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Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby Taras Shadow » Fri Jun 27, 2003 1:55 pm

Oh Wow!



I agree with Washi! I loved this part. I love all parts.



And it's funny how Shakespeare's work confuses me a little, I understood this perfectly... not sure if it's because it's based on Willow and Tara and I'm interested, or if it's because I don't have to worry about doing Romeo and Juliet essays and such anymore. *shrugs*



Either way, I am so loving this!



~Holly~ :heart



Paulie: You think I'm a lesbian?

Mary: You're a girl in love with a girl, aren't you?

Paulie: No, I'm Paulie in love with Tori. And Tori is - she is in love with me, because she is mine and I am hers. And neither of us are lesbians. - Lost and Delirious -



Taras Shadow
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Fri Jun 27, 2003 2:45 pm

thanks Tara's Shadow :)



I am still working on part 8. I think it's good enough to post before I go to bed, but I wanna make sure u know. Oh and soon Willow and Tara get married ;) and would u like a sweet love scene or a NC17 love scene - you pick guys ;)

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Fri Jun 27, 2003 3:12 pm

Title - Rosenberg and Maclay part 8

Author name - AmberAlysonLover

Email Address - Beckycorr@hotmail.com

Rating - R for language, fighting and love at first sight!

Disclaimer - I dont own Willow or Tara...but Joss for once I'm taking control! And Thanks to William Shakespears for writting such a wonderful love story

Feedback- I would like feedback here

Summary- This is my verson of Romeo and Juliet. This is set in 2003 and I've taken some help from the movie. It has all the Buffy and some Angel characters. But we will know who the star crossed lover's are.....dont we

Notes- This is for my girlfriend Heather. I love you loads. But Please be gentle coz its my first fic. And doing a Willow and Tara verson of this great love story is hard u know.

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William Shakespear and Rebecca Stone's



Rosenberg and Maclay



PART 8:



Morning came bright and loud. The sunlight filters through the lush foliage of a tropical rainforest. We can see a huge green house. We can hear a man's voice talking:

FATHER WESLEY: O mickle is the powerful grace that lies In plants, herbs, stones, and their true qualities.



We discover the intensely concentrating features of FATHER WESLEY. Late 30's, wiry and wearing a priest's collar, WESLEY delicately makes an incision in the bulb of a small purple flowered plant. We see a pair of fresh faced ten year old boys look on in wonderment as a vivid blue sap oozes from the incision.



FATHER WESLEY: Within the infant rind of this weak flower Poison hath residence, and medicine power



The Priest carefully gathers the sap into a beaker. We discover that we are in a small tropical greenhouse.



FATHER WESLEY ( to the boys): For this, being smelt, with that part cheers each part; Being tasted, stays all senses with the heart.



The boys follow the Father as he moves out of the greenhouse and into an adjoining work area. The walls are lined with bottles of herbs and dried plants and a television flickers in the corner.



FATHER WESLEY: For naught so vile on the earth doth live, But to the earth some special good doth give;



With the precision of a chemist, Father Laurence funnels the sap into a small bottle and places it in the refrigerator. From out of the refrigerator he produces a large jar of candy. He eyes the boys sternly.



FATHER WESLEY: Nor aught so good but, strained from that fair use, Revolts from true birth, stumbling on abuse.



The boys take their candy and scram.



FATHER WESLEY moves to the muted television. A morning news program shows footage of a murder scene cordoned off with police tape. A distraught mother is being restrained. The priest contemplating the television.



FATHER WESLEY: Two such opposed kings encamp them still In man as well as herbs: grace and rude will; And where the worser is predominant, Full soon the canker death eats up that plant.



A feverish knocking breaks the priest's reverie.



WILLOW: Good morning, watcher!



Father Laurence snaps off the television and exits the workroom.We see WILLOW, dressed in last night's chain mail, pounds desperately on a wooden door set into a high stone wall.



WILLOW: Good morrow, father!



From the workroom, FATHER WESLEY enters a courtyard which encloses a tranquil tropical garden. He opens a door in the wall of the courtyard and smiles as the costumed WILLOW bursts in.



FATHER WESLEY: Oh my, your up early



Without pausing, the priest continues through the courtyard and toward the church.



FATHER WESLEY: Young girl, it argues a distempered head So soon to bid good morrow to thy bed. Or if not so, then here I hit it right - Our WILLOW hath not been in bed tonight



The priest enters the back of the church.



We can tell that WILLOW, is still on fire to tell of her experience, follows the priest into the sacristy.



WILLOW: The last is true. The sweeter rest was mine.



FATHER WESLEY ( Stops and looks at her): God pardon sin! Wast thou with Amy?



WILLOW: With Amy, my ghostly father? No. I have forgot that name and that name's woe.



The Father lays out the cut glass bottles and communion tray for mass.



FATHER WESLEY: That's my good daughter! But where hast thou been then?



Unconsciously, WILLOW helps the priest prepare. It is clear she knows the routine by heart.



WILLOW: I have been feasting with mine enemy, Maclay, Where on a sudden one hath wounded me. That's by me wounded. Both our remedies Within they help and holy physic lies.



FATHER WESLEY ( buttoning a long black cassock ): Be plain, good daughter, and homely in thy drift. Riddling confession finds but riddling shrift.



WILLOW: Then plainly know my heart's dear love is set, On the fair daughter of rich Maclay. Beautiful Tara Maclay! We met, we wooed, and made exchange of vow, I'll tell thee as we pass. But this I pray, That thou consent to marry us today.



The Priest looks totally thunderstruck. The two kids, now dressed in red altar-boy robes, enter.



ALTAR BOYS: Good morning, Willow



The apoplectic priest waves the boys away. They get the message and bolt.



FATHER WESLEY: Holy Saint Francis! What a change is here! Is Amy, that thou didst love so dear, So soon foresaken? Young girl's love then lies Not truly in their hearts, but in their eyes.



WILLOW: Amy didnt love me. Tara Maclay make's me melt...I have met the woman of my dreams. And now Thou chid'st me oft for loving Rosaline.



FATHER WESLEY: For doting, not for loving, pupil mine.



WILLOW: I pray thee chide me not. Her I love now Doth grace for grace and love for love allow. The other did not so.



FATHER WESLEY: O, she knew well Thy love did read by rote, that could not spell.



The Father falls into a chair and considers. He looks through the sacristy door to where a small children's choir has assembled. Their angelic voices soar into the purest of hymns.



CHOIR: Wise men say only fools rush in

but I can't help falling in love with you

Shall I stay

would it be a sin

If I can't help falling in love with you



Like a river flows surely to the sea

Darling so it goes

some things are meant to be

take my hand, take my whole life too

for I can't help falling in love with you



Like a river flows surely to the sea

Darling so it goes

some things are meant to be

take my hand, take my whole life too

for I can't help falling in love with you

for I can't help falling in love with you



We recognise the hymn as "Cant help falling in love" by Elvis Presley



We see FATHER WESLEY looking moved. Then he looks up at WILLOW, who is also lost in the words of the song.



FATHER WESLEY: But come, young waverer, come, go with me. In one respect I'll thy assistant be. For this alliance may so happy prove To turn your households' rancor to pure love.



WILLOW hurriedly assists the priest with her vestments.



WILLOW: Oh, let us hence! I stand on sudden haste. This is the best day of my life!



FATHER WESLEY holds WILLOW in his powerful gaze.



FATHER WESLEY: Wisely and slow. They stumble that run fast. Be careful dear Willow.



The procession is joined by the two little altar boys and the mass begins. WILLOW runs out into the Sunny dale morning sun.



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PART 9 coming soon :)



AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby Taras Shadow » Fri Jun 27, 2003 4:15 pm

AmberAlysonlover



Ooooh...I love that song. :) *sings* Wise Men Say...



*clears her throat* Right, to the story. Beautiful. And Willow and Tara getting married soon...awwww! *sighs happily* I can't wait until I marry my fiancèe. :grin



As for the sweet love scene or NC 17... all I have to say is if it's Willow and Tara, happy and making love, it doesn't matter sweetie. :bigkiss



Can't Wait!



~Holly~ :heart



Paulie: You think I'm a lesbian?

Mary: You're a girl in love with a girl, aren't you?

Paulie: No, I'm Paulie in love with Tori. And Tori is - she is in love with me, because she is mine and I am hers. And neither of us are lesbians. - Lost and Delirious -



Taras Shadow
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Sat Jun 28, 2003 6:39 am

Author name - AmberAlysonLover

Email Address - Beckycorr@hotmail.com

Rating - R for language, fighting and love at first sight!

Disclaimer - I dont own Willow or Tara...but Joss for once I'm taking control! And Thanks to William Shakespears for writting such a wonderful love story

Feedback- I would like feedback here

Summary- This is my verson of Romeo and Juliet. This is set in 2003 and I've taken some help from the movie. It has all the Buffy and some Angel characters. But we will know who the star crossed lover's are.....dont we

Notes- This is for my girlfriend Heather. I love you loads. But Please be gentle coz its my first fic. And doing a Willow and Tara verson of this great love story is hard u know.



*********************************************

William Shakespear and Rebecca Stone's



Rosenberg and Maclay



PART 9:



From the church, we can Sunny dale beach. We can also hear Angelic voices of the choir soar, we see a pay phone etched with hyper-real starkness against the white sand, green sea and blue sky. A single leaning palm tree frames the image like a ridiculous tourist postcard. XANDER speaks on the pay phone. ANYA, wearing a white shirt and mini skirt but we can see her holstered Sports Rapier 9mm, drums her fingers on the side of the booth.



ANYA: Where the devil should this Willow be? Came she not home tonight?



XANDER ( slamming down the phone): Not to her father's. I spoke with her dad.



ANYA storms off down the beach.



ANYA: Why, that same pale hard-hearted wench, that Amy, Torments her so that she will sure run mad.



XANDER (Running to keep up with ANYA): Fred hath sent a letter to her father's house.



ANYA ( Stop's walking and looks at him): A challenge, on my life.



XANDER isnt too sure about the letter.



XANDER: You think Willow will answer it?



ANYA: Yeah, Xand, anyone can answer a letter



XANDER: Nay, she will answer the letter's master, how she dares, being dared.



ANYA clamps XANDER into a headlock.



ANYA: Alas, poor Willow, she is already dead! Stabbed with a white wench's black eye,



She whispers into XANDER's ear:



ANYA: Run through the ear with a love song. ( she sounds sick now) And is she a girl to encounter Fred?



XANDER: Why, what is Fred?



ANYA: Fred is the More than Princess of Cats, I can tell you. O, she's the courageous captain of compliments. The very butcher of a silk button.



Lightening fast, ANYA draws her gun. She twirls it in an impressive display of gunmanship which ends with the barrel between the startled XANDER's eyes.



ANYA: A duellist, a duellist.



WILLOW's car pulls into the beach side parking lot. XANDER heads toward it.



XANDER: Here comes Willow, here comes Willow!



WILLOW alights from her car and throws her keys to SPIKE who lounges outside the beach side hang. ANYA saunters up the beach with mock nonchalance.



ANYA: Ah, little Willow, Bonjour. There's a French salutation to your French slop. You gave us the counterfeit fairly last night.



WILLOW: Good morrow to you both. What counterfeit did I give you?



ANYA: The slip, girlfriend, the slip. Can you not conceive?



WILLOW smiles smugly.



WILLOW: Pardon, good ANYA. My business was great, and in such a case as mine a girl may strain courtesy.



ANYA ( sarcastically) : A most courteous exposition.



WILLOW: No, I am the very pink of courtesy.



ANYA (camply) : Pink for flower?



The gang laugh. WILLOW feigns anger.



WILLOW: I will bite thee on the ear for that jest!



ANYA, goading WILLOW to follow, backs off down the beach.



ANYA: Come between us, good Xander! I dont wanna make Willow turn on me



ANYA flicks sand at WILLOW, then sprints off down the beach. WILLOW, laughing, gives chase.



WILLOW: All bow down at the feet of wicca Rosenberg



WILLOW is gaining on ANYA, who runs headlong into the sea. With a yell, WILLOW dives in after her



ANYA splashes the laughing WILLOW



ANYA: Why, is not this better now than groaning for love?

WILLOW tries to dunk ANYA



ANYA: Now art thou sociable.



Romeo tackles Mercutio on the wet sand. Mercutio falls suddenly serious.



MERCUTIO (quietly) What thou art, by art as well as by nature.



A moment between the girls. A shadow falls across them. WILLOW looks up.



WILLOW: Here's goodly gear.



Standing above the boys is the Nurse. She wears a ridiculous, all red, "Jackie O" style disguise of sunglasses, scarf and parasol.



ANYA: (bemused) Well dont you look eatable



The nurse, ignoring ANYA, speaks dramatically to WILLOW.

NURSE I desire some confidence with you.



She turns and walks back to the parking lot where Peter the chauffer waits beside the limousine. XANDER and the other look on curiously.



ANYA: She's a Maclay! A Maclay I tell you!



But WILLOW rises and to the amazement of ANYA actually follows this woman. ANYA looks questioningly to XANDER, who shrugs.



XANDER: She will endite her to some supper?



Even more strangely, WILLOW gets into the limousine.



ANYA: (taken by surprise) Willow, will you come to your father's? We'll to dinner thither.



WILLOW: (as she closes the door) I will follow you.



ANYA: Farewell, ancient lady. Farewell.



The car pulls away.



The limousine drives through Sunny dale Beach. We see WILLOW jammed into the corner of the seat. The Nurse's face is pressed alarmingly close to her. She speaks in cold deadly earnest.



NURSE: If ye should lead her in a fool's paradise, as they say, it were a very gross kind of behavior, as they say. For the gentlewoman is young; and therefore, if you should deal double with her, truly it were an ill thing and very weak dealing.



We can tell that WILLOW chooses her words carefully.



WILLOW: Bid her to come to confession this afternoon, And there she shall at Friar Wesley's cell Be shrived and ( we go closer to Willow face) and married!



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In part 10, Tara finds out that Willow wants to marry her right now ;) and then in part 11 - they get married and a song we all love will be sung ;) I'll give u a clue - Im under your spell hehe ;) and then in part 12 brings us a huge fight and 2 very sad deaths. Oh dont worry Its not Willow or Tara.



I hope u can wait to see what happens next ;)



Edited by: AmberAlysonlover at: 6/28/03 5:42 am
AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby Taras Shadow » Sat Jun 28, 2003 11:32 am

*sighs*



You've got me hooked completely! I can just see you and Shakespeare pairing up. :grin



I can't until the next part. *awaits anxiously* Great Update!



~Holly~ :heart



Paulie: You think I'm a lesbian?

Mary: You're a girl in love with a girl, aren't you?

Paulie: No, I'm Paulie in love with Tori. And Tori is - she is in love with me, because she is mine and I am hers. And neither of us are lesbians. - Lost and Delirious -



Taras Shadow
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby Lt Sticks » Sat Jun 28, 2003 11:58 am

WOO HOO! Great stuff :D

A fire in my heart, reborn from the ashes...just call me Phoenix



I'm Under Your Spell, nothing I can do, you just took my soul with you...

Lt Sticks
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Sat Jun 28, 2003 1:44 pm

Taras shadow: I always wanted to work with shakespear but I cant coz he's died hehe



Lt Sticks - Im gald ur still enjoying it :)



Good news for you both. I am kinda bored tonite and I am working on a few new parts! I am gonna work on part 10 and part 11 - the loved up parts to pass the time away hehe. So if your lucky u might get 2 new parts 2nite!





AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Sat Jun 28, 2003 2:30 pm

I told you that u would get some new parts tonite! Here is part 10 - Tara finds out about WILLOW'S plan for marrage! I am still writting the marrage part coz its soooo hard to write, for me anyway



Title - Rosenberg and Maclay part 10

Author name - AmberAlysonLover

Email Address - Beckycorr@hotmail.com

Rating - R for language, fighting and love at first sight!

Disclaimer - I dont own Willow or Tara...but Joss for once I'm taking control! And Thanks to William Shakespears for writting such a wonderful love story

Feedback- I would like feedback here

Summary- This is my verson of Romeo and Juliet. This is set in 2003 and I've taken some help from the movie. It has all the Buffy and some Angel characters. But we will know who the star crossed lover's are.....dont we

Notes- This is for my girlfriend Heather. I love you loads. But Please be gentle coz its my first fic. And doing a Willow and Tara verson of this great love story is hard u know.



*********************************************

William Shakespear and Rebecca Stone's



Rosenberg and Maclay



PART 10:



Now we see TARA sitting in her bedroom. She is sitting on her bed, looking at a picture of WILLOW. She felt her heart miss a beat before hearing a car pull up. She ran to her bedroom window and saw NURSE'S limo pulling up.



TARA: Oh, here she comes!



TARA bolts from the room. TARA hurries down the stairs - the Nurse, a way ahead, disappears into a doorway. We see TARA racing down a dark stairwell that leads to the bowels of the house. The kitchen, obviously the NURSE'S domain, is decorated with a mixture of religious iconography and travel posters. Most of the posters depict a strange city of decadent, decaying, beauty. TARA bursts breathlessly into the room.



TARA: Thank god, what news do you have??



The NURSE, buried up to her ample hips inside the refrigerator, does not turn around. TARA cries impatiently.



TARA: Nurse! What news do you have??



The NURSE emerges from the ice box laden with food. Moving to the counter she starts to make a sandwich.



NURSE: I am aweary, give me leave awhile. Fie, how my bones ache. What a jaunce have I.



TARA under her breath.



TARA: I would die for sore bones, what news do you have?



TARA goes to the NURSE



TARA: I pray thee, speak: good; good Nurse, speak.

Sandwich made, the NURSE shuffles over to a corner couch.



NURSE: Jesu, what haste. Can you not stay awhile? Can you not see I am out of breath?



TARA cannot stand the suspense any longer.



TARA: How art thou out of breath when thou hast breath To say to me that thou art out of breath! Is the news good or bad? Answer to that.



The NURSE takes a big bite from her sandwich and answers through thoughtful chews.



NURSE: Well, you have made a simple choice. You know not how to choose a girl. Willow? No, not she. Though her face be better than any girl's, yet her leg excels all girl's and for a hand and a foot and a body, though they be not to be talked on, yet they are past compare. She's not the flower of courtesy, but I'll warrant her as gentle as a lamb. Go thy ways, wench, serve God. What, have you dined at home?



TARA is flabbergasted.



TARA: No, no. But all this I did know before. What says she of our marriage? What of that



NURSE: Lord how my head aches! What a head have I: My back -



This is a game that TARA knows well. She moves behind the NURSE and begins massaging her back.



NURSE: o' t'other side - ah, my back! Beshrew your heart for sending me about To catch my death with jauncing up and down.



With sublime self control, TARA coo's sweetly. The NURSE was more of a mother to her. She loved her dear NURSE so much.



TARA: I'faith I am sorry that thou art not well. Sweet, sweet, sweet Nurse, tell me, what says my love?



NURSE: Your love says like an honest woman, And a courteous, and a kind, and beautiful, And I warrant a virtuous - Where is your mother?



TARA cracks and loses her temper



TARA: Where is my mother? How oddly thou repliest! 'Your love says, like an honest woman, "Where is your mother"'!



The nurse sulks.



NURSE: God's lady dear are you so hot? Henceforth do your messages yourself.



Juliet's frustration explodes big time



TARA: Here's such a coil! COME WHAT SAYS WILLOW?



The NURSE looks at TARA. She can see that TARA is mad.



NURSE: Have you got leave to go to confession today?



TARA: I have



NURSE: Then hie you hence to Father Wesley's cell. There stays a girlfriend to make you a wife!



TARA, with a scream of joy, hugs the NURSE to her.



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There you go! Part 10 all done and dusted! So I think I will post part 11 later before I go to bed or sometime tomorrow coz I am stuck on it right now!



AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby Taras Shadow » Sat Jun 28, 2003 2:44 pm

Oh wow...I feel really spoiled! :applause



Quote:
NURSE: Then hie you hence to Father Wesley's cell. There stays a girlfriend to make you a wife!




Yessssss! Willow and Tara are getting married! I love love LOVE!!!



And yes, I know Shakespeare is no longer with us, but it doesn't mean you still can't pair up...oouuu, that's right, you already are! *pats you on the back* Beautiful!!



~Holly~ :heart



Paulie: You think I'm a lesbian?

Mary: You're a girl in love with a girl, aren't you?

Paulie: No, I'm Paulie in love with Tori. And Tori is - she is in love with me, because she is mine and I am hers. And neither of us are lesbians. - Lost and Delirious -





Taras Shadow
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Sat Jun 28, 2003 3:02 pm

Thanks Tara's shadow :)



Its sooooooo hard to write a wedding part. The last time I went to a wedding I was 4 years old! That was a long time ago hehe ;) OH! I've got the wedding part all done now! So a close friend will get a thank u in the next part ;) Im gonna tease and not post the wedding till tomorrow hehe



I hope that when I re-write the ending, Shakespear wont roll in his grave! I am tryin to think about how it shall end....its gonna be happy and loved up. I cant believe I am gonna re-do the ending to such a tragic love story! Anyway, I will try my very best to make it just as good as the sad ending

Edited by: AmberAlysonlover at: 6/28/03 2:38 pm
AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Sun Jun 29, 2003 5:54 am

Well its another day, another post ;) Here is part 11 with the marrage of Rosenberg and Maclay. I hope u enjoy it before the death their friends happens in the next chapter. Did I say I love a good wedding ;)



Title - Rosenberg and Maclay part 11

Author name - AmberAlysonLover

Email Address - Beckycorr@hotmail.com

Rating - PG 13 - For true love and a very sweet wedding

Disclaimer - I dont own Willow or Tara...but Joss for once I'm taking control! And Thanks to William Shakespears for writting such a wonderful love story

Feedback- I would like feedback here

Summary- This is my verson of Romeo and Juliet. This is set in 2003 and I've taken some help from the movie. It has all the Buffy and some Angel characters. But we will know who the star crossed lover's are.....dont we

Notes- This is for my girlfriend Heather. I love you loads. But Please be gentle coz its my first fic. And doing a Willow and Tara verson of this great love story is hard u know.



*********************************************

William Shakespear and Rebecca Stone's



Rosenberg and Maclay



PART 11:





A few hours later TARA, The NURSE and PETER the limo driver set off to the church. TARA was scared but ready to become WILLOW'S wife. They drove into town and headed stright to the church. Inside the church, WILLOW, SPIKE and FATHER WELSEY were waiting for TARA to arrive. There was a full CHOIR ready to sing the song WILLOW knew TARA loved with her heart. Then from inside we see and hear FATHER WESLEY



FATHER WESLEY: These violent delights have violent ends!



We see WILLOW standing with SPIKE. She looks scared but ready to get married. WILLOW is wearing a summer outfit. The Father glances toward WILLOW. Then we hear the back church door open. FATHER WESLEY motions to the choir to get ready to sing.



FATHER WESLEY hurries from the altar over to WILLOW.



FATHER WESLEY: Here comes the lady





TARA bursts into the tiny chapel. WILLOW turns around to face her lover. TARA wore a simple white dress, with matching white flowers. She looked just like an angel to WILLOW. She felt her heart miss a beat and she took a deep breath, before TARA was standing at her side. The two girls held hands. Trying to observe a vestige of decorum, she greets FATHER WESLEY



TARA: Good afternoon to my ghostly confessor.



But before the priest can reply, the two lovers embrace, kissing passionately. From behind them, the choir began to sing



I lived my life in shadow, never the sun on my face

It didnt seem so bad though, I figured that was my place

Now I'm bathed in light, something just isnt right



I'm under your spell

How esle could it be, anyone would notice me

Its magic I can tell

How you set me free, brought me out so easily



FATHER WESLEY: Come, come, and we will make short work. For, by your leaves, you shall not stay alone Till Holy Church incorporate two in one.



A young girl with a voice like an angel steps forward. She sings a small solo



You make me believe



FATHER WESLEY: Do you, Willow Rosenberg, take this woman, Tara, to be yours forever, in good times and bad, for richer or poorer, in sickness and in health, until death do you part?"



WILLOW looked at TARA, tears in her eyes, smiling the happiest smile TARA had ever seen, and half-spoke, half-whispered



WILLOW: I do



TARA smiled before looking at FATHER WESLEY



FATHER WESLEY: Do you, Tara Maclay, take this woman, Willow, to be your forever, in good times and bad, for richer and poorer, im sickness and in health, until death do you part??



WILLOW turned to her, awaiting her response, but she felt herself slipping into TARA'S deep blue eyes



TARA: I do



As tears welled up in her eyes, WILLOW took TARA's hands, leaned in and did the only thing she possibly could have done. She kissed the bride.



We then see a simple silver ring. Engraved on the inside of the band are the words 'I love thee.' WILLOW slips the ring onto TARA's finger as the priest executes the formal sacrament of marriage



The moon to the tide, I can feel you inside

I'm under your spell, surging like the sea

Pulled to you so helplessley, I break with every swell

Lost in ecstasy, spead beneath my Willow tree



FATHER WESLEY: Willow shall thank thee, daughter, for us both.



WILLOW and TARA both smile, before they started kissing passionately again. We see Through the majestic patterning of stained glass, and out of the church to find Peter, the chauffeur, cradling a small camera as he waits nervously beside the limo. Then WILLOW and TARA, now newly-wed, rush from the side door of the church. The priest follows, throwing handfuls of rice. Peter studiously takes a snap as the happy lover's kiss once more. Peter holds the door of the limousine open. Reluctantly TARA gets into the car. As the car pulls out of the driveway, WILLOW runs alongside. From inside the choir sing the last bars of " Under Your Spell"



You make me complete

You make me complete

You make me complete

You make me complete



Back outside, WILLOW is watching TARA'S limo drive off. She blows TARA many kisses before smiling at her wedding ring. TARA did really make WILLOW complete, just like WILLOW did for TARA. With one last kiss, WILLOW ran to her car and hoped to catch up with her gang and tell them the great news.



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So theres part 11. It took me ages to do that part. My mate help me but god weddings are hard to write ;) So from happy part 11 we go to huge death part 12 and 13! God, I am gonna have soooooo much fun doing these 2 parts........

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Rosenberg and Maclay - Star crossed lover's

Postby Washi » Sun Jun 29, 2003 7:11 am

Weddings are hard to write! Talk about engagements! :lol

I loved it, it's solemn, neither of them says a lot. No more than 2 sentences each. The silence puts in contrast the choir singing. Good job.



Love it. :grin

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

Washi
 


Romeo & Juliet

Postby KISMIC » Sun Jun 29, 2003 8:05 am

Ahh this is just wonderful, if only I'd had this version to learn the story of Romeo and Juliet from when I was studyingit in high school! That would have made it that much easier.



Love the story so far :clap

Here's to a happy ending in a Shakesperian story.

KISMIC
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby Lt Sticks » Sun Jun 29, 2003 11:59 am

YAY! They're married! And i loved the inclusion of "Under your Spell"





Do u think if I gave you a bribe, you'd make sure there was a happy ending? *prays* :p



~Sticks

A fire in my heart, reborn from the ashes...just call me Phoenix



I'm Under Your Spell, nothing I can do, you just took my soul with you...

Lt Sticks
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Sun Jun 29, 2003 1:17 pm

everyone dont worry, there wil be a happy ending! No Willow or Tara deaths in my story :)



Edited by: AmberAlysonlover at: 6/29/03 1:21 pm
AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Sun Jun 29, 2003 2:34 pm

This part as the first death in it. It's kinda heavy but I hope u like it. And yeah Willow goes insane and does something very silly in part 13!



Title - Rosenberg and Maclay part 12

Author name - AmberAlysonLover

Email Address - Beckycorr@hotmail.com

Rating - R - For Heavy angst, evil Maclay's, a nasty fight and a sad death

Disclaimer - I dont own Willow or Tara...but Joss for once I'm taking control! And Thanks to William Shakespears for writting such a wonderful love story

Feedback- I would like feedback here

Summary- This is my verson of Romeo and Juliet. This is set in 2003 and I've taken some help from the movie. It has all the Buffy and some Angel characters. But we will know who the star crossed lover's are.....dont we

Notes- This is for my girlfriend Heather. I love you loads. But Please be gentle coz its my first fic. And doing a Willow and Tara verson of this great love story is hard u know.



*********************************************

William Shakespear and Rebecca Stone's



Rosenberg and Maclay



PART 12:



We are now on Sunny dale beach. We hear a muffled BANG! We see that ANYA - wading in knee deep water close to the beach - is hunting fish, while XANDER shelters in the shade of an unmanned life guard tower. A shimmering heat haze blankets the deserted beach and the horizon is stacked with purple storm clouds.



XANDER: I beg thee, good Anya, let's retire. The day is hot,



ANYA, ignoring him, plugs away at another fish. XANDER nervously looks to see if there is any reaction to the sound of the shot.



XANDER: The Maclay's are abroad. And if we meet we shall not 'scape a brawl.



ANYA strides out of the water.



ANYA: Thou art like one of these fellows that, when he enters the confines of a tavern, claps me his sword upon the table and says 'God send me no need of thee!' (she hands XANDER her gun) and by the operation of the second cup draws him on the drawer, when indeed there is no need.



Another incredible sleight of hand routine and ANYA has managed to draw XANDER's pistol, retrieve her own gun, and trap XANDER with a barrel at each temple. The joke has worn thin for XANDER; he pushes past ANYA toward where SPIKE, DAWN and BUFFY lounge in the shade of the beach-side hang. Suddenly he stops dead - a monstrous black sedan prowls into the beach side parking lot.



XANDER: By my head, here comes the Maclay's.



ANYA: By fuzzy bunnies I dont care!



The sedan mounts the curb and slides to a halt only metres from XANDER and ANYA. FRED, FAITH and ANGEL alight from the sedan and walk menacingly toward ANYA and XANDER.



FRED: Good afternoon, Rosenberg gang. A word with one of you.



The gang are drawn the MACLAY car, converge - eyes dart nervously, hands stray towards guns.



ANYA smiles mockingly.



ANYA: And but one word with one of us? Couple it with something. Make it a word and a...



Leaning close to FRED, she smiles once again



ANYA: lick



ANYA scores. The gang laugh.



FRED (furious) You shall find me apt enough to that, miss, (clutching at her side arm) And you will give me occasion.



We see ANYA. She stops, eyeing the hand on the gun. No one moves.



ANYA (a breathy, coquettish voice) Could you not take some occasion without giving?



The boys fall about again. FRED cracks.



FRED: Anya, thou sleeping with Willow?



The accusation stings - ANYA's anger flares.



ANYA: Sleeping? What, dost thou make me a lesbain? Willow is my best friend, not my lover! Here is my lover



She points at XANDER and at her gun



ANYA: Here's that shall make you dance. (barking at FRED) Zounds, (goading her to go for her gun) draw!



FRED is going crazy. ANYA will not back down. XANDER tries to diffuse things.



XANDER: Either withdraw unto some private place. Or reason coldly of your grievances. Here all eyes gaze on us.



ANYA; Men's eyes were made to look, and let them gaze. I will not budge for no man's pleasure, I.



At that moment, WILLOW's car pulls into the lot. FRED smiles.



FRED: Peace with you, here is the woman I'm after



FRED moves toward WILLOW who bounds from her car full of happy news.



FRED: Willow, the love I bear thee can afford No better term than this:



We see FRED She clears her jacket from her side arm and issues the challenge.



FRED: Thou art a villain!



We see ANYA, then XANDER. Everyone's eye's are on WILLOW. She calmly approaches her new cousin.



WILLOW: Fred, the reason that I have to love thee Doth much excuse the appertaining rage To such a greeting: villain am I none Therefore farewell. I see thou knowest me not.



She reaches her hand out to FRED. We can see FRED trying to understand what WILLOW had just done, she then hits her hand away. WILLOW turns, and to the amazement of all, walks back to her car. FRED, unable to shoot her in the back, is confused. She hurls herself into her sedan. Kicking it into a sand spraying U-turn, she careens the short distance to WILLOW's car. Slamming into the back of it he blocks WILLOW in. FRED leaps out, maniacally kicking at bumper, door and headlights. WILLOW flicks the locks down. FRED shatters the side window and hauls WILLOW through the door, slamming her against the savaged fuselage.



FRED: Girl, this shall not excuse the injuries That thou hast done me!



She smashes WILLOW across the face, WILLOW crashes to the roadway.



FRED (yelling) Turn and draw.



A cut has opened in the side of WILLOW's mouth. She unsteadily lifts herself up, and meeting FRED's gaze, speaks through bloodied teeth.



WILLOW: I never injured thee, And so, good Maclay, The house which has my wife, which name I tender As dearly as mine own...



WILLOW cautiously extracts her gun...



WILLOW: ...be satisfied.



...and throws it at FRED's feet.



Storm clouds obscure the sun as WILLOW turns and walks from the parking lot. ANYA, XANDER and the others cannot believe their ears or eyes, did WILLOW say wife?



ANYA: O calm, dishonourable, vile submission!



FRED'S anger must be answered. She ceremoniously disarms, gives her weapon to FAITH, and sprints after WILLOW who is now passing a beach side lot that houses an abandoned grand hotel. A bone-cracking kick sends WILLOW crumbling into the vacant lot. The gang swarm toward the fray. WILLOW, still refusing the fight, scrambles up the stairs of the deserted hotel. FRED trips her and WILLOW careens into an ornamental wooden railing, smashing it to pieces. FRED kicks savagely at the helpless WILLOW. Suddenly, ANYA appears running full tilt down the concrete terrace. She plucks up one of the splintered wooden palings and yells...



ANYA: Fred, you little vampire lover



...as she bludgeons her across the face. FRED goes down.



ANYA: Will you answer me back?



FRED leaps to her feet grabbing a lump of wood.



ANYA: Vampire lover?? At least I'm not sleeping with monkey boy!



She swipes at ANYA.



ANYA: (avoiding) Your nothing but a little vampire magnet!



ANYA jabs, FRED sidesteps.



FRED: Oh, that hurt me!



FRED aims a double-handed blow to ANYA's head. ANYA blocks, hooking FRED's stick away. Unarmed, FRED throws her full body weight upon ANYA, slamming her against a window that shatters in a storm of glass. Lightning fast, ANYA jackknifes to her feet. She raises her weapon to deliver a skull-crushing final blow to the trapped FRED. WILLOW rushes between them.



WILLOW: NO! Stop this now, Anya!



Seizing the opportunity, FRED lunges at WILLOW with a lethal triangle of broken glass. She misses, gouging instead a slash of flesh from ANYA's stomach. A scream of excruciating pain as ANYA grabs at her bloodied side. Everyone is still. In the abrupt silence, sirens are heard closing in the distance. FAITH tugs at FRED



FAITH: Away Fred! We have to run now!



They bolt for their vehicle. XANDER goes to ANYA



XANDER: Art thou hurt?



But ANYA, covering her wound with her hand, laughs.



ANYA: It's just a scratch.



She turns to her assembled fans at the bottom of the stairs. With outrageous bravado she plays at being Caesar the conqueror.



ANYA: A scratch!



The gang cheer their conquering hero. WILLOW helps ANYA down the stairs.



WILLOW: Courage, Anya. The hurt cannot be much.



ANYA holding her bleeding side, jokes through the pain.



ANYA: Thats very true. Ask for me tomorrow and you shall find me a grave girl.



She turns the next thought to the assembled audience.



ANYA ( through crazy laughter ): A plague of demons upon your houses



ANYA turns from the cheering gang to WILLOW who is struggling to support her weight. ANYA - through weak and desperate breathing.



ANYA: Why the devil came you between us? I was your best friend



WILLOW starts to register the panic in ANYA's eyes



WILLOW: I thought all for the best.



Like an animal trying to break free from a mortal trap, ANYA pushes WILLOW away. She screams in horror, as if falling in the dark:



ANYA: A plague of demons upon your houses! They have made worms' meat of me.



ANYA staggers down the stairs and collapses in the dirt. WILLOW is there instantly, cradling her friend's head out of the dust. The dying girl stares back at WILLOW, smiling through the chilling cold.



ANYA (a silent whisper): Your houses!



Everything stands still, everything is quiet. The storm finally breaks. Tiny drops of water fall from the sky and bespeckle ANYA's lifeless body. The droplets grow to a heavy rain. willow can hear the faint sound a thousand miles away of XANDER whispering:



XANDER: My girlfriend is dead!



Tears streak WILLOW's face. She cries out.



WILLOW: Oh sweet Tara, even through I love thee, I need to cause pain



The sound of FRED 's vehicle starting brings back cold reality. WILLOW's sorrow turns to uncontrollable rage. Shrugging aside BUFFY's attempts to restrain her, WILLOW runs to her car. We can see XANDER crying over ANYA's lifeless body on the sand. Before we see WILLOW driving away fast.



T.B.C............









AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby Washi » Sun Jun 29, 2003 4:03 pm

Wow! That was top notch.

Willow being so calm and passive and Fred, who's the passive one on angel, here is an insane person. Gotta love that . :grin

More, soonish? ;)

-------------------



"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

Washi
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Sun Jun 29, 2003 4:20 pm

Thanks Washi :)



Fred will get whats coming to her! Believe me and Willow will make it good......even thou it will tear her apart.



I will work on part 13 tomorrow and add it sometime in the nite

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby Washi » Sun Jun 29, 2003 4:22 pm

Thanks. I hope I'll be able to catch it since I leave for vacation on Tuesday morning. If I don't, well, I'll just have to check it out at a cyber cafe sometime later. :)

-------------------



"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

Washi
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Mon Jun 30, 2003 5:07 am

Its another day, another post. I am feeling very powerful coz I can do whatever I like with this story. I can kill off any other Buffy or Angel characters and not be hated ;) I know how Joss feels now hehe ;)



Oh I have changed the opening to my story. I got it mixed up so theres a new start....



Anyway, I am now working on part 13 and I shall post it here later :)

Edited by: AmberAlysonlover at: 6/30/03 4:48 am
AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Mon Jun 30, 2003 6:10 am



Title - Rosenberg and Maclay part 13

Author name - AmberAlysonLover

Email Address - Beckycorr@hotmail.com

Rating - R - For Heavy angst, evil Maclay's, a nasty fight and a sad death

Disclaimer - I dont own Willow or Tara...but Joss for once I'm taking control! And Thanks to William Shakespears for writting such a wonderful love story

Feedback- I would like feedback here

Summary- This is my verson of Romeo and Juliet. This is set in 2003 and I've taken some help from the movie. It has all the Buffy and some Angel characters. But we will know who the star crossed lover's are.....dont we

Notes- This is for my girlfriend Heather. I love you loads. But Please be gentle coz its my first fic. And doing a Willow and Tara verson of this great love story is hard u know.



*********************************************

William Shakespear and Rebecca Stone's



Rosenberg and Maclay



PART 13:



Up ahead FRED's sedan screeches into a fishtailing U-turn and powers away. WILLOW jumps into her vehicle. In an effort to head FRED off, she guns her damaged machine down a one way street. The rain is now blinding. WILLOW stops for nothing; pedestrians flee, cars spin out of control. A local Police airplane is flying above them, they can see the two cars speed along parallel roads toward Sunny dale town. WILLOW is gaining. FRED's car negotiating the immense roundabout at the foot of the statue of Jesus. WILLOW's car firing out of the one way street and slamming into FRED's car. FRED's car careens out of control up the stairs of the statue, clips the fountain, flips, and slides upside down onto the roadway.



FRED scrambling from her upturned vehicle. We see FAITH lying dead in the car and ANGEL was dusted by a pen knife. FRED looks around for her friends, then she see's WILLOW running toward her. WILLOW is halted by FRED's drawn gun. Fearlessly marching toward it, she screams through tears



WILLOW: ANYA's soul is but a little way above our heads,



WILLOW grabs the barrel of the gun; forcing it between her own eyes, she growls insanely at FRED



WILLOW: Kill me to keep her company!



FRED, unnerved, tries to back off.



FRED: Thou, wretched girl, what would Tara say??



WILLOW, refusing to let go of the gun, forces FRED backward through the torrential rain.



WILLOW (with frightening intensity) Dont you dare bring her name into this! Do what I ask of you!



Panicked, FRED wrenches free and lurches onto the roadway. Blinded by the headlights of an oncoming car she thuds onto its hood as it skids to a halt. The impact catapults her gun high into the air. WILLOW coldly follows its slow motion, spinning trajectory. Real time comes back stretches as the gun dances high above her head. Police sirens, cars swerving, people screaming, and the yelling of panicked commands fade to a nothingness. WILLOW stands calmly considering the gun in the air. WILLOW can hear echo of ANYA's voice



ANYA: Why the devil came you between us?



We seePatrol cars sliding to a halt. The spinning gun slowly falling to earth. FRED rising from the ground. Then we see cops leaping from their cars. The gun landing in WILLOW's hand. Her eyes are full of rage.



COP: Put up your gun



FRED smiles at the cop, then at WILLOW. That drives WILLOW over the edge.



WILLOW: I owe you pain!



WILLOW fires three deliberate shots. FRED's body convulses backwards against the car, hitting it with a thud, bloodying the shattered windscreen. The cop fires. A bullet grazes WILLOW's arm - her gun drops as she screams.



WILLOW: Oh god, what have I done?



At that moment a roaring hurricane wind hits; blinding police. We see the scaffolding surrounding the Jesus statue. Part of it's canvas covering rips away. Scaffold rains down as the insanely flapping material tries to smash free from it's moorings. Through the mayhem, a rusty Ford driven by SPIKE, slides to a halt. SPIKE screams out at WILLOW



SPIKE: Willow, away be gone! Stand not amazed!



SPIKE pulls WILLOW away. She collapses into the front seat. The cops open fire as SPIKE speeds off into the storm. We see WILLOW'S arm bleeding from the bullet graze. The gale-force winds throw waves across the causeway as the fugitives disappear into the black afternoon. In the distance we see ROSENBERG and MACLAY towers. Divided by the statue of Christ, they suffer the storm's rage.



Then we are back below the outstretched arms of Christ, lights from emergency vehicles pulse red through the downpour. Our eyes falls through heavy rain toward a woman crouched over the lifeless body of FRED. It is HEATHER MACLAY, she is screaming with sadness



HEATHER: Winifred!



Cops nervously eye MARTIN MACLAY and IRA ROSENBERG, who, both flanked by body guards, face each other across the crime scene. Medics stand by helplessly as HEATHER clings to FRED's body. A handcuffed XANDER looks on.



HEATHER: Winifred, my cousin, O my brother's child! O, the blood is spilled of my dear kinsman.



Police lines part as CAPTAIN GILES arrives.



CAPTAIN GILES: Where are the vile beginners of this fray?



XANDER struggles forward. His face still wet from his tears



XANDER: O noble Prince I can discover all The unlucky manage of this fatal brawl.



HEATHER appeals hysterically:



HEATHER: Prince as thou art true, For blood of ours shed blood of Rosenberg!



CAPTAIN GILES: Xander, who began this bloody fray?



XANDER (pointing to FRED's corpse) There lies the girl, slain by young Willow, That took the life of my girlfriend Anya



HEATHER interjects savagely.



HEATHER: He speaks not true! Affection makes him false



XANDER: Willow, that spoke her fair, could not take Truce with the unruly spleen of FRED Deaf to peace!



HEATHER: She is a kinsman to the Rosenberg! I beg for justice which thou Prince must give. Willow slew Fred, Willow must not live!



CAPTAIN GILES turns to HEATHER



CAPTAIN GILES: Willo slew her, she slew Anya. Now I have to make a stand



IRA ROSENBREG pleads:



IRA: Not Willow, Prince, she was Anya's friend; Her fault concludes but what the law should end, The life of Fred



CAPTIAN GILES eyes IRA coldly.



CAPTIAN GILES: And for that offence Immediately we do exile her.



IRA, body guards in tow, surges forward.



IRA: Now, come on.....



GILES silences him.



CAPTAIN GILES: I will be deaf to pleading and excuses; Nor tears nor prayers shall purchase out abuses. Therefore use none.



The CAPTAIN turns and addresses his assembled officers.



CAPTAIN GILES: Let Willow hence in haste, Else, when she is found that hour is her last!



*******************************************



Is it all over for Willow?? Will her and Tara make love??? Keep reading and u will find out hehe ;)







AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby onyxsundrops » Mon Jun 30, 2003 9:22 am

:clap I've been keeping up with the story, and finally decided to leave a little feedback. It's been awhile since I've seen the R&J movie, but from what I remember, you're capturing the story really well. Kudos!:grin

onyxsundrops
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Mon Jun 30, 2003 2:37 pm

thanks Onyxsundrops :)

I watched the film last nite and yeah I cried at the end. I totally love the film and I thought a Willow and Tara verson would be totally cool....and I was right ;) There is alot more to come and I hope my new happy ending will make everyone smile and happy....also I hope Shakespeare can forgive me hehe ;)

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby Taras Shadow » Mon Jun 30, 2003 2:43 pm

AmberAlysonlover



Wow...sad. :sob



*sighs* Beautiful!



Quote:
hope my new happy ending will make everyone smile and happy
A happy ending with Willow and Tara...will sure to make all of us smile! No need to worry about that. You are doing a very awesome job with this. As I've expressed so many times previously.



Keep it up!!



~Holly~ :heart

Paulie: You think I'm a lesbian?

Mary: You're a girl in love with a girl, aren't you?

Paulie: No, I'm Paulie in love with Tori. And Tori is - she is in love with me, because she is mine and I am hers. And neither of us are lesbians. - Lost and Delirious -

Taras Shadow
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Mon Jun 30, 2003 3:35 pm

Title - Rosenberg and Maclay part 14

Author name - AmberAlysonLover

Email Address - Beckycorr@hotmail.com

Rating - R - tears and hurt

Disclaimer - I dont own Willow or Tara...but Joss for once I'm taking control! And Thanks to William Shakespears for writting such a wonderful love story

Feedback- I would like feedback here

Summary- This is my verson of Romeo and Juliet. This is set in 2003 and I've taken some help from the movie. It has all the Buffy and some Angel characters. But we will know who the star crossed lover's are.....dont we

Notes- This is for my girlfriend Heather. I love you loads. But Please be gentle coz its my first fic. And doing a Willow and Tara verson of this great love story is hard u know.



*********************************************

William Shakespear and Rebecca Stone's



Rosenberg and Maclay



PART 14:



We are in now TARA's bedroom. We see TARA is traces the path of a raindrop on the window pane as she speaks her thoughts to the storm.



TARA: Come gentle night, coming loving black browed night, Give me my Willow. And when I shall die, Take her and cut her out in little stars, And she will make the face of heaven so fine That all the world will be in love with night, And pay no worship to the garish sun. I have bought the mansion of a love But not possessed it, and though I am sold, Not yet enjoyed. I wish Willow would come to me and make me whole. So tedious is this day As is the night before some festival To an impatient child that hath new robes And may not wear them.



TARA then see's the limo pulling into the driveway. TARA runs from the room. Through the open doorway we see an excited TARA meet the NURSE at the bottom of the stairs. We can see the NURSE is talking to TARA, before TARA falls into her arms.



TARA: Oh God! Did Willow's hand shed Fred's blood?



NURSE: It did! It did! I'm so sorry, it did!



TARA: Oh serpent heart, hid with a flowering face. Was ever book containing such vile matter So fairly bound? O, that deceit should dwell In such a gorgeous palace!



NURSE: There's no trust, No faith, no honesty in girls. All perjured, All forsworn, all naught, all dissemblers. Shame come to Willow



TARA: Blistered be thy tongue For such a wish! She was not born to shame. Upon her brow shame is ashamed to sit.



NURSE: Will you speak well of her that killed your cousin?



TARA: Shall I speak ill of her that is my wife? Ah, poor my lord, what tongue shall smooth thy name When I, thy three-hours wife have mangled it? But whyfore, villain, didst thou kill my cousin? That villain cousin would have killed my wife. All this is comfort, wherefore weep I then? Some word there was worser than Fred's death: I would forget it fain - exiled. Fred is dead, and Willow exiled. To speak that word is father, mother, Fred, Willow, Tara, all slain, All dead.



TARA sinks to the floor, overwhelmed by tears.



TARA: Nurse, I'll to my wedding bed, And death, not Willow, take my maidenhead.



NURSE looks down at TARA. She goes and comforts her.



NURSE: Hie to your chamber. I'll find Willow To comfort you. I know well where she is. Hark ye, your Willow will be here at night.



TARA looks up through tears.



TARA: O find her, give this ring to my true princess, And bid her come to take her last farewell.



TARA gives her wedding ring to the NURSE. We can see the words " I love thee" inside.



******************************************



PART 15 is gonna be posted tomorrow :)



AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby Washi » Tue Jul 01, 2003 4:50 am

I so want more... SO.

Great writing, great cliffhanger! :lol

I'm being delayed for another week or so, so I'll probably be here to read the whole thing. :grin

-------------------



"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

Washi
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Tue Jul 01, 2003 6:01 am

Title - Rosenberg and Maclay part 15

Author name - AmberAlysonLover

Email Address - Beckycorr@hotmail.com

Rating - R - For anger and pain

Disclaimer - I dont own Willow or Tara...but Joss for once I'm taking control! And Thanks to William Shakespears for writting such a wonderful love story

Feedback- I would like feedback here

Summary- This is my verson of Romeo and Juliet. This is set in 2003 and I've taken some help from the movie. It has all the Buffy and some Angel characters. But we will know who the star crossed lover's are.....dont we

Notes- This is for my girlfriend Heather. I love you loads. But Please be gentle coz its my first fic. And doing a Willow and Tara verson of this great love story is hard u know.



*********************************************

William Shakespear and Rebecca Stone's



Rosenberg and Maclay



PART 15:



We see WILLOW lieing on the bed shirtless and crying. Her wound has been bandaged and SPIKE crouches frightened in the corner. FATHER WESLEY was at her side, giving her water and a cover to keep warm. Then a loud bang is heared. FATHER WESLEY jumps up, walks to the front door and can tell its the NURSE and she's looking for WILLOW. He lets her in and they go to WILLOW'S side.



WILLOW: Nurse!



She goes to him.



NURSE: Ah miss! Ah miss! Death's the end of all.



WILLOW: Speakest thou of Tara? Where is she? And how doth she? And what says My concealed lady to our cancelled love?



NURSE: O, she says nothing, miss, but weeps and weeps, And then on Willow cries, and then falls down again.



WILLOW starts to wailing inconsolably.



WILLOW: As if that name, Shot from the deadly level of a gun, Did murder her, as that name's cursed hand murdered her kinsman!



FATHER WESLEY shakes the hysterical girl.



FATHER WESLEY: I thought thy disposition better tempered! Thy Tara is alive, There art thou happy. The law that threatened death becomes thy friend And turns it to exile. There art thou happy. A pack of blessings light upon thy back.



WILLOW calms. The NURSE gives her the ring.



NURSE: Here miss, a ring my lady bid me give you.



WILLOW enfolds the ring in her hand.



WILLOW: How well my comfort is revived by this.



The priest goes to his wardrobe, removes a clean white shirt and helps WILLOW put it on.



FATHER WESLEY: Go, get thee to thy love, as was decreed. Ascend her chamber. Hence and comfort her. But look thou stay not till the Watch be set, For then thou canst not pass to Mantua where thou shalt live till we can find a time To blaze your marriage, reconcile your friends, Beg pardon of the Prince and call thee back, With twenty hundred thousand times more joy Than thou wentst forth in lamentation.



FATHER WESLEY ushers WILLOW from the room. They hurry down the hallway. The priest opens the front door.



FATHER WESLEY: Go hence. Be gone by the break of day Sojourn in Mantua. Give me thy hand.



WILLOW embraces him. They have been close friends for years



WILLOW: Farewell.



The priest and SPIKE watch as WILLOW and the NURSE sprint for the car. They both hoped they would make it in time.



********************************************



PART 16 is gonna take longer. There is a love scene in it coz its only fair Willow and Tara can make love ;)





AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Tue Jul 01, 2003 1:35 pm

Title - Rosenberg and Maclay part 16

Author name - AmberAlysonLover

Email Address - Beckycorr@hotmail.com

Rating - NC17 - For kinda sumty sex

Disclaimer - I dont own Willow or Tara...but Joss for once I'm taking control! And Thanks to William Shakespears for writting such a wonderful love story

Feedback- I would like feedback here

Summary- This is my verson of Romeo and Juliet. This is set in 2003 and I've taken some help from the movie. It has all the Buffy and some Angel characters. But we will know who the star crossed lover's are.....dont we

Notes- This is for my girlfriend Heather. I love you loads. But Please be gentle coz its my first fic. And doing a Willow and Tara verson of this great love story is hard u know.



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William Shakespear and Rebecca Stone's



Rosenberg and Maclay



PART 16:



Back at the MACLAY'S mansion we can hear sobs throughtout the house. RILEY FINN stands in the entrance hallway clutching a huge bunch of flowers. MARTIN MACLAY stands beside him, whisky glass in hand. We then see HEATHER MACLAY on the upper landing. There is a strange faraway quality about her as she descends to RILEY and MARTIN.



HEATHER: She'll not come down tonight.



RILEY nods and gives an understanding smile.



RILEY: These times of woe afford no times to woo.



MARTIN guides RILEY into the house



MARTIN: Look you, she loved her kinsman Winifred Burkle dearly.



HEATHER (joining) And so did I.



MARTIN (a cold glance at HEATHER) Well, we were born to die.



MARTIN takes a large slug of whisky. HEATHER leans close to RILEY



HEATHER: I'll know her mind early tomorrow. Tonight she's mewed up to her heaviness.



As HEATHER, RILEY and MARTIN exit down the hallway we can hear TARA crying in her bedroom.



We then move to TARA'S bedroom. We see TARA's face. Tears stream onto her sofa. Without warning a hand lightly touches her cheek. Juliet's eyes dart up to discover WILLOW standing above her. A still moment of disbelief. Leaning down, WILLOW kisses away the tears that fall from her blue, wide eyes.



WILLOW: My dear love....dont cry



TARA: I thought you have gone.....and left me



WILLOW: shhh, no talking now sweet angel



The candle next to TARA'S bed lit up the room. WILLOW kissed her wife gently before TARA blew out the candle. The room suddenly seemed very dark again, a private, exotic space for the two of them. WILLOW peered through the gloom, carefully reaching out her hands for TARA's. Their hands touched and the contact quickened up their arms and touching shoulders. WILLOW took a step forward and was surprised by the touch of TARA, full length as she too moved closer.



WILLOW: I've longed for this moment



WILLOW's voice was soft and hesitant. She had her hands on TARA's waist, still trying to work out where she was in the gloom. TARA's eyes were better adjusted to the darkness and she leant her face close, brushing her lips against WILLOW's. The first touch of her lips was electric. TARA had been longing for this for so long and now the long, dark, lonely night had brought her dream to life. She could smell WILLOW, a patchouli and clean soap smell, and her lips were soft and sweet. TARA kissed her again, gently. She could see that WILLOW's eyes had closed and she slid her arms around her neck and down her back as her kisses became longer and more definite. TARA felt WILLOW moan then her cuts rubbed agaisnt TARA'S body.



TARA: Im so sorry, baby girl



WILLOW was quiet and still, enjoying this simple contact and thrilled by the promise of the darkened room, and the implications of her promise to make TARA feel happy. WILLOW returned TARA's kisses, breathing harder as their lips began to open. She could feel a pressure building -- wanting to be closer, wanting to have someone of her own again. She ran her hands round to TARA's back, touching the soft skin at her waist. With a soft shock, she felt TARA's breasts against her own, so different from her ex's. Thoughts of her only other lover were pushed aside by TARA's tongue, slipping against her lips, then inside, wet sliding. WILLOW reciprocated, first lightly touching, then more deeply, as the two women became more passionate



TARA's heart was pounding, her stomach fluttered and she could feel her nipples harden. WILLOW's hands smoothed up her back under her blouse, the force pulling the material against her stomach and her braless breasts and the pushing and pulling was resolved when WILLOW pushed back for a moment, then used both hands to pull TARA's blouse up over her head. TARA assisted her, raising her arms above her head. She only realised the vulnerability of the position when WILLOW stopped, just as the blouse was pulling free, running her hands down TARA's naked arms and down to her breasts. TARA shuddered with a fierce curl of desire, her arms suspended above her head. TARA felt that she was in a dream, wet mouth on her nipples, warm strong fingers on her ribs, teasing, rubbing. She managed to drop the blouse free at last. WILLOW's hands stilled on her waist, pushing her gently backwards. TARA walked back, as she looked down at the hands, then up at WILLOW's dear face, the face that she had embedded in her mind. WILLOW's bright eyes returned her gaze, stilling her movement just as TARA's legs touched the bed and she automatically sat down on its edge.



WILLOW: 'Tara, are you...?'



WILLOW asked breathily, wanting permission, wanting to be sure



TARA: 'Yes, I... want...'



Tara shook her head slightly. Waking from the trance of first contact, she could look up at her love, her lover. Her voice firmed,



TARA: 'You're... wonderful... This is... wonderful.'



TARA reached up, sliding her hands up under WILLOW's blouse, removing it and leaving them both bare breasted. She ran her fingertips down over WILLOW's breasts, marvelling at her smooth skin and hardened nipples. TARA saw the cuts on WILLOW'S belly. They looked so painful and it made TARA sigh. Her hands reached WILLOW's waist and suddenly she was hugging her, reassuring, giving both of them some time. TARA's face was against WILLOW's smooth warm tummy and she turned to smell and kiss, then lick and rub, lost in the glory of intimacy: just to be here with her beloved. Brave, funny, magical WILLOW



WILLOW looked down at TARA, affectionately deciding that although her hair was messy, it was still perfect; her shoulders shone in the blue-grey light. WILLOW ran her hands over TARA's shoulders, urging her hot mouth up to her nipples. TARA's mouth enclosed first one, then the other. Then she used both hands to cup WILLOW's breasts, teasing her nipples through her fingers. WILLOW felt that she had opened a direct current to her sex. Her hands clutched at TARA's head, holding her closer as she began to move her shoulders to intensify the sensation first on one side then the other.



TARA could feel WILLOW's excitement -- she began to pant softly and below her lips, TARA could feel her heart thundering. TARA's hands tried to follow her, but WILLOW stepped back a pace and, reaching behind her, loosened her skirt, dropping it and her panties to the floor. Leaving her shoes on the pile of clothes she moved forward, leaning TARA back on the bed and bending her head to her breasts. As she looked up at the ceiling, striving for calm, TARA realised that everything was very quiet. Usually on a night like this, there would be noise from all around the house -- music, tv, conversations in the other rooms. But tonight her room seemed filled with the quiet sounds of sex, and she could smell WILLOW's arousal as she lay beside her on the bed.



WILLOW moved her head up, looking carefully at TARA's face, as she traced a hand over her breasts and up to her throat and lips



WILLOW: Your my beautiful angel



She moistened her finger in her own mouth then returned it to run over TARA's lips.



TARA: Thank you, sweet Willow



TARA returned with a nervous smile. TARA couldn't help but think of the future. What does this mean now? How will... Her thoughts were derailed by WILLOW's mouth and body. TARA was again being thoroughly kissed and WILLOW slid her knee up over TARA's hips, pressing firmly against her. WILLOW shifted slightly, and TARA realised WILLOW was here, naked and aroused on her bed. TARA couldn't resist the lure of WILLOW's sex and she lifted her hand slightly -- amazed when her fingers slipped easily into WILLOW's slippery cunt.



TARA felt a small shock of air, as WILLOW gasped into her mouth. She drew her head back, then rested it on TARA's chest, her red hair spilling over to hide her face. TARA could feel the soft folds of her cunt, and her questing fingers explored up and down, rubbing softly, wondering at the heat and wetness -- familiar, but different. WILLOW's breath was hot and hard against TARA who could feel her hard clit between her fingers. She held it still and rubbed the tip with her thumb. WILLOW's breathing changed, hitched, and suddenly she was crying out, hips pumping against TARA's hand as she came with a rush.



WILLOW: 'Ah, ah, oh,'



Willow was trying to say something. She was panting harshly as she lifted her head and looked up at TARA



WILLOW: oh... thank you... I love you.'



Her eyes were better adjusted now and through her post-orgasmic jitters, she thought she could see tears standing out in TARA's eyes.



TARA: 'I w-want you to be happy. I th-thought you were leaving...



TARA's voice wobbled uncertainly as two tears spilled over and made their way down her face. She was completely smitten by the beautiful, powerful woman she had in her arms, but she knew WILLOW had to leave. TARA couldnt or wouldnt let her go, her beloved wife.



WILLOW: 'Shh, it's okay. Everything's okay



WILLOW smiled at her, a smile that was crooked, but getting closer to her trademark grin.



WILLOW: In fact, you could say that everything's just peachy.'



She smiled again, and TARA couldn't help but smile in return.



TARA: 'Why don't you lie down for a minute?"



TARA suggested, as she swiped her tears away, noticing as she did that her hand smelt delightfully of WILLOW. If this is what her ex's could smell.......



TARA pushed the thought aside. She wanted to look at WILLOW - - drink her in. She was trying to commit the whole night to memory, and now that she'd made WILLOW come, much of her passiveness was gone. When WILLOW lay back, TARA moved closer and raised herself up on one elbow, delighted that the dim light from the window was now enough to clearly make out WILLOW's shape. From her beloved face, down to her breasts, her nipples soft for the moment, over the sweep of her soft stomach, down to her red pubes and the just visible, pouty lips of her cunt. TARA stopped her slow trace down WILLOW's body.



TARA: 'Mmm,'



she said mischievously as she looked up at WILLOW. TARA caught WILLOW's hand as it tried to intervene, to cover her up.



TARA: 'Hmm, a prisoner,'



TARA mock threatened, as she gently turned over WILLOW's hand and kissed it. Then kissed it again, taking one of WILLOW's fingers into her mouth. As she sucked and licked at her hand, TARA could hear WILLOW's breathing quicken. A quick look, and her nipples were hardening too. Placing WILLOW's hand gently on the bed, TARA stood up. She quickly removed her skirt, panties and shoes and, somewhat more nervously now, returned to lie above WILLOW again.



WILLOW rolled over too, and they lay face to face. WILLOW gently ran her hand down TARA's side, over her hip and round to stroke her bum. She started kissing her again, pulling TARA in to her warm body. WILLOW could feel the subtle alchemy of their bodies, full length against each other. This feeling was real, something to be treasured -- a special first time. WILLOW was continually re-surprised by their lovemaking.



WILLOW knew that TARA was loving and kind, but was delighted to discover she was passionate and generous too. Now was the time to make good on her promise, and give back to TARA. WILLOW gently moved TARA onto her back, and began touching her, first her breasts, and kissing furiously, wetly, running a quick hand down to smooth through her blond pubes.



TARA's arms weren't sure where to be. As WILLOW's lips left hers and moved down closer to her cunt, TARA was caught up in a bloodrush of anxiety and lust. She couldn't help but try to move WILLOW's mouth away, worried about the smell, wanting to be nice for her, betraying her good-girl upbringing. She sat up and gently pulled on WILLOW's shoulders. WILLOW looked up at her. TARA was frowning slightly; she looked nervous. WILLOW smiled and moved her body up, complying with TARA's hands.



TARA: shall I keep going?



TARA asked, looking into WILLOW'S eyes. Abruptly WILLOW was kissing her hard, as she slid her hand against TARA's cunt. TARA's legs fell open as she revelled in the fingers stroking her. Their kissing slowed, then stopped, as both focussed on the new touch. Suddenly WILLOW levered herself up and away, to sit between TARA's legs. She could use both hands now, smoothing, stroking rhythmically. TARA was wet and sweet. She slipped one finger inside TARA, holding her lips open with the other and making her wet clit visible in the dim light.



TARA's thoughts of resistance had fled, and she could feel nothing but the roaring in her heart and the inexorable pull of lust from her cunt.



TARA threw her arm over her eyes, excluding even the dim light from the room. She cried out softly as WILLOW's warm, open mouth pressed against her. No first-time gentle kisses these, but tongue pushing against her clit, licking confidently. Now there were two fingers inside her, and they were moving too. WILLOW's tongue increased its beat as TARA felt her orgasm rush through her like a flood -- lifting her up and blessing her. She cried out again, her hips moving against WILLOW's mouth and hands.



WILLOW moved her head back, and watched a blush appear across TARA's chest, her breasts and her throat. She watched as TARA's arm moved away, and smiled lovingly as she wiped her mouth and wet chin while TARA watched unmoving and shocked from the bed. She reached out a cool hand and touched a hard nipple, moving up to enfold TARA in her arms when her whole body quaked with aftershocks of lust. TARA gratefully returned the hug and they lay against each other quietly, only the sound of TARA's slowing breathing disturbing the still night.



Willow realised that this would be okay. Everything would work out for them. She loved TARA, loved everything about her and wanted to be with her for ever. She was also intensely curious about the shy girl she loved. Was this TARA's first time? Did TARA enjoy their first time together?? Was this goodbye for ever?? Before tonight they were linked by an emotional, almost instinctive bond -- now they had all that, and great sex. WILLOW tightened her hold on TARA. The questions could wait. All that really mattered was that they were together now, and together they could do anything...



But downstairs, TARA's life was being planned for her........



MARTIN sits in an armchair drinking. RILEY and HEATHER sit opposite as MARTIN whips himself into a frenzy of drunken excitement.



MARTIN: We'll keep no great ado - a friend or two. For, hark you, Fred being slain so late, It may be thought we held him carelessly, Being our kinsman if we revel much - But soft what day is this?



RILEY: Monday Mr Maclay



MARTIN: Well Wednesday is too soon - what say you to Thursday?



HEATHER looks up alarmed; RILEY is stunned.



RILEY: I - I dont



MARTIN: (leaning close) I will make a desperate tender of my child's love. (a drunken good humour) I think she will be ruled in all respects by me; (exploding with hearty laughter) Nay, more, I doubt it not!



We see HEATHER, she doesnt look happy



MARTIN: (to RILEY) But what say you to Thursday?



RILEY is trying to catch up.



RILEY: Sir I



MARTIN looks at him with cold eyes



RILEY: I would that Thursday were tomorrow.



Delighted, MARTIN jumps to his feet.



MARTIN:Thursday let it be then!



MARTIN holds out his glass in toast. RILEY and HEATHER rise.



MARTIN: Wife, go you to Tara ere you go to bed. Tell her, a Thursday she shall be married To this noble sir!



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I wish I had sex like Willow and Tara ;) I hope u enjoyed it coz that was hard to write hehe ;) PART 17 coming very soon

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Romeo & Juliet

Postby Washi » Tue Jul 01, 2003 1:50 pm

First of all, pretty great sex or love-making scene. It was pretty hot. And, am I the only one that hates Mr. Maclay?

More soonish, I'm really curious to see how you will end this to make it have a happy ending. :grin

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

Washi
 

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