Camp Flutie, Part Two

[Chance]

Hey Rane --



Fantastic update. Happy Birthday (six days before mine. woo hoo.) hope there's many more of both.



M.

[foreverpiper]

Oh my Lord! That was great! *wheezes for breath* Brilliant! hehe, if it had been any lighter in that theature those campers would've gotten more than they bargained for!



Oh, and...*begins to sing very offkey*



Happy birthday to you!

Happy birthday to you!

Happy birthday dear Raaaane!

Happy birthday to you!



Have a great one!

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

[Rane018]

Molly- thanks! I like giving as well as receiving. And that just sounded really naughty in my head. Don’t worry about the ending. LOTS more to come. Hehe, pun intended.



Chance- happy upcoming b-day darling! lot’s and lots more b-days for us both and everyone! or as my family always wishes: until your 120th birthday.



Tulipp- I wish. I’d love to have a little vixen-y Tara here in real life for my b-day though the guy I’m sorta dating may not like that. lol. Or maybe he would. Yuck! As for the ending… hakuna matata, sweets. this part’s still not over yet…



Piper- thanks for the song!!!! Very sweet of you though my cat ran in the other direction. Hehe…

[MorganArcher]

amazing how you can make an update both sexy and hilarious...

what is that? sexlarious?

haha, fun fun i love this story,

Morgan

[wiccachica]

I wanted to put in my happy birthday cents to you as well as tell you how much I am truly enjoying your fic.



May your next year bring you nothing less that unadulterated joy.



-chica

" I mock you with my Monkey Pants!" - OZ


" Nymph! (pause)Nymphette?"


"Nympho." -The Pirate Movie
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" If you imps are lookin for a fight, then ya come to the Chapel Oblige-ya!!" - Legend

[MissQuirky]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY to ya!!



The update was great!! Absolutely LOVED it!! Having some fun in the theatre!! Thats always gooood!! I'm glad they didn't pay attention to the movie cos Gladiator is one disturbing movie i couldn't even last through it! I think they used their movie time very well !!



Can't wait 4 the next update!!

~Ashley~

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

[pacou]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! *hugs*



Hope you have fun on your concert! But Im quite sure you will have fun, no matter how!



And thanks for our special kitten present on your special day!



Im gonna read it in a second!



Rocky Horror Picture Show truly rocks! Te he, Rocky rocks



-Viv-

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Don't dream it, be it

Rocky Horror Picture Show

[nika]

"Tara just laughed at Willow's gaiety"



If it was me I wouldn't laugh at Wilow's "gaiety" I'd revel in it!



It's your day and you're giving us presents? Lovely! Just for that I make you a little B-Day gift promise. I'm going to write a scene with "Red Ace" Willow and Tara for your eyes only. How's that? You know a little vignette to say happy day to you.

[Kieli]

Mazel Tov, Rane dear *bear hug* I didn't know that your b-day was so soon (since you never told me *ahem*). Mine is in about two weeks (6 October) and what a present you give to us....now we just have to figure out something to give YOU

Love is tricky. It is never mundane or daily. You can never get used to it. You have to walk with it, then let it walk with you. You can never balk. It moves you like the tide. It takes you out to sea then lays you on the beach again. Today's struggling pain is the foundation for a certain stride through the heavens. You can run from it but you can never say no. It includes everyone."--Amy Tan "The Hundred Secret Senses"

[singgirl]

Oh...that was great, it was all sexy and then just turned out hilarious!! Bravo! Happy birthday, thanx for the gift!

[Thanatopsis]

Happy birthday and thanks for the great update. Loved Tara the vixen during the movie and hopefully Willow's not too embarassed.

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"Yeah, 'tis the season. Whatever that means." Amends
Insist upon yourself and never imitate. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson

[VampNo12]

Oh Rane how sweet giving us a "gift", which was funny (as well as sexy) on your birthday (by the way have lots of fun at your concert tonight)! First, I must say to Faith having some fun with one of the campers, I can just picture Miss Post reaction/scream in my head.



Also liked how Buffy was describing Tara, and as she started talking about what she was wearing, Willow got a little annoyed with her saying, ("Ok, Buffy, now you're getting a bit too descriptive here."), that's right Tara is Willow's girl, but trouble averted with Willow realizing Tara was at the movies. And I liked how even though she was thrilled to see Tara, she still worried about her getting in trouble with her father (especially seeing first hand what kind of father Tara has at the stables).



As for the sex scene it was both funny and hot, (especially when Tara gasped when Willow entered her, and Willow tried to divert attention by saying "Sorry that scene was... yucky.", as well as the disaster of the soda spilling, her yelling "Shit", and at the same time her hand getting stuck in Tara's underwear), ! Poor Willow running away, I can so picture her embarassment, but hopefully Tara will make things better in the next part. Can't wait to see what happens next!

[Magrat70]

Happy Birthday Rane but aren't we supposed to give you the present no the other way round . That was a very sexy and funny update. Thank you

These five words in my head scream "are we having fun yet?"

Chad Kroeger

[Warduke]

Great update Rane, just love the two of them getting frisky at the theater not only was it very sexy, but also very funny

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[MadeinNZ]

Wow - if that's a birthday update - I want it to be your birthday everyday. That scene was fantastic and amazingly sexy. Yay you.



Happy birthday.

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Anya: I have finesse! I have finesse coming out of my bottom!

[raspberryhat]

Happy Birthday Rane. You are the coolest. I loved that.



R.

"There's nothing very merry 'bout going round and round..."

[Urn of Osiris]

Loved the update.

Puts a whole new meaning to Gladiator



Mostly wanted to say Happy Birthday!!!



Gotta love the Virgos!!! Woo Hoo.

Urn of Osiris
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"Ninety-nine percent of the failures come from people who have the habit of making excuses."
— George Washington Carver
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[Tiggrscorpio]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, SWEETIE!



I hope you had a really great day. What a wonderful update. Our girls are so naughty and almost getting caught. I love it.

Thanks, Rane!

*****

She's my everything!

[The Rose24]

First of all, Happy Birthday Rane! I am a Virgo too, but my birthday was in August.



Oh. My. Goodness.



Tara is going to be little worried about Willow running out of the theater like that.



Please update soon. I want to know what happens.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.

Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

[Pixie gishmock]

Hey Rane!!!! I want to echo the "sexy and funny" comments about this update. And, uh, yeah - Ceasar's sister is kind of hot. I'm thrilled that you've gotten back to this, and I can't wait for more - whenever you're ready, of course. ( )



HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!



(sorry that it's 10 minutes late!)



Here's wishing you a year of joy, health, and blessings.



Thanks for all your good thoughts and hugs on MC's thread. *sends you lots of hugs back*

Life is full of changes...The better you are at letting go of things, the freer your hands will be to catch something new. ~from Off The Map by Joan Ackerman
"It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured before passing out. ~from "Answering Darkness" by Sassette

[Lonewolf22]

Rane: Great update, I LOVED the naughty-ness and vixen-y-ness of our girls at the movie theater, I never thought that Tara had it in her. I REALLY, really hope that Willow is OK and that this little incident doesn't cause too much trouble for our girls. I really liked the way Buffy described Tara to Willow, very cool. I can't wait to read more.



Lonewolf



Edited to add: I almost forgot, HAPPY BIRTHDAY RANE, AND MANY MORE.

Edited by: Lonewolf22 at: 9/21/02 11:40:57 pm

[fairydust]

Happy be-lated b-day

I'm a virgo too!!! We rock!



I loved the update, those darn movie theatres....I happen to work in one, and let me tell you, people get alot of action in there....sometimes its disturbing tho, like when the couple is 50 years old....lol...oh well



Cant wait for more

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[iceprincess2076]

woo hoo!!!!! loved the update!



funny and sexy... ..poor Willow running out of the theater.......poor thing but I have faith that Tara can make all things better......



update soon please



oh, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!



ICE

[xita]

Happy belated Birthday Rane!

I hope you ahd fun. I totally missed this but still, kinda on time And thanks for the lovely update

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Tara and Willow

Accept NO subsitutes

Edited by: xita  at: 9/22/02 2:28:41 am

[Scout]

"When I was a kid we used to get the ice cream cake from this ice cream joint named Carvel and I'm jonzing right about now for a piece of that. hehe"



It's so funny, I was just reminiscing about those the other day. I guess Carvel went out of business, but man those cakes rocked! The highlight of many a birthday meal when I was growing up!



Thanks for the present, Rane. I just hope Tara runs after Willow - they need a happy ending to their evening. Thanks again and hope you had a great birthday!

Edited by: Scout at: 9/22/02 6:50:27 am

[Grimaldi]

great update , and a belated happy birthday to you

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

2nd place??? That's just a fancy term for loser!

"You feel her she's crawling nearer" Seven Witches

[Rane018]

hi kittens!



i just wanted to thank you all again for the b-day wishes! the concert was awesome but the audience sucked. dont know why. i'm used to nyc crowds were everyone's dancing and singing and laughing and having a great time. i mean even corin (one of the singers) was like *ok people you need to start dancing and singing*. and how silly is it to be throwing nickles at the performers?!!!! i dont get the west coast. but still, they rocked my little world anyhow. very cool birthday present.



as for this next lilttle update it's a bit angsty at the end but no worries. this isnt' the bad part yet. hehe... things are going to start rolling around soon and some sort of plot will be coming into place. lol...



and anyone who gets the tender buttons reference gets a smooch from me!



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Tara quietly giggled, trying to control the laughter building inside her as she entered the ladies bathroom. She could sense the redhead's disquietude even not near her. Whether the redhead was crying or laughing hysterically beyond that door she couldn't tell but she knew she was needed to calm her down either way.



Entering the room she witnessed her lover leaning over a sink while crying sobs wrenched her body. Poor Willow. The redhead always took things so seriously. “I think that’s going to leave a mark.” Tara joked as another pang from both the activity and thrash cut loose over her whole lower region.



“Oh, Tara, I’m so sorry!” Willow bellowed as she ran over to hug her. She felt like a fool. She didn’t want Tara mad at her. The last thing she wanted to do was hurt Tara in any way, especially physically.



Tara’s arms quickly wrapped around her and held her close. She couldn’t help but shiver at the touch, at the feel of Willow’s warm upper body opposite the cold wet jeans against her bare legs. “What for?”



Willow’s tear filled eyes connected with Tara’s blues. “For…” How could she ask her that? Didn’t she know? Hadn’t she been there? “For what happened. In there. I’m such a doofus. I just…”



Tara shook her head. “Shhh, darling, you’re not a doofus.”



“But Tara-”



“Willow, no.” She gently reached for Willow’s tear streaked face and held it between her hands. Her fingers caressed the soft, soft freckled cheeks as she kissed her trembling lips. Again and again, three times before moving on to the forehead. “I love you and you are certainly not a doofus.” She mouthed, serious, once their eyes met again.



Gently nuzzling Tara’s sweet neck with her face Willow sniffled, “Tare-“, her voice ached.



“Willow…” Tara whispered as she leaned forward and captured Willow’s lips with her own. “Listen to me.” She voiced as she squeezed her lover to get her point across, “I don’t trust doofuses with my soul. You are Willow Rosenberg, vixen-y lighter of the flame and keeper of my heart.”



Green eyes slowly wandered up and connected with blue. They were calling to her, both full of love and worry. The redhead pulled back some of Tara’s hair over her ear and ran her fingers down her arm until she held her fingers in between her own. She brought it them up to her lips and kissed them one by one, eyes never losing contact with Tara. “But-“



“No.”, Tara’s free hand roamed down her lovers back and cupped the pert bottom. “No butts except yours,” she added devilishly and cautiously backed her up against the sink as she kissed her.



Willow’s hands dislodged themselves and moved up to lovingly hold Tara’s face, gently stroking her cheekbones and then running towards the back of her neck.



Their mouths opened wider, explored deeper, held them closer. Tara’s fingers traced patters over Willow’s lower back and moved their way up to cup the redheads face.



They continued kissing, losing themselves, quickly melting in the power of the two. Sighing in ecstasy, her eyes closed in bliss, Willow casually mentioned, “Tara, I’m all wet.” not really realizing what a loaded statement that was.



Tara’s laughter shook them both, “Even the more reason to take off your pants.” Her lips wandered, now kissing Willow’s cheeks and nose.



Willow’s eyes widened. “Here?” Ok, so they had made love in a lot of unconventional places before but this just a bit too much. It was a bathroom, in a movie theater, where anyone could just walk in on them.



The blonde smiled knowing what thoughts were running through Willow’s mind and tilted her head over towards the electric hand dryer on the wall. “You want to stay wet or not?”



Willow realized what Tara meant now. But, then again it would be quite advantageous in more ways than one to take off her jeans. Willow grinned widely. “Definitely not.”



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She could still feel Willow, taste her, smell her. Her essence lingered on her lips. She could still sense her warm, wet center on her mouth, her hidden *tender button* that willingly emerged from within the prickly curls to play with her tongue. Willow clouded her being, her thoughts, gripped her heart and soul. Willow… Everything was Willow.



“Where have you been?” her father’s stern voice shattered her Willow-y contemplation.



“Out.” She mentioned as she closed the front door to her house behind her. She hadn’t been so curt with her father like this since her mother died.



“Where?” he asked. The dim light from the fireplace ran flickering shadows over his face. He looked so old now, so worn down. For a second there she thought he looked worried too.



“I left you a note. We went to see a movie.”



“We?” he said as he rose from his seat and slowly walked over towards her.



She suddenly realized it wasn’t worry, it was rage. “F-friends. F-from camp.” She was scared. She was worried about what her father would say, what he would do. She hated being frightened. She always hated it.



“Camp?” he asked as he neared her. “Those… Is that the kind of people you associate with at work, Tara? The little girl with no manners who speaks without being spoken to and the other one who looked like a whore?”



She instantly knew whom he was talking about. “N-no, sir. Faith is not a staff member. She w-was visiting. She came w-with Giles. Buffy’s f-friend.”



He now stood about two feet from her. “Friend? A grown man is her friend?”



Tara recoiled. “Her guardian. H-he’s her guardian, sir.” She didn’t like her father’s insinuation. He would never understand the bond between Buffy and Giles. It wasn’t just a teacher/student, Watcher/Slayer relationship. They took care of each other, they trusted each other. Her father would never understand that.



“Has she no father?”



“No, sir.” Her eyes turned to the floor.



Mr. Maclay breathed deeply. “Her misbehavior reeks lack of parental supervision.”



“Yes.” What else could she say?



“Tara, look at me.” He waited until Tara’s eyed slowly lifted and joined with his. “You are my daughter and I love you but I will not tolerate such behavior from you. Your conduct tonight was unacceptable. You are to ask permission first, not give excuses afterwards. Consider yourself warned.” He said as he turned to walk away.



“Yes, sir.” She said, finally letting out a breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding. Her body trembled soflty as she watched him walk away.



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TBC....

[Tulipp]

Ooh, Rane, you are spoiling us now. Sorry the concert audience was bad...who's the band? I didn't see whether you mentioned the name before.



Nice update...I'm glad that Tara was able to...talk...Willow out of her crying, and I thought that skiping the rest of the...talking...and having Tara remember it with her various senses worked so well there. I hope that Tara is okay, though.



As for the tender buttons, well, I don't want to take the fun away from everyone else, but I'm thinking of a piece of writing by a certain rather deep-voiced expatriate with a companion whose name was in the title of one of her books and who was friends with a certain understated American novelist who had a colony of six-toed cats in Florida.

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"Maybe I'm the bad guy. Maybe I'm the thing you should kill."
--Riley in "Goodbye, Iowa"

[BFR from Paris]

Poor Tara, I feel so bad for her



Rane, you have to do something!



And to change the subject, if I didn't know the word "vixen" before I started watching Btvs and reading W/T fanfic, I certainly do now!

[MadeinNZ]

I love 'consoling Tara'. She's was so wonderful in that scene. And extra points for using the word disquietude. That was cool.



Hey - I got the tender buttons thing. Waiting for my smooch ...

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Anya: I have finesse! I have finesse coming out of my bottom!