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Re: lets try again!!

Postby Shinnen » Sun Jun 15, 2003 8:31 am

excellent poem, kiwi. Jealousy is a very strong emotion. I know jealousy very well. :wink Hope to see more :D I mean.. uh.. more poems... not more jealousy. :p

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

Shinnen
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby Shinnen » Sun Jun 15, 2003 6:47 pm

:clap



Great poem again! I'm glad you're still writing, poems... simple as they may look... they are really tough to right. kudos to poets around.



I understand those feelings too... hehehe



btw... got a close look at your sig... VERY NICE :rofl

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

Shinnen
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby pagnmickie » Sun Jun 15, 2003 6:55 pm

Terri!!! *hugs*



Wow, this one is really cool... I SOO Understand that feeling. Especially meeting my girl at Bible College. Lots of confusion involved! :paranoid But it's all good now! :wink



:flower :flower :flower



-Mickie





One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

pagnmickie
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby kiwi6969 » Sun Jun 15, 2003 9:24 pm

Oh god its happening I'm a posting whore :whistle



I wrote this today.......



You make me warm inside

I have feelings I can't hide

For the longing I have for you

To be in your embrace to touch you

To care for me to love me

Just to be near you

I have a longing to be with you

Near you,inside you

I just need you

I love you.......



kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

kiwi6969
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby SJ » Mon Jun 16, 2003 12:35 am

Great poetry :D

SJ
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby pacou » Mon Jun 16, 2003 5:09 am

Hehe Teresa :p



Those are just awesome! I loved the last one, it was so emotive, in a very good way :grin



Thanks for sharing, and no worries for your fast mind :lol As long as there are coming out poems like these, I don't mind :p



Thanks :)



:peace -Viv



Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

pacou
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby kiwi6969 » Tue Jun 17, 2003 11:55 pm

Aww guys *blows kissess*



You mean everything to me........I luvs you ......:love

heres another...

Fight.......



A fight with you is like the end

makes me not want to be seen

I don't deserve a friend like you

To have you in my life as I do

for you to comfort me on my bad days

for you to praise me on my good

for you to listen when I'm venting

to give advise when I'm frightened

For you to cars cause you can

for me to love you anyway that I can

Never know the women that you are

Not to let you go to far

Although this fight went to far

And up to this day I respected that

but in the end,that is that





Have I told you today...........

Have I told you today that you are beautiful

that you are special

that you are wonderful

that you are smart

that you are funny

that you are spiritual

that you are sexy

Have I told you today......I Love You





kiwi



we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

kiwi6969
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby KirkBaldridge » Wed Jun 18, 2003 12:49 am

Sweet.



I like them.



You should definitely write more.



I know talent when I see it. :)







Kirk

Kirk B



Life is much too serious to be taken seriously.



Willow is a tree that weeps, but Tara is firmer and will hold.

KirkBaldridge
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby TexanZeppo256 » Wed Jun 18, 2003 12:58 am

wow kiwi. Like I said, intense. I really hope that you and your gal get over your fight Kiwi. You seem too nice to suffer like this.



Kiwi's gal, whoever u are, please forgive her: I'm willing to bet she didn't mean it!

---------------------------------



T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.




(Translated from "The Gift")

TexanZeppo256
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby SJ » Wed Jun 18, 2003 1:35 am

Great poem,very emotive :read

SJ
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby T Maclay » Wed Jun 18, 2003 4:46 am

Great poems Terri. Very heart felt.

Bored-Now

T Maclay
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby AbbyQT » Wed Jun 18, 2003 5:09 am

Wow kiwi, your poems are really insightful...keep up the great work, they are great pieces of work...as always. I do hope you and your friend get over your fight, sad to hear. :applause

AbbyQT
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby pagnmickie » Wed Jun 18, 2003 6:26 am

Awww Terri... these just get better all the time!!! :flower



More please... :grin



*HUGS*



-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

pagnmickie
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby kiwi6969 » Wed Jun 18, 2003 7:27 am

I'm on a roll, nobody stop me...



Strangers....



Your silence cuts me like a knife

I don't understand the signs

What they mean,

show me, tell me,help me understand

I'm new at the emotions

don't yet quite understand

how we went from friends to strangers

We had so many plans

from walking on the beach

to just holding hands

Just make me understand

I need your guidance

need you to take my hands

I need you to show me

how to understand..





kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

kiwi6969
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby T Maclay » Wed Jun 18, 2003 7:44 am

Thats really good Kiwi, I really do hope you manage to get some answers which you are obviously looking for.

Bored-Now

T Maclay
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby kiwi6969 » Wed Jun 18, 2003 5:38 pm

hey everyone.*hugs*



last night in bed these came to me...



Lying here next to me

you make me feel so guilty

why do you make love to me

you make me feel so guilty

I'm starting over again

you make me feel so guilty

In your world I'm everything

you make me feel so guilty

tomorrow I'll be leaving you

why do I feel so guilty

you make me feel so guilty..







Guilt keeps you honest

Guilt keeps us alive

I think that we wouldnt surive

we learn to live

we learn to lie

we tell each others our goodbyes

we hide our plans

we hide the truth

we all hide our abuse

without the guilt

without the pain

How do we learn to live again

Guilt is what we all have

we need it to feel alive

we need it to survive...





kiwi





we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

kiwi6969
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby kiwi6969 » Wed Jun 18, 2003 6:00 pm

Thanks everyone for your replys*hugs*



It killed me......



I cried out your name

but it was in pain

you hurt me so bad

DON'T you EVER do it again

you made me feel so dirty

made me feel unloved

I cried in the after affects

that just hurt me so much

Why did you do it??

I thought you loved me so much

I was your life and your dream

It killed me so much

the way you forced me...

It just hurt me so much

but now theres no trust

Thank god I'm leaving you

Cause you hurt me so much....



kiwi





we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

kiwi6969
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby pagnmickie » Wed Jun 18, 2003 6:03 pm

Wow... incredibly open and honest words. Thank you once again for sharing.



:flower :flower :flower



*BIG BEAR HUGS*



-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

pagnmickie
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby T Maclay » Wed Jun 18, 2003 6:10 pm

Wow, I hope that writing these Poems are helping you. As I said before they are so heart felt.

Bored-Now

T Maclay
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby bluewillowwitch » Wed Jun 18, 2003 9:43 pm

:bigwave cuz,

Your stuff rocks!!!!!!







Grace

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby T Maclay » Thu Jun 19, 2003 5:28 am

It killed me - such a good poem Terri, I could feel the pain,it reminded me of feelins I once had the same, thanks for sharing it with us.

Bored-Now

T Maclay
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby kiwi6969 » Fri Jun 20, 2003 12:01 am

*waves*.....hi

thanks for reading........*hugs*



Without you........



How do I get rid of these blues

you are all I think about all I breath

I'm so lost without you

I can't face anotherday without you

I'm so lost without you

to feel you to touch you

to caress you to love you

I'm so lost without you

So lost without you...





kiwi:flower

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

kiwi6969
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby SJ » Fri Jun 20, 2003 2:04 am

Really hearfelt poetry,thanks for sharing.

SJ
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby pagnmickie » Fri Jun 20, 2003 3:00 am

Hey Terri! *hugs*



Wow, more strong emotions coming out. Hopefully this will all work it's magic to heal as well.



:flower :flower :flower



-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

pagnmickie
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby T Maclay » Fri Jun 20, 2003 3:23 am

Another good poem Kiwi.

Bored-Now

T Maclay
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby Washi » Fri Jun 20, 2003 5:23 am

:clap

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

Washi
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby Shinnen » Fri Jun 20, 2003 5:37 am

Great poems... very powerful stuff. It's great writing these is a way for you to let out emotions. :clap

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

Shinnen
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby TexanZeppo256 » Fri Jun 20, 2003 7:37 am

Hey kiwi. Beautiful stuff. Intense, passionate, and sad. :( :sob :(



I'm really very sorry that you're going through this, and I hope it gets better.

---------------------------------



T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.




(Translated from "The Gift")

TexanZeppo256
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby kiwi6969 » Fri Jun 20, 2003 7:56 am

Hey there I got permission to post this poem so admit its going to be done before she changes her mind.........anyway since this this is a joint poem please be nice on your feedback..we don't want to scare her off.............so anyway



You touched my heart

and kissed my soul

I took a breath of you

and I came undone

tonight I shall stop

I shall on longer run

to confess my true feelings

and lay bare before your stare

to undo all the wrong

to complete what

we have become

here tonight in this lovers embrace we become one...



Please be nice we bruise easy.......



kiwi:flower



we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

kiwi6969
 


Re: lets try again!!

Postby TexanZeppo256 » Fri Jun 20, 2003 9:54 am

Very nice Kiwi/other gal! I think that it's very reminicent of the Indigo Girls. Very sweet and romantic. All is right in Kiwi-land again. (happy sigh) :)



I like I like I like!



---------------------------------



T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.




(Translated from "The Gift")

TexanZeppo256
 

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