first poem

[T Maclay]

Another good poem Kiwi and ****,you write well together.

Bored-Now

[kiwi6969]

Hey gals and guys.....*hugs*



Thank you all for your wonderful comments.....I now I love getting them....Hello posting whore!!! I was going to give you another one but I think it can wait a little bit to give people time to catch up...and anyway I'm a little sad cause I missed a phone call from a special gal....*sighs* SORRY...you know who you are..



*goes to play sad music*





kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

[kiwi6969]

Hey its not a poem but a thought.........



we were talking about life partners...cause I have left my partner and I know my soulmate is out there..anyway I said

" shes out there,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet, just not ourselves" now since I am a posting whore heres another one



Why am I such a mess

why does it hurt me so much

Its just three words I have to say

but why does it feel so wrong

to confess my feelings now

would it be to soon

Or have I missed my chance

to have three words returned to me

that would be so great

but I don't think that could ever be

no way, fat chance

so lets get this straight

my love for you can't be returned

but is it a chance I take....



Now thats a good Question...answers would be great..







kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

[T Maclay]

Another good poem Terri, hey you will here those 3 words, just give it time. Everything will work out.

Bored-Now

[TexanZeppo256]

Great stuff kiwi. I really like your writing style; it's fluid, consistant, poetic (of course), passionate and always intense.



You know, even with all of the angst that I'm sure isn't that much fun, I envy you. I really do. You're living. Unlike some others...



What was it Shakespear said? " 'Tis better to have love and lost, then never to have loved at all." Something along those lines.

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T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.



(Translated from "The Gift")

[Shinnen]

Excellent poem. Very emotion based as the rest.

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

[kiwi6969]

Thank you *bows* to my humble readers,I am so pleased that you are enjoying my poems.....well my venting really...so anyhow thanks a lot.....*hugs and kisses*





kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

[kiwi6969]

Haha you asked for it....hehe



To know thwt you are close

but so far away,near my heart

I know everythings going to be alright

to have your words of comfert

and your words of praise

I love the way you call me baby

to know that you are here

I hold this so near

for you to whisper two words

" I care"

to hold you in my arms

to kiss your beautiful lips

to only hold your hand

to caress your cheek

to look into your soul, just a little peck

A tender smilea node of your head

to have you here instead

to have you stay and not run away

to be with me thats what I pray

I just want to love you every day....



* sniff *



kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

[TexanZeppo256]

*sigh* love. I think i remember what that felt like... vaugely.



Another excellent poem kiwi. Took me back to old days. Good times... at least, they were until I found out that my object of affection didn't give a rat's ass about me. Oh well



Things'll get better Kiwi. I don't know how or when, but I'm certain that they will.



Later

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T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.



(Translated from "The Gift")

[SJ]

Sweet poem

[T Maclay]

Another good poem Terri, Im sure things will happen for you one day.

Bored-Now

[kiwi6969]

Ok kittens, this is going to be my last post for awhile I'm having to leave for a bit awwww no tears....





Anyways heres another........



A word unspoken

Atouch untouched

A kiss not yet connected

A soul which is now empty

A heart that is broke

A friendship that is always

A love thats fobidden

A feeling thats real

A breath that leaves me breathless

For me to love you is a mistake

For you to love me,well that would be fate..





ok kittys see you in a couple of weeks....I hope





kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

[T Maclay]

See ya soon Terri,



Yet another good poem. Thanks for sharing them with us.

Bored-Now

[SJ]

Good poem

[Shinnen]

Great poem, kiwi! Have a safe flight and hope you settle down soon!

CheerZ

Shinnen



Who cares how tall your lover is ... height doesn't matter in bed



For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it

[pagnmickie]

Great poem Terri! Hope all is well. We miss you!



*GIANT HUGS*







-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles

[TexanZeppo256]

Very beautiful kiwi.



I also love the detached sense of irony: It's the best thing that sombody can have when the world is doing everything it can to them EXCEPT opening up and swallowing them whole.



Hey, who knows? You're still young (AND DON'T ARGUE WITH ME ON THIS ONE: YOU'RE YOUNG DAMNIT! ), and maybe she'll come around someday sooner than you'll possibly think.



And pagnmickie, your sig: I and at least a few others would like to STRONGLY disagree with that.

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T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.



(Translated from "The Gift")

Edited by: TexanZeppo256 at: 6/25/03 8:48 pm

[kiwi6969]

Hi all*pulls into a group hug*aww I miss you guys to*sighs*



I'm not online much so heres another one I wrote on the plane



Crush.....



I have a crush on you

what do I do

I've never crushed before

It's all so new

I'm frightened and scared

I'm happy and I'm ecstatic

I feel bloody fantastic

It gives me a high

from which I don't want to come down

the feeling making my desire ache for you

You are all I think of and I do

I breath you and dream of you

I just don't know what I'm supposed to do

Do I make my move?

would you aprove?

go on tell me what to do

cause I haven't a clue

I don't know.....





I'll try for another update in a couple of days...

*blows kisses*



kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

[AbbyQT]

A Crush? Who's the lucky lass then aye aye? Just pulling ya tit, love your latest stuff keep it up baby.



"Come my sweet, lay your heart down next to mine, and as you fall asleep, I shall fall in love all over again"-Gen/AbbyQT

[SJ]

I've had many crushes so can relate to that poem

[YMKA]

Hey Kiwi!

I read your poems...I have to agree with everyone here

Very emotional.... I liked it!!!

I wish u the best!!!!

[kiwi6969]

Well ...I'm flatted*blushes*..I don't know what to say...but only here is another one...and for all enjoy..

This one sorry has no title as of yet



Lying in my bed

wondering what I've become

you have done this to me

all this wanting and need

I'm here because of you

you showed me the light

what I need to become

who I really was and needed

I am me and thank you Abby

If it wasn't for the guides I would...

well I would be the old and not the new

and for this I thank you

you are my saviour and my friend

with you in my life I can live again

Please don't leave me

you are my true best friend...







this one is a personal thanks.....





kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

[TexanZeppo256]

Excellent poem Kiwi.



BTW, check your EZinbox plz.

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T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.



(Translated from "The Gift")

[SJ]

Very nice poem

[T Maclay]

I like it, another good poem Kiwi.

Bored-Now

[kiwi6969]

Hey all....I'm back, my trip went fine and moving into my own place on the weekend..so I'll see you kittys then...





Ties are broken

just like my heart

now maybe the pain will stop

No time for playing or joking around

I'ts time for serious so here's a plan

I'll go on with my life

And I'll promise no-more striff

and I'll leave you to yours

now we can both get on with our lives

I knew if I trusted I'll get hurt

I really so badly wanted this to work

Our three months arin't yet up

thats normal for me

I'll move on if thats the way it should be

If you don't want me then no-one will

see I'm not good with rejection I've had my fill

As for the trust I never will

I wasn't quite ready for this spill

I know lifes full of chances

but no-more will I take

lets just say this kiwis had enough

Love its all a game

Right now today I wish I could die....



Sorry this was a bit dark....but hey I'm only human, I get hurt too.



kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

[TexanZeppo256]

mrph. Non-happy kiwi ::hugs:: I'm sorry things didn't go so well... whatever "things" may be. I...



Well, there's not a lot I can do or say that'll make you feel better or make the situation improve any, so I'll just say-



Great poem kiwi. I really want to see MORE. Promise me that we'll see more, ok?



-and shut up.

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T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.



(Translated from "The Gift")

[SJ]

Doesn't matter if it's dark

Good poem

[kiwi6969]

Hey all, well let me tell you all my moving has come to a stand still......It's bloody snowing here



Anyway I wrote this...and its going to be my last...Warning its another dark one.....



A single word passed between us

"friends" Hurts me so much

I don't know where I stand

I want to understand

I can't and I wont

I feel rejection,I feel alone

are you for real??

Or is this all in vain

I'm all new to this game

which I don't want to play

It's now, me,myself and I

no-more us, no-more we

I have a choice to make

and so do you

You want a friendship and I want you

I'm saying my goodbyes

this time we are through

I don't want to repeat myself

But I'm so confused

I think you and I should talk

Or I'd say we are through

No-more me and you.....



kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

[SJ]

Another dark poem,very emotive,good writing