Torturing touch

[SJ]

Thanks for the update

[Bubblecath]

Hey Auburn! great update!

The Hoki Koki! te he he - that was too funny!



and now i have memories of primary school discos where the Hoki Koki was THE dance to do.



anyway- hurry with an update (please )

cath

xxx

[Stroke of Luck]

One question: What is the Hoki Koki is it something like the duck dance??? Just curious there are so many different meanings and I dont know really much about the american lifestile. I am sorry I couldn´t follow the dance instructions, silly me



But I loved that update, was just too funny with the brain talking, but I hope that the girls dont do more, because I dont want to see them in trouble.



More please but this time maybe a lovely fun scene between both couples. and please no jokes lol



And you still own the crown, I know, and you will ever keep it. Your just THE cliffhanger Queen And thanx for that my day gets better and better



Cu

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

[tararosenburg]

Ok I started to read this yesterday and now I'm done and want more! Much Much More!

hopefully you get in another update soon!

My Girl was looking at me all funny when I started to laugh at Tara making Buffy do the Hoki Koki!!!! She found it funny once I explained the little war. (so did her mom) The war Must go on you could always have them put Plastic wrap on the toliet seat or leave the seat up in the middle of the night, with a bunch of girls who would look before they go! Ok I'm bad or you can steal all their bras and underwear on a gym day!!! Skirts no unddies Ok I need to Stop thinking.



Happy Writing

-Mal-

[Red Jassy]

Hi Auburn


yeah.. i guess so. "torturing touch" huh..


Thats so funny.. "Damn Hoki Koki!!"


That part with buffy was s0 funny...


Again.. you simply fascinate me...thanks for the laugh.


Your Humble Reader


Red Jassy

---

Don't you understand? That everything I do, I do for you? Anything that might be special in me...is you.

---GREAT EXPECTATIONS

[willowfreak]

wonderful update, I thought it was extremely funny. that'll teach Buffy, heh.



Cant wait for more, must...have......more......

"Well I took Psych 101. I mean, I took it from an evil government scientist who was skewered by her Frankenstein-like creation before the final, but I know what a Freudian slip is."

[Stroke of Luck]

Hmm I guess that man was Donnie or Tara´s father!!!

Oh oh I hope her friends will protect her

And if that man will hurt Tara argh I hope Willow, Buffy and Faith will punish him



Great update Auburn more please



Cu

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

[Auburn]

Vampire Willow: here is the ‘more that you asked for, the kinkyness will come eventually I PROMISE.



bluewillowwitch: Glad you enjoyed hehehe



pioggia acida: you mean you cannot do that head talking thing? Seriously? Well if you could Im pretty sure they would do a show about you on the x-files hehe!



Willster: Im glad to see you’re addicted, here’s your next hit! *mwah* Thank you



SJ: no problem.



Bubblecath: you used to do the Hoki Koki at primary school? MEE TOO! *ahem* I didn’t admit that... nope wasn’t me. I deny all charges!



Stroke Of Luck: I apologise for not writing it so EVERYBODY could understand, I just assumed everybody would know what the Hoki Koki was, but just to fill you in, the Hoki Koki is a song and it sings instructions for a dance routine, the routine I used when Buffy danced and that is all really.... does that help?... OH and stop guessing my plot! you shall have to wait and see!



Tararosenberg: Im glad you, your girlfriend and her MOM enjoyed the little dancing scene. Im flattered that you all liked it so Kisses for you all

Oh and plastic wrap on the toilet seat...... I did that to my dad yesterday and it was so funny he chased me around the house with his slipper ! Im the only girl.... I have to get my ‘ya yas’ somehow! I owe you big time! Thanx



Red Jassy: Torturing touch hehehehe!



Willowfreak: here......is.......more....... weeeeee!!!!

Edited by: Auburn at: 4/17/03 7:12:15 pm

[Auburn]

Title - Torturing Touch

Author name - Auburn

Email Address - GemmaQT@hotmail.com

Rating - PG. I'll let you know when it's NC-17



*************************UPDATE*************************



Willow and Tara made their way up to their room to get changed, the punishments Miss Calender had chosen for them definitely required old and non to flattering clothing the redhead conceded.



“Do you think Buffy and Faith will be mad at us?” Tara worried, taking some old shorts out of a draw besides her bed.



“Nah I doubt it, Buffy will probably applaud you on a prank well done, although Faith may get a little cranky, Im sure they will both just think of something to get us back with, so don’t worry about it.” Willow reassured, also finding an old pair of shorts with the pocket ripped off from a previous patrol encounter.



The blonde smiled happy with her friends reassurance and held up a T-shirt and a vest top.

She had been trying to decide which one to wear, but gave up and concluded Willow could maybe choose, if not, she would have to do ‘miney mo!’



“Um Willow, which one should I wear” she asked hoping the redhead wouldn’t find her stupid for not being able to decide.



“Ummmm” Willow thought for a moment. “Well it is hot outside and the vest top is cooler but the T-shirt would protect you from the sun, although you would get all sweaty, which is actually not a bad idea from my perspective, but obviously is from yours, actually, both options are pretty nice from my perspective, because vest top... Woo cleavage, and sweaty is..... well... y’know.... Tara stop me please.” Willow begged, realising her babbling was getting out of control.



‘Ok, so, Willow likes the image of me all sweaty and my cleavage, and those are definitely gay thoughts’ the blonde conceded. she suddenly remembered the conversation Willow and herself had been having, before Snyder rudely interrupted them, the redhead had almost answered her question and she desperately wanted to know the answer, but she didn’t want to seem pushy.



Should I ask her again and seem to pushy? or should I leave it and ask some other time, even though I’ll be wondering all the time? Tara contemplated.



“Tara” Willow said for a second time, trying to get the blondes attention, although it seemed she was in her own little universe.



“Oh, Im sorry Will, I was just.... y’know.... so, um, which one did you choose?” she asked changing the subject, the blonde had decided to ask Willow another time, wether they were girlfriends or not, she didn’t want to seem pushy. This was a big step for the redhead and pushing would only confuse her more.



“I chose the vest top” Willow concluded, pleased with her choice, she had come to the decision after a long conversation with herself in her head on the ‘goodness of sweaty against the goodness of cleavage’ evidently cleavage had won.





Tara nodded agreeing with Willow’s choice, she had known which one the redhead would choose and smiled inwardly, ‘I’ll bet myself ten dollars Willow is a breast girl’ she chuckled and then chastised herself for thinking such things.



Tara came out of her thoughts and realised Willow was just standing beside her own bed looking at her awkwardly, she though for a few seconds wondering what was wrong with the redhead and then she realised, Willow wanted to get changed, but she was uncomfortable doing it in front of the blonde, Willow picked up her chosen clothes and then began to take side steps towards the bathroom.



“I’ll, errr.... just get changed in here” she clarified before dashing off into the other room.



Tara just giggled, Willow was such a prude. She hurriedly changed into her old clothes and put on some old shoes. Then went over to the mirror besides Buffy’s bed to give her hair a quick brush. And then she was done. Sitting on the end of her bed she sat waiting for the redhead so they could walk to their designated punishment areas together.



******************************



ring ring..... ring ring.



“Hello” came an agitated male voice on the other end of the phone.



“Sir, I have positively Identified the person you requested I find”



“What? Are you sure it’s really them? Because if you are lying to me you little troll I will personally see to it that you are eliminated”



“Sir, I assure you it is definitely the one you have been searching for”



“It had better be, now where is she?”



“I want what you promised, before I disclose such information”



“You get what I promised when you disclose such information you ass hole, don’t piss me off, Im not to be messed with, now I will ask one more time. Where. is. she?”



“Sunnydale boarding school for girls, now please, just give me what you promised.”



“Don’t worry troll, you will get what you deserve.” the man on the other end of the phone laughed evilly, then hung up.



* * * * * * * * * *



“So, um I’ll see you at lunch, Will?” Tara asked, while the two girls were walking to their punishment areas.



“Absolutely, you will see me at lunch, because, well, yummy goodness I shall need” Willow confirmed.



Tara chuckled at Willow’s answer, the redhead could never just say ‘yes’ or ‘no’ it was a fully fledged sentence.



“Don’t be mocking me Miss Maclay, Im a fully qualified demon hunter, with the ability to run and hide.” Willow warned humorously, as they came to a stand still.

Willow turned to face Tara, not knowing if she should kiss her before they went their separate ways.



Cheek? Or lips? she contemplated.



Tara stood watching the expressions run across Willow’s face as she was thinking, then, leaning forward the redhead pressed her lips to the blondes right cheek and pulled away shyly.



“Cheek is more appropriate outdoors” she explained.



Tara nodded her understanding and kissed Willow on her left cheek before turning around and headed in the opposite direction.



The redhead turned around and did the same.



“Oh, Willow” Tara shouted. “Call me if you want to talk” she informed the redhead tapping her finger on her right temple indicating she meant telepathy.



Willow nodded and smiled. Now faced with the problem of when she should ‘call’ Tara, because technically she wanted to call her friend right now, but she decided that would make her seem to eager and would so have to wait at least a whole 5 minutes first.





To Be Continued....

Edited by: Auburn at: 6/28/03 4:59 pm

[pioggia acida]

thanks for the update...



as for x-files i would only watch that on a regular basis if it included and goodness (or similar)



please another update soon... we want to see tara all hot and sweaty with clevage too

if no-one wants to play with me then i am going to go to my room and play with myself... play by myself, i meant play by myself

[mocha fiend 22]

yay updates very good updates want more um who was that guy on the phone he seems like a bad guy ok anyhoo YAY UPDATES

I love you now and forever and a week

[saphire tear]

yay two updates at once You do spoil us dont you! Thank you!

[Vampire Willow]

YAY! UPDATES!!!!!! I am so happy! Great update.

Might I just say Auburn, I am very pleased that I get my kinky- ness! Thank you!

"A problem of type 2094 has occurred. What the f*ck is that? What are the 2,093 other problems I just made to get to that one? "-Eddie Izzard

[willowfreak]

man this is the coolest, its cool how they dont know what to do around each other, cuz its real life too ya know.



sweet job on the update, keep em comin!!!!

"Well I took Psych 101. I mean, I took it from an evil government scientist who was skewered by her Frankenstein-like creation before the final, but I know what a Freudian slip is."

[SJ]

Addictive fic

Thanks for a great update

[serenity]

and again a really great update! i love this story!!

[Bubblecath]

Yay Auburn! you were a Hoki Koki fiend too!

How much fun is that dance!!! um.... Not that i still do it..i swear *cough cough* your secret is safe with me.

what i was trying to say was....Cool update!!

I your fic!

cath

xxx

[shortys puff 420 girl]

I love this fic. want more !!! please thank you bye bye

[Discatay]

I've been gone for a while, busy busy.... and I just caught up on this fic.... which is just Fab-a-lus! so yes add me to list list of ppl requesting MORE PLEASE!



Discatay xx

[tararosenburg]

Great update!

we love the plastic wrap trick I'm glad it worked!

and to be honest I did the Hoki Koki too.

Vests are good I like Vests!

Evil man on the phone you know Snyder is the informant Damn that Little Troll!

Do we get a big snake to eat him cuz if not i got some other ideas for that pig.

anyway more more more story for this kitten

Also you can always wait till someone is in the shower and pour a bucket of cold water on their head like ice water thats funny, or salt in the sugar bowl!



happy writing

-Mal-

[Blackwidow2]

Hi Auburn and everyone!



Love your story Auburn!

I've been a lurker on the Kitten for ages, but i've only just made it over to Pens, where I was inspired to de-lurk and congratulate you on your fabulous fic!



Can't wait till the next update

[Auburn]

Title - Torturing Touch

Author name - Auburn

Email Address - GemmaQT@hotmail.com

Rating - PG-13 I'll let you know when it's NC-17



Previously



“It makes perfect sense, you have gone through a major change, I understand that, but right now you and I are kind of on a line between friends and Girlfriends, and I would just like to know which side we’re on” Tara explained.



“Well, I want.... I mean if its ok with you....”



“Maclay? Rosenberg? Explain yourselves” Interrupted Snyder, coming towards the two girls.



* * * * * * * * * *



“So, Willow, you have the gardens to see to as your punishment for the water incident I would like you to do that for the rest of the day please, I’ll inform your teachers of the arrangement.”



“Tara I would like you to clean out the sports equipment shed, sort the old from the new equipment and clean them both ok?” The teacher finished.



******************************UPDATE*****************************



‘Ok, I’ll ‘call’ Tara now.... but it’s only been 3.44 minutes since we went our separate ways.... eager much?’ Willow internally babbled. ‘should I knock?.... how do I knock? it’s not like she has a door banger on her head or something..... ok I’ll just say, knock knock, no I can’t say that...... God Im such a geek.... just do it already.’



‘Knock Knock’



‘Willow, you don’t have to knock before you enter my head’ Tara chuckled.



‘Sorry’ Willow apologised, ‘it’s just politeness to.... y’know ....knock before entering, I wouldn’t want to hear any kinky thoughts.... or....err.... thoughts I shouldn’t be hearing, you get me right?.... please say you get me!’



‘Yes Will, calm down I get you....... so um, what are you doing exactly?’



‘Well, Im planting flowers, and just watering the soil. There are some really pretty flowers here, makes me wanna research them so I can help them grow better.... but that makes me sound all geeky and uncool, so you have to believe I was joking’



Tara chuckled helplessly Willow was so adorable. ‘It’s ok Will, you don’t have to hide your thirst for knowledge from me, I kinda like it, It helps to have a smart Girlfriend because I can copy off your homework........... Friend I meant friend’ the blonde tried to cover up after realising what she had said, she didn’t want Willow to think she was being pushy or drawing her own conclusions from the situation. The redhead is in a very delicate situation right now.



‘Tara, I-I..... I guess we never got to finish our conversation about this subject did we?’ Willow asked, stopping what she was doing, she started to walk towards the equipment shed.



‘No but Will, that’s not why I said it, it was just a slip up really I...’



No it’s ok we can talk about it, I -I mean this..... this is all so.... I wanna say new.... But that seems kinda inappropriate..... it’s different that’s what it is!..... different.... I’ve never dated a girl before.... actually I’ve never even dated a guy before either because Oz doesn’t count, considering we’ve never been on a date.... although I played doctor with Xander when we were five, but we literally played doctor....because...well.. Im very precise.... anyway Im losing track..... oh yeah, you may have done this whole girlfriend thing before and incase I didn’t make it clear, I haven’t.... So I feel like a sheep among a pack of wolves...... scared.... and kinda clueless... ‘cuz y’know sheep are dumb...’



‘Willow I get it,’ Tara interrupted the redheads babbling thoughts ‘ you don’t want pressure and you want to go slow.... get used to the idea.... get used to being with someone and them being with you in return.... and just to fill in some blanks I haven’t done this before either.... any of it. so we would be learning together..... I-I mean if y-y-you want?” the blonde asked nervously, praying to every goddess she could think of, that her redheaded friend wanted the same thing she did.



‘Yeah’ the Willow answered ‘I want..... just, when you say slow, do you mean like tortoise slow? Or tiger slow?’ she asked, turning a corner, she now had Tara in her sights.



Tara thought for a moment ‘Will, tigers aren’t slow?’



I know, the redhead explained ‘I was just ...you know.. I guess it was a bad analogy.... I just’



Tara giggled you are so easy to tease..... ‘we can go tortoise slow’



‘Good.... slow we’re like.... Slow friends.... only with the word ‘girl’ in font of the word ‘friends’ which makes us slow...’



‘Girlfriends’ Tara finished the redhead’s sentence.



“I like the sound of that” Willow said out loud, wrapping her arms around the blondes waist from behind.



“Me too” the blonde replied, surprised to find herself suddenly wrapped up in the Willow's arms.



* * * * * * * * * *



“Which girl is it?” a short man with a receding hair line and a few extra pounds around the waist, whispered to his friend besides him. Both men were currently hiding behind some busher at the perimeter of the school, watching two girls with binoculars.



“It’s the blonde girl, Marlon. I’ve told you 4 times already, don’t screw this up or we’re both dead, do you hear me?”



“Yeah I hear you.... but tell me why we haven’t snatched her already, I mean there’s only her and the redhead there, no one would even see us.”



Marlon’s friend was saved from having to answer the question by his cell phone vibrating.



Digging around in his pocket Marlon answered. “Boss?”



“Of course it’s me you idiot who else has got this number!...... have you found the girl?”



“Yes Boss, we have her in sight” Marlon assured.



“Good, watch her every move.... but don’t do anything until I say so, you got it?”



“Sure Boss.... but what do we do about the English guy?”



“Kill him in his sleep!” the Boss stated venomously, before hanging up.



“Did you hear that, Butch?” Marlon asked his accomplis.



“Yeah” he answered “I heard it”



* * * * * * * * * *



“Willow, if Miss Calender comes, we are gunna be in even more trouble” Tara warned.



"She’s teaching.... this way" Willow instructed, as she took the blondes hand and lead her in to the equipment shed.



“Willow..” Tara protested as she was pulled along by the redhead.



Willow just ignored Tara’s plea and turned to face the blonde, she positioned Tara’s back against the wooden wall of the shed and leaned in, until she was an inch away from Tara’s lips.



Faintly brushing her bottom lip against the blondes, Willow took it into her mouth...... and sucked..... then pulled away and started off towards the exit.



“Hey” Tara objected, clutching Willow’s arm, holding her in place “where do you think you’re going?”





“Back to the gardens, I recall you not wanting us to get into more trouble” the redhead teased.



“Forget trouble!” Tara said firmly as she yanked Willow back into position and captured her lips with her own.



The redhead smiled, knowing that was going to be Tara’s reaction, relaxing into the kiss she coaxed the blondes lips open with her tongue. Allowing Willow to enter her mouth Tara clamped the redhead’s tongue between her lips and sucked gently. Willow softly moaned at the sensation and Tara smiled. Pulling back, the redhead frowned.



“What are you smiling at?” she asked.



“You” Tara answered “and this... this is our first make out session as girlfriends, and..... I made you moan... that’s the first time I’ve made you moan.”



Willow blushed profusely.



“Can I do it again?” Tara requested.



“Be my guest” Willow said seductively.



Bringing her hands up to the other girls cheeks, Tara ran her tongue along Willow’s lips and moistened them slightly, before pressing her own against them. the redhead contained a moan trying to prolong the feeling of Tara’s lips against her own, but the blonde realised what the Willow was doing.



“Hey no cheating!” She chastised.



Willow giggled and then sighed.



“What is it” the Tara asked.



“I better get back to the garden, Miss Calender’s lesson will finish any minute and Im already in enough trouble as it is.”



Tara nodded in understanding, but gripped one of the redhead's hand's holding her back again.



Willow cocked her head to the side, in confusion.



"moan" Tara stated firmly.



Bringing her lips to Tara's ear the redhead let out a gently moan barely audible, yet oh so arousing.



Willow quickly pressed her lips against the blondes neck and sucked hard... hard enough to leave a mark, then exited the shed smiling smugly, before Tara could register what she had done.



'Vixen' she heard the blonde 'call' to her.



despite being in trouble and the impending ‘parents meeting’ or demon fighting. she was the happiest she had ever been. ‘And it’s all because of Tara’ she thought.



To Be Continued....

Edited by: Auburn at: 6/28/03 5:12 pm

[Cindy Lou Who]

"Moan."



Oh my. That'll get the motor runnin'. I really like the mutual teasing. And tigers can be amazingly slow when they're on the prowl.



I'm on the proverbial pins and needles to find out the no-good those fellows - and their mastermind - are up to.



Thanks for the great story...oh and B/F payback? Maybe they'll get too distracted to worry the wiccans.



~Suse

"Now I have seen that sad surrender in my lover's eyes

But I can only stand apart and sympathize.

For we are always what are situations hand us-

It's either sadness or euphoria." ~Summer Highland Falls (Billy Joel)

[mocha fiend 22]

there was moaning oh god moaning great update YAY

there girlfriends yay and kissing and tongues ok now for a shower and to reread this

I love you now and forever and a week

[bluewillowwitch]

Auburn,

OMG! OMG! I love that update! & kissage was great. And the whole moan thing. I can't wait for the next update.



bluewillowitch

------------------

"Fate keeps happening."--Anita Loos

[Stroke of Luck]

oh that moaning I hope there is more soon



And that brain-talking I love it. It´s really helpful I wish I could it too



But I don´t like that guy´s! What do they want from Tara. Is it really her father at the phone??



More it need more to



Cu

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

[willowfreak]

WOAH!!! NOW THATS MORE LIKE IT!!!



Super great update, I mean wow, Im speechless. Its sooo cute to know that its been setteled and they are friends with the word girl in front of it. But whats with the badness afoot???



Oh well, keep em coming, weeeeeeeee!!!!



"Its peanut butter jelly time"

"Well I took Psych 101. I mean, I took it from an evil government scientist who was skewered by her Frankenstein-like creation before the final, but I know what a Freudian slip is."

[Bubblecath]

Hey Auburn!- Great Update, yay for the smoochies! , ah shucks - things start getting all smoochy and then badness always comes along!!

i still your fic!!!



umm....did i really just see a dancing banana on willowfreaks post?? .....cool.



cath

xxxx

[Red Jassy]

Hi Auburn


the MOAN...Awww s0 SEXY, .


Great update.. just curious, who are those men and why are they after Tara
You're simply good at making me seriously addicted to your story


Your Humble Reader,


Red Jassy

---

Don't you understand? That everything I do, I do for you? Anything that might be special in me...is you.

---GREAT EXPECTATIONS

[fairydust]

moaning is oh so nice right Kare-Bear

Loved the update, can't wait for more

I LOVE MY KARE-BEAR