Camp Flutie, Part Two

[Kerrison]

Then you should definately respectfully request MORE! *G*



Despite my pouty and depressed state, I still know that more would be good right now, Rane. More. Please.



Now.



-Kerry

"What a curious thing to be so upset about. Nature delights in diversity. Why don’t human beings?" -HBO Southern Comfort

[Jennpurr]

Awww... I loved the update. Poor Tara. Yes... they will have a day together, for just them, soon. Right??



They are just too cute together. Damnit, I miss Tara!



I'll try to wait patiently for more, Rane.



Have a great weekend,

Jen

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"Alyson Hannigan is a frickin' amazing kisser."Amber Benson

[The Rose24]

*Sigh*



Beautiful as usual. I can't wait for their next alone time.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.

Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

[willow420]

Lovely. It really shows how much they love each other. I love how Willow even remembers what Tara was wearing the first time she saw her. Just great.

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A.K.A. Liz


"Fly, fly my pretty." Willow from Grave
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They love the women that will never love them. They are Lesbros!

[Rane018]

LQ- I like sassy. Glad you like sassy too.



Toni- you cannot stop writing yours cause then I wont have anything to read!!! Shivery is awesome, and this wasn’t even a semi smut part. Cool.



Kerry- you need to cheer up baby! The next part is being edited as I type. Well, not actually as I type casue that would be impossible to type two things at the same time ya know but I’m taking a break from typing that part up because I well, need a break. Hehe…



Nath- I first found the OMWF reference silly but I kept it in. glad you liked it. and vampire willow makes me smile wryly all the time. There’s something sexy I find in her at the same that it’s disturbing. If they had made dark mojo jojo willow a bit more like vampire willow I may have believed the acting a bit more. But DMW was so far fetched… ok, I’m not going to get into that. hehe… hugs!



Ten ten- I cant get enough of it either. hehe, that’s why I like writing it. W/T for eva!



Madeinnz- raining? I cant even remember the last time it rained here in LA. Coming from the carribean I expect it to rain everyday, even if it’s for twenty minutes. Or when I lived in Florida how it would rain two seconds then stop then the next day it rained all day long. I was even stuck in a flood there. But as for the fic... hehe… sorry to say but I may skip over the actual fireworks. I’m still figuring that part out. see, interestingly enough I’ve got the end of that update done just not the beginning. I’m weird like that.



Xita- having stared at your avatar now for about a gazillion minutes…..



Puff- both have horrible fashion sense but Tara at least doesn’t go for the pinks…



Areslei- I wish I could make tara’s dad go away. This is just the beginning…



Jen- hehe, I just realized that you’re a jen too like the character! How silly of me to take me forever to realize that?! I miss tara too. A lot. Too much. I cant believe she’s allegedly really gone. Have a great weekend as well except I have to work tomorrow at 6 am! Poo, eh?



The rose- everyone cant wait for their next time alone. Hehe… they’re probably waiting for me to top the truck… impossible I tell you.



Liz- my first pseudo gf once said that to me and she told me exactly what it was I was wearing the first time she saw me in class. I thought that was really, really cool. I, of course, didn’t remember at all what I wore but it was cool she did.

[VampNo12]

Sigh, this was a lovely update Rane! First I had a flashback to being a camp counselor, and the one thing you mustn't do is interfere with the girl's "primping" time ! Poor Willow (as the "bad wardrobe counselor") being over-looked by having Jenn turn to Tara for fashion advice (although with Tara's lack of keen "fashion sense," Jenn might be wise to make this a one-time only thing).



Loved the image of wet Willow in a towel, and I liked how both W&T were both pondering in their minds how they wanted to touch each other, but couldn't because of the presence of the campers.



I love the sense of love at first sight (especially in Willow's case) when she said, ("You take my breath away. Since the moment I laid eyes on you".). Especially liked how Willow remembered what Tara was wearing the first time she saw her (ie once she caught a glimpse of Tara she couldn't take her eyes off her). Also the way Tara explained how she feels their connection whenever she thinks of Willow, was a wonderful way to show the true depth of their relationship (ie true love).



Lastly, poor Tara realizing that with her father back her time will be limited with Willow, unlike the "magical" day they shared "yesterday". And I truly loved how at the end , Willow's kiss was in a sense a promise to Tara that they will indeed have another "yesterday" in the not too distant future. Can't wait for the next part!

[Lonewolf22]

Rane: Great update, I loved the conversation Willow and Tara had at the end, you could just feel the love that they have for each other and how much it hurt Tara to leave Willow, just beautiful.



I also really liked the conversation they had in the cabin, the reference to "Once More, With Feeling" was really cool. I can't wait to read more.



Lonewolf

[Thanatopsis]

Thanks for the update. Full of loveliness and sweetness and W/T love. Their conversation at the end was especially great with Willow remembering exactly what Tara was wearing.

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Dawn: I gave birth to a pterodactyl.
Anya: Oh my god, did it sing?

[fairydust]

OMG I so loved this update. The thoughts running through each girls head were great.

And I thought it was cool how Willow remembered what Tara was wearing My gf makes fun of me cause I remember every detail about when we first met, and every day after that I even keep a little journal....lol

*****Faye*****I LOVE YOU JENNA

[Ange]

Great update Rane. Still love, that's story.



Ange.

----------------------------------- "Things are not always what they seem to be...." Shakespeare Willow & Tara Stuff (Videos, caps, avatars, forum...)

[nika]

Hi Rane, great update. I love how they inwardly mirror each other's thoughts and feelings. And...hey Rane, guess what? Part 2 of 'Red Ace' is now in progress.

Your wish is my command.

[Grimaldi]

great update, very sweet

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

Worm, are you ready to die in the cleansing apocalypse?

Its not my fault that you're a little geek with no sense of humor

[witchbitchwillow]

awwwwwwwwww, rane. i loved it as always. the way that you write the willow and tara interactions is so inspiring and breath taking!



as ever, i await more great fic from flutie



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

[TareBearRS]

I TOTALLY love this story and read it all in 2 turns.



Love the way how things have been progressing between them and how everyone around them reacted to it. Great!!!

I hope they find more time to be together! and for Tara to get out of her dads rules.



You just gotta love them loving eachother.

Can't wait for another update!. Keep up the great work!

R

[hellmouthhottie20]

That was totally ace.

Love how you got the OMWF line in there, but the other way round



Willow in a towel How did tara manage not to Just rip it off and ravange her there and then I guess the kidz might have been a little shocked though!!!!



I thought it was lovely the way you wrote how willow rememberd every detail of what tara was wearing when she first saw her.

I decleare we start a petition to get rid of joss and have rane take over



Caz

Kelly-"They make you like,feed a tree before you feed yourself

Ozzy - how the F**K do you feed a tree? What do you do, put a ham sandwich on it! -Kelly Osbourne to Ozzy about hippy camp

[Rane018]

Snuggle- thanks!



VN12- you were a camp counselor?! Sheesh had I know this before I’d sucked info from you. I never was a counselor, went to camp only two years so I had to call my friends and search the internet, etc. for ideas, activities and all around camp crazyness…. I like the image of willow in a wet towel too. … it’s not just rara’s dad that will limit their time, there’s some more stuff coming up I haven’t gotten to yet so I’m glad you’re looking forward to updates. Hehe… they’ll be another one coming hopefully by the end of this week. Maybe before.



Lonewolf- hi honey! thanks. Hugs!



Thanatopsis- glad you liked it.



Faye- gf’s like you are awesome! And the journal thing… I used to keep a journal then I suddenly stopped. I used to write in it every single night before I went to sleep. now I don’t have one at all. Kinda weird…



Ange- thanks sweetie!



NIKA!!!!!!! Rocks. I cannot believe you are writing a sequel! You are sooo awesome! Yay!!!! Red ace, red ace, red ace…. Very much looking forward to that update. I may just stop writing until I get a sneek peak of it. hehe…



Grimaldi- hugs



Ellie- aw, you are so sweet. I’m glad you like how I write them. I pretty much try to go from the show.



Tarebear- hehe, that’s the nickname I gave tara ages ago in my velevet web series. My little cousin’s nickname is that and I love it. so, basically what I’m saying is I love your screen name. Wow. You read it in two turns that’s like over 120 pages long! Talk about committed….



Caz- you silly kitten, I think the kids would have been more than shocked. Hehe… as for getting rid of joss, I’d have liked to re-write all of Willow’s arc for season 6. Let’s not even go into that. I’ll start to rant and it’s not good. Hehe… cute avatar.

[The Rose24]

Rane,



Actually, I like the sleepover better than the truck, but that's just me.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.

Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

[VampNo12]

Yes, Rane I was a camp counselor for a group of girls ages 12-13. Can I just say they were "teen terrors", god just now the flashbacks I am getting are a tad scary ! The girls raiding (or should I say trying to raid) the boys cabin was a favorite past-time for them. I was also a tennis instructor at the camp for one year, but that was a more calming experience. And again can't wait for the next part!

[Kieli]

Yes Rane, dear, you did shivery very well. It's a rarity for me because I'm picky and all that Now if I could only politely request more (since I've been told that I nag )

Love is tricky. It is never mundane or daily. You can never get used to it. You have to walk with it, then let it walk with you. You can never balk. It moves you like the tide. It takes you out to sea then lays you on the beach again. Today's struggling pain is the foundation for a certain stride through the heavens. You can run from it but you can never say no. It includes everyone."--Amy Tan "The Hundred Secret Senses"

[katydid]

I am really sorry now that I missed out on summer camp when I was a kid. You make it sound so fun... Although as an adult it would probably be oh so much better....



I was really glad to see you have gotten to continue this fic. I very much enjoy your writing... I check everyday for updates....



I have officially decided to stop lurking. Either I will start posting or I am taking away my rights to the pens board...lol

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She practically had genuine molded plastic stamped on her ass.

[witchbitchwillow]

lol, im always being called cute and sweet!! not that i mind hehe. your writing is relaly good, and its really true to the show, if not better. im not being a suck up to get brownie points from the writer honest



love ellie x x x x



*im over 500 and im not a tiny tink light *

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

Edited by: witchbitchwillow at: 6/29/02 3:44:02 pm

[Magrat70]

great up date Rane it was so warm and very sexy

These five words in my head scream "are we having fun yet?"

Chad Kroeger

[fairydust]

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Faye- gf’s like you are awesome! And the journal thing… I used to keep a journal then I suddenly stopped. I used to write in it every single night before I went to sleep. now I don’t have one at all. Kinda weird....

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*gets a smug look* Rane said I was awesome

My journal is always in my purse. I think I write in it at least 10 times a day. And I draw in there too I'm planning on giving it to my gf on our 1 year anniversary or something.

I cant wait for this to be continued. I love this story

*goes back to waiting slightly patiently for another update*

*****Faye*****I LOVE YOU JENNA

[Scout]

Just getting caught up here. A wonderful update - the scenes between the girls just make you feel the love. And I can't help but wonder if Tara will ever hear that Vamp Willow story.



Oh, and thank you Rane. And Miss Kitty thanks you, too.

[Rane018]

Rose- oh don’t worry about that honey. I know you didn’t like the truck. I remember you asking whether they’d ever use a bed. and there ya go, you got a bed. Patience pays, eh?



VN12- OH! Raids, yeah there should be a raid coming up soon. Willow mentioned it a while back. We’ll see if I can actually pull it off. Hehe.



Toni- nag? Who nags? You nag? Hmm, I’ll have to ask Diana about that. polite request accepted, I’m working on the next update as we speak. I have tonight off and tomorrow! Yay!!!!!



Katydid- I love that photo of amber on your avatar!!!! They finally got her hair and makeup right, and the colors of her wardrobe too. Hehe, I think there is such a thing as summer camp for adults. Even gay camp too! I swear! I’m glad you’ve decided to stop lurking, it’s so sweet of you! Lot’s of great fic here so have lots of fun replying.



Ellie- You brat. You are so horrible and nasty and just plain old mean. Better?



Magrat- warm and sexy. I like that description.



Faye- aw!!! That is such a cute idea! Gosh, now I wish I had talent and a gf… it’d be so cool to scribble and draw and give it to the one you love. I suck. Like, CK, I too am an avid stick figure artist.



Scout- hmmm, I wonder if she will hear that story too. Hehe… thanks again and I don’t know if I mentioned it in your thread but I loved the SIMS movie!!!!!! You rock!

[fairydust]

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Faye- aw!!! That is such a cute idea! Gosh, now I wish I had talent and a gf… it’d be so cool to scribble and draw and give it to the one you love. I suck. Like, CK, I too am an avid stick figure artist.

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aw....You DO have talent Rane Your fics more than prove it. You are like my favorite writer I swear it. And you so do not suck. And I am sure there are many many girls who would want to be your gf.

I seriously can not wait for you to continue this fic

I love it

*****Faye*****I LOVE YOU JENNA

[Jennpurr]

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Jen- hehe, I just realized that you’re a jen too like the character! How silly of me to take me forever to realize that?! I miss tara too. A lot. Too much. I cant believe she’s allegedly really gone. Have a great weekend as well except I have to work tomorrow at 6 am! Poo, eh?

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Yep, I'm a Jen (Jennifer) It's okay.



I really want to hold onto hope, but it's so hard, with all the things Joss and Marti have said, but then we really can't believe them anymore, can we? It's just so sad. And there was no reason for it. Bastards!!! Sorry...



EW! 6am. I hate getting up early. Hope you have a great Sunday.



Update soon?



Jen

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"Alyson Hannigan is a frickin' amazing kisser."Amber Benson

[katydid]

I looked around for the perfect avatar...and nothing really fit. I was only seeing the same old pics. I decided to make my own. I love the way Tara looks in that ep...so I was watching it while doing my surfing. I decided to just cap it and make my own. She is just so adorable in that scene...



I liked that last update....Willow in a towel....*eyes glazing over* hee hee...can't wait for more...

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She practically had genuine molded plastic stamped on her ass.

[witchbitchwillow]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! i wanna be sweet and innocent again.



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

Edited by: witchbitchwillow at: 6/30/02 12:44:29 am

[Rane018]

Faye- thanks honey. as for many girls wanting to be my gf I don’t see anyone pounding on my door. Hehe… maybe it has something to do with the fact I’ve never been to any gay establishment since moving out west. Yup, that could be it…



Jen- holding out for hope was something I did all last season. Ask anyone at chat. I was driving the denial bus and when what happened happened it really struck me hard. I’m still not over it. I cant even watch old BTVS episodes anymore. They not only ruined the characters they ruined the show for me. If Tara were to come back somehow next year I don’t know if I’d still watch. They could have taken her out many different ways the way they did it was horrible and that I will never forgive them for no matter what happens next year. Hehe, rant over. As for getting up at 6 am tomorrow it’s four am. Lol…



Katydid- that’s from the ep where tara tells buffy she’s normal right? I cant think of anythign right now except taralips. Just look at that pout. Yummy…. Ok, I’m going to need my drool tray…



Ellie- you are a snuggly wuggly. Always innocent and sweet, ya know you are.



Update later tonight kittens! Woo hoo!