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For Danielle

Postby beautifultrgdy » Thu Nov 18, 2004 7:17 am



Seeing what you are,

Knowing what you could be,

You are beautiful by far.

I wonder: could you ever love me?



Love is love is love,

Someone once said, I think.

Nothing as amazinly perfect as love,

So wonderfully flawed and full of kinks.



Feeling the intesne flaming fire.

Love's tell-tale sign,

A burning desire.

I wonder: could you ever be mine?



I will cherish you, like you should be;

For you are beautiful inside and out.

I will love you if you let me;

For you are beautiful without a doubt.





This is for Danielle, who I am falling swiftly in love with. *sigh*

beautifultrgdy
 


Re: For Danielle

Postby Renee85 » Thu Nov 18, 2004 8:16 am

What a beautiful poem, Jessica. It was honest, raw, and full of passion. Just outstanding is all I can say. I could definitely feel the love in the air, thanks so much for posting this and of course I can't wait to read more. :)



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"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." -Judy Garland

"Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever." -Mahatma Gandhi


Renee85
 


Quit my Demons

Postby beautifultrgdy » Thu Nov 18, 2004 4:19 pm



Yes, it was very honest. I'm going open my soul to her if she'll let me.



:luv



Quit my Demons

talking in circles,

too tired to sleep.

my heart alone,

I'll surely keep.



what is mine is mine,

not yours to burn.

extinguish the flame,

and hope you learn.



quit my demons,

take back teh night.

wander aimlessly,

too weak to fight.



hate the world,

bleeding and tears.

empty, broken, lonely,

feed my fears.



blaming you,

blaming me.

quit my demons,

let me be.


Jessica



Adia I'm empty since you left me...

beautifultrgdy
 


Re: Quit my Demons

Postby barnabasvamp » Fri Nov 19, 2004 6:17 am

Wonderful work and "Quit My Demons" is just so expressive..:shock



Thanks for sharing.



BV

It's the passion in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it.

barnabasvamp
 


Re: Quit my Demons

Postby SJ » Sun Nov 21, 2004 5:39 am

Lovely poems :read

SJ
 


Re: Quit my Demons

Postby Renee85 » Sun Nov 21, 2004 7:05 pm

Another delightful poem, very cool. I agree with BV, it's expressive, full of feeling, and just a wonderful piece of writing. Thanks for posting this and hopefully I'll read more soon.



__________________

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." -Judy Garland

"Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever." -Mahatma Gandhi


Renee85
 


Burning New

Postby beautifultrgdy » Mon Nov 29, 2004 5:35 pm

A new one, different format.



Burning New

Shackled shell,

Bleeding deep.

Drowning quarters.

Awoken pain,

Once thought dead.

Screaming truths,

I hear you.

Dusty pictures,

Bringing wounds resurfaced.

Blackened heart,

Burning new.

Pain spawns pain,

One love for another.

I watch you,

Watching me.

Claim innocence,

Blundering pretense.

Douse the flame,

Turn away.

Calm the waters,

Go to sleep.



Jessica



Adia I'm empty since you left me...

beautifultrgdy
 


Re: Burning New

Postby Renee85 » Wed Dec 01, 2004 2:33 am

Loved it, I like how simply written this one is yet it's also very expressive.

It's one of those poems you need to read more than once, I enjoyed it very much.



Thanks for sharing. :)



__________________

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." -Judy Garland

"Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever." -Mahatma Gandhi


Renee85
 


Re: Burning New

Postby SJ » Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:59 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 


Three Small Words and Take Your Blame

Postby beautifultrgdy » Mon Dec 06, 2004 4:17 pm

Three Small Words



Three Small Words,

Spoken without thought.

Three small words,

A passion time forgot.



Brought to your lips,

In a smile, in a kiss.

Brought to your heart,

A pain not soon to miss.



Heals wounds,

Of the broken child,

Calms the seas,

Tames the wild.



Tree little words,

Deemed so small.

Three little words,

To say it all.







Take Your Blame



You lost your claim.

Tore my heart,

Doused the flame.



Still you fight.

Grasping, clutching,

It isn’t right.



My heart my own,

Not lost in ache,

But growing alone.



Your pain unfair.

Burning me, turning me,

‘Round this chair.



Take the blame,

The whispers dance.

It’s all the same.



My pain not true,

I’m sure it goes.

Lend me a clue.



You lost your claim,

Let my demons be,

Take your blame.







:geek

Jessica



Adia I'm empty since you left me...

beautifultrgdy
 


Re: Three Small Words and Take Your Blame

Postby barnabasvamp » Mon Dec 06, 2004 5:49 pm

"Three Small Words" Very nice!



BV

It's the passion in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it.

barnabasvamp
 


Re: Three Small Words and Take Your Blame

Postby SJ » Tue Dec 07, 2004 2:07 am

Great poems :read

SJ
 


Perfect Met

Postby beautifultrgdy » Sat Dec 18, 2004 3:28 pm

Perfect met

With perfect eyes

And saw a love

In perfect guise.

Perfect words

Built perfect ties

A perfect rush

With perfect highs.

Perfect passion

And feelings rise

A perfect spell

To hypnotize.

Perfect youths

Thought it wise

Lost themselves

In perfect sighs.

A perfect danger

Broke perfect guise

A perfect love

Is perfect lies.

A perfect tear

From perfect eyes

Tore an angel

From perfect skies.

A perfect beauty

Does love, despise

For perfect was not

A perfect disguise.

A broken heart

Of perfect size

Found the truth

That perfect dies





********

Jessica



Adia I'm empty since you left me...

beautifultrgdy
 


Re: Perfect Met

Postby barnabasvamp » Sun Dec 19, 2004 6:23 pm

Nice writing, somewhat sad, but good.



BV

It's the passion in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it.

barnabasvamp
 


Re: Perfect Met

Postby SJ » Tue Dec 21, 2004 6:11 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 

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