Camp Flutie, Part Two

[Thanatopsis]

Wow 3 whole updates, be still my beating heart. Glad Tara and Willow got a chance to talk things over, but it doesn't seem like Tara's all that assured. Loved Jenn's “Well, you aren’t either." Lucky for her, Tara held Willow back.

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Too many of us live desert lives. ~Charles de Lint

[mollyig]

Glad that Willow has vowed she'll visit Tara when she returns to Sunnydale, but poor Tara, naturally, still dreads that day.



I don't think I've mentioned recently how I love this fic, so - I love this fic!

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

[Tiggrscorpio]

Lovely update, Rane. I'm already feeling sad about them separating in three weeks. Please fix it. I love the reclaimed dialogue. You make it work so well.



Completely jealous that you wrote and update for Jen!

Where's my update?

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She's my everything!

[funkyasian]

hahaha...i remember the embarassment of getting caught by my counselor...hahaha ...that was not one of the fondest memories of camp but hey...it was an "experience".

i dont' think i would've been able to keep a straight face if i was tara and willow...great updates...



were we suppose to count the "borrowed" lines? i counted a few in the first one!



steph

[Ange]

Loved the update, Rane. Being caught!! hehehehe. Never happened to me.... for the moment. hehehehe.

But sad, about them having to separate.



Ange.

----------------------------------- "Things are not always what they seem to be...." Shakespeare Willow & Tara Stuff Site (Videos, caps, avatars, forum...)

[Grimaldi]

the last updates were really good. loved the spicy talk, Willow and Tara catching the two campers in the gazebo was funny (brings back memories of camp)

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

Cross my heart, smack me dead, stick a lobster on my head.

We'll roll on with our heads held high - The Living End

[Warduke]

Another great part, finding the two teens in the gazebo was really funny



Can't wait for more babe

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The Bell Tolls For Thee

[oneinten]

yay updates! Though no gazebo action here....will there be a rain cheque on that?





kath

[Puff]

Humm how can I miss three updates? Anyway they were all great. It was so sad that they have to leave each other soon, but I am sure you will write in a way for them to be together. The talk with Xander was really nice and I liked how he knew that they loved each other.



Looking forward to more Camp Flutie goodness.

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

[Chance]

Just love Camp Flutie goodness.



Can't tell you how much I adore this fic.



M.

[xita]

3 great updates! Angst.. oh.. god I am going to love the sweet angst. And.. the gazebo incident hee, so funny. They are lucky it wasn't the othe way around hee and they weren't the ones caught!

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"Oooh Xita!" - Amber Benson

[Murasaki S]

Ah! They got lucky here.

Better to interrupt campers than to be interrupted.

As much fun as it is when Willow and Tara get interrupted by Buffy , it didn't seem like them to get intimate in too public a place.

Plus having to be authority figures and all, it was better that way.



Murasaki

[Jennpurr]

Hee.. that was hillarious, Rane. Getting caught in the gazebo. I would have been so embarrased and ran out of there. That was funny. I bet Willow and Tara will have second thoughts about it now.



I liked it when Jenn called Willow on being there, when she should have been at the bonfire.



Can't wait for more,

Jen

------------------------Willow: strong like an amazon?
Tara: Strong like an amazon, right.

[Scout]

We're rolling in updates here - this is great! Until you mentioned August 14, it hadn't even occurred to me that camp might actually end. I think I was too wrapped up in the fic to realize it. What will they do? I know you'll give us a happy ending, so I won't worry about it, unlike the girls.



And the bracelet was so very sweet. As was Willow wanting to guard it with her sock. Great stuff!



Thanks again!

[willowsgrrl]

oo i so love it gazeebo ooooo so looking forward to more

christina

[willow420]

Wow! Three updates! Angst, comedy, and even a little nipple biting, what more could a girl ask for?



Can't wait to see what happens next.

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A.K.A. Liz


"Let them stop and stare, it don't bother me. Cause I'm feelin' for her what she's feelin' for me." Lyrics from the Tatu song All The Things She Said

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They love the women that will never love them. They are Lesbros!

[Rane018]

Madein NZ- *garden structures and spicy talk* now I need to steal that line!!!! So funny. Hehe



Nath- I think you’re thinking of little Jamie. I never realized until it was too late that they both had names that started with J’s. it may lead to such confusion. Jenn’s always been quite Cordelia like. Well, to me anyhow. Lol… Jamie will be along shortly though.



Thantopsis- nope, tara will probably never be assured unless she’s on her own and emancipated like in *Family* I don’t think they’ll be a scene like that here but you never know. I’ve not gotten that far in detailing the so called outline I have for this fic. Lol..



Molly- aw, you love the fic. Yay!!!! I like it when people love the fic. I know it’s been a long, long ride and we’re only half way there but I’m glad you’re still around and liking it. let me know when I get boring!



Tiggr- hehe… ok, see the reason I dedicated that update to jen is cause she was all for the gazebo nekid smut lovin’ she likes and I told her it wouldn’t be happening. And so instead of spoiling her I quickened up the scene so she’d see why there would be no such smut nekid smut lovin’ in the gazebo. I’ll figure out a scene to dedicate to you. Now worries! As for their separation in three weeks… you’ll just have to wait and see….



Steph- I’ve never been caught doing anything. I was such a good, lame camper. Lol. And you don’t have to count the lines I just thought it’d be funny.



Ange- don’t worry my lovey. It’ll work out all right. you’ll see.



Grimaldi- you naughty camper you! Were you the one caught or doing the catching? Hehehe



Ten- ten- glad you found it funny. You left chat before I posted that update! Talk to you soon! smoochies!



Kath- there may be a rain check on that, you never know. I mean I’ve had them make love in a truck, make out in a barn, do it in between thick red curtains of the stage… a gazebo would be pretty tame no? personally I like showers and beds. Oh! They did it in the shower too! Hehe. I’m starting to remember all this now.



Puff- I was hoping Xander didn’t come out malicious in that scene. He is worried for willow and if willow loves tara and tara loves willow then he needs to be worried for tara too. That’s what best friends do.



Chance- I like that word… adore… think I’ll be using it more often. Glad you like the fic!



AmorXita- they wont be caught yet. Hehe… have fun in san diego!



Murasaki- yeah, willow and tara sure get a lot of respect for being authority figures. Willow’s probably two years older than her own campers. Hehe…



Jen- my dear you’ll have to wait for more. HUGS til then. Three mini updates in one night has me spent. I’ll try to get something out to you kittens asap. I always say that don’t I, and then boom: update bonanza. Oh and by the way I checked out your profile, don’t know why (for real though I wanted to see how old you are), and I see you like puertorican women… hmmm. I’m *cough, cough* puertorican! Hehe…



Scout- hi!!!! Youa re so cute, don’t owrry about it is true. There will be angst and there will be drama but nothing to fret over it. i ALWAYS have a happy ending. And I’m going to try my hardest to make it as realistic as possible. I have something in mind.



Christina- thanks for the droolage… hehe…



Liz- I could ask for an actual nipple biting or two. That would be nice… lol…



thanks again to everyone that's read this!

[KrisBo5]

Just caught up with this again. Absolutely wonderful. Thanks for sharing!

Kris

"Frell that!"

PS Update soon???

[Jennpurr]

OH... it's okay, I can try and wait patiently for more, don't worry. I'll be here, sitting on the edge of my seat. Hee... you spoiled us last night, with three updates in a row. Not that I'm complaining, mind you.



Well, I'm 22 and I don't mind that you looked at my profile. I see you found out my weakness, too. And I bet you are beautiful, Rane. If you don't mind me saying so.



Thank you.



Jen (Who's gonna go and look at my Lisa Vidal pictures, now )

------------------------Willow: strong like an amazon?
Tara: Strong like an amazon, right.

[The Rose24]

A very touching first part and a hilarious second part. Keep up the good work Rane.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.

Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

[Ghostwriter]

Great updates Rane. Spicy talk and nipple biting, hmmm. Thanks again!

[Lonewolf22]

Rane: I just got caught up with all three updates, and like always Great updates, loved all the conversation and the little naughtiness of our girls when they were together, just fantastic. I REALLY, really hope that everything works out for them, I really loved the way Willow was trying to keep Tara positive about everything, you can just feel the love that they have for each other its like this powerful force that never stops. I can't wait to read more.



Lonewolf

[TareBearRS]

Better them walking in on other people than for them to be walked in on, that so sucks, believe me i know...



Good update.

I dead that date too!!!



R.

[Rane018]

Kris- update soon?! three updates in one evening isn’t enough fer ya?! Hehe… maybe soon. we’ll see…



Jen- love to spoil. Would rather spoil ya than have you wait endelssly for an update. Lol… as for me being beautiful… um, no… I’m ok though….



Rose- I’m glad you liked the parts. I always look forward to what you think.



Ghostwriter- yeah, I liked the nipple biting. Just had to throw it in there for some reason. I was quite giggly that night.



Lonewolf!!!!- hola amor! As usual, I’m glad you keep up with my work. Hehe… hugs!



Tarebears- 0ooohhh! I want details. Ok, well not details details but maybe you can elaborate a bit. Hehe… ok, here’s a spoiler which I’m sure you’ve all figured it out already… they do get walked in on, where when and by whom?… hehe… you’ll just have to wait and see…

"She has magic fingers." Then, as though the words had just echoed back to her and sounded not at all right, she perked up and glanced around at the others. "On the keyboard." Tara, The Wisdom Of War...

[Jennpurr]

Hee... for the record, I love to be spoiled. So, thank you.



Well, my idea of beautiful is always different than other peoples, so I'd just have to say that, I may disagree with ya, if I ever saw a picture of ya.



Looking forward to more of this, as soon as you update.



Take care,

Jen

------------------------Willow: strong like an amazon?
Tara: Strong like an amazon, right.

[tiredsoul]

Excellent updates. Nothing worse than getting busted--by your camp counselor no less.



Summer camp was never this fun for me.

"I'm not coming back"

[spazz07]

*Covers my face in embarrassment* Thats just like me to make a silly mistake like that, gald to see more of Jamie soon though I'm just gonna go back to hiding my face under the bed covers until i get another update Jamie, Jenny, Jamie, Jenny, Jamie, Jenny. There i don't think i'll make the same mistake again, but being a bit of a spazz i could totally understand if i did.



Cheers

Nath

If life was meant to be a bed of daisy's we'd have chicken crap thown on us all the time.

[Tulipp]

Not sure how I missed two updates, but it was nice to read them together. I like Willow telling Tara she can come visit, sleep over, etc, although something tells me it won't be makeovers and popcorn. Nice use of dialogue from the show, btw; I love it when people pull that off. Thanks!

[Triscuit7]

Hi Rane - Well, I'm totally caught up with your camp fics now. Very, very good. I especially like how Willow, um, knows how to press Tara's secret "button" - neat trick, almost wish I could manage that (TMI sorry). I'm so glad they caught the campers and not the other way round. Also, glad that Jamie is going to reappear soon. I remember one of my first crushes was on a camp counselor named George(tte); the second was on a student gym teacher. Now is that a surprise or what? Just call me old predictable. Thanks for the great story.



Ciao, Melissa

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I brought marshmallows!

[Rane018]

Jen- I know exactly what you mean, but I like everyone. Not like *like* but I find beauty in little details not in the overall package of what a person looks like. And as far as a photo of me xita has one she devilishly showed the kittens at chat. It was such a hilariously embarrassing experience. There’s a more obscure one at the kittenchat files. We’re trying to get the kittens to post their photos and Warduke spams us with photos of him sleeping and puking. It’s quite funny.



Tiredsoul- trust me, camp wasn’t this fun for me either. Well, maybe when I went to israel there was a cool week or two but never, never did most of what I’m writing here happen. I feel all lame. I wanted to write a cetain part that happened there but i'm too far into the story to go back. did that make any sense? no. Lol…



Nath- darling, trust me, I make the same mistake. No need to be embarrassed. HUGS. That’s why it’s not good to have character with similar names. I just happened to not have thought anything through until after I started writing this story so I couldn’t go back and change it.



Tulipp- I think since Willow doesn’t exactly know the whole truth behind Tara’s family, I haven’t really delved into it here yet, she can be naïve and thinks that they will be able to visit each other. After all, in a normal situation that would be pretty much expected. Tara knows different though, she knows there is no way her father would let her go. I’m trying to keep this fic as close to canon as possible so you have some clues from buffyverse although the reason will be a bit different. You’ll see once I get to that part. It’ll be so obvious that you will see what a horrible writer I really am. Hehe…



Melissa- thanks for reading honey. glad you enjoyed Tara’s *tender buttons* as gertrude stein would call it. I think I’ll be using that in the fic at some point. Lol. my ex is the only one that I know of that can do that. it’s really, really bizarre…. Jamie is certainly going to reappear soon but please do know that she does not have a crush on Willow. It’s more of a mentor-y relationship, not a crush. I guess I’ll need to clarify that somewhere in the fic. Thanks for bringing that up. See, I have the psuedo outline, I know what’s going to happen when and what conversation will happen (sort of anyhow) and I can see how readers may see Jamie having a crush on Willow but it’s not. They have a connection but not that kind. Plus, if jamie were to have a crush on anyone it’d be tara… hehe… get it… cause she’s like willow. ok, enough joking. I suck. Toodles!