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Developing: The One

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Developing: The One

Postby Niko » Tue Jul 24, 2007 4:57 am

I am going to write a story about Willow and Tara that take place after Tara leave willow because of her addiction. Willow tries to cure her addiction but she couldn't so she decided to leave sunny dale and go to London. She talked to Giles and he suggested that she went to the Coven because there she will have professional help with her addiction. Willow leave Sunny dales without telling anybody were she is going and she asked Giles not to say a word about her. She wrote letters to her friends telling them that she is sorry for the trouble that she caused and wishes them the best. Tara's letter was different willow described her feelings for her and how much she loved her and she had to leave so she wont get more disappointed at her. She told her that she doesn't deserve a person like her so loving, caring, and sincere and lots of other wonderful things. She told her she doesn't know how long her recovering will take but she will always love her. And she asked her not to waist her life waiting for her.


So what do you think should I countinuo?

P.s Sorry if there are spelling or grammar mistakes.
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Re: Developing: The One

Postby guitar_girl » Tue Jul 24, 2007 12:57 pm

Sounds like a good story and it has my vote.
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Re: Developing: The One

Postby Willowtree252 » Tue Jul 24, 2007 3:37 pm

:pinky Now see that is what I think would happen if it was me so yes please start it I am thinking I will like it :party
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Re: Developing: The One

Postby Halo » Sun Aug 19, 2007 9:39 am

Why not? seems like a good idea to me, I'll read it!
Good luck! ;-)
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