Posts: 683
Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 26, 2001 18:26
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Okay so i'm not very good at writing fanfic but i'm writning another *Sigh* and this is one of the scenes from it...just wanting to know what you think of it.
After an hour of serching, Willow and Buffy finally found Tara sitting in the lounge. Sitting in the same chairs Willow and Tara had taken their first looks at each other at the Wicca meeting.

Willow: (Sitting down) Tara i-
Tara: Willow...i-i-i told you that y-you shouldn't be a-around me...not anymore. I-I put your's and Buffy's friendship i-in d-danger and you fight...and y-you get up-upset and i...i want you to be happy.
Willow: You want me to be happy?
Tara: More than anything.
Willow: Well, i'm happiest when i'm with you.

Tara chooses this moment to look up at Willow.

Tara: You...you are?

Willow just nodds and takes Tara's hand.

Willow: You didn't put anyones friendship in danger, Tara. Buffy and me...we need to talk...and you helped us do that. If anything, Tara, you made everything okay again.
Tara: But sh-she shouldn't h-have found out about u-us like th-that. Did she freak?
Willow: No. She wants us to be together...she knew we liked each other before we did...in a way. And we talked.
Tara: A-about wh-what?
Willow: I love you.
Tara: Willow-
Willow: Tara i kinda had this speech thing planned out...can i finish?

Tara just nods and Willow continues.

Willow: From the very first moment i saw you, i knew you were special. I knew you were different from the other wanna-blessed-be witches...you were real. You risked you life to find me...and as soon as i realised that, i knew. I knew i was meant to be with you.

Tara's eyes were on the brink of flooding. Her vision was blurred...but for the first time she could see clearly.

Willow: And okay, you're a girl and it's a little different but it doesn't make a difference...it shouldn't. I didn't fall in love with you because you're a girl...i fell in love with you because i found it impossible not to. I fell in love with the person on the inside. It's what's on the inside that counts. I feel in love with you for who you are.

It was then it all became a bit to much for Tara and she began to cry.

Willow: (Worried) Tara what's wrong? Is it something i said? Did i say something wrong?
Tara: I love you, Willow.

Her fears and insecurities gone, Willow smiled and gathered Tara up in her arms.

Willow: I love you too.

Willow hugged Tara tighter. They both knew what the other was thinking.

'We're meant to be together...forever.'

What do you think?

PS: If anything in this has offended anyone, sorry.

Beautiful Tara's Girl
Willowhand

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Registered: Oct 2000 posted April 26, 2001 19:05
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HOW could that POSSIBLY have offended ANYONE on this board???
I got all choked up...I think I made a squeaky vowel sound...

Beautiful, Ginner. Beautiful.

Ginner
Nether World Anchor

Posts: 683
Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 26, 2001 19:16
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You make squeaky vowel sounds too? I thought that was just me.


WbBuffyfan00
Willowhand

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Registered: Sep 2000 posted April 26, 2001 19:21
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Awwwww...that was sweet Ginner...you should write more often.
-Amy

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Rane
Willowhand

Posts: 496
Registered: Sep 2000 posted April 26, 2001 23:35
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these new icon things scare me!
ginner! i want to know what happened! hurry up and finish writing it!

hugs!

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TARA- It looks like gibberish.
SPIKE- Gibberish?
TARA- Or possibly gobbledygook. It's not words, anyway…

wiltar4evr
Cool Monster Fighter

Posts: 132
Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 27, 2001 00:01
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This is sooooo beautiful, Ginner. I can,t wait to read the whole fanfic(it actually made me tear up).
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Roxton
Strong like an Amazon

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Registered: Sep 2000 posted April 27, 2001 00:15
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Ginner you should definitely keep writing. I'm really looking forward to reading the finished story.


Ginner
Nether World Anchor

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Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 27, 2001 08:10
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The story is finished and should be up on Extra Flamey with it's next update
I'm glad you all like it.


tommo
Gay Now!

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Registered: Sep 2000 posted April 27, 2001 08:51
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Ginner, a tip...you should make this into a full blown story. I'd like to see it.
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xita
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Fantastico

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Registered: Sep 2000 posted April 27, 2001 11:17
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forever

thanks ginner.

Kieli
Cool Monster Fighter

Posts: 238
Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 27, 2001 12:09
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Ginner, has anyone ever told you that you're just a big softie at heart? *VBG* Thanks for the romance de resistance.
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Tim the UNSPOILED
Nether World Anchor

Posts: 522
Registered: Oct 2000 posted April 27, 2001 12:12
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Well,I can quite understand how this board could be offended!!!
I mean,it involves...girls...in love!
An outrage!Disgusting!
(Blows pieces of cake through muttonchop whiskers)
An outrage I say!The birch!The birch!
(Ahem)
Ginner,you sweetheart.

Warduke
Big Pineapple

Posts: 906
Registered: Nov 2000 posted April 27, 2001 12:20
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Great story Ginner and like xita said...forever


Ginner
Nether World Anchor

Posts: 683
Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 27, 2001 14:44
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Glad you like it. I've never really thought i'm that good at writing fanfic.
Kieli - I have been told that...some people my say to many times...i'm just a big softie
Unless someone hands me a shovel
Editing to add: Look at me! I'm a Nether World Anchor.

[This message has been edited by Ginner (edited April 27, 2001).]

Kieli
Cool Monster Fighter

Posts: 238
Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 27, 2001 15:45
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quote:
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Originally posted by Ginner:
Unless someone hands me a shovel
Editing to add: Look at me! I'm a Nether World Anchor.
[This message has been edited by Ginner (edited April 27, 2001).]
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*LMAO* And what, pray tell, would the shovel be for? *cackle*

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Ginner
Nether World Anchor

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Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 27, 2001 15:49
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quote:
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Originally posted by Kieli:
*LMAO* And what, pray tell, would the shovel be for? *cackle*
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Well...ask Garfield...just don't mention Bunnies.

Kieli
Cool Monster Fighter

Posts: 238
Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 27, 2001 15:53
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*banging her head on her desk and laughing hysterically* BUNNIES?!! Oh this I've GOT to hear! Garfield! Where are ya, luv? Tell us a story, eh! *cackle*
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Dr.G
Strong like an Amazon

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Registered: Jan 2001 posted April 27, 2001 16:43
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First of all that was very sweet Ginner.

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i fell in love with you because i found it impossible not to

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Ah perfect. Just how it was for me and the W/T relationship.

And err..Kieli, I don't think I should ruin this thread with my fun filled childhood bunny memories. If you want to know what they are, go here: Happy Easter Everyone!!!

[This message has been edited by Dr.G (edited April 27, 2001).]

Kieli
Cool Monster Fighter

Posts: 238
Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 27, 2001 16:51
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My dear Garfield, you and xita are oh so very wicked *LOL* That poor bunny pic was just AWFUL! So why can't I stop laughing?! *cackle*
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Ginner
Nether World Anchor

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Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 27, 2001 17:03
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quote:
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Originally posted by Kieli:
My dear Garfield, you and xita are oh so very wicked *LOL* That poor bunny pic was just AWFUL! So why can't I stop laughing?! *cackle*
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Because you're all sick, sick people

Kieli
Cool Monster Fighter

Posts: 238
Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 27, 2001 17:05
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Oh Ginner, if you hadn't eaten all of those eggies, I bet you would've laughed too *G*
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Ginner
Nether World Anchor

Posts: 683
Registered: Mar 2001 posted April 27, 2001 17:09
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I guess...not that i find that sort of stuff funny...no way.


Beautiful Tara's Girl
Willowhand

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Registered: Oct 2000 posted April 27, 2001 20:26
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Funny. I do.
Then again, I'm warped.

Ginner
Nether World Anchor

Posts: 683
Registered: Mar 2001 posted May 23, 2001 15:25
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Very, very sorry to bring this back to the top but for all of you who wanted to read the full story it's now up at Extra Flamey, It's called Hints.


knike74
Blessed Wannabe

Posts: 7
Registered: May 2001 posted May 23, 2001 16:10
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Hey good story, KEEP GOING....


Ginner
Nether World Anchor