The Inner Workings

[Artemis85]

Hey kittens I have been told that I write well and that I should post some of my poems. Sadly I have horrable grammar skills (heh) and dont have a beta, but I'm gonna try this anyway if it's that bad I can work harder. so please let me know what ya'll think. Feedback is very welcome, good and bad.



Ok this first one if one for my Girlfriend.( I love you baby)



Funny how my life seems so empty now

I look around and I can’t see you, can’t feel your touch

I feel this stinging pain in my heart and in my eyes

My body trembles, my voice shakes as I cry out loud

I’m still alone in my room, so I slip into that place in my mind.



The place I go to be with you, but it isn’t exactly the same anymore.

I need your smell, your touch your, presence like never before.

And it pains me that you aren’t here to hold me as I cry.

But like I always tell you “I’m a solider” and ill pull through this, I always do.

So I try to stand, still half shaking and compose myself and head into this world.

As I walk I still feel your lips lingering on mine and your hand holding mine.

My body likes to remind me of u constantly; it’s a sucker for pain and suffering.

       

I wonder if my body will ever let me rest and in a way I don’t want it to

I like to be reminded of you and the pain it lessens with time, or so I hear.

I would rather have gone through this then not have gone through this at all.

And I will do this until we can be together for all time and just so u know

Every moment worth it just to see you smile.





Hope ya'll enjoyed it ....



~Lex

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"There could be outfits" - Buffy (family)

[bluewillowwitch]

Lex,

I loved that poem. I know who it was for. You two are so cute. Love to you both. Write more.





Grace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

[Stroke of Luck]

Wow Lex u really have something with words...hat up to you lil one...great work...



Keep on going



Cu

SoL/Natti

This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

[onyxsundrops]

Thanks for sharing your poem with us! It was very sweet(and personal) Kudos!



Yvonne

[WillowMaclay]

::big huge massive sigh:: Baby, I know just how you feel.... I know we can do this, becuase I love you and i know that you love me, and that just makes everything alot easier. Please post more poems. I love you.



Your girl that is far away and always missing you and wishing you here always and loves you very much,



Lisa

[SJ]

Great poetry

[TemperedCynic]

Hey, Lex, this was lovely. I was struck by this line:

Quote:

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And it pains me that you aren’t here to hold me as I cry.

But like I always tell you “I’m a solider” and ill pull through this, I always do.

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As long as you and Lisa keep struggling to make it work, in the end you will both succeed. Keep your eyes on the prize, and blessings to you both.

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More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

[Artemis85]

Hey All ,thanks for the replys It drives me to write more. Thanks for the support. Heres another poem i wrote yet again its not Beta-d so sorry for the mistakes.



Dedacation: My wonderful Lisa...



The Distance Between us



The distance between us isn’t that far.

In the grand scheme of things what is 893 miles,

when it comes to matters of the heart.

Though it seems were far away we are never really apart.



At night I can swear I ‘m with you while I sleep.

Sometimes my mind tricks me into thinking its real

and I wake up at night confused when I can’t feel your warmth next to mine.

There’s not a minute of the day where I’m not thinking about you.



I keep dreaming of the day we can be together for always.

I dream of that puppy in our yard and waking up next to you.

I dream of Walking through the mall holding hands and helping with the dishes.

But for now they are just dreams but eventually they will be real

everyday they will be real. Till then I’ll keep dreaming



Thanks for reading more to come..

~Lex

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"MmMmMm... Minty Fresh" - Lisa....

[SJ]

Sweet poem

[Karmah]

that was truly beautiful thank you for sharing it with us

[TemperedCynic]

Hey, Lex!



This poem is lovely, but you fortunes are changing! Thank you for sharing your good news with us in Chat. Congratulations to you. Now, plan carefully your path through this life and always be sure to have your girl by your side.



Well wishes to you both.

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More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

[WillowMaclay]

:love:bigkiss:love I love you baby, and hopefully you'll be visiting me sooner then we had thought!! Muah! And hopfully we can get many puppies....American Stratford Terrior!!! Pllllllease!!



With love from your girl,

Lisa



PS Nice signature hehehe

[bluewillowwitch]

Lex

You are just too much sometimes! I'mso glad you love my lil sis so much. So when is the wedding? Just kidding. Love the poem, keepup the great work.





Grace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

[Artemis85]

Hey Kittens I have been busy lately and I still mannaged to come up with two poems one isnt so new and the other i just wrote yesterday



like always these are for my girl Lisa they might be slightly depressing if your in this ship with me...



oh and please please please forgive any grammar or spelling errors ... m bad at that stuff and dont have a beta for these... <>





*~* Kissing you*~*



My head spins, the surrounding world disappears.

I’m taken over by emotions as I feel your lips against mine

Its poetry in motion, mouths moving in time,

knowing just where to go and how to get there.

I open my eyes and watch you as you stare and I get lost in your eyes.



Kissing you makes me feel like I’m melting away.

It makes me feel light headed and so full of love

I’m walking up in the clouds above prancing, dancing, feeling free.

Knowing that you’re here with me gives me such a sense of bliss

And to think all this from a kiss



*~*Leaving kills the heart *~*



Pumping, beating, live, and blood

Smelling life, tasting pleasure.

Weeping for the pain it causes when it’s all gone.

Feeling soft and squishy lovely messes

all things that go straight to the pleasure centers of our brain.

Pleasure and pain walk fine lines sometimes

and often find them selves lovers,

lovers in a comfy nest found at the edge of a mountain meadow;

where we whisper sweet ,sweet , comfortable words.

They sound like a soft wind, music to my sore ears.

Sending me flying high into the clouds where I often find you



A sound stirs and it breaks my concentration, and sends me hurdling

back down crashing in a bloody bleeding mess on my bedroom floor.

Lonely, Once again feeling nothing, not hunger, not pain .

Just a state of anti-lucid dreaming,

and the night comes again and again and I cant sleep.

The silence wakes me every time, tossing and turning because I can’t feel you.

My body longing for sleep if only to be with you there,

but it hardly comes and when it does the sound of a buzzer rips me away from you,

and I awake to find nothing there of substance, pillows and stuffed things.

My heart feels dead again, dry and empty and torn needing mending.

only being with you, being next to you ,holding you helps it to be alive, beating, and pumping.



Hope you liked them ..let me know

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"MmMmMm...Minty Fresh"-Lisa

[SJ]

Liked your poems,thought they were great

[Artemis85]

I havent written in a VERY long while... But I think I might pickup again. I didnt write mostly because I was in a settled place and I found myself at a loss of words for exactly how I felt about My girl ,it was all to overwelming. Now Im starting to feel the effects of what all poets eventualy end up writing about, heartache. Nothing to serious, im sure we will work it out, but its given me things to want to write about. So in short.. New Poems to come... hope you will like them.. soon i dont know when .. thank you everyone for your very kind comments i appreciate them very much.



~Lex

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"There Could Be Outfits" Buffy (Family)

[EyesLie]

Mmmm... I like. More please.





eyes

"Words are sweet whisperings. Sentences are foreplay. Paragraphs are incarnations of carnal desires and fiction is the grand climax." ~ Sway Slayer