first poem

[Shinnen]

excellent poem, kiwi. Jealousy is a very strong emotion. I know jealousy very well. Hope to see more I mean.. uh.. more poems... not more jealousy.

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

[Shinnen]

Great poem again! I'm glad you're still writing, poems... simple as they may look... they are really tough to right. kudos to poets around.



I understand those feelings too... hehehe



btw... got a close look at your sig... VERY NICE

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

[pagnmickie]

Terri!!! *hugs*



Wow, this one is really cool... I SOO Understand that feeling. Especially meeting my girl at Bible College. Lots of confusion involved! But it's all good now!







-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

[kiwi6969]

Oh god its happening I'm a posting whore



I wrote this today.......



You make me warm inside

I have feelings I can't hide

For the longing I have for you

To be in your embrace to touch you

To care for me to love me

Just to be near you

I have a longing to be with you

Near you,inside you

I just need you

I love you.......



kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

[SJ]

Great poetry

[pacou]

Hehe Teresa



Those are just awesome! I loved the last one, it was so emotive, in a very good way



Thanks for sharing, and no worries for your fast mind As long as there are coming out poems like these, I don't mind



Thanks



-Viv

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[kiwi6969]

Aww guys *blows kissess*



You mean everything to me........I luvs you ......

heres another...

Fight.......



A fight with you is like the end

makes me not want to be seen

I don't deserve a friend like you

To have you in my life as I do

for you to comfort me on my bad days

for you to praise me on my good

for you to listen when I'm venting

to give advise when I'm frightened

For you to cars cause you can

for me to love you anyway that I can

Never know the women that you are

Not to let you go to far

Although this fight went to far

And up to this day I respected that

but in the end,that is that





Have I told you today...........

Have I told you today that you are beautiful

that you are special

that you are wonderful

that you are smart

that you are funny

that you are spiritual

that you are sexy

Have I told you today......I Love You





kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

[KirkBaldridge]

Sweet.



I like them.



You should definitely write more.



I know talent when I see it. :)







Kirk

Kirk B



Life is much too serious to be taken seriously.



Willow is a tree that weeps, but Tara is firmer and will hold.

[TexanZeppo256]

wow kiwi. Like I said, intense. I really hope that you and your gal get over your fight Kiwi. You seem too nice to suffer like this.



Kiwi's gal, whoever u are, please forgive her: I'm willing to bet she didn't mean it!

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T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.



(Translated from "The Gift")

[SJ]

Great poem,very emotive

[T Maclay]

Great poems Terri. Very heart felt.

Bored-Now

[AbbyQT]

Wow kiwi, your poems are really insightful...keep up the great work, they are great pieces of work...as always. I do hope you and your friend get over your fight, sad to hear.

[pagnmickie]

Awww Terri... these just get better all the time!!!



More please...



*HUGS*



-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

[kiwi6969]

I'm on a roll, nobody stop me...



Strangers....



Your silence cuts me like a knife

I don't understand the signs

What they mean,

show me, tell me,help me understand

I'm new at the emotions

don't yet quite understand

how we went from friends to strangers

We had so many plans

from walking on the beach

to just holding hands

Just make me understand

I need your guidance

need you to take my hands

I need you to show me

how to understand..





kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

[T Maclay]

Thats really good Kiwi, I really do hope you manage to get some answers which you are obviously looking for.

Bored-Now

[kiwi6969]

hey everyone.*hugs*



last night in bed these came to me...



Lying here next to me

you make me feel so guilty

why do you make love to me

you make me feel so guilty

I'm starting over again

you make me feel so guilty

In your world I'm everything

you make me feel so guilty

tomorrow I'll be leaving you

why do I feel so guilty

you make me feel so guilty..







Guilt keeps you honest

Guilt keeps us alive

I think that we wouldnt surive

we learn to live

we learn to lie

we tell each others our goodbyes

we hide our plans

we hide the truth

we all hide our abuse

without the guilt

without the pain

How do we learn to live again

Guilt is what we all have

we need it to feel alive

we need it to survive...





kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

[kiwi6969]

Thanks everyone for your replys*hugs*



It killed me......



I cried out your name

but it was in pain

you hurt me so bad

DON'T you EVER do it again

you made me feel so dirty

made me feel unloved

I cried in the after affects

that just hurt me so much

Why did you do it??

I thought you loved me so much

I was your life and your dream

It killed me so much

the way you forced me...

It just hurt me so much

but now theres no trust

Thank god I'm leaving you

Cause you hurt me so much....



kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

[pagnmickie]

Wow... incredibly open and honest words. Thank you once again for sharing.







*BIG BEAR HUGS*



-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

[T Maclay]

Wow, I hope that writing these Poems are helping you. As I said before they are so heart felt.

Bored-Now

[bluewillowwitch]

cuz,

Your stuff rocks!!!!!!







Grace

[T Maclay]

It killed me - such a good poem Terri, I could feel the pain,it reminded me of feelins I once had the same, thanks for sharing it with us.

Bored-Now

[kiwi6969]

*waves*.....hi

thanks for reading........*hugs*



Without you........



How do I get rid of these blues

you are all I think about all I breath

I'm so lost without you

I can't face anotherday without you

I'm so lost without you

to feel you to touch you

to caress you to love you

I'm so lost without you

So lost without you...





kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

[SJ]

Really hearfelt poetry,thanks for sharing.

[pagnmickie]

Hey Terri! *hugs*



Wow, more strong emotions coming out. Hopefully this will all work it's magic to heal as well.







-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

[T Maclay]

Another good poem Kiwi.

Bored-Now

[Washi]

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

[Shinnen]

Great poems... very powerful stuff. It's great writing these is a way for you to let out emotions.

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

[TexanZeppo256]

Hey kiwi. Beautiful stuff. Intense, passionate, and sad.



I'm really very sorry that you're going through this, and I hope it gets better.

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T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.



(Translated from "The Gift")

[kiwi6969]

Hey there I got permission to post this poem so admit its going to be done before she changes her mind.........anyway since this this is a joint poem please be nice on your feedback..we don't want to scare her off.............so anyway



You touched my heart

and kissed my soul

I took a breath of you

and I came undone

tonight I shall stop

I shall on longer run

to confess my true feelings

and lay bare before your stare

to undo all the wrong

to complete what

we have become

here tonight in this lovers embrace we become one...



Please be nice we bruise easy.......



kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

[TexanZeppo256]

Very nice Kiwi/other gal! I think that it's very reminicent of the Indigo Girls. Very sweet and romantic. All is right in Kiwi-land again. (happy sigh)



I like I like I like!

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T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.



(Translated from "The Gift")