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Developing: Together Forever.

Postby WillowsGirlXX » Mon May 08, 2006 1:06 pm

This is an idea I had recently, its another one of my crazy ideas to bring Willow and Tara back into each others lives.

It is set early season seven, what if our Willow met a Tara from an alternate reality say around season 4 Tara, the cute shy bronde girl we all fell in love with.

Idea is to see how a 22 year old Willow deals with a 19 year old Tara, it will start out with Willow's feelings about seeing her again, it would be pretty heavy stuff. The one goal is to bring Tara back to Willow, she is Tara 100% the same girl we loved. She and Willow gradually fall in love, the whole story is a sweet romance as Willow and Tara fall head over heels in love it's not centered on death and demons.

Please let me know if you like the idea enough for me to put something together, i have written some of the story but wanted your input and ideas.

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Re: Developing: Together Forever.

Postby inlerf » Tue May 09, 2006 2:49 am

ooo.

read a story akin to this. was a v good story to my fuzzy recollection...about some knife and will and buff got transported to S4 world. much about chaos theory.

but oo, i love end of S6 willow (ie first ten minutes of 'seeing red'). shy tara + very lovelorn+angst-filled and totally confident, extremely hot willow = :drool
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Re: Developing: Together Forever.

Postby The_Lord_J » Tue May 09, 2006 11:04 am

anything with S4 Tara gets a thumbs up from me :)

I've certainly read at least one fic which has an idea similar to this. I seem to remember it being a good read as well.

The problem that you're gonna have here is keeping it sort of focused (maybe that's the wrong word). I mean, it's quite an open idea, rather than just sticking to a storyline - there's a hell of a lot of places where this could go and a hell of a lot of ways it could be written. You might need to think a bit more about where it's gonna go; you have the ideas for what seem to be the start of the main plot (Tara being transported to S7), and most of the subplot (the romance)...but what happens after that within the main plot? Does Tara want to take Will back to S4, or does Will want Tara to stay in S7? If they're going back to S4, how are they gonna do it? Would this be the cause of some angst? What will be the eventual outcome?

Just some of my thoughts to get you thinking. I keep feeling I should help people out on beta pens a bit more :P I ain't the world's greatest fic writer, but I like to think I've read enough stories in my time to know vaguely what they need to have in them :)

I hope I've been helpful. I probably haven't :P
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Re: Developing: Together Forever.

Postby WillowsGirlXX » Tue May 09, 2006 12:04 pm

Hiya and thanks for the feedback

The Tara i am bringing into early season is from an alternate reality, she hasnt met Willow at all so far, My idea is that she is trapped in our world and cannot get home ever, but she doesnt want to as she feels so alone. So she would at least be welcomed by Willow (of course) Buffy, Dawn, and Xander and Anya.

The story would mostly fit into Season Seven, but with a very shy younger Tara, I still love that shy sweet innocent girl and feel in love with her from Hush.

I just hope it would be a really sweet romance as Tara falls for Willow, our lovely Willow will have to struggle for a bit but the end is lots of Willow/Tara Smoochies.

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Re: Developing: Together Forever.

Postby Tank » Fri Dec 22, 2006 10:36 pm

bring it on!
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