TALLY: (Smiles) Thanks.

TARA: That’s what I’m here for. Well that and to eat. I want another sandwich.

TALLY: (Grins) I’ll be right back. (Goes back to the lunch line)



Cut to Tally’s old room where Willow and Tara are making it into a nursery.



WILLOW: I don’t know Tara. I think the bed would look better in our room.

TARA: Honey.

WILLOW: I mean…what if something happens and we can’t hear her…or we need to get to her but can’t fast enough?

TARA: Baby, it’s only two doors down.

WILLOW: (Grins) I’m being overprotective again, huh?

TARA: Just a bit. (Hugs Willow)

WILLOW: So where’s our oldest? She’s supposed to be here helping me put together the bed.

TARA: I told her she could stay at Dawn’s.

WILLOW: No, you didn’t.

TARA: Yeah, I did. (Smiles) Don’t you remember how happy we were in the dorms?

WILLOW: (Smiles) Yeah…Wait you know what their doing?

TARA: Honey, she’s an adult.

WILLOW: I know…(Cut off by Tara kissing her)

TARA: Actually, I told her she could stay over there because I figured we could use a little alone time.

WILLOW: What about the baby?

TARA: Not here for a few more months. Let’s enjoy it. (Winks)

WILLOW: Oh…playful Tara. (Smiles)



Cut to Dawn’s door room. Tally s doing sit-ups. Dawn is working on her laptop at her desk.



DAWN: Lord, Tally. How many of them are you going to do?

TALLY: As many as it takes to get back in shape.

DAWN: You’re not out of shape now.

TALLY: Yeah, well…I want to be in greater shape when I go back out on patrols.

DAWN: (Stops working and turns to Tally) You so are not going back on patrols.

TALLY: (Stops and stands up) Yeah, I am.

DAWN: Tally, you know what the doctor said.

TALLY: The doctor said I’d never stand up again. What am I doing right now?

DAWN: Yeah, that’s different.

TALLY: How so? If I stop taking chances, I’m going to stop living, and I’d rather be dead.

DAWN: (Stands up and faces Tally) Don’t you ever say that again.

TALLY: Dawn chill out. It’s my job to help people.

DAWN: It’s not your damn job… (Cut off by Tally)

TALLY: Yeah it is. I have a responsibility to help people. I didn’t ask for it, but its here. (Holds up her right hand and flashes the ring)

DAWN: But if you get killed, what good is it to have the ring?

TALLY: Someone else gets it to start were I left off.

DAWN: That’s the dumbest thing I’ve ever heard.

TALLY: So both Buffy and I are dumb?

DAWN: She was born to be a slayer.

TALLY: Oh, I see…since I wasn’t born into this, mine doesn’t count.

DAWN: No… (Stops)

TALLY: Dawn, whether you ever trust in this or not, I have a purpose. I don’t know what it is yet for sure, but I know it’s not standing in the shadows letting others get hurt.

DAWN: Tally, I love you…(Cut off by Tally)

TALLY: Damn it, Dawn! I love you, too. That’s why I have to be at my best.

DAWN: (Doesn’t understand)

TALLY: If anything ever happened to you, I’d die.

DAWN: (In tears now) That’s how I feel about you. (Runs and hugs Tally)

TALLY: (Wraps arms around Dawn) Shhhh…baby, it’s ok.

DAWN: I can’t lose you…please... (Can’t talk cause she’s crying to hard)

TALLY: You won’t. I promise. (Kisses Dawn’s forehead) (takes Dawn’s face into her hands) See…I’m right here.

DAWN: You’ve got a little sister coming, too.

TALLY: I know, baby. I know I won’t patrol.

DAWN: Promise.

TALLY: (Pulls Dawn into a hug) It’ll be ok. (Looks away out the window)



Cut to the pizza parlor where Willow and Tara are eating pizza. Willow is making a funny face at Tara.



TARA: What?

WILLOW: Um…baby, how can you eat that?

TARA: Goddess only knows, but it tastes so good.

WILLOW: Peanut butter on pizza?!? Goddess, I can’t believe you ordered that. (Grins)

TARA: Hey! Eating for two here. And besides, I only eat what I’m being told to. (Smiles)

WILLOW: She must love peanut butter then. (Grins)

TARA: Maybe we should stock up on some baby peanut butter, huh? (Smiles)

WILLOW: (Pulls out a list) Do they make baby peanut butter?

TARA: Honey, I was kidding. (Smiles)

WILLOW: (Puts list away) I knew that. (Grins, as she blushes)

DAWN: (Walks up to the table) Hey, guys!

WILLOW: (Smiles) Hey, Dawnie! (Looks around) Where’s Tally? I thought she was coming with you.

DAWN: She was, but she has a big test tomorrow, so she wanted to get some more studying done.

TARA: (Smiles) Sounds like her… (Looks at Willow) and you.

WILLOW: (Grins) What can I say? It runs in the family.

DAWN: (Sits down on the other side of the booth)



Cut to the cemetery. Buffy is getting beaten up by a demon thing.



BUFFY: Ok, this is getting old. You’re supposed to go down… (About that time the demon falls over) Um…if I’d known that’s all it took…(Stands up to see Tally) Tally?

TALLY: Are you ok?

BUFFY: Yeah. What the hell are you doing here?

TALLY: Helping you.

BUFFY: Oh no you’re not! You’re marching right back to a safe place away from action.

TALLY: This is Sunnydale. Where do you recommend I go?

BUFFY: Don’t get smart with me.

V: (Comes up from behind Tally) Here you are.

BUFFY: (Looks at V) You knew she was coming out here?

V: Yes.

BUFFY: (Gets in V’s face) Look…she got hurt and she doesn’t need your wise ass self putting ideas in her head…that it’s ok for her to be out here.

V: Buffy back off.

BUFFY: Don’t tell me to back off…(Cut off by Tally)

TALLY: Buffy, V didn’t ‘put ideas’ in my head. I told her I was coming and wanted some backup. She tried to stop me. This was my choice and I stand by it. This is where I need to be…helping.

BUFFY: Tally, you know if you get hit on the head…

TALLY: Then I’ll just have to not get hit. (Taps Buffy’s back) Besides, we won.

BUFFY: Tonight anyway.

TALLY: Then cheer up. (Smiles)



Cut to Dawn’s doom room where she’s asleep. Tally walks in the door, and over to the bed.



TALLY: (Kisses Dawn)

DAWN: (Smiles, as she wakes up) Hey, you were at the library late.

TALLY: Yeah…lots of studying. (Puts pj’s on)

DAWN: I figured.

TALLY: (Gets into bed)

DAWN: (Curls up on Tally’s shoulder) Mmmm…I love this. (Grins)

TALLY: (Smiles) Me, too.



Cut to the Magic Box where Anya is helping Xander move a shelf full of items. Tally is looking out the window as a streak goes by.



TALLY: Did you guys see that?

XANDER: What’s up, Tally? (Walks by Tally)

TALLY: I could’ve sworn something went by the window.

ANYA: (Walks to Xander and Tally) Oh come on, I’m sure it was nothing.

TALLY: Yeah. (Shakes her head) Must be seeing things.



Cut to a dark area, a vamp has a girl trying to bite her.



TALLY: (Comes up and hits vamp) Trust me. That’s no way to treat a lady.

VAMP: What would you know about it?

TALLY: Quite a bit actually. (Smiles)

VAMP: (Gets a punch in and hits Tally into the wall)

TALLY: (Hits her head) Hey! (Jumps up and stakes him) (Looks at the girl) You’d better get out of here! (Girl runs off) (Nose starts to bleed)



Cut to Tara, Willow and Tally in the baby’s room putting stuff up.



WILLOW: No, it looks better here.

TALLY: (Puts photo of two dolphins swimming back a little bit)

WILLOW: Um…on second thought, try it back there. (Points to spot over a baby’s dresser) (Looks at Tara) What do you think?

TALLY: I think its staying right here. (Fixes it on the wall) Cause I’m not moving it again.

TARA: It looks good there.

TALLY: (Pulls out a bottle of aspirin and takes two)

TARA: Your head hurting again?

TALLY: It’s all the stress of Mom’s decorating. (Grins)

WILLOW: (Frowns) If it makes you’re head hurt…(Cut off by Tally)

TALLY: No Mom, it’s fine. It’s just with all the studying and stuff I’ve been doing for finals, it’s got me stressed out. Don’t worry so much.

TARA: Are you sure that it’s just stress?

TALLY: Positive. Now, shouldn’t you be worried about the little munchkin’s room? I mean, she’ll be here in like less than a month so… (Grins)

TARA: Trust me I know. I’m counting down the days. (Smiles)

WILLOW: I don’t know…I’d keep you pregnant… (Thinks a minute) only minus the peanut butter. (Grins)



All three break out into laughter. Cut to an auto repair shop, were Tally and Dawn are walking out of the office.



DAWN: I can’t believe they finally got it fixed.

TALLY: (Looks around and sees her jeep back to new condition) I know. (Smiles) I have wheels again. (Grins)

DAWN: Yes you do. So, how about we take a spin.

TALLY: After we drop Buffy’s car off, ok?

DAWN: Big plans for me, huh?

TALLY: (Hugs Dawn) Maybe. (Winks)

DAWN: (Looks confused) You’re vibrating.

TALLY: Anya, I swear…(Looks at pager…face changes) Oh, God!

DAWN: What?

TALLY: That’s the code for the baby…(Grins) The baby’s coming! (Smiles)

DAWN: We have to get to the hospital.

TALLY: Yeah, come on! I’ll drive.

DAWN: What about Buffy’s car?

TALLY: Right…you drive it. (Hugs Dawn) My little sister’s coming! (Smiles)



TBC… (Part 11)





a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

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Re: Part 10

Postby Thanatopsis » Wed May 29, 2002 1:27 am

Very cool. But I gotta wonder about Tally not telling everyone she's patroling. That can't end well.



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Re: Part 10

Postby Ange » Wed May 29, 2002 8:34 am

An other update!! OMG!! Lucky day. Heheheh.

I'm gonna read it now.



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Re: Part 10

Postby SquishyTrishy » Wed May 29, 2002 12:52 pm

Whats gonna happen next???? *jumps up and down excititedly* I know what is comming next is prolly bad, well good to cuz baby tara will is comming. YAY! *slips you a fice dollar bill* It better be a happy ending.



Trish

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Re: Part 10

Postby Ange » Wed May 29, 2002 1:25 pm

I loved it. Once again. Good job. OMG, so great!!!!

I bet that W/T's baby is gonna be so cute, but i'm worried about Tally's headaches.



I can't wait for next part. Two updates in a week. Too good. If i'm lucky, and i am at the moment, i'll have a third one.

Hehehehe.



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Re: Part 10

Postby Lonewolf22 » Wed May 29, 2002 2:14 pm

WillowTarafan98: Great update, I can't wait to see Willow and Tara's baby and find out her name, I really love the idea of Tara being pregnant, I hope nothing too bad happens to Tally she has a little sister on the way. I can't wait to read more.



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Re: Part 10

Postby sparrow » Wed May 29, 2002 2:36 pm

Nose bleeds, always signs of bad things.



Need more fic now, please!!!







For some reason I just can't seem to care

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Part 11

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Wed May 29, 2002 8:50 pm

Well guys what can I say my beta reader is on the ball!!! Um and I'm getting offered money for a happy ending...well all I can say is all things don't always go as planed... but I'll try now... that's not saying it's going to be an easy road to find happiness BUT keep the faith and keep posting u'r thoughts and I promise to read them and respond :) Ok I've rambeled enough I hope you enjoy part 11 :)



:bounce ~Stephie~ :bounce



Title: A New Beginning (Part 11)

NOTE: You should read Future Unclear or you may be a little lost with some of the characters, and stuff.

Author: Stephie

Beta Reader: Willowphile410

Email: TaraWillowfan21@aol.com

Feedback: Yes Please I’d Love To Have Feedback

Spoilers: Anything up to the end of season 5 or 6, also in this timeline Buffy doesn’t die she just defeated Glory, but Joyce is dead. You should probably read this from the first part or you may be a little lost.

Paring: W/T, and the rest of the gang are in here to.

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the “Buffy” characters, I did however create some new ones for this story, but it’s dealing with Buffy so that’s Joss’s territory not mine.

Rating: I’d guess PG-13 to be on the safe side





Cut to the hospital waiting room. Dawn and Tally are sitting together, V is pacing, Buffy is asleep, Xander is fighting with a coke machine, and Anya is reading a book.



WILLOW: (Walks out in scrubs) Hey guys!



The whole gang huddles around Willow.



TALLY: So?

WILLOW: (Grins) A girl.

BUFFY: We knew that! What’s the rest?

WILLOW: She’s perfect, Buffy…9lbs 8o z…she has my eyes… (Smiles) not sure about the hair yet…who knew she was going to be bald?

TALLY: How’s Mama?

WILLOW: Resting right now.

ANYA: I bet she’s tired. Man, that’s bigger than a football. (Looks at Xander) We’re never having kids.

WILLOW: (Looks at Tally) Ready to meet your little sister?

TALLY: (Grins)



Cut to Tara’s hospital room.



TARA: (Holding the baby)



Willow and Tally come into the room.



WILLOW: Look who I found!

TARA: Hey!

TALLY: (Smiles) That’s her.

TARA: Tally, meet Saffron Elizabeth Rosenberg-Maclay, and little one, this is your big sister Tally.

TALLY: She’s so small (Looks at Willow) and cute.

TARA: Want to hold her?

TALLY: No I’ll hurt her.

TARA: No you won’t…just support the head. (Hands the baby to Tally)

TALLY: (Smiles) (Looks at the baby) Hey! I’m your big sister. I’m going to always protect you, no matter what. (The baby kind of yawns) Umm…only a few hours old and I’m already boring her.



They laugh.



WILLOW: (Gets camera) I want a photo! (Takes one of Tally and the baby) Ok, Tally, get by Tara. (Takes photo of Tally and Tara)

BUFFY: (Comes in) Ok. I want to see my niece. (Smiles) Ohhh…photos. (Grins, takes the camera)



Cut to the nursery. The baby is asleep in the crib, where Tally is standing over it looking at her. Tara comes in with a bottle.



TARA: (Stands at the door and smiles)

TALLY: (Notices Tara) (Whispers) Hey. she’s still asleep.

TARA: Well, seeing as she was awake all last night, that doesn’t surprise me. (Grins)

TALLY: Already has Scooby hours down pat, huh? (Smiles)

TARA: (Laughs)

TALLY: Mom still at class?

TARA: Yeah. Can you go pick her up or do you have plans?

TALLY: No, I can go get her.

TARA: (Stands by Tally, and looks down at the baby) Sometimes I still can’t believe she’s really here.

TALLY: I know. It’s so cool that you guys have her. (Smiles)

TARA: Yeah. We’re very proud of ‘both’ our daughters.

TALLY: (Looks at Tara and smiles) Thanks.

TARA: (Hugs Tally) Now, you’d better go get Willow before she calls Buffy.

TALLY: Yeah. Then we’d never get Buffy out of here. (Grins)

TARA: Exactly. (Grins) (About that time the baby wakes up)

TALLY: You have good timing. (Grins)

TARA: (Picks the baby up, and sits in a rocking chair)

TALLY: You be ok here?

TARA: We’ll be fine. (Smiles, as she gives the baby the bottle)



Cut to V’s house were she and Tally are fighting.



V: Don’t drop your shoulder.

TALLY: (Knocks V down) Must be working. (Grins)

V: (Stands up) Very funny, hot shot.

TALLY: (Grins) Sorry.

V: It’s ok. Just don’t do it again. (Smiles) (Drinks some water) So, how’s college treating you?

TALLY: Pretty good. I just can’t believe it’s almost time for the first year to be over, but I don’t mind so much. I’ll have the summer to spend with my new sister. (Smiles)

V: How are Willow and Tara taking the late nights.

TALLY: Well, Mama takes it a little harder ‘cause she’s doing classes this term, but Mom doesn’t really mind ‘cause she can do her work whenever.

V: That’s cool…um…how’s your head been doing.

TALLY: Fine. (Defensive) Why?

V: I was just asking. You remember our deal?

TALLY: If I get the slightest ache, I’ll stop.

V: Good. Now stick with that. You have a job to do, yes, but it’s not worth your life.

TALLY: How can you say that? You wear the ring, same as I do, and you know the risks.

V: Yeah, but with you it’s different. I’ve lived a bit longer.

TALLY: Really? I think the doctor was just blowing smoke. I’m fine.

V: Ok, I have something to ask then.

TALLY: What?

V: Grandfather wants us to spend summer at base camp.

TALLY: But what about Liz? I’m supposed to help with her.

V: I know, and I told him about her, but he wants all four of us together this summer. something’s up he wont’ tell me about until I see him in person. Unless your not up to it physical wise.

TALLY: (Looks out the window) No, I’m good to go.

V: Ok. Well, we leave tomorrow.

TALLY: Fine. I’ll tell…(cut off by V)

V: You can’t tell them, Tally. I’m sorry

TALLY: What?

V: This is top secret. Which means it’s big.

TALLY: I can’t just leave.

V: You’re going to have to. I’m sorry.

TALLY: Fine.



Cut to Dawn’s dorm room where she’s looking through some pamphlets for summer vacation spots. Tally walks through the door.



DAWN: (Jumps up and hugs Tally) Hey!

TALLY: (Smiles) Hey! Glad to see me, huh?

DAWN: Of course. (Smiles) I’ve got an idea for you to think about.

TALLY: Ok, I’m listening.

DAWN: (Kisses Tally) Well, it starts like that… (Runs her hands up Tally’s back) and kind of goes like this…and ends up here. (Pulls at Tally’s pants)

TALLY: Sorry. I lost track at this part. (Kisses Dawn)

DAWN: So, what do you say (Turns away and gets the pamphlets) about a vacation? Me, you and one of these lovely spots? (Points to Florida) I’m looking at that one. (Smiles)

TALLY: Dawn, I…

DAWN: Well, if not Florida, how about…(Cut off by Tally kissing her)

TALLY: Can we just talk about this tomorrow?

DAWN: (Smiles) Sure. What did you have in mind for right now?

TALLY: (Kisses Dawn) Something like this… (Pushes Dawn on the bed, and lays beside her) that ends something like… (Cut off by Dawn kissing her)



Little while later, Dawn is asleep. Tally is in boxer shorts and a t-shirt typing something at the computer.



Dawn,



By the time you read this, I’m afraid I will be gone. I have to go with V for a mission this summer. I wanted so much to tell you, but I’m under orders not to. I don’t even know the full details, but I know it’s required I go. Don’t worry, I won’t take any risk I don’t have to. I want to come back to you and my family. I love you so much and I hope you’ll forgive me, but this is something I have to do. Please tell Willow and Tara what’s going on. Maybe you can stay with them to help with Liz. And take lots of photos so I can see when I get back. I love you always know that.



Tally



Cut to Dawn crying while reading the letter to Willow and Tara.



DAWN: How could she just leave?

TARA: (Hugs Dawn) We’ll find her, Dawnie.

DAWN: She’s going to get hurt. This is all V’s fault…and that damn ring.

WILLOW: We should call Buffy. Maybe she’s heard something.



Cut to a briefing room where an older man is standing and talking to a boy and girl Tally’s age. Tally and V come in.



JOHN: V! My goodness, you made it! (Hugs V)

V: Hello, Grandfather.

JOHN: Hello, Tally. How are you. (Shakes her hand)

TALLY: I’m good, sir.

JOHN: Good to see you up again. (Smiles) (Motions for the other two to come over) Tally, this is Chely and Mark.

TALLY: (Smiles) Nice to meet you.

CHELY: Nice to meet you, too.

MARK: So when do we kill things?

JOHN: Mark you need more patience. That will come in time. You now have to train as a group. Now, if you’ll all have a seat, I need to tell you why I’ve called you here.



They all take seats.



JOHN: (Pulls screen up) There’s a supernatural force forming at the Hellmouth. We’ve been tracking it for some time, but the energy is getting worse. We’re expecting an attack by the end of the summer. That’s why you’re here to train together ‘cause if our calculations are right, it’s going to take each of your own powers to defeat this thing.

TALLY: Shouldn’t Buffy be here with us, then?

MARK: The slayer? (Laughs) We’re so better than her.

TALLY: Hey, smart ass! She’s like a sister to me and we’re not better than her.

JOHN: Enough. Buffy isn’t part of the ring bearers so she can’t help with this. This thing must be defeated by magical forces.

CHELY: John’s right Tally. If you try to kill it with force, it makes it more powerful.

TALLY: Shouldn’t we tell them at least?

JOHN: Soon, my dear, soon.



Cut to Buffy coming through the door at Willow and Tara’s, Dawn is asleep on the couch.



WILLOW: (Comes up to Buffy) Anything?

BUFFY: No. It’s like they vanished. Xander and Anya can’t find anything either.

TARA: We have to find her, Buffy.

BUFFY: (Looks at Dawn) How’s she doing?

WILLOW: Not good, Buffy. She’s worried.



Cut to a room similar to a dorm room. Tally is putting up a few photos. One of her, Liz, Willow, and Tara. (The one taken the day she was born) The other is of her and Dawn. Chely comes in the door.



CHELY: (Knocks a little) Hey.

TALLY: (Turns around) Hey.

CHELY: Can I come in?

TALLY: The door’s open. (Smiles)

CHELY: (Looks at the photos) That your family?

TALLY: (Grins) Yeah. (Points to the group photo) That’s of my moms and my baby sister, and (Points to photo of her and Dawn) that’s my girlfriend.

CHELY: Your little sister is so cute. (Smiles)

TALLY: Yeah she is. (Looks a little sad)

CHELY: (Pats her on the back) It’ll be ok. This will be over soon.

TALLY: I hope so.



Cut to a room where Mark, Chely, Tally, and V are concentrating their magic on one piece of block, and are trying to lift it up.



JOHN: That’s it.



All of the sudden the block breaks into pieces.



JOHN: (Smiles) I think we’re ready.



Cut to the Magic Box. Dawn is playing with the baby. Tara and Willow are reading over some spell books. Anya is helping a customer. Xander and Buffy are playing a board game. Something big crashes through the front door.



BUFFY: (Gets everyone behind her) Guys, go into the training room!

XANDER: No way, Buffy! (Comes up with and axe and swings at the demon thing)

ZAR: (Laughs) Haha…you fools can’t defeat me.

XANDER: (Looks at Buffy) Yeah…never heard that one before. (Swings axe again)

TALLY: (Runs through the door) Xander, don’t hit him again.

DAWN: Tally!



Mark, Chely and V come into the shop, and together they put Zar out.



ZAR: This isn’t over. (Goes out of sight)

DAWN: (Gives the baby to Tara and runs into Tally’s arms)

TALLY: Baby. (Hugs Dawn)

BUFFY: Ok. What the hell was that?



Cut to research table, everyone is sitting around as V fills them in.



V: His name is Zar. From what we’ve been able to gather, he’s waiting on a mystical force to open up in two days. He’s trying to claim power to take over the world.

XANDER: What else is new? How do we kill it?

MARK: You don’t. We do.

V: Mark’s right. We’ve been training the whole summer for this day. The time has to be just right and then all four of us must focus our energy to stop him.

BUFFY: What about by force?

TALLY: That only makes him stronger, Buffy.

XANDER: That’d explain why he started hitting harder.

ANYA: Why did he come here?

V: The portal is under the shop.

ANYA: Oh no! He can’t come here! He’ll hurt the money and goods! You have to stop him!

TALLY: Anya don’t worry. We’re working on it.



Cut to Tara, Willow, and Tally sitting around their table.



TARA: You should have told us.

TALLY: I couldn’t. V said it was top secret.

WILLOW: Dawn has been worried sick all summer.

TALLY: I know and I’m sorry. I wanted to tell you. V didn’t even know I left a note.

TARA: Remind me to have a talk with her. (Baby cries) (Starts to get up)

TALLY: Let me…(Smiles) if it’s ok.

WILLOW: (Smiles) Of course it’s ok.

TARA: There’s a new bottle in the fridge.

TALLY: Thanks.



Cut to Dawn’s doom room where Tally knocks on the door.



DAWN: (Answers the door) Hey.

TALLY: Hey, can I come in?

DAWN: You have a key, don’t you?

TALLY: Yeah, but I didn’t want to just barge in. (Comes in and closes door)

DAWN: How could you just leave?

TALLY: I was under orders.

DAWN: Oh yeah…orders some big government thing now I guess?

TALLY: Dawn…(cut off by Dawn)

DAWN: And after what the doctor has told you, you still want to go out and get yourself hurt.

TALLY: It isn’t like that.

DAWN: Sure it is. (Holding back tears) I don’t want to see you hurt.

TALLY: Baby I’m right here. (Pulls Dawn into a hug)

DAWN: (Holds on to Tally) Don’t ever do that again. (Crying) I need you too much.

TALLY: (Kisses Dawn)



Cut to a dark room where you can see 3 shadowy figures.



PERSON 1: So, everything’s going according to plan?

PERSON 2: Yes sir. She’s right where we want her.

PERSON 1: Good. Without her, this whole thing blows up in our faces.

PERSON 3: Don’t worry, sir. We’ve been very discreet she doesn’t even know.

PERSON 1: Keep it that way.



Fade to black.



TBC… (Part 12)







a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

WillowTarafan98
 


Re: Part 11

Postby breaking » Thu May 30, 2002 8:22 am

This is so cool i love this fanfiction. And little baby aawwwww. i remember them when they're cute but then they grow up and where did the cutness go, but if it takes after willow and Tara this baby will be lovely forever!

love jade x x

Edited by: breaking at: 5/30/02 7:24:31 am
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Re: Part 11

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Thu May 30, 2002 11:51 am

Hey I'm glad you like the story :) Makes me feel so good to read your guys post. Gives me happy feelings :) :) :) More will be up as soon as I get them back from my beta reader :)



Love all you guys,

~Stephie~







a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

WillowTarafan98
 


Re: Part 11

Postby fidds » Thu May 30, 2002 11:59 am

i can't believe i missed this update !

brilliant ! :)

love this fic

can't wait for the next update!



*Hannah*

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I'm on the outside , i'm looking in , i can see through you , see your true colours , cause inside you're ugly , you're ugly like me - STAIND-Outside

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Re: Part 11

Postby Karzia » Thu May 30, 2002 1:47 pm

Ok now, this is gonna be a bumpy ride:) Gosh what how is this gonna end up, oh and i see a big fight coming between Dawn and tally:mad gee hope I am wrong:love



Update soon and otfen:D

"This may be the Hellmouth, but it's our Hellmouth"

--------Tara in "Left of Center"
-------- by: Jomarch



Taste the rainbow

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Re: Part 11

Postby Ange » Thu May 30, 2002 3:58 pm

Oh, i love it. I knew i was lucky. Three updates in a week. I told you.



I really loved it and i love the beta reader and you for writting and getting it done so fast.



Thanks.



Ange.

Edited by: Ange  at: 5/30/02 2:59:52 pm
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Re: Part 11

Postby tarafan76 » Thu May 30, 2002 4:14 pm

I really love this story!!! Can't wait for more!!

tarafan76
 


Re: Fic: A New Beginning

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Thu May 30, 2002 8:11 pm

I'm so glad you like it!!! It soon will be coming to an end though. I'm trying to make it 20 parts. But I'm not 100% sure yet. so far 17 parts are done. So we'll see :) Then again I may just stop for a while after 20 and pick back up. Kinda depends on you guys. ;) Well I just wanted to drop in and say hello :) I wanted to do something a tad bit different this post and do some individual comments, if I missed someone I"m VERY sorry, I went through and tried to get the names of all you guys thats posted on the last two pages. THANKS TO EVERYONE WHO POST!!! AND WHO SENDS ME EMAIL!!!! Love you all!!!



:bounce ~Stephie~ :bounce







SquishTrishy: I'm all about the money here's my banking # ;)



AmberBensonRockzMyWorld: I consider myself lucky you love this fic :) Actually to be 100% honest I'm suprised anyone liked it to start with I had my doubts!! Thanks a bunch!!!



Lonewolf22: I can't promise nothing bad will happen, I mean this is Sunnydale but I can promise I will always do my best to make things better ;)



Fairydust: Thank you so much for the complement!! I loved the idea of thier being a baby Willow/Tara around to ;)



Sparrow: Nose bleeds are bad sometimes I agree. I'll do my best to get more fic to you :)



Breaking: Thanks :) Baby's are cute when their little but I also agree anything Willow and Tara makes will ALWAYS be cute ;)



Fidds: Have to keep checking for the updates I'm sneeky that way ;) I'll get more to you soon :)



Karzia: Yeah it will be a bumpy ride I'll give you that... BUT thier is a CH coming up you guys will LOVEEEEE **Or I hope anyway**



TaraFan76: Glad you love it!! Keep checking for more :)



Ange: What can I say you've been here pretty much from the beginning!! Thanks so much!!!!! You rock! And yeah you were right you were lucky this week 3 updates ;) I figured it was the least I could do for making you wait so long for prom ;)







:rollin :rollin :rollin :rollin :rollin :rollin :rollin :rollin

:rollin :rollin





a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

WillowTarafan98
 


money makes the world go around .....NOT

Postby SquishyTrishy » Fri May 31, 2002 5:55 pm

I sent 3 thousand and 43 dollars to ur account. Along with some fly by hugs. I had to collect some many frekaen pop cans to get that much money. *i need a job* So you better have a good happy ending up date...deal?



~Trish~

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Re: money makes the world go around .....NOT

Postby Ange » Sat Jun 01, 2002 1:15 pm

thanks a lot. what can i say? I just love your fic.

Me = big fan.



Ange.

-----------------------------------

"Things are not always what they seem to be...." Shakespeare

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Part 12

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Sun Jun 02, 2002 1:42 am

What can I say my beta reader ROCKS!!! Here's another Ch :) Thanks for the feedback!!!!! Although I can't promise happy endings :confused



~Stephie~



Title: A New Beginning (Part 12)

NOTE: You should read Future Unclear or you may be a little lost with some of the characters, and stuff.

Author: Stephie

Beta Reader: Willowphile410

Email: TaraWillowfan21@aol.com

Feedback: Yes Please I’d Love To Have Feedback

Spoilers: Anything up to the end of season 5 or 6, also in this timeline Buffy doesn’t die she just defeated Glory, but Joyce is dead. You should probably read this from the first part or you may be a little lost.

Paring: W/T, and the rest of the gang are in here to.

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the “Buffy” characters, I did however create some new ones for this story, but it’s dealing with Buffy so that’s Joss’s territory not mine.

Rating: I’d guess PG-13 to be on the safe side



Cut to the nursery. Tally is playing with Liz on the floor. Tara is sitting in the rocking chair watching.



TALLY: I can’t believe how big she’s gotten.

TARA: I know. It’s like overnight…boom!

TALLY: Only not so much the overnight thing. (Smiles)

TARA: How are you doing, really?

TALLY: I’m good. There’s been a few times during training I felt a little weak, but for the most part good.

TARA: So you really all have to combine together to defeat him?

TALLY: Yeah. That’s why I had to go this summer.

TARA: I wish you’d told us.

TALLY: I know. I regretted it the whole time, but V was all big with the keeping it secret.

TARA: Well, just don’t do it again.

TALLY: I promise. (Smiles)



Cut to the Magic Box were Mark and Chely are reading over some books with V. Tally comes in with Dawn.



MARK: About time you showed up. (Looks at Dawn) Had to drag your little girlfriend along too, huh?

TALLY: Look you twerp, her family owns this shop, so she has a right to go damn well anywhere she pleases in it. Got it?

MARK: Whatever.

V: That’s enough. We need to be working together not fighting.

TALLY: Tell this jerk that. He’s had a smart-ass mouth ever since we showed up.

MARK: (Stands up and gets in Tally’s face) I guess it takes one to know one.

TALLY: (Gets right back in his face)

ANYA: (Runs over) HEY!! Stop it! (Pulls them apart) If you want to horseplay, go outside. I swear, two ring bearers in the same room could ruin business.

TALLY: (Looks at Anya) Sorry.

ANYA: (Looks at Mark) You need to chill out. You’re all on the same team. (Hears a customer) If you mess up this sale, you’re paying for it.

MARK: Right, bitch, whatever you say.

TALLY: HEY! You don’t talk to Anya like that.

MARK: (Walks out the door, and hits Tally’s shoulder on his way out)

TALLY: (Follows him out the door)

DAWN: Tally, wait! (Follows Tally)



Cut to the alley beside the Magic Box were Mark and Tally are arguing.



MARK: Well, maybe if you’d joined the group last year, we’d be better prepared for this day. But no…you got what you wanted…a tutor in Sunnydale.

TALLY: You’re jealous of me.

MARK: No, but I think it’s unfair that you get whatever you want and the rest of us are stuck at base camp. And to make it worse, you had the ring given to you. You didn’t train for it. I busted my ass for years to get where I am now, and you just had it given to you. (Holds out his hand and shoots a bolt)

TALLY: (Tally holds out her hand and stops the bolt) Listen, you idiot, stop this!

DAWN: (Comes around the corner)

TALLY: Dawn, go back inside.

DAWN: But…

TALLY: Dawn, just go!

DAWN: (Runs back inside)

MARK: (Runs up and punches Tally)

TALLY: (Gets knocked to the ground, her nose is bleeding bad) What the hell are you doing?

MARK: Putting you in your place. (His eyes glow green)

TALLY: (Stands up and hits Mark back)



V and Chely come around the corner.



V: Stop this both of you!



About that time Zar comes up



ZAR: (Laughing) Tension in the ranks, I see.

V: No only practice time.

ZAR: Funny, Mark you haven’t finished her off yet.

MARK: No, master, I’m working on it.

ZAR: (Looks at Tally) You’re the strong one. Join me.

TALLY: I’d never join you.

ZAR: Then all you hold dear shall die. (Waves hand and a photo of Willow/Tara/and Liz shows up in the air) This seems like a good place to start. (Waves hand and he and Mark disappear)

TALLY: Oh, God!

Cut to Buffy’s house where everyone is gathered in the living room. Tally is pacing around.



TARA: Honey, you need to calm down.

TALLY: How can you say that? He’s coming after you guys.

XANDER: Yes and we’ve never been through that before.

ANYA: Well, (Smiles) at least we’re here and not at the Magic Box.

WILLOW: (Holding Liz) And we’re all together, so don’t worry so much. (Pats Tally on the back)

CHELY: I can’t believe he betrayed us.

V: Neither can I.

TALLY: I told you he was a creep.

DAWN: (comes out of the kitchen) Ok guys, sandwiches are done.

BUFFY: (Follows Dawn out) And look…no smoke. Go us! (Smiles)

WILLOW: Um…Buffy, you didn’t have to use the oven.

BUFFY: Hey! This is my happy time. Don’t mess with it. (Laughs)



About that time the front door caves in, and Zar stands at the entrance with Mark.



ZAR: Well, look who’s all in one big wad!

TALLY: (Stands in front of him) You’re not coming near them.

ZAR: (Laughs) You’re funny. You know that?

CHELY: Let’s blast him, guys.

V: Sounds like a good idea to me.

TALLY: I thought we had to wait. (Cut off by V blasting him)

CHELY: (Does the same) Come on Tally.

TALLY: (Starts to blast him, then looks around the room. Everyone is kind of frozen)

MARK: (Blast Zar)

ZAR: That’s it. I can feel the power. (Waves hand at Tally)

TALLY: (Looks at the group) V, what are you doing? Stop!

ZAR: (Laughing)

V: Tally, you’re an idiot! Our group created Zar.

TALLY: What?!?

V: We’re supposed to power him up so he can take over tomorrow.

TALLY: V, that’s crazy!

CHELY: No. It’ll be a new day, Tally…a new beginning for everyone.

TALLY: No one wants to be ruled by some freak!

MARK: Join us. We need you to finish the power force.

TALLY: No way!

V: Fine. Then we’ll just have to force you.

TALLY: (Waves hand and V, Mark, and Chely as they approach her, they all get throw backwards)



They all fight a bit. Finally Tally gets them out of the house.



V: This isn’t over. (Sends a bolt towards Tally that’s too fast for her to deflect, and she falls towards the house) (Smoke puffs around them, and the 4 are gone)



Cut to inside the house where the group finally gets free.



DAWN: Tally! (Runs outside)

TALLY: (Laying near the front steps. Her nose is bleeding badly)

DAWN: Baby, wake up!

TALLY: (Looks at Dawn) Dawn. (Stands up with help from Dawn)



Cut to the living room where everyone is around.



BUFFY: I can’t believe this. She was one of us.

TALLY: Apparently the whole ring bearers thing is just a cover for another group trying to take over the world, (Stops) and I’m a part of them.

TARA: No, sweetie, you’re not a part of them.

TALLY: Anya, we need books on how to kill this thing. Then Buffy and I have to take him out tomorrow. I’m guessing the Magic Box is still the spot.

DAWN: Tally, you can’t. Your head…(cut off by Tally)

TALLY: Baby, I may be the only one who can stop it. And if it means saving all of you, then that’s what I have to do.

WILLOW: Tara and I can help with spells. Dawn can take care of Liz.

DAWN: I want to help with this Zar creep.

TARA: Sweetie, you’ll be helping if you protect Liz.

ANYA: So, let’s go to the Magic Box and prepare. And hey, you know, if we protect it along they way, ‘go us’! (Smiles)



Cut to the Magic Box, next day. The group is around the research table minus Tally. Zar burst through the doors with Chely and V.



BUFFY: We were wondering when you were going to show up.

ZAR: Well you know no time like the present.

V: (Looks around) Missing some major players, Buffy.

BUFFY: (Notices Marks not with them) You, too.

MARK: (Comes in holding a knife at Dawn who has Liz) Oh no, I’m here.

BUFFY: (Look of horror on her face)

TARA: Liz!

WILLOW: Oh, Goddess!

TALLY: (Comes up behind Mark and knocks the knife out of his hand) Dawn, run!

DAWN: (Runs behind Willow and Tara)

V: About time you showed up. Now the party can start.

TALLY: Yup, sure can. (Shoots a ray towards V that knocks her out)

XANDER: (Gets the axe out and starts fighting with Zar)

ZAR: Little man, we’ve covered this. That tool doesn’t work on me.

XANDER: Oh, this one might. (Hits Zar and his arm starts to bleed)

ZAR: (Confused)

XANDER: Tally made our weapons out of magic. Surprise! (Grins)



Tally fights with Mark and Chely while Xander and Buffy fight with Zar. Willow and Tara have started chanting a spell, while Dawn is holding Liz. Anya is trying to help Dawn.



CHELY: (Holds Tally’s arms)

MARK: (Hits Tally in the face) I hear you have a head problem. Let’s see if we can make it worse. (Hits Tally again)

DAWN: (Notices this) Buffy! (Points toward Tally)

BUFFY: (Tells Zar) I love fighting with you, but she needs help. (Goes to Tally)

XANDER: (Yells) Hey, Buffy! (Does his best to fight Zar alone)

BUFFY: You know, it’s not fair to gang up on people. (Punches Mark)

MARK: (Goes flying backwards)

TALLY: (Knocks Chely out)

ZAR: (Breaks free of Xander and grabs Dawn and Liz) Listen up! If anyone comes near me, these two die. (Starts to strangle Dawn)

TALLY: (Looks on in horror)



Willow and Tara keep chanting.



TALLY: (Runs towards Zar and pushes Dawn and Liz out of the way)

ZAR: You’ll pay for that! (Picks Tally up by her neck)

WILLOW: BEGONE! (Throws powder)

ZAR: (Before the powder hits him, he throws Tally against a book shelf) What the…(Vanishes) (As do V, Chely, and Mark)

TARA: (Runs to Dawn and Liz, she takes the baby in her arms that is now crying)

DAWN: (Stands up)

BUFFY: (Looks around, the almost demolished Magic Box) Well…at least it’s still standing.

WILLOW: And we’re still standing.

ANYA: Where did you send them, Willow?

WILLOW: Some dimension…not sure which…kind of like with the troll.

XANDER: I say I don’t care, just as long as they’re gone and no evil has taken over.

DAWN: Tally, come on, rest time’s over. Get up. (Looks at Tally laying in the rubble of what was a bookshelf)

TALLY: (No response)

DAWN: Baby…(Kneels down beside Tally)

TARA: (Walks over) (Looks down in shock) Willow…

WILLOW: (Walks to Tara) (Shocked) (Holds onto Tara)

DAWN: (Cradling Tally’s body in her arms)

TALLY: (Has blood all over her face, and through her chest is a dagger)

DAWN: Buffy, do something!

BUFFY: (Looking at the group who is all in tears now) Dawn…I can’t.



TBC…(Part 13)





a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

WillowTarafan98
 


Re: Part 12

Postby fidds » Sun Jun 02, 2002 3:31 am

omg - very angsty but brilliant none the less:grin

eeep cliffhanger!!!!!

can't wait till the next update !



*Hannah*

**********************
I'm on the outside , i'm looking in , i can see through you , see your true colours , cause inside you're ugly , you're ugly like me - STAIND-Outside

fidds
 


Re: Part 12

Postby Ange » Sun Jun 02, 2002 8:44 am

OMG Tally, no!!!! Ok, i hope that everything will be alright.

You can't leave us like that. Angst is gonna kill me. Please, tomorrow is my birthday, make everything be good.

Hehehe.

But i loved it again. I'm crazy about this story.



Ange.

-----------------------------------

"Things are not always what they seem to be...." Shakespeare

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Edited by: Ange  at: 6/2/02 8:06:45 am
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Re: Part 12

Postby breaking » Sun Jun 02, 2002 10:00 am

You can't leave it like that!! i need to know wot happens! this is great as soon as i come on here i always look to this fanfiction first for an update!!

"LIFE WITHOUT LOVE IS LIKE A BUTTERFLY WITHOUT FLOWERS"

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Re: Part 12

Postby fairydust » Sun Jun 02, 2002 10:19 am

:jaw OMG:cry Tally!!!!:cry and...and....Poor Dawn.....and Poor Willow and Tara:(

That part was wonderful, even with the amount of angst and the major cliffhanger:miff j/k

Very good update

*****Faye*****Jenna....You're my Angel,sweetheart and dream girl,all rolled up into one happy little ball of goodness because I love you and you love me

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Re: Part 12

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Sun Jun 02, 2002 4:01 pm

I know it's a major cliffhanger but that's what keeps you guys coming back right ;) I'm like joss... only well shorter... not rich... and I think Tara needs to stay on the show.... um yeah ranting now ;)



Ange **ok clearing throat**



HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY DEAR ANGE....HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY TO YOU Have a great Birthday!!!! :D :D :D



Thanks for the feedback everyone! Next post will be up as soon as I get it back, although I can't promise happiness :confused BUT the story MUST go on no matter what!!! (Yeah I've been in acting classes I'll admit it) :lol



:bounce ~Stephie~ :bounce



a picture is worth a thousand words so can I take your's cause your beauty has totally erased my dictionary ~My line, after taking way to many cute girls photos for my college's newspaper~ ;)


Love didn’t listen
It only hears what it wants to hear
Two hearts beating as one
The odds were against ‘em
Oh but they had something on their side
When doubt said it can’t be done
Love didn’t listen
~Chely Wright "Love Didn't Listen" *off the 'never love you enough' cd*

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Re: Part 12

Postby Ange » Sun Jun 02, 2002 4:08 pm

Thanks a lot. Hehehe. Now it is my birthday.



So, no happiness??? OMG, are you Joss's daughter or a family member or something.

Tally is so great, she needs to be there. Her and Dawn became my favourites characters. I'm maybe gonna cry on my birthday. Ahh. We'll see tomorrow. Heheheh.



Ange.

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"Things are not always what they seem to be...." Shakespeare

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Edited by: Ange  at: 6/3/02 2:48:00 am
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