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Thank You Everyone

Postby The Pineapple Head » Thu Aug 08, 2002 4:53 am

I'm on my way to work, so I can't really write out individual replies right now, but I wanted to thank all of you.



So thank you, WbBuffyfan00, willntlover, autumnT, Rane018, Miss Quirky, the vamp nurd, Darn Salem Judges, Gmackie, Sparrow, Marilda, Grimaldi, MadieNZ. saphire tear, tkheaven (sorry about the monitor - hope your recovery goes smoothly), AmberBensonRockzMyWorld (you rock as well, love the name), SlayerTazz (will you be alright?), Snuggle79 (yeah I can go for a cigarette right now too), as well as all the lurkers out there.



I means a lot that you took the time to reply. I'm working on Part 3 right now. I promise it will be fun ;->



Thanks Again,

PH

The Pineapple Head
 


Heat Wave

Postby tiredsoul » Thu Aug 08, 2002 7:58 am

Speechless. You've rendered me speechless. This was great. And a part 3 to boot. Cool.



Think I'm gonna be taking cold showers all week.



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"I'm not coming back"

tiredsoul
 


Re: Part 2

Postby WillowsSlave » Thu Aug 08, 2002 5:42 pm

...............:thud ............:drool ..........:jaw ........Must.....sit.....in.....freezer.........DAMN!!!!!!!!......Woa.......:grin .......dude!! I like it!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kerri (The panther kitten with an eternal caffeine rush)
~`~`~`~
Willow: Were more centered on the girl-on-girl action. ~ Talking with Anyaka in Entropy

WillowsSlave
 


Re: Part 2

Postby Centauri2002 » Thu Aug 08, 2002 7:00 pm

:drool :jaw :thud :drool :jaw :thud :drool :jaw :thud



'Nuff said.



No really, that was amazing... but I really need to calm down now...



Just goin to do that.



Caz

Tara: I got so lost
Willow: I found you... I will always find you

Centauri2002
 


Re: Part 2

Postby willowsgrrl » Thu Aug 08, 2002 11:45 pm

:blush :drool :jaw :thud :shock :thud





wow i think we need to make a new smilie for this one hmmmm like smilie in a cold shower maybe?? WOW



christina

willowsgrrl
 


Re: Part 2

Postby pacou » Fri Aug 09, 2002 6:28 am

Wow, that was damn good!

I had a cold shower before reading that, but I think I need a second one now, Im all hot and...so on. ;)



Oooh oh, my mums water bill...I dont care, its not my money and for hot stuff like that I put up with a high water bill.



You rock!

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TARA: Willow, you are using too much magic. What do you want me to do, just, just sit back and keep my mouth shut?
WILLOW: Well, that'd be a good start.
TARA: If I didn't love you so damn much I would!

pacou
 


Part 3

Postby The Pineapple Head » Sat Aug 10, 2002 4:53 pm

Well I'm glad to see that you are all enjoying this. I appreciate the feedback and I'm looking forward to all of you telling me what you think of this story. So please let me know.



This is dedicated to everyone who needed to take a cold shower after parts 1 and 2



Thanks alot kittens,

PH





Title: Heat Wave

Part: 3

By: The Pineapple Head

Pairing: Tara/Willow

Rating: NC-17

Disclaimer: If I owned them, I wouldn’t be sitting her writing a tasty little smutfic.

Premise: Two naughty kittens making the rubber ducky blush.

Inspiration: Whoever had the ingenious idea of putting a towel bar on the far wall of my shower. Thank You!

Feedback: More Please. What can I say, I’m a whore and I like it :->

E-Mail: the_pineapple_head@yahoo.com



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Sleep had claimed the two lovers, as they lay entwined between the damp sheets. Willow was the first to wake, smiling broadly at the display before her. Tara’s beautiful face was just inches away from her, encompassing everything in the world that she held dear. While a calm had drifted over them, if briefly, now Willow was thinking of all the delicious ways that she could wake the woman she loved.



A sly smile now replaced its more innocent counterpart, as Willow determined her method of attack. Slinking out of the bed without too much awkwardness, Willow grabbed her robe and headed down the hall. Most of the lights in the house were out and there was no sign of Buffy, 1:26am, that wasn’t too unusual. Having the house to herself, or to her and her girlfriend, Willow devised her wicked scheme.



Willow lit a series of vanilla candles in the bathroom and started the water running. The only thing that was missing was how to get Tara’s attention. She was looking for the optimum impact, when divine intervention stumbled upon her or at least rubbed up against her leg. Miss Kitty Fantastico to the rescue.



Kneeling down and picking up the cat, Willow began explaining her strategy. “Alright Miss Kitty, this is Operation: Wet & Wild and your mission, if you choose to accept it, is to wake up mommy. You’re a trained professional, so I’ll leave the plan up to you.”



With that she urged the cat towards the bed and watched as it hopped up, moving toward the sleeping blonde. This gave Willow more than enough time to get into the steamy shower, where she hoped her lover would find her.



Tara woke up on command, feeling the soft fur of their cat brush up against her hand, purring loudly. Confusion set over the blonde’s face, not knowing where her lover was and not being able to place the muffled sound coming from outside of the bedroom.



Sitting up in the bed, she called, “Willow?” Nothing. “Will?” Still nothing. “Sweetie, where are you?”



Throwing on her discarded t-shirt, Tara padded towards the noise, which was coming from the bathroom. The door was slightly ajar and the more recognizable sound of running water permeated the air.



“Will, are you in here?” Still no response.



Opening the door, the soft glow of the candles would have normally been enough to demand her attention, if not for the sight of Willow running her hands all over her body, under the stream of water. Tara’s mouth hung open, not sure if what she was seeing was real or an amazing dream.



Poking her head out of the steamy glass door Willow purred, “Hi baby. Care to join me?”



Tara stood there for a second, something akin to a deer caught in head lights, still registering the situation. Willow’s voice bringing her right back to earth. “If you insist on leaving your mouth open, I can think of a few good uses for it.”



The blonde wasted no time locking the door and stripping the shirt off her body. Growing more turned on by the second, she entered the shower and followed the redhead under the mist.



Wet hands found glistening skin in a matter of moments. After what seemed like hours, the two exploring mouths parted, leaving each woman a little breathless. Willow snuggled into Tara’s embrace, resting her head on the soft chest, as the blonde stroked the red hair away from her face.



Willow sighed in contentment, enjoying the feeling of the wet, naked body pressed against her skin. Tara also looked at peace, never taking her eyes off of the woman in her arms. Both lovers had been silent.



“I was hoping that you would find me here.”



“Well I did get your Kitty-O-Gram and thought I would investigate.”



“Like I always say, there’s nothing like a good pussy....cat.”



“Is that what you say?” Tara asked amused.



“I might not always verbalize it, but I’m always thinking it.” Willow said with a grin. “I missed this. You. Me and you. Us. I missed us.



“I did too sweetie.”



“That bed was too big without you. Big. Sad. Lonely. And Taraless.”



“Not anymore, because I’m not going anywhere.”



Tightening her grip on Tara’s ribcage, Willow met blue eyes, apologizing with her whole heart. “Baby, I’m so sorry I made you leave, that I hurt you that much. I....”



“No sorries Will. I was hurt and angry, then I was guilty. I knew things were hard for you, but I couldn’t come back. I wasn’t ready. Everyday you got stronger and now we found each other again.”



“We wouldn’t have been apart if I wasn’t so weak.”



“I don’t see any weak people here. Just my strong, beautiful girl.”



“Mmmm, that’s right, your girl. And there will be no leaving of your girl, “ Willow said, sporting her best resolve face.”



“Yes ma’am,” Tara saluted.



“Darn tootin. Next time you threaten to leave, I’m just chaining you to the wall.”



“Why do we have to wait?” Tara arched and eyebrow.



“Vixen!”



The swordfight of dueling tongues resumed, as they found a second wind. Willow twirled long golden tresses between her fingers, as Tara cupped her face. The kiss proceeded to get hotter, oxygen was definitely becoming an issue.



Creeping her hand to the base of Tara’s skull, Willow methodically pulled the blonde’s hair, gradually getting rougher in her ministrations. In response Tara sucked Willow’s tongue into her mouth, then bit her lower lip as she struggled for air.



Tara was gearing up for round three, that familiar tingle developing in her belly, when Willow pulled away.



“Willow, what’s wrong?”



“Do you want me?”



“Wh-Wh-What?” Tara asked confused.



“Do you want me?” Willow repeated.



“Yes.” Tara breathed more than answered.



“How badly to you want me?”



“More than anything.”



“Do you trust me?”



“What?”



“Do you trust me?”



“Of course I do.”



“Turn around.” Willow’s low growl was more of a demand than a request.



“Willow.”



“Do it for me baby,” her voice sweet, her intent anything but.



Hesitantly Tara faced the shower wall, her back to her lover. Before she could speak, Willow laid down the law. “There’s only one rule, no touching.” Tara was about to object when Willow placed a finger over her lips and positioned Tara’s hands on the towel bar. “Just hold on tight and let Willow take care of the rest.”



Tara could hear various little noises here and there, but was getting restless waiting for whatever was coming her way. The scent of cucumber melon filled the air, as she felt the blue shower poof touch her ankle first. Willow was careful to make the contact feather light, not to get the blonde worked up too soon.



A barely audible sigh left her part lips, feeling the suds slowly creep up her calf. Everytime the movement would get higher, Willow would dip back down again, making her she didn’t miss a spot. She switched legs at random, just to toy with the girl and hummed to herself while she parted the legs wider.



Willow paid particular attention to the thighs, as her strokes became coarse. Tara trembled as her inner thighs were the main focus of Willow’s delight. Tiny circles, reaching higher and higher caused Tara to move her hips, trying to force her lover’s hand, so to speak.



“Naughty girl. I don’t know if I should punish you for being bad.”



She inched higher still, only a breath away from Tara’s apex. The redhead’s arm was clear through to the other side, as she dragged the soapy poof across her outer lips, over her entrance and back out again. Tara bucked violently at the contact, while Willow smiled to herself.



“Mmmmm Willow.” Tara exhaled her name like it was the only truth her life has ever known.



This was far from being over, infact it was just starting to get interesting. Lathering up the flesh of her ass, then making exaggerated circles all along her back, Tara was practically covered in suds from head to toe.



Willow hovered close to Tara’s body, as she pulled all of the blonde hair over the left shoulder and trailed her tongue up her neck. Instantly her body responded when the redhead slid against her back and rolled her hips in a teasingly slow grind. Clasping her hands on the firm belly, just above the golden curls, Willow was quickly setting the stage.



Gripping the towel rack painfully tight, Tara desperately wanted to reach out and touch the woman who was making her go mad with passion. “Willow, please,” she begged.



“Not yet, baby.” She licked her jawline, reaching Tara’s mouth, sucking her tongue into her mouth. Both women becoming incredibly aroused at the sensation of Willow’s nipples pressing into Tara’s back.



Pouring the shower gel over her hands, Willow ran her fingers under Tara’s full breasts and around, never touching the aching nipples. Gliding over her belly and back up again, she swept around the breasts, this time coming just a little bit closer. Finally she flicked the hard nubs, listening to the gasps that came from Tara’s luscious mouth.



Pinching her nipples once more, Willow retreated again and Tara immediately felt the loss. “Less leaving, more touching.” Tara urged.



Returning with shampoo covered hands, she massaged the scalp, as she worked up both a lather and her girlfriend. Tara was beside herself, not knowing what to do with all of this pent up desire. This was Willow’s show, so they played by her rules and right now Tara would have given almost anything to tend to the throbbing in her loins.



Willow was about to go in for the kill, moving away from a unknowing Tara. Very quietly she detached the massaging showerhead from the fixture on the tile wall and made her way towards her lover.



“Close your eyes my love.” Lowering the speed and force to a moderately steady stream, she angled it between the parted legs, towards Tara’s nerve center and released the flow.



“OH MY GOD!!!!! WILLOW!!!!!!!” Tara screamed in ecstasy.



Off all the things that the blonde was anticipating, that was not one of the them. The force was brief, but almost enough to send Tara toppling over the edge. She steadied herself, feeling the water cascading down her legs, as Willow washed the soap from her hair, back and lower extremities.



The blonde breathed heavier, as she called out again. “Oh god, please don’t stop. Make me come Willow. Please let me come.”



Willow locked the shower head into the fixture, calling to Tara. “Turn around baby. Come to me.”



She eagerly followed and met in a searing kiss. Under a hot waterfall of steam and mist, Tara reveled in the opportunity to touch her lover. Willow was looking to make good on Tara’s request, by squeezing her hand between their bodies and heading straight for her lover’s clit. Stroking her furiously, as the normally passive wiccan pleaded for her to go faster and harder.



Digging her nails into the soft skin of Willow’s shower, Tara threw her head back, feeling her climax rapidly approaching. Reaching back for the shower bar to support her, Tara’s knees grew weak, the sensations below her waist getting stronger. Willow’s mouth latched onto her neck, as Tara finally found her release.



The incoherent cries of pleasure grew more guttural when Willow rediscovered her breasts. Roughly attending to them, she squeezed them together and took both nipples into her mouth. The sound of blood flowing through her ears was all Tara could hear, while the oral and manual assault continued.



This wasn’t about love making. Of course the loved each other and could be incredibly tender with one another, that wasn’t the issue. This was about lust, desire, eroticism, passion and carnal urges. Willow desperately wanted to bring Tara over the edge again and again, driven by her longing to please this woman who captured her heart, her mind, her body, her soul and her essence. She indeed was her everything.



Falling to her knees, she held onto the breasts, torturing the straining nipples with her thumbs. Willow wasted no time diving between Tara’s thighs, claiming what was hers. Parting the outer lips, her tongue swirled around and around the sensitive clit, before abruptly sucking it into her mouth.



Of all of the things that Willow missed about her life with Tara, her taste was high on the list. The intoxicating musky smell could wake her from a dead sleep and send her senses soaring. She could spend hours buried between her thighs, without a care in the world.



Dipping into the warmth of her pussy and lapping at her juices, Willow happily tormented the frazzled girl. “Ohhhhhhh...” was all Tara was able to get out between ragged breaths.



Willow was more that motivated to finish the job that she had started. Tara’s eyes were tightly shut, while her hips swayed swiftly into Willow’s face. One had was used to steady Tara’s hips, as the other replaced the talented tongue that teased her clit.



“You want more baby?” The redhead asked, delaying her movements.



“God, Yes. More!”



Slipping two fingers into the snug wetness, an intense rhythm was developed. Clamping down on the swollen bundle of nerves with less the gentle teeth, Willow could feel the walls tense around her.



“I’m so close.....Fuck me harder!”



Willow loved spicy Tara talk and wouldn’t deny her anything right now. She pumped a little harder, sucked a little longer and teased her until the thrashing blonde’s orgasm decimated her in waves. Not one to give up, Willow continued to ravage Tara’s core, bringing about another set of tremors.



Tara crumpled to the tub floor with Willow, trying to regain her composure. Embraced in a tangled heap of flushed flesh, both women’s labored breathing accentuated their mutual satisfaction.



“I’d say I have to take a cold shower, but I don’t think it would help.” Willow finally spoke.



“Technically the water isn’t cold. Go ahead, try it. I’d get up and do it myself, but I don’t really trust my legs right now,” Tara said, still flustered.



Leaning against the tub wall, Willow noticed Tara start to giggle. “What’s so funny?”



“It’s nothing sweetie,” her face betraying her.



“Tara, tell me.”



“Really, it’s not that funny.”



“Tara McLay, don’t make me start with the ticklin’.”



“I was thinking about Winnie the Pooh.”



“We just made with the serious make up sex and you’re thinking about cartoons. I must be severely out of practice.”



“No, no, no. It’s not that. It’s definitely not that. It’s just...”



“Just what?” Still very confused.



“Have you ever seen when Pooh Bear gets his head stuck in the honey jar?”



“Yeah.....”



“That’s what you remind me of. Looking down and seeing you so, um, involved. Like you what to taste every part of me.”



“Well you are my favorite honey pot,” Willow grinned at the analogy.



“It just makes me feel special.”



“Baby you are special.”



“I love you so much Willow. All of you. Everything.”



“There isn’t a single part of me, that isn’t in love with every part of you.”



Closing the gap between them, they kissed tentatively, as if for the first time. Finding their way to their feet, the two lovers finished bathing, enjoying the feeling of cleaning the other. Touching and exploring with child-like curiosity, even though they knew each other’s body by sight, touch, smell and taste. Lots of gasps and sighs littered the steam filled bathroom, as they stole kisses and teased sensitive flesh.



After they got out of the shower, they sat on the bench and brush the other’s hair. Such an ordinary act, made that much more intimate when done by someone who loves you. They retired to bed, curled up in bed, still not quite ready for the night to be over.



“It’s been too long since I slept in your arms,” Tara said, snuggled back as Willow spooned her.



“Well just in chance I didn’t make myself clear, they are yours forever. I’m yours. Forever.” Willow kissed her neck, pulling her closer, holding her naked belly.



“Mmmmm. Forever sounds real good.,” said the blonde growing tired.



They drifted back off to sleep, both smiling, anticipating their future together.

The Pineapple Head
 


Re: Part 3

Postby tiredsoul » Sat Aug 10, 2002 5:12 pm

Whoa! And I'm supposed to go out on a date after reading this?



Off to take a shower . . . again.



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"I'm not coming back"

tiredsoul
 


Re: Part 3

Postby snuggle79 » Sat Aug 10, 2002 5:20 pm

Awesome Update! :D :clap

I just loved the comparison of Willow with the Pooh Bear... :grin , but i guess, now i can't think of something else anymore, when i see Winnie Poo with his head in a "honey pot"... :laugh





Tara:"Maybe we dreamed it."

Willow:"Right. Right. Wrong! (points at her head ) Different Brains." Tara:"Oh yeah."



Can we just skip it? Can...can you just be kissing me now?

Edited by: snuggle79 at: 8/10/02 4:23:24 pm
snuggle79
 


Re: Part 3

Postby BFR from Paris » Sat Aug 10, 2002 5:32 pm

Quote:


This is dedicated to everyone who needed to take a cold shower after parts 1 and 2






I think it's safe to say that you can add part 3 to the list...



:grin



BFR from Paris
 


Re: Part 3

Postby MadeinNZ » Sat Aug 10, 2002 5:38 pm

It is a true talent to be able to work Winnie the Pooh into a seriously erotic scene. Honey pot eh? Very hot and steamy.

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"When someone falls for Willow, they stay fallen" - Normal Again

MadeinNZ
 


Re: Part 3

Postby Tarahand » Sat Aug 10, 2002 6:33 pm

:thud i'll never look at Winnie the Pooh the same again.

:drool tara :drool willow

Tarahand
 


Re: Part 3

Postby WbBuffyfan00 » Sat Aug 10, 2002 7:42 pm

OH MY GOD That was definately the best part....damn I have to go!!!



-Amy

"You want to take a picture of my butt? um...ok...you've got two seconds". -Amber

WbBuffyfan00
 


HOLY COW BATMAN!

Postby Ittybittykitty » Sat Aug 10, 2002 8:23 pm

OH MY FREAKING GOD! :thud



I really need to stop reading these when talking to a certain individual on IM.hehe.

Ittybittykitty
 


Heat Wave...Part 3

Postby AmberBensonRockzMyWorld » Sat Aug 10, 2002 8:25 pm

:thud :thud :thud :thud



That was great....Breathing was difficult though, and as soon as I am done talking to the greatest female alive...I'm going to take an extremely cold shower.

Much Love,

Lisa

Must I dream and Always see your face.~ Jeff Buckley "Last goodbye"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Recomended Reading: IttyBittyKitty's fic...
"7th Hellvan"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

AmberBensonRockzMyWorld
 


Re: Heat Wave...Part 3

Postby MissQuirky » Sat Aug 10, 2002 8:42 pm

:thud Ahhhh*Startin to remember words* That was... BIG WOW!! :drool I want more and ah, soon Please!! ;)

"Don't warn the tadpoles!...
I-I have frog fear."

MissQuirky
 


Re: Heat Wave...Part 3

Postby saphire tear » Sun Aug 11, 2002 9:51 am

Winnie the pooh will never be the same, showering will never be the same, brushing her hair will never be the same...**sigh** Thankyou!

saphire tear
 


Re: Heat Wave...Part 3

Postby Jennpurr » Sun Aug 11, 2002 11:19 am

Oh, good God... that was... WOW....



:drool



:thud



I'll never think of Winnie The Pooh the same way again, either. WOW... who thought thinking about that would be so erotic?? :)



Will there be more?? Do you accept bribes?? Need more!



Jen

* * * * * *
Melissa Etheridge on 8/10/02, in The Woodlands, TX


"I've been to every, one of Melissa Etheridge's concerts! ... No, really, I have!"
"THAT, is a bat! ... Hey, does it have a ticket? ... It doesn't have a ticket!"

Jennpurr
 


Thank You Thank You

Postby The Pineapple Head » Sun Aug 11, 2002 1:33 pm

Well sheesh, and here I thought everyone would be all excited that Miss Kitty Fantastico returned. I swear, you never really can estimate the public's response.



Secondly, I would just like to apologize if I have ruined Winnie The Pooh for anyone here. Some plot devices are just neccessary for the greater good of the piece.



Now on to business.



tiredsoul - Hopefully you've regained your speech by now. How did your date go? ;-)



WillowsSlave - Please don't get frost bite in that freezer. It doesn't tickle.



Centauri2002 - Hanging jaws, drooly faces and THUDS....what more can a girl ask for?



willowsgrrl - Did you make that cold shower smilie yet?



pacou - Deny everything! You know nothing of excessive water bills.



snuggle79 I loved that applause smilie. That rocked!



BFR from Paris - You've given me something to think about for my Part 4 dedication.



MadeinNZ - ***Taking Bow**** Thank you. I try.



Tarahand - Sorry about that whole Pooh thing.



WbBuffyfan00 - If you have to leave, please come back.



Ittybittykitty - I always love a good Batman/Robin reference. Just ask Nathan on the "More Than a Feeling" board. (HOLY SOPPING WET PANTIES BATMAN!) That was good....sorry, got distracted. Oh yeah, there is nothing wrong with naughty IMs.



AmberBensonRockzMyWorld - Your replies always make me smile. Thank You.



Miss Quirky - I almost died wiht the winking smilie. Haven't seen that one before.



saphire tear - You're making me feel guilty. I feel I have ruined all of these things for you.



Jennpurr - Ok, jealous much? If you're been to every single Melissa Etheridge show, I want to hang out with you. She's awesome live and extremely funny. When I saw the "Your Little Secret" tour, she kept forgetting the times in "Unusual Kiss", I was dying. I'm like, "isn't it 3:17am?" Thanks to you, I know what song I'm using in Part 4. And yes, I do take bribes. Money or sexual favors. I'm not picky, but rather extremely flexible.



Thank you all so much and please keep the feedback coming. Any commentary, suggestions or advice is greatly appreciated.



Later Y'all,

PH

The Pineapple Head
 


Re: Thank You Thank You

Postby Jennpurr » Sun Aug 11, 2002 2:14 pm

Ooops, I should have re-worded that better. Sorry. No, that's not something I said, but what she said last night. She was approaching the last song and she said she was going to do a song that she does at every show, then before she started singing she said, "And I've been to every, one of Melissa Etheridge's concerts... No, really, I have." It was funny. Sorry for the confusion. As for myself, I've only seen two of her shows. :( Last year on Sept. 10th (Her "Skin" tour) and then last night. She's totally awesome! And the bat thing. :lol ... There was this little bat that kept flying around her on the stage. She was like, "Does it have a ticket..." She's hillarious. :rollin



Oooh, and "Unusual kiss." YES! Use that song, it's one of my favorites! :grin



Hmmm... you DO take bribes. Well, I don't have money and I'm single right now, so... ;) Hee... OMG... did I just say that outloud? I don't know where my brain is today. Oh yeah, I do. It's stuck in the shower with :willow and :tara . :drool



Oh, and Miss Kitty. I was happy to see her back. Thank you. I miss her. :( I wonder what DID happen to her. You'd think they would mention something about it. :hmm



Looking forward to more,

Jen



* * * * * *
Melissa Etheridge on 8/10/02, in The Woodlands, TX


"I've been to every, one of Melissa Etheridge's concerts! ... No, really, I have!"
"THAT, is a bat! ... Hey, does it have a ticket? ... It doesn't have a ticket!"

Jennpurr
 


Bribes

Postby The Pineapple Head » Sun Aug 11, 2002 2:36 pm

Jennpurr - Hey, hey, hey....no teasing of the fanfic writer. That's not very nice. I'll forgive you this once. Although if you do it again, I will have to insist that you make good on it ;-)



Actually I was thinking of using "My Lover" for part 4. Something about it is just utterly primal, but entirely intimate. It's one of my favorite songs by her and considering what I have planned for our dynamic duo, I figured it fit in nicely.



Well I'm off to enjoy a shower.....bye :-)



PH

The Pineapple Head
 


Re: Bribes

Postby Jennpurr » Sun Aug 11, 2002 2:55 pm

Ooops, was I teasing?? Are you sure, I didn't think I was teasing. Hmmm...I thought I was, um... well... nevermind. Sorry, I won't tease you anymore. ;)



Oooh, "My Lover." I love that song, too. And you're right about that description. It's very intimate, but now I'm very anxious to see what you have planned next for our girls.



And you're such a tease, you know that? :p



Jen



* * * * * *
Quotes from Melissa Etheridge on 8/10/02, in The Woodlands, TX


"I've been to every, one of Melissa Etheridge's concerts! ... No, really, I have!"
"THAT, is a bat! ... Hey, does it have a ticket? ... It doesn't have a ticket!"

Jennpurr
 


Re: Bribes

Postby tommo » Sun Aug 11, 2002 3:01 pm

Ah shower scenes...always fun. I thought you used some really sensual images in your fic, and it was in turn hot and loving. The relationship between the two of them adorably playful and at the same time loaded with lust. Lovely stuff. Thanks. :)


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The mature solution is to spend
your whole life telling stupid,
pointless jokes so no one will notice
you're just a scared, insecure little
boy! ~ Xander...or Joss...?

tommo
 


Re: Heat Wave...Part 3

Postby funkyasian » Sun Aug 11, 2002 3:03 pm

hmmm...and i think the plan tonight was to watch winnie the pooh with my baby cousins...i dont' know how i can now...

the entire fic...every last sentence...:drool :thud



absolutely amazing...is there anything i can do to tempt you to write more? please?



off to the showers...woefully alone...



steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

funkyasian
 


Re: Bribes

Postby The Pineapple Head » Sun Aug 11, 2002 3:10 pm

Jennpurr - No ma'am, not me. I'm no tease. A tease would imply no follow through. I'm all about follow through. :-) So anyway, back to the story. I'm fresh from my nice steamy shower and ready to write. I don't know, I'm thinking something with a little smut in it or maybe just some story with my smut.



tommo - You've written some drool worthy pieces yourself. So thank you.



funkyasian - Again, I'm sorry for the Pooh Bear thing. Love the Oscar Wilde quote. I swear, if I wasn't write by Oscar Wilde, it was Shakespeare and if it wasn' t him, it was that damn guy Anonymous....he's everywhere.



Diana

Edited by: The Pineapple Head at: 8/11/02 2:24:21 pm
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Re: Bribes

Postby Jennpurr » Sun Aug 11, 2002 3:18 pm

Ah, okay. I see. You're not a tease then. ;)



Hmmm... writing is good. That's something I should be doing, I just wish my stupid muse would cooperate. Damn thing. Anyway, I'm sure whatever you DO write up will be worth reading. You haven't disappointed me yet. :wink Have fun!



Can't wait to read. :)



Jen

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Quotes from Melissa Etheridge on 8/10/02, in The Woodlands, TX


"I've been to every, one of Melissa Etheridge's concerts! ... No, really, I have!"
"THAT, is a bat! ... Hey, does it have a ticket? ... It doesn't have a ticket!"

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Re: Bribes

Postby The Pineapple Head » Sun Aug 11, 2002 3:29 pm

Indeed writing is a very good thing. Perhaps you just need someone to bounce off of....ideas that is. Inspiration is after all, a very funny thing.



Diana





I may be prickly on the outside, but I'm warm, sweet and gushy in the middle. (PH on how she got her nickname)

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Re: showers pooh bear and brushing hair....

Postby saphire tear » Sun Aug 11, 2002 3:33 pm

Not ruined at all...not even a little bit. I was being honest when I said they will never be the same but sooo in a good way!

RE miss kitty: I think after the shower scene we were a little too distracted to "yay" the fact that miss kitty has returned...but now that I am over the shower and the hotness of that update I say..... Yay miss kitty is back!

(did that make any sense?)

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Re: Bribes

Postby Jennpurr » Sun Aug 11, 2002 3:41 pm

I know what you mean. It's funny how inspiration can come to you at the most awkward of times. I'm feeling pretty inspired after last night though, so I may be able to get something done.



Thanks for the suggestion though. :) I appreciate it.



Jen

* * * * * *
Quotes from Melissa Etheridge on 8/10/02, in The Woodlands, TX


"I've been to every, one of Melissa Etheridge's concerts! ... No, really, I have!"
"THAT, is a bat! ... Hey, does it have a ticket? ... It doesn't have a ticket!"

Jennpurr
 


Re: Bribes

Postby The Pineapple Head » Sun Aug 11, 2002 4:22 pm

saphire tear - Well I'm glad that they aren't ruined for you. I would have hated to do that. And yes, you made perfect sense.



Jennpurr - I know what you mean. I work in the button down office (well not so much right now, it's casual summer) and I write at my desk when I should be working. Not exactly Sexytown, USA. Why I am not surprised you were inspired last night. Oh yeah, check your e-mail



Diana

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