Hey Sally!!!
This was greatly entertaining! I love the way you wrote all the characters and the humor you gave them. I've been sitting here for the last hour hearing my laughter echo throughout my empty house (which is kinda creepy, come to think of it).
The relationship between all the scoobies was so richly written. You really got a sense that X/B/W and T/A were tight. I love how you've written Anya, nice mix of sass and smarts.
I don't think there would have been a better way for Willow and Tara to finally discover the truth:
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"So look for an update from wiccanbard - that's me." She looked at Willow as she said it.
Willow sat perfectly still as the room broke into another round of applause. She gazed back at Tara, who returned the look with a half-smile before breaking eye contact and making her way back to her seat.
What?
[Insert melting heart here]
I have to say that you've written my ultimate most favorite cutesy "AWW!" moment since I've been here on the board. Okay, two of my ultimate most favorite cutesy "AWW!" moments.
1) The palm reading scene. You had me grinning like a pothead. Seriously, perma-smile all the way through. So sweet, I'm going to need a new set of teeth from all the cavities it gave me.
2) The post office scene. Must replace the replacement teeth now.
Now, had I been in either of their shoes, their would have been some earth shakin' lovin' going on. Kudos to them for such steeley resolve. And I guess that would have made Ubersmut moot.
A fabulous story Sal. My apologies for not having read it sooner. Now if you excuse me, I've got Ubersmut to read and a whole lot of Xena to watch!