Au Fic: Film noir style: RED ACE: REVISED AND FINISHED

[bluewillowwitch]

nika ,

I loved that update! WOW! is in a bad place, caught between her love for and her of Donnie and whatever it is that she has to do with Faith. I hope that finds out that inoccent and is not a bad guy while at "Happydale". I can't wait to more. Update soon, please? Thanks for getting me of those pins and needles so quickly, holding my breath was turning me blue. Of couse, now I'm on the edge of my seat after that cliffhanger. Please Update soon. Thanks.





bluewillowwitch

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

[shuyaku]

Wow - 2 posts in one day. Um... did I say wow!! Yeah. Good. Whew.



If one of them would just stop lying for all of 5 seconds, maybe the rest of us poor shlubs could figure out what the heck is going on!



-shuyaku



ps: One venti mocha comin right up. Would you like whipped cream on that? The begging will commence shortly

[sabina]

Two updates. Wow. Go nika



I'm feeling really sorry for both girls. Tara is on a crossroad, her only two choices are bad or worse



And poor Willow, she is feeling thoroughly betrayed and screwed



I'm truly curious to see the rest of this story. And of course their reunion.

Willow and Tara apart is just wrong!



So update soon?

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"If it makes you happy, it can´t be that bad" - Sheryl Crow

[SJ]

Great updates

Like the twists this story is taking

[2DIAMONDS]

Nika - A smooch and a hug for the double update. Made my day so MUAH!!!

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Tara had said ‘ I love you’ and Willow had answered back a choked “ Yeah, me too,” before hanging up and throwing the phone across the room. “ Lies all lies! Try putting me to sleep when I’m hundreds of miles away!” Red yelled in to the empty room.

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I think that really set Willow off. Is that the first time they've said those words to each other? I know Willow acknowledged that she's in love with her, but I don't remember them actually saying it to one another. Oh well, looks like I have to read the story from the beginning just to make sure, oh darn!



Can't wait for more. I really love this fic!



Helen

xoxo

[Willowtara19]

, nika!!



I've just finished reading this fic of yours 'till your last post, and the only thing I regret is not reading it soooooooooooner!!



Willow and Tara smut was just and , and the plot of your story is absolutely intriguing.... I'm really enjoying it!!



You and your fic rock!!



Pleeeeeease, keep it comin'? And update soon? I know I'm asking too much, but what can you do when a story is so good?



Ummm, are and going to be alright? Both of them seemed to be so sad!



Willowtara19

[nika]

Replies:



Rose: Thanks Kitten. I do feel the love.



Bww:Need some mouth to mouth?



Shuyaku: You're right, but if everyone told the truth now I'd be out of a job and story would end here and where's the fun in that?



Sabina: W/T apart is very wrong! I just wish joss and ME would've seen that.



Sj: Thank you. Come on baby let's do the twist...



2diamonds: Right back at you kid.



W/T: Thank you for reading, it's quite a lot to catch up on. As for the ending, you'll just have to stick around to find out how it all plays out. Pull up a chair, who knows this could be the beggining of a beautiful friendship.



Since I'm a funky kind of mood, it's raining and I'm listening to Nina Simone and Billie Holiday, I might even have an update late this evening. No promises, but it's a strong possibility.

Thank you kittens for being so damned sweet!

[shuyaku]

Not everybody telling the truth, just one of them for 5 seconds to give us a hint



I definitely do not want to be responsible for you being out of a job. No fun in that



-shuyaku

[Tempest Duer]

Well, it's still a damn good read...



I can be bad if you like.

Choosing not to decide is still a choice.

[Willster]

Great updates!!!



I can't figure out what's going on.. This is like watching a suspense movie and not knowing till the very end what's the deal.. I can't believe Tara would be the bad girl.. There muse me some way out..?



Damn cliffhangers.. You'll kill us with those!

[nika]

The rain and Nina Simone made me do it! I have an update, how about that?



Replies:



Shuyaku: Shucks a fuul 5 seconds? I don't know if I can do that. Let's just keep it all on the q.t and very hush-hush ,for now.



Tempest: Be baaad...cause it can be sooo good!



Willster: Hang on to the nearest branch cause here comes another cliff.

Edited by: nika  at: 11/17/04 8:38 pm

[The Rose24]

Answers have to be on the horizon soon right? I can't wait.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.

[SJ]

Great update

This fic has got me sitting on the edge of my seat,great suspense

[sam7777]

The plot is really thickening now and it looks like we have come full circle. Willow's heartbroken from Tara's betrayal na dhas hit the bar. I can't wait to see what happend next. Great stuff!!

[Washi]

Nika, nika, my dear nika! I've been reading every update, every word, and I feel like my head's gonna explode! This is one hell of a thrill ride! It just keeps twisting and turning, and I'm starting to feel motion-sick (kidding). I so hope the ending's near, cause this mystery is killing me!

Great stuff, as always.

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa



The course of love doesn’t always run smooth, especially for the neurotic and accident-prone. ~ LadyB

[sabina]

Great update



So they rescued Faith?

Maybe she will wake up and give them answers



And we have come full circle, right? This is where your story began.

So now maybe you could stop the heartbreak and get things back on track?



Or am I hoping too much too soon?



Well, I'm really curious now.

(Who am I kidding? I have been on the edge of my seat the whole time )



Update soon?

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"If it makes you happy, it can´t be that bad" - Sheryl Crow

[bluewillowwitch]

nika ,

WOW! I love this fic! It just keeps getting better as it goes on! . Do I need mouth to mouth? Well, if you keep up with these cliffhangers! I swear are you trying to kill me with suspence, cause if so it's working! I can't believe just off that death threat. Why does the shooter sound so much like . I can't wait to what happens next. Update soon, please?





bluewillowwitch

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

[Tempest Duer]

Nika, I love this. Wonderful chapter, really wonderful.



I guess I could be bad... because after all...

Choosing not to decide is still a choice.

[shuyaku]

Okay this is what we know... So Faith is in a coma. Some blonde lady shot and killed Bogarty. Someone has the eye. And someone is threatening Willow. Maybe I should rephrase that to we don't know sh$!



Loving this story!

-shuyaku

[nika]

I just love this board and all of the kittens of course. Thank you all for all that great feedback.

Edited by: nika  at: 11/17/04 8:40 pm

[Willster]

Okay.. i am starting to get suspicious..



Are we ever gonna find out what this is all about??

[The Rose24]

I hope what Willow found is useful. I am ready for all of this angst to end and for our girls to live happily ever after.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.

[bluewillowwitch]

nika ,

I loved that update! I have a feeling that I may need that mouth to mouth soon, if what I think is about to happen happens. I have a feeling that may have just figured eveything out. I can't wait to see what connection really has in all of this. I mean I know her brother is scary but that isn't it. I has something to do with Faith. I just haven't figured out what it is yet. You are so with these clffhangers. I can't wait to what you have for us next. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat on pins and needles holding my breath and waitig paitentaly, , for your next update. Update soon, please?





bluewillowwitch

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

[Red Jassy]

ooohhh.... nika..

i just read the update..

you really are great with your fic. heheh... im on the edge of my seat.. its like im watching a movie..



im curious who's the woman in coma??? intrigued i am.. hmm..

thanks for the update.. awesome fic.



J

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How can you see into my eyes / like open doors / leading you down into my core
where I've become so numb? / Without a soul;
my spirit's sleeping somewhere cold, / until you find it there and lead it back home. » Evanescence

[Fuzz WT]

Wow, nika! I see you update preety fast lately! Too much coffee?



Hey, the end is coming closer, isn't it?



I like the way you write Willow's life. Willow is struggle with her feeling, all her life have been so hard and for a while Tara had soften it. *sigh* And now...it's all coming back to her just when her strong wall was all crumble. What's gonna protect her now. Oh! Life is cruel! ( Or nika is cruel!! )



I just wish everything will be okay soon.



Update fast!

*Fuzz*

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Hey! You're gonna back off! She said no and that's it. ~ TARA

[SJ]

Great update

[sabina]

It's so nice to come home at the end of the day and find a Red Ace update



But you're a tease.

I want to know what Faith said to Giles, and what's the role of Tara in the middle of all this



I guess I'll just have to wait



It was a great update as always. I hope everything will turn out ok soon



Update soon?

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"If it makes you happy, it can´t be that bad" - Sheryl Crow

[Tempest Duer]

Yay! An update... but it hasn't resolved anything, and instead it's given us more things to follow, and we're not any closer to answers. I hope Willow's closer than we are... but you are just

Choosing not to decide is still a choice.

[shuyaku]

I'm certainly glad Willow is figuring things out. Although, she hasn't mentioned being any happier about Tara's reasons for behaving the way she has... Still waiting patiently for answers No rush of course, you need your job and all



-shuyaku

[Lady6string]

Okay, is simply MUST tell you that this is officially my favorite fic as of right now. I never knew I liked film noir untill I read this... and you're amazing with the sultry parts, which there can never be enough of, so I hope to read more soon!



~Cyn