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Re: PART 7A

Postby intricate mirage » Wed Nov 12, 2003 11:10 pm

:shock **rubs eyes** :shock **hurriedly rubs eyes again** :shock



You. Stopped. There.



Quote:
well when we DO reach the end of that tunnel (which,who knows, might be a century from now), the light will encompass everything. Wouldn't that be divine?


**mumbles** Century's an understatement. I'm banging on the possibility of it becoming many many many centuries later now. :miff



Aww Sleek com'on! It was just getting so good. I had this big evil plot to :smash Oz and Alex out of the picture, then start building this fire at the end of the tunnel to show Willow the light at the end of the tunnel. See big huge plan for Willow and Tara to be together and I was hoping you could help me out a little here, but noo.... You had to stop there. And you know what? You named it Part7A. Every chapter makes me feel like I'm going for an endless goal. But dividing each chapter into parts now? Dude, we're never gonna get there. :sigh



Hmm :hmm Since the original plan didn't work. I'll start working on the coax-Sleek-into-putting-Willow-and-Tara-together plan :D So... here's some :flower s and a nice :kiss and a big :bigkiss **crosses fingers** Hope it works.



Quote:
"Okay, but the next time you get Tara drunk, I'll make sure a legion of frogs will plague you wherever you go."


:rofl Oh Willow Willow, little does she know where all her protectiveness comes from! Said it once, said it many times, hope she see the light soon :pray



Quote:
Operation Pseudo Boyfriend started harmlessly enough.


I'm gonna give Alex a big pat on the back for being such a great bloke. Well, not that Oz isn't. But well see, Oz is one big factor in between Willow and Tara. So :miff ...

Quote:
"You have a pet name. For her hands." Oz stated, incredulously.


Or... Oz could be such a sweetie, go figure out the whole situation on his own, and be ever so kind to just back down and stop being so affectionate to Willow. Cause it's hurting Tara. :(



Ohh so now that Alex is going to have a one on one talk with Willow about being Tara's boyfriend. I hope everything comes out in the open. Like how about Willow blurting out incidentally that she likes Tara after she seeing the dawning ray! Hehehe :D



Hold on a minute, have I told you how great your update was? No? Well I'm telling ya it was great! :applause You've got great stuff going along Sleek. Keep up the great work! Now I know that was a really long feedback with nothing substantial except for the one too many attempts in trying to coax you into letting Willow and Tara be together :D But you can't blame a girl for trying can ya? :wink



Looking forward to the next update! :D

Cassie





Ask me if I loved you yesterday. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I love you today. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I'll love you tomorrow. I'll say 'Always'





Edited by: intricate mirage at: 11/13/03 4:29 am
intricate mirage
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby Washi » Wed Nov 12, 2003 11:17 pm

hehehe, this is gonna be fun! Love it!

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa



The course of love doesn’t always run smooth, especially for the neurotic and accident-prone. ~ LadyB



.:Dark-bliss.net :..:My blog:..:Blood and Ink:.

Washi
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby willow fan7 » Thu Nov 13, 2003 12:15 am

Oh, I agree with Washi...it's gonna be totally frickin' fun!!! :lol

So Alex is Tara's pretend boyfriend now eh? And Willow's already jealous, although she doesn't know it. *Sigh* How can she not know??? How does one not know that they're jealous? It baffles me:lol



Willow's so adorably cute...imagine twitterpated...don't you only have 7 letters on one deck for Scrabbles? How did she get twitterpated?



Willow babble's just too precious. This made me :rofl



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"It's his hair. Anyone who has dark hair pasted over their forehead like that isn't trustworthy," Willow said, practically standing from her seat to keep the pair in her line of vision. "Don't you think his limbs are extra long for his age? I mean, those limby limbs are quite clingy…like grabby tentacles with velcro. Eww. Tara isn't safe with anyone with velcro tentacles. Do you think we should warn her? Do you think she knows?"




Hope you retouch part 7B soon. I can't wait for Alex's talk with Willow!!!



P.S Can I kill Oz? Please???

willow fan7
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby shuyaku » Thu Nov 13, 2003 1:25 am

Now we's gettin' to the good stuff. WARNING, Will Rosenberg! WARNING, Will Rosenberg! Hey Willow here comes one of those 2x4's :lol



It's not often that a fic features a Xander we all can love, but you've done a great job with him. I feel kinda bad for him, but I love what he is doing for Tara!



:bounce

-shuyaku

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"Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby allykat » Thu Nov 13, 2003 2:48 am

Update!! And I so totally love it!! :bounce :bounce :bounce



My fav. lines:

Quote:
"There's a Tara-spot reserved right here." Willow patted the space beside her. And there's a Willow-spot reserved right here in my stupid heart.


My heart went to Tara...





Quote:
"You have a pet name. For her hands." Oz stated, incredulously."Um, is that weird? Don't you call Devon, 'fast hands'?" Willow said, slightly unsettled by the stoic stare of her boyfriend.


This totally made me go :rofl



And poor Alex... Thinking that if he sprouted boobs and a uterus Tara would love him... Love what he's doing for Tara, though:)

I'm really looking forward to Alex and Willow's fist fight,erm, I mean talk.



Awesome update!!!:bow



Edited because I can't spell...:whistle

Edited by: allykat at: 11/13/03 3:29 am
allykat
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby SJ » Thu Nov 13, 2003 3:00 am

Alex is going to talk to Willow,should be interesting :glasses

Great update :clap

SJ
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby sam darls » Thu Nov 13, 2003 4:05 am

Aww..I loved that update sleek..so funny. And what's with willow?:sob .. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you :heart Love sammi xx

sam darls
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby willowsgirl » Thu Nov 13, 2003 4:43 am

OOOOH! This is so great, I dont think Iv left feedback on this fic before, although Ive been following it for a while. Bad me!

But this update was so funny, I just had to. I love operation pseudo boyfriend, its genius! I totally respect Alex for helping Tara out, it must be so hard for him. I cant wait to read 'the talk', maybe Willow will realise just why she doesnt want Alex to maul Tara-paws....?



willowsgirl/stacey xx

willowsgirl
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby snuggle79 » Thu Nov 13, 2003 5:22 am

Oh my!!! It's getting more and more interesting.

I totally love Alex for what he is doing to help Tara.

He really is a true friend. :)

God, that scene with Tara joining Oz and Willow at the beginning reminded me of similar thing that happened to me. Once i went to the cinema with a friend, the girl i had a huge crush on for a long while,and her gf.

And guess where she was sitting, yeah, exactly next to me.

You can imagine what a happy movie watching that was. :spin

One of the worst choices in my life.

I so feel for Tara here.

Great update! :applause

snuggle79

This is how everyday should end and start ..and all the stuff in the middle

The greatest thing you'll learn, is just to love and be loved in return.





snuggle79
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Thu Nov 13, 2003 5:45 am

oh this story is cool! I feel for Tara and I wish Willow would open her eyes and date Tara paws lol ;)

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby Red Jassy » Thu Nov 13, 2003 7:29 am

oooohhh.... sleek :clap that was great.. heheh alex! tara's boyfriend... :D :clap bravo.. you're the best.. willow's jealousy shows a lot...hmmm.. :bow your fic is great. thanks. can't wait for the next part... :kiss

humble reader :bow ,

Red Jassy




Cause you were made for me/Somehow I'll make you see/How happy you make me


I can't live this life/Without you by my side/I need you to survive
So stay with me/You look in my eyes and I'm screaming inside/that I'm sorry. » Evanescence

Red Jassy
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby Marilda » Thu Nov 13, 2003 8:23 am

This story is awesome. There I said it. Wait, I wasn't the first one to comment on the awesomeness of the story? Well, darn.



Still awesome though :P

Marilda
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby peggy of sunnydale » Thu Nov 13, 2003 8:39 am

now that was a cool idea make willow jealous and see if she reacts and alex taking her outside to talk about the bopyfriend thing willow has such a bad temper

she will blow her top he he



cant wait for that talk update soon please











willow i could come by beetween classes i usualy use that time to go over my notes and rewrite them in different collored pens but its pointed out to me thats u know insane

tara i said quirky



Edited by: Warduke at: 12/22/03 9:29 am
peggy of sunnydale
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby bluewillowwitch » Thu Nov 13, 2003 11:15 am

:bigwave Sleek :flower ,

Okay first I love this fic! :clap :bow Second, I just spent what was left of my lunch period :read ing this and I have to say this, you are so :devilish but it was worth it. :lol That is mean to leave it off like that. I hope that Alex gets some sence into :willow . She needs to dump Oz and pick :tara . He is a great friend. :) Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby Yellow Crayon » Thu Nov 13, 2003 2:07 pm

Incredable



More soon?

Yellow Crayon
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby LostWithoutTara » Thu Nov 13, 2003 3:56 pm

Sleek, that was just amazing! :bow



Hopefully, the pseudo-relationship between Alex and Tara will force Willow to examine the real nature of her relationship with Tara and the feelings that she must have for her (with her obvious jealousy of Alex). Alex deserves a lot of kudos for being such a great guy, good friends like that are hard to find. :)



I’m anxiously awaiting to see what will happen next!



Every time you walk away, I pretend that I'm okay

LostWithoutTara
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby Tempest Duer » Thu Nov 13, 2003 5:47 pm

Oooh... Alex is pretty clever. Operation pseudo-boyfriend is going to be cool and amusing.



Oh, and you made me :cry in a good way, so don't feel bad. If I felt bad I wouldn't keep coming back for more, anyway.



Part 7B is going to be up soon, right?

I believe in the madness called "now."

Tempest Duer
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby barnabasvamp » Thu Nov 13, 2003 6:12 pm

OMG, that was just too cute!!



Willow is just about ready to have it out with Alex! :punish

So sweet that he is willing to help Tara. Can't wait for the conversation they have outside! :laugh



BV



"When choosing between two evils, I always like to take the one I've never tried before"-Mae West

barnabasvamp
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby faithy » Thu Nov 13, 2003 8:15 pm

hey its great! Thats a great plan of Alex's. And by more often I mean more often than you do right now. But if you can't don't get on my case! I understand. Its just.. this is such a great story, and...

faithy
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby xita » Thu Nov 13, 2003 10:30 pm

Sleek wow, you really can raise the angst. I don't know how Tara is able to handle it all. It must be enough to just want to choke.. them. Alas, I think Willow may start feeling some of the same soon, so maybe I should feel sorry for her. I mean we know it's fake, but she doesn't.

- - - - - - - - - - -
"Hard work often pays off after time but laziness always pays off now!"


xita
 


cool

Postby nika » Thu Nov 13, 2003 10:44 pm

That was awsome. I loved all the jealousy and tension flying around in between the words and actions of the characters. You are evil in a really good way.:devilish

nika
 


Re: cool

Postby SaraBiga » Fri Nov 14, 2003 3:14 pm

I love it! So, if Xander and Willow take a peek outside they probably see a bunch of us kittens collecting the money to buy Will a clue... :lol

'Will, do you have a quarter?'

'What for?'

'To buy you a clue, damn you!'



...waiting for 7b... :boot (how I love this emoticon!)

____________________________



"Don't piss off the redhead with the weird powers" -Willow-



"I'm not weird, I'm talented." -Sara Biga-

SaraBiga
 


some replies

Postby Sleek » Fri Nov 14, 2003 7:26 pm

Replies for Part 6





amberfan87

Wow :bounce Your first post! :grin enjoy the story. It can get a little angsty, but I'm glad you like it. Were you a lurker here before?





Draco119

:wave Hey. Expect Alex and Willow to do a mental tug of war soon. hehe. :grin Glad you're loving this :kiss



Willow's emotions involving Tara can overwhelm her sometimes. Makes her get all "large with the butch" :lol





noho

:rofl Your post made me :laugh



and ponder...am I really a sadist for making you kitties wait this long? I'm just happy to have stumbled across an appreciative reader who doesn't mind the angst.



"And they say one person can't make a difference." Nice quote :)





BigGayBear

Dear Good Bear, thanks for the feedback :grin





Blue Channel

Thank you :kiss





Mai

"yes, i'm still demanding for an update. tra-la-la"



:lol How can anyone be annoying and cute at the same time? :grin





willow fan7

"I've read this fic over and over and over again, I know it by heart."



Aww shucks :love I gotta admit, your words compelled me to write more (thus chapter 7 is longer than the others). I just don't wanna dissapoint such genuine appreciation for my art. Thank you for your words. :love Sleek





Sappho

Updatey goodness here (read Part7A)





Part 7B will be unleashed two days from now (i hope). Real Life is real annoying (but that's where I live real stories). Au revoir for now. Ciao :glasses SLEEK

Sleek
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby WTfan4ever » Fri Nov 14, 2003 10:07 pm

‘You have a pet name. For her hands.’ :rofl

No idea why, that line just totally kills me.

Such a sweet chapter, but cliffhanger grr… but you warned us, and hopefully only two more days, so I can deal.

I must apologize for not leaving feedback on here before, I’ve pretty much been a lurker, but then I had to come on and post cuz my friend asked me for a favor, and since I was already posting on stuff and your story is so great… just had to let you know. :p

Eagerly anticipating the next chapter, which I pray does not have a cliffhanger (but not expecting that too much, considering it would be like the first one so far :wink )

Thanx for a great fic, cant wait for more!



-kelz



WTfan4ever
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby TaraBaby77 » Sat Nov 15, 2003 12:22 pm

need more.......please??? need more quick before....hummm....before....i don't know, but i really really like this story and want more. sorry for sounding all beggy and stuff. Great story. it's cute, warm, soft, cuddly.... can't wait to see more. =)

TaraBaby77
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby JustNicks » Sat Nov 15, 2003 1:07 pm

I knew I shouldn't have come in here :cry I just knew *sigh* I always do this.



"Nick" I say "Don't read incomplete fics, just don't"



"Why?" I ask myself and the answer?



"BECAUSE YOU ALWAYS LOVE THE STORY! AND YOU ALWAYS HAVE TO WAIT UNTIL IT'S FINISHED BEFORE YOU CAN LIVE YOUR LIFE NORMALLY!"



Please give me a normal life :pray cos I love this fic



just Nicks

:glasses

JustNicks
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby halfsmile » Sat Nov 15, 2003 1:16 pm

Nick I'm totally with you!

I always get that way, and can't stop thinking about the fic into is over...and look the site over and over again just to see if have a little update.:sob



Bye the way, incredible update:bow ...so cute and than with the "I'm her boyfriend" thing, I can't wait to see Willow's reaction hehe.:glasses

Please Update soooon OK?

Pretty please?:pray

(I'm hopeless)

Byebye

-Halfsmile-

halfsmile
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby Tempest Duer » Sat Nov 15, 2003 7:06 pm

Amen to that, Nick. Two whole days... I don't know how I can wait that long... but I'll manage because I don't have any choice.

I believe in the madness called "now."

Tempest Duer
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby WintersDreamer » Sat Nov 15, 2003 8:22 pm

Whoa !

Alex telling Willow to meet him outside had me choking on my tea, after I calmed down i.e I was no longer in danger of death by iced tea, I almost expected to hear gunfighter music and the clinking of spurs....



(sigh) the problem is I DO like Baileys.... and Ameretto, and Midori, and Chambord, and Fra Angelico, and Godive White Tuffle Liqueur....



Hot day and Midori with 7-Up in a large glass with ice, or a Baileys Milkshake..French Vanilla ice cream (Ben & Jerrys), a little milk and ALOT of Baileys....

...... and the next day off. :lol



Its been 3 days please update soon!



:read

WintersDreamer
 


Re: PART 7A

Postby TexanZeppo256 » Sat Nov 15, 2003 8:58 pm

Hallo!



I realize that most of my posts recently have been kinda bitca-ish, but I'd like to make up for that by saying that I absolutely love this fic: it is one of the great fics on this board that I check the board daily for updates.



I love this fic because I LOVE any fic that gets our girls together in a non canon way. Plus, I also am a sucker for angst, and this fic is PACKED with it. Willow is such an idiot!!! A cuddly and loveable idiot, but still an idiot! My stomach literally does upset little flip-flops in my stomach when I read Tara's POV of Willow with Oz. Poor girl. My heart truly goes out to her.



Here's hoping that Tara will get her girl soonish



(But don't skip out on any angst in the process, kay? )



Anyways, just wanted to let ya know that I adore your fic.



Dosvidaniya!

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There she is! There she is... ahh... Not so wounded as we were led to believe... So much the better.
--Khan, "Star Trek II: WOK"



From The Land of Tolerance,

---The Texan Zeppo

TexanZeppo256
 

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