first poem

[kiwi6969]

*sings* guess who's back...yes I'm back it's me kiwi......hehe



Ahem....anyways ...





You cheated on me,

Your feelings were untrue,

I'd never cheat on you,

You lied to me,covered the truth,

You said you were working,

I feel so sick,

I never would, never could,

I knew it was happening,

But I didn't want to belive,

I hope that she was worth it,

And now you will never have me,

You wanted a friendship with me,

That's never gonna happen,

Cause you cheated on me.....







kiwi/teresa

"she's out there,our souls have meet, our hearts have meet, just not ourselves"...teresa

[SJ]

Good poem,very angsty.

[kiwi6969]

Why........



Why am I sad,

Why do I feel so low,

I don't know, I don't know,

I'm trying my hardest,

Trying with all my might,

I'm just unable to get it right,

I have a kind heart,

And a gentle soul,

So why do I feel so low?

I'm on this world to do my best,

But why do I feel like I have nothing left,

I do feel like I need a rest,

For me and my family I'm doing my best,

And they are all I have left...............





kiwi/teresa

"she's out there,our souls have meet, our hearts have meet, just not ourselves"

[SJ]

Angsty poem.

Good writing style.

[kiwi6969]

ok gonna try this again.....alots happened to me over the months.....



I got some news,

That my life depends,

I have choices to make,

But not just for me,

For them aswell,

What do I do?

Live or do I die?...

[SJ]

Glad to see you've posted a new poem,great writing

[kiwi6969]

I never!!



I never knew until I found you,

That I could chase away all my blues,

You helped me through my bad times,

I'm glad your here for my good times,

We are friends for a life time...

' Never

frown,even when you are sad.Because you never know who is falling inlove with your smile.

[Stroke of Luck]

Hey Teresa!



Its been a long time without update.

I like ur work and i see ur happy!



Hope to read more asap



Cu

SoL/Natti

This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

[kiwi6969]

hey Nat, long time huh? and yes I see more poems on there way...

' Never

frown,even when you are sad.Because you never know who is falling inlove with your smile.

[SJ]

Great poem

[kiwi6969]

I Don't Have





You broke my heart,

Riped it in two,

I have no meaning now,

Now I don't have you,

You left my heart,

As a open wound,

Let it fester inside,

I truely do love you,

What will I do, I'm not complete,

Since I dont have you......

Never frown even when your sad,because you never know who's falling inlove with your smile

[SJ]

Good poem

[onyxsundrops]

Lovely. For a shorter poem, it held a lot of expression. Thanks.



Yvonne

[Spikeizmine87]

hey! glad you updated! Love the short and meaningfull poems! Write on! Thanks for sharing!

-Rose

The only thing I hate in the world, is people who are dishonest with themselves. And people who smell.

[kiwi6969]

KNOBBLY KNEES.....



My life has been through the wringer,

But I have made it past,

No-more up's and down's,

I have kicked them in the arse,

No-more kinks in the road,

Straight and narrow for me,

I'm very surprised to be able to...

STAND ON MY KNOBBLY KNEES....

[SJ]

Great poem