New Fic - Neverland

[CreepyPlayhouse32]

This fic is great! Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the next updates!!!!!

[fabouly]

hi there



i love your story and your writing. it's absolutely amazing... !!!!



i just got a bit frustrated by the whole waiting for buffy-and-willow's-mum-to-tell-them-thing... mean, there's bout a week to go in the fic, right?! pleeease... don't discribe every single day to go. this is teasing !!! and to be honest (just my little opinion) it gets a bit boring... u know, the whole oh-i-love-her but oh-i-have-to-wait thing... think, there were 3 updates that described one and the same day. little too much for me there...



anyway... it's your fic, so it's your choice. i love the story anyway!



keep it going and update real soon... pleeease



fab

[wilgen]

Heather,



Sorry, I didn’t reply sooner to the last update. Still loving your story immensely and looking forward to Anya’s tact.



Hope your dad and you are doing fine.



Ingrid.

[wilgen]

WillowSpiritus, yes I do. Forgot to put in the smiley.





edited: and forgot it again, what's wrong with me!

Edited by: wilgen at: 2/2/05 1:44 pm

[WillowSpiritus]

Dont you mean you are looking forward to Anya's lack of tact? I love that about Anya and cant wait to "see" her in action



I am a sucker for torture so i dont mind the slow pace the girls are taking. The updates are great! Thanks again

[FireFlyofDust]

You know..I think there should be an update (cuz its my bday!)



so... *waits*



Trish

Don’t forget, we are the people that can have dreams for which we don’t yet have words. Maybe my accomplishment has been to find some of those words.- Harry Hay

[stillrunning]

I keep seeing this fic popping up on the board, and every time it pops up I check to see if it's an update...and it never is

"Heaven's not a place that you go when you die...it's that moment in life when you actually feel alive"

[WillowSpiritus]

Happy Birthday Trish!



That would be a great gift that you can share with us

[kisstheviolets]

so, this is actually my first reply ever, and i actually registered simply so that i could leave it, but i must say that this is by far the best fic i've read to date (and i've been lurking for quite a while) and the anticipation for the next update is seriously sapping the life right out of me. help a girl out and update already!! thanks, you rock!!!



brandy

[starcat73]

Hey Heather,



I know you said before that updates may not come that often because of all that is going on with your dad. I do hope all is well. We will always be here. Take care.



StarCat

[singgirl]

Hey! Noticing that it has been a while since the last update is unavoidable. However, I do sincerely hope that this is not the effect of something going wrong in your life, with you or your family. It's okay, really. I have occupied my time by re-reading the fic so that I'll be completely refreshed when the next update cometh. Be well.

Pax! -Bev

[AmbeRocks]

mmm... been away for a couple of months, then today i come back, telling myself: oh, they must be together by now, yay i wanna read it!

hell no..!!

anyway, it's always a wonderful story, keep on the great work, and please update soon!

jen

There is such a variety of well-invented things that the earth is like the breasts of a woman: useful as well as pleasing - Nietzsche

[Irene73]

Hey



Started reading yesterday...finally caught up...and...WOW!!!!!!!!!





A mixture of loving the way things are developing slowly as they do in real life, how you capture the day to day connections, how truly a great friendship can be the strongest building block in an INEVITABLE relationship, and FRUSTRATED beyond words that Willow still hasn't come out



I respect the fact that she wants to let her mother and Buffy know first...it solidifies who she is...go Willow...but I mean it's been 3years 2 months and a couple of weeks...I hope I got the timeling right???



So in conclusion...the only reason I've decided to stay with the fic is #1 your amazing writing especially the way you pay attention to the smallest details...becoming a whole #2 I KNOW WILLOW AND TARA WILL EVENTUALLY PROCLAIM THEIR UNDYING LOVE TO ONE ANOTHER and I can hardley wait for that moment...on a side note you and JUSTSKIPIT can really make a kitten wait for that climatic moment...have you read JUSTSKIPIT "School Days"...wow!!! and #3 I'm hooked.



Hope all is fine on the homefront...us kittens will be sending all of our love and prayers to you...get well soon.



Updatey Goodness Soon?

Saluting you while holding up a glass of good old fashion chocolate milk,

Irene

[angel of salvation]

GAH! Still no update! No Fair! Hope everything is ok....

update please! Or i'll...i'll:





*flails arms around then sits back down*



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

[numbered words]

Dammit I got my hopes all up with this being at/near the top of the list. My heartbeat started getting faster as I opened the page and then...nothing.



I should've learned by now that unless this has been bumped one or two pages that there most likely isn't an update.



*sigh*

I hope everything is going well. Update soon please?



-Kristyn

[Jes021]

Hi, I've been lurking on this board for a while now and was quite happy that way, but your story has a way of making people wanna say nice, amazing, beautiful things about it, at least that effect has it on me, so after I registered today and introduced myself i just had to come here to say; This is the most amazing, realistic story I have read so far and it keeps me spellbound!!!!!!



The first time I came across this story is 2 months ago and since then i've read the whole thing it at least 20 times more, and it just doesn't get boring. Your writing style really makes the story come alive, because you pay so much attention to the everyday little things that people often overlook, it keeps me captivated.



But I really do hope that you update soon, because otherwise I will be able to recite this fanfic from memory very soon with the speed that I keep coming back to this story again and again and again.....and....again......:



Newbie

Jes

[willlovestara]

Sorry for the lack of fb lately, I was sure I had left some recently! Anyway just reminding you that I still this fic and I hope to see an update soon. Hannah.

p.s hope your Dad is o.k.

[desertgrl]

Heather, hadn't seen an update in a while and the dogs were hoping that everything is okay with you and your dad. They said to offer you a bribe for an update. They are willing to give up one squeaky orange dinosaur, 1 rubber ball, and one pen that when you turn it upside down the bikini comes off of the girl. Yep, that's right, I got the pen from my principal, and I am willing to give it to you if you need some "inspiration" for writing this wonderful fic. Oh and they wanted to wish you a happy Valentine's Day

[ExtraFlameyWT]

Well...all I can say is "argh!" I'm so frustrated with this fic (and I'm certainly not saying that I'm not enjoying it, because I am)...I really hope you will do us all a favor and update soon... I don't normally read fic that isn't finished, but because I saw 75 pages, I figured I'd give it a shot. I finished reading it all in one night, and I've been waiting for about a week to leave feedback. I really enjoy the way you've portrayed the characters, and also given us a backstory through the flashbacks. You've set the story up wonderfully, even though it's driving me crazy that they don't see how much they mean to the other...Anyway, I just wanted to beg alongside the masses for an update. Thank you for an amazing fic.



Aimee

"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

[Poised20]

can they please please please lay each other yet? hee. i think i speak on behalf of many reading =p its just too frustrating to see them becoming closer then drifting apart. i can't wait for them to be lovey and dovey. bring it on!

[Reallybigpineapple]

Hello. I would like to

A: Disagree with Poised20. I love this story and therefore want it to last as long as possible. I have learned from it that torture can be very sweet... Besides, as we all hopefully know, great sex is made from a great foreplay... I don't mind if you wait until page 150 before the actual sex happens as long as the writing goes on. Stopping now would feel horribly like revisiting the Episode That Must Not be Mentioned... So on that note, I would like to

B: Beg shamelessly: Pretty please Heather, more torture? The withdrawal symptoms are pretty bad... And (shameless brown-nosing) the last chapters were so great... Makes ya want more, ya know? If you still have personal problems in the real world to deal with, please disregard the rudeness of my begging, but my life is boring...

Hugs and puppies, M

Edited by: Reallybigpineapple at: 2/26/05 5:55 pm

[Dexter23]

Hey Heather,



I too am here to shamelessly beg for another update. I'm starting to get a bit distressed by the lack of updates lately.....I sincerely hope everything is OK in your life and the lack of updates is purely because - you didn't feel like it or you're on a nice long vacation.....something like that.



Anyway, hopefully the torture will end soon - this is by far one of the best stories I have ever read and the suspense is killing me - of course I want it to go on, but it's killing me.



I hope all is well and update when you can.



Take Care



Hannah

[VixenyTarasHot]

I'm gonna have to be like the others and beg for an update... PLEEEEEEEAAAASE?



I miss it muchly.. I check every day... and I don't even have the internet at my apt... I come HOME to my PARENTS! hahaha.



Anyways, I hope everything is going all right.. kinda worryin here, so hopefully we can hear something soon.



Ashleigh

"...A-and I'm gonna make it up to you. Starting right now."

(Starts to smile)"Right now?"

[GayNow]

I want to add to the cacophony of begging readers. I've pretty much read everything in two sittings (I did actually have to sleep for a couple of hours).



The angst and coming together of these two women is written beautifully. I find that I'm torn. On one hand, I want the agony to end so that these two can just "stop the insanity" and profess their love for each other. On the other hand, the moments that have been created are so beautiful and add so wonderfully to the growing relationship are addictive and I don't want them to end.



So, I ask humbly, if not impatiently, for a new update very soon. Gotta have my fix! Willow has caffeine, I have fan fiction.

[GayNow]

So I continue to check every day for an update (sometimes many times per day). I'm really missing this story. I've been tempted to start from the beginning and read it again...hoping that there will be an update by the time I've finished.



I'm not completely sure if I can take the waiting much longer...and I may just have to succumb to the need and reread what is posted. Knowing, of course, that it will simply fuel my need for an update. But, one must do what one must do.



I shall continue to check for updates. And I still hope one comes soon.

[starcat73]

This is me praying that all is well with your dad . You are an amazing writer and I do hope that one day you will be able to continue with the story. Until then, I will keep checking for an update and keep myself busy re-reading this one and others. So no pressure.



StarCat

[SlayerCommaThe]

Hiya there, EasierSaid!



I felt compelled to quietly step out of the shadows of my lurking to tell you how much I am enjoying reading your story. I've been with it since day one and can honestly say that you are one of the greatest writers I've ever seen (er..read?), not only on Pens but across the whole 'net as well. There is only one word I can use to describe this story because its brilliance literally leaves me speechless, and that is this: perfect. Perfect plot, descriptions, pace, characterizations, dialogue, just perfect everything. (Seriously, I'd be willing to aide with the funds in order to get it published one day! Not that I have the money for it - or any money at all for that matter, but it's the thought that counts, right?)



Aside from the general praise, I wanted to say that I hope all is well with yourself and your family. I'm not going to lie and say that I'm patiently awaiting an update ('cause I check for one every chance I get), but do take your time with it; after all, real life comes first.



Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of work with all of us. Keep up the excellence and take care.

Edited by: SlayerCommaThe at: 3/7/05 7:27 am

[hondosfirst]

Easier.

I always check hoping to see updates.Now, I am checking for anything from you in hopes of seeing that you and yours are well.(update would be nice,but thats a secondary concern for me at this point.)My thoughts and prayers are with you and I do hope all is well.



Fan and forum friend,

Rose

[Nicole023]

Please take care off yourself and keep believing in faith..



All my best wishes to you..



Nicole xx

[YunaMaClay]

Hey, Just wanted to say that I hope all is well (okay along with everyone else... also hoping for an update but that could always wait) Just came out of my lurkerism to say that so back I go



Patricia

Tell them how I'm defying gravity-- Wicked