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Re: update

Postby onyxsundrops » Sun Jun 22, 2003 8:44 pm

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I had to shake my head and chuckle. “ You never give up do you?” “ No. But I do give it up plenty.” She said grinning.
:lol



Miss Kitty's certainly something. Thanks for the update Nika!:clap Play time, soon?:grin

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Re: update

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Jun 22, 2003 10:03 pm

Miss Kitty is um...quite a character. Did there used to be something between her and Willow? :hmm

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


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Re: update

Postby Washi » Sun Jun 22, 2003 11:00 pm

nika, yet again a kickass update. :grin Miss Kitty rocks. :lol

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

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replies

Postby nika » Sun Jun 22, 2003 11:27 pm

Vampivy: It's the quiet ones that will always surprise you. As for Tara's involvement all I can say is... *loud bang, glass shattering* Ugh! the dirty rats got me! *me bleeding on floor for knowing too much*



Willster: Eventually...like when I bloody well figure it out myself.:rofl



Xita: I'm glad you're enjoying this mystery. I like the fact that you get the 'why' of the urgency in their love making. I do try to work in a plot in betwwen the smut sometimes.:p I really like using different characters from the show cause they practically write themselves with their own quirks. It's one of the reasons I like AU fiction.

Thank you for dropping by.:flower



Onyxsundrops: Play time? Yeah I can do that! :bounce



Therose: No they're just old friends. Miss Kitty just likes to tease as all good kitties all around the world.:kitty



Washi: Thanks! As for 'Miss Kitty' she just jumped out of my key board, sat on my lap and told me how to write her. She's gald you liked her :bigkiss



nika
 


Excellent!

Postby missspangles » Mon Jun 23, 2003 1:41 am

I'm really enjoying this - each update is being very avidly read! :) I like the way that your AU Willow and Tara have this amazing intense physical connection but also there's something incredibly sweet developing here as well. It's rare to read both done so well :)

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Re: update

Postby Fuzz WT » Mon Jun 23, 2003 2:11 am

:drool yeah, up to the bedroom, we go. :boot



I love Miss Kitty. Hope to see her again in any updates ahead. ( I was kind of imagined what she would say about W/T loving :glasses but oh, don't mind me. :shy )



Great updated again. Still having a thing for your fic. :wink



*Fuzz*

*******




Hey! You're gonna back off! She said no and that's it. ~ TARA

Fuzz WT
 


Re: update

Postby SJ » Mon Jun 23, 2003 3:48 am

Great entertaining read :read

SJ
 


Re: update

Postby Lt Sticks » Mon Jun 23, 2003 4:03 am

great update, lol I liked the idea of "Miss Kitty" :D





~Sticks

A fire in my heart, reborn from the ashes...just call me Phoenix



I'm Under Your Spell, nothing I can do, you just took my soul with you...

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Re: update

Postby skeeter451 » Mon Jun 23, 2003 11:36 am

Nika...



Great update...like the rest I liked Miss Kitty. She fits so perfectly into this story and I love Red's admission to being a client at the brothel in her younger days. That was cool.



:pride

Edited by: xita  at: 6/23/03 11:19 am
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Re: update

Postby Big Dummy » Mon Jun 23, 2003 1:55 pm

How very cool. I hadn't read this because I've never ever seen a Bogart movie. I finally said "what the hay?" and dove right in. Read it all in one sitting, and am antsy for more, cause this is good stuff. I love having my eyes opened to new experiences. :geek

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Re: update

Postby sam7777 » Mon Jun 23, 2003 7:08 pm

Wow. Miss Kitty was another amazing way to introduce a Buffy character into noir. Just like Oz it's really different and it works. I love the dynamic you have between Red and Tara. Red is tough but loving and Tara is shy but passionate. Great stuff. Can't wait for the next part.:drool

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I see dead lesbian cliches

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Re: update

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue Jun 24, 2003 7:52 pm

:bigwave nika,

Great update! Took me forever to get to it. I love it. Please update soon. :pray MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!!







bluewillowwich :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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Re: update

Postby Willster » Wed Jun 25, 2003 12:33 pm

Loved the last update!!



I hope we see Miss Kitty again, she's quite funny!



And can't wait for the next update.. cuz you know, bedtime with Willow and Tara, it can't be boring!!

Willster
 


Re: update

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Thu Jun 26, 2003 7:23 pm

Nika:



I have to tell you again what perfect indoor recreation this is for me. The way you write this...



...I can just sit back after a tough day and with a click o' the mouse - oh. I'm transported.



To be so thoroughly enmeshed in a story where the characters are so the same and so different. (Willow - hard boiled yet clapping her hands like a school girl at the thought of cherry pie! Buffy good at what she does but still quite dense. Giles: get on that Raven's eye research now! please!)



This is what 50's TV would have been like if they'd had miniseries!



~Suse

"Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own." ~ Robert Heinlein ('Stranger in a Strange Land')

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replies

Postby nika » Tue Jul 01, 2003 1:24 pm

As always kittens are the best. Thank you all for all the great words of praise and encouragement.:bigkiss

I'm a little busy now so I'm just dropping by to say that I'll be updating either tonight or tomorrow afternoon. I'll also do the individual replies before posting the update.

The plot is thickening and my fingers are getting stuck on the keyboard.

nika
 


update

Postby nika » Wed Jul 02, 2003 4:47 pm

First I would like to offer an apology to the kittens who have left me feedback cause I said I would do the individual replies before posting the update. I'm sorry but I'm in a wild hurry so I'll just post the update and give the individual replies later. Thank you all who have been kind enough to leave a note. I do owe you one and I will pay up. Promise.:flower







Edited by: nika  at: 11/17/04 8:25 pm
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Re: update

Postby shuyaku » Wed Jul 02, 2003 9:40 pm

Hmmmm... curiouser and curiouser. I love how Willow and Tara are so intimate, but it's kinda weird to hear Willow voicing doubts :hmm You've done such a great job of really not giving us any hints to the overall mystery - I love it!



Great update :clap

-shuyaku

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...

Postby Rane018 » Wed Jul 02, 2003 9:44 pm

*the clam chowder was divine!* nika! you are hilarious! i LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic so much i cant even begin to tell you. i know i've been MIA but everytime i see an update i read. i'm terrible at leaving feedback but you know me. no puedo esperar a ver lo que va a pasar ahora. el amor entre las dos (parece que la peliroja se esta enamorando con la rubia y no sabe que hacer), el mysterio del la jolla, tantos personajes interesantes... el film noir feel to it is just so spot on and well written. and the love scenes... sigh... smoochies amorcito.

"Take care of my heart, won't you please? Take care of it because it's all that I have. And if you let me, I'll take care of your heart too." Pure sweetness in the look between Willow and Tara.

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Re: ...

Postby SJ » Thu Jul 03, 2003 1:15 am

Love this fic,great read :cool

SJ
 


Re: ...

Postby The Rose24 » Thu Jul 03, 2003 11:11 pm

Why do I get the feeling Tara is involved somehow? Please tell me I'm wrong. I hate to think Tara will betray. Willow :pray

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: ...

Postby Vampivy » Thu Jul 03, 2003 11:54 pm

See Nika, I’m not the only one who thinks that maybe there’s something a little shady about Tara’s involvement in this whole mess. Oh god I thought I was just being paranoid.



Well now that that’s out of the way, great chapter Nika. Your love scenes are amazing. Very erotic. They are very descriptive and make the reader feel, almost, like they are there in the moment. Wow.



I see the mystery continue. Looks like Donnie might get himself popped if he keeps acting like an amateur thug. Dumbass. By the way, is miss Kitty making another appearance cause she was very cool.

“Wet Cherry” I’ve never heard it put quite like that before. I know, I know I’m back tracking a bit but that just kinda made me blush.



Excellent work my dear Nika. I look forward to more.



Patty



Vampivy
 


Re: ...

Postby sizzlersister » Fri Jul 04, 2003 12:56 am

I've had a nervous feeling about Tara's involvement myself. From the beginning, Willow's narration has made it sound like she gets screwed. And uh, not in a good way. But admittedly, this is one aspect of this story that keeps me hooked. How the heck are you gonna resolve this? :glasses I can't wait to find out. :clap

sizzlersister
 


Re: ...

Postby nika » Sun Jul 06, 2003 8:57 pm

Hello everybody sorry for the delay in the responses. Rl seems to get in the way of the really important stuff.



Missspangles: I’m glad that’s it’s worthy of an ‘avidly’ kind of mood. I also appreciate that you can read the emotions building beyond the feel of skin.:flower



Fuzz: Well the kittens seem to concur with the idea that ‘Miss Kitty’ make another appearance. I agree cause she was fun to write, but I must consult with the Muse first and see if she’ll go for it. Oh and I wouldn’t ever want you to lose your ‘thing’ so take care of it o.k honey?:wink



Sj: Glad you think so. I keep it going cause of all these great replies.:bigkiss



Skeeter: I’m thrilled that ‘Miss Kitty’ is getting such a great response. I will try to bring her in again for a couple more scenes.:glasses



BigDummy: Welcome. I’m so happy that you decided to check out the story. Maybe I can convince you to try a film noir sometime. I find them very entertaining, specially ‘ The Maltese Falcon’ that one is a classic amongst the classics if you’re ever in the mood for something different.:cool



Sam: The shy ones are usually the most passionate and it’s Willow, wouldn’t someone like Willow bring out the ‘sex kitten’ in you?:eyebrow



Bluewillowwitch: Hello again darling. I promise sometime this week much update goodness to come. All that begging looks quite sexy on you, did you know?:flirt



Willster: Bedtime, dawn, brunch time…Any time they’re running around my dirty little mind you can bet it gets interesting.:jho



Shuyaku: Well Tara hasn’t exactly told the truth from day one or has she? Besides you gotta understand in Red’s experience, dames ain’t nothin’ but trouble.:whistle



Rane: Hola Amor. Yo te perdono por no visitarme mas a menudo. Cualquier nota tuya es bien apreciada por mí. Tu sabes que tú eres una de las razones por las cuales yo decidí continuar esta historia. Y conmigo siempre tienen que haber muchos ‘smoochies’ porque así soy yo, no puedo escribir sin escribir ‘smoochies’. Cuidate cariño.:kiss



Sj: Another great reply from you. Thank you for being so nice about this story.:flower



Rose: I can’t say…o.k just one hint: Ah, who’s there?*Clunk!*:thud



Vampivy: Wet cherry *giggle* I’m awful I know. I had that pun in my head for the longest time and this was just the perfect opportunity to use it.:p



Sizzlersister: Hey I love your nick and I can’t wait to find out either.:grin



Edited by: nika  at: 7/6/03 10:52 pm
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Re: ...

Postby Fuzz WT » Mon Jul 07, 2003 9:16 am

Hmm, add me to one of those who curious 'bout Tara's involvement in this. But anyway I like it so much!!! I love how Tara could look so innocent yet Willow felt doubt. And the fact that she's passionately destined to be with Tara; got me wonder how you're gonna go for it?!?!



:letter



Nika, remember to sway it good. :wink But I guess you already know that anyway, eh? :heart



Praise you.



*Fuzz*

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Hey! You're gonna back off! She said no and that's it. ~ TARA

Fuzz WT
 


Update

Postby nika » Fri Jul 11, 2003 7:21 pm

O.k..Nervous about this part. It's a bit on the historical and not so historical side. Hope I can keep you all interested.



Note: Some parts were taken from the book: Mythology by Edith Hamilton. The better one's I'd wager, the others are made up by me.:letter



I was really seeing red now. If they wanted me to stay away, they were mistaken. They didn’t know me. Whoever was behind all of this was going to be sorry, I promised myself that as I drove down to the docks.



I scoped out another low dive until I saw exactly whom I needed to see. I grabbed him from behind and slammed him into the wall.



“ Heya, Red long time no see. Why are ya wrinkling the suit?.” He asked in a puny voice.



“ You were outside of Bogarty’s shop the day he got plugged. What did you see?” I asked nicely while pushing him harder against the stone.



He squeaked out like the mouse he was.“ Ouch! Hey ease up. I see by that shiner on your face you haven’t had a nice day, but don’t take it out on me.”



I put my hand around his scrawny neck and squeezed until I saw his eyes bulging out of his head. “ I’m gonna ask one more time real nice and then I’m gonna get rough Andy boy, what did you see?”



He was starting to turn purple and I eased my hold. He wheezed and gulped for air. “Awww geez. It’s not safe in this town no more. Where’s the masked avenger when you need him?” I was about to squeeze again when he cracked,” O.k, o.k…look just don’t tell anyone I told ya or I’m as good as gone for good.”



I thought. > That’d be one improvement in this town<



“ I didn’t see much I was rounding the corner when I heard shots, I hit the deck and when I raised my head a car was peeling out.”



I eyed him up, he was holding something back, “ what else?”



He gulped and avoided looking directly at me.



I grabbed his crotch and squeezed harder than I had squeezed his neck. He yelped both in surprise and in pain. “ One more time Andrew… now, you’ll give an answer and I’ll give you back your balls, what else?”



He sung like a canary. “ I-I saw one of Mickey’s boys getting in, in a hurry…y-you know hi-him…’wolf man’.”



I twisted and raised my hand, raising his pain. “ You’re lying!” I yelled in his face.



He was in tears now. “ I swear Red. I swear…Oh…God…I swear!” He was desperate. I let go and he crumpled to the floor grabbing in between his legs and whimpering.



“ I tossed him over with my foot a hovered over him. “ If you’re lying…the pain that you just felt won’t be squat compared to the one I’ll make you feel.” He nodded and I left him to wallow in his pitiful cries.



+++



A part of me couldn’t believe that Danny would be involved with Mr.Bogarty’s death. It was one thing to be a runner or a muscle man once in a while, but a killer? Was Danny so far gone that he would execute a hit against a man that had sat us on his knees when we were kids? A man who had always been a good and decent worker, someone who gave us candy apples on Halloween and Jobs in the summer when were teens. I was shaken. The further I got into this case the deeper I fell into some kind of black hole where every minute it got tougher to breathe.



I stopped at the first phone booth I saw and told Anya that whoever made it to the office first was to meet me at Lucky’s back alley. The alley was dark even in plain daylight, just like my mind. I would need back up if what Andrew had said was true. I had stood in there in the shadows for about an hour, my thoughts were a whirlwind, bits and pieces that didn’t seem to fit together at any angle. I wanted desperately to be wrong about Danny. That Mickey would put the hit on Bogarty didn’t add up either. The pawnshop was on Carmine’s territory, off limits to Mickey. To kill someone in Carmine’s family or on his turf meant war. They had negotiated peace and each had kept their end of the bargain for almost three years. Why jeopardize that now? Even an ancient stone wasn’t worth a mob war; all the families would be dragged into it. I was sure nobody wanted that. Was Mickey acting alone without the consent of the other bosses then? Again, more questions and zero answers.



Xander eventually showed up and pulled me out of my reverie.



“ Hey boss. What’s a nice girl like you doing in an alley like this?” He quipped.





“ Waiting for you so we can tie up a wolf.” I said without a trace of mirth in my voice.



He was still smiling,“ What?”



“ I think Danny whacked Bogarty or was with the thugs that did it at the very least.” I stated choking on every word.”



Xander lost his smile and paled. “ He wouldn’t…I mean…he wouldn’t, would he boss?”



I looked down at my shoes. “ I wish I knew for sure. Let’s go in there for awhile and see if he shows up, if not we’ll visit some of his other usual haunts.”



“ You called cause you don’t think he’ll go quietly…” he said almost in a whisper.



“ I don’t know what to think anymore.” We walked deeper into the alley and entered the bar from the back door.





+++





Danny wasn’t at Lucky’s we waited for awhile and by what the bartender had said if he wasn’t there already he wasn’t likely to show that day. I Had Xander call the office to check for any incoming information. He came back in hurry, already putting on his hat, I jumped from my stool. “ What’s the new bad?”



“ Your neighbor Mr. Clem called the office five minutes ago someone broke into your house.”



“ Never a dull moment.” I muttered following Xander to the car.



+++



My place was a mess, but nothing seemed to be missing. I kicked a couple of turned chairs in frustration.



“ Well it looks like they didn’t have enough time to wreck everything. The upstairs is still intact.” Xander yelled from the second floor



Mr. Clem who was standing at the door spoke up. “ I probably scared them off. I heard the noise and stuck my head out the balcony. I yelled…’hey whoever is there I called the fuzz so beat it’.” He said proudly.



I sighed,” Mr. Clem I appreciate that really, but in the future be careful they could’ve been dangerous.”



“ Don’t worry I wasn’t so heroic. I basically yelled and ran inside locking everything up tightly. Say would you all like some lemonade?”





“ No thank you. You should get home.” I said as I started to pick up the mess scattered on the floor.



Xander came down and stared at my face slack jawed. “ Boss what the hell?”



I guess he hadn’t seen my bruise in the dim light of the alley and bar and he had been too focused on driving to notice it when we got outside. I rubbed my cheek automatically and shrugged my shoulders. “ I got jumped outside the university. I’ll give you the details later.”



He shook his head,“ Gee whiz you were right, never a dull moment. I’ll get you some ice.”



“ Nah. There’s no time for that. I gotta go see someone. Where’s Tara?” I asked feeling concerned for her safety.



Xander rubbed his nose and gave me a strange look. “ She’s with Buffy. I think she felt a little uncomfortable staying with Anya and she asked Buffy if she could go with her.”



“ Alright. That’s good Buffy can handle herself should trouble arise.”



“ Well after what’s happened, what do you want me to do? Stay and guard the fort or come with you?” He asked visibly worried about me.



I thought it over for a few seconds. “ You better stay. I can handle this.”



He still seemed uneasy and I loved him for it. “ Just so we’re on the same page…who are you going to see?” he asked.



“ I’m going to rock the boat a little. I’m going over to have a little talk with Carmine.” I answered with a gleam in my eye and tiny smile.





The woman detective walked down her old neighborhood streets lost in thoughts that oscillated between the present and the past. She looked fondly at the soda shop’s front window, remembering better times gone by.



The redhead acknowledged the clerks presence and offered him a smile. “ Hey Tony, is he in?”



The man behind the counter smiled in return. “ Well hey to you too and long time no see. Go right in. Artie step aside for the lady.” He instructed the heavy -set man that stood guard to the side entrance.



Willow took off her hat and knocked on the office door before entering. Two men looked towards the entrance in a tense anticipation. One was seated behind a big oak desk smoking a cigar. He was big and had graying hair neatly slicked back. The other stood stocky by his side with one hand ready inside his jacket, he was tall, bulky and the crooked nose that sported a scar that ran all the way to his cheek gave him a menacing look for sure. Both men relaxed their stance as they realized who the unannounced visitor was.



Carmine rose from his chair opening his arms. “ Cookie!”



The gumshoe gave him a small crooked smile and accepted the big man’s offer for a hug. “ Hello Carmine.”



The big bulk beside Carmine also gave Willow a brief hug that he ended by lightly punching her in the arm.

“ Hey kid. How come you come around no more and woah! What’s wit that shiner?”



Willow took a seat and shrugged her shoulders at both men. “ You know how it is…”



Carmine puffed out a big cloud of smoke and squinted his eyes. “ Cookie, who did this to you? You tell me right now and I’ll set them straight.”



“ Yeah straight to the river.” The other man said cracking his knuckles.



“Settle down boys I appreciate the sentiment, but it comes with the job. I came here on different business altogether.”



Carmine shook his head from side to side he loved his goddaughter but for the life of him he would never truly understand her. “ I always respect your wishes, but if you change your mind all you have to do is say the word. Now what’s on your mind cookie?”



Willow smiled at the term of endearment. Carmine was the only man who could ever get away with calling her by a pastry name. Besides old habits were hard to break and he had been calling her that since she could remember. “ I don’t think I have much time so I’m gonna just cut to the chase. I know you have people inside Mickey’s organization and I need some info on him now.”



Carmine scrunched his eyebrows together and regarded the detective thoughtfully. “ Cookie…why are you snooping around Mickey’s affairs now? You know the deal.”



“ Yeah. I know the deal. I also know something’s going on in this town and I have to know what exactly.” Willow knew she was asking a lot, but she hoped Carmine would come through for her. Besides she had a hunch that if Carmine did know something he’d want to share it, even if only to rattle Mickey’s chain.



The big man rubbed his chin as he contemplated just how much he should say. First he had to assess just how much the detective knew on her own. “ You tell me first why you’re digging around and what you know so far.”



Willow didn’t hesitate. She knew if she did then Carmine would never tell her more than she already knew. “It’s for a case and it’s important to me. I think he’s involved with a guy I’m tailing. I know he’s got more security down at the docks and that he’s brewing up something big with my guy, but I haven’t been able to figure out exactly what that is. Someone sure doesn’t want me finding out though.” The redhead decided not to share her information on Danny’s possible involvement with Mr.Bogarty’s demise. She wanted to give him a chance to explain and if Carmine knew that he had been seen running from the place, Danny would be doing all his explaining to Saint Peter at the pearly gates.



The old man blew out one final ring of smoke and stubbed out his cigar. “ I’m sure I may live to regret this, but I’m doing it for your own good. I’m going to tell you what I know and then I’m going to pray that you walk away. If you’ve got a beef with Mickey let him be, he’s about to hang himself on his own rope.

You know better than anyone that we negotiated peace with him and his backing families almost three years ago.”



The detective nodded her assent. She remembered that time well, it had been taxing on her whole family and she had experienced a couple of close calls before the deal had been made.



“ You know the terms of the pacts that we made. Well now I got people telling me that ol’ Mickey isn’t happy and he’s working outside the proper channels. I have no concrete proof yet, but I’m getting it. I just don’t understand what he’s thinking. Keeping the peace has been good for all of us and nothing good can come out breaking this agreement, at least not if I have something to say about it. These ‘kids’ today got no honor. They’re all running around thinking that they’re characters out of a movie. They pose for the cameras and want lime light for Christ’s sake! It used to be that we didn’t want unnecessary attention paid to our activities. Now…this Mickey Malone wants to be Mickey Cohen, I can tell you he ain’t no Cohen. I’m not the only one who isn’t happy either, this guy is going against ‘family’ orders if my information is right.”



Willow raised her eyebrows. It was just like she though Mickey was stirring up trouble for himself. “Carmine…why? He’s no genius, but to go against family orders…”



Carmine sneered with distaste. “ He’s cocky. He thinks since they’ve given so much control over to him, he can just take some more and he figures nobody is watching him. Beyond that he’s also greedy. With him it’s always been about the numbers. What he’s doing now…I can’t say for sure, but I’m betting he’s thinking of making this deal and disappearing somewhere south of the border.”



Willow ran her hands through her hair and blew out a frustrated breath. Before she could ask the question that was burning on her mind Carmine continued.



“ Look cookie…I don’t know if I should tell you this, but like I said before I’m hoping to answer your questions so you won’t have to go anywhere else. Your pop would rise from his grave and smack me if I didn’t at least try to put you out of harms way. Awww, jeez…this business…it used to be different you know.

Rum running, a little gambling and knocking over cigarette trucks that those big companies wouldn’t miss anyhow…you know, steal from the rich and give it to the poor at half price.” He smiled “ You know in this case we were like that guy in the movies…Johnny help me out…the one’s who wore tights and stole from the sheriff…”



Johnny scratched his head. “ Uh…Peter Pan?”



Carmine smacked him in the gut. “ Not peter pan ya mook…”



“ Robin Hood?” Willow offered in hopes that Carmine would get to the point already.



Carmine smiled brightly. “ Yeah that’s it. We were like Robin Hood’s…hey…Robbing Hoods? That’s pretty good.”



Willow chuckled in spite of herself and sighed waiting for Carmine to get back on track. After Carmine laughed at his own wit he finally decided to continue. “ So anyhow…a little liquor and gambling is one thing, but dealing dope is quite another. On the one hand it really messes people up and on the other the heat doesn’t let up when you get your hands dirty with the stuff. With the other kind of business, well you give a dime here and a nickel there and you’ve got no troubles, but with the dope…most cops don’t sell out if there’s drugs involved. Most of the old school bosses like me agree that the families shouldn’t get involved with this, it’s not worth it. Mickey seems to think that it is, so the word is that he’s got some out of town business partner and that they’re making some deal, when they have the cash they’re going to trade for a shipment of dope. He’s got some very MEAN boys down from Chicago handling the warehouse and they don’t mess around. That’s why you gotta stop asking questions about Mickey and stay away from the docks. I gotta make like I don’t know what’s going on, so if you go looking for trouble I won’t be able to help you.”



Willow’s head buzzed with thoughts >Drugs now? On top of everything else it had to be dugs now?<

“ Carmine I can’t stay away until I figure out this whole thing. There’s one more thing I have to ask you…” she swallowed loudly and took a breath before asking. “ Carmine when pop…when pop died I came to you to check out his death. You told me it had been an accident, was that true or did you tell me that just to keep the peace?”



Carmine raised his eyebrows in surprise and looked towards Johnny before answering Willow’s unexpected question.





Edited by: nika  at: 11/17/04 8:27 pm
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Re: Update

Postby onyxsundrops » Fri Jul 11, 2003 8:17 pm

Ohhh Nika... it's gettin' good:grin I wonder who that woman was.:hmm And yes, it was still interesting! A hell of a lot more interesting than my last history class.:)

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Re: Update

Postby The Rose24 » Fri Jul 11, 2003 9:04 pm

Interesting story. I hope this is resolved soon.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Update

Postby bluewillowwitch » Fri Jul 11, 2003 9:24 pm

:bigwave nika,

That was soooooo awesome! :clap :bow U don't believe that. Who was that woman? What was her malfunction? :lol I can't wait to see where this goes. I love his fc. Please keep it coming. :pray . Update soon? :pray









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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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Re: Update

Postby shuyaku » Sat Jul 12, 2003 9:09 am

No need to worry Nika - this was a great update. I loved your explanation of the 'Eye of the Raven.' I don't really care if it is historically accurate. The only thing that matters is that you are consistent in your story :D



The hooded figures were a bit scary, but for some reason I don't really think they are the 'Big Bad.' They seem to be protecting the 'Eye' albeit a bit overzealously.



More soon please?

-shuyaku



ps: on a complete tangent... I've heard amazing things about The Little Wiccan, but it seems you may have given up on that story. Any chance you'll go back to it? I'd love to see what everyone is raving about, but I need closure eventually :smash ;)

shuyaku
 


Re: Update

Postby SJ » Sun Jul 13, 2003 2:16 am

Great interesting update :D

Cool you're using Norse mythology :cool



SJ
 

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