My feet are at least Longfellers....

[thebardgirl]

Hmm....i like to post stuff? is that a good reason for this? oh! i know! i'm a bonehead teenager who's never experienced "love" and so desperately wants to (along with the rest of the world) hmm...too depressing as well, umm...ahah, i tried to tell some one this in the chat room, but alas they were unreachable...*shakes fist at distracting American Idol that takes chatters away from screen* hmm poem then:









Dancing Queen



Dancing Queen,

Dance with me,

Let me see,

Your waltzing eyes.



Please be mine.



I feel your breath,

Upon my neck,

And it makes me stretch

Again, to those precious eyes.



I feel the calm,

Before the storm,

And yet, I want

To feel the waves and rain.



Rhythm Flood me away.













*twindles off*

p.s. umm. moderators, i'm sorry, i just wanted to post this, and i'm not even sure if i can continue it. so, let me know, or come at me with a hatchet screaming "GO AWAY!" yeah, let me know on that....



oh and feedback would be swell from actual, poetic people, unlike yours truly. I am *not* a poet, just wrote this out of nowhere, and wanted some feedback and alike....



-elizabeth (the talkative-too-much-for-her-own-good-one)

Last night in sweet slumber I dreamed I did see my own precious jewel sat smiling by me.

And when I awakened I found it not so; my eyes like some fountain with tears overflowed.

[SJ]

Thought your poem was good

[CEsgirl13]

thats a good poem thebardgirl.

~Jamie

ps. isn't your sig Edgar Allen Poe?

I Love Callie <3

[thebardgirl]

SJ- thanks, umm...cool....you liked it...yay.

CEsgirl13- you're nice people, i likah you.....and no, not edgar allen poe, that's actually just a Joan Baez folk song i like alot called "Once i had a sweetheart" good song....nice on the guitar too...



if i post on this again, i'm glad to know i had at least two very kind responses. thanks.



-elizabeth

Last night in sweet slumber I dreamed I did see my own precious jewel sat smiling by me.

And when I awakened I found it not so; my eyes like some fountain with tears overflowed.

[thebardgirl]

Um....here....if you wanna read, be my lovely guest!



Wishing Well:



Smiling oceans, drifting waves,

The emotions in your head.

Your poor mind.

You're the deep, secrets within

The keeper of everyone's sin.

Your full mind.



Oh aye, oh aye,

Wishing well.



A ripple follows, one of sadness,

Full of sorrow and madness.

Your poor mind.

You cry and you cry, but no one

hears the tears in your eyes.

In your eyes.



Oh aye, oh aye,

Wishing well.

Stay alive, you're my

Wishing well.









generally speaking all my "poems" are actually songs of mine.

-elizabeth

Last night in sweet slumber I dreamed I did see my own precious jewel sat smiling by me.

And when I awakened I found it not so; my eyes like some fountain with tears overflowed.

[eveningstar845]

I like both of your poems

Thanks for sharing.

keep writing.



Dee

The only abnormality is the incapacity to love - Anais Nin

[onyxsundrops]

Quote:

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A ripple follows, one of sadness,

Full of sorrow and madness

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I liked that! Great poems.



Yvonne

[SJ]

Great poetry

[TaraBaby77]

I know this was like forever ago, but I just wanted to say those poems where great. Hope to see more, thanks for sharing. =)

Aaron

'Tarababy77'

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