that's the same way Anakin felt for Padme, and we all know how well that turned out...
Tara's conception might indeed have been somewhat of an accident, but LOTS more kids get made that way, she's hardly unique or unwanted because of that.
. I do think it's sad that the "no-emotions" and "no attachments" rule gets drilled into young easily influenced human beings.
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Sets up the relations and motives of the Evil People. I wonder if the Jedi can sense Dark Maul and identify him as a danger to them. With the Temple in visual range one would think so.
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I maintain that you can't control your emotions all the time so you might as well learn to deal with them. Keep all sorts of things inside isn't going to solve much.
I would make a horrible Jedi (or soldier for that matter), don't like following certain 'code' thingies without questioning the reasoning behind them. Everyone is "susceptible to fear, hate and anger" the only way to handle that is learn to cope with them, NOT pushing them away or view acknowledging them as a 'weakness'.
Don't Jedi carry normal lighters to light a fire? Using the Force for that would be overkill, besides it might be detected? I hope both girls carry some sort of survival kit at least, they might need it. I don't have a real problem with using any force for lighting a fire really, just make sure you don't come to depend on it.
It's a good thing Tara confided her story to somebody. Can't have been much fun to walk around with that all alone. It occured to me that Tara's Master also broke the Jedi code by telling her all that, didn't he/she?
Tara's conception might indeed have been somewhat of an accident, but LOTS more kids get made that way, she's hardly unique or unwanted because of that.
I wonder if the Jedi can sense Dark Maul and identify him as a danger to them. With the Temple in visual range one would think so.
Hmm... I can see Dark Maul/Sidious as a standard Master/Padawan setup. Granted this master has less lofty goal, but other then that what's different? It is convenient to quickly give people performing Evil Acts another name I suppose, better for PR.
I can't recall seeing Sidious in Episode1, I only remember DM and Palpatine (sp?). Learning new stuff about SW all the time in this story.
And if anyone can explain WHY they send a message from Naboo to Tatooine, instead of just travelling there with a spaceship... feel free to.
On the other hand, that DOES move DM away from Willow/Tara at Naboo. Which is a Good Thing obviously.

cuz there so cute together!! Im definitly a star wars fan so im enjoying this fic quit a bit. Also i have to say that i love your banner for the story haha it made me laugh not saying that its bad cuz i think it was a really good idea to do the banner that way..but somehow i found that funny
but great update keep those fingers writing and update soon plz! with more
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coming. But I have to kinda set it up first.
Im definitly a star wars fan so im enjoying this fic quit a bit.
Also i have to say that i love your banner for the story haha it made me laugh not saying that its bad cuz i think it was a really good idea to do the banner that way..but somehow i found that funny

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Great story... It's about time for me to get back to Empire at War. Bloody rebels blew up three of my expensive Acclimators, and they're going to have to pay. 
Don't worry. When it comes to characters like him who were underdeveloped, they'll get their just desserts.
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Hm, so it seems that Tara is open, or at least not secretive, about her preference for female company and that that is not necessarily thought of as a bad thing by the Jedi? Canon never really went into that, as far as I could tell. Interesting recollections by them both about their almost-intimate encounter in their quarters.
I'm still a little confused about exactly what Tara's relationship was with her Master. It seems like there are lots of emotions entangled in that relationship - respect and love and learning, but also some complex regret or something.
I very much like it that Tara gave Willow her light saber. A lovely and meaningful gesture that probably meant more to both of them emotionally than it should have. La la la!
That scene was actually fun for me to write.Sorry that I missed giving fb on chapter 7. A good filler, especially for the kittens who haven't seen the films. I'd like to know more about Darth Maul. I get the feeling that he is connected to Tara in some way - please prove me wrong!

Back to our girls with chapter 8. I am also intrigued by Tara's relationship with her Master, they seem to be very close.

Willow's dream was great . Did Willow subconsciously dream of kissing Tara because the blonde's arm was wrapped around her while they slept? Maybe the Force had a hand in Willow's dream - guess I'll have to wait and see.
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Once again, you've done a wonderful job giving us great background information on this story; Kieran Maclay, Nejaa Halcyon, the day Tara gave Willow her lightsaber, etc. Every chapter flows into the next one without missing a beat.
Speaking of lightsaber gifts, Wow!! I mean, that is a very personal gift to give someone. Sort of like Tara giving Willow her grandmother's dolls eye crystal in Season 4. See, this is what I appreciate most about your storytelling, how you incorporate canon events into Star Witches.
Tara opened the box and withdrew the weapon, taking a moment to examine it. “It was an exquisite weapon. Or at least, my own Master thought so. Then again, he always did have a way of making beautiful women hear what it was that they wanted to hear. When I used it, it was as if I was one with the Force, and that it was with me.”
She extended her arm to Willow, the weapon still in her hand. “I hope that it does the same with you.”
Willow hesitated for a fraction of a second. What was her Master doing? This was one of the few things that she had kept for herself, and she was giving it freely to her without any questions? She didn’t know what to say.
“Master?” she asked. “Are you sure?”
Tara stood up, her arm still outstretched. “Yes, Willow. I’m sure.”

Willow waking up with Tara's arm around her = what dreams are made of.![]()
in the story (read: AlysonGoddess), its the closest you're gonna get until the end.I'm with Sally. I feel like Nejaa's relationship with Tara went more in depth than just Master and Padawan...is it safe to say that Tara saw Nejaa as a father figure?
arghh i need more of this <)))))
but get to the smoochies damnit!!! im calm really *sigh* but anyway i love how this is turning out and thanks for the less bad guy stuff
please update soon! and more
plz!
Well, there getting closerbut get to the smoochies damnit!!! im calm really *sigh* but anyway i love how this is turning out and thanks for the less bad guy stuff
please update soon! and more
plz!
won't happen again until the end of the fic, I think you'll be pleasantly surprised with what's to come in the next chapter.This is a terrific ride you're taking us on!
It means a lot for me to get praise like this. The only hard part is making sure it doesn't go to my head. After all, I'm no different than the other fic writers here.I was caught off guard when Tara actually gave Willow her old lightsaber. Is that commonplace?
I always thought they built their own, that that was part of becoming a Jedi.
It was a very sweet, simple, quiet moment between them.

I started laughing at myself when I opened up a second window and did a search on Nejaa Halcyon. If you've got me researching then you certainly have my attention.

I'm sorry that I have been gone for so long, and that I missed so many great updates.
I really love that Tara is beginning to open up to Willow, and that Will is able to reasure her that she is a valuble person in the universe.
I like getting to see into the thoughts of Gunnray and Maul, it puts a diffrent perspective on the story. Along those lines, have you ever read Darth Maul: Shadow Hunter, it gives really great insites into how he thinks.
I find it always interesting to know what the Bad Guys think and why they do what they do, as such knowing DM's thoughts is nice. I never did manage to follow the political intrigue regarding blockading Naboo in the film. The Jedi fighting DM, *that* I could understand
. They need to get a few lessons in how to arrest people though, cuffing them would be helpfull. The man didn't seem exactly insane to me, but rather focussed on the fact that Tara was alive when she shouldn't be (in his mind). So why is it so important Tara be dead ?? Did he really recognize Tara as herself or does she look exactly like her mother?
It's a fact of Jedi-life I just don't like (which makes me somewhat hesitant about reading this story, but what's life with risksShe obviously didn't feel attracted to them, she just preferred their company.
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This story goes deeper into some detail than I recall from the movie. That is easier to do in writing compared to a 2 hour movie I suppose![]()
The man didn't seem exactly insane to me, but rather focussed on the fact that Tara was alive when she shouldn't be (in his mind). So why is it so important Tara be dead ?? Did he really recognize Tara as herself or does she look exactly like her mother?
Wait... Tara never was on that ship, come to think of it... why did Tara's mother leave Tara behind? She must have been about 5 years old back then, that's a difficult decision to take.
I'm curious what became of the capture smuggler. Particulairy if he's still alive and if not cause-of-death.

This was cute though: "Tara's arm draped rather protectively across Willow. And she noticed that her face was mere centimeters away from her own. And she was smiling."

Willow is somewhat fixated on kissing Tara ain't she? Should be fun if Tara ever accidentally senses her dreams, heh. Does Tara have such dreams as well or is she better training in NOT having feelings? Seems that will wear down rather soon, given how she wants to touch Willow's hair. She just has some things to admit to herself first.
Glad you enjoy it. If you liked this, then you're gonna enjoy what's coming up.
Sorry I've taken so long to leave feedback, and for missing an update. Real life's been a pain in the ass lately.
One question I feel compelled to ask is how much time has passed? Regardless of how it appears in the movies, it takes time to travel through hyperspace, so at least a few days should have passed. Have Willow and Tara just been hiding out in the woods so far, or was the interlude to provide background set a little bit forward in the future? Just curious.
I liked the glimpses into the character of Darth Maul. He, like so many others, was a bit shortchanged, by necessity, in the movies, so it's good to be shown a little of what makes him tick. He really is little more than a living weapon, isn't he? With little ambition other than to be wielded in battle. Still, given that he was pretty much raised from a child by Sidious to be so, he didn't really have much choice.
So, Tara's master was Nejaa Halcyon, huh? I knew I recognized the name, but it wasn't until I did so research that I remembered who he was. The fact that he was another Jedi who was secretly married was interesting. I wonder if Tara knows that? It could have bearing on her nascent relationship with Willow.
So, is the lightsabre Willow's now using Tara's old one? That's interesting because I alway thought that Padawan's were required to make their own once they reached a certain level of skill. From what I understand, they are supposed to have a greater connection with a lightsabre that they construct themselves. Still, Tara did make it, and through this connection they seem to possess, I suppose that might work as well, or maybe even better.
Oh, and Gunray's an idiot if he thinks he's anything but a tool to Sidious.
Well, it would help a bunch if I knew exactly how much time passed in the movie. Unfortunately, I do not. And the fountain of SW knowledge (read: Miss Kitty Fantastico) was unable to help me out here. So I'm basically making it up as I go along. It was my intention that chapters six, seven and eight all occur during a 24 hour period.
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to you for having the girls in character.
will be initiated by her? (Don't tell yet! Don't tell yet!)
, and how other Jedi would think about it... well, to my knowledge, the subject matter has never been broached in canon, but my personal take on it is that the Jedi didn't have a taboo on same-sex love in specific; they had a taboo on forming attachments. Gay or straight, didn't matter - forming personal attachments was bad. I'd even imagine that if they made a difference at all, it would have been hetero relationships that were more taboo, since they can lead to babies and all the entanglement that brings.
I really feel for your Tara, what with her background and how it made her feel about herself... She must be thinking that her being conceived was what ruined her mother's life, yes?
Speaking of which, I must say that your Jedi Tara is very recognisable as, well, Tara.to you for having the girls in character.
With me having a thing for Corellians, I like that you made Nejaa Halcyon her Jedi Master.![]()
Your Willow seems to be very - knowing what she wants, if that dream scene was any indication. Hmmm, could it be that the first actualwill be initiated by her? (Don't tell yet! Don't tell yet!)
It's all coming soon. As for the issue of Tara "liking the company of females", and how other Jedi would think about it... well, to my knowledge, the subject matter has never been broached in canon, but my personal take on it is that the Jedi didn't have a taboo on same-sex love in specific; they had a taboo on forming attachments. Gay or straight, didn't matter - forming personal attachments was bad. I'd even imagine that if they made a difference at all, it would have been hetero relationships that were more taboo, since they can lead to babies and all the entanglement that brings.
So I'd imagine that if (or should that be "when"?) Willow and Tara take their relationship to the next level (for lack of a better way of putting it), the issues that other Jedi will have with it will be about them forming a personal attachment and how it could interfere with Willow's training, etc., not so much about them being lesbians.
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