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Re: Darkness Falls, Part Two: Maelstrom(1B)

Postby singgirl » Wed Aug 14, 2002 12:34 am

No baby, you are far more important than packing. I am acting on survival instinct knowing that if I am not packed up soon, my mother will kill me.

singgirl
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part Two: Maelstrom(1B)

Postby IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous » Wed Aug 14, 2002 12:37 am

oh c'mon i don't think my future mother-in-law would be so :evil as to kill you, is she :confused

C

"Es ist fuer einen Menschen unertraeglich, ertragen zu werden." (Jean Cocteau)
"Ain't never gonna love you any better babe - And they'll never gonna love you right" (Kozmic Blues - Janis Joplin)

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Re: Darkness Falls, Part Two: Maelstrom(1B)

Postby singgirl » Wed Aug 14, 2002 12:43 am

Okay, maybe not kill me, but lots of yelling and nagging...she's good at that, and I hate it, it pisses me off!

singgirl
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part Two: Maelstrom(1B)

Postby IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous » Wed Aug 14, 2002 6:46 am

B, nagging? then it's obvious who you take after :lol and i love your nagging other people, so ... she must be a fine lady.

Kris, rise and shine! :D

C

"Es ist fuer einen Menschen unertraeglich, ertragen zu werden." (Jean Cocteau)
"Ain't never gonna love you any better babe - And they'll never gonna love you right" (Kozmic Blues - Janis Joplin)

IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous
 


Re: DF Stuff

Postby SlayerTazz » Wed Aug 14, 2002 11:39 am

Kris,

Another sweet and awesome update. I can't wait for the next one!!! It was worth the wait (cuz of the interruptus tee hee). I love the fic and hope to read more soon.Thanks for a great story!!

A dream is a wish the heart makes.

Willow: "You had two eggs, sunny-side-up. I remember because they were wiggling at me like little boobs."

Tara: "Sassy Eggs."

SlayerTazz
 


What's happening

Postby KrisBo5 » Wed Aug 14, 2002 11:42 pm

Hello to everyone checking in on DF. I’m sorry that I haven’t updated more frequently but as many of you have read, I have been rather down with the news of my dear friend’s illness. I have spent the better part of this last week trying not to cry so much and strengthen my resolve to go see her. Which I did and which was wonderful. My sister said to me today, “Kris, watching someone come into this world and watching them leave it are the most precious things you can be a part of.” She was absolutely right. I think I knew that before, but after today, I just wanted to say to you all, it is true. I was able to sit with her and talk to her and say the things I needed to, and it means everything. Anyway, I apologize for airing all of this, and for not posting more, but you all have been so kind and wonderful, and I wanted you all to know that it has meant so much to me. Thank you.



So, now let me just answer these posts quickly. . . .



4WiccanLuv: Thank you. “Track marks on your heart,” huh? I like that.



SlayerTazz: Thank you so much. Glad you are liking DF, as well as the Interruptus.



B & C, I must apologize to you two most of all. You are wonderful and I have been severely lacking in the update & response posts area. I love you both. Don’t give up on me. . . .



Kris

“Frell that!”

KrisBo5
 


Re: DF Stuff

Postby IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous » Thu Aug 15, 2002 12:23 am

hey Kris,

i'm happy for you, it's good to hear you're better. no need to apologize :)

take your time with the updating - wow, did i just say that out loud, who am i and what have they done with the real C :confused

anyway, i'm waiting :bounce

C

"Es ist fuer einen Menschen unertraeglich, ertragen zu werden." (Jean Cocteau)
"Ain't never gonna love you any better babe - And they'll never gonna love you right" (Kozmic Blues - Janis Joplin)

IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous
 


Re: What's happening

Postby Puff » Thu Aug 15, 2002 2:39 pm

Hey Kris {hugs} take your time. There will still be plenty of us around to read DF when you have the next part ready. Take care of yourself and your friend and I'm glad you got the chance to say the things you needed to.

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Re: DF Stuff

Postby 4WiccanLuv » Thu Aug 15, 2002 5:59 pm

Kris, sending a big Kitten hug your way! No apologies necessary, just take care of yourself and your loved ones. Bye!

- Dime con quien andas y te dire quien eres -

4WiccanLuv
 


Re: What's happening

Postby singgirl » Thu Aug 15, 2002 10:59 pm

Kris, Hey chicadee, it's all good. Take your time and take care of yourself. No need to appologize whatsoever. I understand completely. You have my love, even if you aren't updating often. ;)

C, baby, even as harassers we must show compassion, so us letting Kris take her time s not against our code, no worries! I love you! mmwah! :love

singgirl
 


Re: DF Stuff

Postby IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous » Fri Aug 16, 2002 2:22 am

yes B love,

i understand we're not doing wrong by not harassing Kris right now, she needs some harassment-free time now, but she needs to know we worship her :thud (the also worshipping emoticon :D ). take care of yourself and your friend Kris. :)

and B, missed you.

C

"Es ist fuer einen Menschen unertraeglich, ertragen zu werden." (Jean Cocteau)
"Ain't never gonna love you any better babe - And they'll never gonna love you right" (Kozmic Blues - Janis Joplin)

IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous
 


Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby KrisBo5 » Fri Aug 16, 2002 3:12 am

A few quick responses before the next bit.



Puff: Thank you for your hug and your words. They mean so much.



4WiccanLuv: Got the kitty hug, thank you. . . .



B & C, compassionate harassers? And the fainting emoticon? Am I lucky or what? As always. . . do I need to say it? This is for you.



Title: Darkness Falls

Author: KrisBo5 (Kris, obviously)

Email address: KrisBo5@aol.com

Feedback: Sure, I’d love it.

Distribution: This story is the narrative form of four spec scripts I have written for BVS, each of which is registered with the WGAw, so please don’t publish it or reproduce it in any way, shape, or form. If for some reason you’d like to, just ask first. It’s the polite thing to do.

Spoilers: Season 6, “Entropy” and “Seeing Red” episodes.

Rating: The story in its entirety: PG-13 to NC–17. This includes sex, violence, language.

Pairing: Willow and Tara, first, foremost, forever! However, Buffy and the others are here as well, Buffy and Dawn most especially.

Disclaimer: Hey, I didn’t create these characters, those kudos belong to Joss and crew. I’m just borrowing them for the story I did write.

Summary: The mythology surrounding the creation of the first Slayer(it sounds like a Buffy story, but have no fear, this is all about Willow and Tara).

Note: Things from here on out? Ain’t gonna be pretty. Angst and loss and pain. Read at your own discretion.





Darkness Falls, Part Two: Maelstrom(2B)



“That it will never come again is what makes life so sweet.” Emily Dickinson, Poem Number 1741





As soon as the limo pulled away from the curb, Tara felt as if the floor had been pulled out from under her and she was falling.



Into the unknown.



Into the abyss.



And for her, she knew there was no way out. She’d made her choice and she would see it through.



Whatever the cost, she would see it through.



For The Scoobies.



For herself.



For Willow.



Most of all, for her Willow.



She turned to watch the hospital fade into the distance, into the black night, then slowly faced forward. None of the other occupants spoke, or even looked her direction, but Tara could feel their presence, their darkness and evil, pressing in on her, boreing into her. The true nature of them, the low buzz and hum of their inhuman forms, swirled in the confined space, churning her stomach with wave upon wave of nausea and fear. Tara found herself leaning away from them, huddling herself as far into the corner of the door as she possibly could; her eyes continually sought refuge through the darkly-tinted window, watching cars and houses and people as they sped by. And although she could not focus on any one thing outside, it was better than looking upon the car’s other occupants. She wasn’t sure how long they had driven before they turned onto a quiet, upscale neighborhood street just on the outskirts of town. At the end of the cul-de-sac, the limo pulled into the driveway of a beautiful, newly built home, and stopped.



Tara closed her eyes and felt her heart rate speed up as the engine turned off. The sound of doors opening brought the blonde’s eyes open quickly. Fonce and the others stepped out of the car, leaving her alone for several seconds. Okay, you can do this. You’re strong. I am strong. . . like an Amazon. And I can do this. I can do this.



Tara heard the handle of her door rattling, and she sat up away from it. The door opened and Tara froze.



She felt like she was at a crossroads, and to get out of the car would mean she had finally, ultimately, made her choice.



There would be no going back.



As she felt the weight of her decision pressing down upon her, Tara suddenly heard something in the darkness.



Something so simple and down-to-earth and. . . natural that a smile touched the corners of her mouth.



Chirp-chirp, chirp-chirp, chirp-chirp.



Crickets.



Not knowing why, not understanding how, Tara felt a wave of calmness and acquiescence wash over her, clearing away her fears and doubts.



I. Can. Do. This.



She swallowed and took a deep breath, then grabbed hold of the door, half-pushing, half-pulling herself out of the car. And when she stepped out, Tara stood up tall, looking directly at the Scorpion Man. The blonde’s strong, silent, confident stare worked exactly as she knew it would: Scorpion Man backed a step away from her, giving her room. She took a step to her left and Scorpion Man slammed the door loudly. Tara blessed him with another icy glare.



Shifting behind her, on the other side of the car, drew Tara’s attention; looking over her shoulder, she saw Scorpion Woman walking up the front walk towards the house. The blonde pivoted her body and raised her eyes to her final destination.



A house.



A big house.



But a house none-the-less.



Normal. . . nice. . . evil.



Another noise brought her attention back to where she stood, and she glanced towards the street. For a moment, everything was still and quiet and empty.



Then, she heard them.



One second before she saw them.



From the shadows they came. . . all of them.



Lumbering from the darkness.



Alone.



In groups.



They all came.



Towards the house.



Towards home.



Towards her.



Night of the Living Dead. The thought raced through Tara’s mind as she watched them all coming towards her, moving in and out of the bluish fluorescent glow of the streetlights, their horrid visages revealed in their entirety. Tara took another calming breath. I can do this.



One of the creatures stepped up onto the curb and walked up the driveway, turning to look at Tara as it made its way to the house. Tara’s eyes grew wide as the monster’s hideous teeth clacked against one another rapidly, the thing’s half-dozen blackened, infernal eyes drilling into hers; the blonde reached behind her to rest a steadying hand on the limo. Oh, Goddess, give me strength. . . .



Behind her, she heard the front door to the house open.



Despite her fear of turning her back on the night creatures ambling towards her, Tara pivoted towards the house. The silhouette of a man stood in the doorway, his appearance shadowed by the illumination behind him. As she stared, her blood pounding in her ears, Tara heard a low, buzzing hum. Her eyebrows creased as she tried to make out what, exactly, the noise was, and where it was coming from.



Then, as the hum rose in tenor, Tara felt. . . something touch her.



Her mind.



Her body.



It was dark.



Whatever it was, it was dark.



And evil.



Then, as suddenly as she had felt it appear, it passed over her, moved beyond her, escaping into the night.



Tara trembled.



The man in the doorway turned sideways and raised an arm, palm up, inside the house, a silent ‘please come inside’ gesture.



Tara swallowed hard. Strong. . . like an Amazon. Making her hands into fists, she pushed away from the car, turning to make her way up to the house; as she brought her eyes around to Scorpion Man, she froze.



It was gone.



Where it had once been, now stood a handsome young man, elegantly dressed in designer clothes. He smiled, his teeth white and straight and. . . perfectly human.



What the. . . ? Tara’s head quickly whipped around towards the street.



They were gone.



All of them.



All of the monsters. . . gone.



Humans— men and women— all beautiful and beautifully dressed, were now there, strolling leisurely across the street, up the drive or over the front lawn, into the house.



Tara’s mind whirled, trying to understand what was happening. Gone. . . they’re gone. It’s not possible. It’s not— Tara slowly looked back to the smiling man beside her, letting her eyes roam over his face more closely. There was something about him. Something. . . . Him. It’s him. From the street. The man we saw. The man. . . who turned into a monster. Tara’s eyes dropped momentarily as more parts pieced together, falling like tumblers in a lock. Magic. She raised her eyes to the man, then looked at the house quickly. Magic. What I felt. It came from the house and. . . it changed them. . . . it hid them.



Looking to the man again, Tara watched his smile fade as he spun around and left her, marching towards the house. She realized then that they all had gone, they all had left her alone; if she wanted, she could run. She could run away, run back to The Scoobies, run back to the only family she had. Her heart sped up as the possibility played out before her. Then she looked at the house: the man in the door continued to offer her entrance, unmoving, unthreatening.



Tara took a deep breath and craned her neck back towards Sunnydale.



Towards the hospital.



Towards Willow.



Willow. The mere thought of Willow— her lover, her life, her heart— brought the blonde’s notions of fleeing to a screeching halt. No. Tara steeled herself and brought her gaze back to the house. No. No running. I can do this. . . I will do this. She moved slowly around the back end of the car and began the short trek up the cobblestone walkway to the front stoop; she walked up the three steps and crossed the small porch, stopping at the threshold. In the light, the man appeared to be in his thirties, very attractive with brown eyes and deeply tanned skin; he smiled and lowered his arm, walking into the the foyer.



Tara’s eyes followed his movement, pausing instantly as they reached the inner hall. The wood-paneled passageway led from the front door to, what Tara presumed was, the back of the house, but what stupefied the blonde, what made her mouth fall open in confusion, was it’s length. It stretched out before Tara endlessly, the side walls converging into a single point several hundred feet down. As she stared, it almost seemed like it expanded; while she stood still, it moved away from her. Poltergeist hall. The image from the horror film flashed in her mind’s eye: the mother standing at one end of the hall facing her children’s room, watching horrified as the closer she ran towards them, the farther away they got as the hall stretched and warped out in front of her.



Tara looked up, towards the inside ceiling, again feeling like she was in Vincent Price’s House of Horrors. The ceiling looked to be almost one hundred feet high, domed, painted with dark colored illustrations. Disbelief brimming over, Tara took a step back onto the porch and looked up to the roof. Forty feet. . . at the most. No dome. Trompe L’oel. . . trick of the eye. . . magic. Tara lowered her eyes and approached the threshold once again. She took a deep breath. . . and took a tentative step, stopping just inside the foyer. She raised her eyes, getting a clearer view of the painting on the ceiling: depictions of Heaven and Hell, Good and Evil, Dark and Light. Hieronymus Bosch. Without warning, Tara felt dizzy, a wave of nausea and anxiety hitting her as she began to comprehend the magnitude of magicks— of absolute magickal powers— someone had to harness to maintain the deceit she was witness to.



It was unknowable.



It was unfathomable.



It was boundless.



And it was way beyond her.



She dropped her eyes and looked to her left, into the front room. Swallowing the dryness in her mouth, she made her way the few steps in that direction, pausing at the archway. All of the ‘creatures’ were there, although they still retained their human qualities. They all sat or stood silently, their gazes leveling to Tara as she approached. Oh, Goddess. . . now or never. She moved into the room, keeping her back to the wall; she slid— as discreetly as possible— along its flat planes till she had positioned herself close to the corner. Tara’s eyes passed over the room, mentally taking notes, preparing herself. One, two, three, . . . eight, nine, . . . twelve, thirteen. Thirteen. Her heart beat accelerated, her blood coursing through her like whitewater rapids. Thirteen. . . I can k-kill thirteen. . . I c-can.



Unexpectantly, the creatures turned their eyes from her en masse; they looked behind them, towards the double doors leading to another part of the house. Tara’s eyes followed, widening as she watched a beautiful black woman enter the room, standing just inside the doorway. Although she was well over forty feet away from her, the blonde recognized her.

Her. . . the woman in the window. . . Madrine.



The woman took several more steps into the room, stopping beside a chair and lightly resting a delicately manicured hand on its back. The creatures turned their eyes back to Tara, as if they were watching some silent game playing out before them.



Tara held her breath.



I. Can. Do. This.



She exhaled slowly through her mouth. At her sides, her hands became fists, her fingernails cutting into her palms as she squeezed them until they shook.



“La stella di giorno,” Tara whispered, her tone low and measured, as she began to recite a spell.



Star of the day.



“Luce vi illuminarsi la notte.”



Light up the night.



Tara felt the first tingles of magickal energy caress her mind and body, weaving a discordant path through her blood and marrow as it raced to ‘become.’



The creatures felt the magickal shift in the room, felt the energy flowing out of the blonde wiccan hovering in the corner. Realization dawned horribly: they had underestimated her, underestimated her power, so well hidden beneath her quiet, shy exterior. Several began to move towards her, while others shifted uncomfortably, not knowing what to do. Their finely-crafted, placid exteriors were finally giving way. . . to anger and hate. . . and fear.



Most of all. . . fear.



Tara felt it at last, felt it surging forth in breakers. She raised her blue eyes to them all, her chin held up defiantly, confidently, and. . .



. . . a smile touched her lips.



Tara raised her fists out in front of her body, her arms shaking with burgeoning power. “Bruciare!”



Burn!



Tara opened her hands, two orbs of hot, white magickal sun materializing just above her palms.



Seven of the thirteen shrieked as their bodies began to smolder.



“Scoppiare in fiamme,” she continued, impatient for the faux sun to finish its job.



Burst into flames.



And all of them did.



Their vampire faces morphed before her an instant before they became dust. The suns disappeared as quickly as they appeared, now that the reason for their existence was complete. Tara’s body shook uncontrollaby, the magic and her own adrenaline mixing within her, creating a supercharged energy striving for release.



The non-vampiric demons charged her, but she raised a hand to them.



To all of them.



“Dolore!”



Pain!



And all of them felt it.



Including the woman beside the chair. Their bodies writhed and twitched and contorted under the invisible torture and torment being pressed upon them.



Some moaned.



Some cried.



But all. . . all screamed.



Tara’s breathing became more labored, coming in deep, short gasps, as she continued to work her magicks.



“Senza fiato.”



Breathless.



Bodies collapsed to the hard floors, hands grasping desperately at collars and jewels and flesh, tearing everything away in an attempt to get air into lungs. Screaming was quickly replaced by kicking legs and thrashing bodies, flailing arms and shaking heads.



Tara watched them all twist and turn on the ground, their suffering and agony a tangible taste on her tongue.



Enough. . . that’s enough. . . .



“For my Willow,” she said, as she lowered her hand. “Morte ultimo.”



Final death.



In the instant the words left her lips, the bodies ceased their struggles.



They all lay still.



Unmoving.



Dead.



Silence surrounded Tara, the only sound her heart pounding a deafening beat in her ears. Her body still trembling fiercely, the blonde took an unsteady step away from the wall. She canvased the room, and the ‘living debris’ she had created; her eyes fell upon the woman beside the chair, though now she lay on the ground, her body angled in a last, twisted pose.



Fourteen. . . fourteen. . . d-dead. I-I d-did. . . .



Tara swallowed as stinging tears welled up in her eyes unexpectedly. The blonde had prepared herself for this fight fully, knowing that in all likelihood, she would not survive her attempt to destroy them all.



She was prepared for that.



A part of her wished for it.



Standing there now, she realized that she had won, she’d beaten them and lived.



She wasn’t prepared for that.



Silent tears fell from her eyes as the enormity of what she had just accomplished hit her.



For my Willow.



Wiping her tears away, Tara turned her back to the room and started for the door.



“A spider in the web.”



Tara froze.



The voice, unlike anything she had ever heard before— layered Middle Eastern, British, American— spoke from behind her. Tara felt like she was moving in slo-mo as she turned around to face its owner, the secret part of her soul already knowing who it would be.



Madrine. . . .



Tara’s eyes fell on the woman standing in the archway of the double doors. She was young and beautiful, with dark skin and darker eyes, and she stared at Tara with a mixed look of desire and pride. Tara knew, in that instant, that she had made an error in judgement.



A grave error.



Oh, Goddess, no. . . .



THAP!



“A-ah!” Tara said, slapping a hand to the back of her neck as she felt an extremely sharp sting. She grimaced as she pulled the offending pricker from her skin; bringing it close to her eyes, she recognized the small, expertly-crafted dart from earlier. Poison. She glanced to her right, and through the foyer, on the other side of the hall, Fonce stood in all his hideous glory; he lowered his cane blower from his mouth and smiled.



Tara looked at Madrine again, the rapid movement making the room spin. The blonde felt her temperature rise, her blood beginning to boil beneath her heated flesh. She wavered on her feet slightly as the room began to tilt to the left; she reached a blind hand out to the wall behind her, groping for something solid, for something to hold on to. Tara pressed her body against the wall, sliding herself around the entryway into the foyer. She blinked several times, not quite sure she was seeing what she was seeing.



The front door was still open.



Tara swallowed hard, knowing she had to make it there.



Knowing she had to try.



Tara pushed away from the wall and stepped towards the door. She felt her foot turn over, and then she was falling. She hit the ground hard, her arms too weak to cushion her fall. Dazed, and feeling all sensation leaving her, she tried one last time to drag her body across the wood floors. She had succeeded in getting her left hand out in front of her when she could no longer move. Paralysis had set in, freezing her in her prone, vulnerable position. Tara turned her face to rest her cheek on the cool wood, her eyes blinking slower. . . slower.



Footfalls approached her, clicking over the paneled floor. Tara could only watch as a pair of black boots stopped inches from her face. “Yes, there is a spider in the web,” Madrine said, and Tara watched as Madrine squatted beside her. “But, you are not the spider. . . .” Madrine dropped a hand on the floor and leaned over until her face was directly in front of Tara’s; Tara stared into the black eyes, feeling her life ebb away with every heartbeat. “You, Tara Maclay. . . you are the fly.” Madrine smiled at the blonde, her ebony eyes shining bright; she pushed herself up to her feet and walked away.



Tara’s eyes fluttered as the light around her began to dim. As her eyelids finally closed, and darkness at last consumed her, Tara’s last thoughts were of. . . .



Willow.



TBC



Kris

“Frell that!”

KrisBo5
 


Oops

Postby KrisBo5 » Fri Aug 16, 2002 3:13 am

Double-posted on accident. . . that ezboard spam-thingy got me! Drat! Sorry!

Kris

"Frell that!"

Edited by: KrisBo5 at: 8/16/02 2:16:01 am
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Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby mollyig » Fri Aug 16, 2002 4:40 am

Tara so resolute. She can do this. I have to admire her. Even if I would have preferred that she ran from the house and the creepy creatures.



Just when we thought Tara had bested the demons. Yikes! So Madrine has set a trap, and Willow and the scoobies are on the way. Double yikes!



Great update Kris!

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: Oops

Postby IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous » Fri Aug 16, 2002 8:07 am

:bounce Kris is back with a vengeance&an update :bounce

:clap cool update! thanks i was like "Go Tara!" and i am NOT scared because i know she won't die, she's just sleeping, isn't she? :( of course she is and Willow will come barging in to save her.

loved the "Normal...nice...evil"

and it certainly seems that the Italian classes paid off :clap good for you, and it was a nice touch, a nice change from all the Latin used in spells, though it's almost Latin :hmm ... but that's not the point.

take care and be good.

C

"Es ist fuer einen Menschen unertraeglich, ertragen zu werden." (Jean Cocteau)
"Ain't never gonna love you any better babe - And they'll never gonna love you right" (Kozmic Blues - Janis Joplin)

IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby Puff » Fri Aug 16, 2002 8:52 am

Wow that was brilliant. Strong and determined Tara is a pleasure to read, but yes she did underestimate them and now she is leading the whole scooby gang into a trap. This fic is so dark and I can picture the creatures in my head. I did mention brilliant didn't I?



Thanks for the update Kris and whenever you're ready I'd love to read more you left it at a bit of a cliffhanger :)

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Responses

Postby KrisBo5 » Fri Aug 16, 2002 10:52 am

mollyig: I was thinking she should’ve run as well, but then, what kind of fun would that be? And, uh-huh. . . big trap!



Puff: Always with the cliffhanger, huh? Traps and angst and terror and cliffhangers, oh my. Thanks!



C, I don’t know about the vengeance, but there is the update at least. Si, Italiano. Io sono una studentessa di Italiano. No, non c’ e’ Latino. Sigondo me Italiano e molto bene. Anyway, happy that you enjoyed the update and, again, thanks for harassing!



Kris

“Frell that!”

KrisBo5
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous » Fri Aug 16, 2002 12:09 pm

wow, your Italian is good. congrats. good that i understand most of it, due the already explored similarities.

about the harassing - just say when you need it again and we'll provide it :grin

take care.

C

"Es ist fuer einen Menschen unertraeglich, ertragen zu werden." (Jean Cocteau)
"Ain't never gonna love you any better babe - And they'll never gonna love you right" (Kozmic Blues - Janis Joplin)

IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby KrisBo5 » Fri Aug 16, 2002 1:27 pm

C, grazie. I do try, and as for the harassing. . . whenever you feel like it, feel free! I could use a good, um, harassing right now.

Kris

"frell that!"

KrisBo5
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby LeatherQueen » Fri Aug 16, 2002 5:16 pm

Ack! Wow... that was intense. Loving this story. :)






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"But when they're playing your song on the jukebox in Hell, you might as well dance." - K. Simpson


"Futile... like a FOX, baby!" - Tara in The Late Shift by wiccachica

LeatherQueen
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous » Fri Aug 16, 2002 5:36 pm

Kris,

harassing in this case spells 'hockey' right? :hmm just so we get the terms of the game right. :grin

C

"Es ist fuer einen Menschen unertraeglich, ertragen zu werden." (Jean Cocteau)
"Ain't never gonna love you any better babe - And they'll never gonna love you right" (Kozmic Blues - Janis Joplin)

IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby MissQuirky » Fri Aug 16, 2002 5:59 pm

Oh God! That was good! Tara got caught, aww no! Damn this Madrine, I really dislike her ALOT!! Now the scoobies are a comin! A Yay cos their goin to save Tara, but Madrine seems sneaky!! I'm lookin forward to ur next update!! :)

"Don't warn the tadpoles!...
I-I have frog fear."

MissQuirky
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby ZipityDoDa » Fri Aug 16, 2002 6:02 pm

That was good....*sigh* cliffhanger.

=Jessica=

ZipityDoDa
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby SlayerTazz » Fri Aug 16, 2002 10:43 pm

Kris - Great update, love the glimpse into Tara's thoughts. awesome!! :clap

A dream is a wish the heart makes.

Willow: "You had two eggs, sunny-side-up. I remember because they were wiggling at me like little boobs."

Tara: "Sassy Eggs."

SlayerTazz
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby Latsric » Fri Aug 16, 2002 11:09 pm

This story is so awesome...but you're starting to scare me:) Just kidding, but man what a cliffhanger. Update soon please.



-lat-

- I need my obsessions, they keep me sane -

Latsric
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby KrisBo5 » Sat Aug 17, 2002 12:23 am

LeatherQueen: Happy you’re enjoying the story, intenseness and all.



MissQuirky: Thank you! You don’t like Madrine, huh? Gee, I wonder why. . .



ZipityDoDa: Thank you. And, yeah, I know, another cliffhanger. Think I like angst just a bit?



SlayerTazz: Tara’s & Willow’s thoughts should play out in greater detail later, revealing a bit more character. . . that is, if it all goes the way it should.



Latsric: Kidding about being scared, huh? I gotta work on that. . .



C, harassing in this case means anything you want, darlin’. . . . Though, a little pick-up hockey might be enjoyable. . . .



Thanks to everyone who’s still reading & responding!



Kris

“Frell that!”

KrisBo5
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby Tulipp » Sat Aug 17, 2002 8:38 am

Hey, Kris, I hope you're doing okay. Sorry I came late to this; I'm on vacation and haven't been checking the board too much, which is weird in itself.



Anyway, this was wonderful; Tara's and my realization at the end of this painful-to-read-in-a-good-way description of her own use of dark magick "for my Willow" that in fact she is the fly and not the spider...chilling. I liked the way that you repeated (I know, I need to find something else to comment on since this is like the third time I have mentioned repetition to you recently) that phrase "for my Willow"; throughout the passage, it really changed. First it signalled love and devotion, then vengeance, then fear and knowledge. Wonderful.

Tulipp
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous » Sat Aug 17, 2002 8:49 am

ok Kris,

i don't know a thing about real hockey, but you can show me all you want (my fiancee ain't around these days either anyway) :)

and i want an update too :bounce :pray :evil :rage :bounce :pray :evil :rage :bounce :pray :evil :rage :bounce :pray :evil :rage :bounce :pray :evil :rage :bounce :pray :evil :rage :bounce :pray :evil :rage :bounce :pray :evil :rage :bounce :pray :evil :rage :bounce :pray :evil :rage or more SMUTUS - your pick :)

C

"Es ist fuer einen Menschen unertraeglich, ertragen zu werden." (Jean Cocteau)
"Ain't never gonna love you any better babe - And they'll never gonna love you right" (Kozmic Blues - Janis Joplin)

IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby vmpIrslAr » Sat Aug 17, 2002 11:55 am

The. Suspense. Is. Intense.



please update soon

VmpIrslAr out.



"she's my everything."

vmpIrslAr
 


Re: Darkness Falls, Part 2: Maelstrom(2B)

Postby 4WiccanLuv » Sat Aug 17, 2002 1:05 pm

Oh Kris, great update! It was scary as hell. Your demons give me the willies! Fonce and his poison darts are starting to piss me off. I had the gut feeling Tara wasn't gonna make it out, it would've been way too easy. Yikes! I hope the Scoobies are on the way...pronto! This story just gets better and better! You rock, chica!

- Dime con quien andas y te dire quien eres -

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