Some poems for you...

[mswaterbug2000]

Hello there. You all don't really know me. I am a friend of Grace. She said that I really needed to post some of my work here. So I am taking her advice and doing it. I hope there are that bad, and you guys track me down. But I have been doing a lot of lately. Tell me what you thinka nd if I should post more please. Brutal honesty is always best.



On the Inside



In the darkest of nights

Along the ice covered road within

Midnight rings in my deafened ears

Light refuses to shine

Obsidian blankets my soul

Sending a shiver down my spine

Though I feel nothing but the cold[/font]





Fallen



I am walking on a thin line.

The line of obsession blurs when it comes to you.

When is enough, enough?

Where is the line at, so I don’t cross it?

How do I know where to stop?

I am afraid that I will say the wrong thing

And then with a snap, you will walk away from me.

How do I know what is alright with you?

I can’t even trust my own instincts right now,

because they all tell me to freeze up or choke.

Would someone please clarify the situation,

because I’m totally lost and confused.

My mind tells me to stop,

and my heart…well my heart just feels like it has been sit ablaze.

A strange feeling indeed,

That I have only ever felt once before.

So maybe I am just scared.

Scared that I have fallen in love again.

Or worse yet,

scared that someone might love me.

Though I don’t know how that’s possible,

or if it even is.

Whether you love me or not isn’t the point.

It is simply that I am scared.

I am afraid of you and the power you hold over me,

and moreover, I am afraid of myself.

Afraid of all these feelings I have,

and afraid of what I might say or do when someone mentions you.

I have fallen to fast and way to hard,

leaving me sore and breathless.[/font]



In the night



Through the plague of insomnia and delirium of sickness

my thought empty head filled with visions.

The vision of you engulfed my head

while I tossed and turned in my bed.

I became tangled in the sheets

as my tired mind raced.

Sweet thoughts of you

became the only thing that mattered.

For countless hours in the endless night

I thought about our conversations that rest in my mind

and how much I missed you.

Though we have never met

I know you are out there somewhere waiting for me.

One day we will bump into each other

and that happy thought keeps me awake in the lonely night.



Karen

Edited by: Warduke at: 9/2/04 12:52 pm

[bluewillowwitch]

Kare-Bear ,



I feel bad that no one has written to you so i thought that I would drop you a line and start the ball rolling. I'm sure all of the :kitten's will love you writing just as much as me. You should have put up Bustle. That would get the :kitten's reading. Of course that mean more secrets soooooo... I'll be going now.



Grace

[Wired vixen]

Hey there,



I just wanna say, you have truly amazing potential here, and its hard to come by someone with new words and feelings to express, as many have been expressed over and over, and you've taken the whole 'express yourself' phrase to different levels, oh looksie i'm being analytical! hehe sorry, but seriously, these are truly amazing so far, keep em coming

Quote:

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Through the plague of insomnia and delirium of sickness

my thought empty head filled with visions.

The vision of you engulfed my head

while I tossed and turned in my bed.

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You write so well, i'm definitely gonna stand by for more!



Stace xXx

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

[mswaterbug2000]

Thank you Grace and Stace. I giess I really should add some more huh?



Letting Go



Can’t see how it came to this

Weren’t we stringer before fate happened

Didn’t we have what it takes

To last the forever our hearts promised

But eternity appeared as it tapped at my door

And you weren’t prepared for that leap

Guess it’s true what they say

Love turns the sensible into blubbering fools

And faith scares the wary to the bone

Fear is the corruption that drive the weak

It causes people to do the actions

That will be looked on with rusting regretful eyes

I stand in the dark pits of blankness

As I gaze into the bright tunnel of light

My hand extends for yours only

I want nothing more than to save you

From the overwhelming trepidation surrounding your heart

But you shoved me away with great intensity

Stepping farther into the shadows

And no matter the efforts I give off

Nothing can bring you back to me

So I must learn to do the one thing I can’t

Learn to let you go like you did to me

And live the life I never wanted to live

A life of solitude and loneliness

In the brightness of clarity

The heart sheds the tears of goodbye

As I slowly step out of this cloud of doubt

Though my heart and soul craves for you alone

I know I must finally move on

Standing in a crowd I always felt alone

But I never truly knew alone until I met you

This is what letting go feels like

Moving away from the only thing I ever wanted

In order to save what’s left

Of this battered heart of mine





Sweet Dessert



Breathing in the sweet smell

That can only be you

As the sweat glides down

You glistening features

My eyes follow your exposed curves

My hand is the eyes shadow

Desire feels the air

Intoxicating my soul

Increasing the need I feel

Can’t get enough

Feel the soft pinch of your nails

As they slowly crape down my back

I look into your deep eyes

The sea of want washes over you

And the waves hit me

Together we ride this

Rollercoaster of pleasure

As I get lost deep in you

Edited by: mswaterbug2000 at: 12/20/04 10:12 pm

[SJ]

Great poems,thanks for sharing

[little miss 666]

The vision of you engulfed my head

while I tossed and turned in my bed.

I became tangled in the sheets

as my tired mind raced.



*nods head* very very good poetry here. I pretty much loved everything you've written but those lines stood out as my favourites so far.



I love the last poem you posted too, i'd give my favourite lines but then i'd just be copy pasting the whole thing lol. It had a really good flow to it and i think you managed to pull off the topic without it being really cheesy.



Overall, i think you're another wonderful addition to all the great writers on this board YAY! more talent 2 selfishly read lol.



Keep it coming!



- Bell

The shape of you

Is etched inside

My bruised and somewhat sculptured mind

[behindhereyes]

Karen...



Wow... Fallen would be my favorite thus far... because it speaks to me.



and "rusting regretful eyes" this is brilliant and sadly beautiful... to you .





behindhereyes

Kim

"To the world, you may be one person; but to one person, you may be the world"

[angel of salvation]

wow great poems! and hi there



glad you posted your poems, Fallen was my fav at the mo. please post more soon.



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

[mswaterbug2000]

I would like to thank everyone for all the kind words. It really means a lot to me. I know you all don't know me very well. And you you all to take time out to read my stuff, well, I can't say what it means. Thank you all. Here is two more for you all. I hope you like.



When words aren’t enough



What do you say

In a moment like now

A moment where lies and truth blur

And the reality is lost

What do you say

When you know you aren’t enough

You can’t do anything

And nothing is ever good enough

What do you say

When your greatest fears come to life

When what you want

Is out of your reach

And you will never get what you want

What do you say

When you know the role you must take

And that is all you can do

What do you say

When the words you speak

Choke you as they travel through the air

And you are torn in two

About what to do

What do you say…what?





Yester-year



I look back on the memories

Gazing at the photos of yester-year

Wondering where I went wrong

Did I not give enough

Or was my enough not good enough

The tears run down my cheeks

As I find myself learning all over again

Learning what it is to cry

Remembering what it is

To feel such heartache

The quake of the pain

Sends shivers down my broken body

Almost drowning out

The glimmer of the love

The love I once had

Felt with the tips of my fingers

I am left broken and torn

Nothing left for me to go home to

No reason to move on

What’s the sense

I have an emptiness residing in me

And the only way I know how to fix it

Is to repeat history

Shut down and build those walls

There is no one to blame

For this downfall inside me

No one but me

For being a fool

And letting myself open up

And showing that I still had a heart

I still had a heart to be destroyed

But all that is over now

[SJ]

Great poetry

[angel of salvation]

Hey there! Great update! I liked the last one...Yester-Year. I like the title. Its quirky...I'm in a funny mood. Had a bad bad day, so on the rebound and trying to cheer up. And I find great poemness to read. So yay Write more soon.



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.