A Collection Of My Poems

[Oracle Of Magic]

Ok, this is my one and only attempt at poetry. Thanks for the encouragement April.





The Time Machine

By Sarah



The sunlight flickering off my face,

while I ponder the human race.

How far we have come,

yet,

In our haste,

we have built a time machine.

It keeps whirling and spinning,

sending us back.

Maybe it's simply because,

we don't have the knack,

to realize progress is sending us back.





Please tell me what you think, any feedback is appriciated.



Blessed Be,

Sarah

Edited by: Oracle Of Magic  at: 6/2/04 9:29 pm

[onyxsundrops]

I liked that, especially the last two lines. -So true- Thanks.



Yvonne

[Oracle Of Magic]

Hi fellow Kittens, I was sorting through my stuff today. Getting ready for the upcoming move and wedding. When I ran across a poem I wrote when I was about 14. I guess I wrote it about the emotional pain, and helplessness I was feeling at the time. Anyway, I thought I would share it with you. Feedback is appriciated.



The Pain I Feel



Pain, pain tears at my heart.

For where ever I see a pattern, you year it apart.



I say we've been here before.

You always say "not anymore".



I say something not to your liking.

You respond with anger, almost like biting.



Though I am certainly not right in all instances.

Your anger is what I fear.



You haven't threatened me with physical harm. It's your punishments constantly thrown in my face.

Sometimes I wish I could just escape this place.



Blessed Be,

Sarah

"Dont walk in front of me, I may not follow. Dont walk behind me, I may not lead. Walk beside me and be my friend. - Albert Camus"

Edited by: Oracle Of Magic  at: 6/2/04 9:35 pm

[shadowygirl]

Hey Sarah great poem ... I can relate to it alot ! awsome work more soon !!!!!!



Luv April

[SJ]

Great poem

[lil wiccan]

hey sarah! i like ur poems... i think the first one is sooo very true...

"How can i/ Beleive that my heart will find/ Someone like you/ You see the really me/ No in betweens/ I had nowhere to hide/ You took away the walls around me/ Make me feel safe to share my truth/ I see the heavens open/ A heart that once was broken/ It's holding nothing back/ Now that i found you

[ShyTemptress]

Sarah howdy

its beautiful hon, thanks for sharing this. maybe i should post some of my poetry, but not sure. but this is really good. -smile-

-Shy Southern temptress

[girlfriends actually]

Very profound writing. I like it.