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Re: Chapter Nine - Please note rating change!

Postby Velaingie » Sat Jan 11, 2003 1:51 pm

Last night I read all the story. And I think it's just an great story. :clap . I can't believe I waited so long for reading your story. I just loved it,:heart :love :heart . Willow and Tara's date was just so beautiful:heart . And especially the last part was just :drool ,:thud and whaaaw. Again great story. Can't wait for the next awesome update.:bounce :bounce

Bye:wave

Velaingie

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Now available for private training sessions!!

Postby sunspud » Sat Jan 11, 2003 4:28 pm

Antigone: Thank you kindly. Glad you liked! And Tara's fine form... :drool



deixs: Hehe.. Thank you!



Stroke of Luck: Hi! So, you want a lesson too, huh? Hmm.. I'm sure it could be arranged.. :grin



lil' c: Next lesson? Humm.. I'm workin on it.. lol



Nick: Free lessons? Always for you! :devil



snuggle79: I tell ya.. I never had a lesson like that. It's just not fair!!



Velaingie: Hey! Thanks for takin the time to read the story! Glad you stopped by! :)



Thanks again for the feedback, guys! Not sure when the next update will be. I've been at work all day, have a b-day party tonight, and I'll be back at work tomorrow soo.. we'll see! I hope to get one up really soon. Have a great weekend, everyone. Later!



Brandi :cool





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"Every glamorous sunrise throws the planets out of line.

A star sign out of whack, a fraudulent zodiac

And the God of Wine is crouched down in my room

You let me down, I said it, now I'm going down,

And you're not even around." Third Eye Blind - God of Wine

sunspud
 


Re: Now available for private training sessions!!

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Jan 12, 2003 2:56 pm

Gosh, two updates already...(Grimmy runs to catch up a bit)...



I sooooo adore protective Willow. That vamp was pretty much doomed the second he touched Tara, heh... Willow being all concerned and such. Makes for a good excuse to spend the night together as well :) Got to wonder if it's wise for two non-slayers to go vamp hunting, even with two slayers around.



Ok, how to wipe this grin of my face... probably will take some time :) Neat update, I doubt Tara will remember much prior to the fall though :D . It sure did distract Tara, heh. As for the skipping of three weeks, nobody said there wont be flashbacks to particulairy embarrassing moments :)



Poor Giles, his glasses just wont get clean it seems...hehe...



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: Chapter Eight

Postby jixer » Sun Jan 12, 2003 8:57 pm

Hello Kittens-



One of the things I really like here at the Pens board is that erotic means erotic in the sense of making love. Sunspud makes the, umm, training session very erotic and yet eases words and images in that show each lover is concerned for the other's pleasure and for more beyond that. The care they have for each other shimmers.



Beyond that a more confident Tara and Willow both is very nice to see. Looking forward to more of your differences in the future. The NEAR future I hope! :)





Thank you for your time,



Jixer

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Re: Chapter Eight

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Sun Jan 12, 2003 9:26 pm

Sunspud:



Jixer summed up the concept of "erotic" - and your gift in expressing it - very well I think. And that was one of the nicest "First Time Together" love scenes ever.:love :love :love This fic sooo rocks!



I was a little surprised that while Tara has more experience livin' on the Hellmouth Willow saved the day. I rather expected Tara to be a sorta "big knowledge woman" re: things vampy that are/go bumpy in night.:grin But I've always liked the tigress in Willow where Tara is concerned.



I may have read into the scene :stop but Tara seemed a bit...well...turned-on by Willow's fieriness.:hmm I kinda hope that this more assertive Tara gets the opportunity to erm...return the favor.;)



Oh and I really liked the switch on "Nobody messes with my girl!".:clap



Don't work too hard. Hope you had fun at the b-day bash...and fun in general.



TY^^^Suse (CLW)

Cindy Lou Who
 


Re: Chapter Eight

Postby sunspud » Mon Jan 13, 2003 3:51 pm

Just droppin by to say that I am going to start on the update tonight so hopefully it will be posted this evening, or sometime tomorrow.



Grimmy: Heh.. nobody messes with Tara when Willow's around, vamp or not! As for them going on patrol.. it probably wasn't wise, but I had to use it for the story.. soo.. *shrugs* But hey, you have a grin on your face so it's all good! Ah, Giles and his ever dusty glasses.. poor guy. :)



Jixer: Your comments leave me speechless. Just.. wow.. thank you. :blush And you are so right.. even in the smuttiest smutfic, their love for each other shines through. That's one of the reasons why I love this place so much. Again, thanks so much.



C.L.W.: Aww.. thank you! Don't worry, Tara will have her turn to shine.. most definitely. You interrpreted Tara's.. reaction.. to Willow quite accurately I think. As for returning the favor? Hmm.. quite possibly! ;) Oh, and the b-day party was loads of fun! Had a wonderful time.. :grin



I am now off to.. trying not to work.. lol. Thanks guys! Laters!



Brandi :cool

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"Every glamorous sunrise throws the planets out of line.

A star sign out of whack, a fraudulent zodiac

And the God of Wine is crouched down in my room

You let me down, I said it, now I'm going down,

And you're not even around." Third Eye Blind - God of Wine

sunspud
 


Ok...WOW

Postby Taras Shadow » Mon Jan 13, 2003 4:04 pm

Sunspud



I actually read this last night and I fell in love with this story instantly. You have such a beautiful way of writing the characters and just...wow.



Each part wow'ed me, and I sat there going 'ohh' and 'aww' and then... :thud



Beautiful job, I love! Can't wait until the next update.



~Holly~ :heart



"I will make me a willow cabin at your gate and call upon my soul within the house.” *whispers* “I rush into the secret house." - Pauline - Lost and Delirious

Taras Shadow
 


Re: Ok...WOW

Postby sunspud » Tue Jan 14, 2003 9:42 pm

Hey Holly. :) Thank you for your comments! I am a HUGE fan of your story as well!! Hadley is so cute! Hehe.. I'm.. tryin.. to get an update written.. lol. It's just not happen. Got the idea in my head, but can't seem to get it to come out the way I want. Ya know? I did, however, tell someone that I was going to write.. so that's what I'm off to do! Thanks for reading! Look forward to your next update as well!



Laters!

Brandi :cool

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"Summer dies and swells rise. The sun goes down in my eyes. See this rolling wave, darkly coming to take me... home. And I never been so alone, And I've never been so alive." Third Eye Blind - Motorcycle Drive By

sunspud
 


*Sigh*

Postby sunspud » Mon Jan 20, 2003 10:26 am

Hello everyone. Just wanted to let you guys know I will be updating in the next few days. Haven't felt much like writing lately. Anyway.. hope everyone is well. Catch you all later. :)



Brandi :cool

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"I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul." Invictus - William Ernest Henley

sunspud
 


HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Mon Jan 20, 2003 6:04 pm

HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRANDI!



Hope you have a great birthday!!!





:bounce :party :p



NOW, how many of :jho <-----these... should you get??? HEHE... what is it? Um..... 21? HEHE..YAY!!!!!



BEHAVE YOURSELF!! Don't do anything I wouldn't do... *looks sheepish* um...LOL nevermind!!!







~NICK~

Edited by: SilverWingedNemesis at: 1/20/03 4:07:46 pm
SilverWingedNemesis
 


THANK YOU, NICK!

Postby sunspud » Mon Jan 20, 2003 11:21 pm

Thank you sooo much!! I had a great birthday! Celebration starts Friday.. cuz.. you know.. birthday's on a Monday just.. SUCK!! LOL.. :)



Now.. about those spankings.. :hmm :devil



LOL!!



Bye, sweetie!



Love,

Brandi :cool



p.s. You better not forget that favor I asked of you!!! :D



one more thing.. i promise i'll update soon!!! :)

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"In your eyes I see a darkness that torments you and in your head where it dwells. I'd give you my hand if you'd reach out and grab it. Let's walk away from this hell." Into the Dark - The Juliana Theory

sunspud
 


Re: THANK YOU, NICK!

Postby deixs » Tue Jan 21, 2003 1:43 am

Happy Birthday Brandi!!!!!



Stef :p

deixs
 


Re: THANK YOU, NICK!

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Tue Jan 21, 2003 3:51 pm

GRRRRR





As much as it PAINED me...to do it...LOL, I DID succeed in your 'favor'... *looks totally pissed* nah, just kidding... *giggles*



ahh well...nothing broke..windows or anything..LOL





spankings huh? thought someone gave you those?? *raises an eyebrow* guess she didn't??...



update? soon? YAY~!





Later-



~NICK~

SilverWingedNemesis
 


Update tonight...

Postby sunspud » Thu Jan 23, 2003 9:48 am

deixs: Thank you, Stef!!! :)



Nick: Oh, come on.. it couldn't have been THAT bad.. could it? Hehe.. thanks for doing it! :D



:sigh nope.. no spankings for me.. :( LOL



Ok, guys.. update late tonight.. I promise.. but.. when I say late.. I mean really late.. like in the wee hours of tomorrow morning late. :grin



Laters!

Brandi :cool



*strolls off humming to herself* "Good morning, beautiful..." :)

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"In your eyes I see a darkness that torments you and in your head where it dwells. I'd give you my hand if you'd reach out and grab it. Let's walk away from this hell." Into the Dark - The Juliana Theory

sunspud
 


Re: Update tonight...

Postby fairydust » Sat Jan 25, 2003 3:28 am

*sneaks up behind brandi and pounces her* HEY!!!:kiss Update soon missy *tries to give a convincing resolve face* Okay, well, I shall talk to you later sweetie! *hugs*

I LOVE MY KARE-BEAR

fairydust
 


Re: Update tonight...

Postby sunspud » Mon Jan 27, 2003 10:40 am

Hey, Jayma! *grrr* I'm workin on an update.. just.. havin a little trouble concentrating. I'm sure you know how that goes.. :) Anyway, I'll try to get one up soon.. really..



Laters!

Brandi :cool

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"I do not choose to be a common man. It is my right to be uncommon. I seek opportunity, not security. I do not wish to be a kept citizen, humbled and dulled by having the state look after me. I want to take the calculated risk; to dream and to build, to fail and to succeed. I refuse to barter incentive for a dole. I prefer the challenges of life to the guaranteed existence; the thrill of fulfillment to the stale calm of utopia. I will not trade freedom for beneficence nor my dignity for a handout. I will not cower before any master nor bend to any threat. It is my heritage to stand erect, proud and unafraid; to think and act for myself; enjoy the benefits of my creations and to face the world boldly and say, this, with God's help, I have done." My Creed - Dean Alfonge

sunspud
 


Good grief baby...

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Mon Mar 03, 2003 5:36 pm



*walks around through cobwebs and dust* *mumbles* man i thought I WAS BAD! *giggles* oh uh.. nevermind..



Baby, I think we need to get our butts in gear and get some updates done.. what you think?? can we pull it off?



I SO would have an update done.. if you'd STOP distracting me.. *grins*





Love you baby,



~NICKOLE~

SilverWingedNemesis
 


Re: Good grief baby...

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Mon Mar 03, 2003 10:40 pm

hehe





yes, i'm back, but look!!



<------------





*grins*





love you,



~NICKOLE~

"All fear is the fear of loss. And only through that fear, can we truly love."

SilverWingedNemesis
 


Re: Good grief baby...

Postby sunspud » Mon Mar 03, 2003 11:38 pm

*SEG* That is like.. the coolest thing ever!!! I love it, baby. Tell "you know who" I think they did an awesome job. :grin



Now.. about these updates.. hummm.. you know.. I THINK it's around here somewhere.. I'm sure it is. *sighs* Me? Distracting? I'm sure I have no idea what you are talking about.. :whistle I suppose we could come up with an update.. it would take lots of concentration tho.. *puts away evil horns; takes out halo and brushes the dust off; places over head* ok.. i'm ready!



I love you baby,

Brandi

sunspud
 


Re: Good grief baby...

Postby blue eyes » Sat Dec 13, 2003 5:46 pm

:thud :thud :thud :thud

that was..... well I can't really think of a word to use right now, but well it was really good, hope theres more.

:wave



blue eyes
 


New to the Archive

Postby maudmac » Sun Dec 28, 2003 12:38 am

This is new to the archive. You can leave feedback!



To the creator of this thread: If you ever want to add something new, just email a mod and we'll move it to the active Pens board.



life in plastic / it's fantastic

Edited by: xita  at: 12/28/03 1:53 am
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