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Working on a fic....need a beta, Pweaaase?

Postby KEStrong » Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:25 pm

Hi everyone! I am working on a fic right now, and was wondering if anyone was interested in being my beta. It is a drama, filled with angst and heartache and describes the evolution and growth of one young woman, from teenager to woman, dealing with everything lesbians deal with today and then some, as well as her search for her one true love, who incidentally, was there all along. Anyone interested? Lemme know!
Thanks!
~KE~
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Re: Working on a fic....need a beta, Pweaaase?

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Thu Jun 07, 2007 7:27 am

Also requesting some beta-type help. I've typed up "old MArrieds," the last of my "Intimacy Tales," this one a slice-of-life thing showing them as working mothers 2013 Sunnydale. No real plot, just two chapters internal monolgoues following by an "explicit scene."
I feel storngly about getting beta-views on these stories precisely because I (for obvious reasons) worry about the beleiveability level of the sexual parts. In this aprticualr case, I'm also ocncerned abotu whether the two monlogues should be less detailed, or on the other hand if I'm skipping too much background. I also don't know whether it'd be more effective with Tara's monologue first or Willow's, since they end simultaneously when Willow gets home.
Any volunteers would be appreciated.
Snapshots:http://thekittenboard.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=10210 a Love Story
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Kim: (breaks off the kissing) I l... (Sue stops her with a hand)
Sue: We don't talk about things like that right after, you know that, no saying those things in The Moment.
Kim: (moves the hand aside) Screw The Moment. I *love* you.
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Re: Working on a fic....need a beta, Pweaaase?

Postby raspberryhat » Sat Jul 21, 2007 10:11 am

Hi Both

After a long hiatus, I think I've finally got time to spend on some writing activities.

My own main work (long awaiting update) is http://www.thekittenboard.com/board/viewtopic.php?t=2961

That will give you an example of my own style and interest.

I am happy to give general feedback on content, structure, development etc. I aim to give detailed, helpful feedback. Happy with any type of content. I enjoy AU, but happy to look at most things.

Feel free to email me an introduction.
There's nothing very merry 'bout going round and round.
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