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General poetry and short stories

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Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby veiled isis moon » Sat Jul 24, 2004 6:40 am

Hey Onyxsundrops and SJ. Thanks very much for taking the time to read my inner ramblings, and thank you even more for leaving feedback. Greatly appreciated.



Michelle.xx

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Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby SJ » Thu Mar 10, 2005 2:04 am

Poem for my gf,love you baby :love

My skin

A blank sheet

Your fingertips

Like a quill

Tracing your name

Gives my body

A thrill

Turning my pages

Slowly at first

Then speed reading the chapter

As I recite quickly

A verse

From cover to cover

And over again

An open book

No longer

As you read me

Once again





SJ
 


Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby angel of salvation » Thu Mar 10, 2005 4:11 am

:shock SJ has poemness?! Woo! :lol that was a great poem, vey cute. :)



I never knew this thread existed but now I do i've read up on loads of the writtings on here and I must say its all very good. :) its all pretty *looks in awe at the writtings* hockay enough of me staring...hope people on this thread write more! *bounces off*



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

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Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby SJ » Fri Mar 11, 2005 1:27 am

Thanks for the kind words.

SJ
 


Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby barnabasvamp » Mon Mar 14, 2005 5:01 pm

Wonderful poem. Look forward to more!



BV

It's the passion in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it.

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Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby Renee85 » Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:07 am

I will ditto what BV said, wonderful poem. :)



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Re: General poetry and short stories

Postby SJ » Wed Mar 16, 2005 1:35 am

Thanks.

SJ
 

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